Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 16 - [Interlude: Legatus]
Part of this may not strictly work with canon, but I had fun with it. Enjoy. Not to readers - all POV characters are Core Formation members.

[Interlude: Legatus]

"My skin has borne heaven's thunder
My fists tear the earth asunder
My steps traverse a thousand li
My will defies reality."

POV: Hemish of the Prithviraj Dynasty

It was a normal day in the Organ Meat Desert. The air was hot and dry. The sun was bright and draining. The qi in the air was so very thin. The earth had cracked from the heat and wasn't sand but just hard, hot earth. Truly the heavens had abandoned this sea of barbarians.

Yet, perhaps even such as them did not deserve to live under the threat of these demons of bronze. The cracks on the earth parted and he stretched his hands out after a night of rest. Then Hemish pulled himself out of the ground. He stretched as he stepped into the hard ground of the Third Sea and got ready for another day of hunting.

He remembered the first few times he came here. It was very easy in the beginning. Those monsters were still young and hadn't really understood how to survive. They had that strange inhuman discipline of course, but once you figured out the trick to break them it was pretty easy.

He'd heard that the devils who had reached Dharma Shaping were a more wily sort. They'd survived the hunt of his fellows for centuries and each had their own method of hiding. Hemish was looking forward to the hunt this time. It would be a true test of his newfound skills.

He grimaced as he walked. The ground was so hard and dry. Nothing like the qi-infused mud of his home. He put his hand on the ground and let his senses flow through it, trying to find something to put him in a good mood again.

Ahhhhh. Even in this forsaken land, the earth was still a source of comfort.

He didn't know how his fellows could bear it but he at least could draw comfort from the mines filled with spirit stones deep beneath the embrace of the earth. For a moment he reveled in that sense. He'd need to dig up more for the next night. He just couldn't rest without the qi being around him.

After a moment, he shook his head to clear his thoughts. That was enough time wasted. He needed to focus on the hunt. He'd already bet that he'd get at least three of his targets and at this point he'd found basically none. He'd have to work harder.

Once more, he let his senses flow through the earth. This time, rather than look deep he tried to focus as far as he could trying to find even a glimpse of a suitable target. He could sense a few of his juniors and a fair number of the lesser demons. No one that he was allowed to hunt unfortunately.

Hmmm. Wait, something felt off over there. It wasn't anything really, just another patch of the earth but his instincts drew him to it regardless. He'd long since learnt to heed heaven's whispers when they spoke into his ears. Perhaps it was nothing, but he'd have to take a closer look.

He took in a breath, out of habit rather than any real need and then he stamped on the ground in front of him. His strength rippled through it and turned it malleable. Then he began to rock his arms back and forth, pushing and pulling the earth to carry him to his destination.

Travelling atop a wave of earth wasn't very subtle but if it attracted enemy attention, that would only be a plus. He enjoyed the feeling of the wind on his face as he rushed towards his target. It would be nice to take to the air but dangerous here.

His feeling of contentment was replaced with annoyance as instead of wind, something else crashed into his face. It was solid but flimsy and he stopped his motion, realising that he'd also reached his target.

He looked around and frowned. It looked like a mortal village. A quick check didn't reveal any enemy qi so he turned to look at what had hit him. Oh, he'd smashed into some houses on the way. That was… bad.

He glanced around at the barbarian villagers who seemed to be keeping a good distance from him. One of them even had a glimmer of bronze to him which Hemish felt was such as waste. Perhaps he could train him for one of his juniors? He remembered doing that during his… second time, was it?

He shook his head and turned his attention away from that. The men and women were already looking at him warily and holding their children close but none of them were looking at him with horror or trying to attack him with vengeance. Good, that increased the chances that nobody had died in his previous blunder.

He quickly spared some attention to the wreckage to make sure that there weren't any bodies. Okay, that was good. One of the proctors was a rival of his father's and he really didn't want to give them an excuse to send him back this early.

Then he glanced at the other mortals around him. Well, it would have been a nuisance if he'd actually hurt those mortals, even if they had the blood of demons. He considered how best to deal with them. He needed something non-lethal to move them out of the way. Ah, that would work.

He flared his presence just enough that they couldn't bear it. There were a few tears and screams but it wasn't anything that they couldn't live through. Within moments, all the villagers had dropped to the ground. He took a moment to check over them. He didn't really deal with mortals very often so this trick didn't see much use.

Okay. None of them were hurt, just various levels of incapacitated. They should mostly be fine but he'd have enough time to finish up his investigations here. Ignoring the few low moans around him, he closed his eyes once more and touched the earth with his hands. The first thing he did was check for any enemies but he couldn't sense any within range.

Feeling slightly disappointed, he decided to address that nagging feeling in the back of his mind. There it was. This close, he could see it much more clearly. There was something blocking his senses and making it seem like there was nothing out of the ordinary. Luckily, he was familiar with the soil here and specially attuned to the earth.

Hemish tried to keep a grin off of his face. He was actually excited here. This kind of defense wasn't something an ordinary expert could set up. It would have to be at least an incredibly talented devil of Chakra Opening or if he was lucky, one of Dharma Shaping.

He needed to be sure. He took a deep breath and raised his hands up, pulling the earth up along with him. Then he pushed his hands back down and the soil rippled as the raised earth slammed back into it. "O earth, reveal your secrets."

The ground trembled beneath him and he could read those trembles to make out what had been hidden from him. As the image formed in his mind, he realised that he had found a hidden bunker. Further, he began to place pinpricks of qi hidden within that bunker. Excitedly, he began searching for a worthy opponent. No. No. No. No. Oh yes.

Among the scurrying of their least, there was an unmistakable bronze presence with power comparable to his own. He grinned fully as the presence reacted to his probe and began to move straight up towards him. They were passing through the earth not by manipulating it but what felt like built in arrays.

Hemish looked around and grimaced. This wasn't any place for a battle. He spread his arms out and pushed the houses away to make space, taking care to carry the mortals away without harming them. He looked around at the open field he had created. A bit small but it was still much better.

At its current pace, the bronze demon would still take a second or two to reach him. He considered what to do that time. He couldn't think of any other preparations to make and he hurt the other ones down there but he could certainly blow open the bunker for his juniors.

Normally, he would feel like he was taking away his junior's glory but his own target was down there as well, even if they were moving up to face him. He brought his hands back to his sides and then pushed them upwards. "O earth, unearth your treasures!" The qi he had infused to the earth surged upwards and as it did, the earth was pushed up with it.

It exploded outwards and into the air. Before he could finish the job, a bony hand burst out of the ground and wrapped around his leg. He slipped out of the hold and slipped back a short distance away with a grimace.

He'd just been interrupted. The job wasn't finished and he likely wouldn't be able to finish it before the battle was over. He thought that he would be able to sense his enemy but she was hard to read. He couldn't sense her movements as well as he should be able to through the earth. Relying on his eyesight, he focused on his attack.

He brought his fists together into the ground in an attempt to crush her before she stepped out, but as he watched his enemy - an old woman with wrinkled greenish-bronze skin pulled herself up and took to the air, not only protecting herself from the earth reaching high enough to evade the earth spike that followed after. Hemish frowned. She looked like she was about to fall dead but she'd still dodged his attacks.

Was this going to be one of those old but skilled types? Deciding not to take any chances, he smashed his fists towards her as she and sent a wave of earth towards her. As he had half-expected, the woman quickly vaulted over his attack and to his surprise, her age seemed to melt off of her as she soared towards him.

Her bronze took a gleaming shine and her body regained its youthful vigour. She screamed a battlecry while raising a fist to attack him. He moved to stop her but a sense of doom filled his body and froze him to the spot.

What? He just stood there, struggling to breathe and shake off the feeling of death upon him as the woman approached. A curse! He gritted his teeth and strengthened his Dao-heart to shake it off.

Shaken he raised a fist to defend as the woman closed in.

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POV: Wilhelmina Taurus

Wilhemina scowled as she felt the fool narrow in on her defences. Of course, she'd have the rotten luck of having an earth-controller with just enough experience in the trials to spot her camouflage somehow end up in the exact patch of earth where he could.

No, this wasn't bad luck. This had the touch of heaven's curse all over it, but it was sloppy like heaven didn't care if she actually survived or not. What was going on? She shook her head and focused on the moment.

Even if her opponent was a fool who she could sense coming a mile away, he was still a powerful enemy that she needed to survive somehow. As he arrived above her, she switched to the guise of the Mother and used her bloodline as a focus to tap into the senses of the few mortals related to her in the village above.

Truly, he was a bumbling buffoon who couldn't even see where he was going. What kind of a Core Formation expert crashed into a house? Luckily, he didn't hurt anyone though she did catch how he eyed her great-great-grandson. Even a touch of bronze was enough to tempt him. That would be useful.

He even helpfully flared his aura and let her get a proper read of it. Definitely earth though that was obvious but more interestingly, the image of the ground that came to mind oddly reminded her of musculature and the movement of the body. So he controlled the earth with his physical motions at least to some extent. That might be useful.

She winced as she felt his full aura and felt all of the mortals above collapse. That… she'd get him for that and maybe arrange a reward for the villagers going through all of that. At least, she confirmed that he wasn't willing to hurt mortals.

Taking a breath, she switched to the Crone. She felt her physical strength lessened and winced. She never liked taking this form but the insight it granted her was necessary for moments like these. She analysed the information that she had.

He was familiar enough with the third sea environment to see through her arrays which implied that he had come here multiple times. He wasn't taking things seriously, which meant that despite his strength he was new to his power.

Something told her that she wouldn't be able to face him in a head on assault and there were still some tricks that he hadn't revealed. She'd need a probing strike to tease out his secrets and then try and finish him off in a single attack. Just in case, she needed to-

She felt the earth shake and she felt the hunter's attention on her. She grimaced and looked around to the other members of her clan. There was Antonius and his injured father. Defenseless Corvina and so many others who weren't able to fight. Usually, her shelter was a safe haven for the talented of her family.

Given what he'd shown so far, he should be able to break through her arrays. If he revealed them to others, she wasn't sure if they could survive and she couldn't afford to let them die. She stepped up and activated the arrays designed to take her to the top. She would have to fight him and lead him away.

As she moved, she could feel him ready an attack. Was he attempting to slay her while she was still within his element or was he trying to reveal her shelter? Either way, she couldn't let him succeed. She moved in right below him and grabbed his leg. If she could touch his skin then some of her more powerful curses became viable.

Her hand wrapped around his leg and then she frowned. It had the shape of a heel but it felt more akin to pottery than skin. Whatever she was holding transformed into mud, allowing him to slip out of her hold. A sense of doom filled the earth around her and she realised that he was about to crush her.

Using all the strength of the crone's frame, she jumped up into the sky and managed to reach just high enough that a spike of earth just missed her. She breathed out as she landed, thanking the Imperator for the boost to insight the Crone afforded her. Then she took a moment to think over her opponent.

Now that she looked at him, he looked completely normal. But she remembered what she had felt before. An earthen armor? Likely capable of shifting its nature to best protect him. She wasn't sure that she could get past it with her combat strength.

Within moments, she formulated a plan. The fool in front of her was drawing up another earthen atack. Did he not have any variations? She analysed the flow of his qi and figured the height she'd need to be to dodge the attack. Then she cursed him.

The curse of death could stop a heart but it required a strong connection to the target and a strong emotion against them. She drew upon the outrage she felt from him attacking her family and though she lacked a connection, she used the Gift of the Crone to force it anyway.

It wouldn't be enough to hurt him, she thought but it might scare him enough to retreat and if not, it'd be one hell of a distraction. The moment she activated her curse, a wave of earth flowed towards her and she jumped over it, moving to attack him.

As she flew, she dropped the guise of the Crone and took upon the Mantle of the Maiden. She wouldn't last a second against this one with the crone's weakened body and she wouldn't have time to analyse his attack. The maiden had incredible strength and youthful vigour but it left her vulnerable mentally.

She doubted that would be a problem with the idiot in front of her. She raised a fist and feigned a warcry, hoping to make it seem like a physical assault. Then she changed her attack as the man faltered.

The curse of death had bypassed his physical armor and was already trying to halt his heart. In that moment of distraction, she stepped in with her thumbs extended aiming straight towards his eyes.

That would be the obvious weakpoint wouldn't it? She grinned in relish. Unfortunately, the boy recovered just enough to block his face with a hand. She turned the attack into an underhanded strike to his unprotected stomach instead.

Despite the strength of the Maiden, she was only able to crack his armor. If it wasn't for the bronze of her body also increasing with her strength, she would have hurt herself. As it is, she just barely jumped back as the armor became fluid like mud to manifest a spike to bind and hurt her.

When she had a moment to look back, the crack had sealed itself. The hunter's expression had turned furious in the aftermath of the exchange and she realised that he wasn't going to flee. The curse was still affecting him emotionally and he was clearly expecting more of the same but without the crone's boost and the advantage of surprise it wasn't going to be nearly as effective.

She jumped forward to attack and to her surprise, she narrowly avoided an earthen hand forming underneath her feet in an attempt to crush her. She grimaced at the loss of the Crone's insight and held up her arms to let several earthen spikes break against the rejuvenated bronze of her body.

He recovered enough to face her and while he could weather his weaker blows, he still clearly needed only one strong strike to end her. As he pulled back his fist to punch her, she decided not to face him head on and moved to the next part of her plan.

She simply changed her course entirely, instead of following through. She darted past his side and ran past him, hoping that in his current state he'd choose to follow rather than focus on her juniors. She grinned as he howled and stepped behind her.

She darted side to side, dodging disks of stone shot towards her and kept ahead of his waves of earth using her the speed granted to her by the Maiden. As she did so, she tried to recall the next step of her plan.

She'd expended her sneak attack and it wasn't likely to work now that he was wary of it. She couldn't think of any easy way to crack his armor so she needed to go to someone who actually could. She had run through what she remembered of the legion deployment patterns and the only ally who would both be a good match and was likely to help her was… she grimaced. It was Alcaeus.

He would have to do then.


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POV: Alcaeus the Strong

Despite the many atrocities taking place across the desert, it was a relatively good day to be out in the Organ Meat Desert. Alcaeus sighed and took to the air, swinging off of a tree to reach a raised hill he had identified many centuries ago.

It was a good spot where all of the local winds flowed. They brought him many of the smells and sounds in the area and let him identify any enemy presence nearby. He'd felt a battle heading towards him and he needed to be sure about what was coming towards him.

He knew many of his peers chose to fight with their legion, defend forts or just hide from the hunters but Alcaeus had preferred to strike out on his own ever since he was a youngster of the first heavenstage. His sharp senses let him keep a track of everyone around him and with his speed he could choose to engage as he wished.
There it was. He could feel the trembling of the earth. It was the movement of someone who was unmistakably an equal with a mastery of earth that far surpassed him. Still, he'd felt that already and it was actually easier to read that lower to the ground. Instead he focused on his ears.

There it was. To the north-east and several thousand li away, though closing quickly. The loudest sound was the shifting of the earth and the man who controlled it. His body moved strangely, like part of his strength came from something external. Some form of strength enhancement?

There was another sound hidden just under the man's. It was a simple runner's pace that conjured up old memories of a young woman he hadn't really spoken freely to in many centuries. He sighed and focused in the moment. It was Wilhelmina then.

Judging by how she was coming straight for him, she was purposely leading a hunter to him. Someone she couldn't handle? In any case, he couldn't ignore her plight. He took in a breath and smelt the scents from their battle.

The hunter stank of the fifth sea and had this particular image of mud and pottery. He also seemed to be filled with rage and had a sense of lingering dread. So he'd survived a curse from her then? That would make it easier to scare him away.

Wilhelmina had that familiar feeling of focus and annoyance. Alcaeus smiled at that. Right, then. He needed to move fast. He considered and discarded a few plans before deciding to attack him head on. If Wilhelmina had brought him here then she'd almost certainly tried the more obvious ploys.

Alcaeus jumped, taking to the air then he smashed his fists back to throw himself in the direction of the battle. For a moment, the wind surged in the air and then he smashed into the ground. As soon as he landed, he grasped the earth with his feet and used strength and qi to push him forward.

Thump.

The sound of his motion carried, clear to any who would care to listen.

Thump.

He earth cratered as he landed with his whole weight and he pushed himself back into the air without paying it any mind.

Thump.

The battle was in view. Both participants had stopped as they heard and felt his arrival. Wilhelmina gave him a look of annoyance that told him exactly what she thought of his arrival while the Fifth Sea Hunter looked at him warily.

As he came into view, the hunter smashed a fist into the ground and the earth rippled like water before extending into a stone spike that aimed straight towards him. Alcaeus smashed the air with his fists to change his trajectory and turned all of his force into a kick towards the hunter's belly.

The hunter twisted his heels and the earth rose to secure his feet. Then he bent down and dipped both of his hands into the earth and made a motion akin to splashing water in a pool. Instead of water however, two waves of earth rose to intercept Alcaeus' attack.

They met in the middle and the earth shattered into gravel. Alcaeus used the backward force to spin in the air and grab two fistfuls of them which he crushed into rocks. Then he kicked the air to speed through another rotation before the hunter could react and threw the rocks in his hands with all the force he could muster.

The hunter grabbed both rocks out the air and spun with the force while the earth binding his feet moved with him. He threw the stones back but Alcaeus was already gone. He smashed the air to move to another angle and then just as the hunter was distracted with his throws, he kicked off of the air into a punch before he could intercept with an earthen attack.

Rather than attack, the hunter held up his hands to protect his face and Alcaeus heard the whisper of a mantra as he flew close. "O earth, become my body." In the minute span of time before he made contact, an armor of mud was revealed on his body which expanded into thick plates.

Then Alcaeus' attack struck him straight in his crossed hands and the plates upon them shattered and then began to regrow before the attack was even over. Before he could take advantage of the weakness, the hunter countered with a spiked knee strike that he shattered when Alcaeus clocked it with his own knee strike.

The armor began to regrow there as well and attempted to bind Alcaeus while healing. Seeing that he was disadvantaged there, Alcaeus chose to retreat. He kicks the hunter's belly, not expecting it to do any damage but using it as a springboard to escape back into the air. As he flipped and moved to land, the hunter began to laugh out loud.

As soon as the legate touched the earth, the hunter twitched his foot forward and Alcaeus felt the ground under him turn to slippery mud that rendered him unbalanced. Then the hunter turned the twitch into a full kick and an entire set of spikes rose from the earth mirroring that motion.

Alcaeus grimaced as the attack came towards him. Rather than use his unbalanced feet, he punched the air and escaped to air once more. It took him a moment to readjust after which he had to narrowly dodge a few disks of stone that curved towards him.

Though they seemed to adjust in the air and were accompanied by spikes by the hunter on the ground, Alcaeus found it simple to smash them out of the sky and keep to the air while away from the hunter's reach.

Once the hunter realised that he wasn't coming down soon and that he couldn't hit Alcaeus while he was in the air, he paused in his attack and just frowned warily. Alcaeus also took the moment to consider his own options.

While the exchange had been taking place, Wilhelmina had switched back to her Crone guise and was analysing the fight. For a moment, Alcaeus considered if he could come up with a way to win without relying on her insight.

He could use the air to attack but the force wouldn't be enough to hurt the hunter. He also couldn't stay up in the air forever, he'd tire eventually. Barring a change in the environment or a lucky break, there wasn't much he could do. Holds meant that the hunter could trap with the armor and hits meant that he'd just regenerate.

He could either rely on catching the enemy off guard or he'd have to fall back on that technique. For a moment, he considered his own weaknesses and his eyes widened. The hunter must have had the same thought because his head immediately snapped towards Wilhelmina.

Alcaeus grimaced as the hunter grinned and angled his body just so to show where he was targeting. Then he pushed, shoving the biggest wave of seismic force he'd generated so far right towards his fellow legate. Wilhelmina didn't bother to dodge, she just looked at him with annoyance despite the attack rippling towards her.

Alcaeus moved, reaching Wilhelmina's side before the attack could. He hammered into the ground and didn't hold back any force as it cratered, pushing back both the seismic wave and any other attack that the hunter might employ.

Then he extended his hands outwards and Wilhelmina landed lightly into them, having already jumped just high enough to be safe from his force. Before the hunter could do something else, he held her tight and took to the air while carrying her in his arms.

"Need any help?" She asked casually, as Alcaeus focused on dodging or deflecting all of the hunter's frustrated strikes.

"I thought-" He paused to grab a stone disk with his toes to throw back. "-you came-" He kicked higher to dodge a stone spear. "-all this way-" He kicked the air to create a pressure wave that deflected a series of attacks. "-to ask for my help?" He rushed to finish before any other attacks could interrupt him.

Wilhelmina raised her eyebrows. "Yeah, this isn't going to work." She replied, extending her hand towards his. "Connect with me?"

Alcaeus nodded, being familiar with the Labyrinthian connection arts. She put her hand close to his wrist and a thread of bronze that had been wrapped into a band extended outwards. It wrapped around his hand instead and he felt a mental connection extend between them.

If you had mastered more than the bare minimum of the Labyrinthian Thread, He remarked, you wouldn't have so much trouble with him. His thoughts travelled to her instantly and he was glad that he had mastered at least the basics himself when he studied with their clan.

Shush. She replied. Tactical assessment. What did you see?

Combat-oriented Earth User.
He began, which filled her with annoyance. He grinned at her. I need to mention even the obvious, don't I? Anyway, he has sensory advantages on the ground which is why he was so effective when I first landed. He also has two layers of armor, if I'm not mistaken?

An armor akin to porcelain that mimics his skin and a secondary mud armor he uses to soften blows.
She replied. The mud can regenerate as long as he's touching the ground and I suspect the porcelain can as well, just more slowly.

Alcaeus nodded as he dodged a stone spear. That's why he's rooted himself to the ground. He noticed. It was something that had stood out to him. Right now, it's a stalemate but I suspect he has the advantage.

The earth rejuvenates him.
She agreed. While you keep getting tired. We need to end this quickly.

Why can't we just escape?
Alcaeus asked. She'd gone to the trouble of leading the hunter to him which implied that she couldn't have just ditched him.

He knows the location of my hiding spot. It has many of mine and a few of yours too. She answered. We can't afford him returning there.

Yes, I don't think they would be able to retreat properly.
He said, frowning as he recalled the ones he had placed there. You know the only way I have to decisively end the fight.

I'd rather you not use that technique.
She replied. It's not something you can use freely and this seems like it's purpose-built to get you to use it.

What are you talking about?
He asked curiously. Have you Seen something?

Maybe. We'll talk after the fight.
She said quickly. Can you win without using your technique?

If I can get him off the ground.
He answered. If not, it's either my technique or a retreat and attacking when he's vulnerable.

How long do you need to prepare your technique?

At least three free seconds,
He said. Longer if I have to activate it while dodging. You can hold him off for that long?

If you give me a second to prepare I can,
She confirmed. This was too risky to try by myself but if I do well, you might not even need to use your technique.

Alcaeus considered what her options were. Ah. I see what you are planning. You do that, it'll give me time to try some other tactics I had in mind.

Wait, what-
Alcaeus didn't wait for her to finish as he tossed her into the air and away from any of the hunter's strikes. Then he looked down at the enemy and considered what strategies he could try. He still had a few more tricks up his sleeves.

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POV: Hemish of the Prithviraj Dynasty

Hemish scowled with frustration as the two demons continued to dodge his strikes. Two of his prey were just out of reach and he couldn't get at them. He'd hoped to get vengeance on the female demon for giving him almost literally a heart attack and then she had led him to her ally.

He'd cheered up then, thinking that the heavens were finally on his side but after a few exchanges it had simply resulted in this stalemate. He couldn't think of any way to fight them and looking at the male's speed, they could escape anytime they wanted.

Suddenly, the male demon tossed the female into the air beyond his reach. As the female screamed something vulgar in their barbarian tongue, the male turned his attention towards him. Hemish frowned but prepared himself. What were they plotting?

Before he could react, the male demon moved to attack as he had done the first time. The air burst as it struggled to contain his speed and the demon surged towards him with an extended foot.

Hemish summoned a wall of earth to block it and there was a boom in response as the demon changed it's direction, crashing next to the wall and then rushing towards him directly. As soon as he touched the ground however, Hemish became aware of his every movement. He wasn't like the female who had methods to obscure herself. Everything he did was open to Hemish.

The demon was going to rush him, he realised. It took him a moment to raise a blade of earth in his path not only to hurt him but to slow him down. The demon reoriented once more, sliding past his spike and getting close enough that Hemish couldn't resort to earthen barriers.

He summoned his secondary armor, drawing strength from the earth to directly bear the hit. Any attack only damaged his armor and any damage on the armor healed as long as he touched the earth. He grunted as a strike hit his arm directly but he bore it.

Then before he could do anything else, his foe jumped back from the hit and suddenly, he flipped back and targeted his hands again. Hemish froze not expecting the sudden assault and raised his hands to defend realising only too late that the armor in his hand was still too weak.

His foe was trying to target the same spots in his armor, hoping to depend on pure strength and speed to breakthrough. Hemish softened part of the earth at his feet, letting the assault push him down rather than damage his inner armor. There were several assaults but his enemy couldn't do anything as he redirected the force into the earth.

Suddenly, the demon wrapped its hands around his stomach and planted his feet on the ground. Hemish realised that it was attempting to uproot him from the earth. He growled and strengthened his connection to the ground. Then he wrapped his hands around him in turn and tried to trap him into the earth.

Before he could accomplish much, the demon shattered the binds he had created around him and retreated. Hemish grimaced. So it had some ability to affect the earth in the same way it affected the air.

He raised his hand to grasp for the demon as he took to the sky and the earth extended as well, forming hands to grab him. Though they touched him, by the time they did so they were too far from the ground for him to gather much strength and they shattered with a single motion.

Hemish growled in frustration but before he could send out a follow-up strike as useless as that might be, his attention was drawn to a powerful force from above. He looked up to see the female demon, strong in the form of youth. Black cursed lines extended across her body and her power… it was overwhelming.

He knew he couldn't win and for a moment, he considered retreating. It was obvious what was happening here. The woman had already demonstrated a skilled but weak old form and an unskilled but strong young form. This must be what happened when she combined the two. He didn't know what risks the form had, but he knew that he wasn't powerful enough to defeat it.

It was so strong… so strong… How strong was it? He frowned as he realised that he couldn't estimate her strength more than 'much stronger than him'. He growled at that and the ready explanation that his mind had presented to him. There was only one explanation: Maya - illusion.

He fired a disk of stone at her and the woman dodged, her power and shape returning to that of the old woman he had seen before. As she landed on the ground, he summoned a wave of earth towards her to end her before she could interfere even more.

The she-demon just grinned at him and then he felt another surge of power. Suddenly, the male demon crashed in front of her as he had done before but rather than dodge, he smashed his fist on the earth and the force of the blow cancelled out his own wave of earth. What? Was this another illusion?

His senses told him the answer. He could feel a rapidly mounting power rise within the male. He was holding a spirit stone - far more powerful than either of them should be able to use - likely summoned from a storage ring. Despite that, he was using it and absorbing all of the power into his chakra system.

If his power kept increasing… Hemish moved, stamping his leg forward and riding forth on a wave of earth. The demon just grinned and jumped, taking to the sky with his ally. The demon stamped the air and in a burst of air and flames, disappeared into the distance. Within moments, he returned with a crash and Hemish could see the qi being infused into his body release in sparks of lightning, unable to be contained within the body.

Hemish realised he had no response to the increase in his power. He needed to retreat or at least change his tactics. "O earth, protect me." He punched the earth and let a dome of stone rise to protect him. Then he punched into them and twisted, letting them draw from the strength of his armor and recover from damage.

Just in time, he felt the entire dome tremble as the demon made its first attack. Then another, and another and another and another. Hemish trembled as he felt the demon not hit the dome but crush through it, taking up any space the earth could fill. Then once he had a strong grip, he ripped it apart.

Hemish looked into the eyes of the demon, blood-shot with power. As his hands reached towards him, his thoughts still considered tactics. How this must be a sacrificial technique that would damage his body, how he just had to survive long enough…

As the asura finally reached towards him, Hemish broke his token with a thought. There was no way he was going to risk facing that he realised. He felt the familiar pull of being drawn towards his home and he gladly escaped into the Fifth Sea and to safety.

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POV: Wilhelmina Taurus

It took Wilhelmina several minutes to return to the site of the battle. She had to choose between the Crone's insight to understand what she sensed better or the Maiden's strength in order to actually reach faster. In the end, she chose speed but that still gave her enough time to think about the battle as she rushed towards the battle.

Already, the chase and the battle itself was taking a toll. Her illusion had been sloppy - that was the most obvious result. She was far too heavy-handed with it and that ended up tipping off the enemy. If she had more time to work on it… but there was no point in making excuses now.

She had hoped to get rid of him without sacrificing something permanent but that didn't work out. As it was, Alcaeus' technique would be rendered unusable for the duration of the trials which was dangerous especially with this sense of doom that she was sensing in the air.

She grimaced as she came upon Alcaeus' collapsed form. His body was damaged from taking in qi. As she had expected. The Inversion of World and Body was a technique that only worked due to his Dao of Self-Mastery. The concept was simple - draw in immense amounts of qi during battle and use it to gain incredible but temporary power.

With his Dao, he could keep his body working despite the damage done by the technique making it practical if also dangerous. They had never really tested how far it could go - especially if he was willing to give his life. She stopped and knelt before him, switching to the Crone to examine him.

Weak but conscious. "How are you doing, Alcaeus?" She asked, frowning.

He laughed and that laughter turned into a cough as he turned to look at her. "I've had worse," He replied matter-of-factly. "As you very well know."

She sighed and rolled her eyes. If he could make jokes then he would be fine. "What is your plan now? With that hunter gone, it should be safe for you to hide out at my shelter." She offered though she knew very well that he wouldn't take it.

"There is a cache nearby," He explained, forcing himself up. She knelt down and offered him her shoulder. "Set up by the Archigetes before. It should have something for me to recover."

"And he told you about it?" She asked with a frown. She hadn't even known there were caches. She shifted to the Maiden to better hold him up.

"He didn't tell me personally, but it was made known to a few legates." Alcaeus replied, smiling at her annoyance. That only annoyed her more. "If you were in charge of the clan, would you give yourself that information?"

She didn't answer the question. She knew she'd be tempted to use some of them for her family. "I'll take you to it," She said instead, before moving on to the topic that had been on her mind.

He smiled and gave her the directions. For easy travel, she picked him up on her back and began to run. "Thanks, Wilhelmina." He whispered to her as they travelled, in a way that she remembered from so long ago. She was glad that he couldn't see the slight blush on her cheeks. Damn the maiden's mental weakness.

As they ran, her thoughts returned to the sense of doom that she had been feeling hanging about in the air. Originally, she had thought that it was just the lack of preparation this time around but now it began to fill her with suspicion. "How powerful do you think you could get with your technique if you were allowed to get as strong as you wanted?" She asked him as they ran.

"It's hard to say," He replied, his tone curious. "I might even be able to make a difference in a battle of nascent souls if I had a Supreme Grade Spirit Stone and was willing to die in the attempt."

That phrasing… it couldn't be.

"What's wrong?" He asked her, seeming to sense the shift in her demeanour.

"It's nothing," She replied quickly. "Just a thought that's unlikely to-"

That's when it happened, as if in answer. A bell. A fourth bell.

"Oh." She realised that her realisation was out loud. She realised that she had stopped in her tracks as a fourth bell - an unknown pattern - shrieked in her blood. She felt Alcaeus react behind her.

"Oh." He reacted, his voice holding the same sense of realisation that she might have had. She moved, rushing towards the cache hoping it had what they needed and that they found it fast enough to make a difference.

Was this the source of the doom? Was this what heaven planned? It was too much. They weren't ready to lose another Nascent Soul. Not so soon. She needed to do something. Her family would be slaughtered.

"Wilhelmina." She ignored him, switching to crone to sharpen her senses. There needed to be a way out of this somehow. There had to be! She stumbled, unable to carry the weight on her back with her now frail from.

"Wilhelmina." She felt Alcaeus on top of her, forcing himself to move despite the damage to his body. He kept her pinned down in order to make sure that she couldn't move. "You need to calm down and stop panicking."

"How can I stop panicking?" She asked him, hoping he would have a solution when she didn't. "We just survived a battle and now this? How will we manage to survive this or what comes after?"

"I don't know," He replied after a moment. "But panicking won't help. The only way to get through this is if we stay calm and work together."

Together… together… "Alcaeus, that's brilliant." She told him, shifting to her Maiden guise and struggling to push him off. "We need something that can make a difference in a fight between nascent souls and I've just figured out how we can do that."

He must have heard the change in her tone, because he let her get up and then they were seated across each other under the desert sun. "What do you mean?" He asked with a frown.

"You of all people should get this," She replied, rolling her eyes. "Isn't this basically your thing now?"

Alcaeus frowned, thinking over her words and then his expression sharpened. "You are thinking of getting the other Legates together and using formations?" He realised.

Wilhelmina nodded. "Several of the current batch of legates trace a relation to me," She told him with a grin she hadn't had since the first realm." I should be able to get a message to them and with a little bit of luck, it might even be feasible."

Alcaeus nodded grimly. "Then we have a glimmer of hope," He replied. "Take me to the caches. The Archigetes may well come for them and if we can find what we need for me to help as well, we might actually have a glimmer of hope."

Wilhelmina paused. A part of her didn't want him to use a technique that might risk his life but no. There was no place for such sentimentality. She just nodded in agreement.

With newfound determination, they took off at a steady pace.
 
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Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 17 - [Aftermath]
@ReaderOfFate hey, can I get this and the post above it threadmarked? Thanks! Oh and @Mochinator finally finished Antonius' side of things from the omake of yours where you mentioned him though I don't think it's 100% the same.
[Aftermath]

The trials were over.

These were the worst trials in millennia with the clan teetering on the brink of collapse with so many dead and most of the legions left leaderless.

The 43rd Legion had lost their father and near half of their brothers and sisters. Without the strength of Alcaeus the Strong, they were like a sail without any wind behind it. They were a body without a soul. If his father was here, how would he react to this?

The 96th Legion had lost their mother and their family had been dismembered. Without the wisdom of Wilhelmina Taurus, they were lost and alone. So many families had lost their loved ones. Antonius knew that pain. So did his mother. Could she have said something to console them?

The trials were over.

All around Antonius were various expressions of grief. Some sat in isolation, speaking to no one and choosing to remain alone in their grief. Antonius wondered what went through their minds. Were they lost and afraid or angry or were they attempting to deny reality?

Others huddled together, seating away from all but those close to them and whispering so many things to each other while dealing with their loss. Some consoled each other. Others planned for the future. Others still whispered angrily, trying to find someone to blame.

Finally, there were those who moved with purpose. Perhaps they had lost no one or perhaps they had already moved on. Perhaps they simply held the grief in their hearts but moved because they had to. These were the ones that had brought them all to regroup in Pleuron in the final days of the trial.

These were the ones who did the jobs that needed doing. Who tallied the dead and ensured that the legions would continue despite the loss. They were the ones who went around and consoled the ones who grieved. They quieted the whispers and made sure that everyone was alright.

Like Aunt Ariadne who had come to check up on him and make sure that he was alright. She knelt down and spoke to him while he sat, leaning against a wall, away from all the people and their different griefs and their emotions.

"How are you doing?" She asked him, kneeling down right next to him. She had a smile on her face that wasn't happy but wasn't fully forced either. Like so much going on, it wasn't an emotion that he felt he really understood.

"I'm alright," He told her simply. When she remained kneeling in front of him, he felt he needed to continue. "Really, I'm alright. My mother and father are fine or at least, no worse than before. For me at least, the trials weren't especially good or bad."

She nodded quietly. "You were with my great-grandmother's group, weren't you?" She asked him after a moment.

Antonius looked down at the ground. They had a close call with a Core Formation cultivator, but Matriarch Wilhelmina had led him away from them. That was the last anyone had seen her. "Yes, I was." He told her. What else could he say to her? Any sympathy felt hollow.

She just nodded at that. For a moment, there was just silence between them. "Take care of yourself," She said, finally. She placed a hand on his and squeezed. "I know you're going through a rough time as well. Speak to me if you need anything. My door is always open to you."

Antonius nodded back. "Thank you," He replied. This at least he could say as if he meant it. "I'll come and talk to you whenever I can."

She smiled at him before moving on. He saw her stop and speak to other legionnaires as she moved, giving some silent support and making others smile. He sat there for some time after she left, mulling over his own thoughts.

Others came to speak to him too.

There was Oriana. She was quiet now, greatly changed from what he remembered of her. She moved around a lot like Aunt Ariadne had and tried to help where she could. When she came to him, he didn't notice her until she spoke.

"Hey Antonius," She said, kneeling next to him. "How are you doing?"

"I'm fine," I replied. "How are you doing?" It occured to Antonius that perhaps he should have asked that question to Aunt Ariadne as well. She had lost his mother and then much of her family. He resolved to speak to her properly when he met her next.

"I'm fine too," She said. After a moment, she sat down completely. "You didn't lose anyone either, did you?"

He looked at her and shook his head. "Do you get that same feeling?" He asked her. "Like you are disconnected from everything."

She looked around to see if anyone was listening and when no one seemed to be, she nodded. "It's kind of bad. I do feel bad," She told him. "But a part of me is also wondering - what do I do tomorrow? What exactly does this change about my life?"

"Legate Alcaeus promised to help me with finding a cure for my parents," He said, then paused to look around. "I was… counting on that. I'm really worried about what I'm going to do next."

She grimaced. "I heard about what happened to your parents. Hell of a thing, man." She hesitated for a moment and then she placed a hand on his shoulder. "If you need anything, ask me. I can't make promises right now but I'll do whatever I can."

Antonius put his hand on hers and nodded. "Thank you," He told her. She squeezed his shoulder and then she walked away with a nod.

A lot of people from both the 43rd and 96th Legion were like that. Some of them recognised him, some of them knew his parents and some of them were just checking up on him. After a certain point, it all became a blur.

And then there was Corvina.

She wasn't really talking to people like Aunt Ariadne or Oriana, she was just walking past them thinking her own thoughts. They had come to Pleuron together, led by one of their seniors who had decided to lead them out of their shelter after the Matriarch hadn't returned.

She had a smile on her lips as she walked past him and it seemed like she might even be skipping if that wasn't incredibly inappropriate. Then she spotted him and immediately came by to sit down. "Hey, Antonius." She said, smiling. "How are you?"

"Hi, Corvina." He replied hesitantly. "I'm good. You seem… very cheerful. What happened?"

Corvina paused and frowned. "Yeah, I am." She said, shaking her head. "I can't help it. It's just… in the air, you know? It's all cleared up."

Antonius looked at her in confusion. "What's cleared up?" He asked her. "Are you okay?"

She nodded and waved off his concern. "Sorry, sorry. I can't help it." She replied, trying to keep from smiling. "It's hard to explain."

Antonius leaned towards her, perplexed. "I have time," He told her. "Try?"

"Imagine… you're blind," She began, pausing to look at him to see if he followed. He motioned for her to continue. "Then suddenly, after your whole life you get the ability to see. Wouldn't you feel happy about that?"

Antonius nodded. "I would, but what does that have to do with what you are feeling?"

"I'm a Seer," She replied. "A really good one. But my vision has always been clouded. There is a curse that hangs over the clan that tries to make things go horribly for us. Heaven's Curse."

"And that curse is gone?" Antonius asked, following the analogy. "That's good? It sounds like something people in charge should know."

"I think they already know," She answered, smiling. "Great-grandmother knew and I think the Archigetes baited it out specifically to expend itself during these trials."

Antonius frowned. "All of this?" He gestured at the people grieving around them. "This was on purpose? Your great-grandmother - Matriarch Wilhelmina - died too."

"If she could see it now, she would have gladly given her life for this." She looked at him with such certainty that he couldn't disagree with her.

"But why?" He finally asked her. "What was the point?"

She looked at him in thought. "There is loss and grief," She replied finally. "This is a dark and difficult time, but this time there is a light at the end of the darkness. There is a way we - our clan, our families - can survive. Isn't that worth a little bit of happiness?"

Antonius tried to follow her logic, not even sure if he completely believed her at the moment. Then he thought about how he felt after Legate Alcaeus asked to help him. "I guess I can see where you are coming from." He told her with a frown. "But I don't know if I can see a path ahead anymore."

She looked at him curiously. He told her about his parents and then the Legate's death and how that affected him. She nodded and listened attentively. "Did you know that Legate Alcaeus was crippled in early Foundation Establishment?" She asked him thoughtfully after listening.

Antonius shook his head. "How did he get better?"

"Great Grand-mother travelled to the Qiguai Secret Realm and procured a phoenix tear to heal him," She told him. "Perhaps, you could search there too?"

He blinked and considered that. "You know that might actually be helpful," He replied. "Thanks, Corvina."

She nodded and smiled. "Incidentally, if you do decide to go let me know." She replied. "I'm considering going there myself and I wouldn't mind some help."

He nodded. "Why are you going?" He asked her. "I thought you were preparing for your breakthrough."

"That's part of the problem," She replied with a frown. "As nice as the lifting of the clan's curse is, I based a lot of my divination around it. Now that it's gone, I'll need to rethink my dao. I was hoping I could get some insight there."

"I'll have to think about that too," He said, sighing. "But later. After I've fixed my parents."

Corvina nodded and smiled at him. "Good luck, Antonius."

"Good luck to you as well, Corvina." He replied. "Take care of yourself."

She smiled as she got up. "You too, Antonius."

As she left, he returned to his thoughts. The Qiguai Secret Realm. Should he go there? There would be guaranteed fighting not like the Yuan where he had powerful allies nearby and even there they hit disaster. But there would be no telling what he could achieve if he was lucky.

He needed to move, he realised. He couldn't think while seated.

He pushed off the wall and got to his feet. He walked out, mostly keeping to himself but occasionally greeting people who greeted him first.

Oriana nodded as he walked past her talking to a senior.

Corvina just waved at him, having found another diviner who she could actually talk to about what she was feeling.

He took a moment to stop to talk to Aunt Ariadne to ask her how she was doing. She gave him a genuine smile at his question and told him she was doing fine.

That cheered him up for a bit but after some time, he returned to his previous thoughts.

He walked out of the area being used by his legions and at some point, he reached the general area. His mind slowly turned to Pleuron and what happened here.

Thirteen people of foundation establishment and qi condensation held back an army. They even slew a Core Formation expert. They did all that to protect the people of the clan and he was fairly sure he could already match some of them, if not in skill but in potential and power.

They had performed a miracle and they weren't even that much stronger than him. Why couldn't he go to Qiguai and pull a lesser miracle of his own? He found himself in front of the Muyi tree and just looked at the remains of one of those thirteen.

These were the remains of Xiao Yi - a great hero and a reminder that even miracles didn't come without a price. This was what he would face if he headed to Qiguai. It'd be Yuan all over again. It'd be the trials all over again.

This time, there would be no one there to protect him. He would be facing the danger alone. His mother had protected him and was crippled for it - lost in a coma with no idea when she'd wake up. His father had faced the same fate when he'd tried to protect her.

Even the powerful and indomitable Alcaeus had perished right after promising to aid him and didn't the harsh but caring Wilhemina also die to protect him? It was a reminder that even if he succeeded in saving his parents and got lucky enough to find something to heal them, he could still very well die there before he could ever bring the cure home.

It was hard to describe the emotions going through him as he wrestled with his thoughts. Then there was a sound of rustling and he looked up to see the Muyi Tree become more agitated. He frowned, wondering what caused it. It was only supposed to target Fifth Sea Hunters, right?

Then a creature flew down to him and he took a step back as it flew around him. After a moment, he remembered the Qilin companion of Xiao Yi named Qing Yun. He had heard that it - he - had taken to resting beside the tree that it's partner left behind.

Qing Yun spun around him and Antonius admired his movements. It was beautiful and familiar. It reminded him of Yixuan Shan and the way he swam through the air. He frowned as he thought of the silver-finned pipefish's story.

He had to risk death to protect his loved ones as well, didn't he? He'd escaped the Jade Emperor's palace with Chang-e and survived the Jade Archer as well. His story was sad, but hadn't he succeeded in a way? Even if he never saw Chang-e again, Antonius knew that she had lived well enough to sire children that resulted in his mother and then resulted in him.

He bowed at the Qilin and turned to leave. Yes, he had to try despite the risks. The Indomitable Thirteen had managed to create a miracle despite their deaths. Though his mother and father had gotten hurt, he had still managed to ensure that they survived.

Even Matriarch Wilhelmina had protected him with her death and he was certain that Legate Alcaeus had given his life to perform a deed of equal worth. In fact, if Corvina was to be believed they even managed to secure the clan's future even in death.

He needed to accept that risk. He might die in this and he might just fail. In that case, to increase the chances of success he needed to follow his seniors. Chang-e and Shan had succeeded together. Shan would never have been able to attack the Jade Archer or hold off the Emperor's army on his own. Even the Miracle of Pleuron was a lesson in the possibilities that came from working with others.

If he died, he needed someone to carry what he found home for him. If he failed, he needed someone who might have succeeded in his place. He needed someone to watch his back in case of another Nicomedes.

He frowned at the thought of that traitor. He needed people he could trust. Corvina was already going and she would be a great start. She was skilled and possessed many skills that would help them get by traps but he needed more.

Maybe Oriana? He wasn't sure if the help she offered would extend all the way to going to a secret realm but you never knew. Aunt Ariadne would be too busy with the aftermath of the trials, but she might know someone who could accompany him.

He needed to make a group - a party? People who could go with him to Qiguai. He had time to think and plan. While he did that, he could look at other possibilities for his parents but a team would probably be useful even for that.

He found himself at the gates and turned back to look at the Muyi tree. Qing Yun was looking at him cautiously and for a moment, Antonius wondered if it had been worried about him.

He bowed in thanks. The world hadn't changed from before he had this realisation but he thought that now he could handle it. Now he'd be alright.
 
Demetrius Ceres - The Stuff Fanart
As a change of pace from watching my wordcount not increasing, I attempted to draw Demetrius Cere's own collection.

Behold: The Stuff

From left to right we have:
Poison Apple Venom, Devilpine sap, The Head of the Nameless Cultivator (now with chains), Apple of Life, Thousand-In-One-Blow Tree-Felling Axe, a sad pile of ashes.

Naturally, all vials are named, or have symbols, because not everyone has the supernatural ability to what each liquid is by looking at it.

Getting that tiny bonus on my roll this turn.
 
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Xiao Yingzi - Good Seed Background
Xiao Yingzi
"Little Shadow"

Xiao Yingzi became a ward of the clan.

This meant that there was no one to look after her except the clan itself. She had no parents, no one to claim her. She had just been left as a babe in front of a clan orphanage nearly a decade and a half before the trials. In Pleuron, the gateway to the clan's territories, she could have been anyone's child.

Though she had third sea looks, a test of her blood revealed traces of clan heritage. She was added to the aspirant track to become a legionnaire someday. Along with her there were other other children, many of whom had parents who were legionnaires before their deaths.

Xiao Yingzi never really fit in there. She was too different from them. What looks were common in the world outside was strange to the children there. Still, she never made any trouble. She was a quiet child who almost seemed to blend into the background.

Then the trials happened. When the fighting was thick in Pleuron, the orphans were enlisted to help where they could. They were in the middle of the fear and despair. And when the Miracle happened, they were in the middle of the joy and celebration.

Throughout it all, the orphans did their tasks. Some ran messages or carried small objects. They did all that teenage mortals could. They weren't unaffected by the emotions around them. Some broke down in despair. Most of them joined the crowd in celebration. Only Xiao Yinzi did her job without a single reaction to the things happening around her.

Xiao Yingzi became an aspirant.

Before she could join, she had to go through some tests that all aspirants had to go through. Tests to root out spies. Tests to discover talent. Tests to check their health. Most of her tests went as well as could be expected. However, a test for spiritual infestations picked up something on her.

She had been infected by a shadow demon - a weak parasite that hid in a creature's shadow and fed upon their emotions. It was a simple creature banished by simple exposure to light or even strong emotion. It had to have bonded to her before she would have even been picked up by her orphanage.

Though it had grown strong by feeding off of her, it was still no match for a cultivator. In the ordinary run of things, her teachers would have just banished the parasite. While she would have to deal with it's sudden absence, she would likely have managed to overcome it and become an admirable legionnaire.
However, that was not what happened. The new Master of Disciples was the flighty and curious Destasia Duca. She found herself intrigued by this new aspirant and rather than take the normal safer route, she decided to train her as she was. Wouldn't it be a waste to get rid of a soldier who couldn't feel emotions?

Though the elder did not train the girl herself, she ensured that all of the teachers gave her special attention and taught her all of the skills required of a good legionnaire. The elder also studied her condition and had the girl taught beast cultivation so that her control over her shadow would improve.

Xiao Yingzi became a legionnaire.

The grown woman was unrecognizable to any who knew her as a child. Instead of her pale third sea skin, her body had developed the tan that accompanied a weak manifestation of the blood of bronze. Her posture was straight with discipline and her eyes were sharp with an unshakable resolve.

Yet her shadow was unruly. It moved strangely in defiance of the light. It stretched and grew and seemed to roam the world by its own will. Though the girl had reached an accord with the creature, it still retained its own mind - born from the emotions the girl never wished to experience.

Despite that, she was the perfect legionnaire. She knew all of the clan's formations and would never be the one to falter. She would follow her orders dutifully and always think of the clan before herself

She was already considering how to help the clan. With her shadow, she could be the perfect scout and aid the clan while seeking more knowledge and power. Then who knew what she could achieve? She was ready for whatever the master had planned for her.

Alas, Destasia had already moved on. Xiao Yingzi was ordered to go through the standard recruitment and like the perfect legionnaire she was, she went obediently. Despite the setback, she wasn't dismayed. How could she be? She just needed to prove herself another way.

Feeding upon her emotions, the shadow grew stronger.
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Overall High Concept: An emotionless perfectionist given the goal of becoming the perfect legionnaire in order to aid the clan. She maintains this state by feeding her emotions to a shadow parasite that nevertheless acts on her emotions in it's own way.
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Current Status as of Turn 10: 116 Years Old, Experienced Centurion
Additional Impact: 36
The Legion-Banner Spear (+8 Impact)

The Legion-Banner Spear is in fact the former banner of the 1178th Legion, named "Through Innumerable Deaths, Unshaken". This particular motto along with the name of every single elder who stood as Legate for the Legion is inscribed on the spear, and fragments of thousands of Core Formation elders wills suffuse it even now - with a single Nascent Soul will, that of Teleos the Artisan - binding them together. Teleos had forged the banner-pole into a spear after trying to retrieve it from the Secret Realm and failing. They hoped to use it to defend themselves, but died anyway - storing their will within to allow it to last beyond their death. It offers great power indeed. Infused with the will of generations upon generations of elders, it can shatter barriers and pierce enemies even in Core Formation. Their collective wisdom whispers to her as well, helping her in battle, able to predict enemy movements preternaturally. More than that, the Will of the Nascent advises her and guides her allowing her to act with experience beyond her age. However, this banner pole is meant for a legate and Yingzi cannot use it to its fullest potential yet, only grasping its secondary functionalities at the moment.

The Soul Farseer (+1 Impact)

A telescope carved from high-grade spirit stones, the idle work for a Nascent Soul Craftsman. Despite being carved from spirit stones, it has been made as smooth as metal - the simple mechanisms of the telescope sliding open and closed without resistance. It is usually held around Xiao Yingzi's neck, acting as a talisman that enhances her sensory abilities through some use of demonic tunes, allowing her to see the strength of enemies even in Foundation Establishment from far away - it is difficult to hide one's strength or approach from Xiao Yingzi.

Note of Despair (+10 Impact)

A single song-note that when sung would wreak havoc on enemies, reducing them to despairing, gibbering wrecks. Only the strongest could resist it, and it could destroy an army if used. Of course, it rebounded upon the user and led them deeper into despair and self-destruction. As a side-effect of learning the Note of Despair, Yingzi's will has been refined allowing her to crudely resist other mental or spiritual effects. Of course, if one is to directly touch her mind then her resistance greatly increases as one has to be able to resist the full might of the Note to affect the mind.

Gathering Storm Clouds (+3 Impact)

Her ability to use tribulation lightning, now refined into a proper style by the instruction of a swordswoman who once sought the might of heaven. It focuses on the three-part nature of heavenly tribulation - that of a simple element, that of vital energy and that of killing intent. Using it as an element is simple - lightning bolts, lightning spears, barriers of energy, however its true strength comes from the other aspects.
Through its nature as vital energy and the fact that almost all cultivators must incorporate its absorption into their cultivation base, she can empower others by recharging their reserves of qi or temporarily empowering them beyond their limits - though only by paying an equivalent cost of her own. Through its nature as killing intent, she can turn every bolt into as much of a spiritual attack as a physical one by directly striking at their dao-hearts. This also improves the profundity of her killing intent, allowing her to more easily intimidate those with lesser cultivation.

The Ring of the Dead (+2 Impact)

A simple ring of unmarked gold with a strong deathly aura emanating from within the object. Well-made certainly, but something one might expect a skilled artisan to forge out of boredom rather than actually spending much time upon it. There is the glimmer of writing carved upon the inside of the ring, crude and hastily written. In the clan's old language, likely unrecognizable to most others it said: Through Innumerable Deaths, Unshaken. It is haunted by a ghostly intelligence born from all those who died in the mine where it was retrieved. It acts as a focus for the Art of the Undying Hero: storing power drawn from death that can be used to resurrect and heal the user upon injury. The pool can only be added to willingly by legionnaires and refuses to be used by any who aren't of the clan. Due to a side-use , it can also turn the user into a ghost, hiding them from the eyes and senses of others while it is worn.

Heroes Strike As One Mantra (+4 Impact)

The art was powerful, a sutra that grew and strengthened with those who used it. It allowed individuals who chanted it together to sacrifice their own growth, their own strength, and their own lifespan to the Mantra, but in return when it was chanted in battle, all those who had sacrificed into it would suddenly find their strength growing, their stamina unflagging, their courage indomitable. Over time, the power of a group of mantra-users would grow as they poured more and more of themselves into such. A group of mantra-chanters who kept a lineage of thousands of years might become absurdly powerful for their realm, or even strike beyond it. However, it could only be used by one group at a time, and rapidly lost effectiveness with numbers. A hundred would be near the maximum of those who could chant it together.

The Blood Fusion Scalpel (+8 Impact)

Using it to blend the blood of one willing dying man and one living, the living one could absorb the bloodline, arts, and combat knowledge of the dying, though not the cultivation. This was best only done once per man - twice might see the Blood Path curse begin to rise, but it would allow her to transfer knowledge and bloodline strength between her picked hundred, forming a legion that would become absurdly talented experts - and with the power of the Mantra to back their skills.
Life-Saving Treasures: 5
Art of the Undying Hero: Energy born from the sacrifice of legions is stored within her Ring. By drawing upon it, she can heal injuries and survive deadly blows or even enhance the ghostly transformation of the ring to be able to slip past physical objects and enemy perceptions for the period of her escape.
Special Treasures:
Tribulation Enhancements: None
Starting Perk: Shadow-touched: A shadow spirit inhabits her shadow and feeds upon her emotions. This turns her into a seemingly emotionless legionnaire who doesn't fear or falter. She can also draw upon the spirit for various techniques like enhanced stealth or intangibility.
Cultivation Goal: "Reach Core Formation as quickly as possible in order to gain power and aid the clan."
Plot Coupons: None

OOC: Had an idea for a second good seed I liked that I decided to go for. Meet Xiao Yingzi. First story post incoming.
 
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Xiao Yingzi 1 - Introducing Xiao Yingzi
Xiao Yingzi 1

How could she best aid the clan?

That was the question that dominated the mind of Xiao Yingze.

After her parents abandoned her, she only became who she was because of the clan's generosity. Once she became an Aspirant, she could only reach her current level of skill because of the aid of the Master of Disciples - Destasia Duca.

She owed the clan for who she was and she needed to repay it however she could. Even if the Elder had trained her and then abandoned her after she graduated. Even if she never fit into the clan's orphanage.

Xiao Yingze took in a deep breath and pushed her emotions away.

She didn't need those childish feelings interfering with her thoughts. It was not the clan's fault that the children didn't know any better. And she couldn't blame the elder - her time was precious and Xiao Yingze could think for herself how best to help the clan.

Her shadow began to warp away from simply mimicking her. Had she fed it too much already? No matter, she was in the room assigned to her as part of the 43rd legion. It would cause no trouble here.

As it began to stretch towards her unpacked belongings near her bed, she reconsidered that thought. Pushing back her chair, she stepped out of her desk and quickly grabbed her bag before her shadow could fully realise what she was doing.

Then she turned and tossed the bag on top of her desk. She had a light lit in order to better be able to think and go through the messages that she had been sent upon finally joining the legion. It was brighter there so the shadow wouldn't be able to reach it without her aid.

Her shadow crossed its hands together in annoyance but Xiao Yingzi ignored it in favor of looking through the contents of the bag. They were safe. Making sure not to touch them, she closed the bag.

It was Crystallised Lifeblood containing the Seven Emotions that was usually extracted through some dark ritual. Even a touch would cause her to feel what the original owner had and her shadow seemed to relish the object.

She was unsure where the Elder Duca had acquired it, but she had given the lifeblood to Xiao Yingzi in case she encountered something beyond her power and needed a method of escape. The lifeblood would give her shadow a strong but temporary increase in power, allowing her to carry her to safety.

She sighed. It was one of the last things the elder had given her before she graduated and Xiao Yingzi didn't want to use it if she didn't absolutely have to. In fact, since there was no telling what the shadow might do if it didn't have her survival instinct to guide it's growth in power using it up was dangerous and not only impractical.

She glanced at her shadow, now having abandoned human shape to stretch along the floor of her room and search it's nooks and crannies. Good, it had found a way to occupy itself and would hopefully tire itself out instead of causing any trouble.

With that settled, she returned to her original thoughts and the messages that she had been reading. Many of them were her fellow orphans, reaching out to her to congratulate her and to see if she might be interested in this mission or that. There seemed to be a lot of correspondence like these between previous wards of the clan.

This was what had brought up the thought of how she would finally aid the clan. While she considered herself competent in all fields of the legion, she also felt that her skills best fell under scouting. Her shadow's ability to eat her emotions made it harder for others to sense her qi and it helped her hide better in a more mundane sense as well.

It was a practical idea and several of the options she could see in front of her required someone of her skill-level but… in the long run, how much of a difference could a legionnaire in the first heavenstage even make in the clan? She smacked at her shadow as it reached for a letter in its exploration.

Not that it would help unless she allowed the shadow to become physical with her qi, but it seemed to help the shadow settle down. She grasped at the letter it was interested in and frowned. It was by a Senior Oriana, a ward of the clan who had joined the legion before she was even born.

The letter included an offer to introduce her to others travelling to the Qiguai Secret Realm if she was interested in travelling there in it's coming opening. It was specifically addressed to her, even if it had her name. She felt like the Senior Sister had sent it to everyone she could to see who would be interested.

Was she interested? Xiao Yingzi wondered. There was risk and a chance of death in any secret realm but the worth of the rewards were well-documented. Her senior sister also mentioned that one of the participants was a survivor of the Yuan Secret Realm who had achieved the tenth heavenstage.

She had never heard of this Antonius, but if she had even a modicum of skill to go with his power it would likely improve her chances considerably. And it made sense to go there. Currently, she had no worth to the clan but with a bit of power, that wouldn't be true anymore.

Besides, if she perished was that really so bad? It wasn't like the clan would lose anything important with a first heavenstage junior. From a macro-perspective, it was like risking a pawn to get a queen. Why wouldn't you do it?

Her shadow rippled uneasily at her thoughts. She smiled as she wondered if it was afraid to perish. It was unlikely that it could survive without her. That was good. It increased the chance that her last resort would work as it was meant to if she had to use it.

She looked back at the letter. It said to meet at Pleuron - so she'd be going home then. She still wasn't sure about joining before investigating Antonius but even if she didn't take the offer, the trip shouldn't be wasted.

She could touch base with her orphanage. The network it established was clearly helpful and it would be good to become a deeper part of that. Perhaps once she was more established, that could be another avenue to aid the clan.

She nodded to herself, secure in her decision and noticed that her shadow had begun to mimic her again. Good, it had calmed down. She got up and put her future plans out of mind for the moment. The instructions she had procured recommended greeting her fellow legionnaires before settling in. With her shadow under control, she could finally proceed with that.

She took a moment to recall the instructions.

Make eye contact and smile. Shake hands for equals, bow to seniors.

Nodding to herself, she opened her door and went out to meet her new legion.

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Mostly just trying to get into the character's head. Not sure I've fully got it but wanted to post it just in case turn starts to end. LST for the omake reward please! @ReaderOfFate or anyone else, please threadmark this and the good seed intro whenever you have time.
 
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Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 18 - [The Curse of Metal: An Alchemical Study]
Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 18
[The Curse of Metal: An Alchemical Study]

Contributors: Physician Seneca [Unattached], Specialist Antonius Ambrosius of the 96th Legion
Subject: Specialist Antonius Ambrosius of the 96th Legion
Scribe: Mneme Corculum of the Seventh Legion [Medical Apprentice]
Access Permissions: The Ambrosius Bloodline, Physician Seneca

Note: Physician Seneca has belonged to the twenty-third medical legion and the thirty-seventh alchemical legion. As a foundation establishment expert of 931, he has outlived both of his legates and the disbanding of their legion. He currently has chosen to remain unattached.


This document is a summary of an alchemical study done of the unique bloodline mutation known as the Curse of Metal. Appearing within the body of Specialist Antonius Ambrosius of the ninety-sixth legion, it has the ability to increase his rate of cultivation in return for reduced lifespan. See original report marked in the references.

It should be noted that this study was done at the request of the subject and though a thorough study has been done, the focus of the study is on finding a practical use for the bloodline in alchemy to aid the subject's finances.

Various parts of the body were tested including but not limited to blood, sweat, tears, saliva, skin, hair and nails. The exact details of these tests and other bodily reagents are given in the full report attached. None of them show a major variance from standard except in a consistent manner indicating the presence of a unique qi.

The strength of this presence also varies in strength between reagent to reagent. The effect seems to be strongest in the blood though it is also strong anywhere the Blood of Bronze itself is present. It is speculated that the source or at least the favored medium of the 'Curse' is tied to the blood itself.

This unique qi has been isolated and concentrated as a separate resource using the Bronze Ravager Process, created by the alchemist of the same name. It should be noted that this resource is not the resource present in Legionnaire Antonius Ambrosius the manipulation of which seems to require mastery of both metal and the Blood of Bronze beyond what is available to the clan.

This isolated resource - called Essence for ease of referral - seems to primarily be whatever factor causes the curse of metal though it retains an affinity for bronze. The natural properties of Essence outside of any deliberate manipulation seem to manifest with the absorption of qi from any source and the integration of that qi through metallic growth resulting in eventual petrification.

Exposure of Essence to a colony of One Day Iron Flies caused the flies to die within half a day having turned into iron statues. Testing of the iron showed that the iron had been infused with the Flies' Dao of Mortality. Tests with creatures of earth and stone confirmed that this is replicable to all solid materials.

The ease of transfer of the curse's effect and the outstanding materials created in its wake leads to the speculation that the Curse was deliberately designed to gain this exact result and though the materials produced are relatively simple to understand, the complexity of the curse itself given its adaptability seems to equal the complexity of the Blood of Bronze.

The effects of the metal produced by Antonius' body is unknown. It seems to have the same effect as the standard Blood of Bronze but this may change if he reaches the higher realms. Notably, it is incredibly difficult to piece together what occurs within the subject's body as the complexity of the two bloodlines seem to compound.

It is also speculated that the reagent may allow for bloodline creation and indeed that many of the Third Sea's metal bloodlines may derive from it though confirmation of the former requires more long-term testing and the latter requires more metal qi bloodline samples.

Beyond basic research and discovery, the reagent was also tested in other more practical uses. It was first tested as a poison, in keeping with Benzelmer's Third Principle which states that the best method of discovering the risks of a reagent is by deliberately aiming for those risks in the form of poisons.

It was possible to use the reagent to create a qi starvation and petrification poison that drains the target's qi and uses it to further damage them through metallic petrification. This poison proved surprisingly ineffective however as it can be easily shaken off by any trained expert without deliberate and invasive applications.

Based upon the previous studies of short-lived creatures, it is likely that was only possible due to exposure over lifetimes and generations which leads to the conclusion that in individual organisms it can only be applied to a willing subject or one over whom you have power - speculated to be at least a three great realm difference.

This does mean that the subject does not have to worry about affecting others through accidental exposure. In the use of poisons however, it may still prove useful provided the right catalysts and reagents are paired with it though that is not the subject of this study.

It was then tested as a cultivation booster. This proved incredibly effective especially for metal affinity experts, provided it is paired with the right reagents to curb its metalification and lifespan reduction. The additional reagents make it as effective and expensive as standard products. It can also be turned into a cheaper cultivation booster but the user will suffer side-effects that may vary based upon physiology.

It was also tested as a medicine that can improve the generation of the Blood of Bronze in the body. It has similar requirements as before and it proves just as effective. It is speculated that it may be useful in granting the blood of bronze as well, especially a version similar to the subject's but that project would be a major undertaking that would require a large investment from the clan.

It has no properties of healing or lifespan extension, though it may be used in rare cases where restoration of the bloodline itself is a requirement. As the latter is Physician Seneca's speciality, extensive testing was done there which revealed that the subject and others affected by the bloodline can use lifespan boosts as normal though they only seem to be half as effective.

At Physician Seneca's personal expense the use of the Essence as a tribulation aid was also tested. Testing has shown that it may act as an effective meditation aid for firming up dao related to metal or materials though it does not aid the tribulation itself.

An attempt to recreate the clan's few bloodline-obscuring pills were ineffective though they did result in the creation of the Bronze Metal Pill that can disguise the blood of bronze as a third sea bronze-based metal bloodline for a day. The effect is only superficial and will fail against heaven's tribulations or invasive testing but may disguise a clan cultivator from casual scrutiny if travelling into Righteous Territory.

After the research and tests, this report concludes that there are several areas of use for the Curse of Metal bloodline in alchemy. However due to the scarcity of the reagent due to a single source, it is suggested that besides that it's use should be focused on catering to individuals with metal dao or alchemists working with metallic creatures for best return.
 
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Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 19 - [Preparation]
Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 19
[Preparation]

Antonius looked through the report that the good Physician Seneca had presented to him. It gave him a lot of good insight on his bloodline but more importantly, it told him that selling his blood as an alchemical reagent was a valid avenue for money.

He had to make up for the income lost from his mother and father somehow. He had no idea how much they were working to support him and now that they were in a coma, he needed some way to make up for that in order to take care of them properly.

He spared a moment to glance at their sleeping bodies. "Will this be enough to cover the fees for my parents, Physician Seneca?" He asked, turning to the deceptively youthful Seventh Pillar who had been patiently watching him go through the report.

The Physician nodded cheerfully. "And then some." He replied. "Even after you deduct my personal share, you should have enough to fuel your cultivation."

Antonius smiled back in relief. "Thank you for everything, Physician Seneca." He said. The Physician who had been introduced to him by the late Alcaeus had been willing to take care of his parents in exchange for being paid later. He wasn't sure what he would have done if he hadn't offered that.

"I am hardly coming out of this at a loss." He replied. "You are at the tenth heavenstage. Once you got your feet under you, you would have been able to afford it. This just makes it even better."

Antonius nodded. "Out of curiosity, who are you selling to?" He asked curiously. It probably wasn't too important but it was best to know these things.

"I'm retaining some for a personal project which I am paying full price for," He replied, adding the last bit at your curious look. "But the rest I'm using to sell the Bronze Metal Pill to the clan."

Antonius glanced at the report with a frown. "'It only works for a day, and disguises the imbiber as a bronze-based metal qi bloodline against non-invasive testing.'" He read out loud. "I'm not sure there are many bronze-based bloodlines in the third sea. Couldn't someone deduce that the user is a clan?"

"Actually, there is one such bloodline in our records." The physician explained. "However, you are right about the limitations. However, I intend to sell it to the array-engineers traveling to the Strength Purity Sect who put about as much effort in disguising the deal as the pill does. It may prove useful to them in an emergency."

Antonious nodded. He knew some people from his legion might be sent there. He'd need to ask them if it was any use later. "What about after the deal with the Sect is over?" He asked curiously. "It isn't going to last forever I think."

"I have a few other interested alchemists," He replied. "We are currently discussing terms. I'll let you know the details when I have something solid set up."

Antonius looked over the report. What else did he have to ask? He was curious about the physician's personal project but he wasn't sure he should ask about that. The only thing left was… ah. "I saw you mentioning tribulation aids," He said, looking up at Physician Seneca. "How common is something like that?"

"Not very," He answered with a sigh. "Or rather theoretically anything can be a cultivation aid. The problem is that more often than not, they are highly specific to a dao. That your blood can create boosters for metal-based dao in general is actually incredible."

Antonius nodded with a frown. "I was hoping to get something for myself," He admitted. "What about these bloodline obscuring pills that you mentioned in the report?"

"Those hide the bloodline well enough that even heaven is tricked and weakens our tribulation," He answered, smiling wryly. "Those are universal to the clan, but they are incredibly precious. I don't see the clan giving it to a Qi Condensation cultivator, no matter how lucky or talented."

Antonius sighed but nodded. "I suppose that's all the questions I have," He said, before pulling out a vial of his blood and passing it on towards the physician. "Here's what I have today. Do we have anything else to discuss?"

Seneca took a moment to examine it before putting it aside. Then he looked towards Antonius. "There are a few other things I was hoping to discuss with you," He replied causing Antonius to look at thim curiously. "Firstly, while I will look out for useful cultivation aids for you, it might be worth looking into lifespan extension."

Antonius blinked. "I know you sell that to people willing to cover your expenses," He said carefully. "But would I be able to afford that?"

Physician Seneca nodded. "You are getting to the point thwere you could," He answered. "There is a limit to how far that extension can go, but unlike me you are far from that limit."

Antonius considered that and smiled. "Thank you," He replied to the physician. "That would be very helpful."

"And the other matter is that I hear you intend to go to the Qiguai Secret Realm?" The physician asked, with a raised eyebrow.

Antonius frowned. "Yes, to find a cure for my parents." He replied. "Would that be a problem?"

Physician Seneca sighed. "Quite honestly, I'd rather that you not go." He admitted. "You represent a unique resource and are a skilled cultivator besides. However, I doubt I can convince you otherwise."

Antonius nodded cautiously. "I can't really think of anywhere to get a cure for my parents." He answered. "I have to go."

The physician nodded in acceptance. "Well, be careful then and make sure that you don't take any unnecessary risks."

"I won't." He agreed with a smile. "I've already planned on going with others that I can trust to be there for me. I'm actually heading to Pleuron later this week to meet them."

The physician raised an eyebrow. "Why Pleuron?" He asked curiously.

Antonius considered that. "I'm not entirely sure why," He answered. "But all of the members seem to coincidentally have a connection with Pleuron."

The physician smiled. "How so?"

"Well, originally I was going to go there because Corvina - the only one confirmed to come - was working to fix the arrays there." He continued. "The others either grew up there or were assigned there. It seemed like an ideal place to rendezvous."

The physician nodded. "Good luck then. I hope you do find what you are looking for."

"Thank you, Physician Seneca." Antonius replied then he glanced at his parent's faces again. "Can I stay here for a bit longer?"

The Physician followed his gaze and nodded. "Stay as long as you like."

As he left, Antonius took a moment to examine his parent's sleeping faces.

His father's bronze skin glistened like it had been polished. It was honestly brighter than it ever was when he was up and about. His strength hadn't deteriorated and his body was methodically maintained.

His mother's skin was healthy and without blemish. He didn't remember if that mattered to her but he wondered if she would be happy for it when she woke up. Her cultivation hadn't fallen, something which he hadn't known to be worried about before.

They were so perfectly preserved, he felt like they could get up at any moment and surprise him. It was only in Physician Seneca's care that they could be so healthy despite their internal damage.

His mind wandered once more to Yixuan Shan's story where Chang-e had lived on happily, despite Yixuan Shan's almost certain demise. He knew Corvina at least would carry any cure they found back for him but he didn't like the idea that his parents would know that he died for them.

After seeing his parent's reduced to such a state, he knew how that felt. How much worse would it be for a parent to know that their child died to heal them? It wasn't a bad outcome if they lived and he didn't. It was an okay outcome.

But hadn't he sworn that he'd burn the brightest of them all? Even if it was okay, it still wasn't acceptable. He had power now, small as it was in the grand scheme of things. What was the point of power if you couldn't have everything you ever wanted?

As Antonius walked out of the room, he was determined to bring about a singular result. He'd live. They'd live. They would all live happily again together. That was what he wanted. Nothing less than a perfect outcome.
 
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Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 20 - [Meeting the Team: Corvina Taurus]
Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 20
[Meeting the Team: Corvina Taurus]

Upon reaching Pleuron, the first thing Antonius had to think about was a place to stay and a place to work. He was still able to send his blood to Physician Seneca by mail which gave him a good amount of funds available but he still didn't feel happy freely spending them.

It might have been because he still wasn't completely used to spending the amount of resources he suddenly had on hand, but there was also a remote possibility that a healing reagent would become available or a cultivator with the necessary skill to heal them would appear. He didn't want to miss that opportunity because he'd spent his resources somewhere else.

It was why he was careful when looking for a place to stay. As an aspirant, he never had to look into housing as he was allowed to stay in the aspirant dormitories for his first year. After that, his mother had found and paid for a house for him on her own. Once he became a cultivator, he simply lived in his family home.

It had never been a worry for him before and the attempt in procuring his own home… wasn't the best start. Normally, the clan territories offered a range of accommodations for any member who could afford them. Pleuron specifically was the gateway into the wider clan territories and hosted many foreign merchants and cultivators, so it had an even greater offering.

Unfortunately, most of those offerings were not as good as they were said to be. Many of the places that jumped out at him turned out to be scams often perpetrated by travelling merchants. It wasn't until he reached out to Corvina Taurus who had a place there for some time that he was led past them into the actual good accommodations available for legionnaires.

Eventually, they both found a place for two that they could cheaply afford together. It was a nice place with a full restroom, kitchen, living room and two private rooms for the both of them. It was very good for a place he only had to stay in for a few more months before heading to Qiguai and he got to know his travelling companion at the same time.

As he entered the house after leaving there for a week, Antonius had to admit it was hard to get used to. He had lived with his parents his whole life but that hadn't prepared him for the quirks every cultivator seemed to develop. With Corvina Taurus he had expected something but her persona after the trials hadn't suggested anything about her paranoia. Though in hindsight, it made sense for a diviner of the clan.

First, there were several arrays that got deactivated when he used his key to open the lock. She had refused to tell him what they were as a 'sensible precaution'. Then he had to remember several traps lined throughout the house and avoid tripping wires of invisible bronze that would trip them if he touched them.

After passing through curtains of woven bronze that he was certain was a weapon of some sort he had finally come to the living room that they shared. There were still traps inside, but they had to be activated by her first. It was... heartening to know that this would be guarding their camp as well but it was so tedious to live through.

"Hey, Antonius." Corvina greeted him, not looking up from some kind of divination device. "How was your day?"

"It was alright," He replied, moving over to take a seat next to her. "Oriana got me a job working with the guards. What about you?"

"Still working on fixing the wall arrays," She said, frowning but not looking up. "One of the Thirteen really did a number on the outer wards which was certainly helpful in the battle but is tough to fix after the fact."

Antonius nodded, knowing what she referred to. They all knew what happened there. "What are working on?" He leaned in to get a closer look. It was a board with a clock on it? The bronze hands moved freely like a compass and rather than numbers, at the end of each hand were various symbols that he didn't recognise.

"Trying to re-calibrate my divination board," She replied, as she tried to read the board. "It worked by using heaven's curse as a guiding force which really doesn't work when it's gone."

"Oh, I remember you mention how much that affected your style." Antonius said, wondering how much it affected her capabilities. "Can you get it working by the time we leave?"

She shrugged. "It's not like my divination is useless now," She continued. "I can still do dowsing and a few other things. I'm also brushing up on my arrays and combat thread usage. It's just that this was my speciality."

Antonius patted her back sympathetically. "How is it going then?" He asked instead. "Made any progress?"

"Some," She replied. "So you know when I said the curse is gone?" Antonius nodded and she continued. "Well, strictly speaking heaven has several curses on us. For divination, there are two that are important. One that just generally makes our life worse and the other that specifically affects the clan's ability to gather resources for their cultivators."

Antonius blinked. "So we're actually cultivating slower than we should?" He asked her, thinking of the good luck he had so far.

"Probably not you specifically," She explained. "It's more of a large statistical thing and that's the curse that's still there."

"So you are trying to use that curse instead of the one you usually use?" He guessed. "It's not working out as intended, I assume?"

"Actually, that works fine." She replied. "It's just tied to the territories we use, so it's not really useful for our personal use especially once we leave for Qiguai."
"So no progress on that front then?" He finished for her.

She sighed and sat back from the board. "No, not really." She answered, as she leaned back and massaged her forehead. "

I knew I needed something drastic like heading to Qiguai to find a permanent solution, but it's still frustrating me."

"Maybe you need a break," Antonius suggested. "A fresh perspective might help."

"Maybe," She agreed. "How are the preparations for our journey going then?"

"Nothing yet on the actual journey," He replied with a sigh. "I've looked at the routes we can take though. We can get to the Yuan clan by Scorpion Road or Shimmering Soup Sect Airship. After that, we need to get to Qiguai on foot, or spend more for a spirit beast or airship."

Corvina nodded in thought. "Airship sounds best if it can get us all the way, though the cost is a factor as always."

"The reason I'm waiting on deciding is because one of the people we might travel with said she'd secured a few seats in the airships," Antonius said. "So I'm waiting to talk to her first."

She raised an eyebrow suspiciously. "That sounds very convenient. Who is this person?"

"Her name is Yahwen," He replied, taking a moment to recall what he'd heard of her. "First Heavenstage with a lot of combat experience. Formerly of the Viridescent Blade Duchy and currently an aspiring noodle cultivator. Her master is one of the mercenaries hired by the clan and she was vouched for by Au- Centurion Ariadne."

Corvina nods slowly. "If Lady Ariadne vouches for her, then I guess we have to trust the information but I'm certain there are some complications there."

Antonius nodded. "I'll keep that in mind when I talk to her."

"Who else is coming?" She asked him.

"There is Xiao Yingzi, newly minted Legionnaire." He told her. "This one was recommended by Orianna."

"First heavenstage?" She asked, sighing.

"First heavenstage," Antonius agreed, feeling somewhat similar. "But she's supposedly quite skilled and talented."

"If you say so," She replied with a shrug. "What about Oriana herself?"

"She's too busy with making sure the legion worked," He explained. "Though she did help find this Xiao Yingzi."

"That's too bad," Corvina said. "She's fairly reliable."

Antonius nodded. "That's it so far, I think."

"It might be helpful for all of us to meet up," She suggested. "Look into that if you can?"

"I'll bring it up when I meet them," He agreed. He paused for a second. "Any ideas for improving your divination?"

She shook her head. "Nothing yet unfortunately." She replied with a frown. "Anyway, I should probably get back to work. Keep me updated on your progress."

Antonius nodded. "I will." He got up to head to his room, before turning back to Corvina. "Did you add any new traps in front of our rooms?"

She looked back at him and thought for a moment, before nodding. "Stick to your side of the corridor."

Antonius sighed and nodded. It was strange what you could get used to.
 
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@Quest Both your last two omakes are titled as Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 19.

As the last threadmarked omake for him was 17, I have put the first omake as Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 18.
 
@Quest Both your last two omakes are titled as Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 19.

As the last threadmarked omake for him was 17, I have put the first omake as Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 18.
I copied it and forgot to edit. My bad. That said, it should be 19, 20. The last one is 18 over here or just a little further above in the page. I think it might have gotten sorted in the wrong place? Thanks for the threadmarking!

Speaking of which....
 
Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 21 - [Meeting the Team: Yahwen the Bladeless]
Antonius Emmanuel Eleanora 21
[Meeting the Team: Yahwen the Bladeless]

Antonius agreed to meet Yahwen at one of the thermopylae. They were restaurants that served the large qi condensation population of the clan and the food they produced was cheap, delicious and filling. At Pleuron, they were particularly focused on traditional clan food as a way to attract the foreigners who might be visiting.

Rather than order something, Antonius took a table on the courtyard outside where he wouldn't be disturbed by the staff and brought his own food. It wasn't that he disliked the food they provided, it was more that he'd had it before and like his mother he preferred a little variety in his eating habits.

He'd been corresponding with Aunt Ariadne a lot recently and she had begun to recommend various new food products that she tried. While Antonius was glad for it, he also had a feeling she was missing his mother so he made sure to try whatever she sent his way quickly and tell her his thoughts.

This time, she had sent him a new form of rations a nutritionist from the 43rd legion was testing out. It was an interesting dish made from dried noodles mixed with spices that you could cook within minutes just by adding hot water.

It came packed inside a container called a 'cup' for some reason that was lined with a heating array easily activated with an infusion of qi. Just as the smell was wafting into his nose, a female voice interrupted his meal. "Is that noodles?" The girl asked him eagerly.

He looked up from his meal to see a beautiful girl with Divided Kingdom looks dressed in a bronze chiton - an traditional clan outfit. "Yahwen?" He guessed. At her grinning nod, he raised an eyebrow. "You work here as a waitress?"

She blinked at your question and then glanced at her outfit. "Yeah." She replied, smile turning sheepish. "I'm trying to get a job as a chef but I don't really have the skills."

Antonius shrugged. "Sorry, it's not a problem. I've done some waitering myself as an aspirant." He replied, gesturing for her to take a seat. "I just didn't think you would have any trouble getting work as a chef since you're a noodle cultivator of the ninth heavenstage."

"I was originally a sword cultivator of the Viridescent Blade Duchy," She explained while pulling up a chair. "I only recently decided to try and learn noodle-making."

"How did that happen?" He asked curiously. "Correct me if I'm wrong, but I was under the impression that the Blade Duchy wasn't one to let cultivators go - especially if you reached the ninth heavenstage."

"I was supposed to go on a journey to hone my swordsmanship," She replied and then paused clearly trying to think of how best to phrase the next part. When Antonius raised an eyebrow again, she blushed. "Since I didn't know how to work or hunt, I ended up basically starving."

"And then your master gave you noodles to eat and you liked it so much that you decided to become his disciple?" He finished for her. "It's what always happens in these stories."

She looked down at the table. "Well, you're mostly right." She admitted wryly. "He didn't exactly accept."

Antonius blinked. "Which is why you are having trouble actually working as a chef." He realised. "Why did he refuse, by the way?"

"I was born with Blade Qi," She replied, sighing. "I've always honed Blade Qi and I was even going to pursue the Dao of the Blade. I think that perhaps he doesn't believe I have the dedication to pursue his arts after abandoning mine?"

Antonius floundered for a moment, taken aback by that deep admission by a stranger before responding with the first though that came to his mind. "Noodles?" He asked, pushing his own cup towards her.

She blinked and looked down at it. "I can try it?" She asks hesitantly. When you nod, she takes your chopsticks and takes it in with a loud slurp.

Antonius blinks at that before smiling. "Where did you learn to do that?" He asked her curiously. "I don't think the Blade Duchy had that habit."

"It's really good." Yahwen told him with a smile before she registered your question. Then she paused for a moment then shook her head. "They don't actually but I've seen Axe Clan do it and master does it as well."

"I know it as a way to show appreciation for good soup in the Shimmering Soup Sect," He explained. "I suppose it works for noodles as well."

"I didn't know it was from there," She holds her chopsticks in the air and looks thoughtful. "I just copied my master when we ate our meals."

Antonius frowned for second. "I have a question," He told her and then continued when she nodded. "Did you travel with your master or follow him here? Because I thought maybe the second but it seems to be more like the first?"

"He lets me travel with him." She explained, sighing. "He just won't teach me."

Huh. He was more and more curious about this master. "So wait, your master did this for his own meals?" He asked curiously. She nodded which made you smile. "I was told it was done to show appreciation for the chef. I wonder if it's normal for chefs to do that while having their own meals."

Yahwen thought for a moment and smiled. "I don't actually know," She admitted. "But my master is definitely the sort of person to praise himself."

Antonius smirked. "You know, technically I made these noodles." He joked and then froze as she looked at him with an intense look. "What?"

"Teach me." She said so intensely that Antonius nodded instinctively before blinking and shaking his head.

"Wait no," He replied quickly. "I was kidding. I didn't really make those."

"Oh," She replied, deflating.

Antonius looked at her and pulled out another packed cup of noodles from his storage ring. "It's a new form of instant noodle rations the legion is trying." He explained to her. "I didn't actually make it because it was ready-made."

She frowned at his explanation before looking down at her own cup. "What do you mean by 'instant'?"

"It means I can make it in minutes by adding hot water," He explained, then he pointed to some symbols scrawled on the side of the cup. "This one actually includes a simple heating array that can cook it just by adding qi."

"Arrays can do that?" She asked him, her eyes widening. "I always thought that they were only useful for battle and stuff."

"Oh yeah." He replied, as he handed her the cup and summoned some water into it. Then he demonstrated how to channel qi into it. "You'd be surprised at what cultivators can come up with in their free time."

He watched as she tried it and her eyes lit up as the water flash-boiled. "Now what do I do?" She asked, turning back to him.

He reached out and covered it up. "Just leave it like that for a minute and let it cook." He replied. He thought for a moment then added. "Feel free to keep the cups. They are meant to be reusable a few times if you need to cook something else in the field."

"Thank you." She replied, beaming at him. Antonius smiled back before stopping to think. Were they becoming friends?

"You are welcome," He replied cheerfully. "You should finish the other one while this one cooks."

She nodded. Then she looked down at the bowl and frowned. "You should eat as well." She said, offering him the bowl back.

Antonius raised a hand to stop her and shook his head. "Take both," He offered. "Consider them a gift. I can even order more for you if you want me to later."

She frowned. "Are you sure? I'd hate to take your food."

He nodded. "This way I get to open one more," He replied, grinning. "We can both try three flavors and food is always better with friends."

To his surprise, she quickly leaned forward and lightly hugged him with one hand. After a moment of hesitation, he awkwardly hugged her back. "Thank you," She said quietly, before pulling back.

He nodded awkwardly for a moment and grasped for something to say. "So," He said, as she began to eat. "You said you'd secured seats on one of the Shimmering Soup Sect's airships?"

She looked up at him and nodded. As she began to speak, Antonius pulled out another cup and began to prepare it. "My master won it in a cooking duel," She explained after eating a bite. "One of the reasons I wanted to go with people from your clan was that they might cause less trouble with the Golden Devil Clan."

Antonius nodded. There was the complication that Corvina predicted. "Your master wouldn't be coming?" He inquired and she shook her head. "Well, while that might make things tricky overall but I think the other members will be okay with dealing with that. Would you agree to meeting up with them at some point?"

She nodded. "You could meet up here." She offered. "That would work best for me."

Antonius nodded back. "I'll have to ask, but that seems fine to me."

She smiled for a moment. "So who are the other members exactly?"

"I think my aunt might have mentioned Corvina to you?" He asked her and she nodded. "Well, the last one is Xiao Yingzi. I haven't met her but I've been corresponding with her. She seems fairly serious and is apparently a shadow manipulator."

"A shadow manipulator?" She asked him curiously. He nodded. "Black hair, tanned skin, third sea looks?"

He nodded. "That's how she was described to me." He replied, an eyebrow raised. "Do you know her?"

"I think she might have been following you?" She told him, pointing a chopstick in a direction vaguely behind her. He blinked and turned but found no one there. "She was left when I spotted her."

"When did this happen?" He asked her with a frown.

"This was just before talking to you," She explained, apologetically. "I didn't really make the connection until you mentioned a shadow manipulator. I just thought she might have been practising a technique or something."

Antonius sighed. "Well, she was probably just checking up on me." He explained, smiling. "I'm meeting her later, so I'll bring it up then. Thanks for pointing it out."

"It isn't strange around her?" She asked, frowning.

He shrugged. "It kinda is," He admitted with a smile. "But I've learnt that cultivators have their own quirks. Checking up on someone before meeting them seems understandable to me."

She nodded before pointing at your cup of noodles. "I think it's done." She replied. "You should eat it before it cools."

Antonius smiled and nodded. He pushed the fourth member of this team out his mind until he officially had to meet her.

Right now, he wanted to enjoy his time with his new friend.
 
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I copied it and forgot to edit. My bad. That said, it should be 19, 20. The last one is 18 over here or just a little further above in the page. I think it might have gotten sorted in the wrong place? Thanks for the threadmarking!

Speaking of which....
Thanks for pointing that out. I've fixed the sorting and updated the threadmarks.

Nice character building omakes.
 
Getting up to speed – A Report to the new Disciples Councillor
Getting up to speed – A Report to the new Disciples Councillor


Report to: Destasia Duca, Mistress of Disciples,

Subject: Disposition of the current identified crop of Advanced Potential* Members "Good Seeds"

Analysis of trends in the Clan's likely advancement prospects "Good seeds"


Mistress Destasia,

This report is intended as a short overview briefing. If you wish for greater details on anything, please let your staff know.

As you have likely surmised, the recent loss of the majority of our core formations has devastated our lists of those with the potential to advance to Nascent soul in the near future, as well as curtailing the list of possible successors to the current patriarch.

Our lists of foundation establishment Advanced Potentials remains virtually unchanged, thanks to an exceptionally low casualty rate amongst Foundation Establishment experts in the last centennial trials.

This means that it should be possible to replace our core formations in the medium term, at an expected rate of 4 new Core Formation cultivators every decade with only normal levels of investment by the clan. Without casualties, this would put us back at comparable overall numbers of Core Formation experts in the next 185 years, though our proportion of higher-level experts and overall strength would naturally be lower.

Whilst this is obviously a hideous blow to our power projection, I must point out that had the Foundation Establishment portion of the clan suffered similar casualties, we could be looking at a time lag of almost 300 years to train new foundation establishments up to core formations.

Lastly, I come to our youngest subset. At present, our lowest realm advanced potential members are showing a marked tendency towards advancement through the "additional" stages above the bare minimum for breakthrough.

This trend appears to have begun in the last century or so, perhaps driven by the nature of the 100 year trials, where high combat power within a realm is more likely to result in survival.

We expect this trend to continue and be exacerbated by the celebrated actions of the "Thirteen" at Pleuron, many of whom had chosen to pursue this path and were already above the 9th​ Heavenstage of Qi Condensation.

In particular, a large number of potentials have described a desire to achieve the 12th​ Heavenstage before advancing. Whilst the longterm benefits of this trend are obvious should even one of these potentials reach nascent soul, such advancement is likely to be 9 centuries away or more.

As the clan is currently faced with a crisis of manpower, the lack of speedy advancement could represent a future problem should it become a sustained trend over then next century or two. Whilst we can expect some of these potentials to abandon their plans as their lifespans approach their end, this still means that they are less likely to advance to and through foundation establishment, slowing our rate of potential core formations again.

Whilst the decisions naturally fall to yourself as Mistress of Disciples, the staff have identified 2 areas we believe to be of most immediate concern:

  • Increasing our production of core formation cultivators
  • Minimising attrition possibilities for core formation and foundation establishment cultivators.
A small selection of by-lines for disciple training proposals based around these priorities this are laid out below:

  • Short term investment in obtaining tribulation advancement treasures, such as Dao Masking pills.
  • Clan matchmaker services – Helping unattached clan members not part of sub-families find partners. Short term 'paired cultivation' bonuses, long term benefits unquantified.
  • Greater clan programmes providing access to expect Dao Scholars and Philosophers for Foundation establishment cultivators.
  • Counter Intrigue and anti-assassination training for identified talents.
  • Provision of clan funded 'escape talismans' to valued up and coming talents.
  • Formation training programmes for Core Formations, focusing on training subordinates to use the Clan's key formation techniques and channelling and directing the power of these formations.
  • (Long Term) accumulating wealth and expertise to repair the Technique palace to work for foundation establishment level cultivators.

*Note: "Potential" here is used in the clan parlance and does not reflect "receptiveness" or the ability to absorb and assimilate qi.

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For some reason I got to thinking about our current crop of good seeds and the tendency to pick the high heavenstages and just had an urge to do a style of report to our new mistress of Disciples outlinng this, which morphed into this short piece. The last vote said that ½ a turns advancement was about 2 new core formation cultivators. So 4 a turn. IIRC We had around 50 or so core formations before the trials and have 13 now. To get back to 50 we'd need 9.25 turns, or 180 years of growth without any deaths.
 
Year 119 - Lightning Expulsion
Adhoc vote count started by occipitallobe on Nov 22, 2020 at 8:28 PM, finished with 104 posts and 14 votes.

  • [X] Plan: Brace for Impact
    -[X] Weeding out the Aspirants
    -[X] She is blinded to the War in the Plains
    -[X] She is blinded to the moves of the Jingshen Clan
    -[X] Interest forever!
    [X] Plan Escalating Recovery
    -[X] Shakes Dao Hearts - I think I've been convinced by the "we can't afford a disaster either way" logic;
    -[X] She is blinded to the War in the Plains - they are not about to eat us right now if we make the wrong move, and if they are, we're fucked either way;
    -[X] She is blinded to the moves of the Jingshen Clan - in Yao we trust;
    -[X] Paying the debt today - we should be able to afford this in the immediate short term, and this is the cheapest total price to pay.
    [X] Plan: Brace for Impact Redux
    -[X] She Shakes the Dao-Hearts of the Aspirants
    -[X] She is blinded to the War in the Plains
    -[X] She is blinded to the moves of the Jingshen Clan
    -[X] Interest forever!


Vote is closed!

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A disastrous twenty years, Manuel thought.

One more ahead of them.

Thankfully it had been a quiet twenty years, and he was almost done expelling this lightning. He had come here, far to the south in the Burnished Crags.

It was a mountain of little import, and he believed he had snuck here without anyone seeing him. Not that it mattered - he was, for all intents and purposes, back at full capacity.

The mountain he had sliced in half stood at the horizon, a testament to the damage an unrestrained Nascent Soul could do. Here he was again, he thought with amusement, preparing to destroy another.

A set of formation flags were tossed out idly, surrounding the mountain.

Manuel pulled out his dagger, and infusing a sliver of Qi into the tip, went to work. Over the course of three days he carved a great array, thousands of runes.

Finally, it was ready. He took a breath, and out of his mouth shot five-coloured lightning.

A massive burst of it, sufficient to level cities and annihilate any below Nascent Soul, he had managed to move it up through his meridians, preparing to expel the final fragment of it in a single moment. The reasoning was simple. The lightning jumped into the sky, trying to escape back to the Heavens, but the array sucked it in. With inexorable force a cloud appeared, the lightning swirling towards it. Bolt after bolt flew in, a storm big enough to eclipse the sun for nearly a thousand li around, throwing up sand and soil, shattering stone and creating massive bursts of sound as it flew into the air, and was then chained to the ground.

He felt his lips blacken, his tongue burn. If he were not a child of Bronze this would not be possible, and even as it was, he would be another year recovering from this fully.

The tiny black cloud absorbed more lightning, and as his lips melted, as his cheeks began to drip bronze, as his tongue was scorched and destroyed, it finally finished.

He smiled.

He wasn't quite sure what to call it. Five-coloured lightning was rare enough that you'd have to be an idiot to do this. But the lightning within the trap was now his to direct. Of course, the array only had so much power - a short distance away from the mountain it'd be useless, as the lightning would return to the Heavens. But a Nascent Soul who was close enough to the mountain... well. He'd be able to expel the lightning into them. It was a deadly thing, and any Nascent Soul taking it on would find themselves out of battle - with the quantity of lightning he had stored there, he could put an enemy Nascent Soul out of action for nearly two years. He didn't think Old Cannibal would fall for the trap. It was too obvious, and avoiding any mysterious array within Golden Devil territory was just good sense.

Still, if he forced the other man to flee, or he was simply lucky, or... there were many possibilities. One didn't set a trap in full knowledge your enemy would fall into it, one set a thousand traps to ensure each enemy would fall into at least one. Small advantages, painstakingly accrued. That was the way forward.

He sighed, and flew off.

Time to return to closed-door cultivation for a year, and then the meeting once he was out. He was curious to see what his new Councillors had been able to accomplish in their short tenures. He doubted it would be much, but at least they might be able to draw a proper picture of the challenges facing them.

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Very short one, mainly as a note. I'll be starting this turn's Good Seed Update shortly - within 24 hours or so.
 
Heheh. Not a big deal. Two years out of commission isn't on the scheme of turns, that big, but as Manuel says. Small advantages.
 
So, would Manuel be the only one able to trip this trap? Or would other clan members with high enough cultivation/position be told about this place too?
 
Huh.

So all that'd be needed to trigger such a thing is sufficient bait to draw Old Cannibal there and sufficient force concentration to push him in range.

Very nice.
 
Shennong 2 - Dao Musings
Omake: Dao Musings 1

Over the 20 years I've been traveling, on missions and such, I've had many a thought as to what Dao exactly the Dao is. Is it merely a concept? Or perhaps is it a set of Comprehensions of a topic or idea? Perhaps it is neither? Or both, even? These questions I've pondered on during my travels, and have had the peace to put them to thought. Perhaps I will eventually publish all of them, perhaps they will stay incomplete after I have perished. For now, I will copy them down for further consideration.

-Shennong, Golden Devil Cultivator


The Dao, and what it means

The concept I have wrestled in my meditations the most is the Dao itself: What is it? How was it formed? How do cultivators come into contact with it? Why does it hold so much importance in cultivation? While my knowledge is far from complete, I will endeavor to answer such questions.


What Exactly is the Dao?

The Dao, in it's simplest form, is the collective epiphanies a person or group has on a certain concept, topic, element, or object. It is infinitely varied, with no person having the same true conclusion as another. As an example, ask any one cultivator of our clan what the nature of Bronze is. One might answer malleability, for bronze can be shaped into a myriad number of forms. Another might answer that Bronze is strength, as in ancient times bronze was used as the main material to make the most powerful things, before iron and cultivation was used in depth. Another yet may just answer that the nature of bronze is the same as Metal, of the five elements. All would be right.

And yet, all would be wrong as well. You see, there is no true Answer for what the nature of anything truly is. The righteous sects of the Great battlefield deride us, call us demonic and lump us with the Demonic Altar Sect or the Battle Blood Cannibal sects, yet the Mortals under our command praise us and call us saviors for protecting us from those very same sects. To each side, they are correct. And yet, when faced with this conclusion, they would deny the other's viewpoint as false and naive.

One man's glorious epiphany is another's childish conclusion.

How was the Dao Formed?

This has a much simpler answer, with the Dao truly being formed when The first cultivators had ruminated on the concepts they appreciated and found that some things made sense to them. After all, they had come up with it, so it must be true, correct? However, when they shared their insights with the other cultivators around them, they most likely found their viewpoint rebuffed, and another who had thought of the same topic and come up with their own conclusion, with the first cultivator being presented the conclusions of the first. Unfortunately, this would most likely have stung the Cultivator's pride...

And as many know, sometimes the pride of a Cultivator is more important to them than their life.

Assuming that the cultivator that first presented their idea is one such cultivator, they most likely took offense to it, and challenged the second to a spar or battle. It is most likely this first spar that inspired other "Dao Contemplations" to become popular and accepted.

Why is the Dao so important to Cultivators?

The Dao is so important to Cultivation for one singular reason: It provides a set of rules to follow. During the Qi condensation stage of cultivation, the Dao itself is not very important, with Cultivators merely building up their reserves until they have enough to focus on other things. However, when they leave this stage does the Dao become so important. If the cultivator has not ruminated on the Dao before this point, then they are without purpose, and have no true goal to devote themselves towards. They would just wander aimlessly, never truly improving and devoting themselves towards greatness. The Dao builds a road to follow, a set of stairs for the Cultivator to climb. A weak Dao heart is even more dangerous then a lack of Qi, as with even a sliver of doubt in one's mind and soul, one would invite inner demons of doubt and weakness. A Cultivator with such things would never hold conviction in their heart always thinking to themselves 'What if I fail?' or 'What if I am not ready yet?', which proves fatal in paralyzing their growth and forces stagnation upon the Cultivator in question, a most pitiful fate. Holding the Dao in one's heart builds the foundation of Confidence, and gives one rules to live by. Do not ever compromise them, lest you invite a demon greater than any you could kill into your heart.

How do I choose a Dao to follow?

That, is up to you, unfortunately. I cannot truly tell you what a "good" Dao to follow would be. I could muse and muse all I want on a certain Dao or another, but it is an even worse idea to allow another's contemplations of a Dao to guide you. To follow another's thought...such a fate is too terrifying to contemplate. You would cease to become yourself, merely being another facet of the original thinker.

If I had only one piece of advice to give you, it would be to be Ambitious. The Heavens favor those who make their own luck, those who never wait for fortune to fall into their laps. Choosing a larger and more broad will provide larger later gains than choosing a narrow Dao to make your main pillar. Another suggestion I have is while you should never take another's conclusions as Gospel, using them to refine your conclusions is not only acceptable, but wise to do. One should never force themselves to think alone, and to see another's point of view can provide exceptional perspective to think of ways that you had never thought of before.

Perhaps this series will continue, but I hope that any that choose to read it have gained something from it. There is no gain in keeping it to myself, after all.

Shennong

(AN: Wanted to make a different one, but it wouldn't be out in time for the fates, so I'm doing this instead. I might do others based on the fates I've been dealt.)
 
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