Fate/Broken: Kaleid Liner Prisma of Fear

Maybe its the [/COLOR]?

Also isn't medea's reaction a bit extreme? I mean she just got summoned back into the world and hasn't really injured anyone.

Does MC have a decent amount of mana? Can Medea make a workshop? Considering archer!Illya doesn't need a master its a decent possibility that Medea won't need a master in this world and can provide her own mana with her workshop.
That said the MC looks like they would enjoy hanging out with medea anyway.

I was going off her wiki backstory where she was basically mind controlled for most of her life into betraying her family and stuff (didn't look like a fun time), so it's more a realisation that everything that has ever gone wrong for her isn't the gods fault it's basically hers. (not at all my actual opinion but the SI's knowledge of nasuverse lore isn't good enough to know what's happening).

EDIT: also it's strange because the [/COLOR] was in the right place it was just made invisitext aswell, maybe I used the wrong bracket or misspelt COLOR as colour or something

EDIT EDIT: in answer to your mana question, allow me to ask a question. How did saber use her noble phantasm so many times?
 
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I was going off her wiki backstory where she was basically mind controlled for most of her life into betraying her family and stuff (didn't look like a fun time), so it's more a realisation that everything that has ever gone wrong for her isn't the gods fault it's basically hers. (not at all my actual opinion but the SI's knowledge of nasuverse lore isn't good enough to know what's happening).

EDIT: also it's strange because the [/COLOR] was in the right place it was just made invisitext aswell, maybe I used the wrong bracket or misspelt COLOR as colour or something
Is it really her fault though? he was just saying in this particular circumstance the mindcontrol was able to be overpowered through willpower. Not that all mind control can be. I mean I guess she might hold some guilt for thinking that she should of tried (though with mind control maybe she couldn't try). But it should be too bad, she should be smart enough that magic with the same end effect can work in wildly different ways.

As for the Color thing.. I don't really know either but alls well that ends well.
 
Is it really her fault though? he was just saying in this particular circumstance the mindcontrol was able to be overpowered through willpower. Not that all mind control can be. I mean I guess she might hold some guilt for thinking that she should of tried (though with mind control maybe she couldn't try). But it shouldn't be too bad, she should be smart enough that magic with the same end effect can work in wildly different ways.

I mean sure, but it was a lot of bad stuff that she could've prevented, it's kinda like when you blame someone else for everything going wrong with your life but it turns out you could've fixed it all along times a million.
 
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Organization Pt 1
Organization Pt 1:"





"What do you mean you don't have a place to live??!" an indignant Caster appears less than pleased at that revelation.

I shrug. "Well, I haven't needed to sleep since arriving so I didn't organise one." or stop for the matter, that can't be healthy.

"I suppose the bright side is that I will be able to pick a location with good ley lines."

I nod absentmindedly. "Well, I did have an idea…" There's no fucking way it's still for sale, I land next to the home that my mind still refers to as the Emiya residence. Ring is this for sale?

"Confirmed."

Ok, that's cool, who do I need to pay? "Medea what do you think about the ley-lines here."

She pauses for a minute

"With some minor adjustments, it should be suitable. Although There are better places in the city."

Excellent, I mean I'm pretty sure the ley-lines were supposed to link up somewhere around here? I know it's not a major ley-line nexus but it'll do, I'm not buying Ryuudou temple. I just hope there's nothing around here messing with the ley-lines.

"Yeah well, unfortunately, those aren't as accessible-" or for sale, probably. "-if you say it's adequate it will have to do." Now Ring who do I talk to about buying this place?

"Current owner located."
right now cash, yen, gold dollars? I don't suppose it'll matter to them.

"Pardon me for a moment." Ring, FTL to one of those gold for cash place or something, one that's open, please. The scenery flickers and I see a small store in the sunlight.

Ring, where am I?

"Earth, Equator, United States, Hawaii-." Wait, wait. Why am I in Hawaii?

"You are at the location of the nearest open 'gold for cash' store."
Waa- huh? I suppose it is pretty early in the morning. I sigh well looks like not much of my payments will be in local currency.

I walk into the store.

"Good morning I'd like to do some business!"

A slightly obese man appears to take notice of me. "Ah, just a moment."

He comes out from the back room in a Hawaiian shirt. Oh harr, harr.

"What can I do you for?" He asks apparently excited by my suit.

I take a case of gold coins out of subspace below the counter and bring them up.

"I seem to have a allot of gold and would like to convert it into cash, would you be able to help?"

He smiles broadly. "Now I just might." he then proceeds to collect one of the coins and scratches it.

"Umm..." while I'm not bothered by damaging the coins I'd prefer it if he didn't.

"Don't worry about it." He remarks as he pours some liquid onto the coin.

Nothing happens, he drops it in a jar of water next to him and it sinks to the bottom.

"Where did you get this?"

I cock my head. "Why do you ask?"

"Because there are no markings on this gold," he replies.

"Is that unusual? My grandfather had them minted like that to save space I suppose." C'mon bullshitting abilities don't fail me now.

"Y'know what I'm not gonna ask," he replies as he hands over the relevant cash.

"Ah I might have more gold like this should I bring it in?" I inquire.

"How much?"

"A fairly large amount…"

"Mate I've only so much cash here, maybe a bank transfer but even then I'm not a millionaire."

No, I suppose you're not.

"Perhaps some of the people you work with are?"

"I don't think so man and I don't particularly want to give you all my money. And that isn't even mentioning all the red flags you've put up."

"No, no that's fair."

"It's just people don't usually come here that amounts that large."

I take another one of the briefcases out.

"Do you think you have enough for this?"

"Uhh yeah probably, why are you getting rid of all this gold now?"

"I need some quick cash."

He eyes me up suspiciously as he hands over the rest of the money.

"Whatever dude." I sigh again, well I guess there's nothing for it.

So Ring locate the owner of the property, please.

"Command confirmed." Ah ok, FTL nearby him.

The scenery flickers and I'm outside a house.

Right so how does one go about buying a house? Ring his phone number please and pull up the necessary paper.

"Command confirmed."


Right so the letter of intent, money for a deposit, this would be much easier in a bidding war. How much cash do I have left? I mean I have literal tons of gold so money shouldn't be a problem but I need to know how much I have on hand? I'm not going to need any types of loans so that's not to be a problem. No bank account might raise questions… Eh, this guy is supposed to be with the Yakuza right? I don't think he will care, if he does I'll just throw more money at him.

So, Ring, find me his phone number?

"Command confirmed."


Right let's call him at, I check the time, 3 am in the morning… I bet he will be happy.



If he doesn't answer I'll just knock on his door. The phone begins to ring, once, twice and a pick-up. I gruff voice answers.

"Who is this?" fair question I suppose.

"Ah, yes good morning I was interested in purchasing a property that you have for sale and wished to hand in my 'letter of intent' to the owner. That is what I'm supposed to do right?" that's what the guide said anyway.

"Not at 3 am, now who the hell are you?" bollocks he noticed my dodge.

"An interested buyer with a lot of cash and other assets on hand, is anything else important?"
 
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Really, 3am... That is suspicious as fuck man.
If anyone came at that hour for me with that much money in order to buy something which required paperwork takes several days at the very least I think I was getting set-up for either a con or an extorsion and I would call the police before even bothering to take the call.
 
Hmm, I doubt that the Yakuza are very keen on getting phone calls at 3am, even though they are organized crime. Waiting a few hours until normal business hours out at least show some respect, which is very important when dealing with such people.

All aboard the bad decision train!
 
Organization Pt2:
Organisation Pt 2:



I raise my hand and knock three times on the door.

"Excuse me, I'd like to speak to you about buying a house."

Silence radiates from the building, as I sigh inwardly. Ok then, loud it is but first. Ring this is the right place?

"Confirmed."

Alright, I raise my hand palm facing towards the door handle and launch a bolt of energy.

"The price in negotiable, not the purchase."

P-tink.

A neat hole is blown in the lock as the door creaks open.

"Right now I tired to be civil about this, but I can be uncivilized if you'd like!"

"who the fu-" "we have a break-in"

I let out a sigh, right looks like we're doing this by force.

The first goon comes round the corner with a bat in a long swing to catch me in the head, I let it impact the side of my head as I hear the wood crack and bend.

"The fu-" "I really did try to be polite."
d-don't.
I raise my palm again and blow a hole in his chest that I could fit a fist through, his body slumps to the ground as another thug this time with a handgun enters the fray. Seeing his friend's corpse appears to give him pause as he eyes me up.

"H-how the fuck?"

Hmm... he didn't shoot me, I guess I let him live. I walk towards him grabbing his gun, it goes off as he tries to shoot me but the bullets stop at my environmental shield. I sidestep around him, pulling his hand in an unnatural position around his body.

CRACK.

"AIEEE."

The second goon hits the ground as I enter the next room. The shooting appears to have woken up the rest of them.

Ah piss should've put up soundproof walls or something, are people gonna call the cops on these people? Possibly. Ring cancel any police calls and put soundproofing constructs or something in the walls and windows.

"Command confirmed."

A wave of yellow pulses throughout the building.

"The fuck was that?"

Right then Ring you mind showing me where they are?

"Command confirmed."

Yellow figures appear in my vision showing me where they are.

Right then, through the wall. There's a ripping sound as I generate a construct gauntlet and tear the wall apart.

"What the hell?!"

I rush forward and cover the goons mouth with one hand.

"Shh, it'll all be over soon."

CRUNCH.

"MmmmMPPPPHHH MMMMMMPPPPHHHH!!"

His jaw bone snaps into three pieces in my hand, as a grin forms on my face.
E-enough.
I forgot how much fun fighting people is.
(invisitext) S-stop.

"Hush now friend, can't have your friends hearing." Ring restore mental parameters, I'm starting to feel uneasy.
Y-you will sleep soon.
I slam my forehead into his nose as his body goes limp. Now he should be unconscious, probably, Ring check? Oh, he's not getting up tomorrow.

"Command confirmed."


"He's over here!"

Two gunshot bounce off the environmental shield as the sound reaches my ears, spoil my fun why don't you?

"W-what?"

Now, where's the big bad boss man?

"Bullets don't work anymore boss!"

"S-stay back!"

He frantically gestures his gun at me.

"Stay the fuck back!"

I cocked my head to the side.

"Or you'll what? Shoot me ineffectually again?"

I walk forwards as more gunshots go off.

"Enough!"

An older man walks forward.

"Ah, I suppose you're who I have to talk to?"

"Who do you think you are?"

Ohh my he seems displeased.

"A party interested in purchasing a property."

His frown deepens.

"You broke into my house and beat up my guards, and expect me to sell you a property?!"

I nod.

"
Yes, basically, I wouldn't mind paying slightly higher than the market rate."

He points at me with his left arm.

"Kill this bastard."

Several of the mooks open fire bullets slamming into me then stopping, after about a minute the man in charge raises his hand and the foring stops.

"W-what the hell is he?"

The man in charge lowers his hand.

"Do you have any idea who I am?"

I shrug.

"Some Yazuka boss given all the guns, the rest isn't important."

His brow twitches.

"You have a lot of nerve showing up here and causing this mess."

I gesture with both hands open at him.

"You literally just saw bullets bounce off me and I doubt you have more exotic weapons on hand."

He raises an eyebrow.

"Exotic?"

I generate a lasgun construct and blow a hole in the wall behind him.

"Powerful, capable of hurting me, mystical take your pick."

To his credit, he raises his head to look me in the eye.

"You better be ready to sleep with one eye open after this."

I roll my eyes.

"Anything goes when you're on a power trip and can afford to go crazy on low level gang bosses."

He pulls his hand back and punches me in the face, not that it phases me after the hits I've taken since arriving.

I raise a finger.

"Wait, no I've gone about this wrong."

He lowers his hand and takes a step back mastering his features.

"Damn right you have, when I find out who you ar-"

I wave him off.

"No no not about that I promised myself I wouldn't go on a power trip, it might draw unfortunate attention."

He spits at me.

"You've already got unfortunate attention."

I wave him off again.

"No, no you're not that powerful."

He steps back towards me.

"You'll see just how powerful we are."

I raise my fist and send a pulse of yellow light to knock over all of his enforcers.

"No I don't expect I will, in fact I am willing to offer compensation for damages if you ask.-"

I take a step forward and loom over the man clearly in charge.

"-during negotiations, now then are we willing to talk?-"

I pick him up with both hands around his collar, with a manic grin on my face.

"-or am I going to have to play dirty?"
 
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Ok... He is in a power high... The Magus Association are going to be hunting you down once they start noticing the signs of your rampage.
 
Organization Pt 3:
Organization Pt 3:



"THREE HOURS!" Ok, she's a bit mad.

"Now, calm down a bit.-"

I go to raise both my hands in mock surrender, but she cuts me off. Both verbally and with a wave of her hand.

"You left me outside this place for Three Hours!"

Well, at least Caster's not looking to letting herself die again.

"Look the negotiations to purchase the property took a little longer than I expected.-"

I sigh, unfortunately not all problems can be solved with throwing more money at them.

"-Well I went to talk to the not-so-nice man who owned this building, but he wasn't interested in talking at four in the morning."

"So what you waited?!" she finishes incensed.

"No, I broke into his house and told him I wasn't taking no for an answer." I reply flatly, he actually made for some decent company once he realised he couldn't kill me with anything or anyone on hand.

She raises an eyebrow and cocks her head, then looks into my eyes intently before pulling back.

"You're not lying-"

I shake my head.

"Of cour-"

She swipes a hand to cut me off, holding it up afterwards.

"-why, you said you went to negotiate a legitimate purchase of this property, but instead on informing me of your intention or giving an explanation of where you were going you told me to WAIT OUTSIDE A BUILDING BEFORE DAWN!"

Probably should've brought her along, I have to remember that these aren't just characters who sit still and do nothing while I'm busy. Hmm, she also seems to have a hang-up about being abandoned, well no points for guessing where that comes from.

"Ahem, right, I apologize I should have brought you along."

She nods.

"Yes you should have, or at least told me what you were doing and given some idea when you'd be back. You were the one that told me to hang around you!"

Well, it's not like there where better options, I mean both Luvia and Rin would probably try and figure out how she works and eventually turn her back into a card. Or dissect her at the mage association... or clock tower? What was the difference between them anyway, I get the clock tower was a school, but then in Apocrypha…

Something snaps in front of me as my attention is brought back to the real world.

"Hey, what are you planning now?"

I refocus on the world in front of me.

"I wasn't, I was trying to figure something out."

"And what was that?"

I shrug.

"A semantic issue."

But more importantly…

"Regarding what? Be more clear when you explain things."

I nod.

"Right yes, I was wondering about the relationship between two organisations, at least one of which will probably hunt both of us down separately and probably try to kill us."

She closes her eyes and pinches the bridge of her nose.

"That's not a semantic issue, that is a very real, practical, physical issue."

I shake my head.

"No, it was with regards to what the name of the organization is."

She opens her eyes in exasperation.

"Why is it a semantic issue?"

"Because I'm not sure if it's just the magus association or both the clock tower and the magus association or if they're one and the same thing."

She raises a figure at me.

"Is that important?"

I think for a moment.

"No, I suppose it isn't relevant right now."

"So-"

She regains her full composure, like a teacher lecturing a particularly slow student.

"- why were you worrying about the name of the group of people coming to kill both of us?"

I think for a moment to try and figure out a good excuse for this train of thought, ah right that's why.

"Because it changes whether or not we can trust Luvia and Rin."

She pauses.

"That sounds relevant considering I assume you still wish to work with them?"

Hmm… I mean who's left? It'll be Berserker and Assassin, right?

"I'm not sure what I'm doing actually, just kinda collecting the cards 'cause they're there."

Caster brings her hand to her face and looks thoughtful.

"The mages sent to collect the cards? Where do they come from anyway?"

"Well Rin is Japanese by birth and Luvia is from England,-"

Medea has an intake of breath as if about to admonish me again however I raise a hand to stop her.

"- but I'm pretty sure they work for the clocktower."

She gives me a look as if asking me to continue.

"And the cards?"

Right, actually I don't know where they come from, I mean I have an idea but… ah screw it it's a 'best guess'.

"I'm pretty sure they come from another world."

Caster appears to take that a face value as her face doesn't change.

"All right, do you know how they're made? What they do? or why one came of that girl, what was her name, Illya? And the Saber girl?"

Right, this is going to get awkward quickly, I count the answers off on my fingers.

"Uhh, in order no, yes they let mages use the powers of a heroic spirit and because Illya used the card and Saber was a physical manifestation of the servant the card represents.-"

She regards me levelly for a moment, wait a minute she knew all that already didn't she.

"- and you're testing me…"

A sly smile spreads across her face as she turns to the door and gestures at it.

"Would you mind?"

I step forward, unlock and open the door, and stop in the doorway and turn my head like a scarecrow from a horror flick.

"I do have one more question though?"

She looks up at me.

"Speak."

"Why did you follow me? You could've gone off on your own, or with either of the mages association girls, hell even Illya could probably have arranged something."

Eventually anyway.

"The girls seemed childish fighting among themselves and going off on my own only works until I run out of mana or get killed, besides what do you think I want?"

I pause for a second in contemplative thought.

"To go back in time to being the princess at home who knew nothing of the world?"

She closes her eyes and breathes out.

"You looked into my past then?"

What? Of course, I did, you didn't think I just managed to recognise you did you? I mean I did but…

"Kind of, I saw what you were afraid of anyway-"

I step inside taking my shoes off.

"- more importantly you want some semi-normal place to call home.-"

She remains silent for a beat as she enters the building.

"- now then, I'm going to get some necessary living supplies, clothes,-"

Because even I can't go everywhere in a suit, even if I do look damn good.

"- food, fridge, freezer, sleeping materials ex-cetra. You want to tag along?"
 
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Organization Pt: 4
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Organization Pt 4:


I finish polishing the new wood that I've laid alone the floorboards, in spite of it being a frankly pointless effort the boards were perfect before I put them in place and sit back to look back at my handy work.

One thing I didn't expect was that the house would be virtually unlivable, the clever bastard got one last laugh in on me for the amount I paid. But by the time I noticed we had already got all the things for people to live in. I mean, I thought it was just the dark that made it look a little run down but in the sunlight, I could finally see the extent of my misjudgement.

First, anything metal was rusted to the point where I was forced to have the ring fabricate new parts from the metals I had from the meteor, thank god none of it was tungsten or else I'd have been properly screwed.

Next half of everything wooden was moulded, rotten or both. That was solved with a bit of ring magic collecting wood of similar composition. refashioning it into what the ring calculates would be the approximate size and shape of whatever anything was supposed to be. As well as actual magic once Medea stopped yelling at me, I should probably plan things out more and frankly get an idea of what I want to do.

I mean I don't really know enough about type-moon products to predict the outcomes of me messing around too much, along with my concerning tendency to flick between absolute rationality and indulgent sadism.
M-more than you know.
Ring reset normal mental parameters.

I mean If I have too many ripples then the world, no was it Gaia? Might send a counter guardian after me or something, saying nothing of the dead apostle ancestors. If they came after me I'm pretty sure my options are 'hope I'm their type' and hold on for dear life and I certainly don't like those odds.

Medea enters the room with something of an annoyed smile on her face, the type a parent has before snapping.

"I'm sorry."

She doesn't respond for a moment before overcoming her anger, releasing it with a sigh.

"William is there likely to be any other 'unforeseen issues'"

She states the cheery inflexion at the end of sentence seeming like the thinnest of masks. I bite down my initial reason of 'if I knew they wouldn't be unforeseen' and attempt to think of any off the top of my head and hold my right hand just in front of me as if counting something off.

"Rin and Luvia might turn up at any moment after their bosses figure out who I am and try to kill or capture us, there's better than average odds that my mind is falling apart before my metaphorical mind's eye and Illyas father is a quite accomplished assassin who might take exception to our existence."

She closes her eyes for a moment while see probably contemplates my response.

"If your mind falls apart any contingencies you make will be pointless, what makes you think that's happening."

I inwardly let off a sigh of relief that I'm not getting berated again followed by apprehension at having to spill my guts. I suppose now's a good a time as any to sort that mess out. Honestly, I don't think that's reasonable, if she wanted to, she could probably pull those thoughts from my mind by force.

"Right, so not too long ago I killed my first man-"

She raises an eyebrow and I brush it off.

"-Oh, he probably deserved death, he was attempting to burn some 'innocents' in a cage-"

Well as innocent as anyone is I suppose, wait would she have a problem with that?

"-after which I collapsed and was promptly sick."

Her expression sours.

"I remember reading and hearing stories of young warriors feeling a similar way before and after a battle, although I never imagined such a strong reaction."

I nod, bouncing my left leg apprehensively on the ground. She'd have been around a fair few Greek heroes with Jason at least a few of them would probably have mentioned something like this, but I don't know if the stories would've mentioned it.

"Right, right except this was more of slaughtering them than any kind of great battle. But the important part in since then something has been nagging at the back of my mind."

She crosses her arms and thinks for a moment.

"What exactly is it?"

I scratch my head and think for a minute, ok it's ok this is unlikely to bleed into anyone else's view of me, stay calm.

"I think whatever it is it's trying to speak to me, before, earlier I could hear it clearly as a voice, but now it sounds… distant? Indistinct? Suppressed? I'm not sure."

"So that's what's causing you distress and causing us to be in these situations?"

I feel like saying 'almost certainly not I'm always this disorganized' is a good way to end up even further up on one of the most powerful mages 'alive' right now's shitlist.

I give out another sigh pull out a few chairs and gesture to the other one.

"If we're gonna talk we might as well do it properly.-"

I suppose If I can trust anyone it'll be the witch of betrayal right? I take a seat and gesture for her to join me.

"-this might take a while."

She takes a seat across from me.

"Well, now you have my attention."

A sly smile spreads across her face.

That's not a good sign, is it?
 
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A voice in the dark Pt: 1
So I was hoping after exams I could sit down and write a few updates. WeLp that didn't happen so GL me.





A voice in the dark Pt 1:

"Ahem, so eventually the voices stopped, or at least I couldn't hear them.-"

Medea appears to be paying attention, which I suppose is a good sign.

"- But every now and then I still get the disoriented feeling, like when you know you've messed up and are about get punished for it.-"

Her eyes go out of focus for a moment, as she appears to stare through me.

"-But you aren't sure about what the consequences will be."

Caster places her hand on her chin with downcast eyes looking thoughtful, then raises a hand to stop me.

"Hold still."

She draws a magic circle that is way beyond my comprehension, causing the world to explode in bright purple almost blinding me as I feel like I'm drowning. The colour becomes less intense allowing me to see the walls of the house, waves like thin tendrils radiate from me before dissipating into nothingness at the edges of my vision.
S-so you do listen?
"Wha-what is this, what are you doing?"
Y-you don't need to be a mage to figure that out
This is greatly concerning, I hope to high heaven she isn't about to explode me. Wait no that would be out of character think rationally, what course of action would she be taking here. Sh-
O-oh I felt that
"Allowing you to see the mana that passively moves through the air around us."
S-something pulls
Oh ok, that makes more sense, I watch the patterns of light and take note of where they're going. Yes, most of it is emanating from me but there also appears to be some coming through all of the walls. Most of the mana radiating from me appears to either diffuse however, a large chunk is building up behind my head. While some appear's to be entering Medea's body. Wait that should be happening, I'm not her master, we don't have a contract, how is she getting mana from me?
Y-you should be faster than that.
Somethings itching at the back of my mind as I gesture to the faint wave connecting us.

"How are you doing that? That shouldn't be happening."

Well, I'm pretty sure it shouldn't but then I'm no mage.

"You are literally bleeding mana into the surrounding environment, all I'm doing is picking up some of the excesses."

I'm what?

"Shouldn't I be very dead if I was bleeding mana at that rate?"

Cause mana is supposed to be your soul, right? She shakes her head.

"You are producing it at a higher rate than you're losing it, which given the rate you're losing it at shouldn't be possible without at least some magic artefacts."
I-it's not the ring...
I rase the ring in her direction, her eyes appear to glow for a moment then she shakes her head.

"That's not adding any mana to you, is it not simply for aesthetic purposes?"

I feel as if a weight is lifted off my chest as shake my head.

"No, it's basically the source of my powers."

Her brows furrow as pressure removes itself from my body.

"What do you mean?"

How to explain this without getting into parallax, hmm...

"Everything I did in the fight I could do because of this."

I gesture to the ring as she blinks uncomprehendingly, before pointing at the ring.

"That is a normal ring constructed out of-"

Her eyes narrow.

"-something I don't recognize."

What? I take the ring off and attempt to generate a construct… after a few moments, nothing happens. I try again, this time with the ring on and a chair construct appears to my right.

"No definitely the ring."

She holds her hand out.

"Give it here."

Hmm… giving Medea a power ring fueled by fear… that seems like a good idea... but if she wanted to she could probably take it by force, or when I'm sleeping at least this way I know what she's doing with it. I take the right off and hold it up.

"Promise me you'll give it back."

"Of course I will."

She snatches the ring from my grasp.

"Ah."

Well shit. Nothing I can do about it now. Medea looks over the ring before placing it on her finger

"How does it work?"

AAAHHHHHH.

"Promise me you'll give it back."

She tears her eyes away from the ring and matches my gaze for a moment, before sighing.

"Fine, you have my word, although I find your lack of trust offensive."

She holds her arm out and focuses as the ring begins to glow, lines of dark purple appear to be weaving their way into the sigil.

"WAITNOSTOP WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!"

She appears to snap out of her concentration, gazing at me with a lost expression.

"Huh? I'm trying to use the ring?"

I run both my hand through my hair as I let out an exasperated sigh.

"You should have figured out its not magic."

Her eyebrows rise.

"Then how does it work?"

I think for a moment.

"What do you think people are afraid of? Picture that in front of you and it will be created."

She refocuses her efforts and some semblance of flames appear around us before she cut it off.

"It's not magic, but how does it function?"

She brings the ring to her eye and gazes at it as if it might speak and tell her of its nature.

"Give it back Medea."

She appears to consider my request before shrugging and returning the ring.

"Well, while I suppose while it would make for an interesting study, I did say I'd return it."

I give a sigh of relief.

"Thank you, later I might even let you try and figure it out."

She eyes me suspiciously as I feel the power of the ring return to my control.

"I believe that would be wise, lack of understanding of spells often leads to danger. I imagine that ring is not as different from magic as you think."

I shake my head grasping my ring hand before looking her in the eye.

"Oh no, I know how it works-" Vaguely at least. "-I just said I might let you figure it out."

Medea looks at me very disappointedly and a little annoyed, with a light air of confusion.

"Why are you grinning like that?"

I touch my face and find I'm grinning like a maniac, I steel myself and stop it.

"Sorry I don't know what that was about."

"Perhaps the ring is what's causing your issue?" she replies contemplatively.

I'm pretty sure yellow rings have little to no mental influence on them? But then again I have been using it in place of therapy and sleep so that probably wasn't going to end well.

"Either way, I suppose we should get some sleep, I hear it's a healthy part of life. Or you could do whatever you want I'm not your boss, just don't wreck the house."

Because honestly, lack of sleep is probably the thing that's most likely to be causing this. Medea, on the other hand, looks at me as if I'm insane.

"But it's just after midday?"

I nod she does have a point...

"However, we have been awake since midnight."
 
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you know from a certain point of view she's correct about the rain being not too different from Magic I mean I think we can all agree that the glow which is where the emotional spectrum is drawn from is sort of an elemental kind of magic thing similar to the green and the red. you know they're pretty much at the point where where technology and Magic are indistinguishable
 
you know from a certain point of view she's correct about the rain being not too different from Magic I mean I think we can all agree that the glow which is where the emotional spectrum is drawn from is sort of an elemental kind of magic thing similar to the green and the red. you know they're pretty much at the point where where technology and Magic are indistinguishable
That and messing around with the ring while not knowing what you're doing is a good way to get possessed by parallax
 
Of course the Ring has an emotional influence on its wearer! Its Generator is literally eating fear the Bearer cause AND the fear the Bearer is feeling too! Using it for too long can cause paranoia to develop, just look at Sinistro!
 
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A voice in the dark Pt: 2
Right, so this is coming in early since I'm gonna be hanging out with friends for a bit in a while, not sure what day or time I'll be back so... fun times. It's going up so if anything goes horribly wrong I can fix it.



A voice in the dark Pt 2



I knock on the door and wait for a moment before the door opens.

"Good evening, are you here for the party?"

I nod taking a second to remember her name.

"It's good to see you again Sally."

She smiles remembering me as one of her daughter's friends from the spa day at the end of high school. I enter Ella's house a beat after the path is cleared for me. Hannah notices me as I walk in and gives me a polite wave which I return with a nod, my hands full with a bottle of Baileys and one of Red Wine.

I never did know her very well, I suppose I never got invited to these parties often enough to have cause to get to know her.

"Where should I place the present and drinks?"

Sally nods her head absentmindedly as she gestures to the counter.

"The drinks can go there Ella is just in the main room over there I'm sure she won't mind getting her present now."

I nod in thanks before placing the wine down and heading into the next room.

A small group of five of my friends are sitting on the floor surrounded by various bottles of wine, beer and spirits. Unfortunately, it appears someone has already gifted Ella a bigger bottle of what I got her, oh well, they know I'm poorer than the rest of them.
T-they hate you for it, it shows how little you value her as a friend, you couldn't even spend an extra $50 on a larger bottle.
I see the smile on their mouths but their eyes look fake. I shake the thoughts in my head away, no, it's not right you need to trust people.
T-they're going to demand you leave and you'll be alone again.
"Hey, guys Williams here."

There's a chorus of greetings from the of my friends sitting down, Rebecca, Alex, Zach, Leah and Ella.
N-no matter what pitiful apology you give.
"Happy birthday Ella. I have your gift here.-"

I hand her the pitifully small bottle of Baileys, 500ml compared to the litre bottle on the floor now. I smile uncertainly, It's returned by everyone else, for now…
N-no matter the jokes you tell.
I can't control my mouth, as the words spill out.

"-Unfortunately I appear to have been outdone..."
N-no matter the gifts you give.
Was that a social for par? have I fucked up? No, these are kinder people than I'm used to, they'll let a smaller slip of the tongue slide.

"Oh, don't worry this was for shots and cocktails later."
N-o matter what they tell you.
Rebecca assures me, that brings me relief, it wasn't a gift and my offering is acceptable. Compared with the first party I attended like this the gifts appear to be of higher quality, mother was correct with her suggestion to go with the larger, equally priced bottle rather than stick to the smaller Drambuie container I originally planned. At Abrahams, I merely had to compete with a half scratched porno and a two-minute noodle packet in terms of presents.
T-they resent you.
I shake the thoughts clouding my mind away from my head again.

"So what are we up to?"

They're waving for me to join the rest of them.

"We're just starting another round of scum."

I sit down and get dealt a hand, as I pick it up I lose track of time. An hour? Thirty minutes? I'm not sure how much time passes. I look down at my drink, a glass of red wine. What is it my 5th? 6th? I don't remember, which probably isn't a good sign
D-"do you remember this?"
I turn to the direction of the voice.

"Pardon?"

No ones there I turn back to the living room now filled with many dancing bodies, it appears Emma has arrived while I wasn't looking I should go say hi, she was always kind to everyone even when they hated her.

Wait she's in Germany, isn't she? No one ever tells me anything. (invisitext: B-because they hate you) I close my eyes and shake my head when I look back up I see Lisa white? Wasn't she in my biology class? Where did Sophie go? No, she's in Germany that's right.
"͘҉́S̴o̕ ̡͢y̕ơ͢ú'̢͟v̶҉e̷͞ ̶̢n͞͝o̷͡t͏í͠c͢͠ę̴d̷͜͟ ̛͞t̸͡hę́ņ̴?̷҉"
I turn around again.

"Noticed what?"

No one is there. I look back to my drink, a bailey's cocktail, nothing fancy. How many have I had now? I usually keep track, but today my counting is off. I suppose that's being drunk then, although it doesn't feel like being drunk, somethings wrong.

"Are you alright William you look a bit out of it?"

I turn to see Ella.

My gut is telling me something is off, I count the people on the 'Dance floor' there's five Zach, Rebecca, Alex, James, John and Alicia.

Wait, that's not right.

"I'm fine, well maybe a bit drunk, but ok."

Something is definitely off, I look back at my bottle and roll my crack my neck. While eyeing up my 'friends' I'm bigger than all of them in terms of height however John is likely more heavily set than me and Twin are both larger and stronger than me. They are likely the two largest threats to my safety if things start going poorly, Zach is a pacifist and likely couldn't hurt me if he tried given the relative height and weight difference, although that could be deceiving, many marital artists appear physically weak. I don't think any of them did martial arts apart from that little week-long school program and-

"Oh well, you cut yourself off if you think you're hitting your limit."

Wait why am I analyzing my friends as threats?
 
A voice in the dark Pt: 3
A voice in the dark: Pt 3


I sniff, something feels wrong in the air, no not just the air. The atmosphere feels off, something's building in my chest it feels disconcertingly like panic. I remember how this party felt and small things are differ-

"You can't even trust them, after all, they did for you."

That gets my attention, either I've really drunk too much, unlikely, someone's drugged me, also unlikely, or something strange is happening. My breathing increases in pace and my chest feels like it's about to burst, my eyes are now wide scanning the house, deck and nearby woods for movement. I Haven't often been invited to parties and I don't think I've attended more than one here, so what is going on? I round on the voice, hoping that there's less shaking in my voice than I feel.

"Identify yourself."

The words come out cleanly but there is a wobble at the end.

"It doesn't matter."

The voice comes from behind me always from behind my head, I turn around again.

"Identify yourself."

OK, ok think what to do in the case of a mysterious voice harassing me. Right, first I can't trust any of my senses, best case scenario I'm having auditory hallucinations, worst-case scenario ghosts, devils, gods etc are real and one of them has taken an interest in tormenting me. Probably the auditory hallucinations, although I never heard of alcohol causing that...

"You shouldn't raise your guard."

I spin around again to face the direction of the voice and I see everyone looking at me.

"Who are you talking to William?"

"Is someone else out there?"

Ella and Rebecca call out, it's unlikely it's a prank then if it was they'd be in on it. I can't trust what I'm hearing, quite possibly what I'm seeing is also compromised now, touch is touch comprised? How can I test that? I don't have anything to verify it against. I take a step back as I see everyone looking at me concerned.

"They don't care about you."

I let out a small chuckle.

"I'm fine just need a little air that's all."

The longer I can keep this facade up the safer I'll be, I don't think anyone here is a physical threat to me, wait no Aiden and Martin the twins, they could take me down in this drunk state. But whatever's messing with my mind is definitely a threat to them and myself and a far more pressing one at that.

"They're afraid of you."

Of course, they're afraid of me, I'm a 6'4 drunk man who's acting strange. Well closer to 6'3 and a half, but who's counting. Wait who am I talking to?

"I'm just going to sit outside for a bit and enjoy the cool wind."

I reflect on what has changed since being accepted into this group of people and let out a sigh. They aren't going to attack me unless I attack them first. So I'm being paranoid I need to slow down and destress, I take a seat outside and sip on my wine.

"Fear makes people do out of character things." That's a voice I recognise, fortunately, I'm on to whatever is going on down.

I don't turn around this time, I need t-take control of the situation.

"I invite you to drop the pretext of this being real."

There's a moments pause as whatever this is, it collects itself. I feel my heart hammering against my chest as I attempt to avoid holding my eyes wide in, in...
D-dread...
"Perhaps the pretext of this being real is to protect you?"

I scoff, while I haven't encountered much hardship in life from what my friends complain about I've had a great deal more than them.

"And what precisely would it be protecting me from?"

The answer is instant this time.

"Yourself."

While I do have regrets, the primary victim of my actions has been me.

"And what exactly am I supposed to have done no-."

As I stand and turn towards the voice the world changes, the sudden increase in light hurts my eyes. I see a battlefield littered with corpses, or at least what's left of them, some heavy ordinance was drop here. I kneel as look at the impact creators.

"Looks like a blunt object hit them at speed."

It appears my morbid fascination on liveleak has helped, I glance up and see a doubled over figure in a suit, glowing yellow in the distance.

"GUukGHU-"

His stomachs contents splash on the ground in front of him, he looks familiar.

"Are you alright?"

That face where do I know that face from?

"He knows."

What? No, wait that's me. But it can't be he's much bulkier than I am, and my suit never looked that good.

"What could you possibly have told him to reduce him to that, I assume he's another version of me and not a doppelganger? Are you protecting me from whatever happened to him?"

"No."

Then what?

"Care to elaborate?"

If I can get, Whatever this is to stop beating around the bush for once.

"He is you."

"Fuck off"

"He remembers what you did."

I feel a memory return, and remember what happened. Intellectually I have no issue with the events that transpired, I mean sure the homeless guy probably didn't deserve it and after wiping out a compound of human traffickers I probably had enough 'fear' to do it wholesale.

"What are you?"

My question is met by silence, ok I need to reorganise my thoughts. First, when am I the last solid date I remember was the 15th February 2019. Or thereabouts, no point worrying about that now, no I remember I killed them, irrelevant I had a reason and they deserved it.

They deserved it

"Did they?"

They deserved it

A pleading voice digs its way into my mind.

"I can't believe you."

I turn around and see tears in most of their eyes while the twin's gaze holds me in contempt. I Steel myself, alright arguments. Most of the people I killed deserved it, they were terrible people who caused suffering to others in an unending measure, they represented moralities that I wholeheartedly condemn.

I see the face of the poor man I tortured

"Did he?"

I shrug, no he didn't but what's done is done and I can't fix it now.

"He was compensated."

The building in my chest rises again as I anticipate the reply.

"Does that matter?"

I see the tears from my friends, as my body's movements feel sluggish. Another familiar voice speaks.

"No, I'm not a good person I don't even pretend to try to be."

"I think you pretend not to be but underneath everything to really are."

"And what makes you think that?"

There's a pause as she thinks on that point for a moment.

"You're honourable, and you always offer to help people."

I remember as a grim smile spreads across my face.

"I was right."

Something tenses in me as my mind races through all the corpses, I imagine the crying families. The suffering, oh god what have I done and, and for what? convenience?

"It doesn't matter, they were evil and deserved it."

The man stands and turns towards me, his eyes pitch black as he takes a step forward as I turn to run.
 
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