Hey, can we finally get around to this?
[X] [Do] Load a basic, low-level template onto your laptop. You describe your dream to the template and let it analyze the dream for clues.
 
Hey, can we finally get around to this?
[X] [Do] Load a basic, low-level template onto your laptop. You describe your dream to the template and let it analyze the dream for clues.
I'm pretty sure you're really awake this time, so yup.

I have absolutely no clue what outcome this will bring, mind you, but isn't that half the fun of it?
 
I really want to try and force a complete transformation of genre. I wonder if it'll just fold it into the sleep-nightmare thingamabob or we can break through that way.
My first idea was actually to fight horror with shonen and instead of a childhood friend, our real dad (he was just sitting at the table nonchalantly reading the newspaper during all this!) defeated the demon before revealing we hail from a long line of demon slayers. As for how effective it would be, IIRC, it might be a bit tough because some of the prime horror/intrigue hooks are in memory/Remember so I suspect the AI will, barring us putting more things in memory to contradict that, try to incorporate most of what we throw at with a horror bent.

[X][Do] Check SV to see if your favorite quest actually updated or if it was also part of the dream
[x] [Do] Contact Mai and ask her if she knows anything.
 
There were about even odds this would happen. In the other branch, we'd still have Mai visiting -- I added her to our memory cells about two weeks ago -- it just wouldn't still be a dream.
The 'towel off' part of my wake-up action was important, because it would have shifted the tone away from "recurring nightmare" and more towards realism. I'm disappointed that part was omitted.
 
Update 8
.ooOOoo.

5 July 2216

You look around, groggily. You must have fallen asleep while working on your plans. You need more sleep, but you've been so busy! With.. with...

Your heart sinks. You don't have any of your plans any more. Just an empty sheet of paper.

You must have fallen asleep and had a bad dream. None of that ever happened. You're fine. You take a deep breath, and look around. Everything's the same as it was. You're in your bedroom, exams start tomorrow, and the voice in your head is being obnoxious as always. None of it was real, right?

Which doesn't mean it's meaningless, so you load up a basic, low-level template on your laptop and describe your dream to it. The AI can analyze the dream for clues. Or it can get a laugh at your expense.

Your door opens, and your sister's head pokes in.

"You still alive in there?" she asks.

"Just about," you respond. "Exams start tomorrow."

"Feeling nervous?"

"I sure am," a third voice says.

You look up. Your other sister stands behind Sarah, grinning.

"Laney!" you exclaim. "When did you get back?"

"A few minutes ago," she says, "Our ship just docked."

"How was the Ophelia?" you ask.

"Same as always. Well, no, the automated turrets kept trying to shoot Dad, so that was new."

You laugh nervously. "Why, did they think he was a monster or something?"

"I... I don't know. Maybe."

You laugh again, then notice the strange look Sarah and Laney are giving you.

"Sorry, it's just..." you begin, then realize you shouldn't say you're laughing because their lives are at risk of ending at any moment. Especially if it's not real. "Bad dream."

"Oh," Sarah says, "Did you have another one?"

"Yeah. I'm fine, though. Just a nightmare."

"Hmm." She gives you a quizzical look, but not for long. Her and Laney wander off, chattering to each other. You wish them all the best; really, you do.

"Just a nightmare," you mutter.

The voice laughs. "Don't worry. It won't be fake forever."

You shudder. "Shut up."

"Make me."

You sigh, then start typing on the laptop. You hope your sisters will leave you alone, so you can get this pawn template running.

"Aren't you a fun one?" the voice says. "I bet you'd love to splatter my blood against the walls, don't you?"

"Shut up," you say. "You're not real."

"Feels real, doesn't it?"

"Yeah, but it's not."

You hear a booming, inhuman laugh from behind you. Your chair swivels around, as if something was standing behind you. There's nothing there, of course. Just the empty space between your desk and your bed.

"How do you know?" the voice says.

"Because this is all a simulation," you say, as if stating a fact. "My mind is playing tricks on me."

"Oh, you don't believe that. You don't believe that at all."

You shrug. Maybe you're just losing it. You even thought Mai saved you in the dream. Well, that'll be easy to disprove. Just call her and ask, and if it's not just a dream-- you'll deal with that if it happens.

You reach for your cell phone-- which you haven't turned on since the last time you had to call your mom-- and power it on. The familiar glowing screen lights up, and you bring up Mai's contact card. You press the phone symbol, then put the phone to your ear.

"It's ringing," you say.

Nothing but static answers you.

"She isn't answering."

"Of course not," the voice says. "She's in her own little world, unaware of what's happening around her, absorbed in some fantasy."

You shake your head. "No. She's saving the world."

"She's not," the voice hisses. "She might think so, but she's not. I'll admit she did a fair job dismantling your nightmare."

You think back to the dream. The monster was gone, sure, but everything else was still there. The long hallway, the darkness, that oppressive feeling... it was still there. The voice is right. Mai didn't save you. She just made the dream less scary, in a way.

"Your turn," the voice says. "You're going to wake up now."

"What are you--" you start to say, but then you wake up.

You're in your bed, in the darkness of night. You don't feel groggy, and you don't feel sore. Instead, you feel completely well-rested. Even though it's dark, you know it's morning. Did you sleep the whole day away?

You stand and head to your door, opening it. The lights in the hallway aren't on, but the sunlight streams in through the windows, lighting it just enough so you can see everything.

"What the..." you mutter. The door to Mai's room is open. You can see her bed, and it's empty.

"Mai?" you call. Silence greets you, save for some humming coming from the kitchen. It sounds like... Mai? You head down the hall toward the stairs, and find that it's Mai, alright. She's holding her plastic sword, pulling it out of the back of a humongous spider.

She looks up, and her eyes widen as she sees you. "I got it," she says. "I avenged your death."

"What?" you ask.

She pulls the sword out of the spider's body, which is about as big as a car, and it falls to the ground with a thud. "The monster that got you. I killed it. I'm sorry it took so long. It was very tough."

Mai is acting strange. Then again, so's your sister, and--

You wince, and rub your head. You can feel a massive lump there. What the... You were hit in the head? By what? Wasn't Mai killing a monster?

"Mai?" you ask. "What's going on?"

"I killed the monster," she says, hefting her sword onto her shoulder. "It's my job. No-one else can do it. Ariel, you shouldn't be here. It's dangerous."

"Ariel?" you ask, tensing. "Who... what the heck's going on?"

"Run while you can!" she says, turning and rushing off into the trees.

You stand there in shock as she disappears into the trees. What the heck was that?

Weren't you in the kitchen, just a second ago?

"Have you started to figure out what's going on?" The voice asks.

= = =

While it may sometimes be hard to tell if the story is disjointed due to being GPT-3, and being disjointed due to that being the story -- and I've encouraged the latter, since that makes the former less of a problem -- well, this wasn't the former.

As for Voice's question, I have several theories.
 
Really the problem is that we're at peak "trust no one, not even yourself" levels so I have a very hard time parsing out what information is real and what isn't.

So I'm kinda lost. Is Mai saying we're dead? Are we experiencing the memories of someone but Mai can sense that and that conversation is actually a mix of whoever it was supposed to be and us? Are we still dreaming like some kind of 6 levels deep Inception thing?

[X][Do] Check the results of the AI's dream analysis.
[X][Do] Search the internet for publicly available information on yourself
 
I can almost guarantee that, whatever else is going on, Mai is a good friend. She's genuine about that, but I think she might be in the same position as us. Only, probably, without a 'helpful' voice.

Then again, there was talk of missing kids earlier -- and at least one dead one. She might be part of that.

Then again again, we've been outright told we're having the dreams of a dead girl.

Then again again again, who are we again?

...

We've been waking up a lot, and now that I think about it, there is the occasional hint that what we're seeing isn't reality. One or two. Like, say, the dead grass on the kitchen floor, or the trees just now -- in the kitchen! -- or how, instead of getting a busy signal when we tried calling Mai, we got static...

I can assure you, that isn't normal. I've never seen GPT achieve that level of craziness if it wasn't deliberately trying to, and yes, I do feel the need to put 'deliberately' in the sentence.

There are a lot of stories like this. Sandman, for one. Alice in Wonderland. Yume Nikki...

It's not like it has a lack of material to crib from, if that's how you'd like to describe it. Don't try to find any literal copies, whether sentence-level or plot-level; that's not how it works.
 
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[X][Do] Check the results of the AI's dream analysis.
[X][do] find mai and talk.
 
Update 9
"Not a clue," you reply honestly.

"Oh, right. You didn't hear me. Well, let's just say it's time for you to make a few choices."

Just then, the door to the outside opens up, and your sister steps inside. She looks at you, alarmed. "Rose! I thought you were dead! I- oh, um... nevermind. Were you talking to yourself, just now?"

"Uh... no. Just, uh... talking to myself about how much I hate these exams." You quickly change the subject. "Saw a ghost in the forest."

You shake your head. Your name isn't Rose, and you're quite sure there shouldn't be a forest in the kitchen, but somehow neither of those things feel unnatural. Weird.

"Ghosts aren't real, silly!" Your sister says, smiling. "Now come on, we need to get to the hospital. I want to make sure you're okay."

"Give me a second to think," you say. "You're... Laney, right?"

"Of course! Don't you remember?"

You shake your head. "I don't... I'm not sure of anything."

She frowns, looking confused and worried. "What do you mean? Don't you remember our parents? Or... or me?"

"I..."

Oh, you remember. You remember, all right. Your name's Ariel, and Rose is your older sister. She isn't, y'know, you, but then you also remember 'waking up' several times in a row. You want to find Mai, to figure out what's really going on -- and you want to look yourself up on the internet, because to say that this is confusing is an understatement.

"A-Ariel? Are you okay?"

"I..."

She didn't even notice the switch. This is a dream. It has to be a dream. But if it is, what does that mean? Does it mean you're dead? If so, what's happening now? Is this Hell?

Probably not. If it is, you're in it together.

If this isn't a dream, then something even weirder is going on. You need to find a computer. A quick search of the house reveals one in Laney's room, and you sit in front of it as she watches, visibly confused. You'd have used your own, but your room has inexplicably been replaced with a kitchen.

A quick search online brings up... well, nothing for a while. Your first search brings up nothing but suggestions to 'improve your search' or advertisements. Your next one brings up several pages claiming that Rose or Ariel or both are dead, and that their deaths are your fault, which brings up the question of who exactly it thinks you are.

A moment's reflection reminds you that you'd previously programmed your computer to analyse your dreams. That was in a dream, but probably so is this, so perhaps you should log in remotely and check what it's figured out. You do so, and are presented with a text-only interface. Apparently it's running on Unix now.[0]

You run 'ls'
, and it lists the following folders:

Current Dreams

Earliest Dreams

MySQL Database

Analysis

Tilde ~

You run 'ls Analysis' and it lists the following files:

CURRENT.HTML

FRIENDLY FAKIR.HTML

GHOSTLIGHT.TAR.XZ

Those names are a little concerning, but setting them aside for now... you read CURRENT.HTML, which you guess is the output from your ongoing dreams.

It's a mess of symbols, numbers, and characters. You run 'man less' to learn how to use the less command, then use it to navigate the file. You search for settings or website and quickly find those entries.

They're addresses. The first two are your home and school. The third is 'www.website.com'. A website, it seems, has been creating these dreams for you. You look up the owner of the domain name, and find it's simply a dummy account at a webhost... but the webhost is actually yours.

Okay, fine. You're reading this in a dream, and the computer itself is also part of the dream. You don't know why you were expecting anything different. Maybe you can influence the dream by interacting with the computer? You'll try that later.

For now, though, you continue reading your html file, searching for anything else that seems important.

You find some references to an instance of 'Ulivik' several times. And 'Rose' is mentioned a few times. Finally, there's a reference to a 'Dampening Field'. This seems related to the dreams, somehow.

Okay, you'll try to figure out the significance later. You exit the program by pressing 'q', but before getting up, you decide you should search for any information it might have on Mai. You could just ask her yourself, but doing this seems more interesting and less awkward.

You run 'grep Mai CurrentDream', and retrieve a single line:

You're Mai. You have short brown hair and wear a tight black t-shirt with long grey sweatpants.

That doesn't seem right, so you simply try again. And again, and again. Each time, the results are different.

"W-what the..." you stutter, as the computer screen begins to glow brightly. You shield your eyes, and when you uncover them, you're standing in the tower that rose out of the graveyard. A girl with long black hair stands in front of you. She looks a few years older than you, and wears black pants, a grey tunic, and a sword belt.

It takes you a moment to adjust, but fine. Fine. You'll cope.

"I remember you," she says, frowning. "You're that boy from class. What are you doing here?"

You look down at yourself. Nope, definitely still a girl, and you're a few years too young to be in her class. Her eyes are fixed on a spot a little above your head, and it's disconcerting. Worse, you think you have in fact seen her before.

"I remember you, too," you say, trying to change the subject. "I've seen you somewhere before..."

"We had class together," she says, matter-of-factly. "A year ago. But that was a lifetime ago. So much has happened since then."

Yeah, you bet.

"Let me guess," you say. "Scary adventures? People or monsters out for your life?"


"Something like that. Except you'd be surprised how often the scary monsters have hearts of gold. And the people you think are your friends... I miss home."

The alarm bells are ringing loud and clear. What's happened to her is the same thing that's happened to Mai. The exact same thing. Except... isn't this girl dead? You're sure you heard precisely that, back before this whole thing started. If the same thing is happening to your best friend, then--

Suddenly your heart is in your throat.

"Has anyone been visiting you in your dreams?" you ask, trying to sound calm and collected.

"Wha?" she asks, raising an eyebrow. "What are you talking about?"

"I-- nevermind." You take a deep breath. "Sorry to bother you."

She gives you a funny look but doesn't stop you as you slip by her and out the door.

You hurry down the stairs, nearly slipping on a landing but catching yourself at the last moment. As you're nearly to the bottom of the tower you take one more look back up. She's still there, watching you. You shake your head and hurry down the last few steps. You know you'll have to help her later, but for now you absolutely have to get to Mai.

Your heartbeat only starts to return to normal once you're outside and away from the tower. You have real no idea what's going on. She can't actually be dead if she's standing there talking to you. Right?

It's a short walk to Mai's house, but it feels much longer than it really is. You open the squeaky gate and start up the dirt path to her house. You ring the doorbell and hear the chime inside, though no one comes to the door. After waiting a few minutes you try again with the same result. You've never known her mom to[1] the doorbell when it rings, and Mai was supposed to be done with school hours ago-- is the thought that tries to force its way into your head, until you remind yourself that this is a dream.[2]

You take a step back from the doorway and look around. The yard has only enough room for the house and the path, with no bushes or anything to hide in. There's a window close to the door, but it's too high to see through. You try the doorknob and nearly fall over backwards when you open the door.

Before you can even take a step inside, you're blinded by a flash of white light. Then you're falling, and falling, and falling...

You land on something soft. It feels like grass, but much softer than it should be. You open your eyes and close them immediately at the intense light.

"Mai?" You shout. Your voice sounds different, higher than usual.[3]

"Please, you mustn't do that!" Mai's voice shouts back. You feel someone grab your hand and help you up. "The blinding light of the sun through the windows will ruin my furniture."

The what will what, now? Oh boy. She's really not thinking right. You open your eyes to find yourself in a very fancy room with big glass windows. The walls and floors are a light wood, and the furniture looks like it came from another era. Mai helps you up off the floor and smiles as you look around.

"You're not wearing the right clothes," she says. It's not a question. "Let me get you a change." She walks past you into a hallway to the right of the room, leaving you all alone in the room full of windows and sunlight.

You take a look around while you wait. There's a large bookcase against one wall of the room, filled with novels and non-fiction books of all kinds. A white piano sits in the corner next to a glass cabinet full of figurines and other knick-knacks.

You're in a dream; you're sure of that now, but you're equally sure you're not dreaming alone. As much as your mind keeps wandering, you've managed to fix those thoughts in your head.

Now, with Mai right here, what do you want to ask her?

= = =

Quite a ride. I don't think it would take very much cleanup to turn this into a proper story, actually. I'm not going to, so if anyone else would like to try it, be my guest.

0: And Unix uses base 0 footnote indexing. I note it does a pretty decent job simulating the terminal interface...

1: "to ignore", obviously. The AI typoed here, which it amusingly does in a very human way. It doesn't happen often, mainly because I correct it if it does, which means it thinks it's trying to simulate an author who doesn't typo... but it's no disaster letting one slip past either, as you can see.

2: It's pretty good at remembering this, and would have twisted the story back in that direction regardless, but this was me erasing a bit of pointless filler. The AI definitely needs an editor.

3: I have no idea what it's doing. I bet we'll find out.
 
Live look at my state of mind after reading that: :???:

It looks like we transformed into someone else again (Rose?) upon entering Mai's house but as for pretty much everything else, I've got nothing.

[X] [Do] Ask Mai if either "Ulivik", "Rose", or "Dampening Field" mean anything to her.
[X] [Do] Ask Mai if she needs help with anything.
 
[X] [Do] Ask Mai if either "Ulivik", "Rose", or "Dampening Field" mean anything to her.
[X] [Do] Ask Mai if she needs help with anything.

The story continues to go in weird directions. Very much a dreamlike series of events, though!
 
It looks like we transformed into someone else again (Rose?) upon entering Mai's house but as for pretty much everything else, I've got nothing.
Rose is our older sister, so it's not that.

Okay, I'll admit I peeked at the state of its memory. I sorta have to; it's been getting better, and it's up to about 90-95% sanity, but that still means 5-10% of the cells need editing after a session. Surprisingly, it knows what's happening, which is more than I can say for myself while I was reading this. The answers to the questions you're suggesting have already been decided.

GPT-3 is still GPT-3, and far from perfect, but I really wouldn't have guessed it was possible to push it this far. ...I can no longer make any guesses as to what the limits on GPT-4 might be.
 
Rose is our older sister, so it's not that.
You are... probably right. I took the "your voice sounds different, higher than usual" to suggest another transformation given that we've already spoken a bit after the first transformation and it was suggesting we'd changed again but there's no hard evidence to suggest that. Could just be some environmental effect or just some weird dream world thing given the weirdness going on at that moment.
 
[X] [Do] Ask Mai if either "Ulivik", "Rose", or "Dampening Field" mean anything to her.
[X] [Do] Ask Mai if she needs help with anything.
 
Well, I'm glad the AI has ... some sort of plan?

Hmm hmm hmm

[X] [Do] Ask Mai what she knows about the girl with the long black hair.
[X] [Do] Ask Mai why she's dreaming.
 
[X] [Do] Ponder what it means to be in a dream within a dream.
[X] [Do] Ask Mai why she's dreaming.
 
[X] [Do] Ask Mai if either "Ulivik", "Rose", or "Dampening Field" mean anything to her.
[X] [Do] Ask Mai if she needs help with anything.

Weird ass ai! I love it! Very fun to read!
 
Koyomi: Opening
No regular update today, because as luck would have it, they released another new update and I had to play with it. You'll get the start of that adventure instead, which I might continue if there's any interest. I spent about the same amount of effort on this as the usual updates...

I find it interesting how the style just quickly shifts at the start, swapping from the high-fantasy thing the AI was shooting for to something closer to my own.

It's too much effort bolding all my input here, so I'll just bold the initial prompt the AI gave me. Bit of an inverse of the usual.


= = =

Kedar is a world of dragons, demons, and monsters. These dark creatures constantly war for control of the land, leaving the few human kingdoms in the shadow of a dark and powerful force. But now, the kingdoms of man are fighting back, slowly assembling an army to reclaim their world.

You are Koyomi, a human mage in Cadast, a village in the kingdom of Kense. You live with your parents and your brother. You love your family very much. You've recently been told you've been accepted as an apprentice mage to a neighboring village. You leave the village to head out to your new home.

But suddenly, an army of demons appears out of nowhere and attacks the village. The town guard fends off the attack, but you need to escape.
The armies of Kedar have been growing restless, will you help the humans defeat the demon hordes, or will you focus on your own survival?


Neither, you decide. You need to rescue your family. You run towards your house, grabbing your bow and quiver on the way. When you arrive, you see a demon killing your father. You kill the demon with three arrows to his back. Your mother and brother are OK, but this situation is grim.

You quickly make sure your father is still alive, and give him what first aid you're able. The demons have attacked with such speed and ferocity that you aren't sure if the town guard can hold them off.

This isn't fair. You just recently had your thirteenth birthday, your friends wished you luck in your studies, and then this. Is this what becoming a mage really means?

No, you're going to be strong, and survive this. You just need to get out of here.

Your mother quickly checks you for wounds. Her eyes widen, as if she's noticed something serious. "Koyomi, your side...it's wounded. Please, stay here with us."

She's right. A gash has been torn in your side, and blood is seeping out of it. When did that happen? You didn't even notice.

"I'm not leaving you, mom!" Your voice is plaintive, and a little pitiful. "But we have to get out of here. There are demons everywhere!"

Your mother doesn't argue with you further. Getting up, she grabs your brother's hand. "Come on," she says. "We need to get out of here."

But, how? You look around desperately. With your father wounded, you're not sure how you can go anywhere at all. Your brother is no help; he's only six.

"Mom?" You say. "I don't know how we can get out of here. The only path out is blocked with demons, and dad's hurt!"

Your mother goes pale, and kneels besides your father. She whispers softly to him for a few moments. Then, she stands up.

"Koyomi," your mother says.

You shake your head desperately. You know what she's about to say, and you're having none of it.

"No, mom. Please."

She lifts her hand and touches your cheek. "I'm sorry."


You burst into tears, hugging her waist. You know she's right, but leaving your father behind? You can't do it.

You feel her hand on your head. "It'll be OK," she says softly. She kneels, and hugs you tightly. "I love you, Koyomi. I know you can do this."

You shake your head. "No! I can.. I can..." You bite your lip until it bleeds, tasting copper. "I can cast a teleportation spell."

"You can?" Hope lights in her eyes.

"Yes! But.. but, I've never done it before. I don't know if it'll work." You bite your lip again as tears cloud your eyes. "I'm scared, mom."
She holds you closer.

You don't tell her what else you've learned from reading the spellbook. That if you get it wrong, you'll die. If you don't, then Dad will die. You're scared, and you have every right to be.

The world is crumbling down around you. Demons roam the lands freely, slaughtering and destroying everything in their wake. The future of the world...it's not looking bright.

But there are glimmers of hope. Clever people. Brave people, like you, though you'd never call yourself that. Wise kings and queens that lead their people to victory. The future is always in motion, and it's up to you to decide where you fit into this world.

Who knows what the future holds? Perhaps you will live in glorious prosperity, or perhaps the world will descend into chaos.

"Stand close to me," you say. "Mom, make sure Dad doesn't move too much. Alex..." You eye your little brother, whom you love with all your heart. It's a desperate, tearing love right now. "Stay still."

Your eyes dart from the doorway to the sputtering, failing barrier and back. You see a fleeting shadow in the corner of your vision, and your heart leaps into your throat.

"Linda!" You shout. "Linda, run! Over here!"

You hear a word of command, and suddenly the air is split by a shattering scream. Linda screams shrilly in pain, and then she's silent. You see her crumple to the ground.

You cover your ears in a futile effort to block out the noise, and release a quiet, heartbroken sob of protest.

Your father lets out a quiet moan of agony and terror.

"Dad!"

You turn to face him, and your blood runs cold.

A demonic figure towers above him. Its skin is pebbled with coarse, dark scales that glint menacingly in the light. It has two sharp, curved horns that project upwards from his forehead, just below where the bone of the skull begins to jut out. Its eyes are filled with an inhuman bloodlust, and his teeth are all fangs, projecting outwards over its bottom lip.

You clench your eyes shut, knowing that if you can't cast the spell right now you'll all die.

But the words of your spell get caught in your throat.

Your father, who is still unarmed and wounded, reaches for the dagger that lies by your feet, and picks it up. He charges the demon, stabbing repeatedly at its thighs, buttocks, calves. It makes no difference. The demon backhands him across the room, sending him sprawling. It towers above your father, preparing to bring its blade down.

"Here!" You scream. "I'm here!"

The demon pauses for a moment, seemingly distracted by your cry. In that moment, your father rolls out of the way. The demon charges at you, sword raised overhead to kill. You stand frozen in terror. Suddenly, the blade comes swinging down. You hear your mother's screams, and then everything goes black.

You wake up several moments later, lying outside the hut. You're alive, but you're badly wounded. Your mother is crying over you, tears streaming down her face. Your father stands a short distance away, looking nervously at the sky.

"Mom?" You cough wetly. "It hurts."

"Hush, my dear." She whispers, gently holding a hand over your mouth.

"We have to go." Your father says, unsheathing his sword and looking nervously at the sky. "Now."

You mother nods, scooping you up into her arms and holding you closely to her bosom. She quickly makes her way to the house next door, where your elderly neighbor lies dead. Your father hastily requisitions his horse, a strong and sturdy steed that will hopefully allow you all to get away. You can already feel the ground shaking as the demons begin to chase you across the countryside.

"Come on!" Your father yells, pulling yourself onto the horse.

You're lying in the wagon next to your mother, who's gently stroking your face and whispering calming words. You try to tell her you're okay, but you feel so weak. It's cold, and you're thirsty. All you know is that you've been wounded, and you need something. Water, or rest... you're not sure. Either way, you don't feel like you can go on, but your mother will make that decision for you.

"Koyomi." She whispers. "Can you hear me?

Your lips move, but you can't answer. You try to sit up, but a wave of nausea and dizziness overcomes you. She composes herself, and then she leans down to kiss your brow gently.

"Just lie still." She says soothingly. "You've been wounded. We need to get you to safety, and then we'll patch you up. Everything will be alright."

You look into her eyes, trying to reassure yourself that everything will be fine. The fear and concern in her eyes belays her words, but she's trying to stay strong. You find comfort in her presence, and close your eyes. You drift off to sleep, and hope that when you wake up, this will all just be a nightmare.

In the morning, you awake to find yourself lying on an operating table in a camp of soldiers. Your mother, father and brother are there with you, and when your eyes open, they all sigh in relief. You try to get up, but a sharp pain stabs through your chest.

"Lie still." A new voice says.

A woman wearing leather armor and a red cloak steps forward. You've seen her before; she came to your house a few days ago. She tells you she's a mage from the capital, here to stop the demon attacks.

"Am I going to be alright?" You ask weakly.

"Yes." The mage says.

"The wounds will heal given time, but you'll need to rest for a few days before you're up and around. A demon clawed you pretty badly. You were lucky it was an infant; its claw lacks the sharpness of an adult's.

An infant? That huge thing, that nearly killed you and dad, was an infant?

"It's a wonder you survived." The mage shakes her head. "I've seen demons take on fully-armored knights and kill them in a single blow. Here you are, half dead, and you'll be up and about in a few days."

A few days rest sound wonderful.

Your body wants nothing but sleep, and you feel blackness creeping in from the edges of your vision. Before you lose consciousness entirely, you look at mom and mouth a single word. "Linda?"

You're too tired to speak, but you have to know. Your best friend, you saw her struck down by a demon. That was a dream, right? This is the reality. Your father saved you from a demon, right? He'd have saved Linda too.

Your head hits the pillow, but before you lose consciousness you look pleadingly at her, begging her to answer.

"I'm sorry," Your mother says, and holds your hand. "She didn't make it."

You squeeze your eyes shut, tears leaking down your face. Your best friend is dead. Linda, the girl you grew up with, is dead. You cry until, utterly exhausted, your body gives out and you fall deeply asleep.
 
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Surprisingly gripping, although I can see a few bits where people explaining stuff rather than 'X told you Y' would work better.
 
[X] [Do] Ask Mai if either "Ulivik", "Rose", or "Dampening Field" mean anything to her.
[X] [Do] Ask Mai if she needs help with anything.
 
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