Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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I wonder what sort of surrender terms we should expect? We are likely going to have to give them something they can still cause us alot of damage if they work off pure spite like destroying their own mines.
 
Year 235 - The First Triumph
Manuel grunted as he rose into the air again.

This entire plot seemed pointlessly optimistic. Still, sitting within range of the Underworld Spirit Palace would free up his own forces to continue mopping up Jingshen forces without the fear of an enemy Nascent Soul popping up to strike at them, so it would serve its purpose.

Absurd.

Simply absurd.

Wangshen Fort had fallen soon after the All-Blinding Array had been detonated, Junjie Jingshen fleeing back into his Palace.

Despite the suffering it had caused, it had meant an end to the conventional war. There was no further challenge to him, not without his enemies drawing on their reserve.

It was, he thought, the madness and audacity of the juniors under him. He had demanded the cream of the crop, of course, but... Who could have known the results they could deliver? Such things did not happen, but such a strong crop of juniors had not been seen in over ten thousand years. So perhaps he had merely adapted to the times poorly.

The discovery and disablement of the All-Blinding Array had freed him to act as he chose.

Sheng Yu, on the other hand, had spoken to him. Words of dispassionate fury, with the Mask he wore keeping the pain and grief from seeping through.

"Give it to me, old man. Give me the dying and the wounded, those who can't rid themselves of this accursed Light Qi. We'll work on this Array. If it kills all of us we'll work it into something that'll strike back tenfold."

Manuel had granted his request, but had not in truth expected much. Still, giving purpose to the dying afflicted by the trap was something, and if they had succeeded, well... that would've been a great victory.

Almost twelve hundred of the afflicted had worked themselves to the bone, the furious light eating away at their flesh and minds even as they did, more and more Light Qi pouring into them as they repurposed the Array against their enemies. They could not be cured - no, that was not quite the truth. Manuel could've cured them, with a day of exertion or more for each. Such days he had spare rarely, and spending years curing a number of weaker cultivators was something he wished he could do, but the reality was otherwise.

So he watched them die, working on a broken array that spat searing light at them, killing them one by one, and then ten by ten. Finally, Sheng Yu completed the work himself, only forty-two of the survivors living to see it.

The true absurdity was the capturing of every single node of the All-Blinding Array without fail, allowing them to re-aim the thing. Most of the Light Qi hadn't been discharged, building up and spitting out due to the damage done to the Array. The Triumph there had been unexpected, but the Jingshen were cowards. Or rather, they were a pile of loose sand. Why die for someone if there was no gain to you and yours? The Clan was not like that, and in battle it showed.

He had tried to reclaim the heart of the All-Blinding Array himself to allow him to target the Jingshen, but it repelled him. Not once, but twice. Light Qi was... painful, and debilitating. For none moreso than him, as it stood opposed to everything he was. He spent three days vomiting up gobbets of light intermixed with darkest shadow, and did not hazard a second attempt. He might have been able to grasp the heart of the Array, but it would've shattered and broken.

Simon Euaerizo, on the other hand... the young man had managed to seize it. With the Array subdued and ready to fire, all that remained was finding a way to pierce the defenses of the Underworld Spirit Palace, ever so briefly.

Manuel had argued to simply use it, to fire it on the Spirit Palace, tear at its defenses, and bring the Jingshen to the negotiating table.

Sheng Yu had outargued him again. The earlier plan, to sneak into the Palace and defile the Jingshen treasures? They had a spy who had snuck in before, and some of the Clan's greatest elites to descend there. They would use the Contamination Spike and raise hell. In the moment it was triggered, the Jingshen defenses would be weakened and corrupted, not irreparably, but enough to allow the Array to fire through them and tear a great swathe into the Jingshen.

They would not bring the Jingshen to the table, Sheng Yu argued.

They would bring the Jingshen to their knees.

So Manuel waited now, and he felt it rise. The wave of contamination spreading through, and he rose further and further into the air, flying towards the Underworld Spirit Palace as he gave the order.

A blinding flash, and the many defenses, the arrays, the great fortress-tower that sat above the ground, all of them fell in an instant. Disabled. Impossible that they would succeed, that they would Triumph like this.

Manuel flew in, striking heedlessly with his spear for a few seconds before he saw them.

Old Jingshen and Lady Jiao, about to kill a few of his disciples.

Manuel smiled, and spoke.

"Release my students immediately. In fact, kowtow and cut off your arms and legs, and I'll let you flee to the Plains. Otherwise..."

His voice trailed off.

Just as Old Jingshen was about to reply, a figure appeared in the sky.

Thunder pealed, followed by heavenly lightning. The figure felt... familiar somehow, but before Manuel could figure it out, mists of blood arose, blotting out the lightning - and the sun itself.

Darkness born of blood fell across the sky.
 
It would appear that I underestimated the extent of the triumph. Maybe at least it seems like there is some outside interference happening.
 
So... we apparently got not one but two Triumphs, and then... Old Cannibal came back early? Or something? Or perhaps it is the Altar Lord? I'm really not clear who this interloper could be... or why they'd be striking now.
 
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Yeah... This is going to be a rather interesting turn for everyone else. Because the Gold Devils not only triumphed and took over the desert, but did so in an absolutely unbelievable single turn against a peer, whilst also gaining a second Nascent. The only potential fly in the ointment may just be what happens now, as this is definitely outside intervention.

The question is why, who (Old Cannibal or the Altar Lord?) and what are they hoping for...
 
Gaius Antonius Fate- The Cloud Caves
Gaius entered the Cloud Caves.

Floor 1
Gaius, in a moment of hubris, decides to simply avoid the obstacles on the first floor, his Earth-Gliding to his eyes sufficient to slip through the floor and move onwards. The walls and floor simply reject him at first, and he is spat out at force, mudded and painful Qi thrown into his meridians. He finds himself Lightly Wounded for his trouble, and must prepare to try again.

Thankfully after an embarrassing start, Gaius clears his way through the first floor. He harvests the Echo of Song (+1 Impact) from a creature that appears to be growing a new blade from its body, gnawing on minerals and plants alike to form a proto-Songblade much like the one Konstantinos gained.

The Echo of Song is almost conceptual, the potential of a musical note sung by a blade yet to come into existence.

Floor 2
The second floor proves no more troublesome, a bunch of powerful Carrion Bats slain, each yielding a Carrion Cores (+5 cultivation years), powerful Beast-Cores that allow the consumption of other beasts quickly.

Floor 3
The third level contains a peculiar trial, the Darksilk Spiders. Their threads are being spun to replace the treasures once taken, but they are spun out of the skein of fate, their ability to hit and strangle their enemies gained by constraining the fates around them.

A single thread of Darksilk Gaius obtains from his trial, representing the narrowing of the possibilities of his enemies, and the expansion of his own. (+1 Impact)

Floor 4
At the fourth level, Gaius finds a small cache of blood, and on finding it he is compelled to drink it. He finds himself strengthened (+5 cult-years) and moves on.

Floor 5
The fifth level sees him finding the Trueblood Tree, the source of the former blood. A powerful tree, it does not permit him to get close, but sprinkles blood on him, healing him of his Light Wounds.
(1-step heal)

Floor 6
The sixth floor sees him walk into a Bloodforge Array - the same Konstantinos was led into many years ago. While not fully recharged and refilled with blood, the reward is sufficient to push him forward by 10 cultivation-years.

Floor 7
The seventh level is... peculiar. He has a vision of the past, or perhaps it is the future. He is dying, and around him all he loves are dying. Standing above him is a grim-faced old man with a face of bronze. He tries to fight the vision and it fades away, fate twisting as he proceeds onwards.
Gain 1 gimped reroll (reroll with -30 penalty in the event of a failure)

Floor 8
On the 8th level, he simply butchers his way through the lesser creatures in front of him.
As a reward, he gains a single piece of Invisible Wood from the Trueblood Tree, and shapes it into the Invisible Arrow (+1 Impact).
Not overly powerful, but incredibly hard to detect.

Floor 9
On the 9th Level, he faces a few Qi-Draining Bats from the level above, and finds them to be no great challenge. Able to use his Earthgliding to move into the earth a way, provided he does not try and breach the barrier between levels, they are unable to wear him down.
As a reward he is infused with healing light, which sits under his skin in waiting.

Floor 10
At the 10th level, he faces the Qi-Draining Bats in their tens of thousands, far more than Konstantinos faced.
But they are no match for him, and he strides through. Where Konstantinos found the Vial of Ascension Blood, Gaius found something else. A single droplet of pure blood, that leapt into him and infused itself into him. He fought it, his will struggling against it until he mastered it. With it came memories of wielding a powerful Stone Spear, using it to strike down a Spirit Severing cultivator as though they were nothing. Memories of the Spear drinking their blood and power, their memories becoming his. He remembers being a cultivator of the Fifth Sea, though his name escapes him.
He remembers the Hunt, slaying a demon in Spirit Severing. Some old ghost who had slept under a mountain for thousands of years, hibernating to save the other demons in times of trouble. Preparing for his victorious return to his own Sea, and seeing...
Something. Even the fragment of memory leaves him in agonizing pain, and Gaius finds himself close to death, unable to move. Desperately, he spits the blood out before it fuses into him, but the fragmented memories remain.
He is unhurt after it leaves him, but a few more seconds and he would have passed away.
Only his will to resist saved his life.
Three levels were practically unseen by Jin Muyi, and the records Muyi left were few of these places.

Floor 11
The eleventh level is simply fire, a massive conflagration of misery and death. Earth-gliding serves him well once again. From it he gains the Forge-Fire (+2 Impact) a fire that can be bestowed on any weapon he uses, allowing him to shape and reshape it at will.

Floor 12
The twelfth level is difficult. A clone of Gaius is created, but the mechanism that does so is incomplete. Improper.
It creates something at Core Formation strength, a clone hunting him down relentlessly.
(Gimped reroll used)
The old man who was about to kill him in his vision whispers to him, guiding him on a path to avoid it through the earth and around other creatures. Gaius runs to the end of the trial just as his clone is about to strike him down, and it dissolves into a puddle of Qi and flesh.
However, from this he gains enlightenment into the nature of the Core, and gains +20 cultivation-years from the burst of Qi.

Floor 13
Finally, the thirteenth level. It is empty, and seemingly vast and endless.
Time itself slows, and Gaius spends five years of his life there, though he experiences five hundred. It tests him in comprehension of the Dao, strength of the soul, and ability to retain his self.
The majority of the life he has lived has been in this endless void of contemplation and testnig.
It is designed to shatter his Dao, to weaken his resolve, to test him to the very limits, and yet he comes out after five hundred years unbowed, the madness of a King overpowering the normal madness of mortal men.
At the very end is a single character floating in the air, blood-red.

Climb, scramble, clamber. Ascend.
Tribulation treasure gained.
And ascend he does. Tribulation lightning strikes, and Gaius steps outside of the Caves for a moment, the symbol taking him... elsewhere.

In the sky across the entirety of the Region, every cultivator feels the heavenly lightning mount and aim to slay him, sees the blood-red mists of something insidious and malicious protect him.
When he returns, the character has changed.

He touches it, and is struck by a vision of his own ascension.

There are no insights to be gleaned there, though, not for him.

Floor 14
He is powerful, but this power comes with new requirements. His usage of Qi is thousands of times what he consumed previously, and while his Dao-effects are absurd, they take some getting used to. A tremendous creature forged from human body parts - eyes and lips and feet and teeth - is slain by him easily, but there are two to face.
He is exhausted and unable to move, unused to his new power. It crushes him into the ground, Wounding him in the process. Suddenly, light flares, healing the worst of the damage so that he's left only Lightly Wounded instead.

A few moments later he is recovered, and tears it to shreds.
The true weakness of a King is not his power but his endurance, not the size of his army but that of his treasury.
A lesson others learned more slowly, but Gaius must learn quickly.
He consumes the beast-core, gaining +5 cultivation-years.

Floor 15
The 15th floor contains the Burning Clouds, but they are no match for the Earth-Glider. Despite being a King, his trusty technique is more useful here than overpowering the environment.
He is given the Blessing of Fire (+1 Impact), allowing him to reduce damage from fire, and absorb limited amounts of Fire Qi.

Floor 16
The 16th floor is a series of golems, but he overwhelms them. They seem to come back to life relentlessly, he dominates them, and after their third defeat they are compelled to obey him. Their leader offers him its single Golem-Core (+1 Impact) there that allows him to create and command a single golem at a low Foundation Establishment level himself.

Floor 17
The Poison Jungle is dangerous - Jin Muyi consumed it more than it consumed him, but for Gaius it proves difficult. He reaches the end, his body filled with poisons he is barely holding off. At the end is the Purifying Antidote, which fuses with the poisons and grants him +5 cultivation-years.

Floor 18
The 18th floor is a series of poison traps, but the Purifying Antidote allows Gaius to slip through easily enough. Another droplet of blood awaits, but this one is a simple memory of a technique, fusing into his body and granting him the Future-Poisoning Dao Strike. A strike against an enemy that sits inside the folds of time insidiously, waiting until their weakest moment, to strike at their Dao when they are most vulnerable.
(+1 Impact).

Floor 19
The 19th floor is a series of puzzles, which Gaius solves easily enough. Most of these puzzles were solved by Gaius years ago in his time of enforced solitude on the 13th floor, and he moves through with ease.
The healing light returns, but this time it is blood-red, infusing itself into his body for later use.
(1-step heal)

Floor 20
On the 20th floor, a creature of immense power faces him, a reflection of himself made of fire and wrath and light. It is his former Core clone, but made more powerful, more vengeful, and he is forced to fight it. It Wounds him as he runs low on Qi.
He manages to strike it down, its Core facing his Dao and shattering against his will. Here he gains an insight into cultivation once more, his clone made of Qi he can absorb with ease, bringing him another +15 cultivation-years.

Floor 21
The 21st floor is easier, offering a drop of blood lit aflame. Despite his protests, it enters him, and enhances his soul. The Will of Fire (+2 Impact) grants him a defense against soul attacks - those who target them with him are lit aflame themselves, their souls suffering as they strike at him.

Floor 22
The 22nd floor is a Qi-draining maze, a true trap that could well kill him. Yet he survives, and learns to control his endless use of Qi, mastering the passive drain of his new powers as well as he can. A maze Muyi was trapped in for years contained Gaius for merely three weeks, and at the end he gains a Young Qi Seed, a seed not nearly finished growing (+10 cultivation-years).

Floor 23
The 23rd floor is nothing to him. He butchers his way through, his new abilities making a thousand Foundation foes easy enough to butcher. He finds a Vine Fragment here, an echo of a lost hero. It does not remember anything, but it has enough energy to protect him in his direst need, if only a little (low-power LST - 1 stage only).

Floor 24
From the 24th floor, he descends past a giant. It never sees him, and he moves into a seal. It whispers to him of futures yet to come, futures that may not pass. A strange calm settles on him, and he moves with new purpose. (1 gimped reroll, -30)

Floor 25
On the 25th floor there sits a fine teahouse, with waiters made from corpse-pieces and overgrown with plants. They invite him in.
In there sits a man, the very image of Jin Muyi.
He inclines his head to Gaius, and at that moment he is overpowered. His will, his strength, his everything are nothing compared to the will of this creature.
It invites him to sit.
"I am Ji Shin", it speaks. As it speaks, the form shifts, taking that of a woman. Then of a Fifth Sea cultivator. Then of a Clan cultivator, aged and bent. Then a baby, then a giant of a man, then a beautiful girl.
The words it speaks he cannot truly hear, and as each once is spoken he forgets it, unable to hold onto the truths to be delivered.
It looks at him, disappointed.
"You are my Master's legacy?"
It sighs, and shakes its head.
"If you cannot understand this much, I don't see what the point of you is. Here."
The tea-leaves float to the surface of the pot, forming two characters.
消耗
The characters are absolute, and Gaius tries to comprehend them. He cannot. He wakes up bleeding from the nose, the symbol echoing in his mind. Almost if they were written ironically in some way, despite being completely honest.
The floor is empty, and he continues on his way.

Floor 26
The 26th floor should have been difficult, but it is not. Core Formation for a Single Pillar King is always a roll of the dice, and here it is ease. A single Core Formation owl, but recently hatched from an egg. Gaius kills it, eating another egg he finds (+10 cultivation-years).

Floor 27
The 27th floor is misery entire. An invisible creature stalks Gaius - inaudible, unseeable, unsmellable. Only the tiniest fluctuations of its Qi reveal it, and it strikes him down again and again and again, carving into him.

His vision fades, and the feeling he has leaves him, and as the first blow comes he counters it, finding the creature as it strikes in vulnerability. He kills it in a single blow, gaining +5 cultivation-years from the explosion of Qi released upon its death.

Floor 28
The 28th floor is, as it so happens, a giant cauldron. To cook him with flame, and to tenderise him with blows from cannons afar.
Still, it seems awfully placid, barely confronting him at all as he forces his way through with his Dao-sorcery.

At the end he gains a piece of Seer Jade (+1 Impact). Predicting the future is difficult at best, and even a Seer's Jade will only aid in such scrying.

Floor 29
The 29th floor is a hellscape. Thousands upon thousands of golems, of bloodthirsty plants, of rampaging animals.
All in Core Formation levels of strength.
Gaius is overwhelmed, suffering wound upon wound, beaten back to the door after being impaled through entirely. He would have been Crippled if the Vine Fragment did not suddenly extend in a powerful burst, sending him to the door far faster than he otherwise would. Still, he takes enough injury that he's Badly Wounded.

A second attempt is made, and he manages to make it through. The healing light returns, deeply blood-red, almost black.

He feels a lust for blood, a lust to consume arise, but it heals him a little as well.
1 heal-step.

Floor 30
The 30th floor is a restaurant. Nine floors, each requiring him to eat a meal that is harder to keep down than the previous. One meal nearly kills him, another requires him to roll dice - and if he does not roll three sixes, he must eat it again.
He spends a year unluckily on the eighth floor, eating almost thirty meals a day.
By the time he is finished, he has eaten nearly ten thousand roast duck dishes, each seasoned with far too much horseradish.
The ninth floor he dominates with relative ease, and reaching the end of it he meets Ji Shin again.
The plant-monster cuffs him around the ear.

"Idiot. If you eat in the restaurant, you never learn to cook."
With a single blow Ji Shin demolishes a wall, and drags Gaius down to the ground, where he brings him to a small and simmering pot.
"You know why you'll never amount to anything? Because you're on the thirtieth floor of another restaurant. You're a useful puppet, but you can't be more than that."
The plant-man looks exasperated.
"None of you can. You're waiters, you're chefs, you're servers, but you don't decide. None of you can decide anything. Fate-"
His voice cuts out.
Ji Shin speaks words Gaius knows, but no meaning can be extracted from them.
"-So that concludes the explanation. The Heavens, my master, everything. Do you understand?"
Gaius looks at him blearily, and the soup bot boils over. A bolt of lightning appears and burns the plant-man into nothingness.
A cloud of blood rushes up, consuming the lightning, repairing a gaping hole of light that had appeared.
The soup ingredients boil to the top, forming into another pair of symbols.
解放
Gaius is still unable to move, and the soup spills over onto him.
It burns in a way that no water should, searing through his being, surely Crippling him if it wasn't for the use of a treasure. As it was, he is Wounded instead.

Floor 30
The 31st floor is empty, Heavenly Lightning striking down beast after beast as Gaius walks through.
Clouds form from nothing, divine power clashing with the blood-red fog that seeks to overwhelm it.

At the end, the blood-red mists surround him, fusing into his body as he descends. (+10 cultivation-years)

Floor 32-33
The 32nd and 33rd floors are much the same, a war between the Caves and Heaven itself, though the Caves begin to win as Gaius dodges through.
At the end of the 33rd he finds a hilt for a sword. Next to it is a note. "I thought you might need this."
The Swordless Hilt (+2 Impact) can bear any blade.
The note crumbles to dust as he touches it.

It had been there for thousands of years, if not longer.

Gaius is weakened drastically, the Caves draining his power to form a single droplet of blood. It hovers next to him, prepared to save him.

Floor 34
This proved prescient, as on the 34th floor he faces a hundred of the previous Core Formation owls he fought before.
Quick and angry, the use of his blood droplet allows him to avoid certain death, though he is Badly Wounded.

On a the second try he sneaks through, too weakened to fight them outright. The caves have returned to normality, and with this victory comes a single egg at the peak of the Core Formation stage.
Gaius somehow knows how to cook it perfectly - he does, gaining +10 cultivation-years.

Floor 35
The 35th floor is difficult - a maze that takes him a year to solve. The qi-draining atmosphere appears to ignore him, and he makes it through, gaining a gimped reroll (-30).

Floor 36
This piece of fate is immediately used on the 36th floor, and Gaius is struck again. More wounds leave him Crippled entirely.

One Single Pillar King facing ten thousand Core Formation creatures of monstrous strength, each bent on killing him. None of them, ironically, can sense under the soil.
At the end of the floor he is given a single piece of Bloodmetal (+1 Impact).

An excellent foundation metal for a weapon.

Floor 37
The 37th floor has more monsters, but they let him pass, giving him +5 cultivation-years worth of Qi as they bow to him, clouds of blood surrounding them and herding them away.

Floor 38
A massive Flame-Spirit faces him here. Yet its weaknesses were three - speed, thought, and will. Muyi was not a cultivator of will, and Gaius was.

A contest of wills and souls, with Gaius succeeding. The flame-spirit assists him through the trial, unlocking a massive gate of flame.
Inside is a cloud of black blood, denser than water.
It heals him completely.

Floor 39
Gaius again finds himself struck down on entering, an early Nascent Scorpion idly throwing a pebble at him every ten seconds. Badly Wounded, he dives into the earth.

The second time, however, he sees the rhythm of the pebble-throwing, avoiding them one by one despite their impossible speed and power. At the end of the floor the scorpion comes to meet him.
It stings him, venom flooding into his brain. Prescience arises, and he can see the future. Only briefly, but within this space he is all-knowing (reroll).

Floor 40
Gaius enters the fortieth floor.
It is... odd.
Space is twisted, time seems to run backwards in places he can see and carefully avoids to treading near.
He dodges a spear, and then a bolt of pure fire strikes out through what seems like a hole in the world.
"Little spy. You think yourself capable of looking at the past of a Callista? Know sorrow for your arrogance."
It Lightly Wounds him the bolt losing energy as it does so. To travel so far into the future and harm someone?
Impossible.
Time cracks as he does so, the room splitting in two. Ji Shin appears again, haggard and aflame.
"Idiot. Idiot. Idiot. You lack comprehension and talent. I said this plan would never work and yet I demanded it all the same! I said. I said. I said. I am. I said."
His words trail off, repeating for almost a minute.
The loop of time he was trapped within degrades, and he appears again, flesh rotting even as it burns.
"Broken time. Broken space. Broken Laws. Broke it all. Idiot. Idiot. Why can't any of you see?"
"Heaven's characters. Heaven's speech. The Imperator and the Emperor. Not at all the same. But the words. You can't understand them if I speak them because then they're true."
Ji Shin reaches down and traces characters on the ground.
保存它们
"If you try and tell the truth it doesn't work. Never works. Kill them all. Kill them all. You have to lie every time. Lies wrapped in lies wrapped in lies except all the lies have to be true. If you can't tell a true lie than you can't ever tell the truth."
His body shakes, and an arm falls off.
"Ninety-Nine Seas."
With the last word he speaks, lightning obliterates him.
An echo of those words is heard, but in Gaius's mind alone.
 
Thunder pealed, followed by heavenly lightning. The figure felt... familiar somehow, but before Manuel could figure it out, mists of blood arose, blotting out the lightning - and the sun itself.

Darkness born of blood fell across the sky.

Finally, the thirteenth level. It is empty, and seemingly vast and endless.
Time itself slows, and Gaius spends five years of his life there, though he experiences five hundred. It tests him in comprehension of the Dao, strength of the soul, and ability to retain his self.
The majority of the life he has lived has been in this endless void of contemplation and testnig.
It is designed to shatter his Dao, to weaken his resolve, to test him to the very limits, and yet he comes out after five hundred years unbowed, the madness of a King overpowering the normal madness of mortal men.
At the very end is a single character floating in the air, blood-red.

Climb, scramble, clamber. Ascend.
Tribulation treasure gained.
And ascend he does. Tribulation lightning strikes, and Gaius steps outside of the Caves for a moment, the symbol taking him... elsewhere.

In the sky across the entirety of the Region, every cultivator feels the heavenly lightning mount and aim to slay him, sees the blood-red mists of something insidious and malicious protect him.
When he returns, the character has changed.

He touches it, and is struck by a vision of his own ascension.

There are no insights to be gleaned there, though, not for him.
HAIL!

GAIUS ANTONIUS! HEIR OF THE SOUP CHEF!

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Here's the proof.
"I am Ji Shin", it speaks. As it speaks, the form shifts, taking that of a woman. Then of a Fifth Sea cultivator. Then of a Clan cultivator, aged and bent. Then a baby, then a giant of a man, then a beautiful girl.
The words it speaks he cannot truly hear, and as each once is spoken he forgets it, unable to hold onto the truths to be delivered.
It looks at him, disappointed.
"You are my Master's legacy?"
It sighs, and shakes its head.
"If you cannot understand this much, I don't see what the point of you is. Here."
His master's legacy, huh? Well, that sounds a whole lot like a successor.
"Idiot. If you eat in the restaurant, you never learn to cook."
With a single blow Ji Shin demolishes a wall, and drags Gaius down to the ground, where he brings him to a small and simmering pot.
"You know why you'll never amount to anything? Because you're on the thirtieth floor of another restaurant. You're a useful puppet, but you can't be more than that."
The plant-man looks exasperated.
"None of you can. You're waiters, you're chefs, you're servers, but you don't decide. None of you can decide anything. Fate-"
Ji Shin, Soup Chef's disciple, wants to teach Gaius how to COOK.

And what is Soup Chef but a Chef? Sure, he ate the Turtle Child, but ultimately he used it to make a Soup before anything else.

He even tries to get information across to Gaius specifically even at risk of tribulation lightning obliterating him.

Hell, he does it TWICE, considering it happens again at the end!
 
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Year 235 - The Great Era Approaches
Read Gaius's account here

Bolts of blood-red lightning descended, deflected from the figure in the sky.

Manuel shook his head. He didn't even speak. He could only think of one person from the Clan who could be doing this right now, and Gaius Antonius was the one. The rolling clouds of blood in the sky were terrifying for what they might foretell, but he avoided that thought for now. Hopefully he wouldn't have to kill another of the Clan's most promising seeds. How he had summoned a tribulation of lightning and blood that was visible to the entire Region, he didn't know. He hoped it was Gaius, in any case. If this was Old Cannibal ascending to Spirit Severing, they were all doomed.

As the sky darkened further, he felt... empowered. Stronger than he usually was. Conversely, he looked at Old Jingshen who spat out some sort of response to his earlier demand. No, the other man was weaker than he should be. Slower. As if he was... disconnected from something, somehow.

Normally the threads that connected Nascent Souls to the web of fate - or whatever it was he felt - were beyond grasping for him, but not at this moment. At this moment he could feel the thread, and he struck at it, all of his power into one concentrated blow. It trembled and splintered, and Old Jingshen's eyes rolled back in pain, his body going limp.

Manuel saw no reason not to strike a third time. The Stone Spear hit what it was aimed at, and he aimed at the core of Old Jingshen's very being - his dantian.

The other man couldn't resist, and it shattered under the force of his blow.

Wait.

That... seemed wrong. Even with all the power available to him, shattering Old Jingshen's dantian and crippling his cultivation in a single blow? Manuel grasped for secrets and they came to him easy. A scene of Junjie Jingshen weeping, crippling himself to save a daughter that he loved. Never telling her of the price that he had paid, never letting her know the weakness within him. And he was weak, weaker than Manuel could've imagined.

A single definite blow and the Spear drank.

In moments Junjie Jingshen began to age, his body becoming papery, his skin sinking into his eyesockets, his veins going blue and pallid. The little man hung there, helplessly, as the Stone Spear finished him off.

For a moment, Manuel considered sparing him.

He felt the old man's soul begin to slip away, trying to go to the same place to Lady Jiao's had gone prior. He stabbed again, the haft of the spear interposing itself between Old Jingshen's soul and the chamber of rebirth he sought to go into. Blocked, it tried to slip away, and Manuel brought his will down. The disembodied Nascent Will of a dying old man was easy enough to shatter, and with a single motion he did so.

Junjie Jingshen died.

He looked down below, and saw Jingshen Jiao grappling with some sort of ghost. The spirit creature was fading fast, about to die, and he struck again.

His spear struck her in the back, and he felt it sing with joy as it drank, the bloody mists in the sky empowering it, making it faster and more deadly than ever before. Manuel found himself caught up in the bloodlust, in the desire to kill. To strike down and consume, to end-

He squeezed his eyes shut for a moment, horrified, feeling the lust to consume Lady Jiao entirely. To step into Late Nascent Soul on a meal of her flesh, to dine on everyone around him until this awful hunger was sated and he became capable of striking down Heaven itself! He restrained himself, but only barely.

Whatever was happening, it was happening everywhere. The Jingshen were tearing into each other, gnawing on one another's flesh, consuming blood, all those exposed directly to the sky without protection going mad. Golden Devils struck at one another, and all across the Region, men became monsters, cultivators who saw the sky without sufficient will becoming no more than animals.

The Spear struck Lady Jiao again, and again, drinking her new body and soul until they were consumed entirely.

The mists began to fade, lightning striking again and again at the figure in the sky. Bolts sheered off, obliterating what lay beneath them. Cities and towns, mountains and forests, all across the Region.

Manuel kept striking at what remained of Lady Jiao, the bloodlust fading as he did. The Spear thrummed with joy, sitting easily in his hand.

Below him the Jingshen and Clan invaders alike were finding themselves awakened from a nightmare of killing, where they had bitten into one another, drank their blood and served as the vilest Blood Path criminals. They wept and fought, and Manuel exerted his will over them. He spoke, his voice ringing across many li.

"This war is over. Jingshen Junjie and Jingshen Jiao are dead by my hand. You may surrender and will be treated fairly, whether you are Qi Condensation disciples or Core Formation elders. If you do not surrender, though, no quarter will be given."

The weeping and wailing worsened, and Manuel raised the spear, darkness coiling out from it. A great symbol of victory arose in the sky, a black and twisted spear, malignant and victorious. Nearly fifty li tall, the symbol denoted that the Legions should advance.

The war was over.

With a final shimmering crack of thunder, the figure in the sky disappeared.

And for the first time in ten thousand years, Qi descended from the sky, bathing one and all alike. Shimmering pieces of glorious treasure flew from the sky towards the earth, and Manuel felt as though he had been held by the throat. The Shadow of Heaven was choking, whimpering at what was happening.

Four blinding symbols appeared in the sky, shining to everyone in the region. Manuel had no doubt that every single human being, no matter whether they were below-ground, in a building or standing under the open sky had seen them nonetheless.

天下万物

Manuel's breath caught.

Heaven had awoken.
 
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Whenever I think of a Core Formation Hoplite Formation fighting a Nascent Soul, I imagine Netero versus Meruem from Hunter X Hunter. That same sort of "everything you do can barely even hurt this guy, and he has endless stamina, and if he tags you you lose a limb" overpowering feel. Given that this turn had multiple juniors frustrating or striking out or foiling Nascent Souls, it feels appropriate...

And then Gaius causes a desert-wide eclipse. Right at the time that Manuel is ready to throw down with the Jingshen and has delivered his dramatic ultimatum to them. That's some amazing timing.
Floor 1
Gaius, in a moment of hubris, decides to simply avoid the obstacles on the first floor, his Earth-Gliding to his eyes sufficient to slip through the floor and move onwards. The walls and floor simply reject him at first, and he is spat out at force, mudded and painful Qi thrown into his meridians. He finds himself Lightly Wounded for his trouble, and must prepare to try again.

Thankfully after an embarrassing start, Gaius clears his way through the first floor.
Starts off by declaring that he'll go in and come out a Single Pillar King or die trying; ends up faceplanting on the very first floor, embarrassing himself before the Clan, the Grand Elder, the Earl of Bronze, the Imperator, and all of creation.

Ends up going all the way to Floor fucking 40, clearing out all the Core Formation floors.

I guess the secret is to get those Nat 1s rolled early, so that they're out of the way and you can have good luck when and where it matters. :V
The ninth floor he dominates with relative ease, and reaching the end of it he meets Ji Shin again.
The plant-monster cuffs him around the ear.

"Idiot. If you eat in the restaurant, you never learn to cook."
With a single blow Ji Shin demolishes a wall, and drags Gaius down to the ground, where he brings him to a small and simmering pot.
"You know why you'll never amount to anything? Because you're on the thirtieth floor of another restaurant. You're a useful puppet, but you can't be more than that."
The plant-man looks exasperated.
"None of you can. You're waiters, you're chefs, you're servers, but you don't decide. None of you can decide anything. Fate-"
His voice cuts out.
Ji Shin speaks words Gaius knows, but no meaning can be extracted from them.
"-So that concludes the explanation. The Heavens, my master, everything. Do you understand?"
Gaius looks at him blearily, and the soup bot boils over. A bolt of lightning appears and burns the plant-man into nothingness.
A cloud of blood rushes up, consuming the lightning, repairing a gaping hole of light that had appeared.
The soup ingredients boil to the top, forming into another pair of symbols.
解放
Gaius is still unable to move, and the soup spills over onto him.
It burns in a way that no water should, searing through his being, surely Crippling him if it wasn't for the use of a treasure. As it was, he is Wounded instead.
And this was just comedic all around. He spends a year... eating. Eating all the foods (I'm reminded of Death's restaurant from Dr. McNinja, where people wait forever to eat poor food, heh). Too much duck and horseradish.

And then he meets the terrifying figure of Ji Shin again, who... dopeslaps him. Rants at him out of exasperation, explaining everything -- which Gaius can't even hear, and Ji Shin knows that Gaius is going to be unable to hear it, but he still wants to explain it all to SOMEone because goddamit he is just sick and tired of people who just Do Not Get The Point -- and then Gaius is just worn out and too tired to do anything but blearily look at him. And then Ji Shin gets struck by Heavenly retribution for his temerity.

Ji Shin is a terrifying figure, really. Meeting him in the caves on Floor 25... well, if you thought the Core Formation clone was bad, how's about this for a level inappropriate encounter? Just... absolutely no hope of escape or victory. You just have to play by this Old Monster's rules and hope you pass his test or his standards. As you have no other hopes of victory or survival.
 
Whelp.

Good work @no. you've cleared the way for whatever comes next, on our own terms no less!

Let's see what the Plains powers do with it. No way that Altar Lord is missing this signal for what it is.
 
Well. I hadn't quite dared to hope we'd get both of them.

Only downside is the nascent tribulation treasures are contaminated for several years. Still far beyond what we could have hoped for without so many people choosing to aid the clan.
 
Well... Now I'm really looking forward to the next update. Because I would really like to know what the hell happened and what the hell is happening now. I mean, sure, it looks like Gaius managed something magnificent and Heaven has restored the flow of Qi to the Third Sea which it had been lacking ever since the Turtle Child was slain.

But all that blood? The fact basically everyone under the eclipse that occurred were consumed by bloodlust? how the Shadow of heaven was choking? None of these sound like pleasant things for the Clan. Or anyone else, but especially the Clan.

Though I do think the Alter Lord is going to need to do some rethinking of his plans... And Old Cannibal is just sitting there going 'Oh. Fuck.'
 
Well... Now I'm really looking forward to the next update. Because I would really like to know what the hell happened and what the hell is happening now. I mean, sure, it looks like Gaius managed something magnificent and Heaven has restored the flow of Qi to the Third Sea which it had been lacking ever since the Turtle Child was slain.

But all that blood? The fact basically everyone under the eclipse that occurred were consumed by bloodlust? how the Shadow of heaven was choking? None of these sound like pleasant things for the Clan. Or anyone else, but especially the Clan.

Though I do think the Alter Lord is going to need to do some rethinking of his plans... And Old Cannibal is just sitting there going 'Oh. Fuck.'

The Clan escalated things, and Heaven takes after the Taylor Hebert school of 'what do you do when someone escalates on you?'
 
The Great Era - Mechanics Changes
So, the Great Era has arrived. More Qi, more growth, more Secret Realms, more war, more threat from Righteous Juniors!

The big mechanical changes are this.

(1) Secret Realms now open every turn, no matter your cultivation (Nascents excluded). No more planning around Secret Realms! There's just so much Qi flooding through them they're much easier to get into! You can still only go once per Great Realm, however!

(2) Qi Condensation characters will get an extra cultivation die rolled (3d20 instead of 2d20) due to the abundance of Qi. It's not enough to make a huge difference to Foundation cultivators yet, though. This is a mechanic to help newer Seeds to have a chance of becoming plot-relevant.

(3) Missions and Secret Realms are now one or the other. This is more because it makes Fates easier to write than anything. So there'll be three Missions and two Secret Realms from a dropdown menu, and you can select one at a maximum.
 
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No, the other man was weaker than he should be. Slower. As if he was... disconnected from something, somehow.

Normally the threads that connected Nascent Souls to the web of fate - or whatever it was he felt - were beyond grasping for him, but not at this moment. At this moment he could feel the thread, and he struck at it, all of his power into one concentrated blow. It trembled and splintered, and Old Jingshen's eyes rolled back in pain, his body going limp.

Manuel saw no reason not to strike a third time. The Stone Spear hit what it was aimed at, and he aimed at the core of Old Jingshen's very being - his dantian.

The other man couldn't resist, and it shattered under the force of his blow.

Wait.

That... seemed wrong. Even with all the power available to him, shattering Old Jingshen's dantian and crippling his cultivation in a single blow? Manuel grasped for secrets and they came to him easy. A scene of Junjie Jingshen weeping, crippling himself to save a daughter that he loved. Never telling her of the price that he had paid, never letting her know the weakness within him. And he was weak, weaker than Manuel could've imagined.

A single definite blow and the Spear drank.

In moments Junjie Jingshen began to age, his body becoming papery, his skin sinking into his eyesockets, his veins going blue and pallid. The little man hung there, helplessly, as the Stone Spear finished him off.

For a moment, Manuel considered sparing him.

He felt the old man's soul begin to slip away, trying to go to the same place to Lady Jiao's had gone prior. He stabbed again, the haft of the spear interposing itself between Old Jingshen's soul and the chamber of rebirth he sought to go into. Blocked, it tried to slip away, and Manuel brought his will down. The disembodied Nascent Will of a dying old man was easy enough to shatter, and with a single motion he did so.

Junjie Jingshen had died.
That was... sad. I was sad about Junjie and Jiao dying that way. What some suspected, that Junjie had some sort of "Crippled" Weakness, seemed to be right. And it all came about because he did it to save his daughter's life. A daughter who even rose to Nascent Soul even. And who seemed like the hope for his Clan, his family. And then... it all went tumbling down in just two short decades.

And at the end, Manuel had them so outclassed he could potentially even have spared him, but...


And then came the horrifying mad revelry of the red sun. That shit was just horrifying.

I hope we don't have a slew of Blood Path rebels or tainted now. Also, just, damn.

And Sheng Yu and his people working on repurposing the light cannon. A thousand dwindling until only two score are left. that was also... well, it hit.
 
Well. Kakos... probably just lost most of his family. That's going to be a thing.

That whole "everyone is suddenly Blood Path" aspect is also going to be an issue.
 
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