Each Star is a Point of Light-A Destiny/Mass Effect Fusion

Book 1: Ch 4- The Terror Above Jupiter
Chapter 4: The Terror Above Jupiter

It was four days since Longius died and Tali was disturbed by how quiet the ship had become. The silence didn't come from the ship itself, or else Tali's fear would have erupted into full blown panic by now, but the crew. The rush of panic and anger that'd occurted qafter the shutdown of the relay had been replaced by a silent dread that'd only gotten worse since they'd abandoned the relay.

That'd happened because of the results of the autopsy that'd been performed on Longius' corpse. At the emergency meeting that had been held shortly afterwards, The ship's doctors, led by an elderly salarian by the name of Mordin Solus, explained that Longius' body, and his brain in particular, had undergone significant mutation. Upon discovering this they had looked at some of the crew, both those who had visited the Lost Colony and those who hadn't, in a discrete manner in order to make sure that whatever illness was present hadn't spread among the crew. What they saw had left them frozen inside. Each of the tested crew reported positive for some kind of aberrant brain activity along with multiple other strange physical symptoms. None of them to the level of Longius but each potentially deadly given time. After some discussion, a theory was conferred to the crew.

This system was only a skip and a jump away from the "Lost Colony". The fear was that whoever destroyed it had also come here and for some reason left some kind of unseen "pollutant" around the relay that caused physical degradation mixed with psychological damage if left around it for too long. The answer was clear. The Long-Sight must abandon the relay or risk suffering inevitable madness and even more inevitable death.

In any other circumstance, the idea of an undetectable deep-space disease would have been laughable. But the events of the past week and a half had conviced the crew that they were in a frightening and mysterious place where the rational laws of the universe as understood in Citadel Space broke down to be replaced by nothing but chaos and horror. T'Bayla, either believing the findings or simply trying to avoid a mutiny ordered the ship to proceed deeper into the system in the hopes of finding something that could help them in some way shape or form.

The ship had arrived in the orbit of the biggest planet in the system, a gas giant some of the salarians were planning to name after a minor god, a few hours before. The current plan was to stay in orbit, dump the ship's core, and plan on what to do next. It wasn't the greatest plan but it had gained a certain degree of support when the various cases of insomnia and chronic nightmares began to die down after journeying further into the system. Tali, herself finally had a full night's sleep for the first time in a week the night before. It was one of two good things that'd happened to her since they'd come to this hole of a system.

She saw the other good thing staring at her out of the corner of her eye. Tali sighed to herself. He'd shown up shortly after his shift to "keep her company". This was shortly after Wrex had "kept her company" before his shift. And that was shortly after Liara "kept her company" while they both got ready for their shifts. And the day before…

While Garrus and Wrex had gotten off to a bad start, and Tali admitted her own first impression of the turian had been tainted by the glares he kept shooting at Wrex, the two of them, Liara, and Tali had come out of the fight with Longius bound together by the experience. Which was great. Tali had not had many friends since leaving the fleet and those she'd made here made her feel accepted for the first time since forever, since she could remember said a traitorous voice in the back of her head. But the problem was, friends talked to each other. Tey told each other about problems. They told each other about mutual friend's problems. Which was how Garrus and Liara had found out about Crassa.

Crassa'd left Tali alone after she'd met Wrex, a seven foot several-hundred pound Krogan tended to do that for you, but shortly after the ship became stranded beyond the relay she'd started catching Crassa watching her out of the corner of her eye. Sometimes it was innocuous enough like in the mess. But when she saw her watching her in the engine room she'd allowed herself to become panicked enough to go see Wrex. That was the night they'd both started sleeping on Liara's floor.

After Longius, Wrex told Garrus and Liara in the hope that they could convince her to talk to the Captain before something dangerous happened. Tali didn't listen. The wide-eyed girl who left the fleet might have but seven months of dealing with the larger galaxy led her to believe that it'd do no good. So the three of them decided to keep an eye on her when they weren't on shift. On the one hand, it was nice to talk to someone while she worked. On the other… She could see how tired Garrus and Wrex were. While people were starting to sleep again, the security guards had found themselves with more work due to the recent losses they had suffered and she could tell Garrus and Wrex were wearing themselves thin. She needed to convince them she could take care of herself. For their sake. And the sake of the crew.

She was so deep in thought that when her fusion wrench broke in half she almost fell on her ass. She caught her balance by grabbing onto the open hatch and pulling herself towards it. Having pulled herself back onto two feet she looked at the piece of the fusion wrench in her hand and began muttering a string of quarian curse words. She heard Garrus chuckle.

"Such a mouth, Tali," he said, "You could've given my old drill instructor a run for his commission." Tali glared at him in the fervent hope that he'd burst into flames. He threw up his hands and gave the turian equivalent of a sly smile, "Orders, Drill Instructor Zorah?" She brought her hands to her hips and, her eyebrows raised in fond annoyance.

"Go get me a new fusion torch, Vakarian. Before I make you do something that makes five-hundred pushups look like a three-day pass on a planet full of naked Asari," Garrus nodded, turned around, and left for the nearest tool box. Tali began to look over her work when she heard Garrus call back.

"Dream of R&R on a planet of naked asari do you, Tali?" She whipped around and threw a wrench down the hall and smiled when she heard him yelp. After she heard him walk away she caught herself day dreaming of a suit-free day on a planet full of naked asari.

"Damn it, Vakarian," she mumbled to herself. Five minutes later, she heard a pair of footprints behind her. "You better have found the right size, Vakar-" Her instincts told her to duck and she felt an arm go over her head and saw the glint metal. She turned around to see Crassa standing at the entrance of the small maintenance crook she was in with a knife in her hand. Taking stock of her surroundings she knew she was in trouble. Crassa had been smart to ambush her here. There was so little room to maneuver and she could risk no damage to her suit much less an actual wound by the blade. Tali cursed the quarian immune system for what had to be the millionth time since she left the fleet.

"Tell me what you did to the relay, suit rat, and all I'll do is kick the shit out of you." Crassa growled. Out of the corner of her eye, Tali saw something.

"I-" Tali sputtered as Crassa drew closer with the knife her hand laying in the open maintenance hatch for balance, "I-". Her hand found what she was looking for and she smashed the side of Crassa's face with the other half of the fusion wrench, "Didn't do a damn thing you stupid bosh'tet." Crassa grabbed the side of her face in pain and Tali push kicked in the stomach and out into the hall. Thank her ancestors for quarian cultural traditions that required a lot of dancing. She ran out into the hall, hoping to knock out Crassa before she got up. She wasn't so lucky. Crassa kicked her legs out from under her as she herself climbed to her feet. Crassa flew into a jumping thrust aimed down at her helmet but Tali rolled out of the way. The failed thrust knocked Crassa off her balance giving Tali the opportunity to spring to a crouch and tackle her to the ground.

She pinned Crassa's knife arm down onto the floor by the wrist with her right hand as her left hand curled into a fist and slammed into the side of Crassa's face with a sickening crunch. Three punches in Crassa's own fist dug into her stomach and Tali fell onto her back. Crassa got up and moved towards her slowly.

"Not bad, suit-rat. Not bad. But there's-" Tali took Crassa's gloating as an opportunity to take her pistol from its holster and shot her in the shoulder. She dropped like a lead ball. She heard someone coming up the hall. Tali got up and saw Garrus running towards her.

"What-" He started. Tali interrupted.

"She attacked me. I kicked her ass and shot her in the shoulder." She holstered her pistol, "Its all okay. Go get someone. I'll keep an eye on her and-"

That's when Crassa started to scream.
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Quiet in medical room. Mordin Solus examined Crassa Volutus' vitals. Handcuffed to bed. Captain's orders. Enraged at attempt to murder Engineer Zorah. Wasn't happy himself. Ancient punishment for attempted murder of crewmate getting executed and spaced in short order. More civilized these days. Held in brig until return to dock. Wouldn't work now. Lost in forgotten corner of galaxy.

Need to examine her first. Longius caused caution. Reports said Crassa began to scream and claw eyes out after being disabled. Examined brain and body. Received strange results. Not like Longius. Something else happening. Something above them and their little ship.

Memories of Tuchanka. Of Genophage. After, sought greater meaning. Studied religions and philosophies across galaxy. Didn't find answer. Expanded knowledge. Sometimes enough. Decided to spend rest of life giving back to galaxy.

Spiritually satisfying but not intellectually stimulating. Hear from old STG contacts about new expedition. Decide to help give galaxy new knowledge. Left clinic in good hands. Was correct about stimulating. Too many mysteries. Colony felt odd. Like corrupted holy place. Same feeling near mass relay. Remember old salarian preacher from before spaceflight. Fire and brimstone type. "Do not be caught in the hands of an angry god," he said. Thought such methodology for cloacas. But still-

Equipment began to screech. Looked at vitals. Rush to Crassa's side. Mouth hung open. Her skin was black and seeping similar-colored oil. Her eyes glowed yellow. Tendrils grew from face. Tendrils remind him of seaweed or kelp moving gently in ocean current. See her look at bindings inquisitively. Like child. Broke them like paper. Looked at him. Tried to move out of way but she moved fast. Too fast. Not possible for turians to move that quickly. Caught him by throat. Began to squeeze. Tried to struggle. Too strong. Vision started to swim. Darkness.

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Garrus was sitting in the Captain's office when he got the news. They were telling her the whole Crassa story. Wrex and Tali were there and Liara would join them when she was off her shift. To say the Captain was upset was an understatement. Fortunately for them, it was the kind of anger that reminded him of his mother when he and Solana would do something dangerous when they were kids. She went on for a bit at Tali about keeping this sort of harassment secret and that it didn't matter that she was a quarian goddess dammit. Her words not his. He never saw someone look so chagrined and happy as Tali in that moment. He and Wrex got it next for not coming forward even without Tali's permission and didn't they want to actually stop this kind of shit? Again, Captain's words. After that they got a set of veiled compliments for loyalty towards a fellow crewmember, with Tali getting some props for kicking the crap out a distinguished member of the Hierarchy Military. Behind them the door opened and Officer Sokir Volon, a smallish salarian with a green coloring to his skin, came through breathing hard.

"Captain, it's Crassa." The blood drained from Tali's face as the Captain rolled her eyes, gritted her teeth, and pulled out her sidearm.

"Continue, Officer." She said loading her pistol. Sokir nodded.

"Crassa woke up and attacked Doctor Solus. He's fine but he's going to be woozy for a couple of hours. But," T'Bayla glared at that, "We don't know where she is." Tali gripped Wrex's arm like a flotation device.

"Really?" T'Bayla said as she stood up and cocked her gun< "We have cameras all over the ship-"

"I know, mam, I know, I mean I don't but-" he took a deep breath, "Look she just disappeared. None of the cameras picked her up. We have a general idea where she's going because people have been spotting her running around the ship." T'Bayla rolled her eyes.

"I am really getting sick of all the weird bullshit in this system." She moved towards the door. "Urdnot stay here with Zorah" She turned towards Tali who looked like she was about to say something, "No buts. She's after you and you're not going through that twice." She beckoned Garrus over to her "Vakarian, you're with me.

They found their lead five minutes later when they saw a thirteen members of the crew standing around someone sitting against the wall of the hallway, which Garrus noted was the same spot that Farla had ended up during Longius' madness.

He felt his stomach drop when he saw it was Liara. She was sitting there clutching her right arm which looked broken with her face twisted in pain. A salarian doctor kneeled next to her performing multiple injections on her arm. Garrus left the Captain's side and kneeled next to Liara. If Crassa-

"Stop looking at me like that, Garrus." She said looking at him out of the corner of her half-lidded eyes, "I'm going to be fine. I just made a bit of a mistake." She groaned as the doctor began another injection.

"Liara-" Garrus began before she cut him off.

"I heard about Crassa escaping so I went looking for her before she could find Tali. I found her in this hallway and tried to put her down with my biotics and-" she shook her head "Something's happened to her Garrus. Like Longius but not the same it doesn't feel as wrong and-" Her eyes drooped and she smiled the soft smile of a tired academic, "I'm sorry I'm not making much sense. The doctor's already given me a lot of painkillers and-" Her eyes closed and she began to snore softly. The doctor stood up.

"I'm sorry. She's going to be fine but she needs to sleep for the compounds to heal her arm." Garrus nodded. He swore that if he got his hands on Crassa he was going to rip her arm out of her socket. He was sure Wrex was going to be proud. The Captain, for her part, looked ready to kill.

"Does anyone know where the hell Crassa is or-" The intercom crackled loudly over them before making a strange noise that Garrus would never be able to place and would never hear again. Suddenly someone spoke.

"Captain Nela T'Bayla of the Asari Republics," it was Crassa's voice that buzzed over the intercom, "I understand you are looking for me. I also wish to speak with you." The next words she spoke confounded Garrus. "I am standing in the airlock. I will see you in a few minutes."

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That's where they found her, standing in the airlock ramrod straight. She stared blankly ahead. A peaceful smile crossed her face. Between that and her mutations it was a horrible sight and Garrus felt his rage dissipate. He'd hated Crassa for what she'd put Tali and Liara through but looking at her now- No one deserved this. T'Bayla's face had gone from one of authoritative hatred to stoic caution.

"Security Officer Crassa-" Crassa shook her head interrupting the Captain.

"I am sorry. I am no longer who you say I am." Her voice echoed with a strange reverb that sent a shiver up Garrus' spine. She looked at her hands and spoke to herself, "Same meat. Same bone. But different and becoming more so."

"Who are you then?" T'Bayla said as if to someone preparing to jump off a bridge. Crassa, or whoever it was, cocked her head sideways.

"I do not have a name yet. The Nine have not deemed to give me a name yet."

"The Nine?" T'Bayla asked. Crassa giggled.

"This world is their world," She spread her arms out, "These moons are their moons." She pointed at T'Bayla, "And you came here without permission and polluted our world with the remains of the Great Trap." Garrus wondered what they meant by Great Trap. He assumed they meant the mass relay. It was possible that they weren't the first to be trapped in this system by it and that that might create some hostility with the locals.

T'Bayla shook her head in horror, "That's why they've done this to you? Because we trespassed? We didn't even know anyone was in this damn system." Crassa nodded like a child trying to explain some bit of childhood logic to a parent.

"They know. That's why they decided to be merciful. They only chose the one called Crassa. She was hate-filled and ignorant. You should be pleased to see her gone. I will be altered further to serve them as their Agent. I am already quite valuable to them. I know so much about the galaxy that they did not." She brought her hands together and look pleased, "The Citadel. The Council and its peoples. The Terminus Systems. Many others. They like this. Now," she reached towards the emergency release that would jettison her into the vacuum of space. In a sane universe, she'd never be able to overcome the thousands of pounds of pressure that ran through it but Garrus understood that they left a sane, rational universe a long time ago.

"Wait." T'Bayla shouted. What was left of Crassa stopped and looked at her. "You said giving you an-" she swallowed before continuing, "an agent was the price of trespassing but it's not a fair payment." Crassa cocked her head in confusion. "You got information from us. About the galaxy. But I demand information in return."

"You demand information of the Nine." Crassa said bewildered. She stared at T'Bayla for a minute before giggling again. "You are brave. My masters are impressed with you, it has been so long since someone was brave in the face of the Nine. We will give you the information you want. But," her smile turned to a snarl and the room felt like it dropped several degrees in temperature, "do not demand anything of the Nine again." The smile returned, "Now, what do you ask of the rulers of Jupiter?" T'Bayla took a deep breath.

"Can you tell us if there's a safe place for me and my crew to go in this goddess-forsaken star system?" She said. Crassa closed her eyes. It felt like forever before she opened her eyes and spoke.

"You have come upon dangerous shores, explorers of the Citadel peoples. You have walked into the middle of the single greatest war in existence and there are few safe places to be found."

"What war?" Garrus asked, the situation getting the best of him. T'Bayla glared at him from the corners of her eyes.

"The eternal war. Between Light and Dark. It had been fought on a million worlds across the whole of the universe before it came here. It will be fought in a million more before the end comes." Crassa looked out of the small viewpoint in the airlock's door to the depths of space. "On the motherworld, blue and green. Third world from the sun. There is a city. A gentle place ringed by spears. It is the only place safe from the ravages of the Dark by the Light of its protector." Garrus opened his mouth to ask about this city but T'Bayla signaled him to be quiet. They needed this information and Garrus understood that they needed to ask as little else as possible in order to get it. "The people there hide behind the safety of great walls. They might take you in. But," Crassa raised her index finger, "you were not the first outsiders to come to this system. Conquerors, pirates, and monsters have sought to snuff out the last Light in this system by laying the City low. They may not trust you. But if you wish to survive you must find sanctuary behind their walls."


T'Bayla sighed before speaking, "Are there places to avoid on the way there so we don't risk trespassing on another's territory while we're here?" she asked. Crassa nodded.

"Should you see a great ring of asteroids and ships you must avoid it. A people live there that bear two souls. They are allies of ours but we do not trust them. They care only for their own and will kill any who are not them who dare come into their territory. Keep far away from the asteroids and stations or you will die. Do not go near the red world, fourth from the Sun, plagued by a great army, or you will die. Do not go near the green-grey world, second from the Sun, plagued by the time walkers, or you will die. Do not go to the machine-world, first from the Sun, taken by the time-walkers, or you will die." Crassa reached for the release and glared at them, "Do not return to Jupiter, fifth from the Sun, home of the Nine, or you will die." A movement of her arm and she was gone. Sucked out into the orbit of the world known as Jupiter.

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Oh my god, it's finally done. Sorry this is up so late. I spent the first three days of this week halfway across the state away from my computer and stable internet. Fortunately, I had the foresight to pack a notebook and a pencil so I was able to write most of this in the three days I was camping. Got home in the afternoon and spent awhile transcribing it, cleaning it up as I did so. Now I can go ahead and go play Overwatch and X-Pirates for the rest of the night.

Anyway, the scene with Agent!Crassa was one of the first scenes I thought of when I originally thought of this fic and I've been wanting to get to it for weeks. Again, I'm looking for any constructive criticism on my action scenes, although I like how this one came out a lot better than Longius'.

Anyway, NEXT TIME ON "EACH STAR IS A POINT OF LIGHT": The crew make their way to the orbit of the blue world looking for their promised safe place but find themselves in a fight for their lives on the surface of the planet before a stranger appears.
 
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This is good stuff. Haven't played Destiny (and probably never will) but I am somewhat familiar with the lore. You're doing a good job conveying the strangeness and eldritch horror that exist in that universe. I'm looking forward to the crew's First Contact with the City, and of course when we catch up with the prologue.
 
You forgot about the moon and the hive.
But other than that, I love this story. GL & GS.
 
Brilliant chapter! I played Destiny heavily through the first expansion, but fell off after that. Is there actual details on the Nine now?
 
You forgot about the moon and the hive.
But other than that, I love this story. GL & GS.

You forgot to mention the moon.

I actually left it out on purpose for two reasons. One, In order to keep the semi-poetic rhythm in that last paragraph that explaining the moon would have fiddled with a bit too much for my taste (Although I probably should've just killed that darling in this case.) Two, the warning about the moon was originally bunched in with a warning about the dangers of Earth in general (mostly the Fallen) that were going to be alluded to but were left on the cutting room floor.

For those of you who'd like a Watsonian reason, remember Garrus asking about the war? That cost them a little information from The Nine. If he'd kept his mouth shut they would have warned them to stay away from the moon. The Nine seem like the kind of jerks who'd pull crap like this.

Brilliant chapter! I played Destiny heavily through the first expansion, but fell off after that. Is there actual details on the Nine now?

We've got a little bit more now. Bungie likes to go in and add snippets of dialogue to the voice loops that the NPCs have and Xur is one of the guys who says new stuff every now and again. Usually cryptic stuff. I'm not sure what he said in Year One Versus Taken KIng but you can probably find those somewhere.

We do know that the Nine are responsible for the events of House of Wolves. Reef ships, implied to be pirate hunters, accidentally trespassed in Jovian space and Mara Sov, Queen of the Reef, tried to give them Skolas, former Kell of the Fallen in the Reef, as an apology because even the Reefborn, one of the most stuck-up factions in the Sol System, are scared shitless of the Nine. They weren't amused so they had Xur sneak into the prison ship Skolas was being transported in and let him loose probably knowing he was going to raise hell once the Wolves found out he was freed, and low and behold they did. Lesson: Don't piss off the Nine.

Overall, I just extrapolate from what little we know of the Nine to do what I did here. I think we've got just enough information on the Nine that they can easily serve as the mid-level boogeyman, top tier boogeyman being The Darkness of course, that all the factions in the Sol System tip toe around.

I just realized that the description of the Last City as a place ringed by spears is a reference to one of Toland's Grimoire cards.

Who knows who Toland talked to after he was exiled.;)

To be honest, I used that quote sooner than I really wanted to but I've never seen a more artistic yet succinct description of what the people of The City, mortal and Guardian alike, are trying to accomplish. It's an oasis that clings to the philosophies of The Light in a system where most have given into Darkness in one form or another, the enemy factions, or try to remain neutral, The Reef and The Nine, while trying to make it a halfway decent place to live.
 
So for those of us who haven't played Destiny yet, who was that speaking?
 
Actually i thought the nine engineered the Wolves Crisis so that Mara Sov and the Reef would be forced into contact with the City and the Guardians. furthering relations between the two so that when Oryx showed up the reef would be in a position repay the debt the Guardians made by recapturing Skolas. Which they would do by attacking the Dreadnaght and crippling Oryx's attack as much as possible. Because no matter how fucking scary the Nine are The Taken King appearing over there world had them scared shitless.
 
So for those of us who haven't played Destiny yet, who was that speaking?
An Agent of the Nine, the governing body of the space around the Jovians, Jupiter and it's moons. They're, well, a bit enigmatic, even in universe. They are described in one Legend Grimoire Card

  • The Nine are survivors of the cis-Jovian colonies who made a compact with an alien force to ensure their own survival.
  • The Nine are deep-orbit warminds who weathered the Collapse in hardened stealth platforms.
  • The Nine are ancient leviathan intelligences from the seas of Europa or the hydrocarbon pits of Titan.
  • The Nine arrived in a mysterious transmission from the direction of the Corona-Borealis supercluster.
  • The Nine are the firstborn Awoken and their minds now race down the field lines of the Jupiter-Io flux tube.
  • The Nine are Ghosts who pierced the Deep Black without a ship and meditated on the hissing silence of the heliopause.
  • The Nine are the aspects of the Darkness, broken by the Traveler's rebuke, working to destroy us from within.
  • The Nine is a viral language of pure meaning.
  • The Nine are the shadows left by the annihilation of a transcendent shape, burned into the weft of what is.[4]

Whatever the fuck any of that actually means.
 
My theory is that the Nine are one of each. I just like the idea of a council of with one weird ass thing per seat. It'd be like the Outsider from Dishonored, Some Great Old Ones, and Slenderman trying to run a country.

Actually i thought the nine engineered the Wolves Crisis so that Mara Sov and the Reef would be forced into contact with the City and the Guardians. furthering relations between the two so that when Oryx showed up the reef would be in a position repay the debt the Guardians made by recapturing Skolas. Which they would do by attacking the Dreadnaght and crippling Oryx's attack as much as possible. Because no matter how fucking scary the Nine are The Taken King appearing over there world had them scared shitless.

That's a fair interpretation. My reasons for my interpretation are many and varied so I'm just going to make a quick bulletpoint list:

  • There's already a conspiracy that was planning for Oryx's arrival made up of Osiris, The Queen of the Reef, and Eris Morn. It can be seen in The Queen 2 grimoire card. It doesn't look like there's a representative of the Nine there and having two mysterious conspiracies trying to do that one thing makes it less cool to me. (Sometimes I'll interpret stuff so that I like it rather than because it makes sense.)
  • I like the idea that while the Nine are powerful and know a lot but that they aren't omniscient so that they didn't necessarily know Oryx was going to show up so soon.
  • We don't see any City forces at the Battle of Saturn and while I actually do believe that Guardians avoid deep space combat as a rule for a lot of reasons it's implied the Vanguard, who govern the city's military operations and are the guys who give Guardians their marching orders, didn't even know about the Battle of Saturn or even Oryx's arrival until the Player Guardian goes to Phobos to investigate the Cabal there only to run into the Taken.
  • That last one doesn't scream "Alliance of the Reef and the City to Fight at Saturn" to me so if the Nine did plan that it kind of failed or at least got co-opted Osiris' plan, because Osiris seems like the guy who would have planned this, and Guardians only started supporting Awoken operations once the Awoken fleet is destroyed and Petra Venj, Queen's Wrath and temporary Regent of the Reef, enlists Guardians to hunt down high ranking Taken for her.
 
I actually left it out on purpose for two reasons. One, In order to keep the semi-poetic rhythm in that last paragraph that explaining the moon would have fiddled with a bit too much for my taste (Although I probably should've just killed that darling in this case.) Two, the warning about the moon was originally bunched in with a warning about the dangers of Earth in general (mostly the Fallen) that were going to be alluded to but were left on the cutting room floor.

For those of you who'd like a Watsonian reason, remember Garrus asking about the war? That cost them a little information from The Nine. If he'd kept his mouth shut they would have warned them to stay away from the moon. The Nine seem like the kind of jerks who'd pull crap like this.



We've got a little bit more now. Bungie likes to go in and add snippets of dialogue to the voice loops that the NPCs have and Xur is one of the guys who says new stuff every now and again. Usually cryptic stuff. I'm not sure what he said in Year One Versus Taken KIng but you can probably find those somewhere.

We do know that the Nine are responsible for the events of House of Wolves. Reef ships, implied to be pirate hunters, accidentally trespassed in Jovian space and Mara Sov, Queen of the Reef, tried to give them Skolas, former Kell of the Fallen in the Reef, as an apology because even the Reefborn, one of the most stuck-up factions in the Sol System, are scared shitless of the Nine. They weren't amused so they had Xur sneak into the prison ship Skolas was being transported in and let him loose probably knowing he was going to raise hell once the Wolves found out he was freed, and low and behold they did. Lesson: Don't piss off the Nine.

Overall, I just extrapolate from what little we know of the Nine to do what I did here. I think we've got just enough information on the Nine that they can easily serve as the mid-level boogeyman, top tier boogeyman being The Darkness of course, that all the factions in the Sol System tip toe around.



Who knows who Toland talked to after he was exiled.;)

To be honest, I used that quote sooner than I really wanted to but I've never seen a more artistic yet succinct description of what the people of The City, mortal and Guardian alike, are trying to accomplish. It's an oasis that clings to the philosophies of The Light in a system where most have given into Darkness in one form or another, the enemy factions, or try to remain neutral, The Reef and The Nine, while trying to make it a halfway decent place to live.
It's a crime how fun the lore in Destiny is, and how little of it is accessible in game. Yes, they do a great job of atmosphere, but without context it pretty quickly becomes just another aesthetic. Has anything more definitive been revealed about Rasputin / whether the Traveler being crippled was actually a ploy to force it's hand?

I appreciate the reference to "The Great Trap", based on the amount of time they've been running around, The Traveler and the Darkness probably have to be aware of the Reapers, and vise versa. Depending on the exact nature of the Darkness, the Reapers culling might be an attempt to keep it manageable without directly engaging the reality warpers. It's a better reason for the cycle. Was pre fall humanity aware of the Relays I wonder? They did have a Colony in a connected system, which sounds like it was hit by the Vex or the Hive.
 
Yeah, it has been long time since I played Destiny but what lore I saw and unlocked was interesting (even if parts of the story told using that lore were only okay) and have always said after playing it that what I really want is a book set in that world so here I am (fanfiction is seems like it will be as close as I will get). Anyway so far this story seems like it could be very interesting and I am already wondering if the Reapers (the Trap bit in the Nine dialog hints that they are still a thing and here is hoping some of the war on Earth gets resolved before they come in) are a part of the Darkness or not (they certainly have the name for it). Also wondering if we are/ what John Shepard, Guardian of Light will look like.
 
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Ah, I actually can't wait for later parts of the story where I can expand on the yet unrevealed ideas I have for how the Reapers fit into this. They actually fit really well with the setting if you know the different philosophies and beliefs that various factions have. Here's a hint: head down to the the Ishtar Collective website and read through The Books of Sorrow and the Darkness 3 grimoire card. You might get some ideas from there.

Edit: Actually, don;t read the Darkness 3 grimoire card. Listen to it here!

 
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Man, I have been wanting this exact story for ages! I always thought it was sad that Destiny didn't have much in the way of fan fiction. There's so much potential in the setting and we get to see so little of it in the game. I am excited to see more.
 
Book 1: Ch 5- Fire in the Sky
Chapter 5: Fire in the Sky

It'd been a few days since the "Audience with the Nine", as the crew began to call the event, when Liara found herself with enough time to look out the viewport at the small blue dot slowly growing larger in the distance. The Captain hadn't been happy to find out that her conversation with this "Agent of the Nine" had been recorded by the intercom and piped through the whole ship. No one was quite sure how the Nine had accomplished that without her noticing but that item was rather low on the list of "weird shit we've seen since entering this system", as Wrex liked to phrase it. T'Bayla must have feared that a lot of the information would panic an already exhausted crew, especially the fact that damn near every planet had some kind of force on it that would kill them as soon as look at them.

It'd actually done the opposite. The knowledge that there was some form of safe haven had actually boosted the crew's spirits. Even more that they were about to meet an alien race not encountered by the Citadel species before. For the past few days, there'd been no end to the speculation about what they were like.

"They must be great soldiers to survive here," said one of the turian engineers.

"If the Lost Colony was theirs they must be brilliant architects," said one of the asari researchers.

"At this point," said Wrex, "I'm expecting them to be a hundred-feet tall and breathe acid."

In the days since the incident on Jupiter, a certain kind of enthusiasm had reentered them. It was as if, with one glimmer of hope, they had remembered that they were explorers. Sapients with the duty to experience and record things that no one in the rest of the civilized galaxy had ever dreamed existed. It was a breath of fresh air after so many days of living in fear.

Not to say there hadn't been difficulties of course. Upon reaching the inner system their systems had detected several small ships following them. They determined that these were the mysterious allies that the Nine had spoken of. But they remembered the warning the Nine had given them and stayed far away from any of the larger signals that signified a settlement or a station so the ships never came closer. After breaking through the asteroid belt that divided the inner and outer systems the ships receded back into the void from whence they came.

They saw the red world the Nine warned them about but kept as wide a birth as they could of it. It might have added a day or two to the journey but they weren't going to risk the wrath of this "great army" that ruled the planet. Not when they were this close to a sanctuary. A few hours ago, they got the news over the intercom that the planet could be spotted from out the viewport. Liara had no idea what they were talking about but it could have been that her eyes were simply not that sharp. Now, a few hours later she could see the slowly growing blue orb in the distance.

She left the viewport behind for the comfort of her room. She'd just finished a long shift in the bay helping move supplies for the reentry into gravity they'd expected soon. She once again thanked Athame for her biotics. She didn't want to be useless even with her arm broken. She sighed to herself. With the treatment the doctor had given her it would still be twenty-four hours before she could take the cast off and forty-eight hours after that for her to regain full use of it. When she opened the door she saw Garrus and Tali sitting on the floor.

"I just don't know how you stand it, Vakarian." Tali said. She was sitting cross-legged and slightly bent over fiddling with what Liara recognized as a spare piece of her suit. Garrus was leaning against the wall with his legs stretched out in front of him.

"Well, it's like a puzzle." he said, "Each number locks in with another number if it's the right one. Any gunner worth his gun knows what the conditions are in any fight so that gives you the frame of reference. You just-" he trailed off looking for the right words which gave Liara the opportunity to announce her presence. They both turned and waved at her before resuming their conversation. Liara smiled and shook her head before dimming the lights a bit.

The both of them took the hint and their conversation began to become a series of low whispers as she climbed into her bunk.
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A few hours later, they began to shift into a stable orbit with the planet. The captain announced that they were going to wait a few hours in orbit to search for any transmission that might be a clue to where to find the City. Garrus was performing his shift guarding the bridge. It'd been a quiet few hours since he'd left Liara's room, which he supposed was their room by this point.

"Captain," said an asari tech manning one of the communications station, "I just started picking up readings from near the planet's surface." T'Bayla nodded at one of her officers who stepped in beside the tech and looked over her shoulder. The officer's face slacked and the tech shook her head. The officer looked over her shoulder.

"I don't know what these readings are, Captain. I've never seen anything like it." She said. The Captain leaned back into her chair.

"Knowing this system, it's either our destination or something coming to eat the ship's engines. I want you to isolate the signal and-"

"Captain," shouted another communications tech, a male turian with black markings around his eyes and forehead, "We've got unknown ships converging on our location."

"What?" the Captain responded. There was no time to respond before the ship rocked.

"They're firing on us, Captain." The tech shouted, panic filling his words. Another, shot rocked the ship.

"Really, I thought we just hit some light turbulence," T'Bayla shouted over the din of alarms, "How many are there and where are they?" One of the other techs could be heard shouting.

"Six small ships bunched into three groups of two, Captain, around mid-range but getting closer from all sides but planetside."

"Damn it, those are pirate tactics. We have no choice but to go down into atmosphere where they can shoot us down without risking the ship burning up on reentry." She leant forward drumming her fingers on her lips. "Status of the guns and shields."

"The guns are fully operational and the shields are at 75% capacity." Another tech shouted from the other side of the bridge. T'Bayla's mouth opened in shock.

"How are they hitting the hull if our shields are still operating?" She said. The tech shook his head.

"I don't know. There's a weird energy signature coming from their projectiles." Another rock occurred as the ship suffered another hit, "Our instruments say the shots themselves are being blocked but whatever they've got surrounding their rounds bypasses kinetic shielding. The damage reads as electrical but that makes no sense."

"How much damage do these shots do?" the Captain said shouting.

"Not much but this ship was never meant for this kind of attack." The tech yelled back. The Captain growled and turned towards Garrus, who was leaning against the wall for balance and wondering if this was why Wrex did it.

"Vakarian, you hang out around the guns enough. Go down there and help them give these bastards a krogan funeral." She said. He looked over at her like she was a madwoman.

"Captian, I-"

"Now." He barely registered running down the hall to the weapon's batteries.
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Garrus made it to the gun battery to find Tali there with a number of the other engineers. She was fiddling with some piece of circuity, her fingers working with quickness and dexterity he could never match even through her obvious panic. She turned her head to look at him. "Who's attacking us? The Nine?" Garrus shook his head.

"No, they look like some kind of pirate group. We're surrounded. How are the guns?" She slammed the hatch she'd been working in and got to her feet, wiping her hands on her legs in quick motions.

"They're ready to go but Gunner Darmecus hasn't shown up," she stuttered through the next part, "I-I think something happened to him." Garrus nodded. If the shudders throughout the ship were any indication there were members of the crew wounded or killed already.

"I've got gunnery training." he said rushing towards the gun. Out of the corner of his eyes he saw Tali's eyes make the same look she used whenever she bit down on saying something sarcastic. As he punched his security code into the computer he felt the ship begin to rock slightly. It wasn't the same violent shuddering that came whenever they were hit. The Captain had ordered the ship to reposition itself. As the data running through the gunnery computer became available he could see that the captain ordered the crew to change heading. They were still headed towards the surface but not as deeply and in a different direction than before.

A few moments later he started to get communications from the bridge over the computer.

"Status?" asked the officer on the other side.

"Officer Vakarian here," he answered, "The gun is ready but the Gunnery Officer is missing possibly dead." There was a pause on the other end.

"Acknowledged, are you able to man the gun?"

"Affirmative." Garrus replied. Another shudder rocked through the ship. That one had been a hit. Behind him he saw Tali and a bunch of the other engineers and a bad feeling went through him.

"Get out of here." he shouted over the din of battle, "Get out into the hall. There's nothing more you can do here and if things go bad you need to get to the escape pods." A few of them nodded and began to file out as quickly as discretion could allow. In a few moments only Tali was left. "Tali-" Garrus started to say before being interrupted.

"No." she said in a tone that brooked no argument. He sighed and kept working. After a moment, he heard an officer, different from the previous one.

"Enemy in range of guns. Prepare to fire on command." Hearing that, Garrus began to run the gun through the calculations that it needed while he used his free hand to flip all the safety switches off. Once that was done he laid his hand over the switch that would fire the gun. "Fire in three-"

Another shudder rocked through the ship.

"Two." He saw Tali in the corner of his eye eyes closed and hands clasped in prayer to ancestors she didn't actually believe had the power to influence the world.

"Now." Garrus' focus shot back in a millisecond and he slammed his hand down on the switch. On his screen he could see the shot make its way through the vacuum of space and hit the target. His suspicions that the shot would just glance off any shields the ship had were dissipated when he saw the ship light up in a brief explosion. The vacuum of space doused the flame quickly and soon he saw only the specs of dust that were the evidence of a dead ship. For a moment, the incessant barrage the ship had gone through stopped.

"The enemy vessels have disengaged." said a voice through the intercom and Garrus felt the same weariness that passed through a person when danger was over. He looked over a Tali who, from the way her eyes looked, was smiling at him. Without warning, she wrapped her arms around his middle and pulled him into a hug. After a moment of awkward silence, he wrapped his arms around her.

"We did it, Garrus." Tali said before pulling away from him, "We might actually m-" she was interrupted by a small beep from the console. On the screen was a single ship, many times the size of the ships they had just chased away, appearing out of nowhere. In the manner of a seconds, the computer picked up a great build-up of energy coming from its direction.

"We've got to move now," he said grabbing Tali by the arm as he did so. They escaped the Gunnery seconds before they saw it consumed by bright energy that looked like a mix of sunlight and fire. Garrus felt the ship shift downwards into what he knew was its death spiral.

"Attention all crew." said a voice crackling over the intercom, "Hull and critical systems have suffered catastrophic damage. The ship is lost. Make your way to the escape pods. Follow rendezvous protocols once planetfall is made. Gods go with you." The message ended with massive rumbling through out the shit.

"Come on. We've got to go." Tali said and began to run, pulling him along every step of the way.
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The first thing Wrex had done when he'd heard the order to evacuate was run towards Liara's room. Protocol during an attack was to have non-essential members of the crew return to their quarters which were located in the parts of the ship least likely to suffer a breach. He hadn't made it halfway down there when he saw Liara running up the hallway to the nearest escape pods. She practically skidded to a stop when she saw him and asked him about Garrus and Tali.

"They're both smart. They'll be out of here by now." Wrex said before shoving Liara into a run. Escape pods on asari ships tended to be spread out evenly across the ship in the hope that no matter where you were you could get to one quickly. Wrex was always of the opinion that a lot of asari ship designers ever actually experienced the chaos of a crashing ship which between avoiding fires, explosions, and crewmembers running around like vorabirds with their heads cut off made it hard to actually find a working escape pod before you died. It was fortunate for the both of them that Wrex had a lot of experience evacuating exploding ships and they came upon an escape pod with two seats left. "Perfect," Wrex said as he and Liara began to strap themselves in.

They heard the sounds of running even over the explosions. At the entrance of the escape pod, which hadn't been set to jettison just yet, stood a turian and an asari, both normal crewmembers from the look of their uniforms. They both looked about ready to burst into tears.

"Oh Goddess, this one's full too." The turian put his hands on her shoulders.

"I-it's okay. There's got to be one left. We can just-" He was interrupted by his companion's sudden sobs.

"W-we-" That was when Wrex saw the way she was holding her stomach. He rolled his eyes. It figured that two dumb kids would fall in love on this trip and go a little too far during a bonding. Suited how much this trip turned into a clusterfuck really. If Wrex were honest with himself, if he were any other kind of creature he probably would have told them to run to the next pod. But he was a krogan and since the Genophage there'd been one form of life the krogan respected above all others. Wrex all but ripped himself out of his restraints and got out of the pod.

"Sir, I-" the turian started.

"Shut up," Wrex answered gently guiding the asari into his seat and helping her put the restraints on as fast as possible. Out of the corner of his eye he saw Liara begin to unbuckle her own restraints. She was having a difficult time of it with only her non-dominant hand but she was trying nonetheless. "What are you doing?"

"I'm giving up my seat to him. I'm not leaving you here, Wrex." He sighed to himself.

"Wait-"

"I'm coming with you, Wrex. And you can't stop me."

Wrex finished helping the other asari with the restraints, sadness and relief mixing in her face as she looked at her companion, and turned to Liara. "I've got a plan I need to tell you before you come with me."

Liara smiled. "Well, what is it Wrex?"

Wrex smirked, "Well, its-" He jumped backwards out of the pod and slammed the emergency jettison switch on the wall console beside it.

"Wrex!" Liara shouted as the escape pod door slammed close and the restraints autmoatically tightened leaving her barely able to move in her seat. Wrex knocked on the door and gave her a wave.

"I'll meet you on planet, Liara. This old krogan's still got years in him left." He tried his best to ignore the tears welling in the corner of his eyes in the few seconds before he saw the pod eject into the low atmosphere of the planet. Damn, he thought to himself, the view was starting to turn blue. He didn't have much time.

Turning around he saw the turian leaning against the wall even as they started to see the flicker of fire at the other end of the hall. "She's going to make it," he said as fear and joy waged war across his face, "She's going to-"

"Cut the sacrifice crap and come on." Wrex yelled as he grabbed the Turian by the scruff of his neck and held him one-handed on his back. He ran down the ship's hallways. He'd survived the Genophage, Tuchanka, attempted filicide, and centuries as a gun for hire in the most dangerous places in the galaxy, that weren't Tuchanka.

He was not going to die here.
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She could hear a crack as her foot fell upon a small stick. She froze, listening to any sign that someone had heard it. After a few moments, she relaxed. The Fallen that'd she'd tracked into the forest must not be near here. She stood up from her skulking position and looked around. She was nearing the edge of the forest. She'd come in here following a small band of Devils in the hopes of finding out where the local contingent of raid ships were launching from. Once she got the location she would send a message to the other members of her fireteam before moving in to clear the base out. Maybe if they got lucky they'd capture a few ships to give to Dead Orbit in exchange for glimmer and equipment.

She looked around before bringing her hand up. Her Ghost appeared in her hand in a flash of numerous small lights.

"Got anything?" she asked. Her ghost shook from side to side.

"Nothing, it looks like, wherever they were going, its in the plains nearby."

"That figures," she muttered under her breath. She didn't like going into such an open environment with active Fallen raiding parties about but she needed that info and at this point she knew that the only place the base could be was further down into the valley, probably underground. As she walked, she pulled her shotgun from the holster on her back. When you spent enough time alone in the Wilds you made it a point to check your weapons whenever it was quiet.

It was a long and rectangular colored orange and with a white symbol that looked like the letter-V of the City-English and Neo-Latin alphabets with a small white upside-down triangle inside and two diagonal lines besides it painted on the side. On the other side was a small inscription that said, "You're not paranoid if there really is a monolithic embodiment of pure evil out to get you." It may have been silly, but that little piece of snark never failed to bring a smile to her face. She put it back in its holster and checked the hand cannon on her side. Unlike the shotgun she didn't need to actually inspect it to know what state it was in. She just closed her eyes and traced her fingers along its side. She could feel the Light that'd been imbued in it over the years. It felt like an explosion right before the spark is struck. All she had to do was draw and shoot.

Her ghost, because even though she'd gone through the time-honored tradition of naming him he would always be her ghost, kept pace with her. "Well," she said, "all we can do is keep going forward and hope we aren't jumped by dregs." She looked over at her ghost, who was gazing forward in thought. "Or worse, the warlock that finally challenges a hunter to a fashion contest," her eyes grew wide behind her goggles, "as was forewarned in the Pahanin Errata." Her ghost's eye closed slightly at the edges in a manner not dissimilar to a human trying their best not to laugh.

"Truly, the Traveler smiled on me the day I found you, child." He said. The warm feeling she felt at that faded as they walked out of the forest's thick canopy to see the sky rain fire.

"The hell?" She said while reaching for her binoculars. After practically ripping them off her belt she brought them to her eyes. It was a ship. A ship unlike anything she'd ever seen from her journeys across the Inner System. A gap in the middle, smooth hull with a design based heavily in aesthetic mixed with function rather than the other way around.

She watched as small explosions ripped through it. Her eyes narrowed into a glare when she saw a small pack of Fallen ships follow from behind. The raiders she'd followed must have gone space-side to go pirating. She had to get to that ship before- Her eyes widened as she saw numerous small specks jettison from the sides of the craft.

Her sparrow appeared by her side in a flash of blue light. In less than a second, she was hurtling down the side of the hill in the direction she suspected the nearest escape pod would land. The ship would have to wait.

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Here you go. I don't have much to say about this chapter but if anyone's confused about some things (Earlier plans had Garrus in the bridge for the whole battle for clarity but that changed when I decided he'd be sent to help man the gun so that clarity was lost since he's no longer there to see the full picture) go ahead and ask.

The next few chapters are ones I've been looking forward to for a long time. So let's get started, NEXT TIME "ON EACH STAR IS A POINT OF LIGHT": The surviving crew of the Long Sight is caught in a battle on the ground of an alien world. Things seem hopeless until a mysterious stranger appears to lend aid.
 
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No offense, but that shot should have outright cleaved the Fallen skiff right in half. I can use rocket launchers to blow the bow turrets off (as long as it sticks around long enough for me to hit it twice), and while the rest of it is, via game rules, 'immune' to small arms fire, a ship-to-ship kinetic kill cannon should have downright turned it into nothing but a debris cloud.

Shields or no shields, that's a multi-kiloton rated impactor, all condensed down into a round maybe not more then 10" across.

Now, if they'd taken that same shot against the Ketch, THAT I could easily see laughing off the hit. Well, more like bloody laughter via a broken nose, but still laughing. A skiff? Not a chance.
 
I can't wait to see where this story goes. Also last chapter needs a threadmark.
 
No offense, but that shot should have outright cleaved the Fallen skiff right in half. I can use rocket launchers to blow the bow turrets off (as long as it sticks around long enough for me to hit it twice), and while the rest of it is, via game rules, 'immune' to small arms fire, a ship-to-ship kinetic kill cannon should have downright turned it into nothing but a debris cloud.

Shields or no shields, that's a multi-kiloton rated impactor, all condensed down into a round maybe not more then 10" across.

Now, if they'd taken that same shot against the Ketch, THAT I could easily see laughing off the hit. Well, more like bloody laughter via a broken nose, but still laughing. A skiff? Not a chance.

Um. *Looks back at the passage* That's what I said though. The mass effect guns destroyed the skiff which caused the others to fall back. A larger ship that held back for the initial assault, probably the Fallen equivalent of a well-armed strike frigate I need to double check the Fallen ship library, which contains their commander, probably a baron of some sort, decides its time to stop playing and blasts them with a large scale version of a scorch cannon, which I've checked and are energy weapons that might be descended from Traveller tech so they can probably bypass kinetic shielding.

So yeah, you're right. That's how I intended it. If its not clear can you give me some advice on how to make it clearer?

Edit: I see it now. I say there's an explosion but I don't say the ship is destroyed. I'm going to go fix it now.
 
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Um. *Looks back at the passage* That's what I said though. The mass effect guns destroyed the skiff which caused the others to fall back. A larger ship that held back for the initial assault, probably the Fallen equivalent of a well-armed strike frigate I need to double check the Fallen ship library, which contains their commander, probably a baron of some sort, decides its time to stop playing and blasts them with a large scale version of a scorch cannon, which I've checked and are energy weapons that might be descended from Traveller tech so they can probably bypass kinetic shielding.

So yeah, you're right. That's how I intended it. If its not clear can you give me some advice on how to make it clearer?

Edit: I see it now. I say there's an explosion but I don't say the ship is destroyed. I'm going to go fix it now.

When I read that part of the chapter, I wasn't envisioning Skiffs attacking the Long-Sight but fighters, with a Skiff coming out to back them up. Skiffs would be doing MUCH more damage to the Long-Sight than you have them doing, given how Destiny and ME compare in technology. Void-infused shots are no joke, and while the kinetic barriers might stop the rounds themselves, it's the Void charge more than the bullet that vaporizes matter. The bullet is just the delivery vehicle.

A fighter scale weapon versus a long range scout is going to have the same sort of problems small arms versus Skiff do -- which makes your chapter imply fighters not Skiffs.
 
Hmmm, well for one thing, the Fallen don't use any Void-tech in their weapons that I remember. Its mostly Arc weaponry with their heavy weapons using Solar energy. Also, I disagree with the interpretation that the energy alone is what does the most damage. In my mind its the bullet and the energy working together that cause the most damage (the bullet makes a large hole that the Arc energy then uses to rip apart the atoms of the part of the ship the bullet landed in to cause the most damage possible) the Arc alone probably wouldn't be able to do much damage without the round hitting the Long-Sight (although its still doing a lot of damage to the ship).

Also, I don't think skiffs are that tough. I'm with Sakuya's Butler on this one; a guardian with a good enough rocket launcher can shred the turrets on one of those things so they probably aren't the best built things in the galaxy. It makes sense with the larger lore surrounding Fallen as the scavengers and pirates of the Sol System. Its why I imagine that Fallen use wolf-pack tactics. They don't have great ships so they use smaller ships to outmaneuver their opponents while large ships wait behind to deal killing blows.

To be honest though, I've never been one who cares about how one setting's such and such ship would so against another setting's such and such ship as that's never been something that interests me in these things. What interests me about this cross isn't that sort of thing. Its more about how people from a relatively realistic hard-science fiction setting like Mass Effect react when they enter a Space Fantasy setting where larger-than-life heroes fight as ground soldiers in a war between two rival gods that acts as a microcosm for a cosmic struggle between good and evil. I'm more interested in the culture clash between the Citadel and the City than the clash between the Destiny Ascension versus Oryx's Dreadnought (Oryx's Dreadnought would win because, spoiler alert, its going to take the Citadel Peoples a while to wrap their heads around the paracausal crap that Destiny brings to the table). Its that sort of thing that attracts me. So I think a little about how ships measure up to each other so I can make a fight look good but ultimately I'll probably fudge things for the sake of the story I want to tell.

If there is a problem here its that I don't know a good way of telling the reader that these are Fallen skiffs without tipping my hand too much. A big part of Book 1 is the mystery that comes from outsiders coming into the "Here There Be Dragons" setting of Destiny. So I can't just have characters point and go, "There we are, that's a Fallen Skiff right there. Might be a Ketch behind it so we gotta be careful." So I have characters say things that I feel they would say like "We saw some ships. Slightly smaller than ours but pack a good punch they might not be able to take one though." (Especially since Mass Effect's lore makes it so that the distances between ships is far beyond any sort of visual range.) Its something I'm struggling with in the chapter I'm writing now because I'm writing fights between the crew, the Guardian, and the Fallen with people not knowing what to call things so I'm having to think of ways to frame things without magically giving the characters knowledge they shouldn't realistically have. Fortunately, as the Mass Effect side of the equation learn more about their surroundings this problem will slowly go away.

Hm, this was a long rebuttal.
 
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A sci-fi crossover fic that ignores each story's technology and a bash fic are two sides of the same coin. The main difference is whether the author is biased in favor of one of them or not.
 
When I read the chapter my mind immediately went to a fallen skiff. Why? Because the fallen don't have fighterjets to send out. They only have 2 types of ships, ketchs and skiffs. The smallest ships they have are skiffs.

Now enough arguing. Let's get back to the story! :)
 
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