She may be smart, but she's also an idiot. Failed the exams on purpose just so she could go to an easier school, and wastes all her time on frivolities instead of trying to get ahead. It's as simple as that; you don't want someone like that on the team, when she won't take any of this seriously, and probably use whatever power you give her for her own fun and nothing else
...Yeah, it's difficult to say whether the candidate is actually airheaded and unreliable or Shimizu misjudges her, genuinely (their friendship was actually soured) or not (she doesn't want the candidate to get involved into all this magical business).

Not sure would it be best to actually talk with the candidate or spy on her to find out how much an airhead she is.

If you think about it, Shimizu would have probably told the same about pre-canon Nanoha or Madoka. They didn't have long-term plans or a goal to strive for it, weren't motivated to achieve academical success, and considered silly hanging-out with friends more important than their own advancement.
 
> Maybe you're right (More power might not be worth the potential drama, maybe best to try other people)

I agree that the potential dangers of bad teamwork is not worth a very qualified candidate. Like having a unwilling participant in any way will cause problems.
 
> Maybe you're right (More power might not be worth the potential drama, maybe best to try other people)

I agree that the potential dangers of bad teamwork is not worth a very qualified candidate. Like having a unwilling participant in any way will cause problems.

The problem I think is that the potential drama the more I think about it is likely already on the team

Nel has already picked a weaker candidate to not have trouble on the team.


I see." You still feel a bit unhappy with that answer, though. The next question isn't planned, escaping your lips before you can stop yourself. "So does that mean there's another, magically stronger girl out there who could have used the purple ring instead of me?"

Nel hesitates a long, painful moment before answering. "Yes. If it makes you feel any better, I was hesitant to recruit her on account of some personality issues that you thankfully lack, but... yes."

More over pink ring candidates are as a matter of course scrutinized to a greater extent.

Pink is of course the most powerful in a certain sense; with abilities related to light and the soul, they can heal on a deeper level than the physical… or they can destroy to the same degree. It's for that reason that we tend to choose those candidates far more carefully…

And Nel has so far never gotten their job wrong when it comes to selecting candidates. So while we could have a dud of a candidate on our hands I somewhat suspect not.

meanwhile

Yes, that I do. Later today, while you three are speaking with the man in the hospital, I plan to speak with the prime candidate to take the blue ring; she has been hesitant to join because her normal life is very busy,

Shimizu apparently was concerned with the work interfering with her studies

I'm sorry, but I won't help you with this. Now, if you'll excuse me, I believe lunch period is nearly over; I need to get back to my classes. Unlike some people, I actually want to do something productive with my life."

Which is a very high priority of hers going by the above statement which may be a problem - especially as her focus on sheer will means her admitting to have messed up is.. going to be a challenge

Grinning in excitement, a girl stares at the screen, unmindful of the extreme hour as she begins to tap at her keyboard. She stops to rub at her eyes, but refuses to sleep until she's finished…

and if she'll power through everything for schoolwork -

Possibly, yes." Nel agrees. "While the first monster did get seen by some before it could be contained, since it was so unexpected, that was only after a great deal of wandering from its initial position. The subsequent ones both went largely unnoticed despite being in densely populated areas, because they were transformed late at night when very few humans would be out and about. If this continues, we can likely expect it to occur in that same time frame."

Pallavi's intrigued expression turns into a concerned grimace. "I'm a heavy sleeper; this could be a bit difficult to get used to."

"Don't worry," Midori says, smirking in amusement, "You can just catch up on sleep during classes!" Pallavi's horrified expression in response finally breaks through your troubled mood, and you snicker a bit as Midori facepalms. "I was joking, joking."

Poor teamwork may already be on the team.
 
Poor teamwork will be on the team no matter what at the beginning. That is not just a trope.
 
[X] It'll probably be fine (Whatever problem they have can be resolved in time, keep with the most qualified option)

I'm sure absolutely nothing bad can come from this decision!
 
Normally I would be locking votes very soon, but due to personal reasons I'll be waiting until Monday evening to do that. Mark it as approximately 48 hours from now.

Why do you need anyone's help with that? You've recruited all prior members by yourself, and from what Masami says, the girl would be eager to take the chance anyway.
Midori's guilt at knowing someone else had accepted while she had not overrode her concerns over the dangers. Pallavi needed the assurance that she wouldn't be fighting alone to ward off concerns about how her family would fare if something happened to her. Masami's busy lifestyle didn't favor taking on Magical Girl duties as well, until she was sure others could take up the slack and make her normal goals less likely to be undermined by the extra work. In essence, Kikuko finally taking the plunge was enough to get those three to join in.

However, the next candidate has different reasoning for turning down the offer, and Nel was hoping her friendship with Shimizu would be enough to override that. The idea to have her help convince her was a very specific and situational thing that Nel didn't even realize was an option until recently. And the final candidate will be similarly difficult to win over; to the point that Nel hasn't even properly approached her yet.

Second choice is not always bad - we're a second when it comes to affinity with our ring.
Though as a reminder, the main reason Nel chose to approach Kikuko was the ghost element; until her sudden death, they were reluctantly going to accept whatever negativity the original purple candidate would have wrought.

Is the above acceptable?
I'll permit it in this case, yes.
 
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Alright so important question here - in the hypothetical manga/anime of this who would be the mc? It obviously wouldn't be Kikuko because the ghost reveal would be good. Also her tact is too existent for an anime MC I think - the ability to notice that someone has a crush and not step on the proverbial land mines? Too OP nerf!

Though I personally am hoping for a moment where we are the rear guard or just being the one holding the line.

Look I'm a simple person and having Kikuko have the badass line of her saying that whatever won't kill her would make me very happy.

You can't kill what is already dead after all.

Or a lot of different permutations there of.
 
Inserted tally - Voting is locked

Predawn on Tuesday technically still counts as Monday night, yes?
Adhoc vote count started by SpoopyGhost on Jun 25, 2019 at 7:08 AM, finished with 23 posts and 16 votes.
 
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Next update has been ready for a while, but I haven't had the chance to send it to my editor. Should be up in the next couple of days, depending on them now. Hint hint hint.
 
The editor would like to formally apologise for this taking so dang long. Still not done with it either, but hopefully sometime this weekend.
 
Dissatisfaction with this most recent update, combined with trying to make sure this semster goes better than the last one did, have together made for a rough few months. But I've finally reached a point where I'm happy with it, (after four different drafts, two of which my editor hasn't even seen) and so have sent it out for review. Provided all goes well, I hope to have it posted in the next few days. As someone who doesn't like to make a habit of apologizing... I'm deeply sorry for letting this take so long. I hope that everyone is still interested, as this update should give you all a lot to discuss...
 
Happy to report I've looked at it a lot sooner than last time. Can't wait for this to go up!
 
Dissatisfaction with this most recent update, combined with trying to make sure this semster goes better than the last one did, have together made for a rough few months. But I've finally reached a point where I'm happy with it, (after four different drafts, two of which my editor hasn't even seen) and so have sent it out for review. Provided all goes well, I hope to have it posted in the next few days. As someone who doesn't like to make a habit of apologizing... I'm deeply sorry for letting this take so long. I hope that everyone is still interested, as this update should give you all a lot to discuss...
I'll be honest, I had actually forgotten this quest was a thing I was involved in until I saw your message. Sucks that it's taken you so long.
 
Sucks that it's taken you so long.
I'm very sorry, again. I wanted it up months ago, but I also needed to attend to my personal life; as much as I wish otherwise, this had to be set aside for the time being. (I also wanted to have it out for Halloween at least, but that didn't pan out either. Shame that I've only been able to put out seven updates since this time last year... but again, I had to make some choices about what to prioritize in my life, so I hope you understand the delay.)
 
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3D - Advising The Advisor/Of Brothers And Sisters
"What do you think?" Nel asks, and you freeze like a deer caught in oncoming headlights. What do you think? Right now the only thing in your head is that you don't know what you think of this. Any of it, really; you've just been going with the flow…

Cutting off that line of thought before you can go too far off the rails, you close your eyes to try to calm down, and properly sort out your feelings. It feels weird to be asked this at all, for starters; you're completely new to all things magical girl, while Nel seems to live and breathe it; plus, recruitment is their job anyway, not yours. In addition, this could affect how well the others get along, but given how detached you are, (have always been, really) can you really make an accurate judgement? Is it even your place to do so? It doesn't feel right to be making a decision about a matter that will likely affect you the least.

Still… it doesn't feel right not to say anything, either. Hesitantly, you step closer. "I'm… I'm sure everything will probably work out fine?" The assurance feels fake and hollow in your ears, the most generic and unhelpful possible thing to say; more a question than an answer. Still, it seems to help, Nel's tumultuous swirling gradually dying down.

"I sincerely hope so," Nel sighs, but they do sound relieved. "You're right: I'll keep to the plan, no matter Shimizu-san's misgivings. We've had far less qualified-seeming candidates turn out just fine in the past, after all!" Turning to you, they give a grateful bow. "Thank you very much for your help." You squirm uneasily at the praise, but fortunately they've already moved on.

Returning to their spot behind the desk, Nel shuts the lid on the box of rings with a loud clap, making you jump. "There's one other matter I wanted to bring up, just for a moment."

With a wave of an arm, the window behind them changes suddenly. Blinking in surprise, you realize it doubles as a screen; while you can still see schools of fish outside, there's now a video overlaid on the view. Retreating to the back of the room to take it in more clearly, you realize you're watching footage from a news helicopter looking down upon the city; it zooms in on the river, and you recognize the old bridge you'd visited last night. Right at the shore, there's a wide circle of white, reaching all the way to the first set of bridge supports.

Oh, right. That.

The view quickly switches to a lady newscaster, prim and proper, sitting next to a rather frazzled-looking elderly man. "The strange phenomenon discovered early this very morning continues to baffle local meteorologists." she explains; "While snowy conditions aren't unheard of this time of year, as we settle into early autumn, there's never been such a localized and extreme drop in temperature." Pointing her microphone toward the man, she adds "As our resident weather expert, Kobayashi-san, do you have any theories regarding this incident?"

Frowning to himself, he hesitates before speaking up. "I suspect this could be some previously-unheard of consequence of our ongoing global climate change. Without further data, it is difficult to say for certain; we will keep watch for any repeat incidents, but at this stage it is nothing more than a particularly bizarre fluke of nature." Trying to shrug it off, despite his clear anxiety, he gives a fake laugh. "Perhaps this is just the world's way of reminding us how little we actually understand?"

Reclaiming her microphone, the newscaster nods sympathetically. "And what a fluke, to be sure. It's uncertain if this is likely to happen again, but for the time being no harm has been caused, just confusion." Turning back to the camera, she takes on a somewhat more serious tone. "Now, the ice is already beginning to break up, and will likely finish melting away completely by this evening, so we strongly urge everyone to stay away from the area; the risk of falling through and into the river is extremely high." With a cheesy smile and a wink, (made somewhat surreal by the shark partially visible behind her face) she adds "there's no need for popsicles in this weather!" The meteorologist rolls his eyes and begins to get up, before being cropped out of the frame. "Now, on to other news. As the national election draws nearer, candidates for Prime Minister have begun announcing themselves, leading wit-"

With another wave, the window returns to simply being a window, leaving a somewhat startled shark to swim away in surprise. You give Nel a nervous grin. "Magical Girl prison?"

Nel stares at you uncomprehendingly for several moments, before chuckling. "No, we still don't have that."

"But I'm in trouble, right?"

"Not really," Nel says, and you slump in sheepish relief. "As I said before, there have already been a few monsters just in this city that we had to hide the presence of, before I was able to convince you to join. With the nature of some girls' powers, cases of near-breaches of secrecy are somewhat inevitable, to a certain extent at least."

You're still feeling confused, so they elaborate further. "The reason I mention this now is for future reference; the problem is not the ice, but that you didn't alert me to it. Given you're still learning to use your powers I don't expect you to get rid of it yourself, but if I knew about it before any other humans noticed, we could have found another way to remove it, or at the very least excuse its presence. Swamp gas, weather balloons, reflected light from Venus; there are a variety of possible cover stories."

You raise an eyebrow at that, but Nel moves on before you can comment. "Fortunately, it's only on the local news, and should hopefully go down as an isolated fluke without attracting broader notice…" You sense a 'but' coming."But I do ask that you be more careful in the future." Ah, there it is.

You nod quietly. "Sorry. I wasn't really thinking."

Even through the obscuring cloudiness of their form, Nel seems to give a warmer smile in response. "There's no harm done; it's just something to keep in mind for the future." You both nod at that, and their tone brightens up further. "I also wanted to congratulate you; it seems you have discovered both of your powers, now?"

Remembering the feeling from last night; contentment and understanding, peace and purpose; you find yourself smiling involuntarily. "I think so, yeah." It feels better to… well, feel than to think, to forget all about the situation and consequences and just act. "My magical girl powers, anyway; I still haven't sorted out this ghost thing."

"It's progress nonetheless!" Nel encourages. "And while there's still a lot to learn before you can gain full control, this should hopefully help any future encounters go more smoothly, yes?"

"Right, right." Wait, aren't you getting a bit sidetracked? "Anyway, what about my mission?"

Nel halts for several long moments before laughing in embarrassment. "I'd almost forgotten about that. Let's not waste any more time, then! You received my note and understand the situation?"

You nod in confirmation. "Follow the construction worker or the bookstore owner around, and see if they're up to something, right?"

"In essence, yes; that's correct. While there are other clones we've noticed and are tracking, these two have both been here the longest, by our estimation, so it seemed prudent to start with them. Which one have you chosen?"

~~~ .oO◯Oo. ~~~​

A few minutes later, you step through another door and into another narrow alleyway. Unlike the one you used to reach the hospital, where smooth metal and concrete dominated the architecture, this place is much more humble, with red brick walls all around. There isn't much to it, just a fire escape, a couple of dumpsters, and a manhole cover, so you waste little time in stepping out into the road to get your bearings.

Smaller trees line the road, providing shade while allowing the sun to still shine brightly down, giving a cheery and comfortable atmosphere to the tight-packed storefronts. With outdoor cafes, music shops, and smaller restaurants, this place of commerce is warm and inviting... and so very very busy. Cars drive past frequently, and the sidewalks are filled with pedestrians, forcing you to hang back to avoid bumping into anyone, despite your invisibility. Suppressing anxiety at the sheer amount of people to avoid, you call on old instincts as the school wallflower to look for gaps in the crowd.

It takes some time to make your way to your destination, but soon enough you're standing before the bookshop Nel told you about. The window displays have a mix of recent releases and extremely old novels, and the door is cluttered with notices about local events and fundraisers; nearly buried beneath them is a sign giving the shop's hours, along with a handwritten note; An inclusive space, all are welcome here! Please remember that drinks are not allowed, and smiles are mandatory! : P

It doesn't take long to wait for someone to enter, and you quickly follow on the heels of a horribly giggly young couple, rolling your eyes slightly as the man slings his arm over the woman's shoulders, making her titter like a startled bird. Quickly sidestepping away from them, you look over the shop's interior.

One thing you have to give them credit for - this is the kind of place you would have loved to spend time in, had you been aware of its existence. It's cozy and cluttered without feeling chaotic, classy and spotless without feeling opulent; heavy carved-wood furniture and hardwood floors contrasting with welcoming beanbags slung in a corner dedicated to manga, and indirect lighting in the ceiling providing a warm glow. The shelves are packed with books, again a mixture of bestsellers with more obscure releases and a variety of old volumes. The topmost shelves in each case, though, are dedicated to a rather eccentric collection of souvenirs and objects; a buddha statue next to a small scale-model of the Sphinx of Giza, next to a photograph of the Eiffel Tower, and so on and so forth, a sizable clutter that makes it hard to focus on any one thing for too long. Turning around, you find a counter in the back corner, behind which stands your target: Sakamoto Takuya, the owner.

Narrowing your eyes at the man, you drift closer to examine him up and down. He's fairly average-looking, aside from dark-tanned skin giving away his more southerly origins; with black hair cut very short, and clearly in his mid-thirties. He doesn't seem particularly reedy or stocky yet somehow gives the impression of both at the same time, and you note with approval that he also seems to be a fan of sweater vests.

He wears an easy, friendly grin as he patiently watches the affectionate couple. "Is there anything I can help with?" He calls out, but they just wave him off, and exit not long after without buying anything. You carefully watch his reaction, but he just shrugs and sighs without much disappointment, grabbing a feather duster from under the counter.

As he goes about an unnecessarily-thorough dusting spree, you sit down into a far corner, watching him carefully but soaking in the comfortable ambience, letting yourself relax. For his part, once he's done with the lower shelves, he takes a ladder from a backroom to reach the higher ones, and something interesting occurs. From one of the souvenir-cluttered top shelves, he pulls out an object you'd seen without really noticing before. It appears to be a mason jar full of pink lemonade, or something very similar, though there's a layer of brown silt at the bottom. He frowns down at it, stepping down and putting the jar behind the counter before resuming his dusting.

A few shelves later there's another jar like this, and another further down yet from that one; they also have the brown sludge, and also wind up behind his desk. Moving to the opposite wall, he finds the jars concealed there lack the sludge, and are put back in place instead of removed. That discovery seems to take the edge off his disappointment, and he quickly gets back to his normal cleaning, though he still seems a bit less enthusiastic than before. Your brows furrow as you look back over the shelves, noting the jars' locations; there are eight in total, and spaced evenly along each wall, though the three that got removed create a large gap on the one side.

Just as he's finished putting the ladder away again, the bell over the door rings, and another woman enters, arms stuffed with grocery bags. "Nee-san!" Takuya greets her, and she gives him a friendly shove on her way past.

Giving her a quick once-over, you find she's a rather beautiful woman. Her darker skin and blonde hair would give off the impression of being a gyaru, not helped by her rather curvy figure, but there's a sense of professionalism in the way she carries herself that offsets that entirely. Not to mention her outfit, a pale green pinstriped button-up shirt with a long black tie in front, and black jeans that aren't remotely girly, yet which hug her hips well regardless. Her hair is cropped in a short and fluffy bob cut, with one side tucked behind her ear while the other hangs in front of her face, giving her a strangely open yet reserved appearance, and reminding you a bit of Midori and Pallavi. Shaking your head, you focus on listening in to their conversation.

"I'm back, finally. The lines were long; I told you we should have waited until after lunchtime!" He rolls his eyes good-naturedly at her complaints, while she sets the groceries down on the counter and rolls her shoulders with a wince. "I see we didn't get much business while I was gone…" Spotting the jars he'd set down, her frown deepens.

Scooting behind her to return the duster to its original spot, Takuya shrugs. "Just a couple, and they didn't buy anything."

"Looks like they won't be a couple for long, either," his apparent sister notes with a dark expression. "I'm guessing they looked to all the world like the most inseparable pair?" You frown, leaning intently closer, confused by the accuracy of her guess, which Takuya confirms with a nod. She sighs, taking a seat behind the desk and continuing to massage her shoulders. "Great, one of those types. At least they didn't stick around too long. You gonna put up new ones?"

"Yeah, I was just getting to that," Takuya says, sounding a little annoyed with her ordering tone. "Rina nee-san, please trust me for a change?"

She just gives him a lazy-eyed grin. "Maybe once you stop relying on emprunter?" At his exasperated sigh, she finally takes pity, patting him lightly on the shoulder. "Sorry, sorry, I'll let you take care of it. I should get all this put away upstairs anyway, and I can call règle dame with our mea culpa. It will be a decent shipment this month, I think, but not what she was hoping for."

Standing back up, she begins gathering up the grocery bags again, only to pause suddenly at her brother's next words; "I take it you didn't have any luck either?" Sighing again, she nods in confirmation.

"Not a clue. I think we're searching in the wrong neighborhood, but it's impossible to be sure until it's found." Huffing in frustration, she adds "Though have you seen what they're saying on the news? It seems part of the river froze over last night, just a small part though, and nobody can tell why. It's on the opposite end of the city, of course; it may be something else to look into."

"May not have anything to do with us, though," Takuya points out. Still hidden in the corner, you raise an eyebrow at the irony. "Anyway, I should let you go make that call, and rearrange things down here." She nods in agreement, gathering up the bags again and vanishing into the backroom; through the open door, you see her back retreating up a staircase to the second floor. Once she's gone, Takuya shivers slightly, mumbling to himself "Better you than me…"

Just as you're wondering whether you should follow her or continue to observe him, the bell rings again, and your attention turns back to the front of the shop. A young boy enters, face concealed behind a baseball hat and hoodie; Takuya smoothly returns to his original cheer as he calls out; "Shouldn't you be in school right now?" The boy just pauses long enough to give him a sullen glare, before marching over to the manga corner to begin scanning the titles. Takuya sighs at the rude response. "It seems a little early in the day for you to be here, is all."

"Lunch period," the boy grunts in return. You frown a bit; that voice seems really familiar…

"Very well, but you'd best be heading back soon!" Finally finding whichever volume he was searching for, the boy yanks it sharply off of the shelf and heads toward the counter to make his purchase. The transaction is short and wordless, Takuya offering an easygoing smile but getting no reaction, as the boy focuses more on fishing out his wallet. You stand up and start heading slowly toward the backroom, but something about the scene bothers you, so you keep watching. "And may I have your name?" Takuya asks, and the boy finally looks up; you stifle a gasp.

"Yukimura Kichirou," your little brother responds.

By the time you've recovered from your shock, the transaction is done and he's already stepping out the door. Glancing back and forth between his retreating form and the stairwell Rina had vanished up just a minute ago, you feel trapped between options.

Where To Go?
> Follow Takuya's sister (You need to learn more about just what's going on here, and listening in on her call may be the best way to do that…)
> Follow your brother (What's he doing so far away from school? You haven't even seen him since your death, and his behavior has you worried…)
 
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I'm very sorry, again. I wanted it up months ago, but I also needed to attend to my personal life; as much as I wish otherwise, this had to be set aside for the time being. (I also wanted to have it out for Halloween at least, but that didn't pan out either. Shame that I've only been able to put out seven updates since this time last year... but again, I had to make some choices about what to prioritize in my life, so I hope you understand the delay.)
No, it's perfectly understandable. I know it all too well; real life has to take priority. That being said, I'm probably going to need to re-read what's already been done to refresh myself on what's going on.
 
No, it's perfectly understandable. I know it all too well; real life has to take priority. That being said, I'm probably going to need to re-read what's already been done to refresh myself on what's going on.
That's entirely fair, it has been a while after all. And thank you for understanding.
 
[X] Follow your brother (What's he doing so far away from school? You haven't even seen him since your death, and his behavior has you worried…)
 
Recap - The Story So Far
Episode 1: Omae Wa Mou Shindeiru

Kikuko Yukimura is dead. After awakening at her funeral as a ghost and following the procession to the graveyard, she finds herself approached by a strange shadowy figure, who convinces her to become a Magical Girl. She also meets Death, who explains that she allowed her to linger, in the hopes of having a spirit able to help with matters she cannot influence directly.

After that, Kikuko returns home briefly and discovers her family grieving, only to be called away again; a monster has appeared downtown. Meeting and working with Midori Kazane to subdue it, (and discovering one of her powers in the process; the ability to create auroras with her weapon) they are able to return it to its original form as a human man. After calling the hospital to see to his safety, Midori returns home and Kikuko follows her, where Midori reveals that she was a classmate who's grieving over Kikuko's death. Kikuko tries to explain that she is a ghost now, but Midori refuses to believe her, and the two part.

Kikuko returns to her high school, where Death reappears and gives her first assignment - to defeat a Corrupted Spirit lurking on the upper floors. Kikuko successfully purifies it, learning in the process that someone may have been responsible for killing a student to create it. As she returns home exhausted, a distant entity begins journeying toward the city.

--- .oOo. ---

Episode 2: Night Of The Expositing Dead

The next morning, Kikuko returns to school to find Midori and make up. Along the way, she encounters an infamous delinquent, and has to use a fire alarm as a distraction to progress. Meeting Midori on the roof and finally convincing her of her ghostly nature, the two of them begin to connect, though Midori's affections for her make things awkward. Interrupted by firefighters, the two are spirited away by the shadowy figure, who explains they want Kikuko to speak to the man from the previous night, but is convinced to change that plan to allow for more people.

Midori returns to school for the time being, while Kikuko follows the shade back to their office, and finally learns their name is MichacaxiΞoatl~NelchaeΓ, or Nel for short. In a long question and answer session, Nel explains more about the details of Magical Girls, and the reason for their involvement in the first place. The shades seek to make up for an ancient occupation of Earth and other worlds by helping them now deal with the magical consequences; Magical Girls, once enforcers for that empire, are now the saviors of those it once oppressed.

Rejoined by Midori and joined for the first time by Pallavi Varma, the trio are sent to the hospital, where they question the man about the circumstances of the previous night. They're interrupted by a suspicious-acting nurse, who Kikuko follows; the nurse reveals themselves as another Shade, but leaves before Kikuko can catch them. Returning to Nel, Kikuko attempts to explain what happened, but they are unconvinced, setting up a meeting between Kikuko and the hospital contact in case this is just a misunderstanding. Kikuko then goes back to Midori's home, where they hatch a plan for Midori to return to the hospital over the weekend and make her own inquiries.

Feeling restless, Kikuko heads to the river to practice her ghostly abilities more, but instead winds up speaking with Death again, who provides further answers while raising more questions, and tasks her with defeating another corrupted spirit in a nearby mountain town. Reminded of a childhood memory, Kikuko finally discovers her other Magical Girl power, the ability to control snow and ice.

--- .oOo. ---

Episode 3

Once again heading to school to speak with Midori, Kikuko is instead redirected to Nel, who wants her to follow one of two suspicious clones in the city. She also briefly encounters Masami Shimizu, the fourth member of the team and a rather obstinate individual, arguing with the shade. After advising Nel on how to handle her, Kikuko goes to spy on one of the clones as directed, a humble-seeming bookshop owner, and finds...?
 
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[X] Follow your brother (What's he doing so far away from school? You haven't even seen him since your death, and his behavior has you worried…)
it'd be nice if we could find a way to shadow them afterwards though.

wow, everyone i follow seems to be getting into a time they can write again about now. its lonely when i seem to be the only person on the sight who doesn't have life issues getting in the way, although i guess i shouldn't say that so as to not jinx myself.
 
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Trying to shrug it off, despite his clear anxiety, he gives a fake laugh. "Perhaps this is just the world's way of reminding us how little we actually understand?"
Did someone from a Godzilla movie accidentally wander into the wrong story?

Swamp gas, weather balloons, reflected light from venus; there are a variety of possible cover stories."
We Men In Black now.

Nel halts for several long moments before laughing in embarrassment. "I'd almost forgotten about that.
Nel why are you like this

Suppressing anxiety at the sheer amount of people to avoid, you call on old instincts to look for gaps in the crowd.
Poor Kikuko; breathing is temporary, but social awkwardness is forever.

and you note with approval that he also seems to be a fan of sweater vests.
Kikuko why are you like this

"Yukimura Kichirou," your little brother responds.
If their parents' names start with K too, I will actually scream.

Also holding off from voting for now, but this is definitely an interesting dilemma. Do the responsible thing and keep spying, or do the personally important thing and follow our brother? With magical girls usually the personal thing winds up being the right call in the long run, but I'm still a bit more hesitant to commit to that. Guess I'll wait and see what everyone else has to say...
 
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>finishes a re-read
>sees author did a recap
...worth it.

Are the adults collecting enmity? So they can break the seal on sleeping dragon or something .-.? Or are they just trying to find/detect people with negative energy? whether to protect or, hunt.
it's interesting.

I'm leaning towards brother; we'd never forgive ourselves if something happened to him and we could have but didn't stop it. The girls are magical and a bit more durable? Also Shadow support.

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also the bookstore owner and sis still seem to be in 'prep' stages, thus less urgent
 
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