Magoose
SV's Questing Fanatic
- Location
- California USA
- Pronouns
- He
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Silent Second Life (A Naruto Reincarnation Quest) Completed
ayula
Classy Adventurer
- Location
- ~
[X]Try to Reason with Your Mothers Beast: No.. you are not going to let this cycle continue. You are going to try to talk to her, and maybe… just maybe, stop this cycle of madness from continuing any longer. Before it destroys you, your clan and everyone you love.
[X] Final Fantasy XIV Dragonsong
[X] Final Fantasy XIV Dragonsong
- Location
- Philippines
[X]Try to Reason with Your Mothers Beast: No.. you are not going to let this cycle continue. You are going to try to talk to her, and maybe… just maybe, stop this cycle of madness from continuing any longer. Before it destroys you, your clan and everyone you love.
technically she's is her mother too cause Kagami is her or a part of her
technically she's is her mother too cause Kagami is her or a part of her
Magoose
SV's Questing Fanatic
- Location
- California USA
- Pronouns
- He
Was... and had to be separated in order for us to live.
And I think I stated in the update that it's going to be hard to reason with your moms beast.
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Modus_Tollens
SCREAMING AT THE APOCALYPSE
- Location
- ALSO SCREAMING.
I fully expect this to be a proper Naruto discussion: The sort of thing where you are illustrating and exemplifying your point, your nindo, with bone-shattering blows as much as with words. And where those words do even more damage.
It won't be easy to reason with our mother's Beast, but neither was it easy for Naruto to reason with Gaara. It might not even be a matter of our winning, just undermining enough that we take our victory condition. Or pose enough of a distraction that another can take the same.
There are several powers here today. More than us and her.
It won't be easy to reason with our mother's Beast, but neither was it easy for Naruto to reason with Gaara. It might not even be a matter of our winning, just undermining enough that we take our victory condition. Or pose enough of a distraction that another can take the same.
There are several powers here today. More than us and her.
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- Location
- some computer lab
[X]Try to Reason with Your Mothers Beast: No.. you are not going to let this cycle continue. You are going to try to talk to her, and maybe… just maybe, stop this cycle of madness from continuing any longer. Before it destroys you, your clan and everyone you love.
naruto quest, utilize the most OP jutsu available
naruto quest, utilize the most OP jutsu available
Modus_Tollens
SCREAMING AT THE APOCALYPSE
- Location
- ALSO SCREAMING.
Talk no Justsu? Even more powerful since we fight in a place where thought is the only thing there is.
If I built a castle, the stonework would be my vision of the world and conviction would be my mortar. Flaws in my position would be flaws in the fortress that I could not simply erase, not without coming to terms with those flaws. Flaws in my conviction would leave it crumbling beneath my feet as I walk. If an opponent acknowledges that I am right he reinforces my castle simply by witnessing it.
The problem is madness. In a land where reality is barely a thing on the horizon you can believe anything. You don't have to be right, as long as you can hold yourself to the belief that you are.
I would fear sieging Danzo's castle.
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- Location
- Tarn-Vedra
[X]Try to Reason with Your Mothers Beast: No.. you are not going to let this cycle continue. You are going to try to talk to her, and maybe… just maybe, stop this cycle of madness from continuing any longer. Before it destroys you, your clan and everyone you love.
Magoose
SV's Questing Fanatic
- Location
- California USA
- Pronouns
- He
So... become Shiro and Kitsurugi then?
- Location
- Postcard from the Root
[X]Try to Reason with Your Mothers Beast: No.. you are not going to let this cycle continue. You are going to try to talk to her, and maybe… just maybe, stop this cycle of madness from continuing any longer. Before it destroys you, your clan and everyone you love.
The Party Part 5: Mother
Magoose
SV's Questing Fanatic
- Location
- California USA
- Pronouns
- He
The Party Part 5: Mother
You slowly walked forward towards your mothers beast, Kagami following you as your shadow, his shimmering form disappearing and reappearing as the shadows around him broke him apart. His face winced in pain, but he continued soldiering forward.
"Hmmm." your mothers beast was humming, slowly rocking the baby in her arms, not noticing you walk forward towards her. But as she moved, you stopped, a shiver being sent up your spine, and the world changing around you.
Bamboo sprung out of the ground, the sticks going up all around you and Kagami. Kagami made a face of pain, as half his body disappeared in an instant, as he stayed in the light, to keep his form and remain by your side.
In front of you, you could see a pool of water appear, with what you could only assume was your little brother, resting in a cradle, his umbilical cord still attached to his body. He was not born yet.
You slowly stepped again, but this time a twig snapped beneath your feet, causing your mothers beast to look up.
She did not say anything, she only screeched like an animal, turning her body to hide her child.
Flames sprung up around you, orange flames that looked began to grow, and come towards you.
"Wait!" You shouted. "I just want to talk!"
Time Till Birth and Kuruma sealing: 1D100 => 21
You will be able to only talk to your mother's beast for one vote (turn) to convince her to give up her child before you have to fight. And three turns until Kyuubi shows up and you will automatically die.
Stress affecting mothers birth:1D100 => 12
Your mother's mental state, because she is giving birth, will be negatively affecting negotiations.
Your mothers beast stopped, and the flames died. "You… are different than the other one that took my baby." She stated with surprise. "A child…"
A wall of flame sprung up behind you, forcing you to walk towards your mothers beast. "You wish to take my baby away…" There was a pause. "To put him into that thing." She pointed to your little brother, who was squirming in the crib.
"I'll allow you one chance to explain yourself, like all the others who came before you. Why should I give you my child when this world will only kill him?"
What do you say:
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AN: Enjoy... And yes this is a write-in vote.
The better the write-in, the greater the bonus (AKA you guys get rerolls) you will get.
You slowly walked forward towards your mothers beast, Kagami following you as your shadow, his shimmering form disappearing and reappearing as the shadows around him broke him apart. His face winced in pain, but he continued soldiering forward.
"Hmmm." your mothers beast was humming, slowly rocking the baby in her arms, not noticing you walk forward towards her. But as she moved, you stopped, a shiver being sent up your spine, and the world changing around you.
Bamboo sprung out of the ground, the sticks going up all around you and Kagami. Kagami made a face of pain, as half his body disappeared in an instant, as he stayed in the light, to keep his form and remain by your side.
In front of you, you could see a pool of water appear, with what you could only assume was your little brother, resting in a cradle, his umbilical cord still attached to his body. He was not born yet.
You slowly stepped again, but this time a twig snapped beneath your feet, causing your mothers beast to look up.
She did not say anything, she only screeched like an animal, turning her body to hide her child.
Flames sprung up around you, orange flames that looked began to grow, and come towards you.
"Wait!" You shouted. "I just want to talk!"
Time Till Birth and Kuruma sealing: 1D100 => 21
You will be able to only talk to your mother's beast for one vote (turn) to convince her to give up her child before you have to fight. And three turns until Kyuubi shows up and you will automatically die.
Stress affecting mothers birth:1D100 => 12
Your mother's mental state, because she is giving birth, will be negatively affecting negotiations.
Your mothers beast stopped, and the flames died. "You… are different than the other one that took my baby." She stated with surprise. "A child…"
A wall of flame sprung up behind you, forcing you to walk towards your mothers beast. "You wish to take my baby away…" There was a pause. "To put him into that thing." She pointed to your little brother, who was squirming in the crib.
"I'll allow you one chance to explain yourself, like all the others who came before you. Why should I give you my child when this world will only kill him?"
What do you say:
[]Write in
AN: Enjoy... And yes this is a write-in vote.
The better the write-in, the greater the bonus (AKA you guys get rerolls) you will get.
- Location
- Madness realms
[jk] Because otherwise you'll taste the back of my hand.
I hope someone with a modicum of talent in persuasion turns up.
I hope someone with a modicum of talent in persuasion turns up.
I'm thinking something like this
I don't want to take him from you, and I know that mother doesn't want to lose her child either but if this isn't done both of them will die. As a mother wouldn't you rather know that your child survived to grow up.
Because know matter what you do you will lose a child. Kagami could you come over here please, Reflection of my mother meet your first child who didn't die. I wish that I could give you more time to talk but I'm not willing to let my mother and baby brother die and
I don't want to take him from you, and I know that mother doesn't want to lose her child either but if this isn't done both of them will die. As a mother wouldn't you rather know that your child survived to grow up.
Because know matter what you do you will lose a child. Kagami could you come over here please, Reflection of my mother meet your first child who didn't die. I wish that I could give you more time to talk but I'm not willing to let my mother and baby brother die and
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- Location
- California,USA
[X] A shot to the Heart
"Because if you don't let go...you'll never let that pain leave. It'll linger forever until your mind suffer the concequences...
In another life I learned one thing. 'The hardest thing in life to do is let go' now you can argue with me all you want on the spacifics of what is real here but I know one thing, Letting go sucks...not just for me, not just for you, not even for him. Letting go of something you love is painful and most people can't let go.
Life is cruel...but there are bright spots that make it all worth it, The Sunrise, the Moon, Cake and sugar. And Freinds.
A real Freind will be by him to the end...I could be it or he could wait and meet one on his own, Either way....its up to you, weather or not to let your son expirience these things.
For every Curse in this word there is a Blessing along with it. Because without a Hope to cling to, the little stars that keep you going in a ocean of darkness, we might as well have not evolved.
Mother...If you truly love your son, you must let go of him and let him join this harsh and hostile world. For by Enduring it brings happiness. Life isn't just pain Mom, nothing is just pain.
If you love your Son, Let him go.
"Because if you don't let go...you'll never let that pain leave. It'll linger forever until your mind suffer the concequences...
In another life I learned one thing. 'The hardest thing in life to do is let go' now you can argue with me all you want on the spacifics of what is real here but I know one thing, Letting go sucks...not just for me, not just for you, not even for him. Letting go of something you love is painful and most people can't let go.
Life is cruel...but there are bright spots that make it all worth it, The Sunrise, the Moon, Cake and sugar. And Freinds.
A real Freind will be by him to the end...I could be it or he could wait and meet one on his own, Either way....its up to you, weather or not to let your son expirience these things.
For every Curse in this word there is a Blessing along with it. Because without a Hope to cling to, the little stars that keep you going in a ocean of darkness, we might as well have not evolved.
Mother...If you truly love your son, you must let go of him and let him join this harsh and hostile world. For by Enduring it brings happiness. Life isn't just pain Mom, nothing is just pain.
If you love your Son, Let him go.
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- Location
- Underground
Typos corrected.
Overall though I like it. But I'll post what I was working on, see if anyone wants to use parts of it.
'Even IF the Kyuubi wasn't on its way to make us all dead, including you and the babies, though don't forget that it is...you and your baby are mortal, and that means one way or another, bonded to a human or not that someday you'll die. Nobody gets out of life alive. Period. Denial doesn't make it any less true.'
'So no matter happens what you and your baby will live in one way or another. And then you'll die. What matters is what's done with that life. Should your baby just stay next to you and never grow up, for however long that lasts? Ultimately it will end regardless. The alternative, let him bond with your brother. Let him grow and truly experience things and life in the world and make it what he will, to affect the people around him, to have friends, goals and dreams he can fulfill and put his mark on the world. Perhaps even have children of his own someday. Life is sometimes sad and sometimes hurts. There's partings and separation. But there's also happiness, joy, companionship, and fulfillment. And there are also reunions. This right here isn't goodbye. You're letting him go so he do all those things. But you will see him again, that's a promise. In the meantime he won't be alone, my brother will be his by his side and I'll help too. I give my word on that too.'
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- Location
- Underground
This should definitely be part of a write-in vote. But not the only part, I think.
Trying to come up with a way to mash together what there is so far without it being clunky.
[]They will have to kill his big sis first.
-[]Summon our shadow , have a family reunion.
-[] Your and Kagami's argument: If you don't let go...you'll never let that pain leave. It'll linger forever until your mind suffer the consequences...
In another life I learned one thing. 'The hardest thing in life to do is let go' now you can argue with me all you want on the specifics of what is real here but I know one thing, Letting go sucks...not just for me, not just for you, not even for him. Letting go of something you love is painful and most people can't let go.
'Even IF the Kyuubi wasn't on its way to make us all dead, including you and the babies, though don't forget that it is...you and your baby are mortal, and that means one way or another, bonded to a human or not that someday you'll die. Nobody gets out of life alive. Period. Denial doesn't make it any less true.'
'So no matter happens what you and your baby will live in one way or another. And then you'll die. What matters is what's done with that life. Should your baby just stay next to you and never grow up, for however long that lasts? Ultimately it will end, regardless. The alternative, let him bond with your brother. Let him grow and truly experience things and life in the world and make it what he will, to affect the people around him, to have friends, goals and dreams he can fulfill and put his mark on the world. Perhaps even have children of his own someday. Life is sometimes sad and sometimes hurts. There's partings and separation. But there's also happiness, joy, companionship, and fulfillment. And there are also reunions. This right here isn't goodbye. You're letting him go so he do all those things. But you will see him again, that's a promise. In the meantime he won't be alone, my brother will be his by his side just as Kagami and Ayako are friends and work together and and you'll both help too since they're both your brothers. We give our word on that too.
May need to tweak the 'I's' and 'you's' a bit, but I think you get the idea. But it still seems clunky to me. I'll mull it over more.
Ample Accelerate
Gotta stab fast
- Location
- Texas
[x] Because I am your baby too. I was there, just like that. And I survived, no, I THRIVED. My beast, also from you, and I are friends, partners and I love him just like I love you. Like I love your baby. Going into that body will not kill him. It'll nurture him, make him last longer and be stronger. And he can visit you one day. If Kagami and I can get along, he an his can get along and you'll see us all again. Trust me, and trust your son. I love you both.
This way, we have nothing implying violence at all. No kyuubi threat, no implied death if refused. Focus on love and trust, because she's our mom too
This way, we have nothing implying violence at all. No kyuubi threat, no implied death if refused. Focus on love and trust, because she's our mom too
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- Location
- Somewhere over the rainbow
[x] Because I am your baby too. I was there, just like that. And I survived, no, I THRIVED. My beast, also from you, and I are friends, partners and I love him just like I love you. Like I love your baby. Going into that body will not kill him. It'll nurture him, make him last longer and be stronger. And he can visit you one day. If Kagami and I can get along, he an his can get along and you'll see us all again. Trust me, and trust your son. I love you both.
Ending
Magoose
SV's Questing Fanatic
- Location
- California USA
- Pronouns
- He
Ending:
(Mito Uzumaki POV)
You coughed again, hacking as you felt your lungs burn, the blood rising from your mouth and spitting up more blood.
It was hard to stay conscious, you could feel the seal that was on your stomach begin to unwind.
Dammit, you thought you had more time. The Hokage asked you how you were feeling, and just days before, you had been feeling fine, if a bit tired from all the paperwork that you had to do as head of the academy.
You had thought it was a sickness, and the doctor who checked on you was sure it was as well... but now you were sure of one thing.
You had been poisoned. A fast acting poison too, one that was rapidly degrading your bodies immune and nervous systems. You didn't know how, or what kind of poison it was, but it was powerful, and unknown to any of the Konoha medics and poison specialists.
It was unknown… and that meant only one thing.
You were dying and you had not had the time to prepare a successor.
You could hold on for maybe a few hours… at most maybe a few days if the Kyuubi was willing to send some chakra to you, but you doubted it.
He was waiting for this moment, and you knew that when you died, he would die… and he would be free from you.
Lord Hokage than walked into your hospital room, a clipboard in his hand.
"We're going to have to improvise with the next Jinchuuriki." hiruzen stated, making you groan in dread.
"You don't have a baby clan member you can put the Kyuubi in?" You asked. It would be foolish for him to trust such power to someone outside his family once you were gone. The various factions within Konoha would tear them apart, especially if they belonged to one of the clans.
Hiruzen may be one of the strongest men on the continent, but even he would trouble with a fully trained jinchuuriki. Now not a lot of trouble, but enough to where he would need to take a few minutes to have a complete plan to kill it.
"No… not anymore." The fact his voice seemed somber which made your eyes widen. "He died two hours ago. We caught the fever too late."
That was not good… Not good at all. "Are their any children that can become a jinchuuriki?"
Hiruzen nodded. "There is one… but she won't agree with it."
Ah… risk Mako's wrath on the villages ANBU for a few weeks until she calms down, or the threat to your adopted homeland to be destroyed by a giant chakra monster.
A truly difficult choice.
"We don't have much of a choice now do we?" You stated.
Hiruzen nodded. "She's going to be angry at you."
"I'll be dead… so I won't care what she thinks." You replied.
Hopefully she would forgive you.
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(Mito Uzumaki POV)
You coughed again, hacking as you felt your lungs burn, the blood rising from your mouth and spitting up more blood.
It was hard to stay conscious, you could feel the seal that was on your stomach begin to unwind.
Dammit, you thought you had more time. The Hokage asked you how you were feeling, and just days before, you had been feeling fine, if a bit tired from all the paperwork that you had to do as head of the academy.
You had thought it was a sickness, and the doctor who checked on you was sure it was as well... but now you were sure of one thing.
You had been poisoned. A fast acting poison too, one that was rapidly degrading your bodies immune and nervous systems. You didn't know how, or what kind of poison it was, but it was powerful, and unknown to any of the Konoha medics and poison specialists.
It was unknown… and that meant only one thing.
You were dying and you had not had the time to prepare a successor.
You could hold on for maybe a few hours… at most maybe a few days if the Kyuubi was willing to send some chakra to you, but you doubted it.
He was waiting for this moment, and you knew that when you died, he would die… and he would be free from you.
Lord Hokage than walked into your hospital room, a clipboard in his hand.
"We're going to have to improvise with the next Jinchuuriki." hiruzen stated, making you groan in dread.
"You don't have a baby clan member you can put the Kyuubi in?" You asked. It would be foolish for him to trust such power to someone outside his family once you were gone. The various factions within Konoha would tear them apart, especially if they belonged to one of the clans.
Hiruzen may be one of the strongest men on the continent, but even he would trouble with a fully trained jinchuuriki. Now not a lot of trouble, but enough to where he would need to take a few minutes to have a complete plan to kill it.
"No… not anymore." The fact his voice seemed somber which made your eyes widen. "He died two hours ago. We caught the fever too late."
That was not good… Not good at all. "Are their any children that can become a jinchuuriki?"
Hiruzen nodded. "There is one… but she won't agree with it."
Ah… risk Mako's wrath on the villages ANBU for a few weeks until she calms down, or the threat to your adopted homeland to be destroyed by a giant chakra monster.
A truly difficult choice.
"We don't have much of a choice now do we?" You stated.
Hiruzen nodded. "She's going to be angry at you."
"I'll be dead… so I won't care what she thinks." You replied.
Hopefully she would forgive you.
AN: Enjoy. Please vote.
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Markala
Hannor & Polycho Shipper
- Location
- At the Junction of Angst and Fluff
[x] Because I am your baby too. I was there, just like that. And I survived, no, I THRIVED. My beast, also from you, and I are friends, partners and I love him just like I love you. Like I love your baby. Going into that body will not kill him. It'll nurture him, make him last longer and be stronger. And he can visit you one day. If Kagami and I can get along, he an his can get along and you'll see us all again. Trust me, and trust your son. I love you both.