- Location
- Somewhere North of south
cause MC is stupid and killed him before realizing he could.
well... he is using the ring to make himself not feel bad about anything?
Fate/Broken: Kaleid Liner Prisma of Fear
- Thread starter dat_noob1926812
- Start date
- Crossover
well... he is using the ring to make himself not feel bad about anything?
So he's terrorizing that one guy to try to get a recharge that is not the most efficient way to recharge your ring if you run off of fear. He really needs to find a way to create some kind of battery lantern that will gather all the ambient fear into his Lantern so he can recharge more efficiently but beyond that he should have just kept feeding off of the human traffickers until he had however much of a ring charge he needed.
- Location
- Somewhere North of south
he's not recharging like how you need willpower to get stronger constructs for a green ring to be able to do more advance stuff with a yellow one you need people to fear you, one way to do that is to torture a guy.
Okay I see but that still wouldn't work because when I remember you can only get the constructs to work better against people who fear what you're doing and torturing one guy will not help him later to use constructs on someone else fear is directly related to the person you're using it on
Girl meets ring Pt 3
- Location
- Somewhere North of south
Girl meets ring Pt 3.
OK It seems by BB codes for invisitext aren't working so I'll put them in spoilers until I figure out how to fix that (or being told how to cause I'm bad with technology) Edit: Fixed
also, I might have plans for my usual update time today so it's coming in a few hours earlier.
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Finding the right wording to send a request to a self-entitled, self-proclaimed (and likely actual) noble was certainly difficult, but I think I've got it down to get my point across while stroking her ego.
It reads:
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Dear madam Edelfelt.
I humbly request a meeting with your noble self to discuss matters concerning your current mission from the magus association.
When this request is accepted please write the time you wish to meet on this paper and place it back in your letterbox.
Kind regards.
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So now added to the number of locations I am monitoring in Luvias mailbox, now all that's left is to figure out how I'm going to explain myself.
…
That should be fun.
…
I honestly have no idea what I'm going to say.
…
Option A: tell the truth. Yeah no that's a terrible idea even if she did believe me the magus association would definitely get on my back.
Option B: lie and claim to be sent by another member of the magus association sent to monitor her and provide support. Unlikely to succeed since she can just send a message to them and ask.
Option C: lie and claim to be a church observer, I can't know how that'll go down without knowing the relationship between the church and the magus association.
Option D: simply state what my goal is with the class cards and avoid questions as to who I am.
…
What do I want to do? I suppose restoring the minds of all the heroic spirits would be a good start. I honestly feel like they don't deserve the fate that they've been given here. I mean having your mind be twisted beyond recognition like that is horrible, although I wonder if Caster has enough of her mind left to break whatever spell is being used to keep them like that? With her help, I could possibly find a way to save the others.
It's doubtful if she did she would have found a way into the real world by now.
…
You're off topic.
…
Fuck it I'll make it up as I go along, nothing could ever go wrong if I do that. On another note It's interesting enough that I cannot actually scan the inside of her house, well I can it just comes back like an empty house. No people no furniture nothing, I suppose that's magic for you.
However the mailbox luckily enough for me is not within the area of concealment, what was it they called it? A magical barrier? And since I doubt that Luvia is draining the souls of whoever she has in that mansion to fuel a servant, I guess it's being used for security? The mage's where all about that 'no one can know about magic' stuff weren't they?
That means that it has probably got some nasty surprises for me if I turn up uninvited, so best to wait for her response.
I see the gate open, what? My eyes refocus oh now I can see where everyone is.
"Miyu, welcome home."
Luvia was seemingly striding forward with purpose holding a letter in her hand.
Ring full scan.
"Thank you Miss Luvia, I'll get to work now."
"Command confirmed."
Ah so the response says to arrive with 'all possible haste' well then if you ask nicely. Ring FTL to the front gate.
"Command confirmed."
Luvia places the letter into the letterbox as the scenery flickers, Luvia stepping back as I appear in front of her.
I knock on the open gate.
"May I come in then?"
The girl, Miyu keeps staring at me as Luvia regains composure.
"I didn't expect you so soon."
I shrug and check my suit, no blood good I did clean that up.
"You did say 'with all possible haste.'"
I shrug.
"Well, yes come in."
"Thank you."
I walk through the gate and feel like I've been submerged in water before feeling it pop, I frown that was odd.
Luvia stops mid-stride and turns her head to me.
"P-please refrain from doing that in future."
Doing wha- Ooh my that's fear.
"My apologies it was an accident." What did I do this time?
I try to wave it off. But it appears that my nonchalant response appears to make her more unnerved.
"Well, I'll adjust the bounded field in future."
I smile "thank you." Did I just break a bounded field by walking into it? what the hell is going on?
Luvia turns away looking uneasy.
I do hope that isn't too disrespectful.
Y-you've done far worse than disrespect one woman.
Ring restore mental parameters
Y- you need to be punished.
"Command confirmed."
As we approach the front door an older gentleman opens the door.
"Ah, Madam Edelflet did the guest arrive sooner than expected."
Luvia enters without turning to look at the doorman? Wait he looks familiar.
"You're the gentleman from the airport aren't you."
I cock my head and give him an inquisitive smile.
"Yes, sir and it now appears you are an invited guest, please follow me to the guest room while the mistress prepares herself."
He holds his hand open gesturing for me to enter the mansion.
I walk in and the door closes behind me, the butler man hurries in front of me. He has strangely pointed ears, like an elf or something.
"Please follow me, sir refreshments will arrive shortly."
Am I supposed to tip him or what?
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- Location
- America
Ominous, Luvia isn't one to skimp out on security, especially during a mission from Zeltrich himself.
floppy_seal99
D-O-G-A-R-S DOGARS!
- Location
- snooping as usual
Yeah the Kaleidosticks are involved, but did we ever actually get confirmation of Big Z's involvement, and it not just being Waver's deal?
- Location
- Singapore
In anime? Yes. We repeatedly see Zelretch in the same room as Waver in several scenes (such as the end of season 1), using Waver to relay messages to Rin and Luvia.
Furthermore, I doubt that anyone but Zelretch himself (or by Zelretch's Leave, explicit or otherwise) could decide to hand out the Kaleidosticks.
Girl meets ring Pt 4
- Location
- Somewhere North of south
Girl meets Ring pt 4:
you guys are lucky I've written ahead I've got a bit of writer's block but it shouldn't affect my weekly updates for over a month yet.
I bring the teacup to my lips and take a sip, glancing off at Miyu in a maid costume standing by Luvia's side. Some questions are better left unanswered.
"So, none my contacts in the magus association say they've ever heard of someone like you."
I refocus my eyes on Luvia as I shrug, that was fast, although there's no way in hell they'd have heard of me.
"Perhaps.-"
I place the teacup back on the table.
"-although if they wanted me to spy on your progress would they tell you who I was, I mean would I tell you who I was?"
Luvia drums her fingers on the table.
"You're clearly not a spy, if you wanted to remain unseen you could've done that very easily."
Not likely given I glow bloody yellow, I lean forward.
"So did you ask them were the heroic spirits come from because I can assure you that it's not from the card." Technically, I think.
She takes a sip of her own tea.
"The grand master has informed me of the nature of heroic spirits."
I raise an eyebrow picking up my teacup for another sip.
"Really? I doubt that."
Her eyes go sharp.
"You're trying to distract me."
Bollocks, she caught on.
"Or maybe I'm trying to get an answer to a question from yesterday."
I take another sip of tea.
"Who are you and why are you following us."
She's keeping a level gaze on my eyes.
"Ah, yes how rude of me my name is William Bartholomew." Rule one of dealing with magic casters never tell them your real name.
I hold my hand out to shake hers, she appears shocked.
"There is no way that's your real name."
I frown and retract my hand.
"I don't think that you can talk Madam Edelfelt."
"You're English?"
I lean back, my cup of tea in hand again, I've never been much of a tea drinker but this is actually quite nice.
"On my father's side yes."
She leans forward with interest.
"That is a very old sounding English name."
I take a sip.
"I come from a very old family." Not entirely untrue.
We take a moment eyeing each other up before she sighs.
"You're not going to tell me who you work for are you?"
I smile, I couldn't do that if I wanted to love.
"No, I'm afraid not."
She appears to rally herself.
"What was the point of you even coming here then!"
For a moment I'm shocked by the ferocity of her reply.
"It was made apparent to me that your knowledge of the class cards was… incomplete."
I twirl my fingers in front of me for a moment as she appears nonplussed.
"I invited you here to determine who you work for."
She slumps appearing to have given up.
"While I appreciate the honesty, the request to talk specifically dealt with the card, not me."
She stares suspiciously at me for a moment.
"If I don't know who you work for, how can I trust that your information is reliable."
I take a moment to think on that point, why would she trust me?
"Because If I was going to betray you I would've let you fall to your death?"
She nods.
"A fair point, however, I would contend that you could be building trust to betray me later."
She has leaned forward by this point.
"Why would I not kill you and take your magical artefacts for myself? It would be far more profitable."
She raises her eyebrow quizzically.
"You aren't fishing for information?"
I place the tea cup back in the saucer and lean back, spreading my hands out as I do so.
"Of course I'm fishing for information."
"So why would I give you any?"
I lean in splaying my hand forward onto the table.
"Look trust my information or not-" to be honest I'm not sure how much I trust what I know, "-but either way you know that the magus association hasn't told you the full story."
She crosses her arms.
"I trust the grand-master far more than I trust you."
I shrug, that's fair.
"I suppose that would make sense, although how much does he know about the class cards."
"The grand master has studied them extensively."
"Oh? And he hasn't told you anything?"
"He told me how to use them."
I wave my finger at her.
"No, no he hasn't."
She scowls at me.
"What do you mean he hasn't."
"If he told you how to use them you would've taken down Rider far faster."
"You mean the Rider card, right?"
I wave my finger again.
"No, no madam Edelfelt, Rider is the class's name and the one she usually responds to, but her actual name is Medusa and she's trapped inside of the card."
I think, I actually have no idea how the mechanics of the class cards work.
"She didn't look like she had snakes for hair."
"No, she doesn't I'm not sure how much of the legend transfers into the powers of a heroic spirit. She's still alive by the way." Probably, If you die as a heroic spirit do you die permanently? that wouldn't make sense.
"How can you know that."
"Why don't you try pouring Mana into the card?" I mean hell, you could probably use it as a catalyst for a summoning if you really wanted to.
"I imagine that's what the ley-line did."
So it was on a ley-line, that's good to know
"So if all the card did was allow magus to use a portion of a heroic spirit's power then why did it manifest a heroic spirit itself?"
That thought gives her pause.
"That was a full heroic spirit?"
I shake my head.
"No, no at all not even close, for starters it was corrupted or con-"
"Something corrupted a heroic spirit?!-"
Oh dear, it looks like I've started to panic her, she steels herself and squints at me again.
"-Just how do you know all this?"
you guys are lucky I've written ahead I've got a bit of writer's block but it shouldn't affect my weekly updates for over a month yet.
I bring the teacup to my lips and take a sip, glancing off at Miyu in a maid costume standing by Luvia's side. Some questions are better left unanswered.
"So, none my contacts in the magus association say they've ever heard of someone like you."
I refocus my eyes on Luvia as I shrug, that was fast, although there's no way in hell they'd have heard of me.
"Perhaps.-"
I place the teacup back on the table.
"-although if they wanted me to spy on your progress would they tell you who I was, I mean would I tell you who I was?"
Luvia drums her fingers on the table.
"You're clearly not a spy, if you wanted to remain unseen you could've done that very easily."
Not likely given I glow bloody yellow, I lean forward.
"So did you ask them were the heroic spirits come from because I can assure you that it's not from the card." Technically, I think.
She takes a sip of her own tea.
"The grand master has informed me of the nature of heroic spirits."
I raise an eyebrow picking up my teacup for another sip.
"Really? I doubt that."
Her eyes go sharp.
"You're trying to distract me."
Bollocks, she caught on.
"Or maybe I'm trying to get an answer to a question from yesterday."
I take another sip of tea.
"Who are you and why are you following us."
She's keeping a level gaze on my eyes.
"Ah, yes how rude of me my name is William Bartholomew." Rule one of dealing with magic casters never tell them your real name.
I hold my hand out to shake hers, she appears shocked.
"There is no way that's your real name."
I frown and retract my hand.
"I don't think that you can talk Madam Edelfelt."
"You're English?"
I lean back, my cup of tea in hand again, I've never been much of a tea drinker but this is actually quite nice.
"On my father's side yes."
She leans forward with interest.
"That is a very old sounding English name."
I take a sip.
"I come from a very old family." Not entirely untrue.
We take a moment eyeing each other up before she sighs.
"You're not going to tell me who you work for are you?"
I smile, I couldn't do that if I wanted to love.
"No, I'm afraid not."
She appears to rally herself.
"What was the point of you even coming here then!"
For a moment I'm shocked by the ferocity of her reply.
"It was made apparent to me that your knowledge of the class cards was… incomplete."
I twirl my fingers in front of me for a moment as she appears nonplussed.
"I invited you here to determine who you work for."
She slumps appearing to have given up.
"While I appreciate the honesty, the request to talk specifically dealt with the card, not me."
She stares suspiciously at me for a moment.
"If I don't know who you work for, how can I trust that your information is reliable."
I take a moment to think on that point, why would she trust me?
"Because If I was going to betray you I would've let you fall to your death?"
She nods.
"A fair point, however, I would contend that you could be building trust to betray me later."
She has leaned forward by this point.
"Why would I not kill you and take your magical artefacts for myself? It would be far more profitable."
She raises her eyebrow quizzically.
"You aren't fishing for information?"
I place the tea cup back in the saucer and lean back, spreading my hands out as I do so.
"Of course I'm fishing for information."
"So why would I give you any?"
I lean in splaying my hand forward onto the table.
"Look trust my information or not-" to be honest I'm not sure how much I trust what I know, "-but either way you know that the magus association hasn't told you the full story."
She crosses her arms.
"I trust the grand-master far more than I trust you."
I shrug, that's fair.
"I suppose that would make sense, although how much does he know about the class cards."
"The grand master has studied them extensively."
"Oh? And he hasn't told you anything?"
"He told me how to use them."
I wave my finger at her.
"No, no he hasn't."
She scowls at me.
"What do you mean he hasn't."
"If he told you how to use them you would've taken down Rider far faster."
"You mean the Rider card, right?"
I wave my finger again.
"No, no madam Edelfelt, Rider is the class's name and the one she usually responds to, but her actual name is Medusa and she's trapped inside of the card."
I think, I actually have no idea how the mechanics of the class cards work.
"She didn't look like she had snakes for hair."
"No, she doesn't I'm not sure how much of the legend transfers into the powers of a heroic spirit. She's still alive by the way." Probably, If you die as a heroic spirit do you die permanently? that wouldn't make sense.
"How can you know that."
"Why don't you try pouring Mana into the card?" I mean hell, you could probably use it as a catalyst for a summoning if you really wanted to.
"I imagine that's what the ley-line did."
So it was on a ley-line, that's good to know
"So if all the card did was allow magus to use a portion of a heroic spirit's power then why did it manifest a heroic spirit itself?"
That thought gives her pause.
"That was a full heroic spirit?"
I shake my head.
"No, no at all not even close, for starters it was corrupted or con-"
"Something corrupted a heroic spirit?!-"
Oh dear, it looks like I've started to panic her, she steels herself and squints at me again.
"-Just how do you know all this?"
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Yes in the sense that we all have common ancestors and I are ultimately descended from the same lineage so all people are equally from old families.
I have no idea what the sentence is referring to or what it means.
- Location
- Somewhere North of south
I do come from an old English 'noble' family (technically)
SI doesn't know how he got the ring/doesn't work for anyone therefore is incapable of telling her who he works for.
- Location
- Somewhere North of south
From MC's perspective to prevent the mages association coming down on him to use him as a lab experiment.
he doesn't want to fuck with wizards man.
The Colour of Defeat pt 1
- Location
- Somewhere North of south
The Colour of Defeat: Pt 1:
Hello, out of curiosity does anyone know why COLOR=CLEAR BB code isn't working? and advice would receive gratefulness.
Edit: Praise lordvile
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Huh, that was surprisingly useful.
The three of us, Luvia, Miyu and I are standing underneath a very familiar bridge. Y'know I do kinda recognise the bridge but I'm not sure where from.
"Why are you staring at the Fuyuki bridge."
Huh? I turn back around to see my compatriots.
"Oh, I never lived anyway outside of my home town for any protracted period of time before, I'm just not used to it."
They look like they don't believe me.
Y-You shouldn't be believed anymore.
I feel sick, Wuu, what?
Y-You've not been sleeping yet and we both know why.
Ring, restore my mental state to normal parameters.
Y-You can't keep us out forever.
"Command confirmed."
I stagger as I feel like some strong medicine just kicked in.
"Are you ok?"
I turn to see Miyu and Luvia looking concerned, aww that's sweet we only just barely agreed to work together and they already care about my wellbeing.
"Yes, I'm fine, just a little tired."
Actually Ring State charge.
"27%"
Oh boy, that's not good, I take a lantern out of storage.
"Give me a moment."
I turn around, walk a few steps and hold my right arm out in a fist.
"Recharge."
Nothing happens, do I have to say the oath?
"Confirmed."
Does it have to be the classic oath or can I change it?
"Corpsmen can alter the corps oath to suit themselves within reason."
Right ok.
"In blackest day in brightest night,
come see your fears made into light,
let those who fail to fear my might,
burn like my power, and die in my light!"
The world fades to yellow and I get a flash of a large insectoid creature, I see the fears of countless creatures play out in the world before me as it leans forward.
It speaks.
CONNECTION HAS BEEN ESTABLISHED.
I try and pull myself away from the light, as it burns throughout my body.
Tʇ͟ɥ̵̢́!̵͡s̡ ̛͞d̕o̴ʍ̸ǝ̀ɹ̷̀͘ !̴́s̀ ͞͠ń̢͞o͘ʇ҉ ͟͟ɟ̢͢ó̡ɹ̴͠ ʎo̷n̵̢ ̛͏d̶͠ɐɹ̨͠ɐ̷ן̀̕ן́͠ɐx̷ ͘͟
t̵h̨is ̸pow̶e͜r is n͠ot̕ f́or y̧ou ҉pa͞r͝a̴ll͘ax
What is that? Some… thing? Forces the insect away from me.
I think it's coming from behind me, I start to tu-
"Recharge complete."
Reality snaps back into focus as I nearly fall over, but catch myself on the railing.
What the hell was that? I turn around to see that Rin and Illya have arrived.
"What is he doing here?!" Rin does not appear pleased to see me.
Rin turns from Illya who it appears she was lecturing before and has begun yelling at Luvia.
"Madam Edelfelt and I have come to an arrangement, regarding the cards."
That, that was parallax almost certainly, what the hell got parallax to fuck off. I mean emotional spectrum embodiments are meant to be pretty bloody strong right?
"What arrangement?"
My attention snaps back to Rin who is staring at me with contempt.
"I agreed to provide any information I have on the card and the heroic spirits attached to them and I get the first crack at setting them free."
Rin's glare goes from hostile to curious.
"What do you mean 'set them free?'"
Luvia steps forward between Rin and me.
"It appears that the grand master's knowledge regarding the class cards is… incomplete."
Rin appears taken aback by this.
"You mean HE made the class cards?!"
She's frantically pointing at me.
"No, no at all, I didn't have anything to do with the class cards being made or coming here." Probably.
She appears to control herself from exploding at me right away.
"And how do we know that?"
I sigh.
"Because if I was skilled enough at magecraft to make cards like that, I'd have killed all four of you by now."
That gives all of them pause, some appearing more concerned than others.
"W-what you mean you'd consider killing us?"
Illya looks more than a little concerned at the prospect.
"No, even if you did shoot me first."
That makes her look more worried than before.
"T-that was..."
I wave off her sudden guilt over her actions.
"Don't worry about it."
Luvia appears to have retaken control of the situation.
"Well shall we begin, well cannot stand here all night. Miyu."
She raises her hand towards the girl.
"Sapphire."
"Expanding to alternate realities, mirror road formation-."
They're just saying random words, aren't they?
"-Jump mirror world."
The circle around us blazes with light as we're transported into the 'mirror world.' damn it doesn't even make sense in my head. The light fade and I see Caster floating above us I recognise that dress anywhere even if she's wearing a fur coat and… that's a lot of spells.
"Right, so that's the heroic spirit Medea-" Probably. ",-she's a caster class from the age of gods and if given sufficient time can set up very powerful magic traps for us."
Rin and Luvia turn to me.
"You couldn't have said that sooner!" Rin appears annoyed at my late response.
I shrug as I raise my fist and generate a construct shield.
"I'm afraid I wasn't aware of it sooner. Oh and ah, that shield won't hold."
They turn back to our opponent.
"Miyu raise a barrier as well!" Ah, Luvia appears to have woken up.
Miyu obediently raises her staff and raises a barrier just before the barrage kicks off and my construct barrier starts cracking like glass, at least it is slowing down the first barrage this time.
Ring I don't suppose we have more exotic shields, do we?
"Illya support Miyu's barrier!" and that's Rin waking up.
My barrier breaks.
Illya, panicking, manages to raise her staff as Miyu's barrier begins to fail.
"R-right."
"Confirmed."
Illya's barrier barely picks up in time as Miyu's fails and shatters.
Oh, that looks suitably exotic.
"I-I don't know how much longer we can hold this."
I use constructs to pull Rin, Luvia, Miyu and Illya into as small an area as possible behind me as I produce what I can only describe as a void shield from a construct generator.
"Kyaa-" "wha-" "get off-"
I cut them off.
"Please keep your hands and feet inside the vehicle."
Casters spell's bend around us at the points of impact as the void shield uses numerous micro-singularity projectors to bend space around us so that casters spells don't exist at the point of impact. Ring alert me to power consumption.
"Command confirmed. Alert 90% power remaining."
Yikes, that's a power hog, watching the spells disappear hurts my eyes.
"75% power remaining."
"I can't keep this up forever! We need to fall back!"
Good thing casters not in a right enough state of mind to destroy the generator construct.
"55% power remaining."
"We need to leave NOW!"
Then a spell collides into the generator construct destroying it. Bollocks, I jinxed it.
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LordVile
There's thinking and thinking with explosives.
- Location
- INDIA
Use color=transparent.
Crusader Jerome
Subsisting on Supplication
- Location
- My home away from Rome
I think the correct syntax is 'color=invisible'.
EDIT: Ninja'd and wrong.
- Location
- Somewhere North of south
Thank you
Crusader Jerome
Subsisting on Supplication
- Location
- My home away from Rome
@dat_noob1926812 Do you want a proofreader for grammar and punctuation? I can help you with that.
- Location
- Somewhere North of south
Thanks for the offer, however, I just got a friend of mine to agree to do that. (from the IRL realms eww.)
The Colour of Defeat Pt 2
- Location
- Somewhere North of south
The Colour of defeat Pt 2:
Ahh, Arugh, it hurts, how did those spells get through my Environmental shield. I suppose the amount of 'Fear' wasn't enough to hold out against 'true magic' though I'd have hoped they'd last a bit longer before being battered down like that.
"No, no way am I wasting that gem on him, we don't even know him!"
I try to open my eyes but it feels like there's nothing there.
"He is the only reason why casters spells didn't wipe us all out immediately!"
Ring repair my body would you.
"I don't care, he can wait until YOU drag him back to your place then!"
And clean all the dried blood off while you're at it.
"Command confirmed."
"R-rin I think we should help him." Someone feels guilty.
Ooh, that's' better I feel it as the ring stitches me back together, oh my there was a hole in my stomach.
Then something pokes me.
"I think he is fixing himself."
I open my eyes, feeling the dried blood flake away. I check my suit, oh dear that's ruined. I sit upright and look at the four girls surrounding me, they look spooked. Ring repair my clothes.
"What was that?" Rin and Luvia appear curious, huh I suppose that's fair.
"Command confirmed."
I wave of yellow flows over me, fixing tears cleaning blood and dirt off and re-ironing my suit. Nice. I look at Rin blankly.
"What was what?"
She gestures frantically at me with both hands.
"That! What just happened."
I suppose she means the 'seemingly coming back from the dead' thing.
"One of my abilities means I can stitch my body back together as long as my mind is-" at least partially "- functional." Enough to give commands.
All four of them look at me incredulously.
"What? how did you think I kept getting up when fighting Rider?"
They all raise their eyebrows.
"So, what? you're immortal?"
I raise my hands up defensively.
"Oh heavens no, I just use my powers more intelligently than the average Joe."
Illya looks up at me.
"W-what happened to the spells?"
Ah yes, the probably void shield projector generator? I don't know how it works, I generate a construct diagram.
"For lack of a better term, a void shield. You see what it does is generate several very small singularities that-" the construct gets a diagram of several filaments going out to represent the black holes. "-disrupt the flow of gravity in the universe so that the spell at point of impact doesn't exist." Not at all accurate but about as good a summary as I can give in English.
"Whaa?" That appears to have gone over her head.
Miyu turns to me.
"That… sounds very dangerous."
I nod, dismissing the construct.
"Oh yes definitely."
Rin and Luvia look at me, mouths slightly agape and with their eyes straining.
I suppose wizards don't like technology.
They regain their composure.
"That trap she set overwhelmed our barriers immediately."
"Well, she is from the age of gods." I have no idea why that makes her 'true magic' more powerful.
"Yes, that kind of power can only be expected of a great mage from then."
The pink staff, Ruby I believe waves her… head? Around.
"Moving such powerful spells around would be difficult right?"
The two mages present to look at me bluntly.
"Not for a mage with that kind of power."
I rest my index finger on my chin.
"Yes however if we managed to attack from multiple directions she shouldn't be able to keep up with all of us."
Rin and Luvia both nod seeming to understand.
The blue stick floats up.
"The easiest way to do that would be to fly around her."
Illya floats upwards behind them.
"Ah, so all I need to do is fly r-right?"
"That's easier said than done to fly without practice is a little…"
Rin appears to notice Illya.
"Eh? What?"
She loses it.
"WHAT THE? HOW ARE YOU ABLE TO FLY?-" "that's amazing Illya to already be at this level." "I-is it really something that amazing?"
"LUVIA AND I HAD TO SPEND AN ENTIRE DAY PRACTICING IN ORDER TO BE ABLE TO FLY!"
It appears Luvia is joining her in losing her shit.
"WITHOUT A STRONG CONCRETE IMAGE EVEN FLOATING IS DIFFICULT… JUST HOW DID YOU?"
Illya looks at them confused.
"Well if you say that, aren't all magical girls supposed to fly?"
I'm sure possibly having supercharged magic circuits has nothing to do with this.
Rin and Luvia appear to give up on this girl.
"Hahahahahahah."
I keel over and bring up a hand to wipe my eye.
"You! What's so funny about this?!"
This certainly isn't the Illya I'm familiar with.
"Oh, nothing."
I float so that I'm the same height as Illya.
"I won't lose like this. Miyu shows them that you can also fly right now!"
Miyu looks decidedly less impressed.
"Humans cannot fly."
Despite having two human beings floating right in front of her, she still believes people cannot fly…
Now that's an impressive level of scepticism.
"Miyu have you tried projecting a barrier around your body and moving that?"
They all turn to me confused.
"That's what I do."
I shrug.
They still appear lost. I sigh and hold my hands forward in a spread out motion.
"So can you see the slight yellow outline around me?"
They all nod.
"That is a solid construct if I move it around-" I float myself around a bit. "-it moves me through space, thereby causing me to 'fly'.-"
She nods.
"-Could you do something like that?"
She shakes her head.
"No people can't fly, the g- forces on the body from moving in such a manner at speed would likely kill me."
I facepalm.
"Well… does anyone else have an idea."
Miyu thinks for a moment then perks up.
"If I generated mana platforms underneath me I could increase my altitude."
Rin and Luvia nod, it seems we've formed a plan of attack for round two.
"Try it now, if we can get it to work we can try again."
Ahh, Arugh, it hurts, how did those spells get through my Environmental shield. I suppose the amount of 'Fear' wasn't enough to hold out against 'true magic' though I'd have hoped they'd last a bit longer before being battered down like that.
"No, no way am I wasting that gem on him, we don't even know him!"
I try to open my eyes but it feels like there's nothing there.
"He is the only reason why casters spells didn't wipe us all out immediately!"
Ring repair my body would you.
"I don't care, he can wait until YOU drag him back to your place then!"
And clean all the dried blood off while you're at it.
"Command confirmed."
"R-rin I think we should help him." Someone feels guilty.
Ooh, that's' better I feel it as the ring stitches me back together, oh my there was a hole in my stomach.
Then something pokes me.
"I think he is fixing himself."
I open my eyes, feeling the dried blood flake away. I check my suit, oh dear that's ruined. I sit upright and look at the four girls surrounding me, they look spooked. Ring repair my clothes.
"What was that?" Rin and Luvia appear curious, huh I suppose that's fair.
"Command confirmed."
I wave of yellow flows over me, fixing tears cleaning blood and dirt off and re-ironing my suit. Nice. I look at Rin blankly.
"What was what?"
She gestures frantically at me with both hands.
"That! What just happened."
I suppose she means the 'seemingly coming back from the dead' thing.
"One of my abilities means I can stitch my body back together as long as my mind is-" at least partially "- functional." Enough to give commands.
All four of them look at me incredulously.
"What? how did you think I kept getting up when fighting Rider?"
They all raise their eyebrows.
"So, what? you're immortal?"
I raise my hands up defensively.
"Oh heavens no, I just use my powers more intelligently than the average Joe."
Illya looks up at me.
"W-what happened to the spells?"
Ah yes, the probably void shield projector generator? I don't know how it works, I generate a construct diagram.
"For lack of a better term, a void shield. You see what it does is generate several very small singularities that-" the construct gets a diagram of several filaments going out to represent the black holes. "-disrupt the flow of gravity in the universe so that the spell at point of impact doesn't exist." Not at all accurate but about as good a summary as I can give in English.
"Whaa?" That appears to have gone over her head.
Miyu turns to me.
"That… sounds very dangerous."
I nod, dismissing the construct.
"Oh yes definitely."
Rin and Luvia look at me, mouths slightly agape and with their eyes straining.
I suppose wizards don't like technology.
They regain their composure.
"That trap she set overwhelmed our barriers immediately."
"Well, she is from the age of gods." I have no idea why that makes her 'true magic' more powerful.
"Yes, that kind of power can only be expected of a great mage from then."
The pink staff, Ruby I believe waves her… head? Around.
"Moving such powerful spells around would be difficult right?"
The two mages present to look at me bluntly.
"Not for a mage with that kind of power."
I rest my index finger on my chin.
"Yes however if we managed to attack from multiple directions she shouldn't be able to keep up with all of us."
Rin and Luvia both nod seeming to understand.
The blue stick floats up.
"The easiest way to do that would be to fly around her."
Illya floats upwards behind them.
"Ah, so all I need to do is fly r-right?"
"That's easier said than done to fly without practice is a little…"
Rin appears to notice Illya.
"Eh? What?"
She loses it.
"WHAT THE? HOW ARE YOU ABLE TO FLY?-" "that's amazing Illya to already be at this level." "I-is it really something that amazing?"
"LUVIA AND I HAD TO SPEND AN ENTIRE DAY PRACTICING IN ORDER TO BE ABLE TO FLY!"
It appears Luvia is joining her in losing her shit.
"WITHOUT A STRONG CONCRETE IMAGE EVEN FLOATING IS DIFFICULT… JUST HOW DID YOU?"
Illya looks at them confused.
"Well if you say that, aren't all magical girls supposed to fly?"
I'm sure possibly having supercharged magic circuits has nothing to do with this.
Rin and Luvia appear to give up on this girl.
"Hahahahahahah."
I keel over and bring up a hand to wipe my eye.
"You! What's so funny about this?!"
This certainly isn't the Illya I'm familiar with.
"Oh, nothing."
I float so that I'm the same height as Illya.
"I won't lose like this. Miyu shows them that you can also fly right now!"
Miyu looks decidedly less impressed.
"Humans cannot fly."
Despite having two human beings floating right in front of her, she still believes people cannot fly…
Now that's an impressive level of scepticism.
"Miyu have you tried projecting a barrier around your body and moving that?"
They all turn to me confused.
"That's what I do."
I shrug.
They still appear lost. I sigh and hold my hands forward in a spread out motion.
"So can you see the slight yellow outline around me?"
They all nod.
"That is a solid construct if I move it around-" I float myself around a bit. "-it moves me through space, thereby causing me to 'fly'.-"
She nods.
"-Could you do something like that?"
She shakes her head.
"No people can't fly, the g- forces on the body from moving in such a manner at speed would likely kill me."
I facepalm.
"Well… does anyone else have an idea."
Miyu thinks for a moment then perks up.
"If I generated mana platforms underneath me I could increase my altitude."
Rin and Luvia nod, it seems we've formed a plan of attack for round two.
"Try it now, if we can get it to work we can try again."
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- Location
- Hicksville, France
The problem doesn't only lie in their lack of imagination, but also in their inability to believe in the illogical, even proved, stemming from excessive self-confidence (which seems to be a prerequisite for Magecraft... somehow?). Just look at Miu, she can clearly see that Illya is flying right in front of her, yet she denies it all the same... And she's a (mostly) normal human raised by magi.
The Colour of Defeat Pt 3
- Location
- Somewhere North of south
The Colour of Defeat: Pt 3:
OK be prepared for low-quality writing and lack of knowledge of nasuverse lore!
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"Expanding to alternate realities, mirror road formation-"
At least this one is being consistently nonsensical.
"-commencing jump to mirror world."
Reality becomes blinding light again as we enter the mirror world.
Ring FTL us above the top layer of spells.
Rin and Luvia flee for cover immediately.
"Command confirmed."
The scenery flickers for a moment.
Illya and Miyu are trying to gain height.
Hmm….. Ring create tungsten rods.
Illya and Miyu start dodging casters attacks.
"Command confirmed."
Having found shooting at Illya and Miyu fruitless, caster turns to me and opens up with a barrage of spells.
Ring FTL us in a pattern where I am not going to get hit.
I'm blinded by the short-range FTL transitions.
I raise both hands and try to match her barrage with one of my own, oh and make sure that Luvia and Rin don't get killed by this attack. Make her feel the fear of death.
The FTL's stop as I see one explosion in front of me at the point of impact and another point on the ground presumably where caster hit the ground.
"Command confirmed."
Illya comes up beside me.
"W-weren't you saying you were gonna try and save them?"
I nod.
"Yes."
"T-that didn't look like saving her."
I shake my head.
"No first I have to see into her mind."
"Waa-?"
That appears to go over her head as I shake mine.
"Don't worry about it."
Ring let's see her fears.
THIS IS MY POWER YOU SHALL NOT STEAL IT.
T-ʇɥ͟ı̀s͝ ̶ı͜ś no̷ʇ ʎ͞o̡nɹ̡ś ɐ́nʎɯǫɹ̕ǝ҉
Thi͢s̀ ̕i͡s ͝no҉t you͞rs a͡ny̛mo̵re
Something exerts a noticeable amount of force.
YOU WILL NOT CHEAT ME.
L-L̨ǝɐ҉ʌǝ
L҉ea̷v͘e҉
I see dead people, whoa that a lot of - what have I done I sacrificed everything for them, how dare they abandon me? Call me a witch. -what this isn't me.- Aphrodite has deceived me. - What is happening everything feels wrong. - He abandoned me he should have chosen me, after everything I did for him he chooses her. - I force myself to focus- everyone has betrayed me and used me as a puppet - I try and look at the faces what are their names. - they should all burn - my head hurts - if they want me to be a witch I shall prove them right - The world starts breaking and burning in purple flames.
Wha-? When did I land on the ground? Caster is in front of me, is she waiting for something? alright so let's try this. I carefully place my hand on her shoulder.
"You are not a tool of others."
She raises her hand with a spell ready to blow my head off, that's not something I can fix so I hope to all hell this works.
"You are a princess who deserved better."
She's appearing to hold firm.
"I want to he-"
I pull my head to the side as she tries to blow it off, then I quickly move forward and pull her into a hug to prevent her from doing that again.
"D-don't let another being control your actions again."
Caster freezes.
"You can do better than that."
Oh? is this going to work?
"N-not-t again."
Good, good she can talk to me that's a start.
"Yes not again princess, how about this time you fight for control of your mind?"
She starts shaking.
"AARAHGHRGHAGH!!"
Yes, yes.
"Come on, you can do it!"
"AAAAARRRRGHGHRAGGHG!"
Caster clasps her head in seeming agony and keels over.
"Fight it! Prove them all wrong for trampling on you!"
"M-my n-na-ame… i-is-"
I stand upright and perform A proper performers bow in front of her.
"Princess Medea."
She manages to nod barely.
"Prove that they were unworthy to stand above you."
Come on caster you got this, I've done all I can from this end. Which to be fair was mostly nothing.
"Alert potential magical build-up detected."
Oh look wind and light.
"I-i-i-I W-will n-not lose myse-elf AGAIN!"
Yes, YES I can see her fear of losing herself to someone else's control again.
"Fight it princess that is all you have to do! Don't let your fears win!"
Ironic considering my power source.
Caster starts burning with purple flames… is that suppose to happen? Well, I suppose I'm trying to make things that aren't supposed to happen, occur so that might be a good thing?
The flames fade and YES THAT'S THE CASTER OUTFIT I KNOW!!
Caster stands to look unsteady, before raising her head to look at me. HELL YES IT WORKED
I barely manage to not punch my fist in the air in a victory salute.
"Now then, since it appears that you know who I am. Who are you?"
Now isn't that the million dollar question. BUT I STILL CAN'T BELIEVE IT WORKED
"My name is WahLgTggEhR."
What? I feel Something drip from my mouth.
I look down and see a vaguely familiar black blade with red engravings on it through my stomach.
I have the ring create a construct pulse going out from behind me at speed to knock whoever did that away before the world fades to black.
OK be prepared for low-quality writing and lack of knowledge of nasuverse lore!
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"Expanding to alternate realities, mirror road formation-"
At least this one is being consistently nonsensical.
"-commencing jump to mirror world."
Reality becomes blinding light again as we enter the mirror world.
Ring FTL us above the top layer of spells.
Rin and Luvia flee for cover immediately.
"Command confirmed."
The scenery flickers for a moment.
Illya and Miyu are trying to gain height.
Hmm….. Ring create tungsten rods.
Illya and Miyu start dodging casters attacks.
"Command confirmed."
Having found shooting at Illya and Miyu fruitless, caster turns to me and opens up with a barrage of spells.
Ring FTL us in a pattern where I am not going to get hit.
I'm blinded by the short-range FTL transitions.
I raise both hands and try to match her barrage with one of my own, oh and make sure that Luvia and Rin don't get killed by this attack. Make her feel the fear of death.
The FTL's stop as I see one explosion in front of me at the point of impact and another point on the ground presumably where caster hit the ground.
"Command confirmed."
Illya comes up beside me.
"W-weren't you saying you were gonna try and save them?"
I nod.
"Yes."
"T-that didn't look like saving her."
I shake my head.
"No first I have to see into her mind."
"Waa-?"
That appears to go over her head as I shake mine.
"Don't worry about it."
Ring let's see her fears.
THIS IS MY POWER YOU SHALL NOT STEAL IT.
T-ʇɥ͟ı̀s͝ ̶ı͜ś no̷ʇ ʎ͞o̡nɹ̡ś ɐ́nʎɯǫɹ̕ǝ҉
Thi͢s̀ ̕i͡s ͝no҉t you͞rs a͡ny̛mo̵re
Something exerts a noticeable amount of force.
YOU WILL NOT CHEAT ME.
L-L̨ǝɐ҉ʌǝ
L҉ea̷v͘e҉
I see dead people, whoa that a lot of - what have I done I sacrificed everything for them, how dare they abandon me? Call me a witch. -what this isn't me.- Aphrodite has deceived me. - What is happening everything feels wrong. - He abandoned me he should have chosen me, after everything I did for him he chooses her. - I force myself to focus- everyone has betrayed me and used me as a puppet - I try and look at the faces what are their names. - they should all burn - my head hurts - if they want me to be a witch I shall prove them right - The world starts breaking and burning in purple flames.
Wha-? When did I land on the ground? Caster is in front of me, is she waiting for something? alright so let's try this. I carefully place my hand on her shoulder.
"You are not a tool of others."
She raises her hand with a spell ready to blow my head off, that's not something I can fix so I hope to all hell this works.
"You are a princess who deserved better."
She's appearing to hold firm.
"I want to he-"
I pull my head to the side as she tries to blow it off, then I quickly move forward and pull her into a hug to prevent her from doing that again.
"D-don't let another being control your actions again."
Caster freezes.
"You can do better than that."
Oh? is this going to work?
"N-not-t again."
Good, good she can talk to me that's a start.
"Yes not again princess, how about this time you fight for control of your mind?"
She starts shaking.
"AARAHGHRGHAGH!!"
Yes, yes.
"Come on, you can do it!"
"AAAAARRRRGHGHRAGGHG!"
Caster clasps her head in seeming agony and keels over.
"Fight it! Prove them all wrong for trampling on you!"
"M-my n-na-ame… i-is-"
I stand upright and perform A proper performers bow in front of her.
"Princess Medea."
She manages to nod barely.
"Prove that they were unworthy to stand above you."
Come on caster you got this, I've done all I can from this end. Which to be fair was mostly nothing.
"Alert potential magical build-up detected."
Oh look wind and light.
"I-i-i-I W-will n-not lose myse-elf AGAIN!"
Yes, YES I can see her fear of losing herself to someone else's control again.
"Fight it princess that is all you have to do! Don't let your fears win!"
Ironic considering my power source.
Caster starts burning with purple flames… is that suppose to happen? Well, I suppose I'm trying to make things that aren't supposed to happen, occur so that might be a good thing?
The flames fade and YES THAT'S THE CASTER OUTFIT I KNOW!!
Caster stands to look unsteady, before raising her head to look at me. HELL YES IT WORKED
I barely manage to not punch my fist in the air in a victory salute.
"Now then, since it appears that you know who I am. Who are you?"
Now isn't that the million dollar question. BUT I STILL CAN'T BELIEVE IT WORKED
"My name is WahLgTggEhR."
What? I feel Something drip from my mouth.
I look down and see a vaguely familiar black blade with red engravings on it through my stomach.
I have the ring create a construct pulse going out from behind me at speed to knock whoever did that away before the world fades to black.
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- Location
- America
Was that Kanshou?
Could also be Saber Alter or Caster pulling an MCU Loki (aka get a target to talk to an illusion of you while you sneak behind them and kill them).