It didn't take long for Cadlon Edwyn to finally died.
finally die.
While many mourned his loss, but none were surprised by it.
loss, none were
Something of an oddity, Brys preferred the pursuits of crafter and warriors over those of priests and elders.
of crafters and warriors
Beyond these unusual tastes for a Cadion, Brys was even more difference to the norm due to his preferences in sexual partners.
even more different to the norm
While they weren't many or nor strong, there had been some concerns about how good Cadion Brys would be once he became Cadlon.
weren't many nor strong, (less than certain about this one, but its definitely either "nor" or "or" but for sure not both)
Cadion Brys pointed most of the priesthood is female and most of the military is male due to the divine beauty that the Goddesses grant as a sign of their favour.
pointed out most
He was an excellent warrior and could lead the People in times of was while Morbyn was the obvious as despite being a terrible fighter, she excelled at peaceful pursuits and could guide the People through times of peace.
times of war while, obvious counterpart as? obvious choice in peacetime as? Few different ways that could go, but definitely not right as written.
The divinely royal beauty that women of the royal family was a sign of this from the goddesses.
royal family had was
Picking the best Cadion from the all members of the royal family seemed like a good idea.
from all the members
It was a peaceful day with the sun shining and not a cloud in the sky as Brys, Gwyn and Garwyl. The three Catclaws, often spend their free time together and today is no exception.
Brys, Gwyn, and Garwly often spent their time together, and this peaceful day with the sun shining and without a cloud in the sky was no exception. (this one is tricky, your first sentence isn't actually a complete sentence on its own, so how exactly you want to fix that is up to you from a variety of ways, what I have written out is just one way it could be done)
The presence of his oldest and closest friend Brys and his lower Garwyl is always a comfort to Brys and he often thinks that the three of them are unstoppable together even if he also knows that they aren't actually unstoppable.
his lover Garwyl (assuming that's supposed to lover, and not some kind of positional statement)
That said, he does feel somewhat bad about hanging around Gwyn with Garwyl as the latter has the relationship with Brys that the former has always dreamed her.
Garwyl, as , dreamed of
Brys and Garwyl are ready first as all they have to do is draw their stone knives while Gwyn is slightly behind them as she needs to take a couple of moments to shift from the beautiful form she always insists having around Brys to more combat-oriented one.
insists on having, to a more combat-oriented
The man doesn't even flinch as the razor-sharp stone blade pierces his skin and instead locks eyes with Brys even through only one of the man's eyes is still functional as the other one has been torn out of the socket.
even though only
But only for a moment as Gwyn as caught up with them.
has caught up
Brys is rapidly losing any sense of his own body while Garwl's lower half has completely rotted away, leaving Brys' lover with only one and a half arms.
while Garwyl's lower
With moments, Brys is grasping for breath as his body is restored with both the wound disappearing and his senses returning to him. Sitting upright, Brys is just in time to see Gwyn rip the arm off his attacker, making the man both one-eyed and one-armed.
Within momenents, Brys
But if the goddesses are willingly to save him, perhaps they are also willingly to help out Gwyn.
are willing to save him , also willing to help out Gwyn
Even as Gwyn pauses in mild confusion at her foe not being dead like he should be, the man topples over, life finally living him.
finally leaving him
"And we still don't know how he did it?" demands Cadlon Brys, half-frighten and half-annoyed.
half-frightened
"No," relies Gwyn, "I'm not magic user, but I'm pretty sure it is not possible."
replies Gwyn, "I'm not a magic user,
"It shouldn't be," Brys answers his oldest friend, "It just-no one should be able to do it. To sneak in via a living corpse and attack the royal family. He shouldn't have been able to get so close to father and everyone else."
"Its just, no one
"It is Urth," states Gwyn with no small amount of hatred and distain, "That monster has no regard for what should be done nor what is natural."
hatred and disdain
"Aye," agrees Brys as he thinks back to all that happens.
that happened
Walking about in the still-living corpse of a non-blessed Zaranna-worshipping man Maradysh man, Urth had snuck into Greenbay, somehow using his evil magics to remain undetected from everyone, even the goddesses themselves.
Zaranna-worshipping Maradysh man
From there, the news is downright terrifying as by using powerful and unknown magic, Urth is able to keep Morbyn's Blessing of Arthryn and the Blood of Evalyn even as the spiritual connection to the goddesses is lost when Morbyn's spirit answers the afterlife.
spirit enters the afterlife. (not as sure about this one, depends on the People's way of talking about it)
As horrifying as the news is, Brys is grateful that Arthryn has shared that knowledge with the People as without her, they would know what happened to Morbyn or what Urth had done or even that is was Urth for it was Arthryn who revealed their attacker's identity to them.
would not know what happened
Unfortunately, Urth isn't all that Brys needs to deal with through Brys suspects that Urth has a hand in his other problem.
though Brys suspects that
It isn't too much of a problem as the majority of the time, the moving corpses are isolated and easily dealt with soon or later by the hardy Maradysh.
sooner or later
