No Athletics or Stealth Charms, but she does have Shunshin and I specified pulling a Perfect out of her ass for a reason.
I am accounting for the perfect.

She doesn't have any scene-lengths at the moment besides Panoptic Fusion, and she's Athletics 3 against someone who IIRC was able to compete with Leaf's best. Can't outrun him, can't outfight him.
Fully expect him to burn her dry of motes faster than she can replenish them, at which point Bob's your uncle.

Ask me again at the end of the fourth week, and it might be a very different picture depending on what charms she gets.
Edit: I'll get to reading your omake in a bit, right now I left (a) paper(s) to the last minute again :V
:hugs:
I know the feeling.
 
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I am accounting for the perfect.

She doesn't have any scene-lengths at the moment besides Panoptic Fusion, and she's Athletics 3 against someone who IIRC was able to compete with Leaf's best. Can't outrun him, can't outfight him.
Fully expect him to burn her dry of motes faster than she can replenish them, at which point Bob's your uncle.

Ask me again at the end of the fourth week, and it might be a very different picture depending on what charms she gets.
I meant in the sense of it being a surprise. Your opponent spontaneously developing new abilities they had no record of possessing in the middle of a fight is something that will cause all non-suicidally idiotic shinobi to pull back and re-assess.

If it's not that specific situation yeah she loses even harder.
 
That's the kinda thinking that causes some quest to go to shit. Tenten is essentially in the military, she has superiors, and she receives orders. You're essentially saying lol nope we're a solar now we don't have to listen. In which case I'll point out that ninjas in this world are the equivalent of Dragon Blood exalts, and Tenten is a brand new baby solar, which means that they can and will kick our ass or kill us for going rogue. If you don't like it then go play another quest, but don't shit up this one because you don't like having to follow orders.
Actually this is is not about her being a Solar, it's about her being a PC.
Giving the vague impression of broadly following orders until you have the power to ignore them is the most obedience any PC should show.
 
Actually this is is not about her being a Solar, it's about her being a PC.
Giving the vague impression of broadly following orders until you have the power to ignore them is the most obedience any PC should show.
No. A PC should obey orders just as much as is appropriate to their character, and should obey them in a way that's appropriate to their character.
 
Look at this vote.
If, to me, it seems like telling her could be more fun than keeping silent, should I let orders stop me from voting?
Your idea of "fun" has to align with everybody else's idea of "fun", here. Is your idea of "fun" = "tell the angry grieving woman who (whom?) to revenge-murder, against previous instructions from a superior, and enjoy the consequences"?

Because those superiors will surely find out and then we're going to have to find some reason that we disobeyed them, and won't that be "fun".

[X] I'll be honest. I put those names into the report and was ordered not to talk about it. Can you honestly swear to me that you won't go after them jeopardizing whatever plans Hokage made for them? If yes (first awareness excellency and Sagacious Reading of Intent to see if she's trying to deceive you), then I'll give you the names. If no, I have to look after my comrades, and won't violate orders that might get them killed in whatever is coming. Sorry.
[X] Spend Time with Someone?
-[X] Naruto
-[X] See if you can get him to introduce you to Jiraiya so he can introduce you to Tsunade.
 
For the record, if someone can do a hand-tally I'd be eternally grateful. Especially because the fact that the vote tallier doesn't like how all of you have structured your votes is on you guys :V
 
[X] No
  1. Number of voters: 21

    PlatypusofFail, SynchronizedWritersBlock, Revlid, Katreus, Waruiko, azoicennead, chocolote12, HymnOfRagnarok, Chimeraguard, AzaggThoth, hcvquizibo, Flying Dice, Rmnimoc, Gig_Complex, RagnorakTres, Mellodi, giodan, frozenchicken, zup, Manic Dogma, matacusa

  1. [X] I'll be honest. I put those names into the report and was ordered not to talk about it. Can you honestly swear to me that you won't go after them jeopardizing whatever plans Hokage made for them? If yes (first awareness excellency and Sagacious Reading of Intent to see if she's trying to deceive you), then I'll give you the names. If no, I have to look after my comrades, and won't violate orders that might get them killed in whatever is coming. Sorry.
    Number of voters: 9

    Diceart, veekie, Ando Owen, ltmauve, tryrar, UberJJK, Noname1, Crow, pantherasapiens.
  2. [x] Yes.
    Number of voters: 4

    Redshirt Army, kitsune9, Muer'ci, Artemis1992
  3. [X] I'll be honest. Those should be in the report and I was ordered not to talk about it. Can you honestly swear to me that you won't go after them jeopardizing whatever plans Hokage made for them? If yes (first awareness excellency and Sagacious Reading of Intent to see if she's trying to deceive you), then I'll give you the names. If no, I have to look after my comrades, and won't violate orders that might get them killed in whatever is coming. Sorry.
    Number of voters: 4

    lifeofgesture, nekcihc, fictionfan, Yog
  4. [X] Only one (Kabuto)
    Number of voters: 1

    Pirate34
  5. -[x] "People in mourning often display compromised judgement in certain situations. Your choices are your own, but I think we'll all be better off if I don't answer that right now. Ask me again in 3 months time."
    Number of voters: 1

    frozenchicken
-[X] both
Number of voters: 1

OK based on what I'm getting from the tally it's 22 (21+1) votes for no and 18 (9+4+4+1 some of these a conditional yes's) votes for yes. Close race but it looks like No wins.

Also Naruto wins for the social vote with a preference of Jiraya visit.
 
For the record, if someone can do a hand-tally I'd be eternally grateful. Especially because the fact that the vote tallier doesn't like how all of you have structured your votes is on you guys :V
*raises eyebrow*
Thought we had till next week?

Any way, just in case, best I vote now, and worry about stunts later.

VOTE
[X] No
[X] Hinata

No because of all the reasons that have been previously raised.
Hinata because
1) She's a girl, and would thematically fit with Tenten's current streak of picking up platonic girlfriends after two years of all boys.
2) Our teammate and best friend fucked her up, and we feel guilty; beginning the job of smoothing that over might yield future dividends
3) Hinata is still the clan heir of a major, if not THE major Konoha clan now that the Uchiha are gone. Political connects get.
4) The Hyuga Clan are the only clan in the village that make routine use of A-rank fuinjutsu on a large scale.
See the Caged Bird Seal, which is classified as a juinjutsu. That means they have an entire stable of fuinjutsu masters on call.

And unlike Jiraiya, their fuinjutsu masters are in the village, not roaming around the Elemental Countries.
No, they will not teach you the Caged Bird Seal. But the foundational elements of fuinjutsu will share similarities.

Will work on a stunt after RL gets handled, assuming no update interrupt.
 
Hmmm....


OMAKE: Treat Yourself
Today was a good day.
For the first time ever, you'd beaten Gai-sensei in a fight.
Admittedly, he had spotted you a handicap-if you counted multiple weights, a movement prohibition and only using one arm as a handicap- and you were allowed to break out your entire arsenal of weapons.

Still counts, though, as proof, to yourself, if no one else, that you were making progress towards your dream.
Even if Neji disagreed. Stupid Hyuga.

But for the moment, you had to content yourself with small victories. And so you were going to treat yourself.
The thoughts buoyed you as you walked in the entrance of Kureji Rippa's Arms Emporioum, the dry air of the outside replaced by the familiar smell of weapons oil and leather as you step it into a veritable shrine to melee weaponry.

You walk past the serried ranks of black shuriken and kunai, past the senbon aisle, until you end up in the specialty weapons section.
Today, you were looking for something special.

You stare at a black-hafted naginata in a display case before dismissing it as entirely too long for you.
You stop at a rack of studded tetsubos, half-lifting one before carefully sliding it back into it's stand; you don't have the upper arm strength to wield one of those anyway. You pause to linger over a display case featuring a set of throwing chakram from Wave, admiring the play of light over the rainbow sheen of the metal before regretfully moving on; they cost too much to be throwaway, and you lack the ninjutsu to recall them to your hand.

Someday, maybe, you'll get some.
No you do not have a problem with regards to hoarding collecting weaponry, okay?
It's perfectly reasonable to want at least one of everything.
Stupid Lee.

Then you see it.
Behind the glass of a display case, under it's own lights, you see an unsheathed wakizashi lying on a bed of some sort of fabric.
And it calls to you.

Unabashedly you press your nose against the glass.
Your hand itches to trace the twin dragons on it's blade.

"It's beautiful" you breathe.
"It is, isn't it?" A voice behind you agrees with a note of satisfaction in his voice.
Turning, you see a middle-aged man in pince nez and caftan, brilliant smile splitting his full, luxuriant beard.
You recognize his face as the proprietor, from the weapons license on the wall next to the main entrance, as mandated for every Konoha weapons dealer.
Kureji Hassan.

Mutely you produce and present your identity card; whenever you forgot to wear your hitai-ate, you always had to deal with the indignity of being carded before service. You'd think they'd know your face by now.
Surprisingly, the proprietor waved it off with a "Maito-san's team right? I know who you are."

"What do you think?" He says, motioning to the display case.
"Period wakizashi from the Warring Clans Period, is what it looks like from here, Kureji-san"you opine. " At least fifty years old, though I'd love to know how you've kept it so pristine."

He shakes his head, silver-plated canine flashing in his smile. "Less than six years actually. It's custom work; the person who originally requested it wanted something special for his daughter's birthday. Note the patterning; Sumimoto's the only one I know who can work quite that much detail into chakra metal."

"So why is this beauty still here? She outgrew it?"
His face darkens for a moment. "She never claimed it. The family were Uchiha."
Oh.

You stare through the glass for a few moments more, and then turn to look at him. No doubt in your mind now; you have to have this.
"How much?"
He smiles, and in that moment he resembles nothing so much as a wolf.
A bespectacled wolf, but a wolf nonetheless.

He goes on for a minute about how he's loathe to let the sword go, that it's a reminder of an old customer, and finally quotes a number that makes you blanch. But if you throw in your genin graduation bonus on top of most of your savings...

"Okay."
Kureji stares at you. "You're terrible at this aren't you." In very put out tones.
You look at the merchant in honest confusion. "Terrible at what?"
He sighs. "Never mind."

A quick trip to a bank later, you leave the shop sans most of your savings, but bearing a bill of sale, some weapon oil, two scrolls of shuriken and a case containing the sword and a dragon-entwined scabbard. You aren't sure why Kureji pushed a quarter of the bills you produced back at you, or why he threw in the scrolls of shuriken for free, but given the rate at which you ran through projectiles, you weren't going to turn away free weapons.

He did blush when you hugged him though.

You spend the latter part of the day reading the instructions for care, and -gingerly! carefully!-putting the sword through a few elementary forms. It handled like the dream you thought it would, and the twin dragons on it's surface react to your chakra, changing shades.
You look forward to showing it off to Gai-sensei at training tomorrow.

Only as you turn in to sleep does it actually occur to you:
You don't know how to use chakra flow.


NOTE
That's done.
Still need to find another 4XP to finish off Master of Small Manners, but I can hopefully get that done by weekend.
Now to worry about stunting.

Spot the reference, if you can; it's fairly obvious I think.
Finally got around to rating this. Very good (and also canon). +2 XP to do with as you wish.
 
Finally got around to rating this. Very good (and also canon). +2 XP to do with as you wish.
Canon? Yesss.
*clears throat*

1XP to Appearance. Finish raising App 2 to App 3.
1XP to Mastery of Small Manners[Essence 1, Socialize 2, no prereqs]
Mastery Of Small Manners

Cost: 1m
Mins: Socialize 2, Essence 1
Type: Reflexive (Step 1 for attacker, Step 2 for defender)
Keywords: Combo-OK, Social
Duration: Until next action
Prerequisite Charms: None

The Solar attunes herself to the patterns of human interaction. This Charm makes her responses to social situations so natural and appropriate that in social combat she treats all enemy groups as one point of Magnitude smaller than they are (to a minimum of 0.) It also increases her effective Appearance by one dot. When in doubt, other characters will be more apt to do small favors and provide hospitality than not. Finally, this Charm ensures that the character understands the basic motivations of everyone present in the scene, as if her player had rolled three successes on a mundane Investigation roll to estimate each person's motives.

Now all I have to do is find 4XP more before you update, and we can probably get Yugao to offer training.
Small favor, after all.
 
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Canon? Yesss.
*clears throat*

1XP to Appearance. Finish raising App 2 to App 3.
1XP to Mastery of Small Manners[Essence 1, Socialize 2, no prereqs]
Mastery Of Small Manners

Cost: 1m
Mins: Socialize 2, Essence 1
Type: Reflexive (Step 1 for attacker, Step 2 for defender)
Keywords: Combo-OK, Social
Duration: Until next action
Prerequisite Charms: None

The Solar attunes herself to the patterns of human interaction. This Charm makes her responses to social situations so natural and appropriate that in social combat she treats all enemy groups as one point of Magnitude smaller than they are (to a minimum of 0.) It also increases her effective Appearance by one dot. When in doubt, other characters will be more apt to do small favors and provide hospitality than not. Finally, this Charm ensures that the character understands the basic motivations of everyone present in the scene, as if her player had rolled three successes on a mundane Investigation roll to estimate each person's motives.

Now all I have to do is find 4XP more before you update, and we can probably get Yugao to offer training.
Small favor, after all.

I could be persuaded to draw a few things ....
 
I could be persuaded to draw a few things ....
If you can, and are willing to invest the time and spend it on MoSM, yes please.
Even if you don't want Mastery of Small Manners, extra XP in the Shonen Pool increases the range of new tricks we can pull out of our ass at need.
Or you could buy Angle-Tracing Edge for 4XP, and turn Tenten into a combat sensor.
 
Idea for an omake (I'll try, but I'm a bad writer and I am under way too much stress right now anyway): birth and growth of the least god of Tenten's favored kunai / summoning scroll / clothes. Because narutoverse shouldn't have gods at the moment, and Tenten is an exalt, and things should be starting to leak through, and objects that are constantly on her and are infused with essence (especially if she develops that "the area around me now has Creation physics" charm) should start developing spirits.
 
Idea for an omake (I'll try, but I'm a bad writer and I am under way too much stress right now anyway): birth and growth of the least god of Tenten's favored kunai / summoning scroll / clothes. Because narutoverse shouldn't have gods at the moment, and Tenten is an exalt, and things should be starting to leak through, and objects that are constantly on her and are infused with essence (especially if she develops that "the area around me now has Creation physics" charm) should start developing spirits.

Great idea, I'm so gonna write that.
 
Great idea, I'm so gonna write that.
Always glad to be an inspiration. Thinking more about it... Would Tenten's techniques, at least ones regularly augmented with essence, have gods associated with them? Like,Twin Dragons Rising, both as two scrolls and as a technique itself, could have a spirit in the form of, well, two dragons (chinese ones, obviously) associated with it.
 
I'm happy to see that App dot finished ^^
I was going to do something for it anyway, and I don't mind diverting that effort into manners charm. I'll try to get something done soon.
 
Tenten Accidentally Becomes a Parent (Super non canonical)

Tenten yawned, stretched her arms, and froze. Because at the foot of her bed was two identical twins. They were wearing elaborate kimonos of red and black with dragon patterns spiraling around. One burst forth and tackled hugged her with surprising force.

"Mommy!!" He squealed.

"Oh fuck me." Tenten said aloud.

ooo

"So, you're the spirits of my summoning scrolls." Tenten said slowly over a bowl of hot cheap ramen.

"We're gods!" Tatsu corrected. He was the male twin who had hugged her.

"Your love for us brought us into the world." Chen, the female twin, said solemnly.

Her love for her scrolls? Oh god, she really needed to get out more.

"How? How is this possible?" Tenten wondered through a mouthful of ramen.

"Because of your divinity Mommy!!" Tatsu exclaimed. Tenten winced. He was adorable but a ten year old voice was still terribly high pitched.

"Okay that explains nothing." She muttered. She sighed. She had to go to Gai sensei.

ooo

Tenten managed to bring them to the training grounds fairly discreetly, though it wasn't really necessary. Gai sensei was running through a kata at high speed before stopping at the sight of her and the twins.

"Tenten you are not to do D-ranks during this period of training." He said, slightly confused. She shook her head.

"They're uh ..." Tenten struggled with the words before Tatsu chimed in.

"We're mommy's divine bounty upon the world!" He declared, shaking tentens arm up and down.

Gain senseis eyes grew wide and alarmed but Tenten jumped in before he misunderstood.

"They're my summoning scrolls come to life because of my freaky new powers!" She shouted. She glared at Chen who giggled. Did she know that would happen?

"They are too old for you." Gai sensei said slowly.

"Look at what I can do!" Tatsu flung a giant axe from his sleeve into a tree.

Tenten blinked slowly.

She needed a drink.
 
Tenten Accidentally Becomes a Parent (Super non canonical)

Tenten yawned, stretched her arms, and froze. Because at the foot of her bed was two identical twins. They were wearing elaborate kimonos of red and black with dragon patterns spiraling around. One burst forth and tackled hugged her with surprising force.

"Mommy!!" He squealed.

"Oh fuck me." Tenten said aloud.

ooo

"So, you're the spirits of my summoning scrolls." Tenten said slowly over a bowl of hot cheap ramen.

"We're gods!" Tatsu corrected. He was the male twin who had hugged her.

"Your love for us brought us into the world." Chen, the female twin, said solemnly.

Her love for her scrolls? Oh god, she really needed to get out more.

"How? How is this possible?" Tenten wondered through a mouthful of ramen.

"Because of your divinity Mommy!!" Tatsu exclaimed. Tenten winced. He was adorable but a ten year old voice was still terribly high pitched.

"Okay that explains nothing." She muttered. She sighed. She had to go to Gai sensei.

ooo

Tenten managed to bring them to the training grounds fairly discreetly, though it wasn't really necessary. Gai sensei was running through a kata at high speed before stopping at the sight of her and the twins.

"Tenten you are not to do D-ranks during this period of training." He said, slightly confused. She shook her head.

"They're uh ..." Tenten struggled with the words before Tatsu chimed in.

"We're mommy's divine bounty upon the world!" He declared, shaking tentens arm up and down.

Gain senseis eyes grew wide and alarmed but Tenten jumped in before he misunderstood.

"They're my summoning scrolls come to life because of my freaky new powers!" She shouted. She glared at Chen who giggled. Did she know that would happen?

"They are too old for you." Gai sensei said slowly.

"Look at what I can do!" Tatsu flung a giant axe from his sleeve into a tree.

Tenten blinked slowly.

She needed a drink.
Thematically speaking, it'd either be like this, or they'd be one entity with two minds that only comes into existence once there's enough excess god-food-stuff-I-think-It's-called-Ambrosia(?) for it to appear fully formed and ready to carry out its duty of making sure that the Twin Dragons Technique interacts awesomely with the rest of reality.

I have a marked preference for the latter option, because I hate with a passion anything that involves "Suddenly Children!" that the recipient had no plausible way to avoid.
 
Thematically speaking, it'd either be like this, or they'd be one entity with two minds that only comes into existence once there's enough excess god-food-stuff-I-think-It's-called-Ambrosia(?) for it to appear fully formed and ready to carry out its duty of making sure that the Twin Dragons Technique interacts awesomely with the rest of reality.

I have a marked preference for the latter option, because I hate with a passion anything that involves "Suddenly Children!" that the recipient had no plausible way to avoid.

It's mostly for the lulz and the fact I don't quite understand solar mechanics.
 
Tenten Accidentally Becomes a Parent (Super non canonical)

Tenten yawned, stretched her arms, and froze. Because at the foot of her bed was two identical twins. They were wearing elaborate kimonos of red and black with dragon patterns spiraling around. One burst forth and tackled hugged her with surprising force.

"Mommy!!" He squealed.

"Oh fuck me." Tenten said aloud.

ooo

"So, you're the spirits of my summoning scrolls." Tenten said slowly over a bowl of hot cheap ramen.

"We're gods!" Tatsu corrected. He was the male twin who had hugged her.

"Your love for us brought us into the world." Chen, the female twin, said solemnly.

Her love for her scrolls? Oh god, she really needed to get out more.

"How? How is this possible?" Tenten wondered through a mouthful of ramen.

"Because of your divinity Mommy!!" Tatsu exclaimed. Tenten winced. He was adorable but a ten year old voice was still terribly high pitched.

"Okay that explains nothing." She muttered. She sighed. She had to go to Gai sensei.

ooo

Tenten managed to bring them to the training grounds fairly discreetly, though it wasn't really necessary. Gai sensei was running through a kata at high speed before stopping at the sight of her and the twins.

"Tenten you are not to do D-ranks during this period of training." He said, slightly confused. She shook her head.

"They're uh ..." Tenten struggled with the words before Tatsu chimed in.

"We're mommy's divine bounty upon the world!" He declared, shaking tentens arm up and down.

Gain senseis eyes grew wide and alarmed but Tenten jumped in before he misunderstood.

"They're my summoning scrolls come to life because of my freaky new powers!" She shouted. She glared at Chen who giggled. Did she know that would happen?

"They are too old for you." Gai sensei said slowly.

"Look at what I can do!" Tatsu flung a giant axe from his sleeve into a tree.

Tenten blinked slowly.

She needed a drink.
Quite funny. +1 XP to do with as you wish. Will update Omake list when I don't have a paper due in 13 hours. (AKA probably tomorrow afternoon).
 
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