Jean Jacques gets doe eyed by cattleya into spilling the beans and your mom finds out,but she's not mad. No she's hurt and disappointed and crying cause she thinks you hate her and that's the only reason you'd try to avoid her. That she messed something up and now you hate her forever.
 
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Everything was going better than I expected.
Ia, Ia, Murphy Fhtagn!

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Jean Jacques gets doe eyed by cattlemen into spilling beans and your mom finds out but she's not mad. No shes hurt and disappointed and crying cause she thinks you hate her and that's the only reason you'd try to avoid her. That she ms lesser something up and now you hate her forever.
One of these days, someone is going to pick up the English language and hit you with it so hard that you'll be able to actually speak it. Please, for the sake of literally everyone's understanding, look at what you type before you post. What you have written makes no sense.
 
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One of these days, someone is going to pick up the English language and hit you with it so hard that you'll be able to actually speak it. Please, for the sake of literally everyone's understanding, look at what you type before you post. What you have written makes no sense.
You're exaggerating to an insultingly aggravating degree.
 
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One of these days, someone is going to pick up the English language and hit you with it so hard that you'll be able to actually speak it. Please, for the sake of literally everyone's understanding, look at what you type before you post. What you have written makes no sense.

... I understood it? Larekko could do with more punctuation though, that's a fact.

EDIT: But those breathless sentences do make it funnier.
 
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Oh boy, if Wardes still turns traitor, the impact of that betrayal will sting immeasurably harder than in canon. Not that it's a high bar to clear, but I wouldn't be surprised that Henry regards such an event, as a severe failure. And the scary thing is, if Wardes still stumbles upon his mother's research, he might still turn traitor, even were he married to Cattleya.

"You were my brother, Jean!"
 
You're exaggerating to an insultingly aggravating degree.
Yes, he is exaggerating, but not by much. Were you intoxicated or sleep deprived when you typed this? Otherwise, you don't have an excuse for such bad grammar.

I'm sorry if I come off as rude, but a certain level of of readability is usually expected on this site.
 
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Huh, I am actually surprised that no one found out the true reason about why Henry doesn't want help from his mother. Time.

Henry is literally running out of time, canon will be starting in 3 years and the opponents he will be facing will be at the very least Triangle class mages. He is not ready at all and considering that neither he nor the ZnT universe are shonen, no sudden powerups or nakama speeches will help a bit.

So, he decided on a plan: With the excuse that he is "scared of his mother's hellish training" he keeps his friends's mouths shut about his affinity, without revealing his future knowledge. Next he enlists Wardes's help so he can at the very least reach Line before his naming ceremony and maybe keep training together till the end of his school days.

He could ask his mother for training but there are many reasons he can't: 1) Karin won't expect anything less of her heir and only wind affinity child and will only stop when Henry reaches Square class, which as I said before, is time Henry simply doesn't have. 2) Henry is incapable of asking for her help considering that by the time he graduates school, canon will be starting really soon and he will be too busy making plans and building alliances. 3) Canon requires Henry to be in constant danger if he wants to succeed in stopping his enemies, something that neither of his parents will approve considering he is the Valliere heir and only living son, which makes him prime kidnapping material from any nobles that want to take advantage of the Valliere fortune.

TLDR: Karin's training will take time Henry could be spending more productively.
 
All of that falls apart with this line:
Henry is literally running out of time, canon will be starting in 3 years and the opponents he will be facing will be at the very least Triangle class mages.
Henry still has 8 years to go before canon. For reference, here's the update when Henry started his stint at the academy:
Louise was a vivacious seven years old girl by the time I was ready to take my carriage, filled to the brim with stuff, to the Tristain Magic academy.
So he still has 4-5 years after he graduates to grind like hell and reach Square before everything goes to shit. It's a generous amount of time to get through the Heavy Wind Training Program From HellTM​, unless he does something monumentally stupid and accelerates the timeline.
 
Huh, I am actually surprised that no one found out the true reason about why Henry doesn't want help from his mother. Time.

Henry is literally running out of time, canon will be starting in 3 years and the opponents he will be facing will be at the very least Triangle class mages. He is not ready at all and considering that neither he nor the ZnT universe are shonen, no sudden powerups or nakama speeches will help a bit.

So, he decided on a plan: With the excuse that he is "scared of his mother's hellish training" he keeps his friends's mouths shut about his affinity, without revealing his future knowledge. Next he enlists Wardes's help so he can at the very least reach Line before his naming ceremony and maybe keep training together till the end of his school days.

He could ask his mother for training but there are many reasons he can't: 1) Karin won't expect anything less of her heir and only wind affinity child and will only stop when Henry reaches Square class, which as I said before, is time Henry simply doesn't have. 2) Henry is incapable of asking for her help considering that by the time he graduates school, canon will be starting really soon and he will be too busy making plans and building alliances. 3) Canon requires Henry to be in constant danger if he wants to succeed in stopping his enemies, something that neither of his parents will approve considering he is the Valliere heir and only living son, which makes him prime kidnapping material from any nobles that want to take advantage of the Valliere fortune.

TLDR: Karin's training will take time Henry could be spending more productively.
That would mean that Henry knows better training methods than Karin, which is a very weird idea.
 
Huh, I am actually surprised that no one found out the true reason about why Henry doesn't want help from his mother. Time.

Henry is literally running out of time, canon will be starting in 3 years and the opponents he will be facing will be at the very least Triangle class mages. He is not ready at all and considering that neither he nor the ZnT universe are shonen, no sudden powerups or nakama speeches will help a bit.

So, he decided on a plan: With the excuse that he is "scared of his mother's hellish training" he keeps his friends's mouths shut about his affinity, without revealing his future knowledge. Next he enlists Wardes's help so he can at the very least reach Line before his naming ceremony and maybe keep training together till the end of his school days.

He could ask his mother for training but there are many reasons he can't: 1) Karin won't expect anything less of her heir and only wind affinity child and will only stop when Henry reaches Square class, which as I said before, is time Henry simply doesn't have. 2) Henry is incapable of asking for her help considering that by the time he graduates school, canon will be starting really soon and he will be too busy making plans and building alliances. 3) Canon requires Henry to be in constant danger if he wants to succeed in stopping his enemies, something that neither of his parents will approve considering he is the Valliere heir and only living son, which makes him prime kidnapping material from any nobles that want to take advantage of the Valliere fortune.

TLDR: Karin's training will take time Henry could be spending more productively.
If Henry really does feel pressed for time I would not be surprised if he is the one that asks his mother to start the Hell Training once he gets back from school. After all, if you really want to become a bad-ass, train under those that have achieved bad-ass status.
 
If Henry really does feel pressed for time I would not be surprised if he is the one that asks his mother to start the Hell Training once he gets back from school. After all, if you really want to become a bad-ass, train under those that have achieved bad-ass status.
Yeah, Henry's gotta turn to Karin in time.

He's now working hard and pushing himself instead of floating through the classes. Once he returns home for vacation, he'll face up to his mum with a morose expression and mutter that he's got the Wind.

(Kyaaa! Widdle grumpy Henrykins has mommy's affinity!)

"I will not tolerate anything but perfection from you, Henry. The consequences will be severe if you do not give your utmost to your training..."
 
Chapter Twenty-Seven
Chapter Twenty-Seven

There was only the wind blowing in my ears. The tendrils of air, the sweet murmurs of nothingness, the air that people breathed, it cooed, and it lashed. It was the gentle breeze, and the whip that froze off limbs. It was the wind that called with its capricious nature, and it ruptured in hundreds of tiny seams. My wand stood in my hand even as blood poured copiously down from my split brow, my ears ringing with the hit of an air hammer so strong it made my teeth tremble, and knocked me back far harder than before.

I could see half a dozen of Wardes looming over me, his expression worried even as he had a flask of some foul potion in his hand and was already forcing it down my throat. I gagged and tried to spit it out, but Jean-Jacques held my head backwards so I had no choice but to drink or choke, and by the time I was done trying my hardest not to choke, there was a wet handkerchief wiping away at my face.

"Can...me?" Jean-Jacques said. "Hear me? Henry-can you hear me?" little pops announced that my eardrums weren't busted, only sore beyond belief.

"Jean...stop spinning," I gurgled out. "What hit me...a dragon?" I mumbled. "Did you get it?" I was slowly pulled up, Jean-Jacques holding me as he brought one of my hands over his shoulders.

"We can stop for today," Jean-Jacques said. "I might have hit you too hard."

"Nonsense," I blurted out. "I had the counter-"

"You didn't finish in time," Jean-Jacques said quite gently. "I thought you would, which is why I went along, but you misspelled the last word out of hurry, and so-"

I chuckled, "To think that far ahead while fighting-you're truly blessed with talents, Jean-Jacques," I grinned lopsidedly, "Keep it up. One day I'm sure you'll become...the captain of the royal guards, yeah-"

Jean-Jacques laughed, even as he helped me back up on my horse and took its reins, starting a light trot back to the academy. The day of the runic naming was upon us, and even though the sparring had intensified, I wasn't still any closer to becoming a Line mage than before. Perhaps it was because Wardes was pulling his punches, but even with this, I didn't have a better grasp of Wind's nature. If anything, I had come to enjoy the taste of the dirt, but at least it was good enough practice against a fellow mage -and it paid off, if nothing else because I managed to avoid one air hammer by the blink of an eye that one time, weeks before.

"About your signature spell," Jean-Jacques said, "have you already tested it out?"

"I have," I said with a nod. "There is a really unfortunate tree in the forest that is cursing my name, but I am sure it will work out fine. Though it is a long chant."

"You have all the time in the world," Jean-Jacques said, "Just as long as you properly follow through the instructions the teachers give you. You will be doing simple enough spells-if you had no troubles with them, then you'll do fine. Usually, they simply make you do a spell per element, and finish it off with your signature spell-" he turned thoughtful, "It's mostly the pressure that gets to you. Royalty will be present, so..."

I blinked, "What? Royalty will be present?"

"It's customary," Jean-Jacques said. "Like with the familiar show in second year, or the graduation ceremony in the third year," he added with a smile, to which I replied with a thoughtful humming.

"So...who decides the name? The king? The queen?"

"If you are lucky, your professors," Jean-Jacques said, "I have nothing but the utmost respect for their majesties, but while a professor's idea could be changed, a royal's one...could not." Jean-Jacques shook his head with a smile, and I chuckled in turn even as we returned to the academy.

The day of the Runic naming happened far too fast for my tastes. Of course, my chants were flawless in the Fire, Earth, Water and Wind department, even if Henriette boasted off a strong fire spell and Anthoine did something pretty much similar to it. André's water spell was the stuff of legends, which compared to my practical parts, I did the best in the Wind sector -as was expected of the son of the Heavy Wind was pretty much the only praise I heard carried by the wind.

In the end, the whole royal family had come. Queen Marianne looked quite sternly on, even if she did crack a light smile at the sight of her daughter standing as royal as possible in between her and her husband.

Still, in front of the King and the Queen, with the Princess watching, I had the honor of going first for what concerned my signature spell.

I had faced the oral exams of Calculus One and Two.

This was nothing.

"Rip," I whispered, "Skewer," I chanted. "Tear, and maim." I raised my swordwand, the rustling breezes coming to my call, "Austri and Vestri, Nordri and Sudri," twirling air gathered at the tip "Grip my foe with your gale, and split him apart with your gusts-" there were audible popping sounds in the air in front of me, "by the Founder's will, the heavens as judge, the sky as my witness, I summon you forth. Answer my call, and rebuke my enemy!" the popping sound suddenly clapped like that of thunder, the spiraling sphere of wind rushing forth from the tip of my swordwand hit the armored mannequin head on the chest, forming a small dent on its breastplate, ripping the metal apart.

There was silence for a brief instant, and then the grinding noise of iron shattering echoed as the mannequin twitched on itself, its limbs deforming and cracking asunder as if thrown into a whirlwind while it was being held at different angles, like a doll in the hands of a cruel child who wanted to see how much one had to twist before it broke apart at its seams.

The helmet flew off, the sawdust and straw exploded in all directions, and the armor was pretty much unusable from that point on.

I placed my wand back in my holster, and then bowed to the royalty present.

There was a polite and single clap from the king, and a slightly greater number of claps from Marianne and Henrietta. I took my place back among my peers while Anthoine went next, summoning a Valkyrie with four arms, and two bows, which precisely skewered his mannequin of choice. Again, there was quite the polite clapping.

Henriette's turn had the young woman do something simple, and yet surprisingly effective. She lifted her wand, made her chant, and then a geyser of flames burned to a crisp everything in the general proximity of where she had pointed her wand. Swift, brutal and effective -what was there not to love about this spell?

André brought out of the air a large, highly pressurized wave of water which hit the mannequin straight in the head and ripped it off, before coiling and coming back for another pass that smashed it on the ground.

By the time the showing of the signature spell of the whole class was done with, it was time for the naming ceremony to happen. The professors had been mumbling among themselves for quite a while before nearing the king with a parchment, presenting it to him. He nodded, before the Queen herself decided to have a look and furrow her brows. I did not like that. I really did not like that at all.

"Henry Philippe de la Blois de la Valliere, come forth," the king spoke, and his voice felt old to my ears. He wouldn't live for much longer, would he? Perhaps with his death, and the Queen's mourning, this event wouldn't go this way for Louise -otherwise, Marianne wouldn't allow her friend's daughter to be called The Zero, of that I was pretty much sure.

I walked forward and knelt, my eyes low. "From henceforth," the king spoke as he lifted his scepter to gently touch my right shoulder, "in the name of the Founder and his divine blessing, by the will of the Gods that watch over us, in my name as Henry the Fifth de Tristain, I name thee The Vicious Wind."

"I swear solemnly," I spoke in a firm voice, my fingers tightening around my knee as my eyes remained down, "with my name as proof of my oath to uphold the ideals of the Founder, the Gods, and the Kingdom of Tristain. I swear to be its shield and its sword, until my last breath brings me in front of the judgment of the Gods. Let my name be feared by my enemies, and let it be cherished by my allies."

It was rite. Was this something Louise would ever need to do? Would she have to bite back her tears as she said the same stuff, with The Zero as the nickname?

"Then rise, Lord Valliere," the king spoke, and I swiftly stood back up, bowed as deeply as I could, and then proceeded to walk back into the line with my heart drumming a hundred times faster than before.

I was alive.

Everything had gone well.

My mother was going to kill me through training alone.

Everything was going to be fine.
 
I'm a bit surprised he has tried (on-screen) to apply his real world knowledge of physics to the visualization part.
 
"Rip," I whispered, "Skewer," I chanted. "Tear, and maim." I raised my swordwand, the rustling breezes coming to my call, "Austri and Vestri, Nordri and Sudri," twirling air gathered at the tip "Grip my foe with your gale, and split him apart with your gusts-" there were audible popping sounds in the air in front of me, "by the Founder's will, the heavens as judge, the sky as my witness, I summon you forth. Answer my call, and rebuke my enemy!" the popping sound suddenly clapped like that of thunder, the spiraling sphere of wind rushing forth from the tip of my swordwand hit the armored mannequin head on the chest, forming a small dent on its breastplate, ripping the metal apart.

There was silence for a brief instant, and then the grinding noise of iron shattering echoed as the mannequin twitched on itself, its limbs deforming and cracking asunder as if thrown into a whirlwind while it was being held at different angles, like a doll in the hands of a cruel child who wanted to see how much one had to twist before it broke apart at its seams.

The helmet flew off, the sawdust and straw exploded in all directions, and the armor was pretty much unusable from that point on.
So from how I'm seeing it in my head: it starts like a projectile Rasengan that grinds through an enemy's armor (wether mundane or magical), before expanding and acting like a reverse blackhole wherein any loose bits or limbs are pulled outward. Possibly turning the enemy into a frag grenade of rent steel and giblets too.

Eyup, Vicious WInd indeed.

"Henry Philippe de la Blois de la Valliere, come forth," the king spoke, and his voice felt old to my ears. He wouldn't live for much longer, would he? Perhaps with his death, and the Queen's mourning, this event wouldn't go this way for Louise -otherwise, Marianne wouldn't allow her friend's daughter to be called The Zero, of that I was pretty much sure.

I walked forward and knelt, my eyes low. "From henceforth," the king spoke as he lifted his scepter to gently touch my right shoulder, "in the name of the Founder and his divine blessing, by the will of the Gods that watch over us, in my name as Henry the Fifth de Tristain, I name thee The Vicious Wind."

"I swear solemnly," I spoke in a firm voice, my fingers tightening around my knee as my eyes remained down, "with my name as proof of my oath to uphold the ideals of the Founder, the Gods, and the Kingdom of Tristain. I swear to be its shield and its sword, until my last breath brings me in front of the judgment of the Gods. Let my name be feared by my enemies, and let it be cherished by my allies."

It was rite. Was this something Louise would ever need to do? Would she have to bite back her tears as she said the same stuff, with The Zero as the nickname?
Yeah, I can imagine how that must feel. Like being sworn in as President Incompetus, or Judge Shitastain, with the audience giggling for extra salt on your wounded pride.

Which makes me wonder: if the Runic names were decided by committee, then how did The Zero get through? Didn't Colbert highly respect Louise' efforts to catch up with her peers? What, was he sick that day or was he too dense to see the name as an insult?
 
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