Hmmmm...kagami in child-care? Aka:baby sitting time?

It'll teach him responsibility...

Also we're kind of scary now that I think about it...
 
Geez, the dice have been really and truly determined to make us lose against Sakumo...

Ayako… Your situation is rather… difficult. You are a fine Konouhci and have proved an able commander, fighter and stratigist, along with having the charisma to keep your team going, despite your own disability.

However, the rest of the world considers you far too dangerous to keep alive. Your genjutsu was powerful enough to make me nervous, and that is not something I say lightly. I debated on keeping oyu on the active duty roster, but saw you as far to useful to just throw away like that.

I only hope you can reign in Kagami before he gets you killed.

You are promoted to Chunin.

Is that the Hokage speaking directly at us?

You might want to make it more obvious that this part is spoken speech, because it seems a bit out of place otherwise.


[X] Nothing SWEET for a month and he has to wear a pretty pink dress with the words "I am in trouble, do not feed me" written on it.
-[X] If he sneaks food he won't be able to be let out for the next week. If he does it again it is two weeks. And so on.

Seems fine. He'll feel it without it being harsh enough to make him rebellious about it.
 
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[X] Nothing SWEET for a month and he has to wear a pretty pink dress with the words "I am in trouble, do not feed me" written on it.
-[X] If he sneaks food he won't be able to be let out for the next week. If he does it again it is two weeks. And so on.

Also...can we get some goods from this.
 
[X] Nothing SWEET for a month and he has to wear a pretty pink dress with the words "I am in trouble, do not feed me" written on it.
-[X] If he sneaks food he won't be able to be let out for the next week. If he does it again it is two weeks. And so on.

Yes!! Chunin baby! After everything we done fucking good! Many people of importance got promoted (sorry Jiraya) and now we got that sweet time skip.
 
Putting him in a dress to embarass him is childish and inappropriate.

What do you do to punish Kagami:
[X] No ice cream for two months. One month for the incident in general and causing trouble when he knew it was something important. The other month for lying about orders, especially the Hokage's orders.
-[x] Kagami's time outside over the next two months won't be limited in duration at all, but he will be limited in range from you during this time and must be supervised. He will be given work to do during half that time to encourage responsibility. Perhaps odd jobs or a part-time job of sorts separate from regular missions. Your parents and/or sensei will be consulted in finding something suitable towards this purpose during that time. You will help (you're partners after all), but the lion's share is his responsibility. If money is involved he'll be learning how to manage it.
-[x] Writing: Kagami will write an apology letter to the Hokage for lying about orders, including a short essay on the importance of being able to trust the chain of command. You and Kagami will both write about...the importance of not freaking out crowds of civilians, nobles, ninja, and village leaders, and not (nearly) causing international incidents.


Ayako shares some of the blame for this.


If he likes the idea of a part-time job beyond the punishment and proves he can behave responsibly in the next two months...that might be in the cards. Heh.
 
[X] No ice cream for two months. One month for the incident in general and causing trouble when he knew it was something important. The other month for lying about orders, especially the Hokage's orders.
-[x] Kagami's time outside over the next two months won't be limited in duration at all, but he will be limited in range from you during this time and must be supervised. He will be given work to do during half that time to encourage responsibility. Perhaps odd jobs or a part-time job of sorts separate from regular missions. Your parents and/or sensei will be consulted in finding something suitable towards this purpose during that time. You will help (you're partners after all), but the lion's share is his responsibility. If money is involved he'll be learning how to manage it.
-[x] Writing: Kagami will write an apology letter to the Hokage for lying about orders, including a short essay on the importance of being able to trust the chain of command. You and Kagami will both write about...the importance of not freaking out crowds of civilians, nobles, ninja, and village leaders, and not (nearly) causing international incidents.
 
If Sakumo got a Nat 100 for his promotion, would he have gotten more than chunin?
He would have been promoted to special jounin. And maybe even higher due to... well he kicked a lot of ass when we were out. You'll see when the Rest of the world turn gets posted.
...Y'know, I wouldn't mind an Omake or two about Taijutsu Master Yoshi. Seriously, he's doing just as much as us.
Yoshi is a hero of another story, same with Might Duy(nicknake from his sensei)/Dai. Sakumo now might actually start that friendship with Dai now soon, now that he no longer has a genin team.
 
. "And I'm the one who shouldn't be complaining."

This line needs some editing. Can't really say what exactly you wanted to say with it



Typo

Sozen… If you had distinguished yourself a little more, you might have been considered. He had a strong array of fire jutsu at his disposal, and he used every bit of it during his battle against Yoshi. But alas, he had very little to help his case.

You throw in a second person line here when you keep to third person everywhere else

However, the rest of the world considers you far too dangerous to keep alive. Your genjutsu was powerful enough to make me nervous, and that is not something I say lightly. I debated on keeping oyu on the active duty roster, but saw you as far to useful to just throw away like that.

I only hope you can reign in Kagami before he gets you killed.

You seem to switch to the Hokage addressing us directly here.



He would have been promoted to special jounin. And maybe even higher due to... well he kicked a lot of ass when we were out. You'll see when the Rest of the world turn gets posted.

Yoshi is a hero of another story, same with Might Duy(nicknake from his sensei)/Dai. Sakumo now might actually start that friendship with Dai now soon, now that he no longer has a genin team.

Who won the tournament? Orochimaru, Ren, and Sakumo seemed to have kicked a lot of ass.

Did Ren pull another sharingan tomoe off for a mid tournament power-up?
 
[X] No ice cream for two months. One month for the incident in general and causing trouble when he knew it was something important. The other month for lying about orders, especially the Hokage's orders.
-[x] Kagami's time outside over the next two months won't be limited in duration at all, but he will be limited in range from you during this time and must be supervised. He will be given work to do during half that time to encourage responsibility. Perhaps odd jobs or a part-time job of sorts separate from regular missions. Your parents and/or sensei will be consulted in finding something suitable towards this purpose during that time. You will help (you're partners after all), but the lion's share is his responsibility. If money is involved he'll be learning how to manage it.
-[x] Writing: Kagami will write an apology letter to the Hokage for lying about orders, including a short essay on the importance of being able to trust the chain of command. You and Kagami will both write about...the importance of not freaking out crowds of civilians, nobles, ninja, and village leaders, and not (nearly) causing international incidents.
 
Who won the tournament? Orochimaru, Ren, and Sakumo seemed to have kicked a lot of ass.
Ren did actually win, by the skin of his teeth however, because Orochimaru did amazing stuff. And he got all three tomes on both of his eyes.

Sakumo was out by virtue of having broken arms.

There were other amazing showings by the other forign nin, but at that moment, Konoha is all anyone can talk about at the moment.
 
[X] No ice cream for two months. One month for the incident in general and causing trouble when he knew it was something important. The other month for lying about orders, especially the Hokage's orders.
-[x] Kagami's time outside over the next two months won't be limited in duration at all, but he will be limited in range from you during this time and must be supervised. He will be given work to do during half that time to encourage responsibility. Perhaps odd jobs or a part-time job of sorts separate from regular missions. Your parents and/or sensei will be consulted in finding something suitable towards this purpose during that time. You will help (you're partners after all), but the lion's share is his responsibility. If money is involved he'll be learning how to manage it.
-[x] Writing: Kagami will write an apology letter to the Hokage for lying about orders, including a short essay on the importance of being able to trust the chain of command. You and Kagami will both write about...the importance of not freaking out crowds of civilians, nobles, ninja, and village leaders, and not (nearly) causing international incidents.
 
Meanwhile in the Rest of the World: Post Chunin Exams Edition.
Meanwhile in the Rest of the World: Post Chunin Exams Edition.

Konoha:1D100 => 75

Konoha had a fine showing in the Chunin Exams, with Ren wining the Exams by the skin of his teeth against Orochimaru. however, with so many of their ninja failing to get promoted, civilians have called it rather weak.

However, half of their genin managed to get a million Ryu bounty's on their head.

Ayako herself now has a five million bounty on her head in most naitons. Ren also has 5 million, with a kill on sight order on his head from Kumo.

Sakumo only has a 10 million bounty, but his is special... Flee on sight (For all ranks below Jounin). This is the first time that designation has ever been given out, especially to a chunin.

Reward: Almost all the crew that went to the chunin exams are in the bingo books, with bounties on their heads. New missions are now available. You can politely ask for a job in the village for awhile, and no one will bat an eye.

Iwa:1D100 => 94

Iwa, being the host village, may not have gotten as many ninja into the finals, but what they did was nothing short of an underdog story. Yotsuki Hiro blocked all one hundred blowes against him from the White Chakra Saber, before he disarmed Sakumo and broke both of Sakumo's arms. He would have won if Sakumo didn't shatter his ribs with a headbutt to end all headbutts.

They have also made untold millions from event itself, mostly from Ayako's genjutsu.

Reward: Iwa is now swimming in Ryu. The Allience with Konoha remains intact.

Suna:1D100 => 84

So... the Kazekage and his team went on a merry adventure to the Land of Hot Water... They somehow managed to win an alliance, buy arable land for their farmers on credit, start a national bank that has loaned millions of ryu to foreign nations all over the known world, and somehow discover massive deposits of gold within their territory to fund said bank, with their ninja's acting as debt collectors.

It seems like everything is going strangly for Suna... Their now a bank with an army.

Reward: You have no idea what the Kazekage is going.


Kumo:1D100 => 50

They literally just postured, went to the exams, lost the exams and went home. Their still saber Rattling, but nothing else beyond that.

Reward: Same old Kumo.

Mist:1D100 => 97

They have complete navel dominance on the eastern sea, with their eyes set on Whirlpool.

Reward: Flashpoint for war set up.

Whirlpool: 1D100 => 15

The Alliance between Konoha and Whirlpool is over.

Reward: Flashpoint for war to break out set up.

Rain: 1D100 => 94

Hanzo and Rain have officially declared themselves neutral in all future conflicts, along with the land of Rivers, Vegtables, Hotsprings and Keys Their territory and sovereignty will not be infringed upon, and they will embargo all trade to nations at war with one another.

Reward: There will be neutral factions you can sway during the next war.


Grass: 1D100 => 90

A New leader rises in Grass, stabilizing the region in a way that has not been seen in years. no one knows who this man is, but everyone knows he is powerful.

Reward: Grass stabilizes.

Rivers:1D100 => 83

They have joined Hanzo's Neutrality pact, and have already threatened Kumo with an Embargo on all their goods if they do not stop posturing.


Taki:1D100 => 60

Nothing interesting really happened in Taki, except a dude named Kakuzu or whatever his name picked up some mercenary as his companion. And they have a new Jinchuuriki.

Reward: Taki might not join in the next war.


Madara:1D100 => 100

Well, you have to start somewhere. Everything is going according to plan. The Fire rises.

Reward: A Plan succeeds again.


Zetsu:1D100 => 69

You found a new ally... Madara is too, unpredictable to be useful anymore. You would kill him later, but for now, you will wait and plan with your new ally.

Reward: Zetsu has a new ally.


Sunrise:1D100 => 55

Acceptable... Perpetrators now set... War will break out in five years time. It is inevitable.

Reward: War will break out at a minimum of five years time.


AN: Enjoy the madness. The Timeskip vote will come tommorow, and then I will be taking a break from Silent Second life for a month or until the summer.
 
[X] Nothing SWEET for a month and he has to wear a shirt with the words "I am in trouble, do not feed me treats" written on it.

[X] Has to help you make ice cream for your adorable baby brother and eat none of it
 
Ren and Sakumo are the obvious main candidates for future Hokage.

Orochimaru is probably right up there too, if he's lower than them at all it would only be because of his expressed interest in spy work.

Tsunade could be up there as well if she wasn't running the hospital.

Nanako could be something of a dark horse candidate. She's not as powerful, but training can help with that. But her strategic talent is more unique. If not Hokage, I could see her as jounin commander in the future.

Ayako...is more of a dark horse candidate as well. Not because of lack of power or ability to lead/inspire. She has those in spades. Her genjutsu is absolutely terrifying, and that's sort of the problem. A scary rep is a double edged sword for a political leader. But if she makes it work for her then I could see her as a stronger candidate over time.
 
[X] Nothing SWEET for a month and he has to wear a shirt with the words "I am in trouble, do not feed me treats" written on it.

[X] Has to help you make ice cream for your adorable baby brother and eat none of it
 
Madara:1D100 => 100

Well, you have to start somewhere. Everything is going according to plan. The Fire rises.

Reward: A Plan succeeds again.


Zetsu:1D100 => 69

You found a new ally... Madara is too, unpredictable to be useful anymore. You would kill him later, but for now, you will wait and plan with your new ally.

Reward: Zetsu has a new ally.

... fucking hell.
If Madara and Zetsu are parting ways, wtf is Madara even doing anymore?

He still wants revenge on Konoha for not choosing him as Hokage, right?
 
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