The Eldritch One (Celestial Forge)

Normally yes applying normal laws to Worm doesn't work however we have to think of tinkertech recording devices and the advances those made compared to our world. I can alot more states have a required two party requirements for recording stuff.
Honestly I could see an argument made for a lot less two party requirements given how much political power the PRT has.
Except they are under the PRT who are not the government agency. They are a paramilitary group operating/being paid for several governments.
The PRT is a USA government agency, one on par with the federal police. The Protectorate, while technically a separate organisation, are the enforcement arm of the PRT and also a government agency in their own right. While capable of acting independently of the PRT, they are in practise subordinate to the PRT and the laws and rules of engagement enforced by the PRT.

In short, Armsmaster is an official law enforcement agent with greater power than the standard police forces. He is perfectly within his rights to record damn near anything he pleases outside of a few legal exceptions.
 
There are several places where I was confused on whether something was happening in a fake(Coil) timeline or the real timeline.

Unfortunately another fake timeline opened up in the middle of class, and I got accosted in it right after it ended. One lone asshole backed me into an alleyway and would just not give up.
Did the timeline end or did the class end while still in the fake timeline?

I was attacked two more times over the weekend. I've started going out with shape shifted clothes so I'm not so restricted when it happens.
Fake timeline or Real timeline?

Two were filled with Coil's men. One with E88 gangers. Not sure about the other two. They didn't have any obvious gang affiliations, so I left them alone.
Couldn't she have checked to see if the other 2 vans were PRT in one of the fake timelines?

I killed everybody in the three targeted surveillance vans.
May want to make it clear that this is happening in the Real timeline at the start? The clarification at the end of the paragraph is a bit awkward feeling?


Love the story , OP goodness, please don't nerf
Seriously , if the dice gives her OP powers then just let her curb-stomp the setting , kill Scion and go world hopping. Don't nerf her powers or try to pump up the opposition just to try and balance things.

Trying to balance things is what killed the Brockton's Celestial Forge (Worm/Jumpchain) for me
 
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Reminder guys, I am still not a lawyer. But getting Armsmaster in trouble here was never my plan regardless.
Yeah people can be upset about being recorded, even if it's legal. I'm sure people have seen clips of offended ppl in public or even cops or government officials getting recorded in public, legal in USA at least.

Danny being recorded inside his home while he's in a lawsuit with them will naturally be annoying. Even if it's legal for Armsy to do so.

Somebody is gonna pivot to what the hell is going on with that contract though.
 
This is why I no longer like CF.
Way too many powers unrelated to tinkering.
Skill issue; if you think that a wrench is just a weapon then that's your problem.
Chapter 8: Taylor Gets Proactive
*Trying Things intensifies!*
So ever since Monday I've had a problem. It's that I don't know whether or not I've been getting anything out of my exercise. You see I'm normally made out of slime now.
Alright so humans get more fit by way of increasing the amount of Myofibril, motor-proteins, in muscle-cells and possibly by modifying the mix of fuels and whatnot in the Sarcoplasm, the cellular fluid in muscle-cells, but that might be wrong, and the ability for the heart to supply oxygen to muscles by pumping harder instead of just faster. Increasing the number of muscle-cells themselves doesn't actually do much to increase strength; double-muscled cows, cows with broken muscle-growth limiting genes, are usually in danger of hurting themselves because those muscles they have a lot of aren't actually that strong.

Now contrary to popular belief muscles don't actually get stronger by recovering from damage; what they get stronger from is cellular signals given off during exertion. I'm honestly not sure whether Lactic Acid build-up is necessarily necessary for that process.

Slimes probably have a entirely different method of increasing in strength.

I'm unsure whether it would be more efficient for Taylor to increase her fitness as a human before converting her fit body to a Slime one or whether it would be better for her to become more fit as a slime.
You know, I think I'll just stop going out as a human. Forever.
Don't see why you wouldn't; if you really need to exercise as a human you can always do it indoors. Possibly even underground if you make a bunker somewhere.

Actually after looking back at Toggle to see if she should have reverted to a Slime when brain-damaged I came across a section about how, despite being called "Toggle", it's actually a dial instead; Taylor should be able to be partially a Slime, whatever that might mean.
"Extortionist? Sir I heard it straight from the horse's mouth. Director Piggot gave you the transfer you wanted." Dad narrows his eyes at them.

"Bullshit!" Miss Militia moves to talk, but Armsmaster motions for her to stop. He starts tapping at one of his gauntlets. A few seconds pass before a voice I've never heard before starts playing.

"Attach as many NDAs as you can to the agreement and give them what they want. Give him a Wards brochure too, just in case the Empire comes poking around to recruit his daughter."

"Straight from the horse's mouth." He says, somewhat smugly.

Dad stares at him for a good few seconds.

"Are you recording this conversation?" Things went rapidly downhill after that.
I don't believe that Tinkertech recordings are admissible in court.
 
Oh, I thought it was having all those words while somehow being slower than Taylor Varga

Lets spend 2 chapters describing upgrades, which unlocks new upgrades that overwrites the upgrades we just talked about!

I ain't gonna harsh on anything that works for making your writers block go away, but good for pacing the format is not.


I don't believe that Tinkertech recordings are admissible in court.

No, but since he just got handed evidence that somebody is fucking with their communications to each other, making sure he gets a clear channel open is useful.
 
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Powers gained this chapter

Environmental Tolerance IV III (Essential Body Modification Supplement) (400CP) (300CP)

You are not damaged by hazardous environments, though this does not provide you a method of propulsion.

I: You no longer need to breathe and do not suffer from temperatures between -100C and +100C (-150F to +200F). You are immune to most radiation (up to about 1,000 mSv; the amount experienced during unshielded exposure to space).

II: As tier I, plus you do not suffer from temperatures below 1500C (+2700F) or the effects of pressure lower than 1000 atmospheres (including the effects of vacuum). You are immune to the effects of radiation at all levels.

III: As tier II, but the protection extends to any non-magical environmental source.

IV: As tier III, but the protection extends to magical environments such as energy planes.
I see that you're taking the advice to keep chewing through this Perk until the Points needed to buy it completely are purchased.

Personally I would have gone for a more granular approach by only purchasing the first option before moving on to other Perks but leaving it available for repurchase but feel free to use whatever works for you.

Edit: it would be consistent with other repurchasable Perks.

No, but since he just got handed evidence that somebody is fucking with their communications to each other, making sure he gets a clear channel open is useful.
I meant that he, Armsmaster, could use the fact that they aren't admissible in court to prevent legal action from being taken against him.
 
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I meant that he, Armsmaster, could use the fact that they aren't admissible in court to prevent legal action from being taken against him.

Oh, I hadn't thought of that, mostly because the last thing the PRT wants is to end up in court at this point. So I was mainly thinking that Danny would be more going 'take this down exactly' while sending a message.

I think being at home, where he has a reasonable expectation of privacy a recording is inadmissible, tinker tech or not.

Wiretap laws in generally could get him too. Its actually a crime to record a conversation without consent of all parties in Massachusetts. So depending on how close to Boston they actually are...
 
Oh, I hadn't thought of that, mostly because the last thing the PRT wants is to end up in court at this point. So I was mainly thinking that Danny would be more going 'take this down exactly' while sending a message.

I think being at home, where he has a reasonable expectation of privacy a recording is inadmissible, tinker tech or not.

Wiretap laws in generally could get him too. Its actually a crime to record a conversation without consent of all parties in Massachusetts. So depending on how close to Boston they actually are...
That's kind of my point; they can't admit the recording as proof that there was a recording because Tinkertech recordings wouldn't be admissible as evidence.
 
Chapter 9: Counter-Surveillance
Dad's yelling match with Armsmaster was embarrassing. He was just being an obstinate asshole. Not that Armsmaster was much better, what with his total inability to budge on the legalities. It ended up being Miss Militia who deescalated the situation. She gently took Armsmaster aside and got everybody to focus on the actual situation at hand. The dead gang members and possible retaliation. She stayed a couple seconds after Armsmaster left to ask us a question.

"Do you feel the need to request protective custody?" I'm... not sure how to answer that. Dad turns to me.

"Taylor?"

"Um, not right this second, no." I hedge. She nods and leaves. After Dad locks the door he starts walking up the stairs.

"We'll talk about this later Taylor, when I'm sure we aren't being spied on." I nod.



The next morning Dad wakes me up bright and early, making the mistake of barging in on me when I haven't woken up yet. He caught me in my amorphous mouthy blob form. There was yelling on my part. Loud yelling. And swearing.

Anyways after that unpleasantness he took me on an early morning drive to a construction zone. It's very noisy. Some of the guys give us strange looks, but we check in with the foreman. He gets us some safety gear and we poke our heads into one of the finished areas right next to construction. Nobody next to us.

"Alright Taylor, I really need to know what's going on here! Did you kill those people and why?"

"Why do you need to know?" He mumbles something I can't hear over the power tools.

"Because I am still on your side Taylor!! Always have been, always will be! And I can't even attempt to keep us safe if you keep stuff from me! Very important stuff like there being gang members actively spying on us.

"And I know you Taylor, you're not a violent girl. You wouldn't just go flying off the handle for no reason. Please tell me what that reason is." Oh geeze Dad, way to lay on the guilt. I don't think I've seen him this stressed since Mom died. Exactly why I didn't want to tell him in the first place.

So I start telling him. Slowly at first. All of the things that never happened. The first incident I talk about is the thug that cornered me in an alley. I wasn't all that threatened. He started getting grabby and I tried to poke him in the eyes with my acidic fingers. Accidentally killed him by stabbing him through the brain. I told him how I talked to Coil and how he tried to smarm his way into a recruitment pitch. I didn't tell him how I got rid of the body.

Next I told him how I got shot Saturday morning, and how it made me decide to never leave myself vulnerable in my human shape ever again. He gave me a hug after that one. Much appreciated Dad.

Next comes when three dudes started chasing me during my Sunday morning run. I skimmed through how I led them on a merry chase, killing them opportunistically. Dodging bullies in school came in useful after all I guess.

Finally there was when they held Dad at gunpoint. I retold the shock, fear, and white hot rage I felt when they put a gun to his head. Suddenly I found myself giving less of a fuck than in school. I allowed myself to be shackled so I could get close, and I killed them all when they gave me an opening. I was almost disappointed when the timeline ended. It meant they survived to threaten us again.

"Is that when you decided to kill the people spying on us?"

"Uh, yeah? Is that really important right now Dad? And I didn't even kill all of them."

"Well yeah it's important! It's very important. Part of the reason old people think young people are impulsive is that they kinda are. They usually don't think through their actions. And I love you to bits Taylor, but this was not very well thought out. Now I realize you might not have time to do this all the time but I'll need you to try expanding your decision making process. Whenever you go to use your powers I need you to ask yourself, how will the PRT react? How will the gangs react? How will the party I'm doing this to react? And am I secure enough to inform my dear old Dad? Can you do that for me?"

"I, uhhh" I hesitate for a second, and Dad's expression falters like I just kicked his nonexistent dog. "I can do that! I can totally do that!" His expression loosens up in relief.

"Good. Now what was this about not killing everybody spying on us?"



Dad took us back home to pack one suitcase for each of us. Apparently we're going to be hopping between Union member's places for a day or two at a time. He's also calling various law enforcement agencies to fake them out and get them to withdraw their surveillance. I know this because I'm currently eavesdropping on him from on top of the stairs.

"Because a few surveillance vans in our neighborhood had everybody in them murdered last night, and I was concerned about the safety of your officers. The PRT took over that investigation real quick, so I thought I would inform you. You know how reluctant they can be to share information, right?"

"..."

"No sir, that was not a threat. There would not be a doubt in your mind if I was threatening you. I tend not to be a very subtle man. I'm just a concerned citizen worrying about all these LEO seeming people in my neighborhood. Now for the record, do you have any surveillance vehicles in my neighborhood?"

"..."

"And are there any law enforcement surveillance operations going on in our neighborhood at all?"

"..."

"This was very productive. Thank you for your time." And so on and so on until he got through all the likely suspects. I didn't listen through all of it. I had a suitcase to pack. As I understand it, the plan is to have any law enforcement back their people off taking advantage of everybody's unwillingness to admit that they're spying on you, and everybody's unwillingness to die. Even if these guys aren't law enforcement, if they're listening in then they'll back off due to their aforementioned self preservation instinct. At least that's the theory.

So about packing my suitcase. Going to have to pack at least four changes of clothes plus pajamas and... Wait, do I even sweat now? No no, not important. Even if I have no bodily functions period, I'm still going to at least appear like I do in my everyday life. I pack all the essentials too. Just in case, you know? We're able to surreptitiously put our bags into the truck in the garage and relax a little bit.

"So it turns out the PRT does have one surveillance van keeping an eye on us. It was how they responded so quickly last night."

"So what does that mean-"

"Taylor." He interrupts. He puts his finger to his lips, the gestures to his ears, then to the radio, dashboard, the back seats, all over the truck really, and he shrugs. I nod and we spend the rest of the car ride in silence. Not my favorite thing in the world. At least the music is still good.

When we got to the union building Dad called the school to start getting my homework delivered here. The initial load I got was a week's worth of back load a few hours after he called. Oh it's already the end of school. I didn't really notice. Been busy practicing with my mouths. I can reliably recall a particular voice and mouth now. Huzzah. I got my school work done in a couple hours after I got it. That seemed, uh, really easy? Whatever. I start working ahead on my math textbooks out of boredom. Math is easy. Kind of. It has rules and constants, and can't be twisted against you. I did all the problems for two more chapters before I got bored. Then Dad brought us over to the first dockworker willing to host us for the night. He seems a little bit rough, but I know that's just from working a labor job.

"So, boss, I'm a little bit surprised you're trusting anybody from work to exist around your daughter. Only other time I think I saw her was that one time as a little kid and the photo you got on your desk." Dad chuckles.

"Oh trust has nothing to do with it Dave. Anybody puts their hands on her will regret ever being born. And it won't be me who delivers the lesson either." Dave chuckles nervously at us.

"Well the guest bedroom is over this way. Make yourselves at home."

"I'll take the couch, Taylor gets the bedroom. And don't go barging in on her in the morning either." Daaaaad!



Abilities this chapter

Time Flies (Lords Of The Night Zombies) (200CP)
There are many talented old wizards who have devoted decades of work to achieving immortality, and they didn't even start that search until they were already skilled and experienced in their magic. And many of them fall short. You have a single decade. Good thing you can make the most of your time.
Any kind of extended work or project you're working on progresses unnaturally fast. Or at least, your contribution does. Specifically, it goes five times as fast. You can read a book five times as fast, set-up a ritual five times as fast, craft five times as fast, study or do research five times as fast, and so on.
This never works on action or dynamic set pieces. You could do five days of ritual work in a single day, but the high point at the end of the ritual, the part that must not be interrupted lest horrible consequences befall everyone? Normal time.



AN: I originally had all the dialogue in the construction zone have an extra exclamation point at the end of every sentence. I changed it to bumping the size of the dialogue. Hopefully that doesn't mess with anybody's formatting. Hopefully people don't think it's too subtle either.
 
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Soooo how does that ability work with her others? Didn't she already have immortality?

Liking this Danny, a lot
it's not an immortality power. It's a power that lets you do the work to achieve immortality quicker. As it says, most wizards/litches are at the END of their life when they start their work, making it rather pressing. This is a perk to let you do that research and ritual prep 5 times as quick. It's in other words, a speed/ craft and research time boster and learning perk.
 
Abilities this chapter

Time Flies (Lords Of The Night Zombies) (200CP)
There are many talented old wizards who have devoted decades of work to achieving immortality, and they didn't even start that search until they were already skilled and experienced in their magic. And many of them fall short. You have a single decade. Good thing you can make the most of your time.
Any kind of extended work or project you're working on progresses unnaturally fast. Or at least, your contribution does. Specifically, it goes five times as fast. You can read a book five times as fast, set-up a ritual five times as fast, craft five times as fast, study or do research five times as fast, and so on.
This never works on action or dynamic set pieces. You could do five days of ritual work in a single day, but the high point at the end of the ritual, the part that must not be interrupted lest horrible consequences befall everyone? Normal time.
Damn she fast now. She fast as fuck now. It's just a shame that Taylor tends not to do a lot of projects involving things like that.
 
Your text size seems wonky.
AN: I originally had all the dialogue in the construction zone have an extra exclamation point at the end of every sentence. I changed it to bumping the size of the dialogue. Hopefully that doesn't mess with anybody's formatting. Hopefully people don't think it's too subtle either.
Might have been on purpose.

Anyways, I hope any Companion perks are applied to Danny.
 
I hope she gets some actual crafting skills soon. Its a shame to have the CF and have no real crafting skills. As it is going she might not even know that is the whole point of her power because so far everything seems to be enhancements to her body/mind.
 
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