I like the idea of potentially adding on what we'd say to each response, but there's no need to be rude over not liking the vote's current form.

Sorry, I've been in perpetually bad mood today.

It kind of feels like you guys are barely trying here, though. This stuff important and isn't joke. If you're going to do this, then at least properly think about what you're going to say and the potential fallout.
 
IC, I just don't see Tamiko willing to talk about this stuff. To Kishi maybe if it happened around her. Ami... not really. Their friendship still feels too disconnected.
 
It kind of feels like you guys are barely trying here, though. This stuff important and isn't joke. If you're going to do this, then at least properly think about what you're going to say and the potential fallout.
Lying would backfire on us later when she finds out about magic, either by us telling her, or by her stumbling upon it. She's caught the scent, so to speak, of something wrong. She'll do some digging, so her coming to what she feels is a conclusion is frankly inevitable.
If we tell her, 'yes, this is impossible-sounding, but someone made everyone forget me by magic', I don't think it'll be as bad as you think. Sure, Ami won't take it at face-value, but she already has a foot in the door. There will have to be a personal meetup to show and discuss the magical girl shenanigans...
IC, I just don't see Tamiko willing to talk about this stuff. To Kishi maybe if it happened around her. Ami... not really. Their friendship still feels too disconnected.
Impeccable timing, Best ATM Thief! That is the perfect way to set up the transition I was just thinking about! We simply say we're not comfortable talking about it over the phone, and arrange for Kishi to tag along as emotional support.
That Ami gets to tease Tamimoe about having a cute nerd for a GF has nothing to do with my enthusiasm.
 
[q] I'm sorry Ami, I'm not so comfortable with talking about it right now. Maybe when I visit?
[q] Make good of your promise and suggest a visit to hers for this week.
-[q] Later, try to arrange for Kishi to come along for said visit. You could use the support of a friend.
 
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If you all want to do this, then at least have the decency to explain properly instead of going with that idiotic, pretentious line.
I don't think it is either idiotic or pretentious..except by a very weird reading. Its very slightly sarcastic..but it fits with Tamimoe's conversation style. We aren't a textbook.
 
Sorry, I've been in perpetually bad mood today.

It kind of feels like you guys are barely trying here, though. This stuff important and isn't joke. If you're going to do this, then at least properly think about what you're going to say and the potential fallout.
I am, and I actually think this line is pretty dang good, partly because frankly its true.

[X] Do you want a believable lie, or the unbelievable truth?
 
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-[x] Later, try to arrange for Kishi to come along for said visit. You could use the support of a friend.

IMO, this is the type of thing that Tami should handle on her own. Give her the opportunity to actually re-connect with an old friend instead of turning it into a social gathering. We don't need to drag Kishi everywhere.

[X] I'm sorry Ami, I'm not so comfortable with talking about it right now. Maybe when I visit?
[X] Make good of your promise and suggest a visit to hers for this week.

We're going on the trip Saturday, right? So, maybe Sunday?

I don't think it is either idiotic or pretentious..except by a very weird reading. Its very slightly sarcastic..but it fits with Tamimoe's conversation style. We aren't a textbook.

Still sounds really dumb. Who the heck talks like that?
 
x3

[X] Do you want a believable lie, or the unbelievable truth?
 
[X] I'm sorry Ami, I'm not so comfortable with talking about it right now. Maybe when I visit?
[X] Make good of your promise and suggest a visit to hers for this week.

Dammit Ube, what hast thou wrought?
 
Actually I'm fine with that line, in a way it leads into the answers to Ami's question plus its sarcastic I think.

I really hope Tami stop dragging Kishi everywhere or for everything, there's a need for independence besides other girls are good for support and some things best stay private.
 
[X] I'm sorry Ami, I'm not so comfortable with talking about it right now. Maybe when I visit?
[X] Make good of your promise and suggest a visit to hers for this week.

God Dammit Guys... :facepalm: :V
 
[X] I'm sorry Ami, I'm not so comfortable with talking about it right now. Maybe when I visit?
[X] Make good of your promise and suggest a visit to hers for this week.
 
[X] I'm sorry Ami, I'm not so comfortable with talking about it right now. Maybe when I visit?
[X] Make good of your promise and suggest a visit to hers for this week.
 
[X] I'm sorry Ami, I'm not so comfortable with talking about it right now. Maybe when I visit?
[X] Make good of your promise and suggest a visit to hers for this week.
 
[X] I'm sorry Ami, I'm not so comfortable with talking about it right now. Maybe when I visit?
[X] Make good of your promise and suggest a visit to hers for this week.
 
Okay, sorry about being very late with the update. Had a very early exam this morning, so I couldn't find the spot to write it the last evening between last-minute studying and sleeping :oops:. I will start writing soonish after I've finished the rest of the stuff for today. But since this vote seems rather polarizing opinion-wise, I will give you an hour or so for a last chance vote if someone wants it.

Votes are NOT closed just yet. Here's the current tally, though, and you can probably see what I mean.
Vote Tally : Puella Magi - Memento Mori (PMMM-Quest) | Page 393 | Sufficient Velocity
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[X] Do you want a believable lie, or the unbelievable truth?
No. of Votes: 9
UbeOne
Always Late
Balduran
Jiven
Jrin
LostDeviljho
Nolrai
physxman
Unitveras

[X] I'm sorry Ami, I'm not so comfortable with talking about it right now. Maybe when I visit?
[X] Make good of your promise and suggest a visit to hers for this week.
No. of Votes: 8
Agent Whiskers
Impstar
mistfist
MrLZRS
Muramasa
RexHeller
The3rdCorinthian
veekie

Total No. of Voters: 17
Incidentally, if you have some particular witch you'd like to see in a sidestory, please say so.
 
Chapter 2 - Take a break 24
[X] Do you want a believable lie, or the unbelievable truth?

Your breathing halts and you fall completely silent when Ami brings up the way the others didn't remember you. Though she doesn't voice it, you also suspect this reminded Ami about her own experiences, and how she is likely not entirely down with the way it affected her too. You know you would be bothered if you forgot about your friends, for one thing.

But unlike the last time you talked with your old friend, you now know just how this came to be… You can't really brush it off without a second thought anymore.

So should you tell her then? You have yet to share this with anyone else, and you'd prefer to think that it wasn't a thing more often than not. You made a wish to fight against this, you are alright now. Kishi, Evelyn, Ariane… even Mariko… Your new friends don't need to be bothered yet by something that didn't touch them in the first place.

"Um, Tamiko? Are you there? Did I say something?"

But it's different with Ami. It's different for Yuujin and Matsuko too. They were your friends before this whole 'curse' appeared. They didn't abandon you, they didn't have a choice in the matter… And in a way, they were simply victims like you too. The picture in your drawer tells you as much.
Where was that sense of leniency...
However, you don't really know what to say or even how to explain it. There's still a lot you don't know yourself, and you would also have to reveal magic to Ami in order to have all of this make any sense. And that would inevitably lead to the horrifying circumstances where you met her again.
... on those nights, when you cried yourself to sleep?
"...Tamiko?"

You release the breath you were unconsciously holding and let out a long, weary sigh.

"Sorry Ami, it's just that… Well…" you say at a low voice barely above a whisper. You don't know if this is the right thing to do, but you can't think of anything better to say here, "Do you want a believable lie... or the unbelievable truth?"

"...What do you mean, Tamiko? I there something going on?"
Ami asks you hastily, sounding confused and a bit alarmed at your words, "I… Of course I want you to be honest!"

Well, no going back now...

What do you do?

[] I will tell you face to face. It's not something that can be explained through phone...
-[] Lunch break?
-[] After school

[] Launch an explanation. She deserves to know. (write-in).

[] Close the call.
-[] Talk with uncle.

[] Write-in.

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I didn't want to assume too much with the winning vote, hence the short update. But you are practically bound to tell Ami at this point, so pick the place and time.
 
[x] I will tell you face to face. It's not something that can be explained through phone...
-[x] After school
 
[x] I will tell you face to face. It's not something that can be explained through phone...
-[x] After school
 
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