Titan of Steel (Dungeoncore)

They think he's dead. And the Titan doesn't know they survived either. Still haven't figured out what the response will be when they meet up again.
Unless there's some kind of hidden compulsion in Gremlin psychology, I'd expect them to be surprised and happy to find out that their creator survived, but probably unwilling to give up their freedom\independence just like that. Doubly so since the Titan can (and has) just make more Gremlins of its own if it needs to.
Still, the Titan treated them pretty well for dungeon minions, so they'd probably be open to some form of alliance. The Titan's own Gremlins would probably be interested in some form of diplomatic contact with a 'free Gremlin moon state' as well, especially given the governmental theme. I wouldn't be surprised if some of the moon Gremlins looked to make some kind of personal employment deal with the Titan too.
 
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A/N: A reminder that the Storm Titan is still the being with the single highest Grand Dragon kill-count on the planet. They've been at this for quite some time.

On an island close to the equator, a Titan taking the form of a massive stone bear resided. Above, a massive conical storm slowly spun, sending upwards of a hundred lightning strikes per minute directly into a specially designed energy-harvesting system built into the Titan's backside. Battle scars from Dragonfire and the enormous talons of Grand Dragons were scattered all over the Titan's hull. In prior years these scars would have been seamlessly repaired, but now it was all the Storm Titan could do to keep themself from falling apart completely.

The aging Storm Titan could feel their mind going a bit more with every passing day. For more than a century they had safeguarded the Isle of Storms from the tyranny of the Grand Dragons with their mastery over the weather and massive granite chassis, but it was clear to them that their time in this world would not last for much beyond a few more years, if that. That was why they'd spent the last twenty years trying to find and train a successor who could take up the defense of the Isle after they passed on.

So far, the prospects for that turning out well looked a bit dubious at best. At first, the Storm Titan had thought that the youngster who kept trundling around the countryside playing music in exchange for mana might do well in such a role, seeing as they were one of the only other Dungeons on the island who had expressed any interest in even becoming mobile, let alone keeping the island free of the Grand Dragons. Alas, it had quickly become clear that the Concert Titan lacked both the understanding of what sort of threat the Grand Dragons presented, and the willingness to learn. The Storm Titan had simply given up on them after nearly a year of the Concert Titan insisting that there must be some sort of peaceful solution, even when dealing with Dragonfire-spewing monsters who would gladly kill any who showed even the slightest resistance to their rule.

After that, the Storm Titan had taken to recruiting among the sessile Dungeons living on the Isle, hoping that one of the hundreds of Dungeons on what some would consider to be a small continent would be willing to take up the mantle of the Storm Titan. This had yielded some results in the form of a Dungeon currently known as the Electric Fortress, who had both the thematics necessary to use the supercell method of mana acquisition, and the inclination to beat the shit out of some Grand Dragons. They'd even gotten almost done with building themselves a chassis, though they weren't quite ready to unearth themselves yet.

There were only a couple of problems with the Electric Fortress taking up the Storm Titan's mantle, and for the most part they had to do with the Storm Titan's power source, as did most problems Titans had. The simple fact of the matter is, there was only a limited amount of lightning to go around to power a Titan, meaning that both the old Storm Titan and the Electric Fortress could not be active at full power at the same time. Then there was the matter that the Electric Fortress was by their nature as a very young Dungeon a much less experienced fighter than the Storm Titan, meaning that they would probably need backup to reliably get through their first few fights with Grand Dragons.

The Aether Titan had offered to drop by to help, but they couldn't stay near the Isle for more than a week or so before causing problems. There was only so much mana you could pull out of the Realm of Souls in one go before nasty side-effects started cropping up for people nearby, and the Aether Titan's planar tap was an utterly massive draw on the Realm of Souls. Thus, their assistance could not be relied upon.

For a while, the Storm Titan had simply accepted this undesirable situation as the best they could do given the options available to them, but then some new developments in the outside world had caught their attention. Namely, news of another powerful Titan had emerged, one with a power source that was entirely self-contained. Thus, the Storm Titan had arranged for an Adventurer teleporting to the northern continent to bring a letter with them, hoping to make an arrangement with the new Titan of Steel to keep the Isle safe.

It had been about a week since then, the Storm Titan pummeling yet another Grand Dragon in the meantime, before an oddity made itself known to the Isle's defender. Their control over the weather granted the Storm Titan a powerful sense for the air currents out to a range of hundreds of miles, which is how they were usually warned of inbound Grand Dragons-and how they aimed the supersonic compressed water jets they used to scythe off said Dragons' wing membranes. Now, this storm-sense was informing the Storm Titan of something flying high and fast directly towards the Isle of Storms, something big.

Almost instinctively, the Storm Titan readied themselves for a hydrojet attack, but they stilled their hand for a moment, as within their decaying mind they realized that this unknown was traveling at a speed no Grand Dragon could ever get remotely close to; the shock wave from bludgeoning their way through the atmosphere at that speed would rip their wings off if they tried to extend them, and Grand Dragons needed their wings if they wanted to have any chance whatsoever of controlling their trajectory. Therefore, whatever this was, it could not be a Grand Dragon.

Thus, the Storm Titan anxiously waited as the contact came closer and closer, gradually slowing down and losing altitude as they did so. Almost twenty minutes after the incoming contact first appeared on the Storm Titan's senses, it came into visual range, revealing a gray metallic flying machine, thrusting itself forwards with a plume of Dragonfire emitting from four massive engines on the aft. Ah, a Titan in all likelihood, then.

Thus, the Storm Titan fired off a message in the airborne Titan's direction.
storm titan
Greetings. You wouldn't happen to be the Titan of Steel by any chance?
aav meteor
No, actually; the Titan of Steel is my boss. They sent me to talk to you after receiving that letter of yours.
storm titan
Interesting; in all my years I've never actually met a Titan who was actually subordinate to another, aside from maybe the Electric Fortress' apprenticeship to myself.
aav meteor
No, I'm just a clockwork mind running their previous chassis for them. Anyway, you said you wanted some help keeping the Isle of Storms free of Grand Dragons?
storm titan
Er, what? How many chassis has that youngster gone through anyway, and if you're in the previous chassis what are they using now?

Eh, back to the matter at hand. I've got an apprentice with an almost complete chassis who's looking to take up my burdens for me. Problem is, there's only so much lightning to go around, so we can't both be operating at full power simultaneously. Also, it's a bit iffy if they'd win their first few fights without help, which is something I really can't risk. Basically, I want someone to bail them out of trouble if they really mess up, so that they've got a chance to learn how to do this right.
aav meteor
I can do that in terms of raw firepower easily! Just let me send a quick message to my boss for authorization.
storm titan
Er-
aav meteor
Done! Request approved, I've been seconded to aid in the defense of the Isle of Storms for up to a year, no strings attached.
storm titan
Meteor, I won't even pretend I understand how in the world you got a reply so quickly over such a distance, but you and the Titan of Steel have my thanks. I'll show you to where my apprentice is getting ready to deploy from, before retiring.
aav meteor
Retiring?
storm titan
Not sure if you've noticed, but I've probably only got at most a few years before I die. I'd like a chance to relax and do something besides fight before that happens. I loved having adventurers over back before this whole Titan business, and I'd adore a chance to do it again. Here's hoping they'll be willing to put up with a decrepit old Dungeon like me.

It was with only moderate amounts of surprise that Urist found herself assigned to go back to the newly founded Socialist Republic of Amali, not as a prisoner or diplomat, but as some weird cross between counselor and spy. Basically, she had been assigned to keep an eye on the mental state of the Titan of Steel, try to keep them sane, and let the Deep Kings know if it looked like the Titan was about to go crazy. Literally no-one wanted an insane Titan with casual access to Dragonfire.

Of course, for best effect this had required arranging a time each week with the Titan for regular therapy sessions. Urist had been expecting this to take some time to set up, but much to her surprise the Titan had enthusiastically blocked off a chunk of time three hours long every other day just for talking to her, complete with official orders to the rest of the government they'd founded not to bother them while they were having such a session for anything less than a Grand Dragon breaching the perimeter defenses, or an active invasion of the Capital Dungeon.

Another surprise had been that the room she had been assigned for the face-to-face sessions actually contained the Titan of Steel's core, the only part of the whole Dungeon that was entirely them, when you got right down to it. Internally, Urist was more than a little surprised at this demonstration of trust, but she didn't question it out loud. She was also extremely surprised at the Titan's first words to her being "Finally I have an excuse to not have to run this country for a little while! Do you have any idea how much I've wanted a chance to just rest? Thank you so very very much!"

Urist, a bit stunned at this declaration of thanks, found herself simply stating "You're welcome. Anyway, is there anything you wanted to talk to me about in particular? Any particular issues troubling you, or anxieties you're having?"

To this, the Titan replied "Where do I even start? These last two months I've been frantically trying to build a country that could keep the Grand Dragons out even if I were to unexpectedly perish, and the strain of the job is really getting to me. Fortunately, I've got a plan to foist most of the day-to-day lawmaking off on everyone else so I can focus on building important infrastructure and getting the educational system running properly. If everything goes to plan, I should be able to massively cut my workload starting four months from now."

Figuring that this would be as good an opportunity as any to get a deeper look at the Titan of Steel's thoughts, Urist decided to ask for more details on this supposed governmental reform, saying "That sounds rather interesting. Any chance you'll be willing to share the details with me?"

Urist didn't quite understand how the Dungeon in front of her managed to give off an impression of a shrug, but they did. The Titan of Steel then replied "Eh, I was planning on telling the general public about this in a couple weeks anyway, so there shouldn't be any issue with telling you ahead of time. Basically, I'm planning to set up a democratic political system where the population at large can both elect and over-rule a parlaimentary legislature. Said legislature will have basic authority for most lawmaking, as well as the ability to appoint officers to head various agencies. I'm planning for elections to happen every two years, with a third of the seats up for election each time, save the first election where they're all up for grabs. Still trying to decide if representation should be on a per-party basis or a per-region basis, especially since I want to avoid any would-be authoritarians twisting the system to their advantage. Also trying to figure out what sort of election rules to put in, but I know for sure that it won't be First Past The Post."

The dwarven psychologist quietly updated her profile of the Titan of Steel's personality as she replied "You know, up until fairly recently there was a dwarf nation similar to what you described fairly close to here. I could probably get you a copy of their constitution if you wanted some study material. They were known as Serona, if I recall correctly."

"That would be much appreciated. Curiously, what happened to them?"

At this, Urist sighed, before saying "They were directly under what are now the Dead Wastes when they formed. The entire nation died nearly overnight."
 
They should just offer the electrical generation method to the Electric Titan. Clockwork generators.

As for the Titan of Storms himself, it might be simply that having actual adventurers inside the dungeon is required for their continued health. Suggest he run a school of meteorology.
 
They should just offer the electrical generation method to the Electric Titan. Clockwork generators.

As for the Titan of Storms himself, it might be simply that having actual adventurers inside the dungeon is required for their continued health. Suggest he run a school of meteorology.
Er, no. He's just that freaking old. Dungeons in this verse have an average natural lifespan of 230 years barring violence, and the Storm Titan is 196 years old.
 
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On the subject and voting systems, may I recommend single transferable vote? It does a great job of accurately representing peoples interests. It also insures that it is incredibly difficult for a single political party gain complete control of government. This ensures that the country is run on compromise, which should reduce the likelihood of an "Us versus Them" mentality from forming.

Edit: The CPG grey channel on YouTube has a good series of videos on it.
 
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Any signs of a judicial branch? I may not know much about government, but what would stop the legislative branch granting themselves executive power? or the Executive officials overthrowing the legislature? or the government suppressing opposing view points? And do you have a bill of rights?
 
Any signs of a judicial branch? I may not know much about government, but what would stop the legislative branch granting themselves executive power? or the Executive officials overthrowing the legislature? or the government suppressing opposing view points? And do you have a bill of rights?
Planning on putting the first draft of the Socialist Republic of Amari's Constitution in a lorepost.
 
Awesome sauce, though I am skeptical of the "Socialist" part of the name, though it may just be the fact that I compare most socialist countries with corruption, neglect, and oppression.
 
By going for socialism, our protagonist makes an awful lot of work for himself.

The easy path is simply to put out a "ten commandments" style simple set of laws, covering the stuff that everyone agrees should be illegal. Then make a simple procedure for people to form local governments. Then offload all the work of governing onto the local governments, acting only as a force of last resort in case things catastrophically break down.

Socialism, on the other hand, implies a lot of active resource management. The more resources the central authority is in charge of distributing, the busier it would be. Any mistake means a shortage of something. It sorta works with a Titan at the center because said Titan is a treasure-factory and can take the full economic burden on himself rather than deal with the extra complexity of bootstrapping industries from nothing. But that's just asking for the system to become dependent on the Titan, which is exactly the opposite of the intent.
 
Socialism, on the other hand, implies a lot of active resource management. The more resources the central authority is in charge of distributing, the busier it would be. Any mistake means a shortage of something. It sorta works with a Titan at the center because said Titan is a treasure-factory and can take the full economic burden on himself rather than deal with the extra complexity of bootstrapping industries from nothing. But that's just asking for the system to become dependent on the Titan, which is exactly the opposite of the intent.
Keep in mind though that the Titan wants to bootstrap those industries, and can take the burden on himself to get that started. He also wants to massively improve the quality of life of the nation's citizens, and trying to rely on the citizens themselves to take any improvements he offers and actually use them wisely initially, or start using them on their own, is likely to end in disappointment.
 
Socialism can theoretically work, but you need to have the technology to be truly post-scarcity in order to make it work because people are lazy. If working harder/smarter doesn't result in a better life, people won't do it. And who can blame them?

However, the Titan of Steel here has over-unity power plants and energy-matter conversion. They really do have unlimited resources. It doesn't matter if 90% of the population decides to kick back and leech off the system when the system doesn't even need the 10% who don't. Hell, he has all the tech needed for intergalactic colony ships at this point.
 
I see the mention of Electric Fortress, so no Tesla Towers 'O Doom?

Just had the image of Hydroelectric Dams to supplement Storm Strikes.
 
Socialism can theoretically work, but you need to have the technology to be truly post-scarcity in order to make it work because people are lazy. If working harder/smarter doesn't result in a better life, people won't do it. And who can blame them?

However, the Titan of Steel here has over-unity power plants and energy-matter conversion. They really do have unlimited resources. It doesn't matter if 90% of the population decides to kick back and leech off the system when the system doesn't even need the 10% who don't. Hell, he has all the tech needed for intergalactic colony ships at this point.
I'd like to point out that socialism is less about 'free everything for everyone' (though I can and will be doing that for the most part). The actual point is ensuring that everyone has access to the means of production they need to make their own livelihood without a rentier class getting in the way by siphoning wealth to themselves. Yet another reason why I'm trying to proliferate my techbase.
 
how many month since his birth has passes ? Are we still not having moon ambassador visiting their predecessor country ?
 
I'd like to point out that socialism is less about 'free everything for everyone' (though I can and will be doing that for the most part). The actual point is ensuring that everyone has access to the means of production they need to make their own livelihood without a rentier class getting in the way by siphoning wealth to themselves. Yet another reason why I'm trying to proliferate my techbase.
Yeah it's a popular propaganda attack on socialism. "Oh it can't work because not everything will be for free". While that might be a nice utopian end result socialism as an ideology is about a scarcity world. How to give people access to the means of production is what different socialist streams like to argue about - especially if you're going for central control or a more anarchist approach - but overall it's about how to manage an economy without a capitalist owner class.
 
First Draft of the Constitution of the Socialist Republic of Amari
First Draft of the Constitution of the Socialist Republic of Amari

Article 1: Basic Governmental Structure

Section 1
By default, all lawmaking authority shall be vested in the massed citizenry of the Republic. As such, a law passed by the citizenry supersedes and overrules any law passed by any other body of government at the time of passage. A citizen-passed law is immune to repeal without popular approval for a period of one year after passing. The citizenry can pass a law ordering parts of the government to behave in a specific manner, or to eject specific members of the government from public service.

Section 2
Seeing as most people want to do things with their time other than make laws, the citizenry may elect a parliament to which they delegate the normal day-to-day lawmaking. This parliament shall possess the following legislative powers.

-The parliament can pass laws governing the day-to-day running of the Republic as needed, but cannot pass a law increasing their own powers.

-The parliament can create and dissolve public agencies to uphold the public good and defend the Republic from enemies foreign and domestic.

-The parliament cannot directly appoint the directors of public agencies. They are elected by the citizenry on the same schedule as members of Parliament.

Section 3
The Parliament shall be structured as follows.

-There shall be no fewer than one member of Parliament for every 50,000 citizens of the Socialist Republic of Amari, requiring no law to be passed in order to expand. At present, this means Parliament shall have a minimum size of 120.

Section 4
At the adoption of this constitution, the following public agencies shall be grandfathered in from the transitional government led by the Titan of Steel.

-The Public Defense Administration, responsible for upholding public safety from enemies both foreign and domestic.

-The Department of Public Infrastructure, responsible for construction of transportation, communication, housing, and manufacturing facilities to meet the public's needs.

-The Public Education Administration, responsible for ensuring the public is educated and informed on matters literary, mathematical, technical, medical, scientific, geographical, and political.

-The Census Bureau, responsible for keeping track of demographic information and the total population of the Republic.

-The Amari Health Service, responsible for ensuring easy access to quality medical care for the citizenry.

-The Amari Diplomatic Service, responsible for mediating official relations with other nations that are free of the Grand Dragons.

Section 5
There shall exist a Supervisory Court, directed by a number of Justices elected by and at the mercy of the public. The Supervisory Court is to ensure that the Parliament and public agencies do not violate the public's rights to determine their own fate, and to ensure this they have the authority to permanently remove members of Parliament and public agencies from public service, and to level appropriate penalties against non-government entities. The Supervisory Court also has limited abilities to repeal laws that violate the public's rights. That said, this removal requires a factual confirmation that the accused indeed did attempt to curtail the public's rights.

Article 2: Referenda, Elections, and Constitutional Updates

Section 1
A referendum can be called by any citizen on any matter at any time. These referenda do not require any sort of official approval, and attempts to stop them by Parliament or any public agency is grounds for the offending members of the government being removed by the Supervisory Court. In order for a referendum to have legal weight behind it, a minimum of 30% of the citizenry must have voted in the referendum in question, and to pass at least 55% of those who voted must be in favor. There is no hard cutoff for when a Referendum must be completed by, but if the public loses interest in a referendum for several months before starting it again, it should be considered a separate referendum.

Section 2
Elections are to be held on the winter solstice every other year. Citizens may vote on these elections at any point in the 14 days leading up to the solstice, and cannot be penalized in any way for voting by either governmental or non-governmental entities. Each vote is to be anonymous, so as to make coercing a certain vote more difficult. Any attempt to discourage, dissuade, or prevent citizens from voting on a significant scale is grounds for review by the Supervisory Court.

Section 2a
Candidates and Political Parties may not undertake any form of campaigning or advertising for the election prior to 90 days before the last day of voting. Doing so early can get a Candidate or Party disqualified from the next election, subject to review by the Supervisory Court.

Section 3
Voting for Parliament is performed on a mix of per-district and per-party basis. Half the seats in the Parliament shall be apportioned among the republic on a regional basis, with districts drawn in such a way that they have roughly equal population and in a manner that does not overly favor candidates of any particular party. By default, districts will be drawn by the Census Bureau, and redrawn for each election. The Supervisory Court has authority to review the fairness or lack thereof for Parliamentary districts.

When voting for a district candidate, voters should rank each option by order of preference. Once all ballots have been counted, the candidate with the least first-choice votes is eliminated from consideration, and all ballots for them should be counted for the voters' second picks. This process will repeat, eliminating whatever candidate has the lowest total votes at each stage, until only one remains. That said, if one candidate manages to get more than half of the first-choice vote fairly, their victory can be declared as soon as the first round of counting is done.

The rest shall be up for election nationally, with each political party composing a list of candidates that they will be running for national appointment, and describing what policies or objectives they will attempt to implement. The total proportion of votes for each party shall be matched to the total proportion of nationally-elected seats each party can fill as closely as possible, with the caveat that a party must secure at least 5% of the vote to be up for consideration.

Section 4
The Constitution may only be edited by a referendum of the citizenry, but a constitutional referendum has somewhat higher conditions for passing. These conditions vary based on what part of the constitution is being edited.

-Alterations to Article 1 regarding government structure require at least 50% participation and 55% approval among participants.

-Alterations to Article 2 regarding voting rules require at least 60% participation and 70% approval among participants

-Alterations to Article 3 that add rights for the public at large require at least 60% participation and 70% approval among participants.

-Alterations to Article 3 that remove rights from the general public, or that add rights for specific classes, require 90% participation and unanimous approval to pass.

Article 3: Bill of Rights and Responsibilities

Section 1
Any sapient being that meets the following criterion counts as a Citizen of the Republic, no exceptions. Anyone who tries to MAKE exceptions is to be put before the Supervisory Court.

-Citizens must be sapient, and have independent decision-making capacity.
-In the case of those magically subordinate to another being (Dungeon Minions for example), the ability to disobey a direct order from those they are magically subordinate to must be demonstrated. Once that is done, they are Citizens, NO EXCEPTIONS.

-Citizens must reside within the Socialist Republic of Amari on a permanent basis, and must have either resided here at the time of this constitution's adoption, or must have resided here for at least one year prior to voting.

-Citizens must not have entered the country to carry out the will of a foreign government (examples: diplomats, spies, saboteurs). If they remain in the country after being confirmed to leave the employ of those who sent them here, they become citizens after one year of residence, the same as anyone else.

Section 2
Citizens have the following rights guaranteed to them by this Constitution. These rights shall not be violated.

-Citizens are guaranteed access to the tools, education and means of production to make their own livelihood if they so choose.

-Citizens are guaranteed the right to defend themselves or others if they believe they are in grave danger. They cannot be criminally convicted for self-defense or defense of others.

-Citizens guaranteed the right not to be subject to government force unless there is probable cause to believe they have committed or are preparing to commit a crime. Warrants for arrest, search, or seizure are to be specific in their scope, and performing these acts without a warrant means the results are inadmissible in a court of law.

-Citizens cannot be coerced to say things that incriminate themselves, or to perform a crime. Further, if a citizen performs an act that is later made illegal, they cannot be convicted for their actions prior to the law's passage.

-Citizens are guaranteed the right to not be discriminated against for factors beyond their control; this includes discrimination based on species, gender, or illness.

-Citizens are guaranteed freedom to express their personal beliefs, with the caveat that speech or publications intended or highly likely to spread hateful sentiments is classified as verbal assault, not free expression.

-Citizens accused of a crime are guaranteed a fair and unbiased trial conducted in a timely manner, and are also guaranteed to be informed of the specific accusations being made of them. They are further guaranteed access to competent defensive counsel.

Section 3
Due to the potential harm certain professions could cause to the Republic and to public safety, there are some additional responsibilities that citizens are required to uphold.

-Publications that present themselves as a source of reliable news or could be easily mistaken for such must either; have prominent disclaimers regarding the truth of their content, or make a competent effort to verify that what they are saying is in fact true.

-Those selling weapons or dangerous substances must make a reasonable effort to ascertain whether their customers can be trusted with what they are selling.
 
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I can see a few loopholes here, specifically a lack of any listed rights for non-citizens.

In fact, according to this constitution, by dint of exception, non-citizens would not even have the right to self-defense. Unless that's covered in non-constitutional law.
 
I don't see any mention of a lesser court system. Also, who will count the votes. Other then that, I find this constitution rather well thought out. Granted, I'm still learning about the American Constitution, so I'm hardly an expert.
 
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