An Undertow of Sand (Percy Jackson and the Cthulhu Mythos)

"So you're twelve. Big whoop. I should've given you a bottle. Adrasteia was still nursing at your age."

That brought me up short.

"Oh," I said dumbly.

I tried to imagine the Inescapable in a high chair with a fucking sippy cup and I just can't. I couldn't even do it with Aether or Erebus.

Now imagine the Inescapable being in an inescapable high chair for 12 years.

"Let me out!"

"No. Not until you can sit up straight."

"ARRGGHHHH!"

"Your mother has always gotten a real kick out of doing what no one expects her to."

Fate loves subverting expectations.

Taking talking prophetic tree seeds in return for fighitng the Earth Mother and then tens of thousands of years later you find out it was all for a fucking telemarketing gag? That was Mom's sense of humor in a nutshell.

She's still not funny.

"It'll be funny eventually."

"Then I suppose the heat death of the universe will be a riot."

That was kind of like teaching your kids how to unlock the nuclear football as a fun activity with none of the safety measures.

"Go deep."

"How deep?"

"...just make sure you catch it."
 
Adrasteia was still nursing at your age."
Probably fun for nobody involved.
That should have been lethal
It is kind of funny that every time Percy's parentage comes up people just disbelieve and disbelieve.
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Ooh, fancy Zaglo. Probably scarier in person.
"I swear to god, Apollo…"
The son of Ananke and keeper of dramatic amounts of knowledge, and he swears to God in the Greek Orthodox tradition that he hasn't met.
You mean the Greek god of regret."

He made a confused noise in his throat. "No…? We don't have - who - you mean Aiskhyne?"

I sleepily smiled. "Apollogies."

He stopped walking.

I was able to count to four seconds before he dropped me.

My Bardson is an ass.
Yeah, you deserved that, but so did Apollo for not seeing it coming.

The Night's undivided attention," she answered. "It is not safe to be out right now."

I shivered.
The night is dark, and full of terrors.

Overall, the themes of Memory are really coming to roost. Interesting to see where it leads.
 
I really liked thos chapter and how concerned it left us.
Im also imagining how the entire mythological/supernatural world feels, because in the past weekish (in universe) more info bombs and conflict seen in decades if not centuries.


Im currently trying to headcanon how the events of resident evil 7 happen in universe (for the most part)
Ive got a vague idea on how hades gaie and demeter fit into the narrative.
 
The water came in again, drenching us both. It didn't seem to drain back out again properly, leaving us ass deep in a lukewarm puddle. I craned my neck to look around and saw walls of sand. We were in some kind of crater or hole I definitely didn't remember being here. The sand under us was a bleached wet slurry like mud made of ash.

It must have happened when Apollo teleported in.
Whatever you say, Perce. Apollo did this. Maybe it's even true.
 
Wait if Fate/Percys mom is so strong why is Nyx mesing with her child/projeckt?
Because Nyx is also a primordial god and is also confirmed to be an Elder God that Kronos mentioned in the same breath as Tartarus, Chronus and Ananke. Zeus messing with Ananke is suicide, Nyx however, can hold her own.
 
I am really hyped to see how Percy takes after his grandfather, also apparently Percy shouldn't be alive and Ananke did something to make that possible but because Nyx messed with Percy's metaphysics like Nemesis and Alecto talked about he is in danger which is why he is so weak and feverish. Also I really love how you depicted Rhea this is probably the most unique and interesting interpretation of her I have seen. This chapter was a great one with Percy meeting Rhea and Hecate, talking to Apollo with his shonen eldritch abomination powers, overhearing Luke and Kronos talking. You just went from theme to them, mood to mood in such an entertaining and entrancing way which I really love about this story.
 
I am really hyped to see how Percy takes after his grandfather, also apparently Percy shouldn't be alive and Ananke did something to make that possible but because Nyx messed with Percy's metaphysics like Nemesis and Alecto talked about he is in danger which is why he is so weak and feverish. Also I really love how you depicted Rhea this is probably the most unique and interesting interpretation of her I have seen. This chapter was a great one with Percy meeting Rhea and Hecate, talking to Apollo with his shonen eldritch abomination powers, overhearing Luke and Kronos talking. You just went from theme to them, mood to mood in such an entertaining and entrancing way which I really love about this story.
Nice! Not many people instantly remembered Nemesis and Alecto's comments about Nyx. Sadly, I can't take all the credit for Rhea's character. For some reason Riordan decided to toss out Percy Jackson and the Greek Gods section on Kronos and Rhea for Trials of Apollo and made her out to be a transplant from the Hippie Era, complete with ranting about the patriarchy, having a guru and complaining that the younger goddesses like Iris weren't around for the 'revolution' of feminism where male gods expected you to pop out kids all the time...

Ignoring the existence of Hecate. Artemis. Athena. Demeter is still unmarried, etc, but you know. The main theme is there, just toned down the silly. Making her an eldritch swarm queen was me though.
 
Fallen London is a/was a broswer based texted adventure in a dystopian/cythul styled world. It currently has 2 games that take place in the universe on steam.


These are 2 youtube reviews/summaries for the games by Mandaloregamining.

Sunless Sea
Sunless Skies

Edit:I honestly cant do the series justice.
 
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Well this was. Just all kinds of confusing ominousity.
So what lost you? Rhea saved them. She is a star spawn that didn't rebel. Percy doesn't know where in the social pecking order he is compared to her. Percy is compared to his siblings. Rhea has trouble believing he's a demigod. Prophecy comes up. It includes a line about 'eldest gods' and Rhea calls it an overreach. Rhea lets slip that Artemis has done the 'transform into monster' thing multiple times. Percy is devastated as he thinks Apollo frequently lied to him about her. Percy walks out to beach super mad. Apollo comes down to explain. Gets punched. Percy and Apollo talk it out like bros. Apollo is surprised to find Rhea, who has been off the grid for a long time. She was under the impression no one called because they are lazy/problem isn't that bad/Mom I'm 4612, I Can Handle Myself issues.

Apollo tells her its actually because no one knows how to call her. Percy realizes no one knows anything because Olympus is full of assholes so no one wants to tell them anything. And then on top of it Olympus engaged in revisionist history. They go back to Rhea's place and help her pack. Percy goes to bed early. His Mom calls him over for a chat where she apologizes for fucking up the Quest because he's weaker than expected. Percy has severe self-esteem and abandonment issues triggered by this. Percy asks Mom to check him for flaws. Mom discovers its not Percy's fault because Nyx fucked him over (Nyx messing with him is mentioned in I Discover the Heart of the Cards, It is I! The Intrepid Hero and My Niece Buys My Rabbit A Salad chapters. This was foreshadowed pretty heavily.) Mom is angry.

Mom is too angry to be careful with Percy. He almost gets thrown into the Beyond, which is explained. Hecate shows up. Offers to boot him out. Hecate tells him that what he's been telling himself about making his own Fate is a lot more literal than he thinks it is. Percy wakes up. As a consequence of his mother throwing hands with Nyx, the night is dark and full of terrors.

Anything I missed?
 
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So what lost you? Rhea saved them. She is a star spawn that didn't rebel. Percy doesn't know where in the social pecking order he is compared to her. Percy is compared to his siblings. Rhea has trouble believing he's a demigod. Prophecy comes up. It includes a line about 'eldest gods' and Rhea calls it an overreach. Rhea lets slip that Artemis has done the 'transform into monster' thing multiple times. Percy is devastated as he thinks Apollo frequently lied to him about her. Percy walks out to beach super mad. Apollo comes down to explain. Gets punched. Percy and Apollo talk it out like bros. Apollo is surprised to find Rhea, who has been off the grid for a long time. She was under the impression no one called because they are lazy/problem isn't that bad/Mom I'm 4612, I Can Handle Myself issues.

Apollo tells her its actually because no one knows how to call her. Percy realizes no one knows anything because Olympus is full of assholes so no one wants to tell them anything. And then on top of it Olympus engaged in revisionist history. They go back to Rhea's place and help her pack. Percy goes to bed early. His Mom calls him over for a chat where she apologizes for fucking up the Quest because he's weaker than expected. Percy has severe self-esteem and abandonment issues triggered by this. Percy asks Mom to check him for flaws. Mom discovers its not Percy's fault because Nyx fucked him over (Nyx messing with him is mentioned in I Discover the Heart of the Cards, It is I! The Intrepid Hero and My Niece Buys My Rabbit A Salad chapters. This was foreshadowed pretty heavily.) Mom is angry.

Mom is too angry to be careful with Percy. He almost gets thrown into the Beyond, which is explained. Hecate shows up. Offers to boot him out. Hecate tells him that what he's been telling himself about making his own Fate is a lot more literal than he thinks it is. Percy wakes up. As a consequence of his mother throwing hands with Nyx, the night is dark and full of terrors.

Anything I missed?
The bits where you point back to stuff that happened earlier are what cleared things up for me. For example, the monster thing -- I didn't remember that it was Artemis who transformed them, just that they were hunting her for being a dick.

I think it's just an inevitable problem of a serial format; when I first binged this everything flowed pretty smoothly (other than the "holy hell this is a big complicated world with lots of moving parts" confusion, which I actually like).

Maybe doing something like this where you explain the references back to previous chapters in the future would help out? I know the author of El Goonish Shive, a web comic, does something similar. Though that could also detract or be hard to figure out what will trip people up, so YMMV.
 
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Today was a shit day, and I have no energy left to comment on the update... but, please, know that I adore this story. It's lovely. It's well-written. The characters make me smile, and the gods make me sigh with sadness/ resignation. Your story has reignited my old passion for mythology, and made my days brighter for it.

Thank you, sincerely.
 
Prophecy comes up. It includes a line about 'eldest gods' and Rhea calls it an overreach.
Yuk, I just realized another layer of ambiguity on all of this: "gods" and what really counts as a "god" as opposed to say a "titan" .

Not that any of that matters when Hecate just told Percy he can outright manipulate his own destiny and thus prophecies regarding him are basically only applicable if he lets them be.
I think at this point, Rhea was keeping time by the power of Jimi Hendrix.
which is kind of extra funny considering the whole "cannot see humanity as anything except defective"
 
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So what lost you? Rhea saved them. She is a star spawn that didn't rebel. Percy doesn't know where in the social pecking order he is compared to her. Percy is compared to his siblings. Rhea has trouble believing he's a demigod. Prophecy comes up. It includes a line about 'eldest gods' and Rhea calls it an overreach. Rhea lets slip that Artemis has done the 'transform into monster' thing multiple times. Percy is devastated as he thinks Apollo frequently lied to him about her. Percy walks out to beach super mad. Apollo comes down to explain. Gets punched. Percy and Apollo talk it out like bros. Apollo is surprised to find Rhea, who has been off the grid for a long time. She was under the impression no one called because they are lazy/problem isn't that bad/Mom I'm 4612, I Can Handle Myself issues.

Apollo tells her its actually because no one knows how to call her. Percy realizes no one knows anything because Olympus is full of assholes so no one wants to tell them anything. And then on top of it Olympus engaged in revisionist history. They go back to Rhea's place and help her pack. Percy goes to bed early. His Mom calls him over for a chat where she apologizes for fucking up the Quest because he's weaker than expected. Percy has severe self-esteem and abandonment issues triggered by this. Percy asks Mom to check him for flaws. Mom discovers its not Percy's fault because Nyx fucked him over (Nyx messing with him is mentioned in I Discover the Heart of the Cards, It is I! The Intrepid Hero and My Niece Buys My Rabbit A Salad chapters. This was foreshadowed pretty heavily.) Mom is angry.

Mom is too angry to be careful with Percy. He almost gets thrown into the Beyond, which is explained. Hecate shows up. Offers to boot him out. Hecate tells him that what he's been telling himself about making his own Fate is a lot more literal than he thinks it is. Percy wakes up. As a consequence of his mother throwing hands with Nyx, the night is dark and full of terrors.

Anything I missed?
I actually got most of that (Not Nyx screwing him up, I didn't take the attention as malicious) on the first go, but I still feel like I missed everything beyond the surface details. Which fits a Mythos story, but it does mean there's a certain baselevel of bewilderedness that never goes away.
 
For some reason I'm starting to feel a distinct similarity to "Life is Strange 2" on this one. Or "Interstate 60"..
Mainly, meeting bad strangers and good strangers on their way.

Also, I'd love to see that world as a campaign setting for roleplaying. I've been meening to run Dreamlands for a while, but adding demigods and mythologies to Mythos is like cheese to oranges. Absolutely delightful.

Here you are saying that Rhea's That, and here I am wondering how Kronos, a Proto-Human turned Young God, saw Eldritch Swarm Queen Star-Spawn and thought, "I'ma tap dat"
A Greek God. Duh.
 
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Making her an eldritch swarm queen was me though.
So, question about that. What made you associate Rhea with *checks wiki* Zystulzhemgni? Was it the matriarch thing? Because I can't find any associations between Rhea or Cybelle and bugs or insects. And I remember looking for bug-themes in ancient mythology and being disappointed at how little of it there was. (Also, side note, but if Rhea decides to pretend to be a human like Apollo sometimes does as Fred, her fake-name must be Taylor)

On that note, I have another question. Someone mentioned maybe on Spacebattles about Zoroastrianism, and I looked into it a little, though certainly only a superficial look. If this end up becoming important to the plot feel free to not answer, but the god Zuvran is obviously an Outer God. I'm pretty sure he's either Khaos, Ananke or Chronos. He aparently had equal, but oposing twins: Ahura Mazda, the lord of Wisdom and highest deity in Zoroastrianim and Angra Mainyu, basically the Zoroastrian devil. If Zuvran, a creator-deity, in Khaos, those two would likely be Chronos and Ananke respectively — though it seems weird to me that they would be in opposition, when the two had a relationship already established in the story. Zuvran, on the other hand is also associated with time, which mean he could very easily be Chronos — which is my current guess, but then what of Khaos and Ananke? Same thing if Zuvran is Nyarly.
 
So what lost you? Rhea saved them. She is a star spawn that didn't rebel. Percy doesn't know where in the social pecking order he is compared to her. Percy is compared to his siblings. Rhea has trouble believing he's a demigod. Prophecy comes up. It includes a line about 'eldest gods' and Rhea calls it an overreach. Rhea lets slip that Artemis has done the 'transform into monster' thing multiple times. Percy is devastated as he thinks Apollo frequently lied to him about her. Percy walks out to beach super mad. Apollo comes down to explain. Gets punched. Percy and Apollo talk it out like bros. Apollo is surprised to find Rhea, who has been off the grid for a long time. She was under the impression no one called because they are lazy/problem isn't that bad/Mom I'm 4612, I Can Handle Myself issues.

Apollo tells her its actually because no one knows how to call her. Percy realizes no one knows anything because Olympus is full of assholes so no one wants to tell them anything. And then on top of it Olympus engaged in revisionist history. They go back to Rhea's place and help her pack. Percy goes to bed early. His Mom calls him over for a chat where she apologizes for fucking up the Quest because he's weaker than expected. Percy has severe self-esteem and abandonment issues triggered by this. Percy asks Mom to check him for flaws. Mom discovers its not Percy's fault because Nyx fucked him over (Nyx messing with him is mentioned in I Discover the Heart of the Cards, It is I! The Intrepid Hero and My Niece Buys My Rabbit A Salad chapters. This was foreshadowed pretty heavily.) Mom is angry.

Mom is too angry to be careful with Percy. He almost gets thrown into the Beyond, which is explained. Hecate shows up. Offers to boot him out. Hecate tells him that what he's been telling himself about making his own Fate is a lot more literal than he thinks it is. Percy wakes up. As a consequence of his mother throwing hands with Nyx, the night is dark and full of terrors.

Anything I missed?
As it happens I hadn't picked up on the foreshadowing that Nyx had done stuff she shouldn't have to Percy, but to be clear what I was referring to is the places that seem deliberately confusing. Rhea assuming Percy is a Young God and why, and the implication that there's something going on there for her to assume that, confirmed shortly after with how Percy 'greets' Apollo. What Rhea specifically means when she talks to Apollo about seeing humans as 'defective', and something going on with 'formally adopting mortals', and why Apollo stopped around Rome's time. The visions the Beyond shows him, besides Luke complaining to Kronos. You know, the things that feel like they're not meant to make sense, at least not yet.
 
I actually got most of that (Not Nyx screwing him up, I didn't take the attention as malicious) on the first go, but I still feel like I missed everything beyond the surface details. Which fits a Mythos story, but it does mean there's a certain baselevel of bewilderedness that never goes away.
The attention might not have even been malicious. Nyx might have thought he was a spawn. Perhaps she disapproved a bit of how his mother has coddled him so far. Perhaps she was legitimately unaware that his mother even had plans for him as opposed to being typical Greek parent. Perhaps she knew exactly what he was and what was planned for him and decided to alter the deal.
So, question about that. What made you associate Rhea with *checks wiki* Zystulzhemgni? Was it the matriarch thing?
So, this is Riordan's fault, honestly. Rhea in the Hidden Oracle literally rants against the patriarchy (in reference to the Titans, Nero and company and the very concept of Western Civilization to boot) as a bit of a New Age, Hippie caricature. I was less than impressed with that take, mostly because Riordan can't seem to decide who Kronos is.

In PJO, we are told the Golden Age of Man and such was propaganda and Kronos was a bad ruler from the start to the point that he suspected his family members of avoiding him. He fell in love with Rhea and convinced her that he would be better. They got married. He got Prophecy from Koios apparently? (Because Riordan changed things from classic myth to make HoO work so Ouranos was 'scattered' from the dethroning so who Zeus got his Prophecy about Athena from is never explained) Kids were born, he was still an ass, you know the story.

However, the obvious problem with being an asshole, is that no one like you. We have Kronos is a bad ruler, very cruel going around using time powers on mortals to watch them die, etc so the first Titanomachy was super righteous. In the second Titanomachy, we then turn around and have Hecate (who fought in the first war against Kronos) and Oceanus (who was neutral) join Kronos despite knowing what he was like. So either Olympus had somehow sunk low enough that they honestly thought 'yeah, Kronos is better than this' which is not depicted in the story so it looks like Hecate flipped for...reasons and Oceanus comes out of literally nowhere. Hecate and Oceanus are morons of the highest order. Or Riordan went full idiot on the simplistic morality and all "Titans" are on the wrong side because reasons and he wrote himself into a corner with the 'world in sleep' line of his prophecy so he needed Morpheus too (because the mortals can't actually hurt any of them or *see* them since Hecate is the goddess of the Mist so why did they even bother with that sleep spell aaaaahhhh).

Then we get to Trials of Apollo and Rhea rants about him like he was a 1930s husband where her primary concern was him being 'so square' you could cut corners off him being super traditional wanting her to pop out kids all the time as if what we're told in PJ and the Greek Gods about them was also thrown out the window and she married him from societal pressure and goes on to say that Iris and the younger goddess weren't around the the 'revolution' of feminism or something...

So out of sheer spite and annoyance, I went the complete opposite direction. Rhea's world view is centered around her literally popping out kids all the time as a queen of a swarm, but in a matriarchy. Nero and co getting their hands on her isn't bad because she doesn't want to be subjected to patriarchal nonsense, but because her existence is a doomsday weapon greedy idiots wanting to control all Oracles might trip. Rhea willingly married Kronos and was happy about it. She is someone who could keep Titans like Iapetus and Hyperion in line. Zeus and Poseidon care about her enough to argue about who is her favorite as per Chiron in TLT, but she's not on Olympus mediating and seems to have just left her kids to do whatever to the world is a loose end shared by PJO and classic myth that this ties off. And in the next update, why it took 5 swallowed kids for her to do anything about Kronos.
As it happens I hadn't picked up on the foreshadowing that Nyx had done stuff she shouldn't have to Percy, but to be clear what I was referring to is the places that seem deliberately confusing. Rhea assuming Percy is a Young God and why, and the implication that there's something going on there for her to assume that, confirmed shortly after with how Percy 'greets' Apollo. What Rhea specifically means when she talks to Apollo about seeing humans as 'defective', and something going on with 'formally adopting mortals', and why Apollo stopped around Rome's time. The visions the Beyond shows him, besides Luke complaining to Kronos. You know, the things that feel like they're not meant to make sense, at least not yet.
Oh, that's fair. My bad. People being confused about WTF Percy is was a bit of a running theme? Athena double checks him being mortal. Artemis bluntly asks Apollo 'What is he?' Nemesis and Alecto are confused about it. The only notable thing is Rhea being super old is also weirded out. What she specifically means about defective is literally Kronos' issue with modern humanity being lesser than what he's used to/started as. Same issue. She mentions earlier when talking about Percy's conception that 'humanity is not that far gone....I think.' I actually thought the visions were straight forward, but I guess it requires a little meta knowledge since we didn't have nearly as much chatter here and I only recently posted the Informational.

Nyx is a Name of Shub-Niggurath. She's the three eyed goat in the vision. Ananke is a Name of Nyarlathotep. She was the bat. It was a mimic of the eagle vs horse vision of Zeus and Poseidon canon!Percy saw in The Lightning Thief. Tartarus is also a Lovecraft god, as is Pontus.
 
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Oh, that's fair. My bad. People being confused about WTF Percy is was a bit of a running theme? Athena double checks him being mortal. Artemis bluntly asks Apollo 'What is he?' Nemesis and Alecto are confused about it. The only notable thing is Rhea being super old is also weirded out.
Right, but that's always had the cover of Percy being Ananke's kid rather than the Young Demigods that everybody is used to. It's easy to go with the surface read that him being the kid of such a 'senior' deity, with the education to match, takes people back a step because they're not used to it.
What she specifically means about defective is literally Kronos' issue with modern humanity being lesser than what he's used to/started as. Same issue. She mentions earlier when talking about Percy's conception that 'humanity is not that far gone....I think.' I actually thought the visions were straight forward, but I guess it requires a little meta knowledge since we didn't have nearly as much chatter here and I only recently posted the Informational.

Nyx is a Name of Shub-Niggurath. She's the three eyed goat in the vision. Ananke is a Name of Nyarlathotep. She was the bat. It was a mimic of the eagle vs horse vision of Zeus and Poseidon canon!Percy saw in The Lightning Thief. Tartarus is also a Lovecraft god, as is Pontus.
Ahhh, right I getcha.
 
Y i k e s

Helicopter mothering at 110% alterness.

Rheas alien perspective was a fantastic point. I totally wasnt expecting her to go from 'groovy' to 'genocide' in a few lines. A reminder that gods are not simply powerful people, as the setting often portays them as. They arent people at all, they're just power wearing a little human suit.
 
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