Don't Miss Your Deadline! (Manga Editor Quest)

[X] Refuse Suzuki's request, but agree to take on the same workload as the rest of the editorial team (take charge of 5 series rather than 4)
[X] Refuse Suzuki's request and stick with all your current series plus one more (-3 Favor
 
[X] Agree with Suzuki's request and give up one of your current series
-[x] My Secret Ninja Sensei Needs to Stop Training Me


As much as it pains me to give up one of our first manga, with 5 manga, our suggestions are more spread out and we don't have the favor to spend. Masaru is a veteran and should be able to help Morita out.
 
[X] Agree with Suzuki's request and give up one of your current series
-[x] My Secret Ninja Sensei Needs to Stop Training Me


We may have enough favor, but I feel this isn't important enough to spend it. Nor I want to keep driving a wedge between Maeda and Suzuki. Not to mention the fact that at our level any series we handle is always on the brink and I don't want to spend favor to keep a series that may bomb in a week or two.

Subaru is our best series and Tana our best mangaka. Aoki, I like him and I think we've connected the best. And Morita, I honestly feel that at this point his work would benefit more from an experienced editor like Masaru than from us. And also that Masaru would know better how to handle the mother.
 
[X] Agree with Suzuki's request and give up one of your current series
-[x] My Secret Ninja Sensei Needs to Stop Training Me


Personally I just don't really like this story premise and we don't have the stats or experience to bring it up from barely acceptable without a lot of work.
 
[X] Agree with Suzuki's request and give up one of your current series
-[x] My Secret Ninja Sensei Needs to Stop Training Me
 
@zamin , question, even if we switch a series with Masaru, we still have 3 series to work on despite agreeing to work on 4.

Will we be assigned the 4th series, or we need to take "search for 4th series" action?
 
For once, he was actually wearing a suitable work outfit. The color scheme was a little odd, but he actually looked fairly snappy in that dark green suit and red tie. You're not sure about the black gloves and weird eye-shaped lapel pin though.

Judging from Shion's initial delighted reaction, you're pretty sure that this was another cosplay of some kind, but at this point you'll take what you can get. At least he wasn't running around in spandex anymore.
I don't recognize it, I'm sure someone else here will though.

Fortunately, it seemed that most of the board were more interested in tearing at each other rather than focusing on you. You hadn't seen that many backhanded compliments, thinly veiled insults, or venomous insinuations being thrown around since your days back in the high school student council committee.
as above, so below.

or maybe it's the opposite.

You tried not to sigh as you realized that you'd probably have to keep an eye out for any "unfortunate" work problems in the future. And after you'd just burned through most of your reputational favor, too…
well, not our biggest problem. And results will speak for themselves in a bit, hopefully.

"Shion-san. John-san. Maeda-san," Editor in Chief Suzuki greeted you cooly, his eyes showing no emotion as he gestured to the seats in front of him. Beside him sat Masaru-senpai, who looked as exhausted as ever, though he did give your group a friendly smile and wave as you entered.
Don't worry Masaru, we're about to reduce your workload by a LOT!

"I apologize for interrupting your work, but I'm afraid that this information needs to be addressed sooner rather than later," Suzuki said, cold eyes locked on you as you nervously took your seat. "There has been a… change of plans. Though I suspect that some of you might already know this."

You coughed, looking to the side to avoid his intense gaze. It seemed that your Editor in Chief may be a little annoyed about you going over his head like that. But between this discomfort or having to suffer through eight series a week, you know what you'd rather deal with.
and hey, we might have gone over his head, but we accomplished HIS GOALS.

that has to count for something!

"So what's this all about? Did someone finally see sense and reduce our workloads?" John asked bullishly, dropping himself into the seat beside you.

You resisted the urge to flinch at his bluntness, but fortunately for all your sakes Suzuki didn't seem to take offense. In fact, you couldn't help noticing his lips curl upwards slightly as he responded.

"Yes, actually."
he DOES approve, at least a bit!

"Wait, no shit?" John blinked, before a wide smile spread across his face. "Hah! I knew you lunatics would see sense sooner rather than later!"

Aaand there went all the goodwill you'd just gathered. Suzuki coughed loudly, his eyes cold once again as he turned towards the final member of your trio.
..John, please stop talking! Let US do that, we're good at that!

Beside you, John and Shion nodded, both looking relieved at the news that they would not be expected to turn into mini-Masarus in the near future. Across the table, Masaru himself looked like he was torn between bursting into tears or simply passing out in relief.
we HAVE to reveal it's all thanks to us to Masaru later.

He might very well name his next child after us because of it

Your first series is Space Racer Subaru-kun. It had a very strong opening chapter, but our readers weren't happy with the second one. Personally I believe that you jumped too quickly from fast paced action to slow character building.

For the next chapter, I want a strong focus on the race itself. We need to show our readers that the first chapter wasn't just a one-off and that we are actually capable of making a good racing story. I'm not expecting a miracle, but we should at least make sure that our readers are getting what they expect. If necessary, you may even split up the race into more than one chapter in order to create maximum impact."

Space Racer Subaru-kun Requests:
  • In Chapter 3, improve Dynamic Art to at least 70
  • In Chapter 3, raise Special Effects to at least 50

reasonable and fair.

"Your second series is Our Daughter is Actually a Vampire! Interesting premise, if nothing else. I'm pleased that you were able to listen to our requests for the previous chapter, even if some of the advice you received was completely tastele-… ah, I mean, might not have been the most suited," he corrected himself.

"You've managed to raise this series' popularity over the past chapter, so I will not be spending too much time on requests. That said, I would suggest bringing in the main character's wife sooner rather than later. I'll leave the timing up to you, but I expect a chapter focused on her at some point."

Our Daughter is Actually a Vampire Suggestion:
  • Have a wife focused chapter by Chapter 10 at the latest (optional)

again, reasonable, and we're not in a hurry for it anyway. It can wait for a turn in which we'll focus our suggestions on this.

"And for the third series, we have… My Secret Ninja Sensei Needs to Stop Training Me," Suzuki closed his eyes, seemingly gathering the strength he needed to push on.

"Honestly, I don't know why you chose to go forward with a manga whose main themes are 'ninja' and 'ramen'. Everyone who hears about this is going to immediately compare us to Naruto. That said, taken in isolation this… isn't the worst series we've worked with.

Still, 'barely acceptable' isn't going to cut it anymore. For the next chapter, you will need to shore up the weaknesses from this chapter while continuing to develop the story further. In the long run, we need this manga to make it clear that this isn't another cheap Naruto clone.

Personally, I would suggest aiming more on the ramen aspect and turning it into a cooking manga, but if you have another approach in mind then feel free to use that instead. But whatever the method, this series must find a way to stand out from the crowd."

My Secret Ninja Sensei Needs to Stop Training Me Requests:
  • In Chapter 3, raise Setting to at least 50
  • In Chapter 3, raise Characters to at least 50
  • This series must be able to stand out from the crowd by Chapter 10

He's not wrong. this is the most generic of our 3 series, and if it can't stand out from the crows and as "not a Naruto clone" it doesn't deserve to continue.

In any case... well, I don't expect it to last for too long, but we should aim for 10 chapters simply to reach the next mangaka tier.

We might also want to try and spend some favour to get the kid to visit a few ramen chefs, maybe.

As such, Masaru has agreed to take over one of your series for you, while letting you take charge of one of his more… cooperative mangakas in exchange. You will be given a slightly lighter workload - four series' rather than five - until we are confident that you can handle it."

Oh. Ooh. Right, that thing.

"Before I decide, may I know what series I'll be taking over?" you asked, fishing for more information.

Suzuki shook his head. "We'll be going through that together after finishing John-san and Shion-san's own reports from last week's issue. As the more experienced editors, I believed that it would be better to give them 'first dibs', as it were."
I want to give up the ninja manga. It's the hardest one to work with by far, especially given the age and parents of the mangaka.

and hey, Subaru and Vampire Daughter are much more interesting and hold more promise AND they have fewer current requirements in terms of objectives!

Maeda will…

[ ] Agree with Suzuki's request and give up one of your current series
-[ ] Which one?

[ ] Refuse Suzuki's request and stick with all your current series plus one more (-3 Favor)

[ ] Refuse Suzuki's request, but agree to take on the same workload as the rest of the editorial team (take charge of 5 series rather than 4)
I see no reason to spend favour on this, and objectively speaking we made mistakes with ninja manga. Masaru would likely do a better job with it.

I'm fine with trading it for a more experience mangaka.

and about 5 series... we COULD, I suppose... but why would we? I suppose it might make us look better to the Editor-in-Chief and our coworkers, but that's it.

...it MIGHT be worth it, I suppose, but I'm leaning against just giving up ninja manga.

[X] Agree with Suzuki's request and give up one of your current series
-[x] My Secret Ninja Sensei Needs to Stop Training Me
 
I'm a bit wary if we handle 5 series, with 50 Editor points and 5 suggestion without visits. It is enough to make adequate manga, but not decent manga. Lets keep it at 4 for now until we are more skilled.

[X] Agree with Suzuki's request and give up one of your current series
-[x] My Secret Ninja Sensei Needs to Stop Training Me
 
@zamin , question, even if we switch a series with Masaru, we still have 3 series to work on despite agreeing to work on 4.

Will we be assigned the 4th series, or we need to take "search for 4th series" action?

Neither. Next update will have a list of potential series for you to choose from - some from Masaru and some that are completely new.

If the "go along with the Editor in Chief's plan" option wins, then you have to pick at least one Masaru option. Otherwise, you may choose to go for whichever series idea you like best.
 
[X] Agree with Suzuki's request and give up one of your current series
-[x] My Secret Ninja Sensei Needs to Stop Training Me
 
Neither. Next update will have a list of potential series for you to choose from - some from Masaru and some that are completely new.

If the "go along with the Editor in Chief's plan" option wins, then you have to pick at least one Masaru option. Otherwise, you may choose to go for whichever series idea you like best.
and so we're going to play another episode of "where have I heard that before?", in which we try to remember what series just like that we've already read/watched!
 
Neither. Next update will have a list of potential series for you to choose from - some from Masaru and some that are completely new.

If the "go along with the Editor in Chief's plan" option wins, then you have to pick at least one Masaru option. Otherwise, you may choose to go for whichever series idea you like best.

Cool, thanks, I wonder what series we will be given...wait, before us, Masaru edit all of the other manga...

So we might choose from previous top 10 when we research own magazine, from few chapters back?
 
Cool, thanks, I wonder what series we will be given...wait, before us, Masaru edit all of the other manga...

So we might choose from previous top 10 when we research own magazine, from few chapters back?
we get to choose last though, so there's that. Shion and John get the best picks, though I'm not salty about it. We're still getting one fewer series to work on, and we're quickly becoming John's friend and Shion's...guardian angel, I suppose?


oh, and also Masaru's saviour/god. can't forget that!



EDIT: I REALLY want Maeda to just say "You're all welcome" once we get out. and when they ask "oh, I pulled some strings to reduce all of our workloads "
 
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EDIT: I REALLY want Maeda to just say "You're all welcome" once we get out. and when they ask "oh, I pulled some strings to reduce all of our workloads "

I thought we want to make Maeda into "smart slacker", not glory hound?:evil:

Joking aside, as cathartic that is, it will kill all of Maeda Favors, and put him back into Suzuki shitlist after we crawl out of it.
 
[X] Agree with Suzuki's request and give up one of your current series
-[x] My Secret Ninja Sensei Needs to Stop Training Me
 
I thought we want to make Maeda into "smart slacker", not glory hound?:evil:

Joking aside, as cathartic that is, it will kill all of Maeda Favors, and put him back into Suzuki shitlist after we crawl out of it.
hey, I meant to tell our coworkers after we leave the office.

Suzuki not involved

:V


...jokes aside though, Maeda is a political animal basically. we want to avoid to work hard, but we also enjoy being recognized from what we're forced to do.

So... maybe not quite as bluntly as I said, but making it clear that it was US who pushed that change would likely help in getting even more of Masaru's approval. something along the lines of "I'm happy the board listened to me about reducing the workload!"
 
[X] Agree with Suzuki's request and give up one of your current series
-[x] My Secret Ninja Sensei Needs to Stop Training Me

Personally, I feel we could have gone with places with this series.

I mean, the Ramen option could have been phased out as we focused more on the kid's desire to simply be out of his parents/ ninja's thumb and trying to put his heart and soul into anything that might allow him to do so, only for him to realize that, while fun, it's not something he wants to dedicate his whole life to but still giving him valuable life lessons as he tries to find the one thing that truly makes him happy.

Then perhaps at some point in the series the MC realizes that the Ninja arts he practiced do make him happy (foreshadowed by the many times he used them in previous episodes before the revelation) and what he dislikes is the constant fighting and control that the system imposes upon him, thus making a new arc where hetries to find a solution (and I mean an actual solution! Not a cop out like Naruto did).

But, I think we might as well give it up now, it's just not working out very well.
 
again, reasonable, and we're not in a hurry for it anyway. It can wait for a turn in which we'll focus our suggestions on this.

I wouldn't wait to bring out the wife. She's supposed to be one of the most important characters of the cast right after Ikoa and the daughter.

If we cannot do the focus chapter right now, at least we should make a short introduction. And I'd personally do the request by chapter 5 at the latest.

Personally, I feel we could have gone with places with this series.

I mean, the Ramen option could have been phased out as we focused more on the kid's desire to simply be out of his parents/ ninja's thumb and trying to put his heart and soul into anything that might allow him to do so, only for him to realize that, while fun, it's not something he wants to dedicate his whole life to but still giving him valuable life lessons as he tries to find the one thing that truly makes him happy.

Then perhaps at some point in the series the MC realizes that the Ninja arts he practiced do make him happy (foreshadowed by the many times he used them in previous episodes before the revelation) and what he dislikes is the constant fighting and control that the system imposes upon him, thus making a new arc where hetries to find a solution (and I mean an actual solution! Not a cop out like Naruto did).

But, I think we might as well give it up now, it's just not working out very well.

I agree, but that would have required that we managed to make it a long running series. It could have worked if Maeda and the mangaka were veterans with plenty of boosts. But as things stand now, it's not feasible.
 
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[X] Agree with Suzuki's request and give up one of your current series
-[x] My Secret Ninja Sensei Needs to Stop Training Me


Nothing about this option that hasn't already been said, but I am a little interested in seeing what kind of trash manga Masaru has been working with.
 
[X] Agree with Suzuki's request and give up one of your current series
-[x] My Secret Ninja Sensei Needs to Stop Training Me
 
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