I'm pretty amused at how spooked Yui was in the chapter where she met Kyoufu, promising not to go after her until emotional shielding was ready- then immediately in the next chapter, she's running after Kyoufu, sans emotional shielding.
Yeah, that was kinda jarring. Partly that was me trying to nudge things toward meeting the newbies because of this:
I'm kinda sad we didn't get to see them, as I spent my 'commission' on designing a magical girl of my own. Maybe tomorrow.
...but mostly it was just me anticipating where I
thought the next update would go and underestimating the threads ability to take a joke-y comment and turn it into an actual bandwagon:
I suppose you could always try and follow Kyoufu and shout questions from a distance about what destroying the monsters does, since if anyone would know she would, but... uh, yeah. Probably not a good plan.
When has that ever stopped me from doing what's hilarious?
Which you were, in fact, the first person to bandwagon onto. As it happens.
At any rate, there are a few update transitions that I would definitely smooth out if I were editing this into a single narrative, and that one's near the top of the list. Even when Yui's being flighty, she tends to go from one thing to the next a bit less bizarrely than that.
What would Maiko think of the theory that the victims who got better were the ones who had their unfamiliars destroyed?
She's like 90+% sure that's what happened. The only reason she's not pushing for wiping the unfamiliars out immediately is that she's not 100% sure there isn't an additional factor involved (time, proximity, &c.) and that doing so would clearly sabotage any friendly-ish interactions with at least Kyoufu and possibly Muhou as well.
Okay, excellent. Does the wide variety in hair-and-eye color in the PMMM-verse make identification of people easier? ...Are people who dye their hair in colors other than of their eyes considered weird?
Maybe a bit easier? Goofy anime hair colors are not exclusive to plot-relevant people, so it's not that big of a factor.
Also, I'm not doing the "hair and eyes match exactly" thing for
everyone. Most characters have nearly the same colors for both, yes, but not all, and a lot only have very similar colors. Yui's brother's hair is a sorta dusty lavender while his eyes are more of a purpleish-red, like Yui's but a few shades darker. Koharu's hair is a fairly light blonde but her eyes are purple. I think there's a few others, too?
(EDIT: Oh, and thanks for the corrections--I'll fix them after I'm done with the in-progress update.)