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It does have really high heels tho, which are NOT fun to wear, hard to move in, and cause permanent damage to your feet.
There's also a bit of an odds thing going on. There are a lot more fans than there are creators and there's an even larger disparity between the number of official works and fan works you can find. It's almost inevitable that some of them will be better than the originals, especially when they don't need to be consistently better.
So Blake mugged Cinder for her dress, dyed it black but kept the pants.
Truly she has become a jrpg heroine.
A Hero's work... I don't believe that's correct.
I shake my head, slowly. Lucca tuts at me, but she is smiling.
"Not so grand. Simply... she needed aid which I could give. And all things deserve happiness."
*wiggles hand*
Extraneous 'To'You possess the necessary control to learn to spells, as Janus did.
Isn't the saying 'by a landslide'?
This feels like it's incomplete, to me…
With how the time gates opened before Lavos's arrival, it makes sense that it absorbed some of Lavos's ability, enabling it to direct the part to the appropriate points in time.Something I've been wondering for a while, which is what other people's take on the nature of the dreamstone (what the Masamune is made from) considering it was around before Lavos made planet fall (it was passed down to the chiefs of Ayla's tribe after all). @x50413 would I need to write an omake to ask about the dreamstone?
Only now do you understand. Each spell is... diffuse. No, each spell is legion. A collection of countless others, refracted in on themselves a hundred or thousandfold.
When did lightning get launched?let loose a massive wall of fire. For a moment, there was a flickering, an odd sensation that Ruby couldn't place, and then Cinder twisted to intercept the bolt of lightning
On the other hand, one could say its short for 'a Semblance of Magic'Their magic is, in a certain light, simply a learned Semblance.
Did we ever get an explanation for why it echoed across time?You have satisfied a Curiosity.
Through persistent investigation and exposure to ancient knowledge, Curiosity: Soul Magic has become a new trait.
Scion of Ciel - You carry with you the knowledge of the ancient world. You understand the fundamental nature of Soul Magic better than any living individual, and are capable of both teaching its function to mortals and improving upon the ancient techniques, and actions related to the souls of mortals will be more effective. More than that, you have come to understand that you are connected to the world of mortals, even if only by a few links. The strength of such bonds will be far greater for this understanding. [Aura or soul-based actions will be more effective. Bonds with mortals are more potent, for better or worse.]
This echoes across the flow of time. . .
This should be 'and me' - as in, "the teacher taught [the others and] me" - rule of thumb is to use whichever you would use with just a singular individual.There were four of you, you said?"
"Yeah. Ruby, Weiss, Yang, and I
again, 'and me' - "the others were on a team with me"Ruby and Weiss. Yang and I. We... treated each other like sisters.
For a moment, I thought this was set after being sent through time.I have done much in the pursuit of knowledge. I have built wonders that have been misused, and I have allowed terrible things to come to pass."
I think this should be 'it'She'd lost in somewhere in between. I need it. I think it's the piece I've been missing."
Can we get updated versions, or at least what we would search for?
I know it's already an AU, but that's different from having the Staff of Creation, which in canon was what let Atlaa float
"What happened to me" -
me
Well… depending on how canon you consider the additions the DS remake has"s…
Extraneous word
But she already got to her feet?hooking her fingers around the edge and lifting herself to her feet
(Above referencing this)She rolled, spinning to her feet a moment later and watching Blake and Pyrrha trading blows
Move to the beginning? This sounds awkwardly phrasedThe sheath-blade that swept through the smokescreen and sliced across her jaw, therefore, was a small surprise.
Isn't this 'Guardia'?Specifically, the extremely-important pendant of the Guardian line that had been passed down for as long as anyone could remember
Another pedestrian use? SUBTITLES!
And me, based on the sentence it would be part of.
Atlas has the Winter Maiden… would she agree?A more focused examination of a Maiden would be necessary to learn more
There are two people who I'd say are as INTENTIONALLY TOXIC to their children (which is why someone like Gabriel Agreste (miraculous Ladybug) or Shadow Weaver (She-ra) isn't quite at this level, if just barely) - Ragyo & Gendo Ikari.I have never wanted to punch someone in the face more than I do now.
Reminds me of the Fishmen from One Piece.
Interesting note - a gut feeling is your brain taking a snapshot of everything and comparing it to all your past experiences for something similar.
The question I have is how he got transported across the distance.His good eye was open, and staring at her. His chest rose and fell, slowly. So slowly. "Adam...?"
Maybe a canon omake, with an 'after action report' and/or briefing others on the new type of Grimm encountered?Also, this may or may not ever come up in-story, but I've taken to calling those Grimm 'Asterion' (plural Asteria) after the legendary Minotaur of Crete, in keeping with the mythological naming scheme of RWBY
That's not quite true. It's also the place closest to Obsidian's body – the place that has been closest to Obsidian's body for millions of years. For millions of years, Obsidian's power has saturated every inch of this place
I wonder if we could visit that location while in the past, before returning.Now, in the future after things have settled a bit, the crater (or whatever is left behind, no spoilers) might be magically significant, yeah.
Maybe someday Ruby will come back and forge a great wonder here!
They're all unique opportunities. The Dream of RWBY-P is something unique and unprecedented, and the opportunity to give them a physical token is not something likely to come up often
It sounds like Obsidian bridged the gap between the voices?
Perhaps it was a trick of the light, but she thought she saw a light shimmering up at her from below.
I wonder what that light was?and there, just at the base of her feet, he could see a sphere of cold light shining through
An interesting note - the way the two are described acting sounds like the story Qrow told about the Brother Gods…You are the Ataxia. You wait as your other delicately pieces together another puzzle. Slowly, perfectly, the Clockwork's infinite hands finalize the design of the creature before you. Its multitude of lenses examine and catalog every attribute and function.
Finally, its work complete, it withdraws. It observes. And your turn comes.
You reach out with your uncountable tendrils. You dive into this new thing. You seek out the places where it is weak, the places where it has grown flawed in its distance from its creator, and you rend it asunder. Your mouths consume its pieces, your eyes observe its motions in death.
Reminds me of the series 'Young Wizardry'Entropy, you argue, is a part of reality that cannot be removed
Like the brother gods creating people.For the first time, the tendrils of the Ataxia and the Clockwork's hands begin to work in tandem.
While thier enemies also Do Things, it's also true of our Allied Units (to make a comparison to Fire Emblem) are able to take actions.Neopolitan and Roman Torchwick are currently deployed here, in search of the Spring Maiden.
You're forgetting the rarest one - Unclassed.if anything I'd say Foreigner would be most apt for Obsidian, followed by the Caster Class if they were to abide by the constraints of the World/Planet, ala Crimson Moon, to form a vessel
To quote Ashes of the past - "if you don't have a headache, you don't understand Time Travel"!I'd explain it further, but if I'm entirely honest, the exact mechanics of it make my head hurt
YOU WHO HAVE GATHERED THE SEVEN DRAGONBALLS —To quote Ashes of the past - "if you don't have a headache, you don't understand Time Travel"!
*wiggles hand*
not quite? Robo was programmed to study humans.
You can't study them if their dead. He simply devalued the importance of listening to Mother, or internally defined her as a different individual.
Yang pounced forward, landing on all fours in front of Pyrrha and hooking one fist upwards. The shield, naturally, moved to parry.
Except it should be "He and I" if it's a subject and "Him and me" if it's an object.@V01DRei
When someone answers with "Him and I" or "Him and me" to a question both are grammatically correct as they imply more but leave it out. "Him and I [are the answer]" and "[The answer is] him and me" with what is in the [brackets] being implied.
Actually, he didn't really subvert the intention behind it (because he was made by Mother BEFORE she went crazy)Yes. He creatively interpreted his programming in order to subvert the intention behind it, something that would not have been possible without true sapience.
Thus the phrasing.
Not to mention, breaking the timeline might just be one off the few things that could permanently kill him, which he may want at this point.To be fair to Ozpin, if killing Salem actually works and saves millions of future lives, I can absolutely see how he would consider that worth it. Unfortunately for him, there's absolutely no way he actually succeeds and doesn't inadvertently cause Salem to go full Grimm or something equivalent.
Judging by his research, this deadless state is his own fault.Not to mention, breaking the timeline might just be one off the few things that could permanently kill him, which he may want at this point.
Obsidian: This is why you get your hooks in them early.
Lavos: ... Huh. Why didn't I think of that?
Obsidian: Because it requires actual planning.
Lavos: ... Respect your elders brat.
Obsidian: I'm disowning you, you are no longer one of 'my' elders.
Lavos: Big talk for someone in laser range.
Correct me if I'm wrong, but the Lavos core is a fusion of all the species that he "harvested" right? in that case the Obsidean core would look like a human with many animal parts or a human with animal parts and grimm right?
I literally found the video that perfectly describes the quality of canon's writing vs. the quality of this quest.
Lavos reminds me of the Entities from Worm. Say, How would you do a fic with some character from worm getting obsidian?
@x50413, would you be willing to share your playlist for the quest? I do a lot of my own writing with my own playlist, and I'd enjoy listening to what you've found works for you.