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This little Imp bastard that's hounding us needs to die permanently like next turn even if we have to full on tie them up and put them on a literal silver platter for those extermination shits that come down to hell. If you couldn't tell I'm on JacksonxAsh team (would the ship name be Emmy Gummy or something else?)

Would Lewis from the Mystery Skulls Animated with their flames recolored blue be too different to work?
 
morethanone said:
no, it can work. 👍
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People are trying way to hard to be pretty i think it does not fits very diabetic way of Jackson, thinking taller neck more jointed and knobbly, longer arms but only arms, body fat volumenous even more concentrated in the middle, with likely a mouth on the stomach to fit our gluttonous ways between a fold, for the skull why not segment it like a orange or pumpkin but clearly still flesh even if orange wax dribbles and burns it from the screaming hot blue and white flames, for the body what if it exudes sweetness nearly like armor acting as fuel for the fire.

So sort of a grotesque pumpkin lantern man with jointed emaciated whip like arms and neck like knobbly twisted branches,

head with roaring white and blue flames with the skull split and segmented like a pumpkin duplicates of features mixed about and on the front where the most human part skin pulled like paper is covered in orange wax like the poison dribble on the apple in snow white forming a constantly dripping and melting skull mask with a grate that shows lipless teeth,
main body where nipples usually are is a pair of bloodshot yellowing eyes, torso just as fat as usual but more fat actually obese, either with stretch Mark's all around like jagged scars body fat again segmented like a pumpkin with mouths vertical ringing his whole body in the pumpkin like dips, or a main gigantic mouth that nearly splits the torso in half.
Skin skull pulled thin and reddened from burning orange wax otherwise pulled paper thin, limbs and neck necroticed and dried forming a hard bark like surface similar to oak, torso very orangey of near cartoony jaundice with a tint of green a very light pale green nearly white on it's own, scar tissue either being normal streechmarks placement or the jagged pumpkin segment lines forming lips for the vertical radial mouths shimmer like the Nacre of Pearl's glittering like pale silver as light dances over its surface showing pale hues of pink blue and purple under its surface.


Something like this rant perhaps draped in sweet sugar
 
[X] No
More sin is a double-edged sword and the benefits of wrath are not enough to warrant it.

Here are some more demon form images that I think better match our candle-like/wax aesthetic.

[]- Candle Monster
[] - Candle Man
(which I find the most lore-accurate due to thin limbs and the fact the fire grows brighter the angrier we get)
[X] - Candle Geist
(this one I find to be the scariest of the forms posted so far and the candles appear as a pseudo halo.)
 
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IronKnightofSilv said:
[X] No
More sin is a double-edged sword and the benefits of wrath are not enough to warrant it.

Here are some more demon form images that I think better match our candle-like/wax aesthetic.

[]- Candle Monster
[] - Candle Man
(which I find the most lore-accurate due to thin limbs and the fact the fire grows brighter the angrier we get)
[X] - Candle Geist
(this one I find to be the scariest of the forms posted so far and the candles appear as a pseudo halo.)
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There is always also the CandleMaker from doom patrol
 
[X] - no, he's fine with them
[X] - yes, three years instead.
[X] -no
[X] 1 Sickle Ripper by Dan Scott
[X] 2 change the lantern to a jack-o-lantern
[X] 4 https://www.pinterest.com/pin/warriors-of-chaos--36591815717292992/

[X]hell revenant:
In Jackson's "Hell-Revenant" form, his traits, virtues, and the sin of gluttony have become deeply woven into his physical and supernatural presence, giving his transformation a more symbolic edge:

Physical Appearance

Jackson's form remember of his sin with a torso resembling a cauldron, pulsing with molten energy within. The veins around this furnace-like core glow faintly red, tracing his body's length like lava channels, emphasizing his hunger. His elongated fingers now twist into clawed, talon-like tips, each tip faintly dripping an ichor-like substance that vanishes as it drips, reminiscent of melting candy.

Head and Face

The flames in Jackson's eye sockets have intensified, flickering more actively, like candle flames that feed off his emotions. The lack of physical eyes can be eerie but his gaze still burns with unquenchable curiosity and a searing intelligence. His hair—blackened and charred—flares up like a torch when he draws on his demonic power, creating a halo of unnatural, hungry flames.

Aura and Presence

Jackson's aura cast a shifting red and purple glow that gives off faint aromas of sweets, but sickly, distorted if he is in a bad mood.

Quirks and gimicks

  • A spectral "book" floats near him, containing ghostly, ever-changing script. This book allows him to read/remember all the knowledge he ever had. (or if qm think it's to much it's just a book he can write in)
  • As he takes damage, his furnace-like core blazes hotter, drawing energy from his pain and misery. This fire strengthens his form the more he struggles.
  • Crown of Remorse: The flames on his head project haunting images of past memories and traumas. His tormentors' faces sometimes flicker in the flames.

Movement and Mannerisms

Jackson's movements, while graceful, carry a subtle, unsettling weight, as though every step sinks deeper into the earth. His presence radiates an aura of misunderstood kindness and unwavering resolve; despite his grim appearance, there's a strange gentleness, a reminder of the boy he once was.
 
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the swarm said:
People are trying way to hard to be pretty i think it does not fits very diabetic way of Jackson, thinking taller neck more jointed and knobbly, longer arms but only arms, body fat volumenous even more concentrated in the middle, with likely a mouth on the stomach to fit our gluttonous ways between a fold, for the skull why not segment it like a orange or pumpkin but clearly still flesh even if orange wax dribbles and burns it from the screaming hot blue and white flames, for the body what if it exudes sweetness nearly like armor acting as fuel for the fire.

So sort of a grotesque pumpkin lantern man with jointed emaciated whip like arms and neck like knobbly twisted branches,

head with roaring white and blue flames with the skull split and segmented like a pumpkin duplicates of features mixed about and on the front where the most human part skin pulled like paper is covered in orange wax like the poison dribble on the apple in snow white forming a constantly dripping and melting skull mask with a grate that shows lipless teeth,
main body where nipples usually are is a pair of bloodshot yellowing eyes, torso just as fat as usual but more fat actually obese, either with stretch Mark's all around like jagged scars body fat again segmented like a pumpkin with mouths vertical ringing his whole body in the pumpkin like dips, or a main gigantic mouth that nearly splits the torso in half.
Skin skull pulled thin and reddened from burning orange wax otherwise pulled paper thin, limbs and neck necroticed and dried forming a hard bark like surface similar to oak, torso very orangey of near cartoony jaundice with a tint of green a very light pale green nearly white on it's own, scar tissue either being normal streechmarks placement or the jagged pumpkin segment lines forming lips for the vertical radial mouths shimmer like the Nacre of Pearl's glittering like pale silver as light dances over its surface showing pale hues of pink blue and purple under its surface.


Something like this rant perhaps draped in sweet sugar
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I am not good at summarizing so no clue how to make it a viable vote in a sensible way that's not a run on sentence
 
Definitely not important vote for later!!!, but is Jackson afraid of Clowns?

[ ] - no, he's fine with them

[ ] - no, he loves them!!!

[ ] - yes, but he's only creeped out by them

[ ] - yes, he fucking hates them.
 
[X] - no, he loves them!!!
Candy is one of the only things that do mix with clowns that isnt made creepy.
 
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