Star Wars An Officer and a Traitor (NO SV, you are an Imperial Officer and Traitor)

May the 4th is tomorrow, so if there is any time to start it up... well, really cant pick a more thematic day.:evil:
Well, its' also a good time to end a Star Wars quest on a high note.

mostly because I haven't thought of a good enough thing to continue it yet...

Or... maybe... I don't know yet.
Moff?

Why use Moff when can use
"Commander in Chief of the Alliance-Republic's Fleet"
Maybe he dosen't get the job?
 
From what I can see you're looking at a three way galactic civil war breaking out.
1) Palpatine loyalists. Probably the smallest faction, these guys will be absolutely fanatical. They're also most likely going to have weird force osik and superweapons. There may also be infiltrators, coz that's how the sith roll.
2) Tarkin loyalists. This will probably be most of the military at the outset, maybe not the stormtrooper corps but army and definitely navy that aren't Constantinists.
3) Rebels/republicans. These guys want to restore democracy, perhaps disagreeing on what exactly that will look like when the dust settles though. The Constantinists would join this faction and probably make a significant portion of the original/core leadership simply because the rebellion hasn't had much time to develop otherwise.

Two honourable mentions for other groups.

1) Darth Vader may join one of the existing factions (probably not Tarkin, but he has motivation for the other two) either as a loyalty or redemption path. He may also do the sith thing and strike out on his own, trying to snatch power as a respected/feared commander.
2) It hasn't been that long since the separatists were defeated, there's going to still be some that want to return to that. You may have them start up their own faction wanting a separation from all the above factions.

Basically it's going to get worse before it gets better. The good news is that the empire going this unstable this early pretty much kills the idea stone dead in the eyes of many people. It was sold as stability throughout the galaxy and instead lasted less than 5 years before collapsing due to infighting, and with Tarkins actions it CAN'T just all be 'rebels holding onto the old ways'. Comparing that with the 1000 year old republic it's easy to see which one's more stable.
 
Opportunity to make a Manifesto one what he believes The Galactic Republic should be :D
Constantine is a Classical GR Republican in the Vain of Corellia, he's probably against doing anything that drastic, he donsn't seem that ambitious.

He's already had to deal with one Unstable Government with a questionably sane Ideology, I don't feel he can stomach a second one in one lifetime.
The Constantinists would join this faction and probably make a significant portion of the original/core leadership simply because the rebellion hasn't had much time to develop otherwise.
Constantine: I AM Military Command Structure...now please give me oversight an an order please I'm having a good day.
 
1) Darth Vader may join one of the existing factions (probably not Tarkin, but he has motivation for the other two) either as a loyalty or redemption path. He may also do the sith thing and strike out on his own, trying to snatch power as a respected/feared commander.

He finds out he has a son and instead goes on a Galactic tour to tell people that he is a father.

In actually though, the question now boils down to:

Will Anakin attempt to retake control and convince Vader to use this as opportunity to strike against Palpatine while defecting towards..somewhere.
 
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Do you hear that?

It's the song of the workers uniting.:V

And while the ideology of them breaking their chains does not exist yet...

It may come! And be a problem for everyone.
I mean, not necessarily.

Communism as we know it was born from and it's ideology and tenants defined and shaped by the very specific circumstances of the time in our World. Circumstances that, despite some similarities, are not really present in Star Wars.

If Communism DOES arise in Star Wars - it probably also wouldn't be called Communism, anyways - it's likely that despite surface similarities, it would be quite different from the Ideology we know. Including being much more feasible and sustainable in it's tenants.
 
I mean, not necessarily.

Communism as we know it was born from and it's ideology and tenants defined and shaped by the very specific circumstances of the time in our World. Circumstances that, despite some similarities, are not really present in Star Wars.

If Communism DOES arise in Star Wars - it probably also wouldn't be called Communism, anyways - it's likely that despite surface similarities, it would be quite different from the Ideology we know. Including being much more feasible and sustainable in it's tenants.
Like i said many times, its not going to be communism.

But something like it that would fit into the star wars universe.

Like a droid or workers rights ideology.
 
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...How the hell is Tarkin keeping Palpatine imprisoned? Did Palpatine just let this happen so he could sit back and watch the galaxy burn again because he got bored?

At the very least, I'm surprised the Inquisitors haven't tried to break him out yet. Unless Vader took them all with him.

I think it most likely that Papa Pals saw he misjudged his purge, and is now allowing himself to be imprisoned to take a 'breather', reasses the situation, learn where people's loyalties lie, and then either escape and join those who reveal themself to be loyalists or start to 'grind' his way back up to the top of Tarkin's faction from within his prison cell. Whichever he finds more amusing.
He also is still hiding the fact he is a Sith from the galaxy at large. Something he probably doesn't want to risk being exposed without proper preparation, thanks to potential political problems from it becoming known. Of course, that means Palpatine could probably escape at any time currently, unless he screwed up enough for Tarkin to know he needs supreme overkill.
Actually, Papa Palps was...

Well, he thought he had more time to purge the navy with new and improved and fanatically loyal elements.

The problem is, he did the math wrong.

And Tarkin likes being alive, because well... He's Tarkin.

So... Tarkin did the only thing he could conceivably could in that situation.
....So Palps tried to off TARKIN? Boy, we really upset the apple cart if Tarkin became more than an underling and became a rival. At least for better or worse, he miscalculated and let Tarkin react before Palpatine's solution actually happened.

So the core is gonna be a mess of Emperor loyalists, Tarkinists, opportunists, and Republicans isn't it.
 
In a messy situation, if I know my civ, you look for three things:

Supply-- starve your foes and even the strong will succumb.
Strength -- strike valuable targets and you control the engagement; take from your foes
Support -- gather together more under your banner and you can win where you may have lost.

Corpos
Fleet
Rebels / Ahsoka.

Which is the best call? Depends on what we think our enemies will do.
 
[X]To the Corps Sectors of the outer Rim: You were honestly not going to expect much from these workers. But something tells you that you will be able to win the galaxy if you win them over.


I cast my vote
 
[X]To the Corps Sectors of the outer Rim: You were honestly not going to expect much from these workers. But something tells you that you will be able to win the galaxy if you win them over.
 
Actually, Papa Palps was...

Well, he thought he had more time to purge the navy with new and improved and fanatically loyal elements.

The problem is, he did the math wrong.

And Tarkin likes being alive, because well... He's Tarkin.

So... Tarkin did the only thing he could conceivably could in that situation.

Coup the Government and declare martial law and fight his way to end all the problems.
Oh, I was not so much talking about the purge failing. I was more talking about why palatine might be allowing himself to be / remain in custody. Because while his purge might have failed, we have seen on multiple occasions that he is also a monster in personal combat (for examples: taking on both Maul and Savage Opress was a game to him. Taking down Windu's 3 companions in RotS in minutes. Beating Yoda). If he is in custody / imprisoned by Tarkin's forces, then I believe it is because Sidious allows himself to be imprisoned, and he has a motive to doing so. If he wishes, he could, I believe, break out of any facility that Tarkin could come up with at any moment he desires.

That is, if he actually is imprissoned, and it's not just a lie / propoganda that Tarkin is spreading in order to improve his position while Sidious is on the loose.
 
Because while his purge might have failed, we have seen on multiple occasions that he is also a monster in personal combat (for examples: taking on both Maul and Savage Opress was a game to him. Taking down Windu's 3 companions in RotS in minutes. Beating Yoda). If he is in custody / imprisoned by Tarkin's forces, then I believe it is because Sidious allows himself to be imprisoned, and he has a motive to doing so. If he wishes, he could, I believe, break out of any facility that Tarkin could come up with at any moment he desires
Papa Palps can and will eventually escape.

The how and why is entirely dependent on what Tarkin does next, and if the Navy can be under his thumb when his plan comes to fruition.

Because unfortunately, the other Moffs, Grand Admirals and admirals have seen the writing on the wall that whoever controls the emperor controls the Galaxy.

So Roman Empire, with the senate trying to take back control.
 
Papa Palps can and will eventually escape.

The how and why is entirely dependent on what Tarkin does next, and if the Navy can be under his thumb when his plan comes to fruition.

Because unfortunately, the other Moffs, Grand Admirals and admirals have seen the writing on the wall that whoever controls the emperor controls the Galaxy.

So Roman Empire, with the senate trying to take back control.
Tarkin is the most powerful man in the galaxy, but...

From the very beginning the Constantinists had one advantage the tarkinists by and large didn't. A unified vision, a solid esprit de corps turning the dispirate group into something greater than the sum of it's parts.

Tarkin, meanwhile is stuck working with palp's hand, with only a small inner circle he slowly cultivated himself being close to trustworthy. Great power in theory, but drastically limited due to no true unity, and a fostered culture of backstabbing and corruption still leaving it's mark.
 
[X]Gather your Fleet: You are going to need to organize the fleet. You have a war to win, and that means you must be ready for it all.
 
STAR WARS Episode IV PHOENIX OF THE REPUBLIC
A Long time ago in a galaxy far,
far away....



STAR WARS
Episode IV
PHOENIX OF THE REPUBLIC

It is a period of civil war. The Dark Lord of the Sith Sidious, known to most as Emperor Sheev Palpatine, moved to further consolidate control over his evil Galactic Empire. In doing so, he triggered a war of debate over the question of the Doctrine of the Imperial Navy.

During this debate, the Navy would spilt between the supporters of Grand Moff Tarkin and his doctrine of Fear versus the supporters of Constantine's doctrine of Compassion and Kindness. Tarkin in a bid to ride himself of his rival would have Constantine assigned to a fleet to hunt down rebels, hoping he would fail. Constantine, always at heart a supporter of the ideals of the former Republic, would seize this moment to begin forming a secret rebel cell in the Imperial Navy. As this was going on, a seemingly minor action of his would spark a general labor strike.


Disaster seemingly struck on Mandalore when in the process of attempting to bring peace to the world when Constantine fell facing off against the former sith apprentice Darth Maul. The Dark Lord, thinking that there was now no one left to oppose him in the military, unaware of Constantine having faked his death to become a martyr, proceeded to attempt to purge Grand Moff Tarkin. In response, the Moff launched a coup and took control of the Core and Mid Rim. As the Longest Week of the Empire begins, Workers draw up barricades and the Constantinists prepare to fight for Freedom, for Liberty...FOR THE REPUBLIC...


AN: Yes, I did in fact go and find out the exact shade of yellow that's used in the crawl font. Sadly, someone in the technical staff has decided you cant go make the text any size other than what is in the text size options. It WOULD have been much larger. As for what the Phoenix is...well, we are dead. the Republic is dead....right? Also, on an unrelated note, totally unrelated note to what we were literally just doing, the canonical symbol of the Rebel Alliance is a Starbird, commonly also seen by many in the galaxy as a Phoenix
 
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A Call to Make
A Call to Make


Imperial Center, Coroscant System and Sector, in the Imperial Palace, Year 10 Imperial Order

To many an aide and erstwhile potential pleasure torture subject within the Imperial Palace, few things were as terrifying as the Dark Lord's anger and rage. But they did exist...and most terrifying of all was his pleasure. For one never knew what horrifying act he order next in glee. It was with this knowledge that an aide approached his most august Imperial Majesty as he was enjoying a nice calm evening.

"Excuse my rudeness for interrupting your break, my lord. But news has arrived regarding a major incident on Mandalore"

As the aide spoke, Palpatine's calm appearance was replaced with a scowl as the old man pondered to himself, 'Ah, something to do with Constantine, what has he gotten up to now?'

"It appears that Moff Constantine has fallen performing his duty to the empire. He encountered the Jedi Traitor Darth Maul and moved to engage him. During the fight, due to standing orders in case it was determined needed, his forces performed an orbital bombardment directly on top of the two, completely vaporizing both."

Palpatine was somewhat displeased at first. Maul's last known location had been captive aboard the Tibunal which crashed with most hands on board, with the Jedi Tano believed to have possibly survived as there was evidence in the logs someone had detached a Y-Wing from its dock combined with the graveyard built to honor the dead clones outfront. However....this meant that there was now two lose ends dealt with by that pawn Tarkin without lifting a finger. Now to deal with one more lose end. "I have a call to make."
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Tarkin could not believe what he was seeing. First Constantine was dead. His goal had been to humilate him, not kill him. Yet somehow the fool had managed to get himself killed while going after a Jedi who survived Order 66...by being blown up by his own flagship on his own orders. If Constantine was somehow still alive, after all that? He may hate the man....but he would absolutely respect the man for the sheer metal it took to willingly do such a plan. If only he was born a Tarkin. He was more than hard enough to be one. Indeed, if he still lives, he might invite him to the family training grounds for a match....had he not a more pressing concerns: The Emperor had just ordered him and multiple other officers to be executed. Oh, sure, said document said that it had been ordered at the advise of the Senate...which was to say Palpatine gave someone a script to vomit at the senate, the senate approved said vomit, then said vomit was used to justify the Purge the Emperor was going to do regardless. The only ones who voted against it had been "His Imperial Majesty's Loyal Opposition"....the fucking Rebels of all things....

Well then. It was time to make some calls. If the Emperor was going to have him purged regardless of reality, he might as well make the accusations of treasons true. He had nothing left to lose. And an whole galaxy to gain.
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Bail looked at his glass. When the vote for the Great Officer Purge as he was already calling it mere hours later was finished, he knew well that the rebellion could no longer spend time preparing. Once the Purge was done, it was likely going to be just a matter of time before the Senate was as well. It may be selfish...but he would admit he prefer to not die himself. Sidious had been too blatant here. Bail figured that the Sith Lord would have at least humored the idea that they run a proper investigation. After all, due to rebel intelligence, many of the officers accused were actually guilty of crimes worthy of being stripped of rank and more than a few of those crimes capital as well. It would have been a moment where the rebellion's desire to sabotage the Imperial Military and the Sith Lord's desire to consolidate power would have been perfectly melded. It could have given them several more months of chaos to prepare. Yet it seems that Sidious feels he is close to total dominance such that he no longer needs any pretense of law beyond a rubber stamp by his fellow senators. Not even the farcical theater of the senate spending weeks or months to make it appear as if the new order was not a royal dictatorship was needed now. Instead, the greatest farce of all occurred: He had defended Tarkin of all things of the charges as Tarkin had not even had a chance to make a proper defense of himself. The Rebel Alliance had been the last ones to speak out in defense of a man they all hated and his rights.

Yet....Such is reality. For if they truly wish to restore the Galactic Republic, they must be willing to stand in defense of even those they hate if their rights are being ignored. Tarkin deserved his right to defend himself in court. He deserved the right to a proper trial. No one deserves to be ordered to simply be executed simply because he was no longer convenient. Whether Tarkin would understand that, he doubted it. Both him and his father had always been authoritarians at heart. Did he even know that his daughter hated him? Unlikely. But there was one thing Bail was certain of: Tarkin was likely headed to Coruscant to bring in new management. Which was why he was headed for Naboo, where the clone wars had truly began all those years ago when the Sith had invaded that planet using their lackeys in the federation. If only you were still with use Padme Amidala Skywalker....if only you were still with us. Yet...she was not. Dwelling on the past would not change it. And he had a call to make, as he punched in a number. Ashoka, its time.
 
Imperial Center, Coroscant System and Sector
"Coruscant"

For one never knew what horrifying act he order next in glee.
"he would order"

But news has arrived regarding a major incident on Mandalore"
Missing punctuation.

Maul's last known location had been captive aboard the Tibunal which crashed with most hands on board,
"Tribunal"? I haven't watched Season 7, so I don't know for sure what the ship was called, but "Tibunal" isn't a word as far as I'm aware.

combined with the graveyard built to honor the dead clones outfront.
"out front"

However....this meant that there was now two lose ends dealt with by that pawn Tarkin without lifting a finger.
"were"

He may hate the man....but he would absolutely respect the man for the sheer metal it took to willingly do such a plan.
This is repetitive. I recommend changing the second "the man" to "him".

If only he was born a Tarkin.
"had been"

Indeed, if he still lives,
"lived"

he might invite him to the family training grounds for a match....had he not a more pressing concerns
"might have invited"?

Oh, sure, said document said that it had been ordered at the advise of the Senate
"advice"

the Emperor was going to have him purged regardless of reality, he might as well make the accusations of treasons true.
"treason"

And an whole galaxy to gain.
Should be either "a" or "the".

Yet it seems that Sidious feels he is close to total dominance such that he no longer needs any pretense of law beyond a rubber stamp by his fellow senators.
You switched from past tense to present tense for this sentence.

No one deserves to be ordered to simply be executed simply because he was no longer convenient.
Redundant word.

Both him and his father had always been authoritarians at heart.
"he"

where the clone wars had truly began all those years ago
"begun"

If only you were still with use Padme Amidala Skywalker....if only you were still with us.
"us"

Also, this should be in italics or otherwise formatted to make it clear that this is Bail's thoughts.

"Ahsoka"

EDIT:
now two lose ends dealt with by that pawn
"loose"
 
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The Ending
The Ending

[X]To the Corps Sectors of the outer Rim: You were honestly not going to expect much from these workers. But something tells you that you will be able to win the galaxy if you win them over.

The Space around Corps Sec was never as chaotic as it was now, as you exited hyperspace. You and your crew watched as thousands of hulking ships begin to gather, with the last of the battles between the workers, the rebels, and of course, Corsec, their corporate security, as well as those still loyal to the company.

The Clone Wars could have only prepared you for the savagery of imprisoned people, fighting for their freedom. How many would willingly strap explosives to themselves, to charge at the great bastions of tanks, battle droids, and even their former friends into death? To die for a chance at whatever they believed in.

Too many times you had seen that only lead to death. You could remember all the death that filled your nightmares.

But instead, you took a breath, buried them into nothing, turned to face Captian Pelleon, and sighed. "Open communications to all frequencies, and make sure they are going to hear this."

"Who?" Pealleon asked as he prepared the transmission.

"To all the union leaders that have taken over. Tell them that I need a meeting."

He nodded, but transmission from Thrawn broke through the silence and the static. "Is that wise? The Galaxy thinks you're dead. Why not continue to hide to prevent the enemy from-"

You stopped his thought as you merely said. "If they are our enemies, why haven't they decided to fight us yet?"

Thrawns silence was your answer, as the holo screen arose and you saw several faces, as well as droids among them.

The leader then smiled as he saw you. "Moff Constantine." He muttered in disbelief. "When we heard imperial ships would be arriving, we thought it was going to be Vader? But you… a ghost of the solar winds coming to life? What have we done to earn this honor?"

"You could say that I am here to assume control, but not from you, that would be in spite of your sacrifices." You replied with a short grunt. "I am here to make sure that the new government of this sector will be choosing the right side?"

"Making us decide to fight for the Republic, or whatever the Force the Alliance is calling itself, when all they want is to bring back a nation that all but enslaved us, violated our rights, and kept us as thralls for corporations that have stripped us all of what we are!" One of the other leaders shouted.

"And enslaved us as nothing more than chattel." One of the droids spoke. "When many of us are far more than that."

"Aye, you are right, but perhaps I can convince you that the Rebellion is different than the Republic." You stated. "And that my coming here is not to bring you in as lessors, but to bring us all together as equals."

Your ships moved closer to the Corsec's main planets, and you could see just how destroyed and devastated the fleet was. There was nothing to defend the planet from anyone. "Or failing that, we will leave."

"Then leave!" another union leader shouted.

"I would, if it would not be another black stain on my conscious." You stated and all paid attention to you now, because they would never in a million years think you were plagued by doubts or insecurity. But like all good actors, it could come to you in time. "But then I would leave you defenseless to whoever would come in, be it the Hutts, the Blacksuns, or the empire…" You stated. "Much of this rebellion against the corporations has destroyed much of the sector's defense fleet when you took over. Your space stations are blown to smithereens or damaged and need time for repairs."

"And you don't have time, for the entire galaxy has seen this, among many other events as an opening to a rebellion, an awakening. They have already buried me, with men calling me the Greatest Officer in the Imperial Navy, while others curse me as a traitor who did not buy in. I will tell you what I am though. I am an Officer and a Traitor. And I am fighting for this galaxy against the autocracy and Tyranny that has enveloped it."

You then smiled, and you had them. "So. Workers of Corsec. Workers of the Galaxy. Would you join me to restore a new Republic to this Galaxy? One where this dream that we all have, can be restored?"

Pelleon saw hundreds of thousands of signals blaring all over the sector, signals trying to communicate with you, and your crew. "Sir…"

"Start making haste gentlemen. We have a Rebellion to win… and many changes to make before we can fight the empire on our own terms."

Reward: Corsec has been brought over to the rebellion.

The Galactic Civil War has truly begun.


AN: I so badly want this to continue, but I want to make a sequel, eventually, where we fight the war and win.

But i do not want quality to dip, or have months between updates, so I am ending it here.
 
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