[X] "I have seen horrors that man was not meant to know. It has been forever burned into my eyes and it's stench has overwhelmed my nose. It is a wonder that I haven't gone unconscious yet, but I know if I do that it will come to haunt me in my dreams. Do you hear it Fate T. Harlown? They sing!They sing!

This is a more interesting choice to make.
 
[X] "I have seen horrors that man was not meant to know. It has been forever burned into my eyes and it's stench has overwhelmed my nose. It is a wonder that I haven't gone unconscious yet, but I know if I do that it will come to haunt me in my dreams. Do you hear it Fate T. Harlown? They sing!They sing!
 
[] "I have seen horrors that man was not meant to know. It has been forever burned into my eyes and it's stench has overwhelmed my nose. It is a wonder that I haven't gone unconscious yet, but I know if I do that it will come to haunt me in my dreams. Do you hear it Fate T. Harlown? They sing! They sing!
 
[X] "I have seen horrors that man was not meant to know. It has been forever burned into my eyes and it's stench has overwhelmed my nose. It is a wonder that I haven't gone unconscious yet, but I know if I do that it will come to haunt me in my dreams. Do you hear it Fate T. Harlown? They sing!They sing!
 
[X] "I have seen horrors that man was not meant to know. It has been forever burned into my eyes and it's stench has overwhelmed my nose. It is a wonder that I haven't gone unconscious yet, but I know if I do that it will come to haunt me in my dreams. Do you hear it Fate T. Harlown? They sing! They sing!
 
[x] "I have seen horrors that man was not meant to know. It has been forever burned into my eyes and it's stench has overwhelmed my nose. It is a wonder that I haven't gone unconscious yet, but I know if I do that it will come to haunt me in my dreams. Do you hear it Fate T. Harlown? They sing! They sing!
 
[X] "I have seen horrors that man was not meant to know. It has been forever burned into my eyes and it's stench has overwhelmed my nose. It is a wonder that I haven't gone unconscious yet, but I know if I do that it will come to haunt me in my dreams. Do you hear it Fate T. Harlown? They sing! They sing!
 
[X] "I have seen horrors that man was not meant to know. It has been forever burned into my eyes and it's stench has overwhelmed my nose. It is a wonder that I haven't gone unconscious yet, but I know if I do that it will come to haunt me in my dreams. Do you hear it Fate T. Harlown? They sing! They sing!
 
[X] "I have seen horrors that man was not meant to know. It has been forever burned into my eyes and it's stench has overwhelmed my nose. It is a wonder that I haven't gone unconscious yet, but I know if I do that it will come to haunt me in my dreams. Do you hear it Fate T. Harlown? They sing! They sing!
 
[X] "I have seen horrors that man was not meant to know. It has been forever burned into my eyes and it's stench has overwhelmed my nose. It is a wonder that I haven't gone unconscious yet, but I know if I do that it will come to haunt me in my dreams. Do you hear it Fate T. Harlown? They sing!They sing!

I don't think I've ever seen a dating sim where the protagonist is slowly going mad over the course of the plot. Could be interesting.
 
[X] "I have seen horrors that man was not meant to know. It has been forever burned into my eyes and it's stench has overwhelmed my nose. It is a wonder that I haven't gone unconscious yet, but I know if I do that it will come to haunt me in my dreams. Do you hear it Fate T. Harlown? They sing!They sing!

I don't think I've ever seen a dating sim where the protagonist is slowly going mad over the course of the plot. Could be interesting.
Are you implying that you've previously seen a dating sim in which the protagonist realizes he's in a dating sim and is upset about it?......................Deadpool dating sim when?
 
Are you implying that you've previously seen a dating sim in which the protagonist realizes he's in a dating sim and is upset about it?......................Deadpool dating sim when?

There was harem protag quest over on /tg/ which was sort of like that. But I just think it would be entertaining if the absurdity of this world slowly drives Yuuno insane in his attempts to escape.
 
There was harem protag quest over on /tg/ which was sort of like that. But I just think it would be entertaining if the absurdity of this world slowly drives Yuuno insane in his attempts to escape.
Was the protag aware that the world he's in forcibly follows the logic of dating sims? Also link (if it's on archive.moe or something similar)?
 
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[X] "I have seen horrors that man was not meant to know. It has been forever burned into my eyes and it's stench has overwhelmed my nose. It is a wonder that I haven't gone unconscious yet, but I know if I do that it will come to haunt me in my dreams. Do you hear it Fate T. Harlown? They sing! They sing!

I can't not choose this.
 
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Though it appears we're throwing common sense out the window.
 
Common sense? Isn't that something we gave up when we learned magic?

Nah, Yuuno abandoned common sense after his 1478th boulder trap, because he tried to work out the probability of virtually every ruin he encountered actually having such a trap, even when there was more technologically advanced traps and technology in said ruins and failed.

He simply worked out that reality doesn't make sense at all and it gets worse if you thrown multi-dimensional thingamajigs into the calculation.
 
[x] "I have seen horrors that man was not meant to know. It has been forever burned into my eyes and it's stench has overwhelmed my nose. It is a wonder that I haven't gone unconscious yet, but I know if I do that it will come to haunt me in my dreams. Do you hear it Fate T. Harlown? They sing! They sing!
 
Chapter one part two: Bonds forged through trial
"I have seen horrors that man was not meant to know. It has been forever burned into my eyes and it's stench has overwhelmed my nose. It is a wonder that I haven't gone unconscious yet, but I know if I do that it will come to haunt me in my dreams." You say, voice gradually getting louder as you stand up and put your hands on her shoulders while beginning to shake her back and forth. "Do you hear it, Fate T. Harlown? They sing! They sing!"

Utter silence greets your exclamation as you express the horrors of what you have witnessed. You can feel the eyes of everybody on you. No chitchat, no hushed whispers, just cold, judging, silent stares.

"...A-Are you ok-" Fate begins, only to be cut off by a flying book hitting your face, knocking you over as your head hits the ground. You can see Nanoha and Fates worried looks from above you before a familiar pink haired women comes into your sight.

"...I can explain!" You say quickly. Signum just calmly picks up the book off the floor and gives you another whack on the head.

"No need to explain." Signum says coldly. "Detention. After school. With me." She declares, before hitting you one more time on the head with the book. "And that's to get common sense back in your head. Now go head to the infirmary to get that head of yours checked out."

...Your pretty sure you both deserved that and that the hits were entirely unnecessary.

You quickly get back on your feat and begin walking to the infirmary. The silence of the hallways putting you on edge. You sigh in relief once you see the label above the door before hesitantly opening it and sticking your head inside.

Shamal takes one look at you and sighs, pinching the bridge of her nose.

"What did you do?" She asks, cutting straight to the matter. "You're the only one that ever comes here."

...

Great, this is making you feel even worse.

"I, um, expressed my opinion on your food and may have been a bit too enthusiastic so Signum hit me, on the head, multiple times." You say cautiously, slowly fully entering the room. "She told me too report here to get my head checked out."

A pained look flashes across Shamal's face before it transformed into a worried one. She quickly walks up to you and begins inspecting your head.

"Any signs of nausea, headaches, or pressure?" She asks worriedly. You give her a quick no as you let Shamal do her job. After a while, she walks away and gives her diagnosis.

"It's nothing that shouldn't be healed without some rest." She states, giving you another look over. "Though I'm surprised you haven't gotten a concussion with how much blows you've taken to the head."

"What can I say, messed up laws of physics." You laugh weakly, laying yourself on one of the beds. "I'll just rest, right?"

"Mhhm, that should be best for now." Shamal confirms, heading for the light switch. "Listen, Yuuno, I know we haven't actually been siblings for long, but if my cooking really bothers you that much..."

"Ah! No! You're improving, right? Maybe once we get out you'll be able to cook for me in the real world!" You exclaim as quickly as you can.

A wistful smile appears on her face. "Maybe..."

And with that she turns off the light leaving you to your slumber...
***
The sound of a bell ringing throughout the school awakes you from your slumber. Looking around, it appears Shamal left while you were sleeping.

You groggily get out of bed and walk to a near by bathroom. Splashing water on your face too bring you to full consciousness.

You quickly check the time (why a bathroom has a clock inside of it you have no idea, maybe people don't want to walk into a different classroom too check the time?) and figure that it's probably lunch at the moment.

Right, now how do you spend your lunch?

[] Find Fate and apologize for the out burst.
[] Go eat lunch with Nanoha.
[] Hm, maybe you should head down to the courts?
[] Fuck all this, you need some alone time.
 
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