Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Very nice, didn't expect to see cradle crossover here.

He probably found the general cultivation extremely odd at the start, it is considered unsafe in cradle to leave your house if you aren't iron at least, as you may suffer crippling or lethal damage by bumping into the average person, so it is a lot of qi condension equivalents.

I am curious how he will solve his problem, aura is generally produced by effects in nature, destruction create destruction aura, fire create fire aura and so on, so maybe he can figure out how to tricks the word into making 'qi aura' and use it to bridge the gap in the energy system, or perhaps he can find some high level medicine to 'fix' his lack of Madra core, a sage almost definitely can do it, but the right elixir may be capable of it in even lower realms.
In cradle canon, Emriss Silentborn goes around Cradle teaching people to communicate with each other. Since I thought it was a bit early to meet a monarch I decided she'd leave behind dream tablets to help the job along.
She does if I remember correctly, that woman is singlehandedly responsible for unifying the language in the entire world, considering it's size and politics (she can't threaten everyone into using a specific language without pissing off monrachs, even if she had the inclination), tablets must have been used.
 
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Wei Feng Sidestory - Grave to Cradle (Cradle Crossover) - Information: What are Dreadgods?
She does if I remember correctly, that woman is singlehandedly responsible for unifying the language in the entire world, considering it's size and politics (she can't threaten everyone into using a specific language without pissing off monrachs, even if she had the inclination), tablets must have been used.

Emriss is amazing, yep.

Also have another 564 word report extract as I realised this will shortly be important context for people who haven't read cradle...so I had to quickly write it up. :whistle:

The World of Cradle - Dreadgods. Extract of Wei Feng's prepared reports for the Grand Elder

Dreadgods

Summary:


The Dreadgods appear to be four monstrously strong creatures that, while usually dormant, occasionally wake up and rampage across the continents in order to feed, bringing devastation in their wake. Stronger than the greatest cultivators (Monarchs) in this world, they can perhaps best be compared to a more active and prone to rampage regional barriers such as the Great Circle Nascent Devil Bee Queen or the Northern Fenghuang.

The locals insist that these creatures are different in some way from the local equivalent of spirit beasts, but I have not yet understood exactly how so. They have much lesser kin in "dreadbeasts", which come in all strengths, so perhaps I may learn more in time.

All four are also followed by sects who appear to have taken inspiration for their cultivation styles from the creatures, though there is no indication the beasts themselves know or care about these following sects. These sects seem despised as bandits and scavengers taking advantage of the devastation the beasts leave behind.

The four Dreadgods are:

The Bleeding Phoenix.
A kaiju sized creature with the appearance of a blood coloured phoenix made of liquid. It's true form is a conglomeration of many drops of "blood", and it has great power over Blood and Blood Aura.

Unfortunate name aside, this creature appears to have a cultivation art closely related to blood. Its primary food source appears to be human cultivators however, supplemented by sacred beasts.

The creature deposits 'eggs' that contain a parasite that dies quickly without some form of host. When a creature comes too close the parasite will hatch and attempt to latch onto the nearby host. It will then use that host to attack and drain nearby cultivators. Eventually, when it has fed sufficiently, it will attempt to reunite with the greater mass of the phoenix.

Information indicates these parasites possess at least a rudimentary awareness and some local cultivators attempt to share their bodies with the parasites and tame them, gaining a powerful additional weapon and producing a bastardised (and fortunately lesser) form of the blood path. Further investigation needed.

Its following sect is called Redmoon hall.

The Weeping Dragon.

A monstrous mile long dragon surrounded at all times by a storm. It rains down lightning upon its enemies, and its breath weapon is said to be certain death to even the most powerful cultivator or fortress. I am unclear what it feeds on.

Its following sect are the Stormcallers.

The Wandering Titan
A colossal beast with manlike limbs and a tortoise's head, tail and shell, it walks upright like a man. Apparently it has power over earth aura. It feeds primarily on rare materials from the Earth: metals, minerals and similar.

Its following sect are called the Abyssal Palace.

The Silent King

A much smaller beast than the rest, being only around the size of an elephant, the Silent King is in the form of a tiger.

This creature is apparently specialised in illusions, to the point of being able to take control of many lesser cultivators and organise them into extremely efficient formations, which it then uses against anyone whom it has not yet taken control over.

Appears to feed on the mental energy of its controlled slaves.

Its following sect are the Silent Servants.
 
Wei Feng Sidestory - Grave to Cradle (Cradle Crossover) - Crack Omake - Meeting the Silent King
And here it is. The real reason I wrote 10,000 words of Cradle omake. It was all for this. Behold, the crack omake of Wei Feng's dreams. Mwhahahahah.

Contains mild spoilers for Dreadgod - On the Silent King's fighting style

Crack Omake - Sent to the Everwood Continent, Wei Feng meets the Silent King -

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"In this world of illusion, you will last until your will erodes and you let me in or possibly your brain explodes." The enormous tiger stretched casually, like a housecat. "That will take mere seconds in reality, but to you and this fragment of my will, it will feel like years, perhaps even decades if your brain holds out."

The Dreadgod favoured him with a tiger's grin, great fangs shining even brighter beneath the white halo perpetually enshrouding the beast's head.

"You've refused to let me in once. How many times can you refuse, do you think? A hundred? Two hundred? Two thousand? Ten thousand?"

Wei Feng barely heard it over the blood pounding in his temples. A decade, in an instant? Distantly he heard the voice of his earliest instructors, speaking of the stages of cultivation.

Foundation Establishment is the stage of Discovery. Your Dao Foundation is made up of Dao Pillars, each representing a part of your Dao. It's not just about resources and effort anymore; it's about understanding your truth, your dao. Understand that well enough, have the shape of them set, truly set in your mind, and if you had the enough spirit stones you could fill all your pillars in an instant.

He had to have this. Drawing himself up, he sets a sneer on his face

"Do your worst creature!" It sounds wrong, even to his ears. Too fake and forced. "I will defy you no matter how many times you try." Better, truer, closer to his true convictions. "I will never let you in!" He thundered in finality.

It's terrible acting, really. A cliche, over the top show of bravado, clearly trying to cover up something deeper. The Silent King, a master of the mental arts, should see through it. Perhaps it would have, had it truly thought of Wei Feng as anything beyond a minor snack. Or perhaps it has simply never encountered someone eager to experience the hell it could inflict on its victims, and a large amount of bravado covering-up greed did not look much different to a large amount of bravado covering up fear, a mind that would bend and break.

The tiger's smile, which was all teeth, widens.

"We shall see…"

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In a construct representing his own mind, Wei Feng meditates amidst a sea of flames. Out of the fire rise five great pillars of concentrated white hot flame. The flames spin and orbit the pillars, and out of the roiling expanse of flames, small streams spin and fly, forging the barest outline of a sixth pillar.

Outside the flame sea is another, wetter type of sea. The hiss of steam from where it meets the flames is a constant din, resounding in his ears, clawing at his soul. Grinding away at his sanity. Every so often, the silhouette of a tiger can be seen in the water, backlit by the glowing light of a halo.

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"Give in and I can cease this endless noise.

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"Give in, and know peace and joy eternal.

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A hundred, a thousand times the voice speaks:

Give in.

Give in

Give in.

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"You're going to die, you know?" The voice is more languid, more casual now. A tiger's head formed of pure water pokes out of the waves, lacking a body. "I can feel it. Your brain is already overheating. Soon it will melt…"

Wei Feng opens his eyes. Above him, the faint outlines of a sixth pillar of flames are now almost solid.

"I have told you-" He stops, choking. A terrible pressure grows inside him, like there is a balloon being inflated inside his head, pressed against the inside of his eyes, his nose, his forehead…

"And by soon… I mean now."

The fragment of the Silent King's attention gave a last grin as the world faded away.

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In the real world, Wei Feng's head explodes in a shower of fire and gore. He hits the floor, the column of fire that was once his head setting alight several of the jungle trees around his body.

Seconds later, he sits up with a gasp, head reforming.

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Two weeks later.


A red-haired man stands in front of the Silent King, or at least a fragment of the Silent King. He is locked in an illusion.

If the Silent King had cared at all for human faces, it might have noticed the truly stupendous fake moustache he was wearing.

"I, Wei Fang, shall never fall to your temptations wretched creature!"

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A few seconds later in the real world, the redheaded man's head exploded in blood and fire.


Two weeks later

"I, Fang Wei, defy you!" A large man with badly dyed hair and a fake beard declared.

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Two weeks later

A man sized bird with feathers of fire screeched insultingly at the sky as a white halo began forming about its head. Then it exploded.

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Yes, Wei Feng was extremely happy with his new training method.



Crack(er) add on scene - Read the previous omake first

A broadly muscled man wearing a cheap dress strode confidently into the jungle.
"I, Ning Wei, Facesmashing Dominator…"

A white ring formed about their head and detonated.

Many universes away, on the body of a decaying turtle, the head of the Strength Purity sect was struck by the sudden urge to kick some Golden Devil's teeth in.

"Damn Heavenly compulsions." She muttered, forcing the urge away.

AN:

I wrote this before the hiatus, when I first read dreadgod. The Silent King's ultimate torture techniqe is basically the Hyperbolic time chamber of Wei Feng's Dreams, giving him time to contemplate the philosopy of his pillars... and the silent King literally doesn't give a enough of a shit to realise it's the same human turning up again and again. That's it. That's the joke.
 
If anyone ever does the monumental task of reading all the good seed side stories I would love to read your thoughts as you read. Hey maybe you can do some 'plot' to make it in character so your good seed review goes towards your omake count.
 
It wouldn't be a cradle without a way to game in decades of advancement.
It's something of a contradiction. Because if you game in decades of advancement than that becomes the new method and it is no longer decades of advancement. Which of course is the contradiction built into all xianxia. Establish a setting with immutable rules then have a protag that breaks them. Which of course can be tricky to write convincingly.
 
Gaius Antonius 94 - Feed The Beast
Gaius Antonius 94 - Feed the Beast​

The Abyssal Devil Bee Sect. A distasteful bunch to be sure, but an important piece of the geopolitical puzzle that was the Virtuous Flipper Region. Redmoon had ridden past horrendous things on her journey through this land; rivers of blood, brutal religious idols made from tormented living humans, massive insects whose form she struggled to even describe, so profound was their mutation.

And now here she was: being led into an unremarkable clearing nestled at the foot of a towering mountain. The people who brought her to this place were likewise not particularly awful-looking. Here and there she could see someone with macabre tattoos or extensive ritual scarification, but those were the outliers.

Tents, bonfires, cook's cauldrons, men gambling. It was the very picture of a mercenary company's temporary lodging. The King could almost be convinced this place was ordinary, were it not the kind of meat being cooked in those cauldrons, or the uncomfortable miasma that hung around each soldier in her spiritual sense - evidence of the curse each soldier bore as punishment for eating their own kind.

"Your lodgings are quite well-maintained." Redmoon commented, looking to the brawny woman to her left. "It seems I will be well taken care of here."

"You talk pretty formal. We'll have to wring that out of ya!" The woman laughed, patting Redmoon on the shoulder. "Oi, gather round everyone! We've got a new member, an Expert!" She shouted, drawing the gazes of the hundred and fifty or so soldiers present.

That got their attention. For a relatively unremarkable group like this, the arrival of a new Foundation-level Cultivator to their ranks was a sign of good things to come. Through the use of her Vessel Flower, Redmoon had cloaked much of her strength, appearing as a mere Three Pillar to the senses of those around her, which was still enough to have the mercenaries cheering her on.

"Oh? Did I hear that right?" called out a voice in the center of the camp. She turned, beholding an extraordinarily hairy man with a big beard and an even bigger belly. He set down a bottle of wine on the table beside him and sauntered up to Redmoon, looking her up and down approvingly. "You've got the eyes of an experienced killer, I can see that much. What makes you want to join our merry band?"

A valid question. The Hornbearers were mercenaries through and though, doing things their own way and not adhering to the standardized tactics of any particular nation. Though they primarily fought on behalf of the Abyssal Devil Bee Sect, they had no permanent loyalty toward them, and had worked for other Demonic factions in the past. The types who joined their group generally either couldn't get into a wealthier sect or had some dirty business that necessitated them living off the grid.

"Because I'd heard of your leader, of course." Redmoon replied with a coquettish smile, bowing respectfully. "Lady Greathorn, master of the Thunder Bringer, up-and-coming hero of the Great Era. I wished to fight under her banner."

Close enough to the truth. Lady Greathorn, a rather mighty Saber Palace disciple who had been transformed by the Blood Mists sixty-five years prior, had grown significantly in power since then. She was most infamous for stealing an extremely powerful secret weapon from the Palace as she fled, and had used it to rapidly advance her cultivation whilst amassing a motley crew of hangers-on.

That answer seemed to rouse some excitement in the Expert - perhaps he and his leader were close friends? The big man grinned, pressing his fist into his hand and giving her a bow. "The name's Beartooth, second in command of the Hornbearers. Pleased to have ya." He grinned, revealing a mouth full of unnaturally large and sharp fangs. "Unfortunately, our esteemed leader ain't present at the moment. She wanted some time to herself, so I'll handle your initiation process."

Redmoon smiled again, brushing her silver hair behind her ear. She considered her surroundings carefully as the old mercenary continued to blather on - this wasn't quite in the center of the camp, but she was still a decent way in. She could cross from one edge to the other in about four seconds when sprinting at top speed, and her spiritual sense could easily pick up and distinguish every qi signature present.

This position… it wasn't perfectly ideal. Redmoon had been hoping they would crowd in a little closer to her than this. Still, it would do. She took a slow, deep breath and held her hands a foot apart, open palms facing each other. The next few things, she did near-simultaneously.

The Blood Flower's restriction ceased, releasing her true, Kingly strength back into her body. Dao Emanations exploded out of her body at maximum speed, enveloping the entire camp and bringing most of those present crashing to the ground in convulsions, or at least driven to their knees. A few Experts had enough strength of will and body to remain standing, but they shook in place, taking a few moments to get used to this feeling of paralysis they had never before encountered.

Redmoon brought her hands together, releasing a crisp, sharp clapping sound. She visualized a sphere with a hundred foot radius with her at the center appearing around her. In this sphere, she could be wherever she wished, and space was no obstacle.

Finally, Redmoon brought her hands apart again and touched the tips of her thumbs and middle fingers together to create a circle.

"Wheel."

The Divine Wind whirled around the King in a mighty tornado, lifting her enemies and flinging them every which way. The noise was cacophonous; shouts of surprise, fear and pain, howling wind, tents being torn out of the ground, objects and people crashing into one another. The weakest cultivators died the moment they hit something, but even those who endured the attack found themselves in dire straits, their qi drained and their techniques not activating.

Redmoon wasted no time, drawing her blade and bisecting a man who was falling towards her, then turning to impale a woman who had sprawled on the ground to her left. A few more seconds, and the faster enemies would be on their feet and ready to fight; best to take those ones out first.

She swung her sword in a horizontal slash, aimed at the empty air. Clicking her tongue twice, Redmoon instantly transported herself thirteen feet forward and to the left, behind a man who had risen to one knee. She appeared mid-slash, beheading the enemy instantly, then did it again, moving twenty feet backwards and spilling the guts of a huge man with an equally huge mace.

Redmoon wasn't sure what Sanjit had called this technique, but she called it Folding Path. Using her own observation of him as a model, paired with the insight she'd managed to gain from his arm, she had reverse engineered it to an acceptable degree.

The secret was thus: take a teleportation technique, a type which was notoriously difficult to execute, and give it two restrictions: first, it could only be used within a certain area. Second, it required a clap to attune and two clicks of the tongue to cast. Next, decouple the tuning, the 'creation of the area', from the casting, the actual teleportation. By doing this, it enabled Redmoon to create a zone in which she could teleport at will by folding space between herself and the target area.

Slash, click-click, slash, click-click, slash slash, click-click, slash. It was a simple approach, but almost impossible to counter. Even without Folding Path, she was at least as fast as the average Great Circle Expert, and there were none of those here; her victims simply couldn't keep up with such disorienting movement.

This had become a standard tactic for Redmoon: fill the Vessel Flower to max capacity, giving her a large reserve of qi to draw upon. Second, approach the enemy, establish the area and hit them with her Dao Emanations at the same time. Third, suppress their techniques with Divine Wind. Fourth, use Folding Path repeatedly to quickly cut down every single hobbled opponent before they could do anything. The substantial amount of qi lost to teleport over and over was a pittance compared to how much she consumed from the enemies she cut down, keeping her and her flower topped up and leaving a very large sum to cultivate with.

Things were progressing faster and faster in a political sense, and so Redmoon had to advance faster than ever, removing evildoers and growing in strength.

She made sure to not kill them all efficiently. This was meant to look like the work of a small army, not a single person, so they had to die in many different ways. Bleeding out from lost limbs, cut many times but not fully dismembered, stabbed in the belly or the heart or the throat or the lungs. Cut in two at the waist, at the belly, at the chest, at the neck, at the head. Every time, all that spilled out was pure, clear water. They'd need to fix that too, to cover the bodies in animal blood to make it look right.

The fighters were put down. Next came the runners, those fleeing either for their own safety or to find their leader. Those too were cut down thoroughly. Finally came the hiders, those cowering in the ground, in tents, or beneath the bodies of their fellows. There could be no survivors to tell the tale of what really happened here.

This wasn't anything worth feeling guilty about - these people were murderers, marauders. All of them would need to be purified down the line one way or another, and it might as well be today.

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Precisely six minutes after Redmoon's work was finished, her temporary master arrived, a huge fish following closely behind. The pair came down the mountain, Scylla with dozens of bodies piled up on her back. The bodies in question were, she knew, disciples of the nearly destroyed Seven Divine Saber Palace, an expeditionary group Gaius had left to eliminate one day prior.

Upon his arrival, Gaius immediately got to work, unloading bodies from the back of his companion beast. There were no words of introduction exchanged, for this plan had been thoroughly discussed beforehand.

"He's got high hopes for this one, but frankly I don't see it." Scylla remarked, turning slightly so that she could look Redmoon in the eye with at least one of her own. "She's just a monkey with an especially good stick for hitting things. We'd be better off giving that lump of iron to someone special."

"The fact is, she can control it even though she's at the Foundation level." Gaius replied, picking two up and carrying them on his shoulders onto the scene. "How many Experts are good enough at sword arts to do that, strong enough to swing the damn thing quickly, and canny enough to steal it in the first place?"

"He's correct." Redmoon interjected, watching as Gaius laid out a body in between two Hornbearers. "From our prior observations, Lady Greathorn seems to be broadly skilled in a number of disciplines."

"Either of you could do more with that sword than she can now." Scylla replied, squirming as Gaius pulled two more bodies off her back, causing the weight to shift.

Gaius paused, laughing at her statement and flashing a grin. "You want me to give the first word to someone stronger than me!? I ain't that stupid, you mackerel."

Redmoon noted that statement carefully, and adjusted her plans accordingly. If she ever came across a sudden influx of new power, she would hide just enough for Gaius to believe her weaker than him.

As if detecting what she was thinking about, Gaius turned in Redmoon's direction. "Ya did good, real good." He declared, nodding in satisfaction. "Looks like the work of a Saber Palace attack, just like we needed."

"What about the ones thrown to death by the wind?" Asked Redmoon. "Those won't raise suspicion?"

"There's a Favored from Strength Purity, Hong Dandan. Uses wind techniques."

"Ah."

The two worked in uncomfortable silence for a while, Gaius carefully dumping out bodies here and there as if he were an interior decorator. Where appropriate, he splashed them or their surroundings with buckets of pig's blood. By the end there were about two Saber Palace bodies for every three Hornbearers.

With that taken care off, all that was left to do was disguise the evidence of Redmoon's presence, which meant more pig's blood, all over the Hornbearers and their surroundings. She couldn't help but feel uncomfortable, playing dolls with the dead like this. It felt almost as if she were killing them all over again.

"You've gotten pretty damn strong, Redmoon." Gaius remarked, futilely trying to flick off the blood which coated both of his hands almost up to the elbow. "But don't get cocky. There's a lotta folks out there who're stronger still."

"Thank you." Redmoon responded, bowing slightly in her fellow King's direction. "And rest assured, I have ideas for how I can keep improving."

"I'll be lookin' forward to seein' it."

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Once the stage was set, Redmoon climbed partway up the mountain, settling onto a small outcropping a thousand feet up and pulling out a telescope to watch the results play out. Up here, that whole scene all felt so very small, a micro-drama one was bound to miss unless they had a reason to turn in a very specific direction. All human lives were like this in the end; tableaus of suffering and impure desire, sweeping their souls up in a storm they couldn't hope to understand. Tiny fragments of a huge, chaotic world.

A figure approached, returning from a town built alongside a mountain stream some twenty miles from the Hornbearers' camp. The one person this whole charade had been constructed for, Lady Greathorn.

She approached at a pace that was not particularly urgent, unaware of what was waiting for. She rode a huge, speckled stallion, perhaps the only hint to her status aside from the unusual, elaborate pendant around her neck. Nothing about her disposition could be made out from here, but Redmoon imagined she must have been in a good mood.

That mood soon seemed to change as she sped up, urging her horse into a sprint no normal animal could hope to match. Perhaps it was because she heard nothing coming from the camp, nor did she feel any qi signatures.

Greathorn leapt off her horse, charging into the camp and shouting something. She looked around frantically, but found nothing but corpses. After a moment, Gaius rose out of the ground at the outskirts of the camp, now clad in his identity-concealing cloak. He called out to the despondent warrior, who whirled around with fury in her eyes.

Confronted by the deaths of her companions and cornered by an unfamiliar figure, Greathorn shouted something Redmoon was too far away to hear, then did what any sane warrior would do in such a situation: clasped her pendant and, in a flash of light, summoned her weapon.

Why was Greathorn such a desirable target for uplifting? Well, she was certainly strong, with a variety of potent abilities backed up by a mighty body. But the real reason was the weapon that had appeared in her hand just now.

The Thunder Bringer. What a beauty it was. Rough steel, so unrefined in places that it looked like craggy stone, beaten into place as best as any non-Nascent blacksmith could have managed. Less a sword and more a sword-shaped mass of brutal power. One side, - the longer side, for it curved slightly - was honed for cutting, though even the most elegant motion of a weapon like this would be more of a chop than a slash. The back was blunt, and housed a series of vents used for propulsion, if the wielder wished to strike with even greater force. The bottom third of the weapon degenerated into a lump, from which a chunk had carved out to form a handle. Leather had been wrapped around that handle and paper talismans had been fixed to the side of the blade, civilizing it just a little bit.

Could this really be called a saber? Or a sword? It looked more like a six foot long, two foot wide machete made of scrap iron. That said, in Redmoon's eyes, its untamed appearance only seemed to make it feel more dangerous and fierce.

This was not always a saber; rumor had it that the Thunder Bringer was forged from a broken-off chunk of a colossal natural treasure whose purpose could no longer be divined, found in an ancient ruin five thousand years ago by the then-Elder of Day. This could be a superweapon fit to be a Late Nascent's signature tool, if it were ever made into a more elegant and efficient shape. The waves of destructive power the Thunder Bringer could unleash with every swing necessitated that it be suppressed several times over, hence the paper talismans.

Of course, Redmoon could hardly make any of this out herself, from her distant position. Much of the weapon's appearance would only be revealed to her by Gaius later on, as would that of its wielder.

The one who owned the Thunder Bringer now seemed to be a good match for it, in some ways. Lady Greathorn was a large woman, standing an inch or two above Gaius, who was himself quite tall, and filling out that large frame with a substantial amount of muscle. Her eyes were rounder than most and her long-wavy hair was an indistinct light brown that faded into blonde near the roots - likely a sign of Golden Devil ancestry a few generations back. A vertical line of characters tattooed into her skin flowed from the back of her right hand to elbow in a spiral pattern, winding around her forearm like a serpent. They read 'Wish Upon The Blade'.

Greathorn was not dressed or equipped for battle at the moment; why would she be, when she'd been helping herself to the simple pleasures of the local festival? Men, women, drink, spices, souvenirs, all manner of wonderful things, fit to distract and occupy a young and lusty warrior. Instead, she wore only trousers and a simple tunic, a deliberate touch of unsophistication so as to better fit in.

Redmoon couldn't hear what her temporary master and the Saber Palace traitor were saying to one another from this distance, but it was clearly getting to Greathorn. From her body language alone, Redmoon watched as she went from shock, to disbelief, to sorrow, and finally to rage. She roared demands to Gaius, no doubt asking what had happened and why, and each reply seemed only to inflame her anger further.

The narrative they crafted was one of simplicity itself: the Seven Divine Saver Sect, wishing to regain their lost glory, had sent its warriors after Greathorn's mercenary company, hoping to seize the stolen Thunder Bringer. Backing them up had been a Favored from the Strength Purity Sect, paid for quite handsomely. Though they met unexpectedly fierce resistance, the Righteous warriors eventually wiped out their enemies. Unable to find the Thunder Bringer, which was nigh-undetectable to the spiritual sense thanks to its many seals, they were forced to leave, lest they be caught by any Devil Bee Elders in enemy territory. After all, with the war going as it was, nowhere was safe. The fabled Wise Man, who had already been watching Greathorn on account of her auspicious fate, now wished to aid her in getting her revenge.

The story wasn't perfect, and it required many things to be just so, but how else could one explain all the dead Righteous cultivators mixed in with the bodies of the company? How else would one explain the wide variety of injuries that had killed the company, as opposed to the Righteous, who had only died of blade wounds?

Most importantly, it was the kind of story Greathorn would want to hear. One with a villain to turn her anger against, a tangible force to oppose, and a reason to still live. Greathorn would accept Gaius' lies because that was the only way she could still live.

Why were cultivators so stubborn, so childish? It was because their way of thinking was inherently limited. As one advanced in cultivation, so too must they devote themselves to their Dao, and in doing so become stuck in their ways of thinking. A cultivator ceased to think like a rational human after they had lived a long enough life. Perhaps humans were simply never meant to live so long.

Since a cultivator could not truly change their way of life, then they would latch onto any excuse to continue living life the way they had built themselves for. They didn't change, it was their environment and their opportunities that changed. That was the rationale behind which Gaius chose his Blood Favored; those whose nature was suited for his plans, those whose environment would push them toward fighting the Righteous Alliance, and those whose opportunities would pull them toward gaining more power.

Greathorn, Gaius had said, did not have strong enough ambition to truly be great, despite her impressive potential. She needed to lose her remaining friends, lose this weak group she had kept around because she was too sentimental to enforce higher standards. She needed a strong motivation to attain as much strength as possible, and to cause as much damage to the Righteous Powers as she could.

Hm, how odd. Redmoon's fist was clenched - shaking, even. Perhaps she was more affected by this miserable work than she thought. Indeed, Redmoon was dissatisfied by the way the Empty King seemed to be changing, not that she had any choice but to go along with it.

Gaius' ambition and clarity of purpose made his soul shine with peerless radiance, but he himself was not immune to this light. He blinded himself with self-righteousness, with the long game, with an utterly insatiable hunger to achieve, to overcome, to conquer.

Greathorn was holding her blade to Gaius' neck now, the edge disappearing into the darkness of his identity-concealing cloak, but the King was unphased. Even as she shouted in his face, he looked on resolutely, his confidence unshakeable. Suddenly, the blade fell, as Greathorn submitted herself to the Wise Man's judgment.

Once, Gaius Antonius had asked Redmoon 'do you think I'm evil?' She had said no, and she would still answer in this way. There was a kindness in his actions, however unwanted that kindness may be. He did this for his people, for his family; he did most things for those reasons. Still, one did not have to be evil to cause harm. Gaius, who had aspired to Kingship his whole life, could not relate to other people. He could not see possibilities outside the path he had laid for himself, brick by brick.

Was that why he cherished ambition with such tenderness? Was that Gaius' way of expressing empathy toward others?

Greathorn's body shuddered as the Word of Power took hold, almost as if she were suffering a seizure. The Might of the Conqueror, Gaius called this one. The warrior would be incomparable to her old self in just a few minutes, once the change set in. Without those companions, who couldn't keep up with her and held back her progress, she would grow unabated. She would crush enemy after enemy with ease and consume them all, improving her rate of cultivation alongside her baseline power. In time she would become a thorn in the side of the Righteous Alliance.

Gaius' actions would increase the amount of evil in the world, without a doubt. Mortals would starve as a result of the war. They would be killed, or eaten, or used to satisfy the base desires of invading soldiers. The right thing to do would be to end the war, to reduce suffering. And yet, were the Demonic Alliance to face defeat, it would hinder Redmoon's progress. Only by attaining the power to purify this world could she save it.

Should she condemn Gaius? Should she hate Gaius? The answer was unclear. Either way, until her term of service was up there would be no choice for her to make.

"I'll save you one day too, Empty King. From your impure desires, from your madness." Redmoon promised, her voice somber and quiet.

She put her telescope away, not wishing to watch any more.

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Redmoon! I wanted to check back in on her. She's grown quite a lot in recent years, and will only continue to progress from here. I gave her a powerful new gimmick from that guy whose arm she ate, and also buffed her other stuff in ways that didn't come into play in this chapter. Definitely gonna do more with her soon.

I wanted to explore Redmoon's perspective on this spree Gaius is on, and the mixed feelings it's inspiring in her. Ultimately she'll stomach a lot so long as it's in service to her ultimate goal, while harshly condemning all evil outside of that. It's a hypocritical way of thinking, but aren't all messiahs hypocrites in a way?

It's surprisingly fun to get into the weeds of how a technique functions - the power system we've developed is fairly broad, but has enough rules that if you wanna yap about it, you have a lot to work with. Redmoon's got some weird abilities, so I felt it necessary to make it more clear how they work.

The title of this omake, 'Feed The Beast', has multiple meanings. The first is literal, Gaius is feeding Redmoon to keep her loyal and hardworking. The second is metaphorical, in the sense that Greathorn is encouraged to become more ruthless and brutal so that she can better make use of her Word of Power - and to make her burn out eventually. The third is the broadest - Gaius' actions can the flames of war, causing mass death and political instability
 
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Flavius Eirenikos 24 - Homewards Bound
Flavius Eirenikos
Homewards Bound

Flavius set out from Goat-Cat Spiral Village the next day. He considered just ignoring the message, but truthfully he didn't have much of a choice.

Flavius did not want a command position, even over a single Contuberniun. He wasn't very good with most people, and it would only get in the way of his training. For all Flavius was a Golden Devil, he did not have much affinity for the combat formations or arrays that made them such a powerhouse. More people to look after would just mean more things to worry about while on the mountain.

All that being said, Flavius didn't want to disappoint Patroclus. If his friend and mentor wanted him to take the position, it was probably for a good reason. And well, while he wasn't so worried about missing an opportunity he didn't really want, Flavius was nervous about what other trouble staying away could cause. Patroclus was right: Flavius was part of a clan. He could not leave it behind so easily.

And of course, there was the other side of the equation. Goat-Cat Spiral Village was going to war. With the location of the Butchering Chefs sect delivered, Shining Goat hadn't wanted to wait.

The man was uncharacteristically serious as he marshaled his sect. They were going to war.

And Flavius was in no shape to fight.

What was there for him to do here? Wait with everyone else too weak or injured to fight? Flavius would go insane if he tried.

He couldn't imagine how Crushing Jaws felt, staying behind to protect the village while the other foundation establishment cultivators were away.

So there was no reason to wait.

"You better come back though!" Qiang demanded, even as they were preparing to leave.

How skewed were his priorities, Flavius wondered, that he was focused on him instead of the fight to come? "You are the one who is marching towards battle. I will return, but you must be safe as well."

It was an impossible demand, but one he felt had to be made.

Qiang flushed, "You're the one with a hole in his stomach! Besides, I'm not a novice. Just because I haven't beaten you yet doesn't mean I can't handle myself."

Flavius just gave an approving nod, "I am confident you can overcome almost any blood cultivator you face within qi condensation, but you should still be cautious."

He felt at the wound on his stomach as he spoke, a reminder of his own hubris. If he could take such a wound from Man Eater, there was no guarantee the weaker Qiang couldn't suffer worse.

"I'll be careful," Qiang promised, his own eyes going to Flavius' injury, "I'll stay close to Qiao, we'll look out for each other."

It was a relief to hear.

"I will be back soon as well. I am being appointed as a Decanus of a Contuberniun, the leader of a tent's worth of soldiers. Given my expertise, I can only assume it will be dedicated to scouting or garrisoning the mountain passes. I will probably return within the year."

Qiang narrowed his eyes, "And if you're stationed somewhere else?"

"Talented cultivators are given a degree of freedom," Flavius shrugged, "I will make my way back as soon as I can."

"How do I know you're telling the truth?" Qiang asked, as if there was any chance Flavius was lying.

"I feel that I have grown stronger in a year here than I have in the nineteen years before. Maybe not in terms of my heavenstage, but the techniques I have learned fit me better than anything I've found in the Dawn Fortress."

With a nervous swallow, Qiang looked Flavius right in the eyes, "You care too much about cultivation. There's more to life than just getting stronger you know. Let me show you."

Before Flavius could react, he felt something soft press against his lips. It lasted barely a moment, but somehow Flavius knew the feeling would stay in his memories for decades. Who would have thought Qiang tasted faintly of blackberries of all things?

"There, now you have a better reason to come back." Before Flavius could respond, Qiang disappeared in a puff of shadowy smoke.

Flavius raised a hand to his lips.

He really would have to get back quickly. He didn't want to keep Qiang waiting.

After that, leaving the village was uneventful.

He'd taken a job as a caravan guard back to the Dawn Fortress. It was faster than moving alone on foot, and let him gain a few more contribution points as well. But perhaps more importantly, the caravan stopped in a very specific location.

Eirenikos Village.

It had been a year since Flavius had returned home. Even in that year, the village had grown further. Mortals truly did move much faster than cultivators. Though, perhaps that was not quite true. The last year of Flavius' life had been more full than any year previous, after all.

Whatever the case, Flavius was happy to visit his parents.

They were, of course, happy to see him as well.

"Flavius!" his mother cheered, "you've come back! And after only one year instead of twenty! How you spoil us."

The house looked the same as it had last time he had visited, the largest in the village and painted a pristine white. The sounds of chickens and cows roaming about and of farmers planting their harvest were almost claustrophobic in their nostalgia, bringing Flavius back to his childhood spent starving for something greater. Yet, now these sounds were mixed with the bustling of an active market. The village was well prepared for the arrival of the caravans, enterprising men and women exchanging surplus produce for trinkets and useful tools from the far-off city. Brought together, this new cacophony seemed to hold all the best parts of his youth alongside his present. It sounded like progress, and Flavius loved it.

But not all progress was towards something good.

Flavius' parents hadn't changed in appearance once in the forty years he had been alive. Oh, they had changed their outfits of course, and his mother liked to experiment with makeup from time to time, a rare extravagance in the village before it had gotten its name. But though they were both stalled out at the third heavenstage, both of Flavius' parents were cultivators. They had lived for almost two hundred years, and they didn't look a day over thirty.

But of course, last year they had looked no older than twenty-five.

"I'll try to visit more often."

She waved a hand in dismissal, "Oh I know how it is with young cultivators, so busy they forget their own families. Find the time to visit once a year and we'll be happy."

Despite her words, the tone of voice made it clear that she would very much prefer her son to visit more often than merely once a year.

"Don't give him a hard time, Phoebe." His father spoke up in his defence, "When you were his age you never wanted to talk with your parents."

His mother put her hands on her hips, "Yeah well, they were always nagging me because they thought I lacked talent."

"You did lack talent." Flavius' dad responded dryly.

"That's besides the point!"

Flavius watched wide-eyed as his two parents started to bicker. Well, they had been married for over a hundred years, it made sense they would bicker about meaningless things. Still, they usually refrained from even this much in front of him. Perhaps it was a sign that they finally considered him an adult?

As for the context of their bickering, well, it had devolved into something about there being too many cows or something at this point, but the start of it had been about his grandparents. It only now occurred to him that he had never met any grandparents, or indeed any family except for his parents.

"Do I have grandparents?"

It was an innocent question to ask, almost childlike. He had known he had grandparents, of course, but it was strange to put himself in the context of a larger family. No, not just strange. Hopeful.

His mother sucked in her lip, "You did, yeah. They died before you were born though."

And so his hopes, climbing over the edge of a cliff face, were viciously kicked off and dashed across the rocks below.

"But do I have any cousins? Any other living family members?" Even as he asked the question, the looks on his parents' faces told him the answer.

"The Eirenikos and Kamatera families were in steep decline long before you were born, and they were never more than foot soldiers to begin with." His father spoke matter-of-factly, as if the truth didn't cause him any pain.

"Speak for yourself, the Kamatera founder was a centurion! They managed to keep that position in the family for generations."

Even in defending her family, his mother kept herself separate. They, not we. Despite that, Flavius could not help but be interested. He had aspirations of rising far beyond a centurion of course, not so much because of a desire for leadership as the knowledge that such high rank would be an acknowledgement of his talent. Even so, holding down the centurion position in the family meant at the very least multiple family members had consecutively hit foundation establishment. There could be family techniques, or relics passed down from generation to generation.

Flavius had long struggled to find techniques suited for his use. Despite his talent in cultivation, he had zero talent with the weaponry favored by the clan. Gaius Wu had called his swordsmanship an insult to the art. His skill in pankration was better, but still not spectacular. He had been forced to make due with a hodgepodge of fighting techniques and qi arts that he was able to wrap his head around, but he had never won a battle because of superlative technique.

Of everything he had learned, his highest compatibility was with his self-created Golden Goat Arts, a derived combination of Golden Devil teachings and the techniques of the Shining Goat Sect. Those techniques fit him better than anything had in the past, so much so that he felt he had grown more in the last year than in the preceding twenty. But this was a new path he was forging, if one borrowing from others. He would have to blaze the trail while everyone around him went along well marked paths.

Flavius was happy to put in the work, of course, but despite what some may claim he did not work unnecessarily. He wanted to earn his growth, of course, but there was a difference between a shortcut and a more efficient training method. If his family had their own cultivation arts that stretched into Foundation Establishment, arts he was compatible with, who knew how much further they could take him?

Perhaps his mother saw the hope in his eyes, because she tried to soften the inevitable blow, "Who cares about ancestors, though? Flavius, you're more talented than anyone either of our bloodlines have ever produced. I'd say you were a once in a generation prodigy, but the clan is just full of freaks these days!"

Even so, he had to ask, "Is there anything that remains from that time?"

She shrugged, "Not that I know of. When the family's talent started to go, they ended up having to sell off a lot of stuff just to try and keep up. Didn't end up working, though. When your dad and I left the Dawn Fortress, well, there wasn't much we were leaving behind. If there had been, we'd have told you about it before you left town the first time."

"Any techniques?"

"None that survived. Nothing unique, anyways. The Kamatera family specialized in command and leadership, formations, that kind of thing. But they had no special constitution or unique affinities, and anything that stood out was incorporated into standard doctrine long ago."

So nothing of use at all. Why did it feel like he had lost something, when he had never had any family techniques to begin with? Even so, some part of him could not help but blurt out, "I've been chosen as a decanus."

It felt strangely important, now. Some connection to his family, perhaps, to hold such a position.

His mother certainly agreed, eyes brightening, "That's fantastic! Not that I doubted you would do great things, of course. I always said you'd be greater than either of us, didn't I Alexios?"

Flavius's father had been quiet, almost pensive, but the question brought him back to the conversation, if only to say, "You used to say he was more like a chicken than a boy."

"Well, he did always run around like his head was cut off, but after that!"

Words that had been hiding in Flavius' throat, without him even knowing it, chose that moment to break free, "I wish I had something more of you to remember."

His mother froze, all the joviality seeping from her body like warmth on a cold day. It was his father who responded first, "I wish we had more to give, but we are both talentless. Our only use to the clan is in maintaining one small part of one minor array."

It wasn't that Flavius didn't know that, but it still hurt him to hear. Now, it seemed, all the things he had thought but never voiced broke free, "How can you say that? How can you just give up? If you would just work hard, I could find you treasures to expand your life, and people can go from the third to the ninth heaven stage in under twenty years. I did more, and I have no talent at all. Then you could reach Foundation Establishment, and you wouldn't–"

Even now, he couldn't finish the sentence.

"Do you think we did not try our hardest?" his father's response held no anger, just exhaustion, "For over one hundred years, we tried to advance. Some things are impossible."

"There are pills that can help!" Flavius was shouting now.

"And you would waste the clan's resources on us? You say you have no talent at all, but you reached where you are in twenty years. You have more talent in one pinky than your mother and I combined."

"I worked hard for this, I trained harder than anyone!"

"Of course you did. You were born to two failures in a village with no name. You had to work hard to keep up with those with more resources, those who had trained since birth. But you are also talented, more talented than any man I have ever seen. Never doubt that."

The conversation was getting away from Flavius, he had to turn it back on what was important, "But you won't even try."

"No," his father said simply, "we won't."

Finally, Flavius was stunned into silence. He felt like he had gone to see a new side of his parents, and found something totally inhuman and incomprehensible.

His mother finally broke the silence.

"It's not like we're going anywhere just yet," she spoke as if he was a raging bull that needed to be calmed, "we've both got another twenty years in us, minimum. And I'll dig around to see if there's anything left over from the family, I haven't thought about them in a long time so I may have forgotten."

He barely heard her words.

"Alexios, why don't you go make something for dinner? You know Flavius is a big eater."

"The caravan leaves soon." He barely even realized he had spoken until he saw his mother wilt, slightly.

"Well, alright then, but we'll still whip you up something to go!"

Flavius just nodded.

The time until the caravan left was deeply uncomfortable. Flavius felt that there was a gap between him and his parents, now. Or perhaps it had always been there, but in giving words to that distance they had made it ten times as wide.

He accepted the offered traveling food without a word, and busied himself in helping the caravan pack. Even so, right before they left, he did turn back to his parents to say one thing.

"I will return next year."

His mother perked up, taking it for the peace offering it was, "We'll throw a feast!"

And then they left.

Flavius couldn't train much due to his injury. He tried his best, but a wound in the stomach was hard to avoid stressing. As a result, he had nothing to do but meditate, but he couldn't clear his mind. He kept thinking over that conversation, the feelings of loss he felt for things he had never had, or had yet to lose.

At the very least, by the time they reached the Dawn Fortress the wound was mostly healed. The skin that had covered the hole in his gut was still red and angry, but there was nothing else visible of the grievous wound. Whatever Ma's doctor had given him seemed to have sped along his healing process by a remarkable degree.

So it was that with his mind still spinning, and his body finally recovered enough for heavy exertion, that Flavius finally returned to the Dawn Fortress. He was more irritable than he had ever felt before. After the blood path assault on Goat-Cat Spiral Village he had been furious, but it was a focused anger. Now he felt directionless, frustrated at everything and nothing.

But he was well enough to truly train now, so of course the first thing he did was go to his favorite training ground. And of course, he found Captain Patroclus Narses waiting for him.

"Flavius, how did I know you'd come here? Gone for a year and you don't even bother to say hello to your beloved former Captain before going off to train?"

Any other time, Flavius would have been happy to see his friend again. It had been a year since they had last talked, after all. But this was not any other time. So, naturally, the first words that came out of his mouth were not greetings towards an old friend.

No, the first words out of Flavius' mouth after his return to Dawn Fortress were, "I would like to trade pointers."
 
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Year 299 - What, you wanna live forever? (Altar Lord)
Altar Lord retched. Only a few spots of blood, this time, along with a puddle of stomach acid. Barely visible in the complete black had it not been for the fact that his eyes had long-ago been replaced with those of a man born with a bloodline capable of seeing through many things. No... more blood than he had thought at first, there.

It was growing worse, then.

Whatever had happened with the Blood Mists had fundamentally unbalanced him in some small way, damaged the Blood Path itself for some temporary advantage. Sensible - the moment of truth was fast arriving and holding strength in reserve would mean nothing. The end of the world came in decades at worst, a bare few centuries at best.

He wondered if this was simply the natural state of those who concerned themselves with the fate of the world. The Nascents who greedily sought to arrive at the Great Dao, understanding all that is suffered so greatly for what they sought, and so did he. Blood Path Nascents as a rule did not suffer. Perhaps suffering was merely the price of rebellion? He had thought long on this when he was younger, but there was no use agonizing over it now.

He had formed himself into a tool to be used, a thin reed that could serve as lever for a heartbeat before snapping, but capable of altering the path of the boulder just the slightest amount all the same. There was no use in considering what had led to this.

So it was he was sealed inside a coffin, the design of which a spy had stolen from the Golden Devils. It limited his Qi from leaking out, and he was buried underground besides. It had been years, now, but he was patient.

If the Old Cannibal was not as capable as he had said, then this would all end badly. He had no choice, though. They needed time, desperately needed time. The Golden Devil was the stair, but he could not be properly traversed without the key capable of opening the door before it. It was no coincidence that such keys were arising according to his Lord's plan, but he had to push them further.

Ten thousand had died to bring him word of the Callista girl, and near thirty for Gaius, lives being spent like water to bribe and cajole others into getting what he needed. The Myia girl was there as well, and perhaps his second-best prospect. Less absolutist, though. The two who walked the path the furthest could be what the world needed if only they would permit themselves to engage in the sort of perversity such dogmatic people usually would not.
He coughed, flecks of blood spilling onto the metal inside his coffin.

A tap came down from above. A few more minutes then, perhaps half an hour.

It had been a tremendous thing to trick Wei Ning into this fight. She trusted her Celestial Compass and Heaven too much. A millennia ago that might have been wise, but fate was in flux. He could feel it under his skin, crawling and biting as it threatened to consume him for even touching upon its secrets. Not that it mattered. Right now, there was no true Fate, but two Fates duelling, a sandpiper and clam deep in battle as his Lord played the fisherman from afar. Things from all sides had been set in motion and so the Celestial Compass did not, could not know the truth. It would have led her here, but unable to find him, fixated on the next best thing. The Fate that would have been if he had not been buried here, protected by the bones of Heaven's greatest enemies.

Forging the entire coffin from Gravebronze had been a difficult thing, and he had personally hunted a great many of the Golden Devils to make it workable, but his theory had proven correct. Fate worked against him and his, but even their corpses served as a measure of protection against the machinations of Heaven. Oh, it brought its enmity as well, but he had long had that.

Half an hour past, and the coffin shook the slightest bit again.

A moment later the coffin split, and Altar Lord burst from the ground, Nascents surrounding him.

Old Cannibals three Nascents - the Bloody Fairies, as it seemed every grouping of women had to have some peculiar name - were battling against three of Wei Ning's.

Hu Ai, Lin Gengxin and Xia Xinyue were simply no match for Scarletglyph, Glorious Strike and Hu Wujiu. The Blood Path Nascents hadn't noticed yet, but Truepath Sevensong was hiding in the distance, merely waiting for the moment to strike. She was wrapped in a song making her unnoticeable, or rather one that meant she could not be noticed until the right moment, but he had learned her songs long ago.

A clever precaution, and one he doubted Old Cannibal had seen through. Four versus three was an easy enough victory for the Righteous Path, and if all they burnt was Qi, well, that was easily recovered by the Righteous while there were few enough cities for Old Cannibal to consume so easily.

No matter.

He looked over at his target, Scarletglyph. The Thrice-Greatest, the woman who had so masterfully defied his former disciple to protect Rina Callista. How frustrating that the girl still resisted her fate.

He spoke, quietly. The words had rung in his mind, covered in darkness and tinged with bronze, words that were not his own but he gave voice to to pay tribute to the power that had let him get this far.

"Let us see what absolute power is worth against plots and plans."

He did not know why the words resonated so, but the bronze coffin's fragments shook in delight even as he spoke.

She drew a sword adorned with arrays carved beyond what the human eye could possibly see, and he inclined his head respectfully. She had prepared well for the situation to come, but she had not prepared for this situation.

In truth, nobody really did. There were many arts among the Nascent Souls, many forgotten and benighted things lurking in places left untouched except by the corpses of those who had tried to delve them, but the simplest truths were best. Nothing could be had for free.

Qi was the ultimate expression of power, though it was guided by Fate. Fate was guided by Heaven, of course, which sought to kill him. Yet even he could exist for a time, with a lifespan mandated by some authority he could not understand yet despised, until the end of that lifespan ran out.

There were many uses for one's lifespan, but the truest and best he had found was this: the denial of Fate.

He had long thought on this, as the lifespan of a cultivator was set, except for the garnering of Heavenly Treasures. These were true treasures not merely forged from Qi but gifted from Heaven itself. Only by the intervention of Heaven could a lifespan be truly increased, not merely the shadow of one as a Will or the like.

However, this lifespan could be expended. This was not the same thing as merely growing old, but sacrificing your own lifespan as mandated by Heaven itself to accomplish some end. It mostly replaced Qi to a degree and was inefficient besides, but this particular loophole in reality allowed a cultivator to challenge Fate itself and win, if only for a moment. If you were being strangled by a cord, Altar Lord thought, this was tightening it around your own neck to shock your assassin for a heartbeat. You would die quicker, but perhaps the heartbeat might be of use.

He spoke as he struck.

"Scarletglyph. I apologise that it must be you, but to push the girl to her fate I have been looking for incentives. What better than her beloved teacher?"

Scarletglyph looked at him and prepared to speak, but he was already moving.

"Expend."

He had never had the flair for dramatics that so many of his peers did. When they were useful? Yes. But in battle? No, not unless you had already won.

He felt his lifespan drain away, possibilities receding and regrets mounting but as they did the fated moment which Truepath Sevensong had no doubt been weaving to kill one of the Blood Path Nascents slipped into his grasp.

A song that nobody had realised they were hearing changed, grew menacing, slightly wrong and cacophonous.

For that moment fate itself conspired to end Scarletglyph, and his fist shattered a blade that was forged far beyond the strength of his flesh.

A hundred years gone.

A second fist, this time destroying a fine emblem, surely a lifesaving treasure of no small potency. As it shattered, shards of it stabbed into Scarletglyph herself as she gasped and reached for something else.

Two hundred years gone.

A blade sprung from his aperture and he swung it. Truepath Sevensong's melody rose around them but it was wrong, the crescendo rising in horror even as he struck-

Three hundred years gone. Three heartbeats in which he defied Fate, controlled it to his own ends.

-and the blade came down, and with it Scarletglyph's head.

A fool's price, if he thought he had another fifteen hundred years to live.

Like mist in the morning the other Righteous Nascent Souls fled. He had no interest in them and let them flee. This was for the best. She was one of the firmest advocates of the relations between the Golden Devils and the Righteous Path, another step in igniting the war that must come soon. Another step towards pushing the Callista girl into accepting her fate to consume the remainder of this sorry Sea. Though… if not her, there were others. Still, she was closest and there was so little time.

Another step towards liberation.

A faint smile traced his face and he tossed the head to Hu Ai.

"Ai'er, eat the eyeballs."

She nodded at him and took them out with a tongue entirely too long for her mouth, wiggling into the sockets and popping each eyeball out before gulping them down and returning the head to him.

He sat patiently and waited. The other Nascent Souls were simply silent, which befitted their nature. He had no interest in the contemptible creatures he called his peers, except to use them where they were best suited.

A scarce twenty minutes later Old Cannibal arrive.

He raised the head and spoke to the man.

""Well?""

"Are you offering me a gift, friend?"

Altar Lord winced. The other man had to know how much he despised him and was merely enjoying the unpleasantness. No matter. He tossed Scarletglyph's head to Old Cannibal. No doubt he'd divide up among his 'students' and use it for whatever vile games he preferred to play, but the Qi was necessary to supply them with sufficient strength to continue threatening the Righteous Path. He spoke.

"Take it and use it as you will. I presume you can take care of the Pass yourself?"

Before Old Cannibal could speak, Wei Ning appeared before them, furious and panting. Altar Lord saw her move at a speed beyond observation and realised she was checking the Celestial Compass. How frustrating it must be, he thought, to be guaranteed a win and not receive it. He had never received such a guarantee so he could hardly relate.

She took a look at the gathering facing her, and blew into a whistle, a shriek of sound summoning her Seven-Striped Tome which she grabbed onto before it whisked her away, a burst of Qi making her temporarily but utterly invulnerable to the gathering of Nascents here. Using such a treasure would not be cheap, and it would take centuries before she could use it again if he had intuited its nature correctly.

Wise, though. Two Late Nascent Souls and three others beside? They might've even wounded her badly or even killed her.

He just hoped the war in the north was going well. A victory over the Qiguai or the Yuan would be sufficient to keep them well-fed and to regather their strength for further, more final strikes on the strongholds of the Righteous Path.

If they could win this war, they could hunt down the Favored before they grew to full strength, buying themselves enough time to win the true war.
 
This was for the best. She was one of the firmest advocates of the relations between the Golden Devils and the Righteous Path, another step in igniting the war that must come soon. Another step towards pushing the Callista girl into accepting her fate to consume the remainder of this sorry Sea. Though… if not her, there were others. Still, she was closest and there was so little time.

Another step towards liberation.
It's interesting that Altar Lords so willingly embraced his circumstances, or else the developments last turn would've utterly incensed him haha...
 
I wonder what Altar Lord would think of Callista now being Dao Seeker and hence being permanently taken off the board (if not through death)?

Bear in mind this combat is happening at the same time Rina is rising to Dao Seeker - Altar Lord is making plans based on incomplete knowledge. I think he'd be unhappy to say the least, but killing Scarletglyph served three ends. Firstly, to incense one of the Single Pillar cultivators to embrace consumption, secondly, to push the Devils and Righteous Path closer to war, and lastly, to weaken the Righteous Path.

Aim at many things and if you miss one you should still be fine!
 
Turn 16 Missions
Note: Core Missions are not Missions in the sense they can be failed. Rather, Cores who engaged in Missions offer bonuses to Nascent rolls or other quest rolls, unlike Qi and Foundation Missions which have set failure penalties and success bonuses. Failure is very possible and depends on the roll, but you are guaranteed to add to that roll. Core Formation Seeds are still welcome to decide on different things to do, this is just making some immediate options obvious.

The third mission has no Nascents applied, but Core Formation Seeds will instead contribute to a single future Nascent combat roll.

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Defense in Depth

You open the Contribution Board, and one task stands above all. You are a talent, an up and rising person of importance in the Clan. Such talents are rarely expended, but they are often tempered.

This task is simple enough.

"The Clan will pay for verified kills in the Yuan War, as well as a variety of other tasks. Current pricing is by region and will be adjusted on a weekly basis. Please see listing below. You can also purchase analysis on threats in those regions for..."

Simple. Fight in the war, winnowing out your enemies. What would Triumph or Disaster bring here? No doubt it is simple enough. The fall of fortresses and cities, or the holding of them.

Qi Condensation cultivators seem assigned to a small fort near Clearfell Fort as a priority protecting three hundred thousand mortals near the front, Foundation Experts seem to have been assigned to defend against some deep raids into Twinbone Undercity, though what purpose the Blood Path are seeking there nobody knows.

Core Formation Elders have their own Legion terminal of the Contribution Board, but it does remind them politely of the immense riches to be made (along with the absurd risks) of assisting the Clan in hunting down the location of enemy Nascents.

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Blood of Oak, Heart of Peace

This task seems more specific, but even more difficult. A few cultivators are sought to make friends with the notoriously fractitious Blood Oak cultivators, aiding them in various tasks to help with Lady Casia's diplomatic efforts.

Qi Condensation cultivators are to be sent to the Jabbers-Too-Much Tribe, (though a reminder: only ever name them as Blood Oak Sect cultivators as the tribal names are not for outsiders to use!) to assist in setting up some new Spirit Stone trades that are being raided by a number of Beasts which have been driven out of their former territory by a massive sprawling number of Yang Salamanders.

Foundation Establishment cultivators will work in the Marriage Trials of the Beautiful Sister Ice Soul Palace. Aspirants here are to be ritually married in a dangerous process that involves diving into the Palace itself to fight against tiny fragments of lost Nascent Will. The marriages are not legally binding, but there is currently a dearth of men travelling to the Ice Soul Palace due to a war against the Yang Salamanders in the south and these rituals are important to shore up the Wills in the Palace itself.

Core Formation cultivators may aid in a great weakening of the mountain Lord Fire-That-Kills. The Yang Salamanders there are using the eruptions to strengthen themselves drastically and attack the Coward Idiot Tribe, and are almost needing a Nascent intervention. This will aid the negotiations of Lady Casia directly.

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Stones for a Setting

Only a few cultivators were given access to this, seemingly selected by their Legates. Odd and peculiar missions that for most would not be at all linked together.

Qi Condensation cultivators are to be sent to the Colossus Footsteps Path to recover a Fire Aperture Stone. A stone of worth that can be used in times of worry to create a great cloud of fire, or even create beautiful images from fire with the cultivator's own Qi.

Foundation Establishment cultivators will work in the Jingshen mines, seeking the corpse of a magnificent Lumiscent Terror Beetle, a creature which has a glorious carapace capable of being forged into an amplifier for terror arts.

Core Formation cultivators on the other hand will be given over to the war in the Plains, finding alternate routes through the Pass in order to secure a previously-ordered Reversal Gem, a powerful gem of no small potency. Stolen by remnants of the Ma, they will need to track it down in order to secure a powerful measure usable only once by a Nascent Soul, but when forged into a ring it would allow them to briefly enhance their prowess in combat.
 
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Damn, there had been speculation that Scarletglyph was the Early Nascent that died to the ambush but this still hurts to read. If we won't work with Altar Lord, he'll just drag us down to his level with his dying breath and force us to fully embrace our mission. The RP might be less likely to engage in diplomacy with the Clan without Scarletglyph as our strongest advocate, but they're also in a more desperate situation so it's a wash overall. I'm keen to see the Clan finally break off and form a 3rd axis in the Great Flipper War if relations fall through tho.

Altar Lord is gonna have mixed feelings about what'll happen at least - Rina became a Dao Seeker instead of continuing to Heaven-Seizer, and the Clan managed to conquer Yuan Clan ahead of schedule - so it simultaneously frustrates the Heaven's Favored while preventing his own Blood Path from recovering with a Yuan massacre.

He spoke, quietly. The words had rung in his mind, covered in darkness and tinged with bronze, words that were not his own but he gave voice to to pay tribute to the power that had let him get this far.
AL's harnessing the Shadow seems like further confirmation that Soup Chef managed to hijack the Will Opposing somehow - we glimpsed a part of that in the 3 million word Shadow Boon with the "unusual whispers" for the "Greatest Peak" option. Our goals to overthrow Heaven might align but this is still foreboding.

Old Cannibals three Nascents - the Bloody Fairies, as it seemed every grouping of women had to have some peculiar name
I see Old Cannibal is following the true path of genocidal xianxia MC with a harem and taking insane gambles :V

He had long thought on this, as the lifespan of a cultivator was set, except for the garnering of Heavenly Treasures. These were true treasures not merely forged from Qi but gifted from Heaven itself. Only by the intervention of Heaven could a lifespan be truly increased, not merely the shadow of one as a Will or the like.
Hmm so to recap - LSTs are apparently tools that modify Heavenly Laws/Fate for cultivators, who have static lifespans because they use a system governed by Qi sourced from the World/Heaven. Expending your maximum lifespan allows you to defy Fate by reversing that dynamic and rejecting your allocated lot in life.

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A faint smile traced his face and he tossed the head to Hu Ai.

"Ai'er, eat the eyeballs."

She nodded at him and took them out with a tongue entirely too long for her mouth, wiggling into the sockets and popping each eyeball out before gulping them down and returning the head to him.
I wonder if there's any significance in AL telling Hu Ai to eat Scarletglyph's eyes. Were they special/similar to his own that are "capable of seeing through many things" so he wanted to deny them to OC? Just a peculiar tidbit I noticed since he went out of his way to do so.
 
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Qi was the ultimate expression of power, though it was guided by Fate. Fate was guided by Heaven, of course, which sought to kill him. Yet even he could exist for a time, with a lifespan mandated by some authority he could not understand yet despised, until the end of that lifespan ran out.

There were many uses for one's lifespan, but the truest and best he had found was this: the denial of Fate.

He had long thought on this, as the lifespan of a cultivator was set, except for the garnering of Heavenly Treasures. These were true treasures not merely forged from Qi but gifted from Heaven itself. Only by the intervention of Heaven could a lifespan be truly increased, not merely the shadow of one as a Will or the like.

However, this lifespan could be expended. This was not the same thing as merely growing old, but sacrificing your own lifespan as mandated by Heaven itself to accomplish some end. It mostly replaced Qi to a degree and was inefficient besides, but this particular loophole in reality allowed a cultivator to challenge Fate itself and win, if only for a moment. If you were being strangled by a cord, Altar Lord thought, this was tightening it around your own neck to shock your assassin for a heartbeat. You would die quicker, but perhaps the heartbeat might be of use.
Interesting. Looks like a description of Defying The Heavens.

Life-span burning... didn't Manuel have some kind of art for doing so, early in the game? May have been a divination art or something. With a Dao like his, exerting himself to Defy the Heavens might have been a way to stumble onto the Will Opposing.

Also... Qi, Fate, and lifespan. And Heavenly treasures, or energies, substituting for Lifespan. And Lifespan being able to substitute for Qi.

Interesting. One of the main reasons to cultivate is to... well. To seek immortality. And each new stage does increase your lifespan. But only by an allotted amount. ((EDIT: That would be the Heavens going "Okay, fine, you can have a bit more Lifespan" at each stage. But if it is the Heavens that allow you to live longer, then that means a Cultivator can burn his lifespan to effectively effect a Heaven-like effect. Possibly a Law? As, Law Creation can stave off any lifespan stuff; presumably via Fundamental Law stuff. Then again, Heraclius mentioned "If this mission had been capable of reducing my lifespan, I'd have begged off; tiresome and pointless" so... lifespan reduction and addition is something you can contend with the Heavens for.)) Hm. Qi, Fate, lifespan. Something related there.
 
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So to recap the situation:
  • AL spent 300 out of 1500 years of lifespan and OC took a Wound to kill Scarletglyph (Early Nascent) and ruin the Colossus Pass. The corpse is being split between at least 2 of OC's girls so it's mostly for Qi resupply rather than advancing cultivation.
  • It required 3 blows from a Fate-defying Late Nascent to kill Scarletglyph - really impressive considering combat is not even her main specialty, she certainly didn't go down without making it difficult.
  • The Blood Mists (Year 235) permanently damaged the entire path of Blood cultivation, notable enough to affect Altar Lord, so it might mean a debuff for Old Cannibal in the future. Not guaranteed, since Altar Lord is more directly affected as the instigator of the Blood Mists by sacrificing the Demonic Altar (which is could be tied to his cultivation).
  • We're still unsure of Bloodhammer's status, he was described as joining Old Cannibal by the Wei Princess interlude, but Old Cannibal mentions he's never even met him before, so Bloodhammer might still be an independent Blood Path Nascent. He will be our next juiciest target for a ganking if so, assuming he's still hiding in Sorrowful Blacksmith territory.
"Nascent Lords of the Righteous Path! Stay in reserve. If the Blood Path act, act against them. If you yourselves are trapped, flee towards me."

A grim smile grew on her lips.

"Now. Let us see what absolute power is worth against plots and plans."
"Let us see what absolute power is worth against plots and plans."

He did not know why the words resonated so, but the bronze coffin's fragments shook in delight even as he spoke.
I just realized Altar Lord threw Wei Ning's own words back at his victim lol. Poor Wei Princess is getting dunked on so many levels, this is what happens when you make INT your dump stat :V
 
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This was for the best. She was one of the firmest advocates of the relations between the Golden Devils and the Righteous Path, another step in igniting the war that must come soon.
Ah so Altar Lord is doing his best to deepen the divided between us Devils and the Righteous and trying to force our single pillars further down the the path he wants.

I don't like this at all, I mean I know our clan and the righteous will face off at some point but I'd rather it be on our terms and not someone else's.
 
Foundation Establishment cultivators will work in the Marriage Trials of the Beautiful Sister Ice Soul Palace. Aspirants here are to be ritually married in a dangerous process that involves diving into the Palace itself to fight against tiny fragments of lost Nascent Will. The marriages are not legally binding, but there is currently a surfeit of men travelling to the Ice Soul Palace due to a war against the Yang Salamanders in the south and these rituals are important to shore up the Wills in the Palace itself.
Why yes I would risk Shus life to Rizz up the local icy maidens.

Understanding lends itself to diplomacy after all
 
Ah so Altar Lord is doing his best to deepen the divided between us Devils and the Righteous and trying to force our single pillars further down the the path he wants.
Sure would suck if we negotiated to play Mercenary again for an invasion of the Southern mountains to fuck with Old Cannibal in exchange for the pass, their assistance in making it viable, and them looking the other away with the mountains in general wouldnt it?
 
Yan 17 - Blood Path Debt Repayment Scheme
Deep, deep in the desert a familiar scene takes place.

A blood path cultivator in the peak of Qi condensation stands over the prone body of another cultivator.

The thing that makes this particular scene noteworthy is that the pron body belongs to a foundation establishment cultivator.

Even more noteworthy is that this foundation established Yan who follows the single pillar path.

So how come a single pillar cultivator who managed to slay —- in but a single blow is losing to a no name Qi condensation blood path cultivator?

Well that mostly has to do with how much luck he had to borrow to slay the former in a single blow.

Needless to say, striking down a chosen haven costs much.

So here he is paying down that debt.

Normally Yan has much safer ways to repay his debt then fighting cultivators -even ones a full realm down- but all of them are slow and if he wants to be in fighting shape for the coming war he must accept some risk.

Of course there is risk and then there is risk.

And as the blood cultivator comes to strike the final blow and instead falls down into the sand as his very body forgets how to stand this is revealed to be the former rather than the latter.

A quick stab into the heart makes sure that there would be no surprises from his fallen foe.
and Yan heaves the body across his shoulder -there is no sense in wasting a perfectly good corpse- and starts making way to the nearest center of population where he camps for the last few days as he was hunting rouge path blood cultivators.

This was of course the exact second where a foundation level three element sand burrowing worm revealed itself and attempted to swallow him whole.

Thinking on his feet Yan tosses the body to the worm as a distraction and swiftly flees.

If he was whole this would have been a fight he'll have bet on winning but with the huge luck debt he has currently he would rather not risk it.

Which was the right decision as not even seconds later a core formation scorpion killed the worm and feasted on its remains.

By the time a clan core would come to slay the beast there would probably be nothing left of the three element borrowing worm, which is a shame as its body had some good materials for poison.

At least he'll get the bounty on reporting core level beasts.
 
Altar Lord winced. The other man had to know how much he despised him and was merely enjoying the unpleasantness. No matter. He tossed Scarletglyph's head to Old Cannibal. No doubt he'd divide up among his 'students' and use it for whatever vile games he preferred to play, but the Qi was necessary to supply them with sufficient strength to continue threatening the Righteous Path. He spoke.
Altar lord: this asshole must know how much I hate him and is enjoying the fact that he's too useful to kill.

OC actually: ow my head.
 
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