lockingbane
If you're crazy and you know it clap your hands!
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- Waxahachie tx
Damn, our little brother is epic... He competes with tsunades little brothee really well
Silent Second Life (A Naruto Reincarnation Quest) Completed
Magoose
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I would write another omake about what Nawaki is doing... but I won't. At least not today.
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So...Shiro has the offshoot DNA of Hashirama or an Uzumaki in him, right?
That 100....
Two more 95+ rolls, and he will get Negative Energy sensing and a Chakra Cloak before he turns 12 lol.
...With the way our action/training rolls are, if we run into anyone we cant hit with our genjutsu, we are fucked. Looks like we will have a genius younger brother to bail us out, and rescue us from future kidnapping attempts.
Shiro: Omae wa mou shindeiru no Jutsu (Kyuubi powered Genjutsu.)
Sunrise/Akatsuki: Nani!!!
That 100....
Two more 95+ rolls, and he will get Negative Energy sensing and a Chakra Cloak before he turns 12 lol.
...With the way our action/training rolls are, if we run into anyone we cant hit with our genjutsu, we are fucked. Looks like we will have a genius younger brother to bail us out, and rescue us from future kidnapping attempts.
Shiro: Omae wa mou shindeiru no Jutsu (Kyuubi powered Genjutsu.)
Sunrise/Akatsuki: Nani!!!
Magoose
SV's Questing Fanatic
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- California USA
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So you think our mom cheated on our dad with another man?
- Location
- Anchorage, Alaska
nah Dad probably has some really weird genes that just popped in at the weirdest times...that or the bloodlines all decided that Shiro needed to be the hero of the story.
- Location
- Underground
As frustrating as it's been the last few times our training rolls haven't been consistently bad for most things, except for nonelemental ninjutsu. We really need to improve with that.
But back to the vote...
[]Into the Sewers: Are those scratch marks… why would there be scratch marks on the street… unless someone wants you to find the marks.
If there was any indication of the scratch marks going east, or involving a stream I'd be more inclined to it. But as it is just jumping into the sewers makes the rest of the riddle moot, so I doubt this is the way to go.
Unless the proctors want the genin to follow something unusual regardless of the stated clues in some kind of 'look underneath the underneath' lesson. But it not seeming to go with any of the other clues at all makes it just as likely a red herring and either way risks circular thinking. There's arguable points for any option.
In any case, looking east seems to be the first clue. If that doesn't yield anything maybe we can check the marks then.
Magoose
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Well I might throw up some bonus material stuff for you guys to pick up a whole lot of bonuses real quick for the chunin exams.
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- Location
- Underground
Actually...looking to the ground where the streams flow would fit water flowing into the sewers.
And unless you have a clear starting point (which the riddle doesn't give that I can see) you wouldn't know which way to follow the marks...unless you were told which direction you needed to go.
Ok. This option can be seen to fit all three.
[X]Into the Sewers: Are those scratch marks… why would there be scratch marks on the street… unless someone wants you to find the marks.
And unless you have a clear starting point (which the riddle doesn't give that I can see) you wouldn't know which way to follow the marks...unless you were told which direction you needed to go.
Ok. This option can be seen to fit all three.
[X]Into the Sewers: Are those scratch marks… why would there be scratch marks on the street… unless someone wants you to find the marks.
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- The Void
[X]Into the Sewers: Are those scratch marks… why would there be scratch marks on the street… unless someone wants you to find the marks.
Omake Writing List: For all Your Bonus Needs
Magoose
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Omake Writing List: For all Your Bonus Needs
The Lists (A minimum of 20 must be written for them to be accepted):
The Things Ayako Kuruma is no longer allowed to create in front of terrible clients: When you give a Teenager that much power, she's going to use it when people annoy her… or worse, act like an asshole to her teammates.
The Many Girlfriends of Danzo Shimura: There is a reason the man avoids getting himself into relationships. Women are scary, especially Kunoichi whom he's scorned, from all nations and walks of life.
The Guide to Writing Konoha Propaganda: Jiraiya was tasked to make all sorts of lists for the Propaganda Corps… This was one of his first lists… Goddammit Jiraiya, why do all of them suck?
Mordred's Guide to Konoha: A simple list of the Do's and Don'ts for the Princess of Britannia. (she still grumbles about that)
Uchiha Ren's Guide to becoming Hokage: Ren has some simple advice to give to all the prospects wanting to become Hokage.
The Do's and Don't at Tsunade's Hospital: Ever Since Tsunade Took over the hospital, the staff have been making lists about the do's and don't that she instituted, along with rules that are unspoken.
The Types of Paperwork the Hokage hates to do: Paperwork the Hokage hates with a particular passion.
The list of Ice cream Kagami is not allowed to create: Where Kagami created those ideas… you'll never know.
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The Omakes:
Team 7's Excellent Adventures: Having the Hokage as your sensei makes every mission a matter of state… Even rescuing a cat.
Orochimaru's Spy network: It seems Oro forgot that he had set up a spy network in the academy to get the test answers away from the teachers.
Heroes of another Story: Aka the Red Wave hates her job… but she will get to the bottom of her stolen identity.
Masamune's Tea: Masamune and Kojuro are in the Land of Tea to negotiate a new tea Contract. Unfortunately, his enemies have other plans for him. Good thing Kojuro has his flute.
Nawaki Grow's Money trees: It seems Nawaki is already a millionaire… he grows trees for a local lumber company.
Tsar Bomba: Well Shinji is going to pay for this... He took out Genji's favorite Koi Pond. Well, at least his seal worked.
We ARE A PIRATE!: Kiri is enjoying some well earned economic prosperity, on the back of trade, protection rackets, and fishing... Just ignore the piracy... Actually, don't mention the piracy to the Kiri nin.
AN: If you have any ideas, please share them.
The Lists (A minimum of 20 must be written for them to be accepted):
The Things Ayako Kuruma is no longer allowed to create in front of terrible clients: When you give a Teenager that much power, she's going to use it when people annoy her… or worse, act like an asshole to her teammates.
The Many Girlfriends of Danzo Shimura: There is a reason the man avoids getting himself into relationships. Women are scary, especially Kunoichi whom he's scorned, from all nations and walks of life.
The Guide to Writing Konoha Propaganda: Jiraiya was tasked to make all sorts of lists for the Propaganda Corps… This was one of his first lists… Goddammit Jiraiya, why do all of them suck?
Mordred's Guide to Konoha: A simple list of the Do's and Don'ts for the Princess of Britannia. (she still grumbles about that)
Uchiha Ren's Guide to becoming Hokage: Ren has some simple advice to give to all the prospects wanting to become Hokage.
The Do's and Don't at Tsunade's Hospital: Ever Since Tsunade Took over the hospital, the staff have been making lists about the do's and don't that she instituted, along with rules that are unspoken.
The Types of Paperwork the Hokage hates to do: Paperwork the Hokage hates with a particular passion.
The list of Ice cream Kagami is not allowed to create: Where Kagami created those ideas… you'll never know.
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The Omakes:
Team 7's Excellent Adventures: Having the Hokage as your sensei makes every mission a matter of state… Even rescuing a cat.
Orochimaru's Spy network: It seems Oro forgot that he had set up a spy network in the academy to get the test answers away from the teachers.
Heroes of another Story: Aka the Red Wave hates her job… but she will get to the bottom of her stolen identity.
Masamune's Tea: Masamune and Kojuro are in the Land of Tea to negotiate a new tea Contract. Unfortunately, his enemies have other plans for him. Good thing Kojuro has his flute.
Nawaki Grow's Money trees: It seems Nawaki is already a millionaire… he grows trees for a local lumber company.
Tsar Bomba: Well Shinji is going to pay for this... He took out Genji's favorite Koi Pond. Well, at least his seal worked.
We ARE A PIRATE!: Kiri is enjoying some well earned economic prosperity, on the back of trade, protection rackets, and fishing... Just ignore the piracy... Actually, don't mention the piracy to the Kiri nin.
AN: If you have any ideas, please share them.
- Location
- United States
Kinda want Danzo to have an ex-girlfriend from each of the clans in Konoha. Maybe with the exception of Kurama?
Would another omake just be something like a random adventure that a few Konoha crusaders get into in Konoha?
Would another omake just be something like a random adventure that a few Konoha crusaders get into in Konoha?
Magoose
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... I'll allow it.
Yes. Although if it involves the crusaders, you have to give me the heads up first.
- Location
- Israel
Okay... so Shiro has the potential to surpass Hashirama and is already fucking awesome. Genius? GENIUS?! Orochimaru has the fucking trait and look how his sensei described him after a few months: "Thought he was a Special Jounin plan the Hokage put just to fuck with him. He's just that good."
Imagine our little brother becoming a Hashirama level or above without sage mode. Now imagine him learning Sage mode and Kyuubi Chakra Mode and fusing it with Sage Mode like Naruto did. Shiro Kurama would be a god that might compete with half the power of the Ten Tails.
Also imagine this: what if Orochimaru reaches the same level he did in canon or beyond and then become Shiro's sensei? Or what if Yoshi reaches Sanin level or above and becomes Shiro's teacher, teaching him the Eight Gates? Imagine Shiro having Sage Mode, Kyuubi Chakra Mode and the Eight Gates. How powerful would he be?
Imagine our little brother becoming a Hashirama level or above without sage mode. Now imagine him learning Sage mode and Kyuubi Chakra Mode and fusing it with Sage Mode like Naruto did. Shiro Kurama would be a god that might compete with half the power of the Ten Tails.
Also imagine this: what if Orochimaru reaches the same level he did in canon or beyond and then become Shiro's sensei? Or what if Yoshi reaches Sanin level or above and becomes Shiro's teacher, teaching him the Eight Gates? Imagine Shiro having Sage Mode, Kyuubi Chakra Mode and the Eight Gates. How powerful would he be?
I'm not sure chakra flood techniques like gates, bijuu boosts, and strength of a hundred stack with each other.
They all basically flood the body with lots of chakra, for a jinchurikki the beast will generally have more chakra than the human could ever hope to use, flooding more chakra into them beyond that seems like it'd be wasted.
They all basically flood the body with lots of chakra, for a jinchurikki the beast will generally have more chakra than the human could ever hope to use, flooding more chakra into them beyond that seems like it'd be wasted.
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The Do’s and Don’t at Tsunade’s Hospital by Warmach1ne32
Warmach1ne32
Machine of War and Quests
- Location
- Indonesia
Alright I'll give The Do's and Don't at Tsunade's Hospital list a try
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The Do's and Don't at Tsunade's Hospital:
Do:
- Wash your hands before doing an operation
- Wash your hands often
- Write prescriptions for medication neatly
- Wear medical masks to prevent spit from leaving your mouth
- Learn Mystic Palm Jutsu
- Learn First Aid
- Give patients judgemental stares for forgetting the name of their medication
- Have a senior doctor supervise you during an operation until you put in the required hours to be considered qualified to do that operation
- Consider every day a work, holidays don't matter
- Respect the night staff by coming early, they may need it after a hectic night
Don't:
- Don't mix any kind of medication, without authorization
- Don't bring food anywhere outside of the cafeteria
- Don't diagnose a patient by guessing
- Don't joke about someone losing a left arm by saying they are "all right"
- Don't let someone die because they don't have health insurance, the hospital have a charity care system for this exact purpose
- Don't make puns of your patients condition
- Don't make puns during your shift
- Don't use "essential oils", they don't work
- Don't touch anything when you are supposed to only watch a senior doctor do an operation, we will put you in a straight jacket you if you do
- DON'T EVER SAY THE WORD "Quiet" You are just asking for Kami to dump 7-9 admissions and 3 rapid response patients near the end of your shift
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The Do's and Don't at Tsunade's Hospital:
Do:
- Wash your hands before doing an operation
- Wash your hands often
- Write prescriptions for medication neatly
- Wear medical masks to prevent spit from leaving your mouth
- Learn Mystic Palm Jutsu
- Learn First Aid
- Give patients judgemental stares for forgetting the name of their medication
- Have a senior doctor supervise you during an operation until you put in the required hours to be considered qualified to do that operation
- Consider every day a work, holidays don't matter
- Respect the night staff by coming early, they may need it after a hectic night
Don't:
- Don't mix any kind of medication, without authorization
- Don't bring food anywhere outside of the cafeteria
- Don't diagnose a patient by guessing
- Don't joke about someone losing a left arm by saying they are "all right"
- Don't let someone die because they don't have health insurance, the hospital have a charity care system for this exact purpose
- Don't make puns of your patients condition
- Don't make puns during your shift
- Don't use "essential oils", they don't work
- Don't touch anything when you are supposed to only watch a senior doctor do an operation, we will put you in a straight jacket you if you do
- DON'T EVER SAY THE WORD "Quiet" You are just asking for Kami to dump 7-9 admissions and 3 rapid response patients near the end of your shift
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Magoose
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There's a +10 to the rolls.
Edit: I was hoping for a little bit more comedy on the list personally, but I'm okay with this.
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Warmach1ne32
Machine of War and Quests
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- Indonesia
Medical memes can only go so far, most of them are puns. If it was military stuff like XCom, I would have had more material to work with, since I'm not a med student and understand how Konoha's medical system is structured.
You left out dots. for a lot of sentences, but added them to a few, choose one and stick to it.
- Give patients judgemental stares for forgetting the name of their medication - stares.
- Have a senior doctor supervise you during an operation until you put in the required hours to be considered qualified to do that operation - supervise / put in
- Consider every day a work day, holidays don't matter. - every / ,
- Don't mix any kind of medication - This is technically correct, but maybe you might want to add "Without proper authorisation" as medicines are often mixed for different effects (so called medical cocktails).
- Don't touch anything when you are supposed to only watch a senior doctor do an operation, we will put you in a straight jacket you if you do. - put you in a
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The Chunin Exams: Into the Deep
Magoose
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The Chunin Exams: Into the Deep
You moved the manhole cover and pointed down. "Come on ladies, we've got to wade through shit!" You said with a frown on your face.
Tsunade took a whiff of it and gagged. "Ayako, is this some kind of joke to you?"
"No… we need to look for a stream that goes underground that leads to the house of wisdom. If we go east through the sewers, we should be able to get to said house of wisdom." You replied. "And if we head east, we might be able to find it."
Nanako was about to protest, but Tsunade shook her head in agreement. "Oh well, here goes nothing."
The Right Choice: You have made it. (On the First Try too!)
You jumped in first, and was very surprised that you did not land in a pile of raw sewage. In fact, you landed on a sturdy wooden walkway, with torches and candles lining the railing.
When Tsunade and Nanako joined you, their reactions were noticeable.
"Ack! It smells worse down here than it does up there!" Tsunade stated, holding her nose closed.
Nanako's reaction however, was more… strange. "Wow… this is Redwood… I didn't know Iwa imported redwood."
"We should keep moving." You stated, trying your best not to gag. "Alright, let's just start heading east."
You walked along the sewers and saw other genin seemed to have gotten the same idea, following the sewers down.
There were arrows pointing towards the east, where it said "Wisdom House."
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The Wisdom house or 'The House of Wisdom' was a bar in the sewers, a floating boat that moved in Iwa's sewers, and not only had many people not known about… most people were still having trouble finding it.
But not you… you just followed the smell of whisky and sake.
The place was empty, it's chairs and other places to sit were empty, save for the lone barman who was cleaning the glasses. "Ah… so some Genin actually managed to figure out the riddle?" The man said.
Tsunade looked away sheepishly. "We just found some marks on the ground near the sewers and just kinda… hoped in."
The barkeep nodded. "Yep. The good ole House of Wisdom got its name from drunken shinobi telling stories to each other, spending time with their comrades, and drinking their troubles away with what little pay they set aside here." The barkeep voice was gruff and judging from the scar on his neck, was from a slash wound. "Everyone always talks about Libraries and retirement homes to being houses of wisdom, because knowledge was passed down... but they never think about the other places where wisdom of the world could be found. Most of the time, their found in places you least expect… like a bar in the sewers."
You walked up and the barkeep smiled. "You got a few hours, grab a chair, pull up a brew if you want. Relex. This is going to be your last chance to for a while."
You, Nanako and Tsunade looked at each other, and then you sighed. "What should we do?" Nanako asked.
What do you do while you wait:
[]Play Poker: There's a deck of cards, some poker chips and a table that's open.
[]Play Darts with Kunai: You only live once… and your not paying for repairing the wall.
[]Drink!: You always wondered what Sake and Whisky tasted like?
[]Let Kagami Out!
rank the hell out of all the Genin my friend!
[]Sleep: Time to sleep for a few more hours.
[]Plan: You and Nanako have a plan… You will always have a plan.
AN: Enjoy.
You moved the manhole cover and pointed down. "Come on ladies, we've got to wade through shit!" You said with a frown on your face.
Tsunade took a whiff of it and gagged. "Ayako, is this some kind of joke to you?"
"No… we need to look for a stream that goes underground that leads to the house of wisdom. If we go east through the sewers, we should be able to get to said house of wisdom." You replied. "And if we head east, we might be able to find it."
Nanako was about to protest, but Tsunade shook her head in agreement. "Oh well, here goes nothing."
The Right Choice: You have made it. (On the First Try too!)
You jumped in first, and was very surprised that you did not land in a pile of raw sewage. In fact, you landed on a sturdy wooden walkway, with torches and candles lining the railing.
When Tsunade and Nanako joined you, their reactions were noticeable.
"Ack! It smells worse down here than it does up there!" Tsunade stated, holding her nose closed.
Nanako's reaction however, was more… strange. "Wow… this is Redwood… I didn't know Iwa imported redwood."
"We should keep moving." You stated, trying your best not to gag. "Alright, let's just start heading east."
You walked along the sewers and saw other genin seemed to have gotten the same idea, following the sewers down.
There were arrows pointing towards the east, where it said "Wisdom House."
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The Wisdom house or 'The House of Wisdom' was a bar in the sewers, a floating boat that moved in Iwa's sewers, and not only had many people not known about… most people were still having trouble finding it.
But not you… you just followed the smell of whisky and sake.
The place was empty, it's chairs and other places to sit were empty, save for the lone barman who was cleaning the glasses. "Ah… so some Genin actually managed to figure out the riddle?" The man said.
Tsunade looked away sheepishly. "We just found some marks on the ground near the sewers and just kinda… hoped in."
The barkeep nodded. "Yep. The good ole House of Wisdom got its name from drunken shinobi telling stories to each other, spending time with their comrades, and drinking their troubles away with what little pay they set aside here." The barkeep voice was gruff and judging from the scar on his neck, was from a slash wound. "Everyone always talks about Libraries and retirement homes to being houses of wisdom, because knowledge was passed down... but they never think about the other places where wisdom of the world could be found. Most of the time, their found in places you least expect… like a bar in the sewers."
You walked up and the barkeep smiled. "You got a few hours, grab a chair, pull up a brew if you want. Relex. This is going to be your last chance to for a while."
You, Nanako and Tsunade looked at each other, and then you sighed. "What should we do?" Nanako asked.
What do you do while you wait:
[]Play Poker: There's a deck of cards, some poker chips and a table that's open.
[]Play Darts with Kunai: You only live once… and your not paying for repairing the wall.
[]Drink!: You always wondered what Sake and Whisky tasted like?
[]Let Kagami Out!
rank the hell out of all the Genin my friend![]Sleep: Time to sleep for a few more hours.
[]Plan: You and Nanako have a plan… You will always have a plan.
AN: Enjoy.
- Location
- Israel
So a quick question: Will we ever have a timeskip to being 12 or 15 or even adults, because I don't want us to get stuck as a 9 years old for the entire story. Let the Sunrise conflict last for decades and end with it with Ayako as an adult.
