Each Star is a Point of Light-A Destiny/Mass Effect Fusion

Omake- How Shepard Got Her Groove
Omake - Canon-How Shepard Got Her Groove

When Shepard was a little girl in the village of Mindoir she would stare at the sky and dream of the Last City on Earth. She dreamed of its Guardians. Each one a warrior without peer. Each one a legend. Legends like Saint-14, Shin Malphur, Aiyana Who-Saw-Clearly, Berta Lightning-Hand, and others who were so numerous as to match the number of stars in the sky. Those dreams and stories sustained her in the years after Mindoir burned. When it was her and her Ghost wandering the world waiting for her Light to become strong enough to take her place among heroes.

Which was why she was so absolutely flabbergasted by Cayde-6 right now. "Why is it so important how I dance?" Cayde shook his head and glared at her.

"Dancing is important to Guardians. It's an," he paused before spreading his right hand across his chest and raising his head as if he was on a propaganda poster, "integral part of our culture." In a flash, he came out of his pose pointed his index finger at her, "and you are one of the worst dancers this city has ever seen." Shepard sighed, closed her eyes, and clasped her fingers around her temples.

"I don't see how-" she opened her eyes and glared at Cayde, "What's wrong with how I dance?"

"You're a worse dancer than Elaine-8." Cayde said looking at his gloves. Shepard let out, and she felt ashamed by this, a gasp of offense. She'd seen Elaine-8 dance. It was like someone had pumped nerve gas into her body and her ghost hadn't bothered to clean it out when it raised her. She told this to Cayde and he replied, "And you look like someone welded your upper arms to your torso before shocking your legs to give you muscle spasms." Shepard crossed her arms and turned her nose up.

"Well, you can say what you want but it still doesn't matter how I dance." She said. Cayde shook his head.

"Oh it matters all right," his hands were at his waist, "I'm the Hunter Vanguard, dammitBraskyoudeadbastardImissyou, and that means I'm responsible for the reputation of Hunters," he pointed down to the ground, "in The Tower," he pointed to the buildings below them, "in The City," and he spread his arms around, "and around the other Guardians." He pointed at her, "And you know what those Guardians are saying." She glared in silence before he continued, "That the Hunters have the single worst dancer in Tower history." He shook his head "Nuh-uh. Not on my watch."

"Cayde-"

"Ikora's been smirking at me behind my back," he said, "She thinks I don't see it but I have and I ain't living with that woman smirking at me behind my back." He pointed at her again and Shepard felt the urge to grab that finger and twist, "So I've gotten you dance lessons with one of the best dancers the Guardians have ever seen."

Shepard opened her mouth to argue but then she thought about it. Cayde was taking this thing as a matter of honor. Which meant he would be willing to jump through hoops. Besides, Shepard thought to herself, dance lessons could be fun. "Fine", she said, "but I want a new shotgun. From the good shit the Vanguard keeps in the vault." Cayde nodded, the Exo version of a smile on his face.

"Deal," he put a hand on her shoulder, "Now let's go introduce you to your instructor. He might even be ready for your first class."

Shepard smiled. She'd come out of this very very well.
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"Follow the rhythm, Shepard," Lord Shaxx screamed, "You're trying to dance with the music. Not fall into a seizure." Shepard panted. The two of them had been at this for almost five hours now.

"Lord Shaxx," she said, "can we-"

"NO," Shaxx yelled, "you're not stopping until you show me you can move both your arms and legs at the same time without looking like a stroke victim." Shepard fought to keep the tears from her eyes as her ankle twisted for what seemed the fiftieth time. When she got her hands on Cayde…

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Well, here's the promised omake. I was originally going to save this until a scene where Shepard began to victory dance (as Guardians are want to do) and described as being a good dancer. I wait for the inevitable confusion and "but Shepard's horrible at dancing jokes" and *bam* I'd release this. But things didn't go well with the chapter so you're getting this early.
 
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Y... you mean we won't hav... that Shep dosen't... (sniffleing)... I, I got to step out for abit...

My SENSE OF RYTHM THANKS YOU SEMPAI
 
Interlude 1-Walls and Tunnels
Interlude 1: Walls and Tunnels

Fedorian got out of the planning meeting with the two remaining generals around 0200. His eyes felt heavy but he took a small canister from his pocket and opened. From its end, a red-colored leaf, dry and brittle, came out. The vilate plant had long been used as a mild stimulant since the dawn of turian history. He crushed it into his palm and opening his mouth and sprinkled its remains between his tongue and his jaw.

Feeling slightly more awake, the Primarch began to walk back to the command center. He hoped the information Vakarian gave them would help. He'd started arranging for him to go out among the troops and disseminate his knowledge of this "Hive" and how they waged war. His thoughts turned to what Garrus had told him. What he had learned about these creatures filled him with dread. An entire species of religious fanatics who considered slaughter an act of worship and thought genocide a necessary process to bring the universe to completion.

It sounded like something out of ancient horror stories from before spaceflight. But the sound of turians screaming and the hellish howling mixed with crackling comms still haunted him. He heard a foot tap against the ground twice. He looked behind him and saw it was Garrus. "Are you going to make that a habit?"

Garrus stared at him for a moment before shrugging, "It's kind of become second nature to me. Sneaking around when I'm far from home." Fedorian nodded. The boy hadn't been back to Citadel Space much less Palaven for over three years now. Although, there was a small voice in the back of his head that supplied other interpretations. He shook those thoughts out. He beckoned Garrus to his side and he fell in step. Fedorian felt the quiet that stretched from that hall and into the rest of the city consume him. A few weeks ago, it had been full of noise and life. Now it was as silent as a mausoleum.

"This is the worst part," Garrus said, "the calm before the battle." Fedorian was about to nod at this piece of soldier's wisdom when Garrus continued in a slightly different tone of voice, "Then the battle's not so bad?" He turned his head to the other direction and switched tone again, "Oh, right, I forgot about the battle." He fell into closed-mouth laughter but stopped when he saw Fedorian staring at him like he was a madman. He coughed in the manner of someone who realized he did something stupid in front of a superior. "Sorry, sir, old joke I saw on a human program."

Ah, Humans. The people who the crew of the missing, and apparently destroyed, Far-Sight had lived with for the previous three years and who'd been at war with the Hive for the previous four centuries. "Do these people make a habit of making jokes out of life and death situations?"

"Yes, sir, all the time," Garrus said without missing a beat, "it's a kind of coping mechanism used to manage stress. One time I was under an artillery barrage with my fireteam for about two hours. We spent the first thirty minutes trying to think of ridiculous terms for having-" Garrus stopped with his eyes wide, "Never mind, sir."

Fedorian stared at him for a moment before continuing towards the command center. He didn't hear Garrus follow him but he knew he was there in the corner of his vision. It seemed the boy was quiet even when he wasn't trying to be stealthy. The Primarch was impressed. But his thoughts went back to Garrus' behavior.

He'd tried his best to keep an ear on his movements and actions throughout the base and he'd often been confused by what he heard. The previous example Garrus provided him synced up with reports from rather confused turians who said he'd begin chuckling to himself at random points whenever he was out and about examining the defenses for weaknesses that the Hive could exploit. When they would ask him about what he was laughing about he would answer with, "Oh, you wouldn't understand the reference" or "you had to be there."

Fedorian, now that he had some context, didn't mind that. Soldiers figured out all sorts of ways to cope and humor was better than resorting to the bottom of a bottle or a needle full of Hallex too often. But there were other reports. Some saw him talking to his drone like it was a person before holding it close to his ear. Others saw him sticking his knife into the ground and placing his head on the hilt. A few would see him standing someplace with his eyes closed and his hand held out as if trying to cup water one-handed before opening his eyes and moving on.

Also, there was- Fedorian found his thoughts disrupted when he heard a small clicking noise. It took him a moment before he noticed it wasn't just a noise. There was a rhythm to it. A song he didn't recognize. Another moment and he realized, the noise was coming from Garrus' direction. His head turned and he saw Garrus' mandibles slapping against his jaw in a rhythmic matter and he see the movement in his neck that denoted a turian using certain throat muscles that were absent on other species.

"Vakrarian," Fedorian asked, "what are you doing?"

Garrus gave a small start and it occurred to Fedorian his mind must have wandered off to have done that in front of his Primarch. "Oh, uh, sorry, sir. I was whistling."

"Whistling." Fedorian said in as flat a tone as possible.

"It's something humans do kind of." Garrus stammered out, 'They make a high pitched noise with their mouths as a signal to others or to entertain themselves. I-We can't really do it the way they do but I was talking to my fireteam leader once and we started talking and she said 'you know how to whistle don't you' and I- It helps me think, sir." Fedorian stared at the boy for several minutes before continuing on without saying a word. He didn't hear Garrus as they continued but he could feel that he was behind him in the way that good soldiers do.

Soon enough, he saw the door to the Command Center. Upon entering the Center he took his place at the back of the room at the warmap as was turian custom. Garrus left his side and began to skulk around the edges of the room eavesdropping, observing and, otherwise keeping apprised of the situation all over the planet while catching as little attention as possible. Fedorian's eyes widened at this. This was something he'd seen SpecTRes do when they were attached to larger armies. Suddenly, he wished Talus had let the boy apply for the training.

His focus was drawn from the boy by an aide coming to give him the report on the situation of the refugees in the city. Once he'd finished with that report he got another regarding the supplies remaining in the city and another regarding ammunition and weaponry. Fedorian sighed, even with the information they'd acquired it was going to be a long night.

For the first hour, it was quiet which caused Fedorian to become nervous. None of the other cities reported attacks since around the time that Garrus arrived. Fedorian knew that this meant that the enemy was planning to change up the plan, possibly in a big way. He was in communication with one of the generals about sending a small scouting party when he heard one of the monitoring technicians begin to shout, "Sir, our sensors are picking up seismic activity near the edge of the cordon." Fedorian had been about to respond when he heard Garrus curse in a language he didn't recognize and run out of the Command Center.

"Tell the troops in that area to get ready." Garrus yelled as he ran through the door, "They're about to get hit from underground."
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Scipis Formari fired his assault rifle into the flood of the screeching things that emerged like a flood from the large hole that had appeared in the ground five minutes ago. He shouted, "Switch." Before ducking his head behind a sandbag as one of the larger armored ones fired at him. They had to be careful. Whatever was in those guns could bypass kinetic barriers. He heard Attia firing nearby. Somehow, someone in Command got some info about enemy troop composition and tactics so they'd made tactical changes. While half of them waited for overheat to die down or took cover the other half of the unit would fire to keep the number of the "thralls", as he heard them called, down while one or two fired at the armored ones, which he remembered were called acolytes.

It was effective at first but there were too many of the bastards. It didn't help that they'd lost a quarter of the squad at this point to attrition alone. He was about to shout another switch when he saw something move in the shadows. The world slowed as Scipis saw a bunch of thralls leap out of the shadows in the direction of him and his squad. He tried to bring his rifle to bear but he knew it would be upon him before he could kill it.

A rattle of assault rifle fire went off and Scipis saw each thrall's head light up as their bodies exploded into dust. From where the thralls once stood he saw Vakarian, fully clothed in his "armor". Scipis had seen him around the base and he felt suspicious towards the strangely armored turian who wandered around the base laughing randomly and muttering strange things to himself but in that moment he could have lain his forehead to his. "Vakarian." He shouted.

Vakarian ran over and knelt by Scipis' side. "First piece of advice. In every pack of thralls there's about ten to fifteen who'll sneak off and try to flank you." He took a look over the sandbag before continuing, "Or lie in wait for a chance to ambush you." Scipis stared at Vakarian's gun as he reloaded it. He couldn't help but ask.

"Why are you using such primitive equipment?" An important development in any species military development was the transfer from small magaziness and bullets to the use of small shards of metal propelled by the mass effect with thousands of "rounds" per "magazine". To Scipis' surprise Garrus chuckled.

"I know it looks pretty primitive and the ammo's a pain in the ass but this thing has tricks of its own." It was then that he finally looked over the gun. It was painted blue and red, with a long barrel, and the magazine right in front of grip and trigger. Scipis, and he thought it was crazy the second it entered his head, could sense something strange from the weapon. Something he couldn't explain.

He snapped back to reality as he heard the shrieks that signaled another wave. Vakarian looked over the sandbag again before turning his face to Scipis', "Okay, I'm going to go out there. You guys cover me and watch my back for any thralls."

"Wha-" Scipis said before he saw Vakarian leap over the sandbags and run towards the enemy lines. He stared open-mouthed after him before shaking his head and shouting his orders.

As the battle began anew, Scipis thought Vakarian was out of his mind. But that began to change as he saw Vakarian fight. The turians were, as a whole, a practical people. They were not showy in combat. They were leery of people who treated fighting as some kind of artform that could have a master. But the way Vakarian fought…

He moved smoothly throughout the battlefield never stopping just moving. His assault rifle seemed to dance in his hand. His blade never dealt a non-lethal blow. Each throwing knife found its mark in nothing less than a hive skull. If Scipis and his squad had been anything but practical turians then they would have called it beautiful. They were not distracted though. They supported Vakarian as they had been told and each one killed more than their share of Hive that day. They did not keep track of time but soon the last Hive had fallen Scipis could feel that joy and relief that came from living through a battle when he felt the rumbling.

The rumbling was followed up by a roar and Scipis felt his heart stop when he saw, not five feet from the large hole the Hive had come through, a massive fist punch upward from the ground. He saw it rise from the ground and he could do nothing but stand there and gape. It was as tall as a small building and its coloring reminded Scipis of an infected bruise even though it was obvious to him that the beast was strong and healthy. There were numerous growths on its head that looked to him as if they were cancerous. Scipis finally came to consciousness when he saw the creature's head begin to glow. "Get down," he yelled as the world lit up with light. Heat and noise joined together in hellish dissonance around him and faded as quickly as it came.

Scipis opened his eyes and knew it was a miracle that he'd survived. He looked around at his squad. Some were okay but many were laying on the ground clutching at their wounds and burns. Some lay still. With some difficulty, Scipis turned his head towards the monster and he saw Vakarian rising from a prone position and the abomination stomping towards him. Scipis' eyes widened and he yelled as Vakarian to get out of there. Vakarian's head turned slightly at the message but to Scipis' horror he turned towards the beast and he began to walk towards it. It occurred to him he was about to see this turian die.

That was when Vakarian raised his hand to the sky. Scipis thought it was the act of a madman before he saw sunlight erupt from his hand. Scipis couldn't believe his eyes when he saw the light focus itself into a glowing golden gun in Vakarian's hand. He didn't react at all to the impossible weapon. No, his gaze was locked on the monstrosity before him. He never lost the rhythm of his slow stride.

Scipis paled as he saw the creature's head bring its hands together but still Vakarian showed no reaction. Another roar ripped itself from the monster's throat and to Scipis time slowed to a crawl. Vakarian lowered his gun at the monsters head. The monster brought his fists down. Vakarian fired.

Scipis stared open mouthed as he saw a golden streak, which reminded him of a shooting star, crash against the creature's skull. It reeled backwards on its feet and Scipis could see a soft golden glow begin to shine from the spot where it had been struck. Vakarian fired again and this shot struck the creature's chest. The glow began to turn into a bright light as it spread across the creature's body and it began to scream in pain. Vakarian fired a third shot which went through the stomach. Soon, the whole of the giant's body was as bright as a sun and its roar could be heard for miles away.

But soon the roar quieted and its body froze and in front of Scipis' eyes it began to disintegrate in the wind each spec glowing a gentle orange. To his surprise it was beautiful. Each grain looked like a tiny star carried on the wind. In a few moments, all that was left of the abomination was a small pile of still glowing embers on the ground. He looked at Vakarian's hand and saw his gun was gone.

Before Scipis knew it, he'd walked to Vakarian's side. He found the words slipping out his mouth before he realized he was speaking them. "How-" he began, "How did you do that?"

Vakarian was staring at the hand that had held the sun-colored gun when he answered, "The humans-" he paused before continuing, "The people that took us in. They discovered something inside people. Everybody's got it but only a few people can harness it. Use it as a weapon. They taught me how." Scipis was about to ask what he meant by "something inside people" when Vakarian's little drone appeared in a flash of blue light above Vakarian's shoulder.

"Garrus." It said, its voice sounding like that of a female. Vakarian took it into his hand.

"What is it, Solana?" he answered. In front of the drone's "face" there appeared a holographic screen with a number of signals and readings that Scipis could not make heads or tails out of.

"During the battle," "Solana" said, "I read numerous Hive signals underground behind the Ogre." Scipis' heart leaped inside his chest and he pointed his assault rifle towards the hole. He saw the drone "shake" its head, "No, that's what I'm talking about. Halfway through the battle the signals started disappearing. By the time the Ogre emerged there was only one down there."

Vakarian made a "hmmm" noise before closing his eyes. He stood there for an increasingly awkward minute before his mandibles fluttered in a smile and he walked towards the hole. He stopped in front of it and kneeled down. He reached his hand down into the hole and Scipis felt his heart skip a beat when he saw another hand clasp onto Vakarian's. He fumbled with his assault rifle before Vakarian pulled his arm upwards and he saw that it wasn't the hand of a thrall or some other Hive soldier. It looked like an asari in the same kind of armor as Vakarian with a tan cloak covered in stitching. He turned and lowered her gently to the ground.

The stranger put her hands on her hips, tilted her head, and said, "Having a busy day, Garrus?" Vakarian's left mandible spread in the turian equivalent of a smirk.

"Sort of," he said, "but it's looking up now that you're here." The stranger chuckled as she took her helmet off. Scipis was surprised to see that the stranger, while looking like an asari, was a species he had never seen before with red fur on her head and a pale shade of skin.

She smiled and said, "Oooh, Mr. Vakarian, oooh," before bringing her lips to Vakarian's left mandible. Scipis recalled that that was something asari did with their bond-oh. He blushed and turned his attention to the rather large hole that the Hive had come out of. He listened as they continued to talk.

"So," Vakarian began, "the Consensus decided to-"

"Yes," the stranger answered, "the Consensus has voted to send Guardians into Citadel Space to fight the Hive."

"Spirits and Light," he said. The relief in his voice was palpable, "I was not looking forward to the four of us doing this on our own." Scipis heard a metallic clunk as in the periphery of his sight he saw the stranger giving a small slap to Vakarian's chest.

"I don't care how the Consensus would have voted. You know Kaidan and Ashley would have marched out here for you." She laid her hand on the side of his face where the burn scar was. "And I sure as hell would have for you and Tali."

"Shepard-"

"Uh-uh, not the time for this and we both know it. I've got to talk to whoever's in charge. I've got to get this info to them so we can prepare for what's next." She chuckled and Scipis heard her murmur, "The first full host since Mare Imbrium. Never thought we'd see the day." Vakarian nodded and walked back towards the Command Center and made gestured to her to join his side.

"Come on. The Primarch's this way." He said and in the blink of an eye they were both gone. Scipis stared at where they'd disappeared. He looked at the still burning embers of the monster the enemy had unleashed upon his men. He could see the medics tend to the wounded. He saw the members of his squad still able to fight emerge from the rubble of their defenses and wait for his orders.

He breathed deeply before saying, "Come on. Help me dig in and trap this hole." The remains of his squad nodded. They'd all seen things that would haunt them with questions for the rest of their lives. But they were turians. And there was work to be done.
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"So," Fedorian said, "the attack was a probe." The Command Center was abuzz with activity in the aftermath of the attack on the southern defenses. Garrus had warned them about the Hive's skill at the creation of underground fortifications and avenues of attack but the speed and silence they had achieved with this operation had caught their soldiers completely off-guard. Already, officer and grunt alike were scrambling to update their defenses to compensate for this new dimension of warfare.

"Half a probe, sir." Said the human known as Shepard.

"Half?" he asked. He'd been surprised at first meeting Shepard what with the resemblance to the asari. It increased when he'd compared the stories Garrus had told about his "fireteam leader" with the slightly nervous young woman ahead of him, he'd learn later that she hadn't known that the "highest ranked officer" in the area was the head of state when she'd requested that Garrus bring her to him and talking to a foreign ruler had caused her to be self-conscious. But his surprise gave way to a certain degree of respect when Shepard gave him an extensive readout of Hive forces currently surrounding the city and her own nervousness receded to be replaced by confidence in the face of a grave threat.

"Yes, sir, half. Half of its purpose was to probe the defenses. The other half was to shatter the defenses if they got lucky enough to breakthrough." Shepard responded, "The force they sent was small enough to not be worth much in the grand scheme of things but large enough to do a lot of damage to the forces of this place in case they face less resistance than expected."

She reached inside of a small pouch on her belt and pulled out the broken remains of what looked to be three small rocks colored a sickly green color with iron bands cross crossing their surfaces. "These are what the Hive use for flares." Shepard explained, "They were probably instructed to set them off if they got far enough into the city to cause a complete breakdown in the defenses." She put the stones back into her pocket, "I found them on a knight near the back of their column. I think he was their commander."

Fedorian brought his hand to his chin, "To expend so many soldiers for a probe strike though…" While the lack of actual corpses made an accurate count of enemy dead damn near impossible; the estimations he had gotten from analysts that'd seen the footage of the battle numbered the dead in the early 100s, most of them the brittle and weak thralls, and that was before considering the number that Shepard had ambushed in the tunnels before they could join the main fight.

Garrus spoke up, "I warned you, sir. The Hive are explosive breeders."

"Like the krogan before the Genophage." Fedorian said as he shook his head.

"Worse, sir." Garrus said, "The krogan were bad but the Hive take warfare to a level even the krogan would find disturbing."

Shepard nodded, "Yeah, our friend Wrex hates the Hive. Says they creep him the fuck out." Her eyes widened when she remembered who she was talking to, "His words not mine, sir."

Fedorian closed his eyes and massaged his forehead. "At least we have reinforcements to help." He opened his eyes and looked at Shepard how many do we have. "Five-hundred Guardians." Seeing the look that must have appeared on his face Shepard held her hand in the "hold it, hear me out" position he had grown wearily accustomed to in his time as Primarch and continued, "Sir, I know that's a low number but I swear to you that each of those is a force multiplier by themselves. Due to our circumstances," she lowered her hand and straightened out her uniform before assuming as professional a pose as she could, "we believe in a lot of quality over quantity." Fedorian stared at her before turning his gaze to Vakarian, who seemed deep in thought.

Fedorian had seen the footage of Garrus on the battlefield, in particular the last moments when he summoned the mysterious weapon that slew that story-and-a-half-tall monstrosity. If each of these "Guardians" had those kind of abilities… He looked at Shepard. "Well, it's what we've got. I'm going to need information on human tactics and-"

"Where are the rest of them going?"

Fedorian turned his head towards Garrus. "A Consensus-approved Host is made up of one-thousand Guardians if not more. Where are the rest going, Shepard?"

Shepard ran her hand through her hair and sighed, "Five-hundred is half the host that's coming here. The other half is on its way to a planet called Aswe." Fedorian felt his heart drop into his stomach.

"Aswe, that's-"

Shepard nodded gravely.

"The Hive have invaded the Asari Republics."
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So, that's Interlude 1. I hope that the other Interludes I write are longer than this one but we'll see what it comes to. There's probably more flaws in this than usual because its late where I am when I finally got this finished and ready for the usual typo checks but I need to sleep before doing another one.

So, NEXT TIME "ON EACH STAR IS A POINT OF LIGHT": Shepard and a small team of volunteers perform a strike on the remains of the Far-Sight. But who are the two strangers who arrive shortly after? And why is one angry at what she sees?
 
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Good chapter. I wait for the next chapter with the same amount of anticipation as I did this one.

Does Garus have the Suros Regime (year 2 version)? That's the only blue and red auto rifle I can think of.
 
So, I take it Liara is at Aswe, then? Looking forward both to the "how we got here" chapters and the chapters set in the present.
 
Ha! You got one of my intentions early. Yeah, it takes basic knowledge of hive and asari beliefs and backgrounds to know that everything about the asari would drive the hive to foaming at the mouth (well, more than usual).

The asari believe in a harmonious universe where peace is the natural order of things.

The hive believe in a cruel universe where peace is a lie once meant to keep the hive from their destiny.

The asari believe that the key to the perfect society is cooperation between many different kinds of peoples that fuels the slow natural progression of the world towards perfection.

The hive believe that they will reach perfection when they've killed everything in the universe not strong enough to stand up to them.

The asari evolved on their peaceful homeworld with special powers (biotics) and long life spans.

The hive's original selves (the krill people) evolved on the destroyed remnants of their homeworld which became part of a larger Death World and lived at best ten years, and that's if one of their many predators didn't get them.

So, yeah, the hive are going to do their best to rip the asari's collective heads off before pissing down the holes.

Edit: Sorry forgot, Garrus' auto rifle is the "For the People", which was a damn fine weapon back during Year One.
 
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I like Garus moment of "oh everything I was about to fight has died. Must've been Shepard."
 
Are Taken King subclasses going to be appearing? I know Stormcallers were a lost art but the City had Nightstalkers and the Sunbreakers are hanging out with Osiris on Mercury. Also, is everyones subclass set or do they switch between them like the player character does?
 
The hive's original selves (the krill people) evolved on the destroyed remnants of their homeworld which became part of a larger Death World and lived at best ten years, and that's if one of their many predators didn't get them.

As far as I know they are still the Krill.

Hive is just what they are called now, like how the Fallen are actually Eliksni.

Are Taken King subclasses going to be appearing? I know Stormcallers were a lost art but the City had Nightstalkers and the Sunbreakers are hanging out with Osiris on Mercury. Also, is everyones subclass set or do they switch between them like the player character does?

Stormcallers aren't a lost art. Its just rare for someone to be able to wield that power. Much like its rare to see a Hunter brave enough to touch the Void and become a Nightstalker.

And what would the Sunbreakers even do? They're shits who ran out on the city because Zavala said some shit to them. Since then they've had no contact with the city at all until the Player comes along.

Its doubtful they'd ever come along simply cause there's no way to contact them.
 
Subclasses are mostly set. There are rituals for changing classes but they are lengthy and difficult trials like what we see from the Stormcaller and Sunbreaker missions and most Guardians feel more comfortable to stick with the class they were "born" into. I felt it would go a long way to make individual Guardians more unique in an actual storytelling perspective if they didn't share all the same abilities.

Taken King subclasses are appearing from the start. There are numerous Nightstalkers. There are a small number Stormcallers in the City who've survived to the present day but they lack the ability to teach (The class abilities being difficult to pass on and the few remaining Stormcallers having hit that unfortunate stage of Warlockyness where they stay in their studies and never leave.)

The Sunbreakers are a complicated subject. Saladin shows that there are a handful of Titans who have Sunbreaker type abilities without being members of their order. To say anything else might be spoilery so I'm going to put them under spoilers so that I can promote more discussion in the thread among the people familiar with the lore. It should be noted this is kind of a spinfoil hat theory and might not make it into the story depending on how the lore continues to develop.

Zavala might be an ex-member of the Sunbreaker Order who abandoned it to join the City. Its could be why he was so opposed to them signing a contract with the City as his experiences as a a member of their ranks have caused him to distrust them and why they hate his guts, besides helping to screw them out of a contract with the City.

If you're wondering where I'm getting this I got it from a discussion on the Ghost Stories podcast, which I recommend to anyone interested in the lore despite the fact that I think there's a little bit of "talking out his ass" from one of the hosts, and I can discuss it more in private discussion, although I'll probably need time to check my notes.

There's also Yang Xiao Long but that depends on if I ever write that "Fireteam RWBY" idea that functions as a side-story to this one. And that requires a lot of exposition.

As far as I know they are still the Krill.

Hive is just what they are called now, like how the Fallen are actually Eliksni.

How I've always seen it is that the differences between what they were and what they became was so great that The Hive consider themselves The Hive. In fact, I imagine that if anyone called a Hive( what is the singular for that?) a Krill it would end with the perpetrator dead after hours of the most unendurable torture imaginable.

Despite the piracy, banditry, tyranny, and corruption a small part of the Fallen still try to cling to what they were before the Whirlwind destroyed their world. I mean, they still worship the Traveler. The Hive have abandoned the Krill. They would face oblivion before going back to that.

Besides there's precedence for this from those who serve the Dark. Remember, nobody speaks of Dredgen Yor's original name.

And what would the Sunbreakers even do? They're shits who ran out on the city because Zavala said some shit to them. Since then they've had no contact with the city at all until the Player comes along.

The way I interpreted the lore here was this:

1- Osiris, near the end of his career so he's starting to get a lot of pushback from other powers in the City, contracts the Sunbreakers to join the City's forces. They'll be paid constantly in a more traditional manner than the way the City Guardians are rewarded, which tends to be with a of mix glory, honor, money, and equipment.

2-Zavala and many others take umbrage with this and this may have been the straw that broke the camel's back and caused the final showdown between the Speaker and Osiris that caused Osiris and his followers to leave the City (Might have been something else too but I imagine a lot of people were unhappy with Osiris hiring a mercenary order.)

3- The Sunbreakers, already a little pissed that the guy who contracted them got kicked from the City, check to see if their contract has fallen through.

4- The Speaker, convinced by Zavala about the untrustworthiness of a group of Risen mercs (which makes more sense when you think about the role of the Risen in the Faction Wars especially when you have my ideas about the Speaker's true identity), breaks the contract and tells the Sunbreakers to leave the City.

5- The Sunbreakers, truly pissed to all hell now, pack up and leave with the City on their blacklist which is helped by Zavala telling them to never come back.

6- Osiris comes and tells them he still wants to hire them, this time as his own personal protection/strike force.

And the rest was history.

Edit: Jesus my memory is horrible. For the sake of the story, there are a small handful of Guardians who don't fall under the traditional sub-class lines. They're super rare though and if one is seen it is a big deal.
 
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Its in their grimoire card.

Some Titan orders predate the City, born of a darker time, when Light was an untamed weapon. The Sunbreakers brought honor to the wild, never seeking the safety of the City. Bound by an oath, they live as mercenaries, seeking battles and alliances beyond the Walls. Now the Light of their fire has at last found rank among the City.

Wield the Hammer of Sol with honor, Titan, it is a thing of legend, both past and future.

Edit: Oh overlooked the "Before they left" part of your message. Well, its an interpretation thing I suppose.
 
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Book 2: Ch1: In the Wreckage Pt. 1
Book 2: Pilgrimage

Chapter 1: In the Wreckage Pt.1

Garrus looked through the pair of binoculars that Shepard had given him. "Looks like there are a couple of -uh- dregs and vandals around the front.

"Good," he heard Shepard over his omnitool, "that's a lockdown team. Means they're waiting for a higher up to come before they start salvaging. They probably haven't even gotten around to mapping out the insides yet. Do you see the bikes I told you about?" Garrus examined the area around the ship until he saw six large grav-bikes scattered around the area, each one looking like it was made of scrap and held together by tape and prayers.

"Yeah, twelve."

"Right," he heard Shepard say, "knowing Fallen tactics, half of them will leave on six bikes with two per bike when the distraction happens."

"So, that makes one for each of us."

"Negative," Shepard said, "I already have a bike."

Garrus stopped looking through the binoculars for a moment as he squinted in thought. "Where are you-"

"Not important. We'll tie one to another bike and use it to carry more supplies. Anything else?" Garrus replied negative. "Okay, then. We wait in radio silence until we get the signal."

"What's the signal?" Garrus asked.

"Oh trust me," Shepard said, "you'll know it when you see it." Garrus heard the small static click that came from the shutting off of comms and set his binoculars into the pack each volunteer had been given to carry supplies. Out of the corner of his eye, he saw Wrex.

"So?" Wrex asked.

"We wait for some kind of signal." Garrus said as he went to sit down at the base of the tree, careful to choose a spot where he could keep an eye on the ship. Wrex huffed before doing much the same.

"Shepard's 'fireteam' better come through." He said. It was a brief pause before Garrus spoke.

"I hope so too."

-----

Two hours before, the crew was scattered around the cave, lit by omnitool lights and a small bonfire, forming a loose circle with some standing or some sitting. Tali found herself sitting near the middle of the circle where Shepard and the Captain were planning how they were going to get most of their supplies back.

"So," T'Bayla said, "This is the plan." She pointed at Shepard who was crouched down by her "bed" interacting with a holographic map being transmitted onto the ground by her ghost. "You've contacted other…"

"Guardians." Shepard replied.

"-to stage a distraction that'll cause the 'Fallen', which I think is a little melodramatic as a name."

"You haven't had to live with them." Shepard replied.

"To abandon the ship to support their forces. While that's happening we'll send out small teams of three to go out and strip the escape pods of all their supplies." She gave a long look at Wrex, Garrus, and three remaining security officers who'd volunteered for this mission. "And you and a small strike team will go find the Long-Sight and strip it of anything useful."

"And?" Shepard said with expectation. T'Bayla grumbled.

"Do we have to completely gut my ship?" and at this point the cave erupted into murmurs and whispered objections. When drafting the plan, Shepard had spoken of the need to obliterate the ship's critical systems to keep the Fallen from them.

Shepard stood up and nodded in the manner of a diplomat beginning to lose her patience. "I know. It sucks. That place was your home. It helped you survive. I-it's a resting place for those who were lost." She made a circle in the middle of her chest using her hands, which seemed like a sigil of respect for the dead, before lowering them back to her sides. "But if the things you say are true then that ship is full of tech that the Devils and Kings could salvage to increase their power." She stood up while shaking her head. She'd explained what she knew of the so-called "Fallen", who were divided into political units called "Houses" and whose economy and political life was based on raiding and pirating and of the "Kings" and "Devils" who infested the planet, "There's no way we can strip the ship of everything and I can't let the Fallen get any kind of edge over the City. No matter how small it might be."

T'Bayla sighed and Tali eyes drifted to the ground. Shepard had a point. Tali didn't want to be responsible for strengthening a bunch of pirates. Her gaze returned to T'Bayla and Shepard. "And you can't call your superiors to send someone to grab it?" T'Bayla said the sorrow showing in her eyes.

Shepard shook her head, "They'd advocate the same solution. We don't have the time, equipment, or non-hostile territory to recover the whole ship safely before we'd have a bunch of Fallen ships come down on our heads." She laid a hand on T'Bayla's shoulder, the one that still had a complete arm attached to it. "I'm sorry. I am. But I have to for the sake of the City."

Around the room, Tali saw crewmembers, mostly turians but some others, nod sadly the resignation showing through their eyes. Duty in the face of sacrifice. Shepard had been wise to stress that element of it. "That's not going to stop you from lifting the schematics from the computers." T'Bayla responded her eyes never leaving Shepard's face.

Shepard sighed, "Is there anything classified in there?" Tali could hear the unasked question, "Is there anything you can't show without being accused of a crime back home?"

T'Bayla stayed silent for a moment before responding, "No, we're a civilian ship with a dime a dozen design." She smiled and Tali could tell it was awkward compared to the self-assured smiles she used to wear, "You can tell by how the black box is a piece of crap." Shepard chuckled before becoming serious again.

"Look the situation sucks all around but when we get to the City those schematics will go a long way to convincing the higher ups to grant you asylum." Tali could see the small shakes of the head from the crew and the exhaustion in their eyes. That morning they'd all thought it would be a few hours to find sanctuary in the city. Now, from what Shepard told them, it was going to be a three month trek to its gates. Four month trek if the weather went bad and the Fallen forced them to change course.

Shepard saw the crew's reaction and gave the Captain a look.

T'Bayla nodded, "Yeah," she said projecting her voice so that everyone heard her, "Everyone not heading out better get to sleep. Everyone else, come forward and try to keep it down." The silence and promptness with which they did so was a sign of the sheer exhaustion that afflicted the crew. Tali saw Liara, who was not among those participating in the operation, staring at her from the other end of the room. Tali gave her a little wave and Liara waved back with her good arm sadly before joining the others.

As the meeting wore on Tali looked at the entrance and saw signs the brighter sort of night that came in the early hours after sunset. "Engineer."

Tali's attention snapped back to the Captain, "Yes, mam."

"Do you understand the plan?" The Captain asked staring at the holographic map on the cave floor.

Tali nodded. Yes, of course she did. Tali felt a small weight in her chest when T'Bayla handed her a small brick of seeming plastic that Shepard told them was a light-to-mid grade demolition explosive. She understood but the fleet-educated part of her that told her to salvage anything that was of future use kept scolding her for planning to destroy the escape pods.

"You alright, Zorah?" The Captain said in as gentle manner as she could. Tali nodded before sliding the explosives in a small pack and checking her new sidearm that Wrex had given her. "Alright then," T'Bayla said, "All of you. Don't do anything stupid. In and out. That's all. Got that?" A chorus of "yes, mam"s was heard from amongst them. T'Bayla nodded, "Okay then," she pointed at the five operatives that were going with Shepard, "Listen to everything she says. She knows the area, she knows the opponent, so she's speaking with my authority while you're out there. You got that?"

Garrus, Wrex, and three of the remaining security officers each responded with a "yes mam". It was at this point Shepard put her helmet on, raised the hood of her cloak, and spoke, "Alright, Strike is a go. Let's move out, people."

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Garrus stared in the direction of the ship. It had been a half an hour since Shepard had called for radio silence and he was thankful for the recon training he had received during his stint in the army. He'd be going out of his mind otherwise. He could tell Wrex was beginning to reach the end of his patience though.

"What is this damn signal supposed to look like?" He said in a loud whisper.

Garrus shrugged before saying, "Don't know, she just said we'd know it when we saw it."

Wrex shook his head, "Well what the hell will-

In the distance, a gigantic plume of flame erupted from the base of one of the hills that surrounded the valley. "Down!" Garrus heard himself shout. Above his prone form, he felt a rush of air sweep over his body. He brought his head up and after his ears stopped ringing he realized he could hear the sound of Wrex laughing.

"Okay, I'll admit. That is a damn fine distraction." Garrus shook his head out of the stupor the explosion and reached down to practically rip the binoculars out of his pack. He looked down at the entrance to the ship and saw the Fallen guards rushing about. Soon, their captain rushed towards the bikes, half the force following him. In the course of a minute they were speeding away on six bikes. For the next few minutes, it was silent save for the chattering and scrambling around from the remaining Fallen guards. Garrus heard a crackling over the comm before Shepard's voice cut through bright and clear.

"On the count of three." she said as Garrus raised his hand up for Wrex to see, his two fingers and thumb displayed. Wrex nodded and prepared his shotgun as Shepard said, "One," and Garrus folded in his thumb. "Two." Garrus lowered his right finger.

"Three. Now!"

Garrus grabbed his assault rifle and launched forward, Wrex by his side, and then it was chaos.

*****
Looks like another two parter. This time its a mix of having a hard time writing the "briefing" and a big addition I made to the second half so you're probably going to have to wait next week for it.

Besides that, I don't have much to say.
 
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The story is looking good so far except for like, one itsy bitsy teeny tiny insignificant but ever-so-crucial tiny little detail.




Magazine.

Sorry, pet peeve.
At this point clip, even though technically inaccurate, is a valid term for a magazine due to the fact that a significant portion of english speakers will understand what you're talking about. It's the same way table tennis is called ping pong despite the fact that ping pong is merely a brand of table tennis gear. The important part of language is understanding, not getting bogged down in specifics when not neccessary.
 
Book 2-Ch 1- Into the Wreckage Pt 2
Chapter 1: Into the Wreckage Part 2

Tali's group reached the pod a few minutes before the so-called distraction blew up a not-insignificant section of the nearby hills. Once they saw the explosion, they converged on the escape pod and worked as quickly as possible to strip it of anything useful. First priority was medicine. The specter of unknown diseases on an alien planet mixed with the injuries suffered during the crash and ensuing battle having been well-addressed during the meeting.

Second priority was food; dextro food in particular. Shepard told them that Earth life was based on levo amino-acids so while the salarian and asari crewmembers could, in a worst case scenario, survive on foraging and hunting, which Shepard offered to help with, before being able to eat all the no-doubt-lovely human cuisine they could find once they hit the City, the dextro crewmembers were much less lucky. On the way to the City, they would have to continue to eat the rations they'd eaten on the way here.

Once in the City, which Shepard had told them had acres upon acres of farmland within its walls, they would use the standard issue seed packets, which every ship had an abundance of in case of a crash scenario, to grow their own food. Thanks to various advances in agriculture discovered by multiple space-faring species, these seeds would have a high enough yield to be able to feed a small town once the rations ran out.

That was the one good point of this for the dextros, Tali thought. Multiple laws passed since quarian first contact and expanded after turian inclusion in the Council demanded that no matter the crew ratio each ship having both dextro and levo crewmates must have equal amount of rations for both in case of emergency. The compact nature of space rations meaning storage space was not a problem. Only a third of the original crew had been dextro, all turian except for Tali, the rest being salarians, asari, and Wrex. With the casualties they'd taken that meant that there were more than enough dextro rations to go around for the foreseeable future.

Tali shook her head as she took a pistol off the corpse of a salarian she recognized as one of the security officers. The third most important things were weapons and the small metal slabs that served as ammunition magazines for their guns. As she put the pistol in a spare holster she'd been given for the op she heard noise from the lookout, a female turian, they'd placed outside.

"Bikes! Looks like Fallen!" the guard said in a loud whisper.

The leader of their party, a maiden asari with dark blue skin and markings dotting her nose, turned from the food stocks she was grabbing, "Dammit! Light's off and no noise." Everyone nodded and with a series of clicks the pod became dark. It was quiet for several minutes before the lookout poked her head into the pod and spoke.

"It's clear."

A series of quiet gasps ran through the pod as crewmembers stopped holding their breaths. Tali was among them. In a few more minutes the pod was picked clean. Tali set the explosives she'd been given inside the pod and on both of its sides. Once done, she turned and ran towards the others in her group. "Timer's set?" the leader asked. Tali nodded, a half-an-hour and the pod would be nothing but scrap and dust. "Alright, then." The group began to slowly file away into the dark of the night. Tali started to follow before stopping for a moment to look in the direction where the Far-Sight crashed. After a moment, she tried to give herself a calming breath before retreating into the night.

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The metal floor of the ship clanged as Shepard ran as fast as she could. There were many things that Guardians could be thankful for: Enhanced strength, superhuman senses, an instinctual understanding of war, regeneration of wounds, the ability to go without sleep or food, an immunity to most toxins, the fact that alcohol was not among those toxins, but the one any Hunter was truly thankful for was the ability to run. She slid to a stop as she saw the door that, she was told, led to the bridge. Her ghost appeared and began to scan the small console on the wall beside it.

"Well," he said, "it's a good thing there's still a little power left in the ship's emergency systems." After another moment of scanning, the door opened and Shepard grabbed her ghost and ran inside. As she rushed into the room she scanned it over looking for the place where a captain might sit. The closer the system they hacked was to the center of everything the faster the hack would be and every second counted when trying to out salvage the Fallen. She saw a slightly raised seat with a small metal plate coming out of one of the arms. Seeing this, Shepard smiled. How much would she bet that that plate was part of a holographic interface?

She released her ghost from her hand who upon being released shook himself slightly and glared at her saying, "I'd have thought I taught you to be gentler than that, young lady," before rolling its eye and floating to the chair and interfacing with its computer. As he did this Shepard accessed her comm.

"Shepard. I'm at the bridge and have begun lifting the schematics. Status?"

She heard a small crackle on the comms before she heard Vakarian's voice, "Vakarian here. The armory was still stocked. Me and Wrex are dragging the crates out."

Shepard ran through the calculations in her head, "Are the crates going to be light enough for the bikes?" Fallen bikes tended to run and gum and prayers.

"Affrimative," Vakarian responded, "I was able to rig them with mass effect lifts from the boarding equipment. We should be able to strap them to the sides."

Shepard rubbed her temples. Kid was smart but she didn't like trusting technology she wasn't familiar with. Nothing for it, "Okay, rush them out and help Officer Sokir get the food."

"No need, Shepard" she heard Sokir say, "We're already loaded up and ready." Shepard was about to ask how they did so before she remembered that Sokir's partner was an "asari" security officer by the name of Arturos who, alongside others, had the ablilty to use "biotics". Once again, Shepard wondered how the City would react to the crew of the Long-Sight. She shook her head. She could worry about that later.

"Affirmative, Sokir. Dexirius, status report?" Shepard said.

The comm crackled before a metal-tinged voice came through, "We've got half of the medical supplies on the bikes. It'll take us another ten minutes before we've got the rest ready for transport."

"Understood," Shepard said, "Keep me posted." She turned to her ghost, "What've we got?"

"Give me a few more minutes and I'll have everything." Shepard nodded before she took one of the explosives from her transmat storage and began to place them around the room. The ones she gave to her own team were of a significantly higher yield than the ones she gave to the pod teams. It took her only a few minutes with each one. As she did so she kept in contact with the rest of the strike team. Vakarian and Urdnot had just wired the armory and mass effect core to blow before getting the ammunition out and were just beginning to put them on the extra bike. Sokir and his partner took their early finish as an opportunity to wire the engines for detonation. Dexirius was forced to make multiple trips as the crew had prepared a large stockpile of medical supplies for their expedition.

A few minutes later, Shepard was standing on top of one of the consoles wiring an explosive to the ceiling when she heard her ghost say, "Okay, I've got it I-" He stopped before widening his eye, "Oh no."

Shepard rolled her eyes as she prepared another explosive, "Here we go…"

"I just got something from the Fallen battle-net. The communications from their base just sent out an evacuation signal. The captain of the lockdown team just gave an order to come back here so they can strip the place and run."

Shepard cursed before speaking through her comm, "Bad news, the Fallen are coming back."

"Of course they are," She heard Wrex mutter, "We're ready to go."

"As are we." said Sokir.

"I need a few more minutes to get the rest of the medicine out." Dexirius reported.

Shepard shook her head in frustration, "Sokir, send Arturos inside to help Dexirius and get the bikes ready. I'll be out in a moment." She set the last explosive to detonate by trigger. If they got lucky, they'd get out before the Fallen got back and she could bring the whole place crashing down around their heads. She heard the small beep that signaled that the explosive was ready for detonation. She jumped down from the console she was standing on. She saw the small flash of light that signaled her ghost trans-matting himself into her suit's systems as she ran out into the rest of the ship.

A few minutes later, she ran out of the breach she had entered though to see everyone else getting onto their bikes. "Ander-"

"Already on it." Her ghost said through her helmet. In a flash of blue light, her sparrow was trans-matted by her side. As she was climbing onto it she saw the rest of her party staring at her like she'd…summoned a bike from out of nowhere. It occurred to her that she'd better explain trans-matting to them once the Pilgrimage got started. "Okay, stop gawking. Let's get out of here before they show up." At her words, the others began to rev up the stolen pikes. It was a good thing Shepard taught them how the pikes worked as they were securing the outside of the ship. "Okay, on three we go. One…" A few minutes later, all that was left of their presence were dust trails.

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Vrothrir, Devil-Captain, felt his hands tighten when he and his crew found the burning remains of the wreck they'd been ordered to guard. Accursed Light-Stealers. Damn them and damn the Thief-City. He felt the pain from both of his lower hands from the sheer tightness of his grip and in his mind he saw the burning orange color of the blade that took his original lower arms.

He'd been a stealth vandal during the attempt to reclaim the Great Machine. In the battle the humans called Twilight Gap. His squad was ordered to sneak across the Wall to discover another place where they could force a breach. But the Light-Stealers spotted them. He alone returned, burnt and broken, to tell the tale. Solkis ordered him docked. To Vrothrir, the humiliation hurt worse than the blade.

But Vrothrir fought hard. Fought hard and survived. Solkis never would forget his failure but soon that didn't matter. A Light-Stealer, the one called Saint-14, found him. Found him and killed him. Vrothrir heard the news. Fought harder. Fought smarter. Soon he regained his title of Vandal and was allowed to grow his arms back. But Vrothrir knew now. Knew he had to keep going so he would never be docked again. Became Captain under new Kell.

And now it was worthless. All of it. Someone would be blamed for this. It might be him, docked again and not be able to climb back up this time. He felt his grip tighten even further. No. No, he would not let that happen. He saw someone approach him out of the corner of his eye.

Ysatres, Devil-Vandal, best friend. She was cunning she could help.

"The pikes are gone." She said, "We found the others. Their corpses were piled up a small ways from here." Vrothrir felt nothing from this. It was typical when one was dealing with Light-Stealers. They came. Eliksni died.

"The pikes…" Vrothrir thought about that before an idea came to him. The pikes tended to be built from what scrap eliksni could scrounge up. Not safe but danger was constant ever since the elkisni survived the Whirlwind. What was a little more? Pike energy bleed off was high. High enough to track. Vrothrir knew, he had tracked pikes stolen by rivals of Nerlek before and knew how to do it. But however much he hated them, he knew Light-Stealers weren't stupid. They'd abandon the pikes before long. But there would be some sign left of their passing. He looked toward the horizon. He'd need help.

"How long has it been since we heard from Nerlek, Devil-Baron?" he asked Ysatres.

"It's been hours since he led the raiding party out to find survivors." She answered him, "We have not heard from him since."

They looked at each other. "He is dead." They said at the same time.

"Then we are no longer beholden to him." said Vrothrir. He stroked his chin before speaking, "Are our comms still up?" Ysatres nodded and Vrothrir continued, "Send a stealth signal to Novas."

Ysatres looked at him surprise, "Novas, Devil-Baroness. Are you sure?" Novas was the Baroness of a group of raiders called the Baphomet Blades, who'd been assigned to raid and eventually conquer the area the humans knew as the Steppe, a position earned when they helped Riksis, Devil-Archon, take the Baikonur Cosmodrome. Novas had been one of the Devil-Nobility who'd fought Nerlek for status and ether. It was uncertain she would even give them the time of day compared to someone who was allied or even neutral to Nerlek. But the Blades were experts at tracking and fighting enemy forces on the move.

"Yes, we need her help. And we have something she'll want." He motioned towards the ship, "Where to find new tech."

Ysatres looked at the ground in thought "It will be risky." She replied, "She might kill us once we tell her."

Vrothrir shook his head and held his upper right hand out in a pointing gesture, "Not if we don't point her in direction of crew. And once we find them," His hand curled into a fist, "We prove ourselves indispensable. Besides…"

Ysatres looked at him, "What?"

Vrothrir could feel his mouth move into the eliskni version of a smile, "Nerlek is dead. New baron must be appointed." He looked into Ysatres' eyes, "How does Vrothrir, Devil-Baron, sound?"

Vrothrir could see Ysatres' eyes turn from shock to contemplation to glee.

"It sounds good, old friend." She clasped her two hands to his shoulder, "It sounds very good indeed.

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The bare beginnings of sunlight was cresting over the mountains when they made it back to the cave. The second they stopped the strike team began to strip the supplies from the pikes. Shepard had remembered to warn them about the pikes high energy signature so they were prepared to abandon them once they got back. The supplies would have to be divided among the crew and Shepard's sparrow. It wouldn't be the first time she'd been forced to use her beautiful bike as a pack mule.

Shepard walked through the mouth of the cave. Despite being so early in the day it was a whir of activity. All though the cave people were arranging supplies, checking with other crewmembers, or otherwise eating in preparation for the day ahead. As she looked over the cave she saw Liara and Tali, whose names she learned from Garrus and Wrex, run towards the opening of the cave. They rushed by her and she turned around to see them hug Garrus and Wrex.

Shepard smiled and shook her head before remembering what she needed to do. In a moment she was standing by T'Bayla's rock. Out of the corner of her eyes she saw the doctors unfolding a stretcher and otherwise preparing for her to travel. "How'd it go?" She heard the Captain ask.

"Got everything that wasn't burnt or destroyed." Shepard answered.

"And the ship?" Shepard could see a glimpse of sadness in her eyes.

"The explosives went off without a hitch. I'm sorry."

T'Bayla took a deep breath and said, "Thank you." She looked at Shepard, "But there's no time to mourn. In an hour we should be ready to go."

Shepard nodded, "Anything I can do?"

"Besides keep an eye out to make sure those bastards didn't find us?" T'Bayla shrugged, "My crew's got everything in hand." She smiled and winked, "Might want some rest yourself. I don't think you've slept for a while."

"Oh, well…" Shepard trailed off and made a grin that she knew showed a little too much teeth, "I'm conditioned to not need a lot of sleep. Won't need some for a while."

"Oh," T'Bayla said, "well just make sure not to tire yourself out." Shepard thanked her for her concern before telling her she was going outside to keep an eye out. She hadn't told the crew much about what being a Guardian entailed. The crew was obviously nervous about the more…out there things they'd seen since they'd entered Sol and she didn't want to spook them about…well there was a reason the Guardians were known as an "Army of the Chosen Dead". She'd tell them more about the Guardians and the City eventually but she wanted to earn more of their trust before spilling things that would make them suspicious and fearful of her. Especially the A.I. thing, if what her ghost found in their Codex was true.

As she entered sunlight the strike team members passed by her with the supplies slung over their shoulder or carried between two of them. Good, in an hour they could recede into the forest and get far away from here. Once they camped out for the night they could start planning their path to the City. A small sound brought her out of her thoughts. At least, it started small. But then it got louder and Shepard began to feel her heart quicken before she recognized the noise. She felt herself relax.

That was when she remembered what she was doing and her heart quickened to an even faster beat. She saw Garrus come out of the cave his assault rifle in hand.

"What's going on? Is it the Fallen?" he said looking at the sky.

"No, it's," she looked back at the sky then back to him, "go back inside. I can handle it."

"Shepard-" and that was when she gave him the look. He was back in the cave before he knew what happened. Shepard tried to quiet her heartbeat as she saw jumpships fly over. Before her eyes she saw two blue flashes of light. When the light faded, before her stood two Guardians. One was a Titan, covered in heavy armor that was, to Shepard's eternal amusement, white and pink. Not even the camouflage pattern on it could make it look good no matter how long it's wearer thought she could convince her otherwise. The mark worn on her right hip was a mix of orange, blue, and yellow with the symbol that looked like a circle above smooth pointless triangle with a line cutting through it. The other was a warlock with dark blue robes and black helmet with a bond in the orange, black, and white pattern of the Praxic School.

They both took off their helmets. The Titan spoke first.

"Traveler's light, Shepard. Where were you?" Ashley Williams, a human with light brown skin and dark brown hair in a bun, said in a tone that suggested anger and worry.

"Yeah, Shepard." Kaidan Alenko, an Awoken with light blue skin, glowing yellow eyes, and black hair combed in a hairstyle Shepard never quite understood, said, backing their friend up, "You call us to pull the Raid early then we don't hear from you for hours. We thought we might've been avenging you once or twice in there." Kaidan's tone wasn't as angry as Ashley's but it didn't need to be. Kaidan could wield guilt like a knife.

"Look, guys-"

"Shepard," Ashley interrupted, "none of that Hunter talk around crap. What's going on?"

Shepard swallowed before saying, "I found pilgrims being attacked by Fallen out here." All at once the anger faded from their faces.

"Are they okay?" Kaidan asked.

"Yeah," Shepard said, "I showed up before they took heavy casualties."

"Praise the Traveler," Ash muttered, "So the raid…"

"I needed cover for a supply run. We'll leave in an hour. I'll see you guys back in the City." Shepard said. If she got lucky then…

"Shepard." she heard Wrex's voice behind her and she winced. Cayde'd taught her that luck always ran out when you relied on it too long. Kaidan looked past her slack-jawed while Ashley's face distorted in a grim rictus.

"Shepard," she said in a voice full of fury, "Why the hell are you guiding xenos to the City?"
*****

Okay, this is finally done. Interesting note, I didn't think of creating Vrothrir until late into writing this chapter when I was forced to cut out the Mad Max style jetbike chase (the characters just weren't cooperating). But I figured I could at least get an Arc Villain out of this.

Also, I'm sad to say I'm going to stop doing those "EACH STAR IS A POINT OF LIGHT PREVIEWS". Railroading myself like that is starting to be a pain in the ass to write around. If I had a chapter buffer it would work but I'm writing by the seat of my pants here and its getting harder to match the inevitable changes in the chapter with the preview. So RIP pointless thread gimmick. (I might bring it back when the time comes to start putting this up on AO3 and fanfiction.net.) That's it for this week.
 
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Another awesome chapter. So Kaiden's a Sunsinger and Ashley's a Striker(? I don't recognize the mark). I realize I've neglected to ask a very important question. Is Shepard's Ghost Dinkle-spark or Nolan-bot?
 
Close, Ashley is a Striker, and a member of a Firebreak-descended Order (I've been forced to headcanon a lot of stuff in regards to how the Guardian organizations like Titan Orders and Warlock Schools work along with a bunch of stuff regarding the City's culture, politics, and infrastructure due to the relativity little we have on those things in the lore which makes it a nice little playground for me) while Kaidan is a Voidwalker but is a member of the Praxic Warlocks, which is why his bond is that color as its the same color as the crest on the center of the chest of the Heart Of Praxic Fire. This is because I think that might be their sigil.

I don't think the Praxics are all Sunsingers, although their founders probably are what with the fire imagery and all, since I've always seen the Praxic order being defined less by class lines and more by their belief in "Seriously guys, can we just shoot the Darkness instead of studying it and going mad? *Points at Toland babbling to himself and making a Weapon of Friggin Sorrow*" Which would be right up Kaidan's "Paragon-Representative in the party" personalty. Besides, Ikora Rey is a Praxic and I've always gotten the impression that she's a Voidwalker too.

As for Shepard's ghost, its neither. I've laid enough hints to be comfortable in telling people its Keith David. That's right folks, in the Destiny universe David Anderson is a Ghost. To be more precise *Spoiler Alert for the story (Although it will be revealed soon)*

Anderson, as he's been named by Shepard, found her crying in the wreckage of Mindoir, a small village located near the ruins of Vancouver, Canada. He got her away from there and effectively raised her as his own child throughout her later teens before empowering her as a Guardian, her belonging to the very small number of "special" Guardians, example: Shin Malphur, who didn't need to be raised from the dead to harness the full power of the Light.

I've always thought that the Ghosts have numerous voices instead of just one or two. So while Dinkle-bot and Nolan-Bot are going to appear at some point (I've got plans for Dinkle Bot. Wondrous "Tyrion Lannister in a ghost shell" plans) they're not appearing quite yet.
 
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Dinklebot....
With no mouth for drink, nor a means to get laid.

That's going to be one hell of an irritable/frustrated ghost.
 
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