Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Corpse Gulper negaverse quest Turn 6
Corpse Gulper negaverse quest Turn 6
You are Corpse Gulper, a heaven defying genius of the blood path. At only One hundred and thirty-six years of age you have managed to achieve nascent soul. Not everything is roses for you however. Your master Diaxiang that old monster is threatened and envious of your talent. He refuses to let you eat as you wish to advance your path, always making excuses about "sustainable farming" and other such rot.

Envoys from the Seven Divine Saber Palace sect have come to you with an offer. Normally you would just eat any cultivator from the righteous path out of hand, but their offer is tempting. They will distract Diaxiang. If while he is distracted you kill 50 core cultivators of Battle Blood Cannibal Sect or at least give it a good try, they will provide you with 2 nascent rank lifesaving treasures, access to many of their sword arts as well as the services of 3 core array focused experts to help prepare the battlefield for your inevitable fight with Diaxiang.

It is a tempting offer. Just eating those 50 core will increase your cultivation enormously and having 2 more life saving treasure will give you more room to gulp down large amounts of population denying them to Diaxiang. The fool likely wouldn't eat them anyway. He is weak and keeps trying to keep feeding sustainably. He doesn't seem to realize that there is a whole world out there.

[]Accept the offer: Betray Old Cannibal making him your enemy. Gain amazing cultivation progress depending on how roll to depopulate goes, 2 lifesaving treasures, access to many sword arts that can allow you to fight above your realm depending on roll and the aid of 3 core array focused experts to help prepare the battlefield for your inevitable fight with Diaxiang giving a bonus to the roll in your inevitable fight.

[]Decline: Diaxiang is right, sustainable is the way to go. With your talent you will surpass him eventually it will just take longer.

The Breaker said:
Time for our ascension is not now. The fool still has more to teach and while we can break his heart we still can't break his dao.
Reality Fan said:
What can he possibly have left to teach us worth more than all those sword techs?
The Breaker said:
There are still cannibal arts he is hidden, the last times we backstab him, we did using things he knew that would not be useful to kill him, if we see him fight 'old rusty gold' (how gold can rust?!?) we learn. And we can backstab him in a moment of weakness.
RealityFan said:
We can't count on a moment of weakness to come soon; we have to make one. The guy has been alive for more than 2000 years.

The Breaker said:
We are less than 300 years old. We still can wait, lie and say we learn his 'ways' and grow stronger, just to break him whole. He will not break in a single war. 9 wars did not break him.
RealityFan said:
But not as strong as we would be if we ascended now. We don't want to be trapped in this dying sea. Nascent is just the first step. A big step sure, but we have a long way to go.
The Breaker said:
On this we can all agree, except Bob_one. Do you have any other argument? What about the third power in the desert? Would they attack old rusty gold or us? The aftermatch will be key to our ascension.
RealityFan said:
We have the mountains. Also once we eat OC we should be strong enough to hold them off. Jingshen is a coward.
"Wrecksalittle" said:
The problem is that literally everywhere around us has either multiple Nascent Souls or strong defensive weapons. If we eat all the mortals here and kill Old Cannibal, then what will we eat afterwards?
The Breaker said:
That is true, hum the idea of using the mountains to raid and eat all those meatshieds/'vassals' would be very nice. With the 'golden ones' being unable to help since they hate each other.
RealityFan said:
Really after we eat OC we can go back to sustainability, but only sustaining us instead of having to share.
The Breaker said:
breaking our own clan and consuming all like the old turtle cooker? Ohhh, now this is a xianxia prologue that I can go 200% with.
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Abel Angelus/Minervina Barda Collab - On the trip to Quigai

On the trip to Quigai
That was really exhilarating, but a sand ship can't make it all the way to Quigai so now Abel has to join a convoy at the Scorpion Road. It is an impressive sight. A caravan of a few dozen scorpion hauled wagons.

Wait, is that Minervina. She is coming on this trip? Well at least we should be safe on the way there.

Abel checks his pack again just to make sure he hasn't misplaced anything. His plan for Quigai is incredibly audacious; it made him nervous.

Minervina is interrogating what looks like the master of the caravan, a fat man swathed in gold chains. His 9th heavenstage Cultivation is impressive, but trivial compared to the aura of the infamous Foundation Establishment expert. After instilling her expectation of a fast and uneventful trip, "I don't expect to be needed, is that understood?" the woman known in some quarters as the 'Slaughter in the Sands' breaks away from the conversation. She spots Abel as she strides away from the sweating caravaneer. "The Angelos Scion, correct? A little young for this expedition aren't you?"

"Yes, but after the Lecture I really feel like pushing to get to 12th heavenstage. I never want that to happen to me again."

"You made it to the Archgetes latest lecture series? I heard this one was quite different from the one he gave in my youth. I was quite keen to attend myself but." She flinches a little "The Mistress of Disciples had need of my services with the Ranch project. I couldn't get away."

"What entrance test did he give for your class?"

"Hmm, it was a simple fee of Contribution Points If I recall correctly. I had recently tracked down a blood path bandit who was preying on some misbegotten little village in the Xin Kingdom. The bounty from that paid for my admission."

"Just contribution points? I guess Manuel doesn't always have a flair for the dramatic." Just saying without promoting feels like bragging. Which is especially silly when talking with someone as well storied as Minervina.

The Centurion shrugs "The whims of Old Gold are infamously hard to predict, for which I suspect we should be grateful. Lord Konstantinos relies on that reputation to keep our enemies at bay. I am sure your trials and travails served some deeper purpose of his. Furthermore, if the rumours are true and we really are entering a Heroic Age, a time when genius cultivators arise all over the region, well, more must be required from the leading disciples."

"I guess." Abel wasn't sure how to take this talk of heroic age. It seemed a bit like people alway talking about the second coming soon, but the reputation of being a new wave is useful. "I actually think I learned more from the trial than the lecture itself. Still would have been nice if they have just told us the lesson beforehand though"

They both walk onto a wagon while talking. It's a mighty affair, with sides a little over four metres tall and three broad bronze wheels on each side. It takes three bristling blue scorpions to move it, though they are stationary for the moment, a bored looking mortal boy feeding the Beasts large bugs from a bucket one after another.

"Cultivation is more art than science, it must be experienced, not just explained, if the lesson is to be etched into your students soul. The Archegetes could have merely passed on his wisdom, but I doubt you would have gained much from simple words. Things are rarely so simple. I would implore you to spend time reflecting on your experience during the journey. You might find lessons in it that are of greater value than you first thought."

"People should use more complex words. The amount of vague language people use when talking about cultivation just seems so silly to me." Maybe if people did in fact put in the effort to completely describe things cultivation would be a science. "Like people using the word soul to describe many different and district things. It's like calling both your liver and your heart your heart."

She smiles genuinely "I had similar thoughts once upon a time. It's frustrating isn't it? But you have to remember that each of us walks an individual Path. Even in Alchemy, I might find that certain reagents and mixtures work slightly differently for me than they would for another practitioner. We must remember that each of us walks an individual Path. If I or some other Senior were to simply dictate 'this is how it must be done,' if we were to scribe our Dao on tablets of stone and say 'Lo, this is the Way' we would swiftly find that our disciples grew weaker and stalled out sooner with each passing generation. It has been tried many times before. So take heart. You will find your own Truth, and some day, if the Heavens stay blind, you will get the chance to give pointers to your own disciples. Giving out little prods and pokes to keep a curious child on their rightful Path. It's a tedious chore, but I understand Old Gold and a few others enjoy it."

Yes Qi is annoying in how its bias results but it seems like most people aren't even interested in trying to be unbiased. "I feel like I have gotten more progress on my path from secular study then I have gotten from most lectures on cultivations. I have not gotten into alchemy yet, but I do have some experience with arrays. I feel like a perfectly done array would need no qi at all." It's a more diplomatic way of saying that Abel feels that qi is like using duct tape to shore up poor craftsmanship.

"Plenty of Cultivators find their greatest enlightenment from the natural world and seemingly mundane wisdom. How do you imagine the first immortals found their Path?"

"Personally I expect that they were a bunch of Solipsists that just believed so hard in their own importance and awesomeness that qi went along with it. It would explain the state of the heavens."

"Perhaps! Though I doubt it. I've met enough mortal kings, priests and chieftains to suspect that ego alone isn't enough to draw Qi into a Dantian." She pulls a talisman from under her dress, a birds skull, black with marbled lines of red. A scrimshaw pattern of glyphs highlighted in gold outlines a series of spells scribed into the bone. "It's always good to know the Clan's young masters aren't neglecting our traditional crafts. It's not my primary area of focus, but I have some small mastery in that area, at least where it borders my own speciality. I have seen plenty of Arrays that run on environmental Qi alone, though it is rare to find potent examples of such in the Organ Meat Desert. There is simply not enough ambient energy to achieve significant effects."

"Mostly I manage by using other parts of the environment" Abel gestures to his hand cannon "This draws power from sunlight to trigger gunpowder. Well that was the original design before Cinder. He shrugs "At least normally. Given that we are going to Quigai where the only constant is high environmental Qi I have been making a bunch of arrays to take advantage of it."

The poison mistress looks at the 'weapon' with a dubious expression. "A curious experiment, though I hope its not the only tool your taking into Quigai. By all accounts the locals are pernicious, and I expect our Righteous Path colleagues to be even worse once they are safe from public view." She taps the Xiphos by her side in a pointed way. "Even those of us who walk the Poison Path do well to keep steadfast bronze handy when going into such a chaotic environment. I wouldn't like to see a promising Good Seed trust their fate to an untested weapon turning on them at a crucial moment." She reaches into a rather tatty looking cloth pouch tied to her belt and retrieves three vials from it, each glimmering with inner power. She hands them to the junior.

"Just in case." She taps each vial in turn. "Confusion Concoction. It will turn your foes against each other, but does not make you proof from an enemies attention if you're the closest target. Forget Me Venom. It travels through the air and is drawn to the Qi in the blood of those without our Bloodline. It's like being invisible, but better, because they forget having spotted you in the first place. The effect lasts only a hundred seconds." The last she pauses, as if hesitating to hand it over. "Blackroot Yang Venom. If touched or drank, anyone below Late Foundation Stage will almost certainly die. Don't kill yourself with it."

Abel bows as he accepts. "Thank you very much, honored senior. If I might ask, do these require amibant qi to work? If you used them in the Deadsand desert would you expect the same effects? It is just that I am going to be making heavy use of qi gathering arrays and am worried about possible interactions."

She pauses thoughtfully. "I don't expect any of these to have been tested in a true Qi Void, such things are vanishingly rare. If I had to guess, the Yang Venom would work as normal, but the other two might be much slower to travel through the air. I would expect a reduced area of effect."

Abel takes a glass squirtgun out of his pack "Not a problem" Then he looks between the vial and his ammo packs. "Maybe a little problem. I am going to have to repackage these if I am going to use them".

Minervina already looks like she is starting to regret her largess. "That sounds like a fantastic way for you to get yourself killed. If you can't be convinced to leave them alone, at least wait until the Caravan stops this evening, I will show you how to decant them without causing a massacre."

"Always great to learn new skills."
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Abel Angelus 25 -The 555th Legion Welcome, Aspirant.
The 555th Legion
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Legion Name: The 555th Legion, commonly referred to as the 'Five Element Painters.'

Lineage: The 555th was formed in the first millennia after the arrival of the Sea Conquering Army. It was first founded by Elder Veniamin Salliades, an Array Master famous for her skill in arrays of illusion and mystery.

Legate: Legate Auxiliary Yuri Maras. A Great Circle Expert who has taken on the mantle of Legate in the absence of a Core Formation candidate. Known as the Painter, he is renowned for his ability to make beautifully arrays that double as works of art, he is often requested to make the outer defensive arrays of major cities that wish to impress all that look upon them. Within the legion he is more famous for being a very excellent salesman that manages to not only keep commissions coming, but pick out ones that legion members find interesting to do.

Sigil: 5 paintbrushes each dipped in a different color ink to represent the 5 elements forming a 5 pointed star.

Motto: de hoc mundo in aeternum "From the eternal to the world"

Territory: The 555th Legion does not hold territory, but every hundred years right after the trials it will move to be hosted by a new region. The founder felt that remaining just one place too long makes one become stale and that "if the legion has not managed to finish arraying everything in their territory to full capacity in one hundred years then they were too busy sitting on their asses or our hosts are cheapskates" - Direct quote. For this reason they are now one of the major forces moving into Apoikía Bucephalus.

Headquarters: Still under construction in Apoikía Bucephalus. It generally considered a point of pride in the legion that their new headquarters should always be better than their old one. Their last one was a giant tower made of hardened multicolor stained glass named "Desert Color". This time the legion is renovating a large cave complex that they found. They plan to name it once they are finished. Going by the last time this might take about 50 years or so. At least the high price they got from selling their last headquarters means that the 555th is flush with resources. This is also something of a pattern. In fact many of the clan's fortresses that are used for war and not the trials are former Five Element Painters headquarters.

Composition: At the time of writing the Legion has 6655 Qi Condensation Disciples and 96 Foundation Building Experts. The Legion's only Core Formation Elder in recent history, Array master Matthaios Panagellis, was slain during the trials of 100 KM. Yuri Maras has been heading the legion since and is expected to make a breakthrough soon.

Description: The Five Element Painters despite their artistic tendencies is a very tightly organized and regimented legion. Every member is expected to meet a quota of array commissions and legion standing is largely based on customer satisfaction. Whenever they move into a region it is to be expected that everything that can be usefully arrayed will be before they leave. For this reason it is not uncommon for there to be bidding wars after the trials as different regions compete for the right to host the Five Element Painters.

During the trials the Five Element Painters make use of hundreds of tiny forts in their region that they have made in the last century. These forts tend to focus more on being hidden than defense and are useful resting places for clan members to hide between attacks.

Outside of an expectation to remain proactive in fulfilling commissions, members are expected to maintain a reasonable Cultivation schedule, a positive Contribution Point balance as well as advancing their craft.
Socially, members of the Five Element Painters have a reputation as eccentric artists.

Since, outside the Trials, members are rarely found on the front-line of conflicts they have something of a reputation as a sinecure for those who fear direct combat. This rarely goes beyond friendly ribbing between Clan-Mates though considering how many clan members own their lives to Five Element Painter fortifications.

Trivia:
The Dawn fortress was one of their earlier work in the desert and reportedly many members of the 555th look upon their old work with horror at how many mistakes were made. However, when asked to detail them no one outside the legion seems to be able to follow the explanations.

At meetings where only 555th members are present, the Legionnaires will often rank themselves not by cultivation, but by customer satisfaction score.

It is said that the five paint brushes found on their banner used to be treasured implements of the legion capable of enhancing the elemental potency of arrays. They were lost in the move to the desert and are currently in the hands of the Sorrowful Blacksmith. Unlike many other cases where similar artifacts were lost, the 555th claims not to be bothered by the loss and that they have made better ways of enhancing arrays since.
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@Alectai, @TehChron, @Humbaba, @ReaderOfFate, @Kaboomatic A last minute Omake to help Abel Angelus. Was originally planning on this being his legion, but I think I might have him be part of the Casia Zimisce's former legion.
 
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Abel Angelus 27 - Basic Array Crafting symbols
Basic Array Crafting symbols
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Meaning of Symbols and Symbols of meaning

Symbols in array crafting are used to denote elements. Elements are complicated things that are hard to explain, but easy for the arraycrafter to think of. For example here is the standard clan symbol for the element of fire.
And here is a common symbol outside the clan for fire.

And here is a symbol I often use that works just as well
The symbols don't matter in and of themselves. It is the meaning of the symbols that matters. Ancient unknown symbols of array crafting is a scam for rubes. We in the clan standardize our symbol usage to an extent because we want to be able to share array designs with each other. But if it ever happens that you need an effect and don't know any standardized symbol that exactly fits what you are thinking of then so long as you aren't planning on sharing the design feel free to make something up. So long as you understand what the symbol means and you draw it with full intention and understanding it can work for you. Full intention and understanding can be difficult when you are not making use of inherited understanding. Also if you invent new symbols you would be advised to make them complicated. You don't want to draw them accidentally after you start associating them with an element. Also just because symbols are arbitrary doesn't mean that you can be careless or sloppy about copying them out sloppy array crafting means sloppy arrays. My personal symbol for fire might look like a random squiggle. But everytime I draw it I draw it out exactly without deviation.

Also a reminder that this article is both 'Sealed to the Blood' and "certified array crafter classified". This knowledge is known by some outside the clan, but it isn't common knowledge and we like to keep it that way.

Knowing all this, I direct you to Standard clan symbols (2 CP). Even if you can come up with your own symbols it is easier if you don't have to and makes it easier to share with your peers.

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@Alectai, @TehChron, @Humbaba, @ReaderOfFate, @Kaboomatic I figured that I needed to try and write something to help establish what a standard clan array master even looks like. It's been more than 200 years. We are an array focused clan and all the good seed array masters we have had so far (including mine) are non-standard.
 
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Abel Angelus 28 - Ascension blood

Ascension blood
The process for being dosed with ascension blood was well organized. First we sign up on the contribution board and are given a timeslot and a place to show up at. When we arrive we are given an initial security check and bronze card with our name and patient number.

Then we are directed to the next station where we present our card.

"Are you currently on any other medication?" A Chipper woman with blond metal hair and a notepad was asking me questions.
"Besides spirit stones no." She writes something down.

"Do you smoke? Do you take any recreational drugs? Do you drink alcohol and how often?"

I blink "No, No and my last drink was more than a week ago. Generally only drink with friends and that happens less than once a week" I could use some more friends. She writes that down.

"Are you recovering from any injuries?"

"My ribs are a bit bent from having a fort collapse on me during the trials" Not even a blink just writes in her notebook.

"Expected recovery time on that injury?"

"10 years" And isn't that a pain. Still could be worse. I could be one of these not bronze people that would be dead or crippled. Good thing I had a treasure to temporarily super enhance the defensive properties of bronze bloodline even if it basically made me statue for a while.

"Let us know if it heals at a different rate after this procedure." So they want to get a clear sample size on how good this stuff is. Still I guess that when doing a large scale deployment like this they would want to keep a close eye on all medical problems.

"How many generations has your family been part of the clan?" Also an odd question then again if the disease targets the blood of bronze how strongly we have the bloodline might matter.

"We lost much of our family archive with the move to the desert so we only have records of reliable names for 15 millennia, but family lore holds that the Angelus family have been part of the Golden Devils since the sea conquering army and can trace ancestry to the time before we came to the turtle worlds." That got a blink before she noted it down.

"Do you or anyone in your family have a variant on the standard bronze bloodline?"

"Lunar Bronze, whole family." Written down.

"Do you have any allergies including allergies that have been fixed by cultivation?"

"Not that I know of." This was feeling more like a doctor's appointment.

The woman stamps my card and sends me to the next station.
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The shot didn't hurt at all. After the shot they kept me for observation for 15 minutes in case I had an adverse reaction for some reason. Then I was free to go.

My slow cultivation has been somewhat of a boon. Because of my slow cultivation I am still able to be enhanced by ascension blood. And what a boon it is. If I had realized that it was coming I might have avoided cultivating on purpose. Ribs don't hurt as much now and they definitely don't restrict my movement anymore. I might not have to cancel going to Yuan after all.
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@Alectai, @TehChron, @Humbaba, @ReaderOfFate A thrilling installment of the adventures of Abel. I mostly just wanted to show the Golden Devils being organized. Had to change things a bit with ascension blood being a secret. Edit: Than edited again when I found out what the secret actually was.
 
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Abel Angelus 29 - Bicycle part 1
Bicycle part 1
It is time for my next invention. Not nearly as ambitious as my computer or hand cannon. But hopefully more practical. I am going to reinvent the bike. Also who knows, with how the computer and hand cannon worked out if I spend a bunch of time and energy making a bike a super fast spirit beast should come and offer to become my mount. Or at least that has been the pattern so far.

Looking through the clan archives I find that this sort of oddly coincidental fortune is actually somewhat common when I read the stories of great cultivators. Fire cultivator finds ancient fire techniques in a random cave that are only useful for them and such. At first I thought it was just the narrative bias effect in that people with good fortune are more likely to have stories written about them, but now that it is happening to me I now have a new hypothesis.

It is well established that qi responds to intentions, but why assume that is only the case in the immediate short term? When I was gunsmithing and making my computer I spent large amounts of time focusing on a goal and then suddenly a way to use Qi to accomplish that goal suddenly appeared before me. The pattern is consistent. Also nicely explains why there hasn't been any sort of mortal industrial revolution yet despite how long history is. If someone really focuses on some goal a way to do it with Qi will appear before him. Not sure how to test that besides just trying to invent something new. If I try to get a mortal to really focus on a goal there is no way to control my own presence. Wish I had a way to control this experiment without my own realization. It's possible that things might not work if I am forcing it.

I walk around my workshop in the Angelus family manor and write down everything that I remember about bikes. They have wheels, pedals, handlebars connected to the front wheel, a chain connecting the pedals and the back wheel, a seat and gears. I remember that gears worked by changing the size of the inner wheel the chain is on, but I can't remember ever knowing how a bike can change gears mid pedal. Well not all bikes had gears. I can figure that out later.

Not sure I can blacksmith a bike. With my clockwork computer if ever I couldn't manage a fine enough detail going bigger was usually an option for everything besides the screen. I am considering just using wagon wheels for now. But no normal wood just would not be able to handle the strain. Bone seems like the way to go.

There is a problem with ordering spirit beast parts. Even if the part in question isn't actually useful for anything. Even if the beast is regularly hunted because other parts are useful. Still the not useful parts are expensive. Why do you ask? Because of marketing. Someone will use spirit bone wheels on this wagon when wood would work just as well so that they can point at them and brag. Anything made out of spirit beast materials might as well have a huge brand name on it for how much it jacks up the price even if it is completely useless.

I skipped using spirit bones for my first prototype. Yes they would be better for withstanding cultivator strength, but right now I only need a bike for me not some 9th heavenstage. Regular pig bones work for me and wood works for me. In any case, despite my troubles with getting materials, making the frame of the bicycle was easy. I had it done in less then a week even taking into account other duties like array crafting, formation training and other training. Still don't know why or how Mom got me so many exemptions, but I haven't questioned it because I don't want to look a gift horse in the mouth.

It is when I attach the chain to the back wheel that I quickly find a bunch of problems. Having the pedal directly connected to the back wheel causes all sorts of problems and just makes the bike a pain to ride. I can't just coast along on my momentum. If the back wheel is spinning then the pedals also have to spin at the same rate furthermore in order to increase speed I have to spin the pedal faster than they are already turning. The handle bars don't turn the front wheel like I remember. I have a lot more fiction from where the back bike frame and the front handlebars connect. All of these make biking a pain and are obvious wastes of energy that were not the case with bicycles back home even single gear ones. What am I missing?

I go back to my list of things I remember about bikes and start adding as many words as I can hoping to jog something. Everything from from I remember about what sort of tires are supposed to be the best to how to do a wheelie. Wait, ball bearings. They were supposed to have something to do with bikes. I never saw them on my bike, but I heard people talk about them and even played with some of them. They were small metal balls.

I look over my prototype. How would small metal balls help this design? Well I guess my first question is where would they have been if I didn't see them? I look over to where the back of my frame attaches to the part with the handle bars. Hmm. If I had a bunch of ball bearings in the contact point between the two parts it would allow the front wheel to help support the bike without causing a bunch of friction at the where they join when I turn the front wheel with the handle bars so long as I had something holding the ball bearings in place which would explain why I never saw them on my bike.

Not quite sure how ball bearings help with the other problems, but the first step is to make some. Which is very difficult. I try casting them in molds, but making a mold that small is hard and the hole that the liquid metal is poured into causes a deformity. I guess it sort of works if I am willing to spend large amounts of time polishing out the deformities and still not quite have a perfect sphere.

Next I try just dropping liquid metal into cool water to have it form. It sort of works. The real problem is that when liquid metal touches water the water will immediately turn into steam which causes a bit of deformation.

What if I just drop the metal off tall towers and have it cool on the way down? No steam explosion problems then. I try that, but it only works with lead. At least with the height of the towers I have access to. Not sure if lead can handle the stresses that ball bearings get put under.
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Abel Angelus/Zeno Angelus - Abel and Zeno talking about Yuan and Divination


Abel and Zeno talking about Yuan and divination (or whatever)

"So are you going to Yuan?"

As Abel lies in his bed, slowly getting accustomed to his new blood coursing through him, Zeno sits by his bedside, a bowl of grapes to snack on in between pauses of chatting.

"Jup. Mind you I still have so much planning to do, but that's the plan. Can I expect to travel with you then little bro?" A smirk frames Zenos healed face. The light shining through the window framing his angular features.

"I guess I can help protect you. Want to make sure you don't get into trouble." Abel's smirk matches Zenos. The family resemblance has never been more clear. Small gusts of wind from the open window make the dream catcher wave in the wind.

Zeno rebukes that particular statement quickly."Ha. Ha. very funny." A grape falling off of Abel's face undercutting the wholesome moment.

"Honestly not sure what to do in Yuan. For Qigang I had a plan even if it didn't work out. Yuan is all about hunting powerful spirit beasts right?"

"I guess, yeah. It's mostly created treasures and quickly ascended beasts, which are supposed to give you unlimited power and all that, but who knows what we'll find. It's a secret realm after all." Zeno shrugs, the wooden chair not even creaking, thanks to powerful array work carved into every part of the manor.

"I guess quickly ascended means that the beasts are easier to take down then their power implies. They aren't used to being powerful and are getting used to their new abilities."

"Not exactly in my experience. Even if they have less experience, they tend to make up for it with natural instinct. That's at least what I learned from beasts ascending outside of the secret realms. Generally the assumption that everything will be harder to kill in there than out here should fare you well." Another grape vanishes between Zenos' teeth.

Natural instinct. I knew that qi responses to intentions, but that implies that it works the other way around even in an intelligent way.

"Is there a spirit beast beasttuary for things appearing in Yuan?"

"Hm....good question." Zenos posture shows his focus at this moment. "If there is one, it's probably incomplete though, considering the sheer danger and vastness of the secret realm." his face lights up with understanding.

"I have an idea how you can at least avoid walking the most dangerous routes!" Zeno calls Appendix, who promptly arrives with see through bones, settling on his left shoulder, intent on listening.

"These ones should do the trick! Come on, feel them!" Zeno offers Abel the bones for his right hand. "Do you feel the qi signature? How they shift between phases?" His eager expression quite apparent.

The bone feels like an extension of my arm. A bit like my hand cannon or an array I have drawn. It is smooth, no rough. Actually it doesn't actually seem to have a fixed set of properties, but paying attention I can feel a cycle.

"That's good! Like most things of the liminal, the properties are defined by the most powerful entity around them, their core identity an exception of course. In this case I anchored their properties in my last big liminal walk before the trials to predict the route where danger comes from. An easy working, considering rabbits mostly survive on avoiding the danger, rather than fighting it head on like many other beasts. What do you think, neat, huh?

"So I should avoid going to low points in the cycle? We could really use better vocabulary. I feel like I am talking nonsense." That statement makes Zeno chuckle.

"Yeah, but still you understand it! That, combined with our agility and the qi sense you showed just now are the combined reasons why we are divinators by trade. Do you understand?" his hands splayed wide, as if to accentuate a grand statement.

"Does it still apply if I am traveling with you? A low point for me seems likely to be full for you. Our family jargon is weird." A bark of laughter by Zeno follows.

"You can say that again! As if any outsider would understand what a Medicum Aes or a Hoplite would even be without the obvious effects it has on their ability to live!

"But seriously, don't worry about it. You trained much like mother and I to sense the slightest of qi differences. If anyone has stolen that object from you and would be in a position to use it against you, you will notice. It is keyed to you after all." Noticing Abel's confusion he elaborates in between bites.

"On the matter of danger, we will only travel together until we reach the Secret Realm, if my current understanding holds true, we will travel through very different entrances anyway. Either way we'll see once we go there." Zenos' last grapeseed falling into the bowl.

Taking the initiative Abel says. "Changing the topic. I have made some progress on my latest invention. Thanks to ball bearings I can at least turn the handlebars without friction. Unfortunately I only have been able to make lead ball bearings. Not sure how well they will handle the stresses long term, but prototype."

With a raised right eyebrow Zeno asks. "Ok, You are talking about that wagon on two wheels, right?" He gestures for Abel to elaborate, clearing some space on the table nearby, by handing the bowl to the attending maid Mia. The ornate door closes behind her, her footsteps barely heard over the conversation.

"Yes that. Should make travel over flat surfaces way faster. Especially for the Golden Devils. It directly translates strength and stamina into more speed. Real problem right now is the back wheel. I need for the bicycle to be able to maintain momentum even when the rider isn't pedaling. The pedals should turn the back wheel. but not the other way around. I can't fix that there is a lot of wasted energy and the bike is no fun to ride."

Zeno thinks out loud. "Hmm…the problem is wasted momentum, which means gaining speed isn't the problem. Could you chain the momentum of the two wheels together somehow? I don't know a simple steel chain and some interlinking stuff like in your clocks?"

Abels explanation pours out of him like a flowing river."The pedals are already chained to the back wheel. The front wheel will move on it's own so long as the bike is moving. It's just for stability and steering anyway. The problem is that I can't figure out how to make it so when the rider stops pedaling and the bike is still moving the pedals don't have to keep moving so the rider can rest every now and then and just move forward on momentum." He makes rolling motions with his hands.

"Ok, that's tricky. Most cultivators would just slap a qi sensor array on it with the condition that it should stop working when the owner isn't nearby, but that won't work for you, huh." A small grin appears on Zenos face.

"At this rate I might now use an array to connect and disconnect the bike chain depending on if the rider is pedaling, but that is just such a sloppy solution when I know there is a qi free engineering fix. I can see the vision of the right design so clearly. I don't don't know how to get to it." Abel holds his hands up as though reaching for something.

"Then how about a second chain system entirely dedicated to letting the wheels rotate freely? I mean you could probably use the wasted energy to make switching between these modes a breeze, somehow. Technical stuff is your zone, not mine." Zeno suggests with a shrug.

Abel spends a moment trying to imagine what Zeno is talking about then gives up. "I think I have a clue. I know the finished model isn't able to pedal backwards and I think that is related to why the pedals move the back wheel, but not the reverse."

Zeno whips out a half finished talisman and the "pen" he got from Abel from his sleeves. He gestures with both hand gestures towards him. "Go on, write it down."

Abel thinks about all the cases he can remember of things that turn one way, but not the other. Spring loaded on way exits on parking lots, ratchets.

"So say this is a full cog. With teeth all the way around." Zeno nods beside him, both brothers now sitting at the table, the sunlight their only illumination. "Does it already have the chain?" Without prompt Zeno hands Abel another piece of paper to continue his meticulous drawing.

"Ah your chain system, I take it?" A nod by Abel confirms it.

"The chain moves the outer circle. When it moves the right way that pushes the inner circle. However if the other circle doesn't move then it moves out of the way of the movement of the inner circle. Sure that there is more to it than that. Maybe right shaped triangles rather than spring on lines, but I think I have the basic idea now."

"It definitely looks like it. I don't think that triangle shape..eh...thingies in there are the best way to go though. This thing needs to be reliable above all else. Few people will have the patience or ressources to properly repair it on a road trip and triangle steel stuff, like a spear, tends to wear down fast."

Abel blinks "Triangles are the strongest shape." He makes one with his hands.

Zeno rebukes with a raised right finger. "Not when the heat of the desert constantly heats up the metal, making it constantly change due to heat differences, I think. Mind you I read about that stuff decades ago out of idle interest. That's not even accounting for qi fluctuations making small changes on the metal. There is a reason we have legions constantly maintaining the arrays and the wall work and most of that isn't regular mortal steel. Maybe incorporate some protection arrays or a special coating?"

"Considering what I hope the final cost of these bikes to be, a protection array is likely to cost more than the rest of a normal bike put together. Once I have the basic idea down I will make an expensive cultivator version. Sand traveling tires, qi fluctuation protection, all the parts made out of spirit beast to be able to handle a 2 ton rider or a thousand foot fall, the works." Plenty of cultivators with the blood of bronze are really heavy.

"Fair enough. Cultivators won't be your biggest market anyway."

"Well they are until I can train up some mortals to be able to make these themselves. I like to think of my time as valuable." Zeno nods in response.

"But if this does work out the scorpion road might be up for a rename." Abel smiles.

"Maybe." Zeno smiles back.
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Abel Angelus/The builder collab - Bicycle mass production

Bicycle mass production
Abel rode into goat county on a bicycle. The roads were actually surprisingly good which bodes well for his business proposal.

As few onlookers were also paying attention to him on the bike and looking with curiosity which was also a good sign.

There was a man completely covered in patina, leading a small group of teenagers, "yes this is how one build a road child" he seems to be teaching them.

"Who do I ask about doing a mass production deal?"

The older looking man looked at Abel and asked "senior Abel?"

"Yup, that's me Abel Angelus." Sort of weird to be recognized even if the goatmen he met in the fire ant pit did.

The not so little ones' eyes start to shine like they are seeing a hero.

"I read that you need something built?" said the oldest builder.

"Well crafted." Abel gets off his bike. "See I made this, but It took me about a year. Thing is each individual part should not be that hard to make. So I was hoping that many hands would make light work"

The older man thought visible hard, went to the sand after looking careful to the bike then start to raise a pilar in the soil and remove his gloves, some of the most horrible nails that one could possible have, each looking like a tool, the hands become iron with some art and the man start doing a fast crafting, then he stop and nod to himself "Yes, the time has come" all the builders present look very seriously at Abel "I will pass the word of a full mobilization to honor our debt to you" one of the kids start running to a fire pit and throw some kind of dust, the smoke was green, at distance a line of green smoke start to appear, the man return to look at Abel, "in less than a week all the brothers that can possible move here will come" he say with a certainly in his voice.

That is quite a bit of enthusiasm. "Good to hear it?" Abel says with a bit of uncertainty. He had expected to hash out the details first. It seemed these guys were writing him a blank check.

One new (but really old) man appear in the horizon on a horse, already using a flag to use a sigh language the old builder with Abel send a signal back, look at Abel and asked "anything extra they should bring, this is our second system to send a fast message"

Abel felt on a bit firmer ground here "Yes, The design calls of spirit beast guts of almost any type to inflate for the wheels. Strong metal for the frame. Likely steel, but spirit bones work as well. And the hard part is making small metal balls like this" Abel was planning on focusing on the luxury cultivator version of the bike for his first model. If mortals see cultivators using them then they are likely to come and copy in hoards once an affordable version comes out.

The man and send a gesture for the mensager to approach, "hum, we have many sources of metal for our constructions, and if any guts from spirit beast work, then the elder hunter would know, I don't know how much we have already with senior third 'brother' but we probably can start already and continue to feed your project Senior Abel" said the man, a bit out of his normal work. The man stopped for a moment, looked at his own hands and asked "would patina and hair from those with the bronze bloodline help?"

Abel makes a so-so gesture "Only if you can smelt them into large enough pieces."
The two old men and kids smile, all looking like they are about to share a secret, "yes, patina is something we have a large amount of experience with and can do it in enough numbers to make a small fortress with enough time."

Abel holds up a ball bearing "I have been making these by dropping small drops of molten lead from a tall tower, but if you have a better method I am all ears. Really they should be made from something tougher than lead, but I haven't been able to make use of a tall enough tower for other metals. Maybe patina and hair from those with the bronze bloodline would work? I haven't tested it"

The messenger decide to add to the conversation "We succeed in making the 'pillar raise art' in making some relative large towers, the hair of the first and second brothers can serve as substituted for iron 'bones' that one need to use for large construction, so we probably can build everything you need in this local area."


Abel cations "The real trick is that all of these 'ball bearings' need to be exactly the same size and perfectly round. Metal is because they have to be able to stand up to serious stress, but if you know a better material that works too."

The men gather around the kids and start throwing looks and really quick words, then one of them move away and move his hands, then his muscles's bulges large, he move his hands a little better, finally he use some kind of art that turn the hands into iron and made a very tiny moviment with his and repeat the same moviment for twenty times, all the movements look exactly the same, he then look and the younger crew and nod to a kid which passed him a ball of sand (that he has enhanced with QI), only for the old man to drops it, and another and another with no variation with how he drop those balls. They nod to one another and ask "would this work?" and without stopping continue "we have enough brothers that can use these arts and have ways to use mechanical scales if you want to use mortals to drop those."

Abel picks two of the small balls of solid sand and starts grinding them against each other with all of his strength. When that doesn't seem to have an effect he puts them on hard pavement of the road and rolls them around under his feet putting his full weight into it. After doing that for a minute. He lifts the balls up to inspect them.

"Seems to work. I should have come to you guys earlier. Would have saved me a lot of time." Beside this is the luxury cultivator model. Even back before it was possible to find a bicycle that cost a hundred times as much as another one.

They all look happy with that comment, "so the debt of five years will finally be complete, the first builder's soul is probably resting more peacefully now". He then continued "in 7 days we will be in a large enough number to matter, brother 122th, you will send the mensagem with what Senior Abel needs" the other man just sent a serious nod, returned to his horse and went running like hunters were trying to kill him in particular.
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Air Resistance and How to beat it
By Publius Quinctilius Bradua

If you are reading this article then you are a cultivator of the core realm. Your know your strength is great, but that only lets you feel all the more keenly how the world holds you back. Air resistance that you could barely even notice as a mortal blocks your path at every turn as clearly as a wall.

You likely are hoping that I can give you a simple standard answer for your dilemma. I am sorry to disappoint you. There are arts which can be used to overcome air resistance, but by and large they are very wasteful of qi. It is far better for you to come up with your own art centered on your dao to help deal with the problem. You are likely feeling somewhat cheated at this point and that I have tricked you out of your contribution points. This is not the case. In the article are listed many different dao and how they have been used to overcome air resistance. It is my hope that you will find inspiration. Good luck.

Caeso Atronius Libo; Dao of shadow created an absence of his body which allowed air to pass straight through him. He also learned a shadow step art allowing him to go between shadows without having to pass the intervening space.

Gnaeus Ceionius Augendus; Dao of transformation perfected the frictionless body technique which caused air and many other vexations unable to gain any purchase on him.

Primus Geganius Mellitus; Dao of Justice managed to get the air to treat him as part of itself moving with him.

Heraclius Staurakius; Dao of the Bull learned to charge such that the air got out of his way.

Caeso Accoleius Livianus; Dao of artifice created a shield that could pierce the air as well as many other useful functions.

Caeso Plotius Andronicus; Dao of lighten learned to turn his body to lightening.

Elemental Dao often learn to transform into their element to better dodge or overcome air resistance. I would list down many others by I doubt you would come to any new insight.

If you are still lacking insight the rest of this article is dedicated to the air piercing technique. Yes I did say that the general techniques are wasteful and I stand by that, but sometimes waste is worth it.

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