As I recall, they have modern-ish tech. Assault rifles, and a Cold War-era nuclear sub. All scavenged from Earthtech that fell through rifts, of course. And they have the gall to call the humans barbarians, too, IIRC.


They have copies as well.

We don't know how good the copies are, but they have them.

I would say their tech is early 1915-1920 at best, 1880-1900 at worst, with a few things being better thanks to their spirit magic.
 
No, but there is something fascist about enforcing martial law over the entire country while swelling the military's size from 4,000 to 40,000.

Elves have better tech, both guns and airships.
Being fair, the military was inflated from 0 to 4000 very recently too. Or rather, the current size isn't a long standing thing to fit their needs, just the initial size of the first standing army raised. Of course the numbers are very subject to inflation, they have not stabilized into their final forms yet.
 
<3 Fan Art that made shade go ooohhhh and has melted his cold heart of ice
Here's a thing:



Depicted: Henry telling Catt a totally age-appropriate bedtime story.

- Quality is meh because it's night and I took it via phone scan app, can't really take it tomorrow morning though so now it goes.
- This took way longer than expected (like 2h including research), but I had fun so whatever.
- This is version 1, I'll add some shading for contrast and fix some errors later. <<requests here if you have em.

It's End of Evangelion.

Shade would totally tell it as a bedtime story, especially with all those alt-worlds to build off of later.
yes, that is a plush manticore in the background pillow fort.
 
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Well, I'm late to respond to this, but I have it typed so I'm not letting it go to waste! (don't bother reading this if you don't care about the guard smashing Anne's face and the lesson that follows):
No matter how you interpret that scene, someone fucked up on the guard's side. Either the one soldier overreacted, or the rest of Henry's guard froze up besides one guy. Doesn't matter, the end result was that the threat was not neutralized and the VIP was further endangered due to needing to defend the guard. Henry's first response should not have been to praise him, because unless he's now rewarding loyalty over competence this soldier pulled a Leeroy Jenkins.
This part I disagree with entirely. Shade didn't write in the other guards, but that doesn't mean they weren't there. Anne was removed from Henry's shoulders by Henry (He fought off the attacker!), and the first guard arrived at that moment. I assume the other guards didn't need to tackle the girl, and thus were around and prepared. Henry went on to stop the 'fight' and the guard even knelt down iirc, and they shared a few words. At this point the girl tossed a fireball at the guard's head.

The guard successfully removed the threat, was told to stand down, did stand down, then got a fireball tossed his way.

Problem is, Henry used a false dichotomy to teach this lesson instead of explaining things to her like an adult. Anne had more choices than burning + execution of entire family or total forgiveness. Fines, demotion, temporary suspension, a return punch in the face, on the extreme end fire him. If she ever actually thinks about the words he was saying instead of letting Henry shock and awe her into submission with EDGE, Henry's argument and the lesson after about responsibility will fall apart.

Anne will never truly mature if Henry doesn't treat her like an adult.
Not sure how I really feel about this. Although it was a false dichotomy, that's only because the highest ranking person was Henry, any other noble and the dichotomy wouldn't have been false. I personally think he was teaching a lesson. She asked for the man to be punished, and any other noble would have executed the guard if Anne were to be seen as any level of noble rank, and not punished at all if she were just seen as a commoner. If she asked for him not to be executed, it would still have been an embarrassment to the noble and the man would just be 'removed' later. The other side is what I've already said, punishing the guard for doing his job is bad. Morale drops, Henry is less likely to be trusted and less liked by his men, etc.

Of course, the reality is it is Henry, so a simple slap on the wrist type punishment is doable, but again, it's bad to punish someone for doing their job. (there are a lot of variables to this. Nobles don't act this way, but if it was Henry's sister, and the guard didn't recognize her, and she acted that way, then the situation would likely be different. Henry isn't perfect after all and is very protective of his family.)

I also disagree with the statement that Anne can't grow to be an adult if Henry doesn't treat her like one. He isn't hiding the world from her or anything, though this does show he mitigated her impulsiveness. Any other noble would have likely let her burn the guard alive, via the fireball from before, without calling on a medic. Commoners are cheap after all. It's likely that everyone else she interacts with expects her to be an adult and treats her as such. I wouldn't be surprised if she's already gotten a couple of servants killed and it's now dawning on her, unless she's a complete secret, which I doubt since she's been taught at the castle for a year.

Instead he uses the threat of executing the guard as the only option beat down Anne's justifiable complaints as he cannot logically argue them successfully. Much like how @MinorGryph said, if Henry is unwilling to make the crime and punishment public then a whole other range of options are available. Its just the fact the Henry refuses to punish one of his 'Toy soldiers' is what is holding him back.
Whether it's a lesson to Anne or not, there's no need to punish the soldier for doing what he's supposed to do. If it's a lesson for Anne, then 'shock value false dichotomy extreme edgy lesson ahoy!'. If it's not a lesson then 'manipulation because she's a stubborn teen that won't let this go'. Seriously, you can be the first lady's childhood friend and tickle her causing her to scream, but you shouldn't blame the blacksuits for hitting you with a taser if it appears to be an 'attack'.

I guess to address these points directly; the guard did his job. Anne's complaints aren't justifiable because the guard was doing his job. Henry cannot logically argue them because they're silly 'Mr. blacksuit did his job and I got hurt for 'attacking' the prince-consort. blacksuit needs to be punished!'. Also, Anne is a stubborn teenager (though it's been a year, so maybe not anymore, but it's what I'll assume for now) meaning 'he shouldn't be punished because he was doing his job' will be met with more 'but he broke my nose!'. If Anne is a secret, then it's even worse to have the guard punished for doing his job and hurting a 'commoner'. Henry refuses to punish a man that did his job correctly, this has nothing to do with not punishing his 'toy soldiers' as he has punished them before, the thing with putting women at the end of the list.

Originally I wasn't going to add this, but I'm late to continue the discussion anyway so: This reminds me of when I was being taught gun safety. 'The gun is always loaded. Guns are weapons, they can and will kill.' It gets the point across a lot better than 'eh, you didn't load the gun so it's probably empty, besides, even if it goes off you'll probably miss anyway'.

TLDR: A guard shouldn't be punished for doing his job correctly, even if a spoiled teenager insists. An extreme result can be told as a lesson, or as a way of manipulating a person. People do not need Henry in order to become adults.
 
Here's a thing:



Depicted: Henry telling Catt a totally age-appropriate bedtime story.

- Quality is meh because it's night and I took it via phone scan app, can't really take it tomorrow morning though so now it goes.
- This took way longer than expected (like 2h including research), but I had fun so whatever.
- This is version 1, I'll add some shading for contrast and fix some errors later. <<requests here if you have em.

It's End of Evangelion.

Shade would totally tell it as a bedtime story, especially with all those alt-worlds to build off of later.
yes, that is a plush manticore in the background pillow fort.
Cute. Looks a bit bravely default-ish.
 
Omake - Louise's Not So Extraordinary Late Night event.
Omake - Louise's Not So Extraordinary Late Night event.

She would have kicked herself in the shins. She would have slammed her head against the wall. Her big brother had taken time out of his really busy schedule to come visit her, and she had treated him coldly all throughout it! But brother had to learn she was no longer the little girl that would run towards him to be hoisted up or that suffered tickling -although she would rather not be tickled to find out if she still suffered from it or not.

Still, she was sulking because her big brother had left, and she was once more alone. She missed her family. She missed Cattleya, who had married Jean-Jacques and moved out. She missed Eleonore, who yelled only because she cared -and thus, cared a lot- believing her brother, she missed Josette, who had been her playmate and friend and had to leave without a word of explanation. She missed Tiffania, who was a friend of big brother -like her older sister, who worked for him from what she understood.

She missed her father, and she missed her mother too.

She missed her family, but she wouldn't see them until the end of the year.

That was if they still wanted her, because she was proving herself to be a true failure of a mage. It didn't matter what she tried, she only made explosions. She could light candles though, mostly because if she made a tiny explosion, it might light the fuse -and even then, not always. She knew her brother wouldn't care about that, and he had told her-he had told her he'd find her something to do in his army.

She could ride on a manticore like mother and go around blowing things up for her brother. She'd be Louise, the Explosion. Nobody would make fun of her, or laugh-

"Louise! Louise!" a voice cawed from the window, and as she turned her head towards it, her brother's familiar stood there beyond the window flapping his wings. He couldn't fit through the window, so he simply placed one of his claws on the windowsill to hold himself steady, and with practiced ease let a letter drop from the tip of his beak and onto the floor of her room. "See you later! Henry sends his hugs and love!" he flapped his wings, and was soon gone in the dark of the night.

Louise bent down to pick the letter, and after opening it up carefully, she began to read near the candlelight.

Lulu! My dear little sister who's such a cold-hearted young lady that she won't even hug me! I'm sad! No, I'm more than sad! I'm in tears-

Louise sighed. Her brother could be so melodramatic at times...but it didn't make her feel any better anyway. Perhaps she could have given him a parting hug? That would have been appropriate, wouldn't it?

I understand that you might face incredible pressure and trials ahead of you, so I have decided to give you a few very important pointers. First of all, the headmaster can be bribed with young ladies undergarments-

She shrieked as she read that part, throwing the letter away from her body as if made of pure undiluted poison -it could quite possibly be poison by just how filthy that suggestion was-

There is an inn called the Charming Fairy Inn in Tristain, the owner Scarron sells his workers' panties for a small sum-buy in bulk if the need arises. Use them to have the headmaster conveniently forget mentioning your bad points during the course of the year. If on his parting letter to the family. Be forewarned not to boast of your achievements, but also not to undersell them. Mother will know if you do either, and she will not be pleased.

Also, outside the school a short horse ride away there is a split on the road. Take the left rather than head straight for the capital and then trot until you see a tree with the bark all twisted and mangled. From there, follow the mangled trees until a small clearing in the forest. Beneath the white rock lies an entrance to my Man Cave Number Two. If you drink or eat something though remember to replace it! And keep it a secret from everyone, even your bestest friends! This is family only, you understand? Family only! Do not bring any young lords into my cavern or I will find out, I will come over there, and I will murder them! Understood!? No young lords in my cavern!


Louise sighed. Seriously-when would her brother ever learn?

There are a lot of books in there. Some of which you probably haven't read. Whatever you do though, do not open the black door. No, seriously, don't open it. I left stuff in there that you absolutely must not open!

She nodded most resolutely to herself. She would not open the black door. If her brother was so serious about it...then it had to be something really important. He was a bit stupid though, he could have recovered it before, no?

Also, the clearing is rarely visited. You could use it to practice your explosions -do not practice them indoor, Lulu! It's dangerous and the ceiling might fall on you! Now, I fully expect you to write back to me, thus I am leaving you with a mean to do so. This is my secret method of corresponding, known as the Raven Path. Look out of your window-

Louise turned her head towards the window, where a small raven stood in wait -or was it a crow? She never understood the differences anyway- and as she quickly opened the window, the crow flew in and landed quietly on her desk.

"Nevermore!" it said with a chirp. "Nevermore!"

Tie the letter to its leg and let him fly. He'll catch up to Raven no matter where he is and in turn my familiar will bring it to me. Don't hesitate to write to me! I demand a letter once a week! I want to know what happened, who happened, when it happened and how many names I must tally on my to-kill list!

Know that I love you, Lulu, no matter what you can or cannot do, and no matter whether or not you hug me or not. I'll always be proud of you.

True strength lies not in our ability to never fall. True strength lies in falling down time and time again...and yet standing back up each time to face new and ever-rising odds.

Hugsies and kisses-


Louise sighed, folded the letter quite neatly, and then proceeded to hide it in one of her desk's drawers. The crow looked at her expectantly, and Louise somehow had the impression that it was waiting for something.

"Nevermore!" it cawed. "Nevermore!"

She narrowed her eyes, clenched her fists...and then relented.

Her fingers delicately touched and rubbed the back of the raven's head, and she sighed. "I don't see what brother finds of interesting in this-it's just a feathered creature..."

"Nevermore," the raven said, dropping down and turning on its feathered belly, a pure ecstatic look on its face.

Still, Louise smiled.

If all else failed, she could get this raven as her familiar next year.

...

Beyond the black door, much to Louise's disbelief, stood a large library containing what could only be described as the lewdest, most horrifying ensemble of perverted books the history of Halkeginia had ever seen.

...

Nobody knew that but her, though, so...

Perhaps a tiny peek or two?
 
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Shade, you suck:sour:! I'm supposed to be either working or writing an update for my own story, not getting addicted to yours!... you put coffee beans in your text didn't you? Addictive little coffee beans...
 
@Black Noise

That was an adorable fan art! *is gushing* thank you for drawing it, and I'm glad you had fun in doing so!

Few things make Shade gush or melt his heart. Fan Art, Tvtropes paging, and Omakes.
 
Poor louise. You've boosted her Tsundere tendencies with this black library, Shade!
 
I know we're already several updates on due to Shade's insane productivity, but I assign Henry some partial responsibility for the whole broken nose/over-reaction thing.

Why? Because he started the whole thing by reaching out and trying to ruffle Anne's hair. That's a pretty intimate thing to be doing, and it was a clear social signal that the setting was one where barriers were down and they could treat each other immaturely. She responded by trying to give him a noogie, and if they had been alone an unobserved then it would have ended amusingly and fluffy there. Instead there were guards and grappling and broken noses and attempted murders. So let that be a lesson. If Anne is supposed to behave with propriety in a given setting, you have to treat her with propriety. No mixed signals.

Oh, and building up a huge army to "liberate" another country is pretty suspect, yes. Why do the Albion rebels need to be stopped again?
 
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