Fate/Broken: Kaleid Liner Prisma of Fear

since miyu seems to recognize him I'm going to guess he is another kiritsugu or shirou or alternative einsbern from the movies. most likely alternative einsbern since ilya didn't seem to recognize him, but they were in the middle of a fight.

OR he doesn't look like them but his hair is white or something from the "optimal human" ring thing
 
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since miyu seems to recognize him I'm going to guess he is another kiritsugu or shirou or alternative einsbern from the movies. most likely alternative einsbern since illya didn't seem to recognize him, but they were in the middle of a fight.

OR he doesn't look like them but his hair is white or something from the "optimal human" ring thing
or she just didn't want someone else to collect the cards? Miyu hasn't gotten a good look at the MC's face yet unless I've mis-remembered what I've uploaded.

edit I don't mean to say that you're entirely wrong
 
or she just didn't want someone else to collect the cards? Miyu hasn't gotten a good look at the MC's face yet unless I've mis-remembered what I've uploaded.

edit I don't mean to say that you're entirely wrong

Her voice is monotone and flat, I stare her down for a second and her eyes widen with... recognition?
to me that sounded like he looks like someone miyu would have already seen, which the 3 main males shes been around are the emiyas and the alternative ainsberns

if you meant she widens them with respect or something (like recognition of power) then probably should be more clear.
though it could be someone else she briefly saw or MC timetravel shenanigans as well.
 
Her voice is monotone and flat, I stare her down for a second and her eyes widen with... recognition?
to me that sounded like he looks like someone miyu would have already seen, which the 3 main males shes been around are the emiyas and the alternative ainsberns

if you meant she widens them with respect or something (like recognition of power) then probably should be more clear.
though it could be someone else she briefly saw or MC timetravel shenanigans as well.

ah shit I forgot what has and hasn't been uploaded by bad (I'll need to make some adjustments to the next chapter so it makes sense)
but yh the MC will explain what he thinks might be going on.
 
Girl meets ring Pt 1
Girl meets ring. Pt 1



"OOOOO-OH-OH-OH!" Luvia walks out hand half covering her mouth.

Illya looks perturbed. "So-some sort of really haughty person has arrived."

"This person has a large lung capacity as usual."

Luvia walks out of the darkness.

"The precise timing you'd need to finish it off in one attack… along with that, split-second judgment. It clearly shows a difference. On the other hand… to run away because you're afraid of your opponent's noble phantasm is exceeding laughable!! What ridiculous antics indeed, Rin Tohsaka."

"Shut up you!!"

Rin charges at Luvia kicking her in the head, what? well, I certainly didn't expect that.

"How dare you hit the back of a lady's head. You're a barbarian without a hint of intelligence!!" Luvia starts to fight back.

"What's with the pride!? You're being high and mighty for someone who made a sneak attack on somebody while their back was turned!!"

Illya stares at the two of them bewildered. "Awawawawawawawa…."

"Don't grow up to be like those two." Good advice stick.

The world around us begins to crack, that doesn't look good.

"Ru-ruby the ground around us seems to be cracking… uwa the sky to!?"

"Oh my, it seems the mirror world is about to collapse because we took the card.-"

Ring do we have any reality stabilizing constructs? Don't know if it'll work but…

"-it'll be bad if we don't get out of here soon, Rin! Luvia! we have to escape you know!-"

"Confirmed."

"-are you listening."

Ring prepare the constructs don't activate them yet.

"Sapphire-" the new girl looks like she knows how to handle the situation.

"Command confirmed."

"Yes, master."

"-Six-meter radius reflection path formed. Return to the regular world."

Ring FTL us to the circle.

"I-its big."

The scenery flickers then gets absorbed into the light.

"Seriously, if I didn't know better-" I don't "-I'd say you two were trying to kill me."

"Whew for the time being the first battle is finished."

OK then ignore me.

"We-we're back and the building are back like they were too…"

The lights fade and the courtyard becomes dark, showing me Illya and the girl in the purple dress staring at each other.

"Che. that even my attack was too much means… that even though it was impertinent-"

"Ok, that's enough!" I have the ring end a pulse of yellow light knocking both of them to the ground.

"Ah!"

"Ohf!"

Both Rin and Luvia look up at me seeming a little afraid, I can use that. I bring my left hand to my face and let out a sigh.

"Get up." I make a gesture with my free hand,

They stand up tentatively.

"Why are you following us?"

I shake my head, dismissing my armour.

"No, no you're going about this the wrong way."

The girl in the purple dress turn from Illya to me and her eyes wide as she gets a good look at my face.

"How? Y-you died." Her face looks like when you're staring a someone familiar and you've just confirmed who they are.

I turn to the little girl in the purple dress who just spoke up. Oh? That's interesting.

"Whatever do you mean by that?" Because I certainly don't recognize her.

"Miyu do you know him?" Luvia looks as interested as I am.

She looks lost.

"I- you died."

Very interesting I doubt that there are three of me in this world, I smile, my, my I will have questions for her later.

"I just have one of those faces I assure you I don't know who you are and I certainly haven't died. Though I would recommend stopping now, everyone has their secrets and if you did watch me die unless there is a body..."

She appears to gain control of her emotions and nods.

"You're right, you're not who I thought you were."

She appears to sadden but that realization, hmm? That is an interesting turn of events, wait did Luvia call her Miyu? Like the wish-granting girl from oath under the snow, that explains the class cards. Perhaps this is where she ended up after Shirou made his wish?

I grin. Wait does that mean there are multiple me's running around? Is this real, I mean I figured it wasn't but... Questions for later.

"Perhaps, I appear to have gained some very useful information."

"Who are you working for?" Straight to business then.

Rin and Luvia are both holding gems in their hands ready to throw them at me. I raise my hands in mock surrender.

"My, my you two really have a bone to pick with me don't you."

Luvia and Rin both at each other nod then back at me.

"Neither of us appreciate being followed."

"Well then, I was here offering assistance." I shrug

"You were going to take the class card for yourself." Tsk, dammit Miyu why can't you let me have my fun.

The girl in purple, Miyu apparently stares at me with… hopeful eyes? what the hell did she think I was going to do with it?

"Well, perhaps I was going to attempt to use the class card to try and free the heroic spirit inside."

Both Rin and Luvia look very confused at this.

"The class cards only allow people to use a portion of the heroic spirits power."

I roll my eyes at Luvia.

"Come on Luvia you're smarter than that, if that was all they did then at worst there would only be a weapon in the 'Mirror world' and not a heroic spirit to fight. They are clearly far more than that, do you even know where the heroic spirits come from?"

Both of them look lost at this.

I sigh.

It appears that this world's magus association either doesn't know or didn't tell them about Throne of heroes.

"You two have introductions to take care of."

I turn and walk away, I feel four sets of eyes dig into my back as I round the corner.

Ring FTL when we get out of sight, we're going back to monitoring them.
 
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Man finally I was getting sick of those ninnies ignoring the glowing yellow man with apparently magic powers talking to them all the time and not acknowledging his existence. Though I do wonder how am you knows any version of him.
 
Man finally I was getting sick of those ninnies ignoring the glowing yellow man with apparently magic powers talking to them all the time and not acknowledging his existence. Though I do wonder how am you knows any version of him.

He was far away over in the courtyard out of talking range, when the update started and when he got close they were too busy fighting each other.

That's a long term plan for far in the future (If I bother writing that long) I've got most of the main plot points planned out it's just the bits in-between that I need to work out.

Edit: Spelling
 
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I grin. Wait does that mean there are multiple me's running around? Is this real, I mean I figured it wasn't but... Questions for later.
Since she obviously didn't recognize you in your yellow armor is it safe to assume alternative you had a different ring or were completely vanilla human?

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She looks lost. "I- you died."
Add a dash so it sound like she paused abit instead of running through the "I" and "you"
 
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"Come on Luvia you're smarter than that, if that was all they did then at worst there would only be a weapon in the 'Mirror world' and not a heroic spirit to fight. They are clearly far more than that, do you even know where the heroic spirits come from?"

Both of them look lost at this.

I sigh.

It appears that this world's magus association either doesn't know or didn't tell them about Throne of heroes.
Uhm... Was that supported by manga? Because Tohsaka is of founding family, so she pretty much should properly know about ritual, even if it diverged in 4th.
 
Uhm... Was that supported by manga? Because Tohsaka is of founding family, so she pretty much should properly know about ritual, even if it diverged in 4th.

In both the manga and the show Rin had no idea that the holy grail war was a thing (if I remembered correctly) Irisvel said something about it being no longer in existence (or not properly being started) so even if the magus association did know about the holy grail wars inner workings why would they tell Luvia and Rin minor details about a ritual that doesn't exist anymore?

There were lots of timeline changes for one Illya should be 18 if she was born at the same time as in Fate stay night.
 
In both the manga and the show Rin had no idea that the holy grail war was a thing (if I remembered correctly) Irisvel said something about it being no longer in existence (or not properly being started) so even if the magus association did know about the holy grail wars inner workings why would they tell Luvia and Rin minor details about a ritual that doesn't exist anymore?
Thing is - if I remember correctly divergence was in 4th when Iri and Kiritsugu gone "fuck this shit" because choice of grail was Iliya and not Iri. So I have to presume that something happened that prevented Rin from inheriting her family archive if she indeed doesn't know...

PS. As for Iliya... she probably should be 18, it just as I understand family already did all mods and knowledge upload, so Iri decided to "reset" her and that where Kuro came from. Though I'm really not sure about this part.
 
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Thing is - if I remember correctly divergence was in 4th when Iri and Kiritsugu gone "fuck this shit" because choice of grail was Iliya and not Iri. So I have to presume that something happened that prevented Rin from inheriting her family archive if she indeed doesn't know...

PS. As for Iliya... she probably should be 18, it just as I understand family already did all mods and knowledge upload, so Iri decided to "reset" her and that where Kuro came from. Though I'm really not sure about this part.
there are a bunch of stuff like that that is missing like we never learn if
Sakura still gets bugraped
or anything like that. I thought UBW showed her getting the last of the upgrades after the 4th war ended (and I very much doubt Irisvel would let them touch Illya) and if Kiritsugu peaced out of the war what exactly happened. these questions will haunt the MC forever.
 
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there are a bunch of stuff like that that is missing like we never learn if [SPOILER/]Sakura still gets bugraped[/SPOILER] or anything like that. I thought UBW showed her getting the last of the upgrades after the 4th war ended (and I very much doubt Irisvel would let them touch Illya) and if Kiritsugu peaced out of the war what exactly happened. these questions will haunt the MC forever.
Uhm. As I understand it 4th didn't happened (properly) for the lack of minor grail. As Einzbern chose Iliya as minor grail and Kiritsugu objected. So modifications happened before war and so was start of Iri-Kiri vs Einzbern conflict.
 
so I'm guessing MC looks like an ainsworth? possibly julian or otherwise someone in her original family before she met shirou and kiritsugu because

She starts off not leaving her family's house -> family all dies
emiyas keep her inside -> kiritsugu and shirou would both be recognized by illya
Kidnapped by ainsworth -> could look like one of these people

I don't think she really met anyone else unless your going with an AU oath under snow
 
so I'm guessing MC looks like an ainsworth? possibly julian or otherwise someone in her original family before she met shirou and kiritsugu because

She starts off not leaving her family's house -> family all dies
emiyas keep her inside -> kiritsugu and shirou would both be recognized by illya
Kidnapped by ainsworth -> could look like one of these people

I don't think she really met anyone else unless your going with an AU oath under snow
It is an AU oath under snow that I have planned out and fully intend to write. Alot of this is basically foreshadowing
 
Uhm... Was that supported by manga? Because Tohsaka is of founding family, so she pretty much should properly know about ritual, even if it diverged in 4th.

In both the manga and the show Rin had no idea that the holy grail war was a thing (if I remembered correctly) Irisvel said something about it being no longer in existence (or not properly being started) so even if the magus association did know about the holy grail wars inner workings why would they tell Luvia and Rin minor details about a ritual

So I have to presume that something happened that prevented Rin from inheriting her family archive if she indeed doesn't know...

Something ya forgot, her dad Tokomi is still alive and head of house, he probably hasn't told Rin their involvement with the War.
 
Something ya forgot, her dad Tokomi is still alive and head of house, he probably hasn't told Rin their involvement with the War.
wot? I didn't know that thank you!
Good thing no one in the story (aside from Miyu and MC) have any idea that the cards are related to a holy grail war, like I said why would he tell her about a ritual that doesn't exist?

(totally not covering my ass so the plot makes sense)
 
Girl meets ring Pt 2

Girl meets ring Pt 2



So, this is very interesting I have confirmation that the class cards are connected to the Ainsworth holy grail war and now know that Miyu ended up in a new world after Shirou made his wish. That means that there are seven class cards each representing a different class of heroic spirit.



Assuming I both remembered the movie correctly and that it accurately represents what happened, I don't remember anyone who looks like me in the movie.

So.

Why did Miyu recognize me?

Well, there's the one option…

When I entered the bleed (for lack of a better term) between universes I shattered across infinite universes one of which happens to either have a character from a movie I watched or is exactly like a movie I watched.



She said I died, I look at the ring. I thought I could've lasted in the nasuverse with a power ring.



I suppose that woman with Gilgamesh's class card would probably be more than capable of killing me.

...

She wasn't afraid of me, she was hopeful that I was alive.



Note to self be more careful when fighting servants.



Stop being an arrogant jackass.

Hmm…

Ring monitor Miyu and when she meets with Illya or Rin notify me.

"Command confirmed, alert individual Miyu has met with individual Illya."

What where?

"Location is the school the corpsman was present at before."


I get a closer look at it through the ring, oh they're attending school. I suppose that makes sense, ignore meetups at that location and monitor for build ups of magical energy.

"Command confirmed."


Now perhaps we should take a better look at the living quarters for Rin and Luvia, especially considering that Shirou appears to be doing nothing interesting.
R-Remember what you did.
I feel vomit build up in the back of my throat, no not now shut up.
W-we know why you've been avoiding sleeping.
I slam my left arm against a lamppost.

R-ring restore mental state to normal parameters.
Y-you will have to face me eventually.
"Command confirmed."

I snap back to focus, right ring where is Luvia calling home?

"Location confirmed."

Huh isn't that right next to the Emiya residence? Perhaps I should request an audience, I mean I've at least dressed the part.



Ring do we have a pen an paper?

"Negative."

...

Right then find and rob some human traffickers or buy supplies normally?



Ring locate human traffickers in… let's say Libya

"Command confirmed."

Right then FTL us out there.

"Command confirmed."

The scenery flickers and becomes sandy as I walk out from behind a building to see five big guys with AK's standing around a compound.


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Kiritsugu walks toward his meeting point checking the map again, something feels wrong.

"Kiritsugu, don't be so nervous."

Kiritsugu turns to his wife who looks at him with hopeful eyes.

"The man in there Abd al Rahman al-Milad is supposed to have another lead on a member of the Einzbern family."

"Yes my love, once we have found all of the Einzberns we can live with Illya and Shirou as a happy family."

"Something feels wrong about this place."

A flash of yellow catches Kiritsugu's attention, he furrowed his eyebrows at this. Then in another flash the shooting starts, instinctively Kiritsugu drags Irisviel behind cover.

DAKKA-DAKKA-DAKKA-DAKKA-DAKKA-DAKKA.

He peeks his head around the corner, seeing a Caucasian man gunning down Abd al Rahman al-Milad's guards while ignoring several shots to the head and chest. It appears that he wouldn't be able to gain a lead on the Einzbern family today.

"Irisviel we need to leave now."

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D-don't.
I take on of my own AK's out of subspace and flare up some construct armour. I can't hear anything but a thumping in my ears.

All five of the guards turn to look at me raising their own firearms as the light fades.

DAKKA-DAKKA-DAKKA-DAKKA.
S-stop.
Too slow.

"Evening gentlemen!"

Two of the guard standing next to each other fall before they can get a shot of however their three friends are luckier.

DAKKA-DAKKA-DAKKA-DAKKA-DAKKA.
P-please don't do this.
Ring restore mental state.

I walk up to the door of the first building.

"Command confirmed."

The door shatters inward as two more guards fire their weapons at me.

DAKKA-DAKKA-DAKKA.

The bullets bounce off the construct armour.

I walk up to the first guard press the AK close to him and pull the trigger.

DAKKA.

I point the firearm at the other guard and pull the trigger.

DAKKA.
Y-you need to stop this.
"W-what do you want?"

Huh, he's actually holding himself together pretty well.
"Do you have a pen and paper?"
P-please.

I walk up to his desk.

Ring restore mental parameters.

"W-what?"

"Command confirmed."


I take the papers off his desk and look at them as a weight is lifted off my shoulders.

That's a long list of names.

"Pen, paper. Do you have them?-"

He starts panicking and searching through his desk eventually retrieves a pen and notepad.

"-Thank you."

Piss the notepad is lined, I wanted blank paper.

DAKKA-DAKKA.

He slumps at his desk aannndd now it has blood on it. I walk back outside and into one of the other locked buildings.

Bollocks, can we produce some paper?

I walk outside towards the cargo containers.

"Confirmed provided corpsman produces adequate fear."

I place on hand on each side of the main door.

CRUNCH.

I use the ring to enhance my strength and crush the door, hearing shrieks from metal and people inside.

I dump the metal mess to the side.

"Come on get out.-"

A dozen or so people looking more than a little worse for wear look up at me nervously.

"-well I've killed all the guards so you're free to go, I even left the money behind."

"W-why?"

I cock my head to the side.

"Do you really care?"
S-so you do remember how to be good?
Ring FTL us back to Japan.

Ok then, Ring scan, look for someone that no one will miss.

"Command confirmed."

My apologies homeless person D-682, you're gonna have a bad time.

Ring FTL

"Command confirmed."

The scenery flickers as dishevelled looking man sitting in front of me peers up at me, I drop a stack of one hundred, thousand yen bills at his feet and his eyes bulge.

"Thank you so much, kind sir."

"Oh don't thank me it's compensation."

He looks confused

"Compensation? for what?"

"For this." I see his fears with the ring, let's do that then...

Then the screams start.
 
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