How to Train Your Endbringer

Probably. More importantly, she's probably going to get Salem off her own genocide kick and doing something more productive. She may even get her and Ozma back together again. Completely by accident, of course.
She's going to drive them to a point where drinking no longer helps the headache, at that point their only option will be to, at the very least, set their differences and post marital disputes aside so she won't have any wacky hijinx to get into, get board, and leave.

maybe...

hopefully.

*both reach for the bottle*
 
Hello,
I wish to report a problem - the right threadmark arrow to go to the next chapter is not loading. ::SADFACE::

Jokes aside, I'm sorry for resurrecting this, if you want it buried, but I was just introduced to this wonderment (by @SanguisAnima - thanks!), and it is new to me and I wanted to gush about how great it is. Also, and this is the reason I'm risking this resurrection, I notice that a few people had pointed out typos I didn't see, so they got corrected. Which means the author, if [he/she/they] ever gets back to this, might find my collection of errors useful to make this fic even that tiny bit better.

Typos
Their rather amenable to helping young folk in distress.
They're

"Please to meet you! I'm Taylor."
Pleased

as Chief Director of the PRT she had seen more than most, but she knew to keep herself grounded and expect the worse.
worst
(at least, that is the most common usage - in a Wormworld perhaps "worse" makes more sense, as in: "things could always be worse."

the place to go for costumes and stuff. I guess that won't be happened.
happening

wait until we've actually talked to her before jumping to the worse conclusions.
worst
(same caveat as before)

Jessica, the cure girl who worked at the reception desk
cute
(unless they have a healer working reception...)

Now, if someone could taje care of the Merchants that'd be awesome.
[snip]

I don't know if you're too high to fear the new Queen of the bay
take
they're
(these are both part of a PHO post, though, so could be considered typos by poster, not author.)

"Thank girl. Now piss off, you're scaring my boys."
Thanks

In Which Taylor's Picnic Gets Slaughtered
OK, this isn't a typo - I just wanted to mention that it seemed strange to me that Taylor made sure she wan't part of the Protectorate, but then stays home for a week because they told her to. It took me a while to realize it is part of her plan to seem reasonable while maintaining some independence.

Hello, Queen Administrator. I had something of a proposition for you.
have
(unless he changed his mind and no longer has something like a proposition.)

"No. Bad fuck. My cunt shit!" Skirmark screamed as he rushed towards Leviathan
Skidmark

they all got to see the man be throw hard enough that he disappeared
thrown

her gaze followed one of the columns lining the room to stare up ata ceiling
ata = at the

She shot the Triumvirate hero next to her a guiless look
guileless

With thundering clicks, words tore past until, finally, they slowed to a stop with a thud.
I really like the image this evokes, but I think it was supposed to be: worlds

a bunch of useless apps he had been meaning to uninstal for the last year
uninstall

The surround sound one the cheering was so good that Greg almost felt as if he was there.
one = of

I hope you can come back to this someday, but even if not, thanks again for the laughs!
 
Well, I for one am very pleased with this bout of dark sorcery. Endbringer fics are far too rare to pass this up.
 
You know, a story with that premise could be pretty hillarious. They're an ensemble cast of Nigerian Princes who labor under an ancient curse that can only be alleviated if they surrender all their worldly goods (or something like that), but they just CAN'T give them away faster than they keep earning more money, and nobody believes they're not scammers. So they engage in increasingly wacky plots to spend, lose, give away, or otherwise divest themselves of money, and each time they turn around to find more has piled up.
one of the stranger Sisyphean tasks I have heard of....

Know of any good ones?
there's the friend bringer one's where the EB's are miniterized. one where taylor has the full sized ones and its played straight

....err, I'm having troubles finding links. sorry. I know their here and on SB tho.
 
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