Huh, this one really nailed Carol's POV. Her entire trigger stems from her trust issues from feeling "betrayed" by her kidnapper after developing Stockholm's, and so she defaults to seeing everybody as a potential foe. She is genuinely sympathetic and is willing to try her best, but her entire POV is dominated by a single traumatic experience, just like other parahumans. This was endearing, in a dysfunctional, broken way.

And it's nice to see people in-story acknowledging that Taylor and Amy's... Thing, has a high potential for crashing and burning. Despite that, I am kinda rooting for them, even knowing that what they have is not 100% healthy (or heck, even 50% healthy) for either of them.
 
I'm just happy that the senior New Wave relationship is more one of polyamory or swinging than adultery and betrayal. So many fics go with Neil being Vickies biodad as proof that Carol cheated when that is not necessarily so.
 
-Excessive periodage-

'till
Excessive priodage is a sort of speech thing. Like pauses but too long for a comma, and the train of thought occasionally loses track midway through

I'm just happy that the senior New Wave relationship is more one of polyamory or swinging than adultery and betrayal. So many fics go with Neil being Vickies biodad as proof that Carol cheated when that is not necessarily so.
Unfortunately in this case Carol did cheat. Lots of awkwardness there.
 
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Ellipsis is more of a trailing off pause, while the pauses denoted by the author's particular style of punctuation are more abrupt. It's not grammatically correct, but the same could be said of most dialogue, fictional or otherwise.
 
I'm just happy that the senior New Wave relationship is more one of polyamory or swinging than adultery and betrayal. So many fics go with Neil being Vickies biodad as proof that Carol cheated when that is not necessarily so.

It's more complicated than that. Carol, as seen in earlier chapters in this fic, certainly thinks she cheated and seduced.
 
It does get better! But, I understand.

I'm not sure if I should be proud or horrified though X_X

As someone who spent 2 days reading through the story (I am both satisfied and sleep deprived) I would say you should be proud… and horrified… followed by pride again.

It's interesting now how bittersweet the situation is though, in that Taylor is still this adorably sweet ADHD puppy, but we're more aware of the mask she's putting on for herself and others.

Loving this story
 
[Technically Canon] Predators 9.8.5
The yellow banner of shame haunts me. Gonna update soon (life's been abit of a mess since I'm moving out soon) so have this technically canon piece of Amy and Victoria realising Taylor was kidnapped by Armsy!


-.-.-

Victoria curled into the bed with Amy. Aside from last night - when was the last time they'd shared a bed? A sleepover or two before Amy turned actively anti-social? It didn't matter. Despite everything Taylor had changed about their dynamic, she'd ultimately brought them closer together, and for that she was -

Wait.

Her eyes shot open.

"A-Amy?"

"Mmmghh?"

"Where did we leave Taylor's human body?"

"Mgh. In the van wi- oh. Oh fuck." Amy lifted her head sharply, eyes still hooded and unfocused. "Is she not back yet?"

"I don't think so. We would have noticed her flirting."

Amy fell back down with a groan. "Fuuuuuuuuck."

"Should we tell Mom?"

Amy dragged her hand down her face and grumbled. "Yeah."

-.-.-
 
"Should we tell Mom?"

When in doubt: call mom.

It's such a small simple thing, but can I just say how much I appreciate that this cast of characters act their age? This is probably one of the very few fic's I've read where the teenagers feel like teenagers. From the logic to the damn fucking good dialogue.

The whole "let's go on a beastie patrol" arc was such a beautiful series of cascade-failure-bad-ideas, without being dumb out-of-character-bad-ideas. "Hey! The city is going to hell, let's go on patrol!" (Consequences? What consequences?) "Yeah! Let's use beasties!" (Consequences? What consequences?) "I'm the one reading the tinker notes! So turn that dial up and let's see what happens! (Consequences? What consequences?) "Hey, there's a van! Let's get in it! (Consequences?!)

Then all hell breaks loose and- ohh shit! CONSEQUENCES.

And it's so damn endearing that it wasn't the PRT, or some other third party, that ended up laying down the law and chewing the girls out, it was the Mom Squad. And it works so well because the girls really aren't all that scared of the PRT. But Mom? Oh yeah, she's scary as fuck!
 
The Scholar Knight - Aftermath
Aaaaand we're back! Kinda. As said earlier, life is a mess due to preparations for moving out. But we should be updating more often than we have been.
Special thanks to my lovely co-author and wife, @hellgodsrus, without whom I would never would have been able to take part in creating half my fics, and our girlfriend @SolarFlare for being awesome and also betaing! Also special thanks Prime Betas @Tamahori and @32nd_freeze and @Ganurath for being betas and feeding me validation and feedback between updates! And also new Prime Beta Lucky! Who is on Questionable Questing and writing most of the NSFW omakes~
Extra special thanks to @Metallix666 for the art in today's post! :D


The Scholar Knight/Musings 2: An Aftermath
-.-.-

so I did something kind of stupid last night, I guess. tonight? I'm not sure of the timeline here. Am trying to write this quietly so Amy and Taylor don't wake up

Vague inline doodle that might be of two people cuddled together in a bed

I fulfilled my oath of fealty though. Followed my captured liege.

Outline of events of last 24ish hours
  • Discussion with Taylor about stuff and my recent judgement issues
  • <almost forgot power testing thing with fam
  • Go to eden thing with all of NW
  • Protectorate show up for 'negotiations' is show of force
  • More eden thing including Amy rushing off for a quickie with Taylor and parents getting super drunk
  • Taylor, Amy, Crys and I make decision to 'borrow' beasties and go Nazi-huntin'
  • <beastie control is weird
  • Are attacking Lindsay's house (is Flare? Who other girl?) because something about Empire identities
  • <initially just Rune and goons then Victor, Stormtiger and Cricket show up. Taylor kills most of them.
  • Wafflemasturbator, KW, and E(scribbledout) showed up to clear up. Bearddictator tries to kidnap TBeastie, claims was accident
  • Attack on Eden stadium by Purity, more saddling up
  • Take out Purity and gang, Taylor kills more people
  • E pissed about stuff because E has to be E (power interference? Power compulsion? Is she multitrigger? Is way can ask or look that up without feeling like a creep?)
  • Head back towards Eden stadium with Mom in full Brandishmode
  • Realise Thumanbody (need better term) not here, has been taken by PRT
  • PANIC
  • Ride out w/ Lilith
  • Get Taylor back


Fuck it's so much looking at all of it. Most of it was only in about five hours of time. It feels like months. Need to break it all down piece by piece but is SO MUCH STUFFFFFF

Scribbled notes on sidelines: Look up proper code of chivalry, look up cost of swords, look up cost of practical armour (could talk to Dean could check at uni if ever get back there)

Vague drawing of spikier, heavier looking version of the Glory Girl tiara, scribbled over. Drawing of heavier crown-and-mask combination. Drawing of cartoon figure that might be Carol screaming something written illegibly




From top
  • Talk to taylor went well I think. Conveyed recent issues, resolve to do better, follow lead. Self assess more. Certainly followed her lead today, unsure how well that went given what a mess today was, but hey, no-one says I don't follow through with bad ideas.
  • Taylor's power is fucking weird is other main takeaway from today. Think is some kind of direct interference reducer/leveller of playing field? (which given TBeastie body is not a fair playing field lol) If forced to pick PR name for her might go Fair Play (costume built around cards/dice? Gambler motif? Possibly too edgy?), Leveller (think that was some kind of religious cult in Britain in 1600s though), Champion/Gladiator/??? (treading on E's toes here, powers are similar in some respects). Given Khanivore body/name imagine PRT threat assessment is going to focus on large amounts of conventional weaponry, meaning highly likely any eventual engagement between Taylor and them - or anyone tbh - is going to trend v. lethal very quickly, as seen tonight.
  • Eden thing as party might have been PR coup for Lilith if not for everything else today. Made PRT look like jerks and us almost look like jerks until we loosened up then NW just looked like idiots/gullible/Mastered.

Several crossed out lines below this, the only legible one being Are Uncle Neil and Aunt Sarah always this relentlessly horny and I just never fucking noticed
  • Amy wanting to fuck Taylor because she can turn off nullifying power worrying. Diary, I know Amy's kinks, she's not as good at hiding her browser history as she thinks she is. May need to struggle through safe BDSM sex talk with her and or Taylor.
  • THE DECISION TO HUNT NAZIS: i mean, it's never a bad decision but in hindsight the methodology could use work. Not sure can analyse right now will leave gap to fill in in morning.

Below, in slightly neater handwriting:
Problems with this idea were mainly the lack of supervision and fore-thought (where would Empire be, lack of knowledge of beastie tech, issues with it effectively being an unintentional false flag operation). Things arguably went to shit though entirely because of the identity leak which we didn't know about going into it. Might have been better to hold off in case of situations like that in future? Except that could cause a perpetual loop of waiting-for-things-to-happen and leaving everything and not doing anything at all. Which could, theoretically, be better, but is exceptionally unsatisfying and unlikely to happen with Taylor at the helm.

  • Beasties - where is Lilith getting resources???????????????

Question marks grow slowly bigger. Scribbled into corner beside them are theories:
  • Bankroll from Accord?
  • Mass murder?
  • FISH?
  • Contacts in meat packing?
  • Former Lustrum capes? (follow up story told by ?Lsomething? at party)
  • Plants?
  • Eden planned for a while? Mastermind?
  • Elite???
  • Coil???
  • Mayor??????????

Around edges of last, giant question mark that fills rest of page, doodle of more grown, chitin like armour combined with earlier crown-mask is drawn. Suggestions dot page around it: 'extendable sword part of organism - extend forcefield over?'; 'shield'; 'crossbow for knight theme'; 'prehensile whiptail'; 'talons - lean into harpy/monster motif?'; 'something like what Crys had but rather than fractal blade claws thicker layers of armour growing in response to something'

  • Beasties were interesting. Security variants were advanced, signs of being powered/semi-powered akin to higher end biotinker equipment - maintenance costs/inspo? - need to know more about biotinkers that isn't just screaming to really judge. Controls were tough. Still feel like I have tentacles, a bit. Or possibly am so tired my fingers just feel that noodly. Weird breathing without puffy blowhole thing atm. Overlap dangerous/permanent side effect? Reason why mental stuff part of tinker remit to enhance/de-enhance such side effects or just tech downside? Need to look up more tinkers. LOOK UP MORE TINKERS.
  • Maybe I should just ask Lilith at some point???


I'll sleep now then tackle the night's disasters in the morning.

The next page is spattered with small dots as if written in haste while eating

  • Heard shots, went to investigate, unholy mess. Before getting into actual fight, brief discussion of leaking of Empire identities and feelings thereon:
    • Grim satisfaction for what they did to Auntie Jess (sidenote, is coincidence that E is back just as this happens? E and Jess were close)
    • Confusion: who did this and WHY??? Protectorate taskforce were going to handle Empire anyway, so have decided is UNLIKELY that person straightforwardly wanted Empire gone - maybe just wanted chaos (why? Cover for doing something else? Out of towners moving in? Villains employed by Eden wanting cover to do something villain-y without Lilith noticing (assuming Lilith didn't do it?) Side side note: suppose it WILL force authorities to ACT on the identities in a way they couldn't otherwise, which makes previous point a little moot. Did anything major other than Empire happen last night????
    • Fear of future: yes, I know NW is all about accountability and identities but half of reason capes work in Americas at all is polite fiction about identities. Worried about ripple effects elsewhere (eyes on Brockton Bay? Was this for publicity somehow? Draw attention here?)
  • Engagement was confusing, partly due to Beastie senses, partly due to it being a mess. Engage initial group of non-powered thugs + Rune with mid-ish tier force (note Taylor escalated almost immediately, but gunshots, but thinking back Lindsay probably shot first given sound of gunshot and firearm she had/low number of firearms by Empire supporters). Begin initial discussion with Rune, find out about identity leak, someone shoots TBeastie with high powered sniper rifle (probably Victor???? Where was Othala though????). Taylor escalates immediately in response to injury (need to help her keep her temper but is recentish trigger and keeps rushing into combat and am trying to trust her judgement but [here devolves into an incoherent scribble for rest of line]
  • Stormtiger hit the van at this point, worked out beastie controllers were in there, injured Crystal. Went after him with Taylor-level escalation, hurt him very badly. Not sure how feel about that. He could have hurt or killed Amy, but feels… weird not feeling guilty about use of force. Issues with trusting judgement again? Protectorate and PRT show up in response to call from Lindsay and Sundancer (?only one who matches description and might reasonably pretend to be Flare, why was she there?) (wait she's still sorta clinging to Lindsay last I saw - is there something in the water everyone moves way too fast around here (not that I have room to talk…)) brief brief brief downtime.
  • Don't remember all of the relaxing stuff, more's the pity. Taylor got changed (?), Amy fixed Crystal up, talked with E briefly about Taylor, E was E about it (like I like her but her attitude is Not Helpful for handling Taylor, probably). Better than Legfailure, I guess, and his approach of KIDNAPPING

Below is doodle of what might be Challenger, noting changes to her appearance from her time in Brockton Bay. There is also another drawing of the female knight figure, this time drawing on Challenger's more 'relaxed militarism' look with an open coat of scales over the armour and a polearm instead of the sword. Second doodle of sword with a stone on the end, surrounded by astonished stick figures.
What is PRT's plan with Eden?
  • Drive to villainy so can arrest? Find excuses for arrest? Number should exist already, likely why are being aggressive and Lilith on edge of being branded villain anyway.
  • Prevent Eden as Business so no excuses to be hidden behind/loss of resources for tinkering and maintenance?
  • Push Master narrative (hence blame for identity leak???)
  • From PRT's perspective, Eden likely does have wide Master ability use given quick moving alliance between NW and Eden, Taylor's about-face on issue of her mother, etc. (DO they have Master abilities? Can't remember when would have had access to me or Ames to install tech for that (memories unreliable, see Taylor) but would they have me be this suspicious about this if they did? Issue is tech ultimately causes issue like with the Matrix where there's no way you can't definitively PROOVE that she hasn't actually edited your memories, or edited the memories/behaviours of anyone you go to to check if she has, which is likely why PRT/Protectorate are so afraid and want to move quickly).
  • Taylor known hotbutton for Lilith regardless of mastering hence attempted maneuvers last night - likely means that attack played into their plan perfectly Mom was right, FUCK

Fuck is then repeated for another two lines, occasionally in different styles.

Not sure want to cover rest of night now. Not sure what to do now. Investigate Lilith, trust Taylor, trust Amy. Be there to protect them. Will try that, and looking into being someone who isn't Glory Girl.

Meeting coming up from Lilith, apparently about what's next. Might be useful? Still want to talk to Lilith about politics and stuff. Might be opportunity after meeting.
Scribbled into margin next to this is:
get taylor to stop making threesome jokes somehow
Addendum: talking seriously about threesomes is not an improvement
 
is there something in the water everyone moves way too fast around here

Well there is a biotinker in town with very open views on sex.


Can't remember when would have had access to me or Ames to install tech for that (memories unreliable, see Taylor) but would they have me be this suspicious about this if they did?

And we get to why Taylor probably shouldn't forgive her mom. With the amount of memory fucking going on, Taylor has no way to know if what she is thinking or feeling is real, or just more programming. Obviously she wants to forgive her mom, but regardless of the reasons, she has been so thoroughly mindfucked she can't trust anything. Even if we know she is free now, Taylor will never know if she is actually herself.



Cutting her mom off for an extended period of time(longer than...what was it, a month?) would probably be healthy for both of them, and that is the reason it will never happen. Neither Worm, nor Taylor lend themselves to good mental health.
 
And we get to why Taylor probably shouldn't forgive her mom. With the amount of memory fucking going on, Taylor has no way to know if what she is thinking or feeling is real, or just more programming. Obviously she wants to forgive her mom, but regardless of the reasons, she has been so thoroughly mindfucked she can't trust anything. Even if we know she is free now, Taylor will never know if she is actually herself.
Actually Taylor's recent trigger also broke Annette's old tampering as well as making Taylor immune to future (unwanted) tampering. She / we know this because all of the old memory tampering that was blocking the abduction and assault as well as the relapses caused by Emma were unblocked. So she can infer with a pretty high certainty that she's free of any power assisted mastering. (Evolutionary and environmental conditioning to trust a parent are a whole other ball game, but that's just normal unpowered mom abilities)
 
And we get to why Taylor probably shouldn't forgive her mom. With the amount of memory fucking going on, Taylor has no way to know if what she is thinking or feeling is real, or just more programming. Obviously she wants to forgive her mom, but regardless of the reasons, she has been so thoroughly mindfucked she can't trust anything. Even if we know she is free now, Taylor will never know if she is actually herself.
Problem is Taylor in either body is at least partially tinkertech and Lilith, her mom is the only available biotinker (Amy was shown to have difficulty with the non-biological portions of Taylor's human body implant and I suspect she will have similar issues with her Khanivore half) to provide tech support. Maybe Amy with the help of some other tinker like Kid Win, Dragon or Armsmaster could reliably maintain Taylor long term but even without the tinker issue, the politics of the situation are forcing New Wave and Lilith together with Taylor metaphorically squished in the middle.

So Taylor is stuck dealing with Annette and using less effective means of protecting her mental boundaries like ongoing self-checking and master/stranger quizzing by allies. So far Lilith seems to be respecting Taylor's mental boundaries and that seems to be the best we can hope for.

Hopefully Annette will not go full on paranoid over-protective mind-controller and Taylor will recover from her suicidal ideation. Which mind was the driving force behind Annette's use of mindfuckery.

Edit: And what Valdimarian said.
 
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She / we know this because all of the old memory tampering that was blocking the abduction and assault as well as the relapses caused by Emma were unblocked. So she can infer with a pretty high certainty that she's free of any power assisted mastering.

But she can't EVER be 100% sure. She might be able to convince herself for a while, but that situation is going to shape her relationships for her entire life. Even the little things in her life will seem fake, what is her, and what is she doing because her mom changed her. Abuse victims suffer from this, and they don't have to deal with actual powers that control minds.


Problem is Taylor in either body is at least partially tinkertech and Lilith, her mom is the only available biotinker

I think her power solved this. Could be wrong tho.
 
Cell 10.5
While I prep to move out and wait for Destiny to finish downloading spicy new update, have a chapter!
Special thanks to my lovely co-author and wife, @hellgodsrus, without whom I would never would have been able to take part in creating half my fics, and our girlfriend @SolarFlare for being awesome and also betaing! Also special thanks Prime Betas @Tamahori and @32nd_freeze and @Ganurath for being betas and feeding me validation and feedback between updates! And also new Prime Beta Lucky! Who is on Questionable Questing and writing most of the NSFW omakes~
Enjoy!

Cell
10.5
-.-.-

Mark and Neil came in not long after Mom and Aunt Sar - fucking damnit - Sarah did. I was helping Mom make pancakes and waffles and leftover barbecue meats for everyone who hadn't had breakfast already. Which was pretty much everyone that wasn't Amy, Victoria and I - and it did seem to be everyone. The rest of the New Wave adults - even Mark, wearing his costume but without its helmet, looking unshorn and a little mournful. Sherrel, who'd bounced back in and stolen the last of the leftover bacon, the traitorous wench. Crystal and Eric, huddled next to Victoria and a hunched, unhappy looking Amy, talking to them in whispers. A knot of people I recognised as former dockworkers - Lacey, Kurt, Alex, Lindsay's dad - mingled with people I didn't recognise as well - the blonde girl who'd been with Lindsay last night and was still half clinging to her arm, trading looks with a bizarrely elated looking young brunette woman. Trickster was stood near that knot, rolling his hat in his hands, Tattletale perched on a counter a little way away next to a giant man dressed in a biking outfit of motorcycle leathers and helmet with skull-face on it, darkness dripping off his huge body like water. There was barely enough room for everyone to stand, let alone sit and eat.

Before that could become a problem though, Mom wrapped her dressing gown around herself tighter - no, not tighter, in a different way, stood, and became Lilith. My tank behind her formed her backdrop and discussion halted. Immediately. "Thank you for coming, everyone."

The atmosphere was immediately ruined by Aunt Sarah - urgh I'm never going to stop calling her that - giggling to herself. Lilith gave her a look, then continued. I didn't miss the numerous marks just under the collar of her shirt as she shifted.

"As of last night, the Brockton Bay PRT and Protectorate have effectively declared themselves our enemies. Or us theirs. Regardless of truth, legality, or justice… this is how they have decided to act. New Wave, thank you for housing my daughter and I apologise that you have become collateral of their hatred of me." She tilted her head back, arms folded behind her. A reigning queen. "As it stands, Brandish has called for intervention by the Boston PRT, something I, after consideration and the rescue of my daughter, approve of. Thank you for your clearheaded response while I was - emotionally compromised." Lilith nodded to Carol, who was making one of her signature eating a lemon faces, but with a touch of something else. Pride, maybe?

"They did kidnap me…" I mumbled. Amy squeezed my hand and Victoria patted my back. It was more comforting than I expected.

"There are consequences to all our actions - the PRT and Protectorate are not as exempt from that as they would like to think they are. When truth comes to light, they are woefully unjust and incompetent, covering their failures and mistakes through smear campaigns and cherry picked information leaks." Mom stopped, took a breath, halting the incoming rant I could sense boiling in her about the state of law enforcement. "They are not the only threat within the Bay to our continued existence, but they are the strongest, the ones we can least afford to face head on. The ABB, are gone, splintered, their remnants scattered or scattering. The Empire are falling - we will begin and continue aggressive action against them and their… subsidiaries." Her lips curled a little, somewhere between a sneer and a smirk. "However. The disappearance of the main parahuman gang structure within the city has left something of a vacuum. One I think it would be preferable to fill ourselves rather than have one of the fragments of the ABB, the drug dealers, or another group take for themselves."

"Right, but. I know we're all rightfully a bit brassed off at them at the moment, but wouldn't that be filled by the Protectorate?" Eric asked, bless his little heart.

"One would hope so." Lilith nodded. "One would certainly hope so. Unfortunately, given their startling lack of appropriate responses lately, it's doubtful they'll fulfil the role before real villain groups like the Teeth attempt to muscle in territory, or the Orchard, the Elite, Accord, whomever wants a slice of the city for themselves."

"You plan on Eden filling that void?" Carol looked somewhere between a scowl and jaw-dropped incredulity.

"Eden, and New Wave. Someone must, and better us than the other options, or inaction from the PRT." Lilith had turned, slightly, and I couldn't see her face clearly. I did hear her deep breath, not quite a sigh but close enough to it. "I did some more research on the Brockton Bay Brigade and the forming of New Wave. There are actions I am sure you regret, in your past, but your core tenet, that of accountability… that speaks to me. I am Annette Hebert, but I am also Lilith. I don't want to be a hero or a villain - I want to use my powers for good, be it through entertainment, education, or other options." She nodded, here, at Trickster and the strange brunette, who'd moved next to each other while she'd been talking. I wondered if other options meant murder. I mean, I certainly couldn't find fault with that plan when it came to the Nazis. "I want to see my dying city recover. I want to see this city become a place where my daughter can feel and be safe walking down the street, without worrying about being hunted for her orientation, where anyone's daughter can feel safe without being pursued for their skin colour, or their wealth, or - " A small pause. "Or sons. Children."

"Hear hear." Lacey held up her glass of water in a toast. There was a general indistinct noise of agreement and several raised hands and glasses from all around. Thankfully no spills.

"My vision of Eden is of the garden-as-it-was. A place before the fall, before the constraints of morality - in this analogy, before and outside of pretend fights with criminals. Those who want their blood and circuses can see far more literal versions in our entertainment. This, however, will put us at odds with the PRT."

I… hadn't really followed a word of that. Looking at some of the other faces around the room I wasn't alone in that. Mom apparently noticed too since the Lilith persona slipped a little, an annoyed grimace falling out.

"I want my organisation to represent a space that is not merely outside of standard cape dynamics but can act as a replacement for them. If people are so determined to see superpowered brawling, they can see it happen safely with us, with no risk to life or property of anyone else. Obviously, as the PRT support the status quo to a certain extent because they allow the brawling to continue without appropriate safeties - or appropriate participants. No-one should be coming to this city for a chance to see someone like Lung or Hookwolf. And now, they won't any more."

I noticed Lindsay looking a little proud and trying to suppress it. More than a couple of people glanced at me and I couldn't help but grin at the small round of cheering. That's right, this skinny girl took down a motherfucking dragon. "Hey, speaking of Lung… did you ever do anything with his head?" I asked. I still wanted to mount it on the wall or something. It was a trophy, damnit.

"Later." Mom's hand gently patted the air in my direction in a vaguely calming gesture. "Since the PRT is likely to object to this vision of the future, it is possible their objections may escalate. For now… let us eat. Think on what's been said. And we will discuss your thoughts at the end of the meal." She sat down, neatly, then - less neatly - pulled a pair of waffles onto her plate.

I immediately reached for the maple syrup, just narrowly beating Lindsay, who grinned at me from across the table. "Sooooo… I'm guessing you slept well." That was an impressive smirk.

"Once we finally got to bed at Ass AM, sure," I started, ignoring Crystal's extremely unladylike snorting at that callback, "Or are you talking about earlier? Don't think I haven't noticed the marks on your neck, Lindsay~" I purred, giving her a hooded grin. "You and Sunny Disposition seem to have gotten along quite well, after all."

Lindsay blushed and waved her hands in a 'gimme' motion at the syrup. "Yeah, well my girlfriend can't just clean up the marks whenever she wants." Clearly, that wasn't the only reason, but…

"Neither can mine." I smirked, drizzling a generous amount of syrup on my pancake before handing it over.

Amy grumbled something quietly about, "not my fucking girlfriend," but it was easier than explaining the whole 'friends with benefits and sometimes feelings' thing we had going on.

Lindsay raised an eyebrow, pouring an equal amount on her own.stack. "Somehow, I doubt that." She hummed for a moment. "… kind of thinking about asking Annette about some biomods of my own though. Since I won't always have a shotgun. Thanks again for saving us, by the way."

I wasn't entirely sure what to say, beyond… "It's what any hero would have done."

"Doesn't mean you don't deserve thanks." Her smile was earnest.

"Any biomodification Lilith did would require maintenance." Amy leaned a little closer, still scowling a bit. Her bony little elbow had somehow lodged itself against my side. "That could be… challenging. And time consuming for both you and her."

"I mean, I've heard about some of the work you've done on the Beasties. If anyone can figure out a way to integrate things and make them seamless and self maintaining… it's you." Lindsay swallowed nervously a bit, before focusing on Amy. "... I'm sorry for yelling at you when I was off my tits on painkillers."

"You're not the first and I doubt you'll be the last." Amy shrugged - a little uneasily. Again, I got the urge to punch the people in the hospital who acted like dicks to her.

"That doesn't make it okay." Lindsay's gaze dropped to her food and she took a bite.

"Mm. And - I don't - my power works alright with Lilith's but. I don't always see why she's made things the way she has. What I did with the Beasties was more… assembly. I was a glue gun, basically."

"I think you're underselling yourself a little." I rubbed shoulders with her gently. "Do you want pancakes or waffles?" I noticed she was a little trapped and unable to reach the food.

"We literally had breakfast under an hour ago. And I'm not half starved like you can be sometimes." She grabbed a pair of forkfuls of bacon - turns out there had been a hidden pack at the back of the fridge. "Speaking of, eat this."

"Yes ma'am."

"Not - not all at once, Taylor, Jesus Christ -" she buried her face in her hands as my cheeks bulged out like a chipmunks, but full of bacon. "You'll choke." After a pause, she lifted up just enough to glare at me. "And if you do, Victoria will have to heimlich you."

Lindsay smirked. "Well, at least if Vicky shatters all your ribs, we have people around who can fix you after." Sunny Disposition watched the back and forth with interest as I made sure to chew much more carefully.

"Mmphmhph-"

"Don't. Just - don't." Amy sighed deeply. Don't talk with your mouth full. Okay.

"So -" Victoria leaned round from Amy - she'd been talking to Crystal before, apparently content to have a second breakfast herself. "Uh. I'm not sure I caught your name..?" she looked towards Sunny Disposition.

I swallowed and barely avoided choking. Probably related to a missing gag reflex at some point. "I've been calling you Sunny Disposition in my head."

"I'm. Uh." Her eyes widened and flicked round the table, meeting Trickster's, then the brunette next to him's. "Um. M-Marissa?"

Lindsay's hand that wasn't currently holding a fork dropped below the table, and she gave Marissa a reassuring smile.

"I'm Taylor." I grinned. "It's nice to meet you in person." The chorus of groans gave me life.

"Boo! Boo, I say!" Crystal threw a scrunched up napkin ball at me. "That was terrible."

"No, this," I said, holding up the napkin ball, my grin only growing wider at her horrified expression, "Is tearable."

Lindsay utterly lost it, slumping against Marissa in a fit of giggles. Amy looked like she was wondering just how and why she let me between her legs. To be perfectly honest I wasn't sure either, I was such a brat. Victoria was doing her best to hide her amusement, and best of all, Mom was giving me this look from across the table.

"Ahem. So. We were talking about biomods, I think?" I tried to purge the thoughts of ones that would be fun in the bedroom. What would be more useful or fun for just - everyday living? "Cosmetic or functional? Wait - you mentioned wanting them because you wouldn't have the shotgun." I hummed.

Lindsay held up one finger, still snickering through a mouthful of pancakes, before swallowing and taking a moment to compose herself. "Y-yeah, Kinda… self defense things. Like… some kind of bone sliver launcher with tranquilizer venom or something? I dunno exactly how all of this works, my only experience so far was having my leg patched up that one ti…" She trailed off, trying to covertly look around and see if anyone had overheard. She wasn't very good at it.

"That experimental treatment you mentioned." Amy nodded, not even glancing in Mom's direction. "A bone sliver launcher sounds like it'd be a good idea, sure, but you don't see that kind of thing in nature often for a reason. For one thing, there's replacing the bones after launching them, then the launch mechanism - if it gets shifted at all you're launching the bone into yourself. Acids and venoms, sure, but not launchers like that."

"So we're stuck with the whole 'bringing a knife to a gunfight' problem again." I grimaced. Getting shot was not fun. Sudden overwhelming pain out of nowhere wasn't exactly an experience I was eager to repeat.

Marissa frowned in thought. "What if you could like - shoot something out your wrists? Like - web or - or something." She made a gesture like flicking her wrist, middle and ring finger in her palm.

"... I think those were gadgets in the comics, but… That could work." Lindsay bit her lip before blushing again, having outed herself as a fellow dork.

"I mean, Lilith's a tinker though so that's less of a concern. But if you wanted Ames to be able to do maintenance…"

"Plus implanted stuff is more covert, yeah."

"Bioweapons are fun." I smiled, daydreaming for a moment about having more combat tentacles, tipped in blades dripping acid… sigh, one day.

Victoria rolled her eyes. "Y'know, Tay, when most people talk about things they don't like about their body, usually they're referring to acne or back pain or cankles, not their lack of hyper lethal weaponry."

"Hey!" I pouted. "I don't complain about that. I complain about a lack of wings."

"You're way too big to fly." Amy frowned. "Something your size - just the muscle mass required to get you off the ground - you're already past the point of diminishing returns. Even with Lilith's Tinker Bullshit, you'd probably be limited to gliding at best."

"Most people also don't get attacked by Nazis on the reg," Lindsay interjected.

"Yeah, well, with all their identities leaked, hopefully we won't have to worry about that for much longer." I sighed. "Oh, who am I kidding. There'll always be fucking Nazis."

"Okay so if wings are out, what if we made her rocket powered?"

We all stopped to stare at Victoria.

"What?"

"Mecha-Khanivore!" Crystal crowed.

"... That could work. I - Flare is basically rocket powered." Lindsay bit her lip again, looking up at the ceiling in thought.

"What on earth are you girls doing." Carol twisted in her seat to stare at us all, wide-eyed. Possibly in horror.

"Discussing methods of flight that might work with my real body - Khanivore." I explained. "Amy decided wings and flapping wouldn't work, so now we're thinking rockets." I paused. "Or maybe strapping Flare to my back? But that's powers and powers work weird for me. Hrm. Shit, we probably couldn't even use Sherrel's tech because I break tinkertech, don't I?"

"I will forever treasure the hazy memory of Halbeard's startled face as you walked up behind him." Crystal promised, mouth full of pancake.

"The PRT didn't try to charge you two with anything after I left, right?" I looked over to Lindsay and Marissa, concerned. "Why'd they want me out of the room, anyways?"

Lindsay shook her head. "Apparently even with BBPD being like half E88 moles by population, The whole thing fell under PRT jurisdiction because capes showed up, and they couldn't really come up with a thing I could have done other than shoot Nazis. Rune would have just put a car through the house. No idea why they went after you, though. More weird cape rule stuff? And I only shot people who can't do weird shit with their magical brain tumors. As for the other thing…"

Marissa elbowed her in the ribs. "They wanted you to leave because you were distracting Miss Useless Lesbian here with your abs and that gun show." She grinned.

"You mean these abs?" I maintained eye contact, slowly lifting my shirt -

Amy put her hand over mine, it was scalding hot. "Yes." She made a strangled little noise that was utterly adorable. "Not at the dinner table."

I chuckled and held on to her. "Well, I think they went after me because I uh. Well." I held up my hand. "There was some lady with an eyepatch? The sniper - "

"That'd probably be Victor and Othala." Victoria nodded. "They're usually paired up."

"Right. Them, uh, the one that was stabbing at Mahway until I picked them up and they tried stabbing me and my hand closed on reflex - no idea if they survived, honestly not bothered if they didn't - and crushed their chest. And - I dunno, I probably stepped on a few people you'd shot." I shrugged.

Lindsay swallowed her bite of pancakes, seemingly relieved with the subject change. "Eh. Nothing of value was lost. Just hoping they don't try to stick Tammi on the Wards ENE and expect us all to pretend she wasn't infiltrating us to scope out targets… Hang on. They didn't try to make you sign any NDAs, did they? Because they didn't try to make us sign anything…"

"Probably because the whole Empire got outed." I shrugged. "I really should have stayed quiet when I was at the PRT HQ, but I didn't sign anything at least. Mostly just complained." I grimaced, shrunk in on myself a little. "And, well, after that, I took out Night and Fog, you know the rest."

"I think the one that stabbed your hand was Cricket." Victoria frowned. "She… I haven't ever really fought her before, but Mom said you could basically fight through the nausea. Either she's got an iron stomach, or Cricket was going really hard there, because that dizziness and nausea was nuts."

Ugh. I remembered it. And I was meant to be immune so - "My power didn't block out the nausea once I was back in this body so. Yeah." I made a face. "Glad you were inside by then, Amy. It was not pleasant."

"It was a very not-fun part of the night." Crystal grimaced. Oh, right, she'd been in Emmim, with the super-nose. "Just - so much vomit and this high pitched drone like - like twenty flies crawling into your ears."

"... Is that why one of the windows cracked?" Lindsay chewed her lip. "I didn't think anything actually hit the house, and the crack didn't really look like it was from an impact either."

"I mean, I don't know how she would have done that." Victoria took another bite of pancake and sausage. "Her power's nausea inducing not like. Glass cracking."

"Maybe Othala did something?"

I shook my head. "Probably not. Everyone else might have been dragged out in body-bags, but she probably ended up in a body-bucket."

"Thanks, Taylor. Really needed that image while I'm trying to eat." Marissa was clearly having second thoughts about the previously frozen strawberries she'd just put onto her stack.

"Sorry." I grinned sheepishly. "Turns out getting between a high velocity kaiju fist and a load-bearing support column isn't good for your health."

"Don't worry Marissa. Everything tastes better garnished with the blood of your enemies." Lindsay snickered, before letting out a squeak when her apparent new girlfriend slapped her on the back of the head.

"Thank you, Marissa." Victoria nodded to her. "We're trying to avoid Taylor biting people."

"I bite Amy plenty and you don't hear her complaining." I grumbled.

Lindsay opened her mouth and was promptly smacked again, giving Marissa a mock hurt look.

I reached for my pockets and - patted them down, confused. "Anybody know where my phone went?" I glanced over the table… "Could have sworn it was in my pocket."

"Bedside table, I think." Amy grumbled, her face very solidly buried in my shoulder. I could see her turning scarlet and tried to stroke her hair reassuringly while Crystal cackled and Victoria very pointedly didn't look at us.

Oh! Right, I'd - gone to the toilet at some point. But I hadn't taken my phone with me, had I?

"So, cuz," Crystal distracted me by elbowing Victoria and grinning widely. "Heard you went out with Lilith to knock on the PRT's door."

"Ugh, yes, I was." Victoria rolled her eyes. "Didn't you get dragged home to get the charter?"

"Nope, I was getting some medical care from Lilith."

I glanced at Amy. No offense to Mom, but Amy was the best available when it came to biology. Monster or human.

She seemed to notice my attention, lifting her head from my chest just long enough to glare at me - I wanted to say fondly, but it was difficult to tell. "I can only work with what's already there. If you guys want to get hurt more often, put on some goddamn weight."

"So what you're saying," Lindsay interjected, "Is I need to eat more pancakes if I want to shoot poison darts out of my arms."

"Sure." Amy settled her head back into me more firmly.

"Anyway. So what do we, the uh. Junior people of this, I guess." Victoria scowled a little, and ate her food more ferociously for two bites. "What do we think about what your mom said? About the PRT and her goals and stuff."

"Personally?" I took a deep breath. "The PRT can get fucked. The local branch, at any rate. I used to think they were heroes, first and foremost. Then I met them. And I realised they're government agents first, heroes second. Nazis have been a problem here for longer than I've been alive. Lung got away with human trafficking rings because might makes right. And, and, fucking Uber and Leet." I growled.

"Bit of a non-sequitur there." Crystal mumbled. The mumbling mostly was because she was apparently inhaling a whole punnet of strawberries.

"They went all-in on trying to take down Mom. At first I wondered if it was because - well, she's small compared to the likes of the ABB and the Empire. But then I realised… y'know who else is small? Who has been established in this city for quite some time and even regarded as a fucking annoyance of a criminal enteprise? Uber and Leet. And they haven't done anything about those fuckers who went around beating prostitutes and shit for years."

"I know we're not really in the mood to be fair here, but Uber and Leet are quite a lot less theoretically dangerous than Lilith and Eden. And haven't had a habit of potentially hunting down gang members or mind controlling people." Victoria took another bite. "But I do take your point. Like - where the fuck was this shit when the Chorus was around?"

"Unlike Lilith and Eden, they did go out beating up hookers. And Mom doesn't mind control people. That was just - suppressing memories." I wrapped an arm around Amy and pulled my warm spiky teddybear closer.

"...If they'd actually done something about the gangs, my brother wouldn't have been caught in the crossfire." Lindsay slumped in her seat, staring down at her plate. Marissa pulled her into a hug, gently rubbing her back.

"Yeah. So, PRT, Protectorate," I sighed, "Even the goddamn Wards, sad as it is. Cops first. Government agents second. And Heroes last. And as we all know by now, all cops are bastards."

"Oh, I suppose you're just working that out now." It took me a moment to locate the owner of the voice in the crowd around the table, until she slipped closer. "Not that I have room to talk, really." Tattletale was carefully picking at a plate of toast with one hand. "And the junior New Wave crew too. And… Lindsay and Marissa, isn't it?"

"Did you do something with your hair?" I asked, frowning. Trying to figure it out.

"More like I didn't get a chance to. Budge up." She swung herself onto the bench next to us. Her eyes were brilliant, bottle-glass green, sliding across the row of us - most of the New Wave girls were scowling, Marissa was hunching.

Lindsay was apparently deep in thought about something, jumping a little when Marissa nudged her. "Uh, yeah. That's right." She bit her lip, eyebrows furrowing.

"Mm. Anyway. All cops - or coplikes - tend towards bastardy. More systemic than individual, though there are plenty of individual bastards." Her lips twitched. "Glory Hole would know all about that, I think."

"Fuck off." Victoria's face wasn't a scowl but the dead eyed iron expression I'd seen her wear when I'd left the PRT building the previous night.

"Be nice." I jabbed a finger into Tattletale's leg. "For someone who claims to be psychic, you really aren't that great at reading the room." I raised an eyebrow at her. Oh yes, I read your PHO Wiki entry. Not that it had really helped at all. The page had almost nothing on it - possibly by her own hand given wikis and public editing. I'd actually learned more by (accidentally I swear) eavesdropping on the DWA. She definitely wasn't psychic, but put together hints and clues faster than anyone had any right to - like some kind of cocaine-powered Sherlock. And that was after the fact that Sherlock was already quite cocaine-powered.

"Sorry," Tattletale said, sounding possibly the least sorry I'd ever heard anyone sound. "I heard you all had a bit of an outing last night."

"I think the Empire had a bigger outing." Crystal snickered. I groaned. That was terrible. And she was giving me shitty looks for puns?

"It's funny. I imagine what's left of them are possibly having a breakfast meeting similar to this one right now. The Protectorate are going to crash it, of course."

I had a flash of paranoia -

Her smile stretched a little wider, just a hint of teeth showing. "Theirs. Not ours."

Okay, maybe she wasn't quite as bad at reading the room as I thought. She just didn't care. I grumbled and cut up my pancake into bite sized pieces so I had something to do with my hands.

"So what are the Undersiders planning to do with this mess?" I asked instead, because… I wasn't really sure why, it sorta just escaped my mouth.

"Oh, Lilith's paying us quite well. I believe we're going to do a number of raids on Medhall subsidiaries and their supply vans. Imagine an armoured car robbery except the car isn't armoured and we're stealing lots of medicine."

Victoria made a grumbling noise at that, but didn't say anything.

"Not even going to try to put a spin on it?" I raised an eyebrow.

"Why would I? With the reveal of Max Anders' identity, Lilith feels - rightly or wrongly - that it's open season on the holdings of Nazis that they'll make profit off."

I sighed and slumped, rubbing at my forehead. "It's like you're deliberately trying to phrase it in the worst way possible. You aren't trying to do that, are you?"

Her grin was all I needed as an answer. I hope Grue is more diplomatic than she is. Fucking Thinkers. Reminded me of a fox in the henhouse - or the saying of it, at least. I'd never actually seen a video of a fox in a henhouse. "I'm providing perspective. More than I think most of you have right now. Except maybe Lindsay."

"So… are you trying to say 'just because they're Nazis it doesn't mean they're an acceptable target' or… something else?" I was confused. "Or is this like - trying to warn us what the PRT will try to spin it as."

"More the latter, not that they have to spin very much."

"I still hate that we have to remind people that Nazis are bad."

"They'll simply frame it as us - as Lilith - depriving your dear elderly grandmama of her desperately needed medication." Tattletale shrugged. "Which Lilith is well aware of."

"... You're right, though, Tay. We need heroes." Lindsay looked like she'd made up her mind about whatever it was, and was sitting up straighter. Her expression was… determined. "Sabrina the Teenage Nazi probably already told all her friends what she came up with anyway. Might as well get ahead of things." Standing up, she did that whole 'tapping a spoon on a glass' thing until conversation died and everyone was looking at her. "... okay, this is way more intimidating with everyone looking at me, but fuck it." Swallowing, Lindsay held up one hand. A mote of light appeared in her palm, a tiny plasma jet burning with a soft hiss. "I'm Flare. Since I'm living here full time now since fucking Nazis know where my house is, I thought you should all know about that." She looked around, squirming a bit. "... uh… any questions?"

"Did you check with Frank first?" someone from the back called out, before most of the Dockworkers laughed.

Lindsay paled. "Fuck." Clearly, that was a no.

"What my daughter does with her identity is up to her." Mr Myers stood up. He seemed to be looming a little but I wasn't sure who it was directed at. "That said - a little warning next time, sweetie?"

"Sorry Dad. Got caught up in the moment." Lindsay sagged back into her seat, blushing furiously, before hiding her face in Marissa's shoulder.

"Speaking of revelations and reveals…" Mom stood up at the head of the table again, nodding to Mr Myers. "Taylor and I have been unmasked by the public."
 
The point about Uber and Leet makes me think that the Protectorate prioritizes targets by whoever has the most public attention. They may be cops before heroes, but they're celebrities before cops.
 
Funny thing about Leet. I mean, he is an everything tinker. So its stupid to not expect him to be able to do biotinkering. Which should have triggered Piggot. But nope!

And yeah... I kinda expected the endbringer sirens to interrupt at the end, but that is good too. Right now they need to do a lot of work.

Also Coil is being a fucktard in the background just waiting for Khanivore to nom him.

So yeah, this is going to lead to interesting directions. Helping Noelle. Dealing with Coil. Dealing with the PRT. Eventual Leviathan.

A LOT to build up to in the next month or so. But Eden has a huge equalizer in the form of Taylor/Khanivore. Because a power nullifying kaiju is just waiting to rain on anyone who gets in her way.

Delightful little moments this chapter, from the flirting to the relationships to delightful little things between the people. Including Swinging Sarah. Heh. Which might explain a lot more if sisters and husbands swung together.

Yeah, things are going to get interesting. At least Carol is actively working on Eden's side right now not being... Carol in all the other fics. She is a very powerful piece in the game.

Really looking forward to seeing where the next few chapters lead.

Well, I assume the Chorus did worse. I mean, While Annette's mind editing was bad, it was on the 'beneficial, trying to help badly' side of bad.

From what I recall, they did. It was like a group mind thing? I forget.
 
WOG: it's still about a month too early for that - while there *will* be an endbringer fight at some point, because kaiju vs kaiju vs apex predator murdersquid trump will be awesome, in-universe it's still april

Right! I'd forgotten. Still, that leaves a lot between now and then to enjoy and cause chaos with. Especially if Noelle situation goes out of control or Coil pulls some more bullshit.

As it is, Khanivore + New Wave + whatever Beasties they use are all most then capable of taking out the remnants of the gangs.

A lot of dark possibilities, but also good ones. Ziz might be objecting to her little 'out Cauldron to the world' time bomb she has in Noelle and the Travelers, for one thing.

Biggest issue remains Coil. And looking forward to when Annette has him by the metaphorical balls(not the real ones. Even if he looks like a middle age, far too skinny Morgan Freeman as my headcanon reads).
 
Well, I assume the Chorus did worse. I mean, While Annette's mind editing was bad, it was on the 'beneficial, trying to help badly' side of bad.
From what I recall, they did. It was like a group mind thing? I forget.
We don't actually know what power(s) the Chorus had at their disposal, just that they attacked a mall, Victoria got hurt badly enough to trigger Amy, and the gang got annihilated by a combination of New Wave retaliation and Coil opportunism.

New Wave failing to Ruin Nazi Lives after Fleur got killed... I'm not surprised Lightstar left.
 
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