Shards of a Broken Sun [Deprecated; see link in final post for remake]

Monday's Turmoil 9
Four seconds to portal closure.

She couldn't let that happen.

The floor bulged under her feet, pushing her upwards one point three decimetres precisely. The tunnel was falling apart, reality itself disintegrating at her touch. Echoes of her essence already permeated the floor, collapsing its carefully arranged structure like a house of cards.

She could use that.

If she crouched there, injected one mote, patterned for stasis, angle nineteen slash one seventy—now—one side of the bulge lurched downwards, putting her on the side of a hill rather than its top. It'd erupt in a moment, but that was okay, because it'd launch her towards Fumi at fifteen meters per second, and she flashed with golden light the moment the disintegrating fabric of reality she'd so rudely frozen went nuclear.

Chaos-repelling pattern, just for a moment—

Not enough to fix anything, barely enough to matter, but reality screamed in protest at the foreign impulse and she catalogued every flicker of rainbow light, every slight lurch of non-euclidean space.

Heart pounding, don't look back, don't think about the portal that's darkening and pinching shut, or the low-frequency roar of the—Botis, Goetian spirit, roar frequencies suggests low-bandpass portal—caste mark flickering into life, burning brighter with each additional observation as the sheer quantity of essence she used escaped the limits of perfect control.

First thing, grab Fumi—

The demons surrounding Fumi were running away, but they were low-rank spirits, more suited for labor than combat. Not able to survive in this environment. Not responsible for Fumi's safety.

One fell, and the floor didn't break his fall until he was in it to his shoulders—his yell didn't stop the others—neither did his screams, when he fell—was sucked down further, in a manner suggesting active effort.

Fumi was left on her own in a circle of still space whose perimeter gradually grew brighter, occasional glimmers of light charting the true, spherical border of her defences. Eyes wide, calculating the precise point she'd hit that sphere at. If she had to she could stop even in midair, here.

One of the demons tried to stop, fighting off the grasp of a second, but two more joined in and pulled him along. Not mechanical, not eusocial; varying personalities, some prosocial—she didn't want to know.

Two seconds to portal closure.

Ideally she'd screech to a halt right next to Fumi, but before that happened she'd need to synchronise with the reality bubble Fumi had around her. Chaos-Repelling Pattern on its own wouldn't work. Adjusting for demonstrated interface behaviour, probability of accounting for both aspects is—still too many unknowns, but she didn't have a choice. Disrupting the field keeping Fumi alive would be the worst possible outcome, so she'd have to risk it on their surroundings.

Her eyes were getting blurry… no, the air was getting blurry. Ineffective as photon media. She clenched her jaw, and took the risk.

Her expanding field of enforced reality met Fumi's, merging with barely a flicker. The tunnel she was standing on wasn't so lucky; she managed, just barely, to lock down the area she'd taken direct control over, but that wouldn't undo the damage outside.

Less than two seconds, so even if she was able to pull the same trick again—carrying Fumi—they wouldn't get there in time. The tunnel was collapsing, the red streamers of energy she'd seen in the floor denser now, and brighter, and bending the walls inwards.

That was okay. Space was warped, warping more with every moment, and she could take advantage—bend the area in front of her, stretching space until the portal was close enough to touch. That would let her keep it from closing. She couldn't walk through a metric warped that badly, but she didn't need to; there would be plenty of time to get there the normal way. She just had to get a few meters closer first. So she leaned downwards, preparing to pick up Fumi, and…

A few meters away, in the wrong direction, the demon that had gotten stuck looked at her. It was trembling—moaning—mouth slightly open, though it was really more of a muzzle. The tunnel wasn't as damaged in that direction, but that hadn't stopped it from getting trapped. No, worse—it was being eaten, though what exactly was eating it escaped her at the moment.

She felt an impulse to save it.

It was ridiculous. Insane. They'd kidnapped Fumi, and she had already agreed to help kill thousands like it, but they hadn't hurt her—she could tell, from the moment she got close, that Fumi was just asleep—and now it was very likely going to die, because of something she'd done. There wasn't that sense of not-quite-there-ness that she'd had from Samael, no feeling that there was any more to the beast than what she could see, and it was already grievously hurt—it had lost an arm, at least. If she left it, it would die.

If she didn't, she wouldn't be able to make it out in time.

She glanced between Fumi and the demon, feeling horribly conflicted. A few steps in its direction, that was all it would take, but they'd be trapped—or maybe not trapped, she didn't know what would happen if she forced her way through where the portal had been after its collapse. Insufficient information. Didn't know what would happen to her, for that matter. She had an army to hold off, she really shouldn't worry so much about any single person—let alone a single demon

[ ] Follow the plan
[ ] Follow your conscience


A/N: In case you're wondering, this is what excellencies look like from the inside. Well, at least that particular one.
 
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[X] Follow the plan
-[X]Spend Willpower if necessary

saving the demon is stupid. It was part of the kidnapping and furthermore saving it risks Fumi. Besides, frankly not saving it is a lot more narratively interesting than being a typical shonen hero that must save everyone even if it means saving no-one
  • nightmares and regrets
  • learning you can't do everything
  • talking with summoned demons and fumi about what happened to that demon and what its like out there past the walls of reality
  • saving fumi
  • not potentially straining the dragon seal by trying to force our way back into reality via brute force
  • not wasting the entire effort to get fumi and get out
  • if we want a demon minion we have a bunch of demon summoners
  • getting back in time to actually help against Botis instead of letting him rampage in the middle of the base
 
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Well, I'm not sure what we're going to do about the thing eating the demon if we go for it, and that's definitely going to come up if we go to save them since I doubt it'd appreciate having food yanked out of their mouth. On the other hand, I'm assuming there would be consequences for just leaving someone/thing we could have saved behind to get eaten.

And it seems like we can stabilize things to a survivable extent around us here. If we got stuck here we should be able to keep Fumi alive and, while it might take a bit, we might be able to find/make an exit. So getting stuck here isn't an immediate death sentence. It would cost time, true, but we'd also get a better understanding of the Amala Network, which might lead to us being to develop an Drum. I'll admit I'm interested in what kind of synergy Amala access would have with the JP's transporter and the Dragon Stream. Could allow us to use the network to take up some of the load on the Stream.

Still thinking on this, though.
 
That was okay. Space was warped, warping more with every moment, and she could take advantage—bend the area in front of her, stretching space until the portal was close enough to touch. That would let her keep it from closing. She couldn't walk through a metric warped that badly, but she didn't need to; there would be plenty of time to get there the normal way. She just had to get a few meters closer first. So she leaned downwards, preparing to pick up Fumi, and…
Is it possible to do this towards the demon as well so that we have a stabalized bubble with Amu, the portal, Fumi, and the demon all inside of it? So that she can rescue the demon without letting the portal collapse I mean.
 
Gonna be honest, for all that I want to do something, Amu needs to focus on Fumi. Also not sure how trapped the demon is; if Amu's fear aura is still running, flagging the demon to not be effected might be enough to get it to take measures to save itself.

... Eh, on second thought, not going to vote just yet.
 
[X] Follow the plan
-[X]Spend Willpower if necessary


One person is not worth risking the world. Every hour of time we spend here gives us less time to plan. The less time we have to plan, the more people will die.
 
[x] Follow the plan
-[x] You can at least give the thing a chance by releasing it from your aura of fear, it may be able to save itself somehow if you remove your own influence on it. You can't do anything more than that though; you don't know what will happen to Fumi if the two of you get stuck here for a prolonged period, and you can't afford to stay here when you have both that army and the next Septentrion to deal with. Too much is riding on you getting out of here.
 
[x] Follow the plan
-[x] You can at least give the thing a chance by releasing it from your aura of fear, it may be able to save itself somehow if you remove your own influence on it. You can't do anything more than that though; you don't know what will happen to Fumi if the two of you get stuck here for a prolonged period, and you can't afford to stay here when you have both that army and the next Septentrion to deal with. Too much is riding on you getting out of here.


Sounds good.
 
So why hasn't this quest been declared Full Kubo yet? It feels as though no matter what we do, we'll always be screwed. If that's the case let's just play it as though we're Old Man Henderson.

It'll at least be balls-to-the-wall fun and we'll explode in style.
 
So why hasn't this quest been declared Full Kubo yet? It feels as though no matter what we do, we'll always be screwed. If that's the case let's just play it as though we're Old Man Henderson.

It'll at least be balls-to-the-wall fun and we'll explode in style.

Because as badly as we're being fucked over at every turn, we've manage to derail at least three or four cosmic level plots just by existing. In short, nobody's happy, we're just the ones who are dealing with the escalation.

The only problem is that the High Ends here are both annoyingly active, and stronger then we will be for a long-ass time (If forever, Baughn has gone on record saying that Lucy or The Great Will could use the Primordials as a cleaning rag). As well as having ways to just flip the table on a whim.
 
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So the option of playing it in the style of Old Man Henderson is a no go? We could always do something over-the-top and stupid as a last option.
 
Wrong thread. Let me delete that.

Edit: Done.

Okay, I was worried there.

Basically though? We Are Old Man Hendersoning it up.

The original plotlines that should have happened was either "Most of the world blows up when the Demiurge shuts off physics, then sends dudes to attack the seals that keep what's left of the world intact over the course of a week" or "Jackass does an arcane ritual to summon the actual overseer of causality and metaphysics to delete the world and start the process of rebooting it from the ground up, with only four or so survivors in a hollow sphere the size of Tokyo"

We've managed to fuck both of those plotlines up by basically unleashing MAXIMUM COMPASSION boosted by Glorious Solar Bullshit, and now everyone involved is basically pushing their panic buttons in order to get things back into their comfort zones. We're still fucking those plans up.

So yeah, assuming the baselines are up? We're already at 2-3 Hendersons.
 
Botis, Goetian spirit, roar frequencies suggests low-bandpass portal

... huh.

Anyway. Who's up for pinball?

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Chaos-Repelling Pattern. A simple charm, in some respects: the physical laws that the Primordials had crafted and imposed on the Wyld in large scale could be imposed on a small scale as well.

metric unstable; compensating

Once, the shinma Nirupadhika had given rise to "location", and likewise Advaita Iraivan to "separation"; but before the Primordials, the Wyld had never had a true concept of "distance". One location might be an unshed tear away from a second, yet separated from a third only by the despair of unwanted victory.

In those early days, when time itself was young, it was Autochthon and She Who Lives... She Who Lived In Her Name who had created a concept of "distance", by which all places in Creation were separated, and which needed only motion to overcome. That one thing might be more distant from you than another; that one distance may follow another to form a third; that one thing may never be nearer to another by way of a third than directly — these were not statements of the uncrafted Wyld.

monotonicity failure; compensati— manual control override

Amu turned back, and reached out with her free hand, feeling the tortured local metric, before adjusting Chaos-Repelling Pattern. A spike of Creation's own metric, so very like Kagutsuchi's, suddenly twisted down the corridor in a broken, twisted path that should never have been a geodesic. Amu hurried on, but it was too late: though she had hesitated for only a fifth of a second, that was enough to close off any possibility of running to the portal, even using the breakdown of spacetime before her to its fullest.

warning: non-monotonic spatial interface may not conserve physical quantities

Fortunately, she didn't have to.

With her first step, the smooth broken curled straight "spike" scraped and tugged at the fractured segments of magatsuhi, jammed together like so much broken glass. With her second, the system reached its limit, and that broken glass went flying.

linear momentum not conserved
angular momentum not conserved

Jagged shards of not-space gaped where the spike had been as it renormalized, the matching fragments of space still tangled within its grasp as the matter within tried to move without movement in a way that the imposed fragment of Creation's physics did not and would not allow. Under Amu's Chaos-Repelling Pattern, false movement became true movement; mangled magatsuhi metric became mass with momentum.

Without a gesture, Amu cracked the retracting spike like a whip, sending first the whip itself through the trapped demon, then pulling along its impossible, disintegrating payload. With a muted, cracking splorch, like a jam jar breaking on a kitchen floor, the shard gave up its momentum to the demon, who came flying towards Amu at breathtaking speed...

bracing for impa— manual control override

WHUMP

... in the literal sense, as the perfectly-inelastic collision knocked the breath out of Amu — breath which, fortunately, she no longer needed for running towards the portal, thanks to the extra velocity also imparted thereby. Spacetime continued to fracture and dissolve behind around her, lightning-bolts of oblivion streaking across her vision before—

external support restored

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[x] Write-in: Improvise
 
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