Crimson Flare is probably more useful for the contest of primacy yes but it's less useful for everything else than the other two options since most of it's power is locked behind getting the Azure ring. Since we don't have that yet it seems like it makes sense to put it off for later.
That's something I said before yes, that the reason Crimson Flare seems less useful is because most of its power is gated behind the Azure Ring. But it's actually the most useful option currently being offered, just because once we get it Dominion will massively boost our combat abilities and bring the most utility out of the present options on the table.

It costs less Arete, allows us to get Ennobling to further show the citizen what we can offer them (we can refund it afterwards when we get a massively improved version of it), lets us put in place an alternative solution so that we are not consigning an entire civiliation to a slow death (and the Gisena option wouldn't help with this, it would just outsocial them so hard they would happily ruin their lives for us) and even costs less Arete so we can spend it on some other things like a Praxis upgrade or save it for the next EFB!

Looks like a pretty sweet deal to me, the only issue is take-off, but even a mostly potential EFB will be a massive improvement against Avecarn and we put out enough tactics in the last three updates that those will surely help us increase our chances as well.
 
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[X] The Ring of Power: Crimson Flare
[X] Renaissance Woman

I like the flavour G-DS and W-DS too much to subsume them in A-DS without ever having used them. Plus I was prepared to spend 14 arete on stances to win on a social level and still hope to save up for Flare by the time we met the Azure ring but 28 to give up on the infiltration - i.e. preemptively lose - is too much. If I were to delay Flare by 28 arete then picking the option that overwhelms the Temple in our preferred style is better. Not to mention curse mitigation, graces, progression for Gisena, Nullity powah...

Stances and Flare* are open picks too. They can be bought whenever we have the arete, A-DS can be bought piecemeal and Flare has a down payment and promised refund. There will be sufficient other chances. Conversely, Renaissance Woman requires the confluence of Gisena reaching a breakthrough in the narrative and us having 28 arete all in one go available, that's a much rarer opportunity.


*24 is harder to get than 4x7 and we're aiming for a Ring confrontation so I am putting in a preference vote for Crimson Flare
 
What ho, news from the front? Nought but arms and armor, 'far as eyes can see.


Gold, the untarnishable color we all know and love. Similarly, can anything really be said about the Fisher King story? It's had enough variations as to be obscured in its own right, but the principle remains untainted: the parable of a king whose character is reflected by the land he rules. Whether it's the Portrait of Dorian Gray or any of a million villains seeking life eternal, the concept holds the mind on a deeper level than pure logic by painting morality as a real force. Even those faults we find sympathetic can be the source of terrible consequences, when projected against the impersonal backdrop of power and privilege.

Here it's probably just a dude who loves to fish. We're not even a king, do we qualify? I don't think those kinds of ruling elite powers are in our character as voters to develop, if Ennobling getting ignored for Vigor Itself was anything to judge by. Might and charisma are eminently trustworthy, and we tend to prefer waifus to brofus besides. That the Fisher King was about how a ruler cannot rely solely on being a great warrior is a sloppy segue, but nevertheless a point worth making.

There were no prey for Gisena's blast-fishing experiment in the river, but scarce hours later they encountered a picturesque lake, freshwater glittering in the sun and spanning very nearly to the horizon. Lilies bobbed across its expansive surface as birds and bugs circled lazily about, the halcyon chorus of life uninterrupted.
Was this Accretion in action, or just actual good luck? We're exhausted right now so it's possibly just the latter, pretty places do actually exist all over when dealing in untouched wilderness. Which the Voyaging Realm literally mostly is at any given time, owing to their stupidly vast and ever-shifting labyrinth of random encounter tables and Fate Tectonics topography. That it's not just beautiful but apparently harmonic is intriguing though...

"Well, this is downright idyllic!" Gisena exclaimed, spinning around to face the water. She skipped happily down to the shore, humming as she went.

"It's downright suspicious." He followed, keeping his eyes peeled. They'd spoken of fishing, and a fishing spot appeared. It could be benign, the world yielding to his whims on this small matter - a faint echo of the causality-bending influence he'd once exerted by sheer power of spirit.

Gisena skipping sounds absolutely charming, in the sense that everything she does is literally mentally influential to witness. Also cute as hell, but personality does factor in a lot there.

How the hell does the Astral work if it actualizes quantum phenomena anyway? Does it actually fold timelines or is it just forcing through sub-entropic functions in a convenient legend-shaped package? We're all pretty okay with Hunger slowly becoming the wrapping to our ever-growing mythical egg roll, but does that mean his spiritual corpus is slowly folding in on itself, qualities echoing internally so loud that external reality will one day become unable to even variate in his presence? It's not any less possible than whatever was going on with Jotarun and the Maiden at least.

Not sure if Gisena's happy reaction was a pre-emptive means of keeping Hunger from avoiding the pond out of paranoia, I'd trust the sorceress's instincts more but even she doesn't necessarily know why she does things. The qualities of findross induce perfection without the in-between steps of inception or development, so her Nullity is inhumanly effective despite having done nothing but cosplay professionally as the Maiden for some 15-20 years.

Long seconds passed. Nothing struck at them, from ambush or otherwise; he settled into a watchful wariness.

Letrizia had Verschlengorge extend a hand over the water, acting as a makeshift pier. He carved a rudimentary fishing rod from a branch and some wire, while Gisena tinkered with one of the Armament's dumb-fire munitions, its fuses safely set aside.

I like how the 'or otherwise' is almost an afterthought here. Hunger knows it's unlikely, but he's seen too much already in his line of work to believe that he couldn't sit down to go fishing and end up challenged to a deathmatch by a wandering panda or lakebed kelpie before he finished throwing the line.

Also, in the far-future world of the Human Sphere, smart weaponry is so ubiquitous the alternative has entered common parlance and is used without fanfare. Are we dealing with a tomorrow so advanced that even sidearms can have minor AI for stabilizing gyroscopes and recoil mitigation? How about waste heat, have they finally found a way to recycle that efficiently without risking catastrophic meltdown? Have they at last managed to invent tires that don't go flat in the cold?

"You go first," he handed Letrizia the rod, and some processed meat for bait. "It's simple. Flick the rod to cast the line and wait."

"A-alright." Letrizia took the rod from him and cast the line with a determined expression. "How long does it usually take?"

"Depends," he shrugged. "Could be minutes, could be hours."

You'll always be the [Master Baiter] in my heart, Hunger. Using the ancient and terrible fishing arts on such a sweet and innocent young woman, all just so you can take a nap!

"That long?" She asked petulantly. "Couldn't you hunt the fish with your physical power? You slew an Astral beast the size of a giant!"

"I'd rather rest for a time," he replied, settling in. "That bandit leader was well-equipped and skilled. I exerted myself more than I'd like. The well of my power has thinned."

"Hmph," She tossed her hair primly. "So, we're to wait your pleasure while you rest? You could just as easily sleep while Verschlengorge is moving."

"Yes, you're to wait," he said dryly. "And fish."

I think the comparison of effort expended between those slaughters should demonstrate how size has no real relation to Astral Rank. I guess if you're a literal animal it makes it easier for you to build a legend by being big and scary, but come on. Or do they get bigger and more intimidating by having Feats and Rank? I get the feeling I'm going to be asking questions to that effect a lot with this magic system...

I wonder if an intelligent beast might be able to use its own body parts for a panoply? The Muscle Wizard build implied we could have an option that centered our might in our own flesh, but what manner of advancements would open up to customize such a choice? I doubt we'll ever know, degeneracy of such proud and noble vintage as that is too much for us. Better to stay dry upon the branch than to drown in that ocean of magnificence.

"A-ah."

They sat in silence for a bit.

"W-well, that's just totally unreasonable!" She finally said, turning to glare at him.

"I never told you I was going to be reasonable."

"That's true... Wait, I-I mean, you shouldn't have to tell people that! Reasonableness is the expected order of things!"

"Do as you like. I'm resting here."

That Doom dodge, so casual you'd think it was innate. Was he this much of a social heavyweight before the Accursed showed up? If his wife managed to keep up with this kind of attitude back when he was still Rank 6+, how much willpower did she have? Was she a Ranking elite too, daughter of the Tyrant and second only to his own saber? If so, what kind of agony did it drive her to sever that tie – or did his legend make an escape possible, abducting the Tyrant's ideal of Treachery just as much as the Forebear's Blade stole away the weight of his Age?

Blind speculation above, but justifiable. He must have had conversations like these so often back then, with what friends he could gather and what food he could scrounge up. What memories remain to him would have to include a few of those, heartfelt joy and honest gratitude for their time together inextricably tied to his knowledge of them as people. How bittersweet then this tiny excursion must be, to add another to that collection of fishing buddies, a second tapestry of scars visible only in the ripples of pond-water.

"Mmh..." Letrizia slouched unhappily.

He chewed on a stalk of grass. "Hey. What do you think our chances of getting out of here are? Eight out of ten? Nine?"

"At least nine, I'd hope! Both you and Miss Gisena are strong... maybe ninety-five out of a hundred times we should escape? As long as we don't have too many encounters like today."

"I tend to attract trouble. So does this guy." He gestured towards the Armament with his head.

I never thought I'd be forced to consider that Hunger might secretly be a Grovyle, but here we are. What if he knows how to grass whistle, does that mean he's also Dycedarg's Elder Brother? We have recently learned a sword-skill best described as Heavenly...

The impromptu comparison between Hunger and Devouring Armament is well-founded, we now know. For all the Space Opera conceits, it's a weapon of unbearable power crafted to straddle the line between hero and monster. Power is as power does, and for those willing to bear the burden of self-doubt, the eternal Pyrrhic spectre hanging overhead may yet be crown and throne to an empire worthy of the name.

"Hmph! True enough. Maybe if you were a bit more reasonable, that wouldn't be the case."

"Fire me if you like. I'll retire and become a fisherman."

She laughed. "I'd like to see that!"

"Point is, we don't know exactly what the future will bring, or if we're all going to make it. It's worthwhile to look around and enjoy this place every once in a while. Steal what joy you can."

The weathered veteran wisdom on display here is strong. It's a strange thing to hear from a Cursebearer, but then the man beneath the Frame is always more interesting. Also more Interesting. I can't wait to see in what ways our desire to take time to ourselves and steal joy from the world can be wielded against us. Surprise attacks are intense, sure... but what of surprise con-artists, or surprise Condition upgrades?

I also don't think Letrizia's being entirely facetious there. It's a pleasant thought, the old battle-scarred slayer and savior finally allowed to find peace beside the gentle waters. Not realistic, but then dreams are beautiful precisely because they aren't real, but are instead derived from them. Her sincere well-wishes are appreciated, and paint a picture of a woman whose heart is warmer and more caring than Ms. Soryu-Langley's ever was.

Letrizia looked down, her expression conflicted. "You're right. You're right, of course, but..."

He closed his eyes, letting his instincts guide him. "You feel like you don't have time for that. That people are depending on you. That if you don't achieve what you've set out to achieve, it will all have been for nothing."

If it weren't true it wouldn't sting so bad. That kind of weight can bury a person, change the way they view the world. It's not a martyr's road, at least not in my opinion. But it's not a way to win at anything, not by letting yourself be undermined by turning what should be a source of strength into a weakness. The millions who you're trying not to think of as a statistic can't realistically ever know what you did or why, but they will likely suffer for it somehow either way.

The Brand of the Champion is cruel, Accursed in origin or otherwise. Always another demon to banish, royal to save, empire to conquer. Little Timmy's down in his well, and no one else ever has rope and bucket to spare. The desire to prove oneself fades in the face of Sisyphean repetition; the mantra of eternal struggle loses power with the realization of asymmetric consequence. Winning becomes like breathing: you die when you stop.

She gasped. "H-how did you-"

"I felt the same, once." He paused, thinking carefully.

"There was a magic in my second world. Hard to quantify or explain. As you accumulated power you could do impossible feats. My enemy was very skilled in it. He'd spent centuries upon centuries gathering strength. Fighting him was like fighting the tide. Endless setbacks every week. Whenever we failed, people died. Whenever we didn't act, people died. I fought him for eleven years. If we hadn't taken what moments we could, however brief, we would have lasted... maybe five or six. That final stretch, it was only the strength that I'd gained in those moments which kept me going."

And this right here is the textbook social-hammer. Experience, charisma, willpower. He tells her he's been there, and then follows through by articulating it in vivid detail. You can feel how much he's leaving out, how many stories he's folding together within each sentence.

The picture he paints is dark to the point of dystopia. A foe with power over fate itself, rigidly devouring every enemy that lacks the sheer might to topple him outright. Not bothered by a thousand cuts, in fact he almost seems to enjoy it that way for the misery and despair it drills into everyone involved. He is not the stream-trapped fish or the stream-breaking rock, but the riverbed whose eldritch groove gives the stream shape. Anything not following its course will dry up or be washed away. He is Age and Treachery, personified and embodied.

Like the Cultivators of Even Further Beyond, I must ask if he was always so terrible. Certainly he was once a child and then a man, but what was the moment he scarred into his spirit the words that would one day become him? Was it worth the cost, or did he sell his soul in vain? The shadow he cast over Hunger's second world was deep and dark, but we know next to nothing of the man who cast it.

She blushed. "I-I get it. You d-didn't have to make a whole speech and everything."

"Stupid."

"What?"

"'You didn't have to make a whole speech and everything, stupid.' Say it properly. What is the nobility coming to these days?"

MC Red Ring, Hungry on the mic! Even in space, no one can hear you Weeb.

It's a great line, right out of nowhere. Dialogue's so clean it's actually alien to me. Do I just not read the right books? Do I need to watch more Anime? Is it possible to learn this power?

"You! Aaah... I was trying so hard not to be a stereotype! Is this how everyone sees me, even you and Miss Gisena? That stupid Old Terra show..."

"I don't remember much. Bits and pieces. But you have to admit... the Armament. And you kind of look like her."

"Yeah. Neuron Genesis Cathedrelion, right? It's been a joke for almost as long as we've had the Armaments. I even got implants to change my hair..."

Hmm... did her peers avoid the subject, or has she been in denial? It's not something that should come up often in polite conversation, but the reference wouldn't go unmade forever. Not that I've ever seen the show itself, but from everything I've heard that's a cruel comparison to make anyway. No boy wants to be Shinji, I imagine the same is true of girls and Asuka?

On the other side of the fourth wall, I respect the willingness to acknowledge the reference up front. That's commitment to the design docs right there. I have to ask though: how the hell did they preserve a TV-Brand EVA variant series from all the way back on Old Terra well into the 'modern' times? Is it a relic, a museum piece? Has it been bought and sold and preserved by fans carefully against the tide of constant remakes? If anyone's actually died to protect the memory of Hideaki Anno's masterpiece, I think he'd be rolling in his Astral grave.

"What?" He sat up. "So you're a natural redhead as well?"

Her hair shimmered for a moment, then shifted to a shade of fiery red. "Y-yeah. I thought white was more professional and would break the association, but everyone was like, 'That's exactly what she'd do!'"

Oof, that's disquieting. The effort to distinguish oneself, not only failing but reversed back onto her. Did she just have tone-deaf friends or were they jabbing at her? I suppose with teenagers it can be hard to tell, especially in the wealth-studded world of interstellar ducal politics.

Wait, were all of her other friends chibi pastiches of lesser-known anime characters? Nevermind this is the best secret plot point, I'm not kidding. A playpen full of little kids with blinky magic eyes and little nerf swords, growing up into elementary schoolers with backpacks full of badly-disguised Japanese textbooks... I dare not imagine further afield than Middle School, err my image of Ms. Von Atriez be forever stained by the phantom impression of mega-crossover space opera high school AU Asuka.

I thought I'd have more to say about her at-will hair shimmer. Apparently those implants aren't dye implants, but rather something else entirely? Perhaps dye can be activated or deactivated at will, which means she can swap between making Ritz Malheur feel bad about herself and not.

...was that pun intentional? Is the Voyaging Realm a simulation of some kind, and that's why the Rings are all in here? I could believe a world with Astral Rank would be able to manifest any number of metaphysical pseudo-Universes. It would explain why objects of such incredible meta-cosmic power are seemingly incarnated perfectly into this one location of locations; it's not just constructed, it's semi-illusory, drawing from realms of fiction and fantasy to divine cosmic truths and then express them as if literally true. If the boss of the Temple is Li-Grim, I'mma scream. (In a good way.)

"Don't fight it. Embrace it. Then people will naturally see the areas where you're different."

"Oh? L-like what?"

"You're childish at times, but on balance I'd say you're much more level-headed and mature than she was. She always acted like she had something to prove. You're truly comfortable piloting Verschlengorge. You and he have a good connection. Though not as good as mine with my sword."

It kills your enemies, it saves your life, it regrows your limbs, it makes you swole, it keeps you motivated, it helps you grow, it supports you no matter what...

Truly, the Forebear's Blade is best girl.

"Well," She said quietly, failing to contain a smile. "I am five years older. Of course I'd be more mature!"

He nodded, leaning back down again.

Got 'er. Just swept that entire pile of natural teenage self-doubt under the rug, replacing it with keen advice and no small amount of simple reaffirmation. It happens on its own, but it's quicker if someone just shows you there.

But is it really? Probably from the point of view of someone like Hunger or Gisena, who are idealized medieval fantasy protagonists on the level of Arthur Pendragon and Jeanne d'Arc respectively. The idea of time spent questioning oneself internally as a good thing for its own sake is beyond luxurious to someone whose world turns on translating power into purpose and then back again. In a way they're controlling how many people have narratives competing with their own. Selfish in that regard, but all too likely the moral option when the alternative is a life of struggle and self-compromise. It's the pathfinder's wish for others to follow in word, not in spirit.

"Hey," She spoke up again. "That magic from your old world. It sounds a bit like the power of the Armaments. Have you ever heard of the concept of Astral Rank?"

"We didn't formally name it or anything. If you lived and did great things, you grew powerful. As your power grew, the world started to yield to you. First in small ways, then increasingly so."

"It's actually a field of study that I dabble in. A hobby of mine!"

It must be awesome to have friends whose hobbies are so eminently useful. Competence memes aside, I've no clear answer as to the difference between a viable resource and trivia. Is it the sincerity of pursuit, an exceptional attribute explored in detail, an unconscious acquiescence to the ideal of power, or pure chance? The Accursed's chosen could turn any quality, process, or concept to power – but what makes it possible for the common specimen to do the same?

I wouldn't be surprised if individuals suited to a role as a Companion Remitance were as rare as viable Cursebearers themselves.

As an aside, learning about Accretion back on the previous world must have been a time-consuming process. How does one distinguish between power born of supremacy and supremacy born of power? Time distorts all kinds of information, the specifics of continuity most of all. There's no reason I can see to believe these hypothetical dominant identities to have been fact and not fiction, unless one had access to a soul-crushingly long lifespan or insane record-keeping.

Did Hunger learn of its laws from a Fairy, or was it the Tyrant's own propaganda that gave it away with the passing of centuries? The Tyrant's obsessive following of Age and Treachery now makes more sense, at least generally: lies and long life literally made him stronger as time went. Enemies die? Paint them as your doing for power. Friends die? Claim they were traitors and use them as justification for massacre. More power, more murder, a longer life defined by outliving your foes, the story continues on into infinity like a TV Serial that just won't die. Perhaps all who wear Rank must eventually contend the Doom of Zombie Simpsons.

She shifted to face him directly, tracing figures in the air with her index finger. "The most commonly used analogy is this. So, you know how objects within the physical realm have a property called mass?"

"Sure."

"Mass distorts physical space. Some say the curvature of that distortion is called gravity."

"Okay."

"Similarly, some entities have a property we call 'Rank.' Rank distorts the Astral realm as mass does the physical, and the curvature of that distortion is called 'Pressure.' By exerting Pressure, an Armament can accomplish great feats. It's an amazing ability! Rank gives you the power to achieve the conventionally impossible, to overturn the system of the world, to blast with awe and with fear, greatness undiluted like a blazing star! It cares nothing for stipulations or prognostications. It is the sharp bright sword of will that cuts to the heart of the matter, bringing mere physical law to heel!"

Hah, that's the quote used for Sharpbright later on! It's pretty sick, I'm glad our apprentice wizard daughter has a magic soul-sword too. Gisena has the chance to get a sword too – a metaphorical one, but the Perfecting Blade, a blade remains! The comparison to gravity is very straightforward, which I respect. But it begs the question as to what warping Astral space – the psychic conceptual ocean which encompasses everything that is, was, will be, will not be, and could never have been – actually entails. Quantum physics and its panoply of hypotheses numerous and convoluted aside, what does it mean for the setting that causality itself is already constantly being mannequin-posed by the subconscious desires of sufficiently impressive personalities?

It sounds like the kind of thing that spawns monsters. Astral monsters, if you will.

"...I get it. You didn't have to make a whole speech and everything, stupid."

Before her shocked expression could subside, he gently raised a hand.

"Just kidding. It was a wonderful explanation. Did you write that? It sounds like more than just a hobby to you."

Yes Letrizia, we're going there again. Get out your snorkel, 'cause you're gettin' dunked.

Her speech actually was pretty inspiring too. More than its structure, she wrote it well with her own energy and speaking voice in mind. It noticeably leaves enough time to gauge whether the audience is listening before the big explanation comes in, which speaks to a lot of experience for someone so young. Wealth hasn't been a social crutch for her, that's for sure.

"Mm-hm!" She grunted, her face still red. She cleared her throat. "I'm hoping to present it at a Symposium one day. The Armaments have been with us for millennia, but we still don't understand all their secrets. Even most pilots only know the basics! You compress your Armament's Pressure into a Shroud and that makes you unstoppable within its radius. But recent studies have shown that even humans can develop a Rank! If we properly apply ourselves, we can go so much farther as a species, and even as individuals! It wouldn't much surprise me if your powers operated off a similar principle!"

"A shadow in the Spirit realm, huh... Let's test it. It sounds like your society has developed quantified measurements for this attribute."

"Yup. Rank is usually measured from 1 to 10 in a hyper-logarithmic scale, though values above that should be possible. An Ereadhihr - an Armament - at full theoretical strength is Rank 10. No amount of physical force can so much as impair their actions! We've made some Armor Prototypes that manage to reach the middle ranks, enough to outclass conventional weapons in dogfighting or ground combat scenarios, though no number of them could even compete with an Armament. Individual humans typically have a Rank between 1 and 3, with anything above 2 being exceptionally rare."

I suppose pilots wouldn't know that much, since they only live 5~10 years in the saddle before they're too weak to continue! Combined with the complacency that overwhelming power brings, and I'm not quite surprised that whole mega-cosmic empires are more worried about political and economic instability than the specifics of their proscribed Precurser nuclear option.

The talk of a Shroud is even more interesting in retrospect. While we've seen by now it's a side-effect of having Rank 9+, we have a Shroud already. The Evening Sky was first touted as one, though we prefer to shape it into a cloak or mantle as whim takes us. Its direct mention of an atomic bomb as the standard for what can scratch us is thusly quite appropriate – that level of firepower's exactly the kind of thing a giant military robot would be compared against. As is its conspicuous major vulnerability to magic-lined attacks, the same kind that other giant robots would be using.

Does this mean the Pirate Lord took his Evening Sky enchantment from a dead or dying Armament Prototype? Was his armor fashioned from one, scoured of tech but retaining its Ranking powers? I cannot even speculate beyond this point. Just keep an eye on that word, I expect it'll come up again.

"That fits my observations of your Armament as well. Its full potential is well beyond even that of my enemy at his height. Ereadhihr. The language of the Foremost?"

"That's right! You have good instincts for this sort of thing." She hummed happily. "Ereadhihr, the Elder Implement. They weren't just a weapon to the Foremost. The Foremost could harness them for countless tasks, bend realms both physical and Astral to their whims, apply the Interdict of Cognition that immunizes us from rampant intelligences, and so much more!"

Instincts, or the connection itself? Our Rank isn't high enough to always be right... but maybe Verschlengorge's is? It's damaged so that's unlikely. That title sounds deeply undersold, as if in translation it's lost everything beyond the skin of its meaning. Perhaps that's the point, like with Tolkien's constructed languages. How does one tell of a machine whose parts sing with power older than the Universe itself?

Also apparently the Interdict of Cognition is a holdover from an earlier quest? I can't speak to that, I haven't even finished reading Bleach Quest yet. I can buy that preventing Grey Goo scenarios is a big deal though, especially with that big glowing neon 'Astral Rank goes here' sign metaphorically sitting above the first true AI whose ascendance represents the victory of techne over mere psyche forevermore. Please ignore the pure organic biology of every Astral monsters we've encountered so far. Move along, move along, Pay no attention to the robotic overlords behind the curtain!

He turned to glance at Verschlengorge. "Did they pull the ladder up behind them? Prevent anyone from making more?"

"Ah, no, we don't think they did anything like that. But... it's complicated. To create a true Armament, an entity with the potential to reach such elevated Rank, there's a special component involved. A sort of... Curse that's inextricable from its core essence. Verschlengorge has one as well, of course. It's called... the Affliction of the Decimator."

And there's the reason for the name. The Fisher King brought about the ruin of his land due to deeply human failings. An iconic predecessor to the King Arthur monomyth, in many ways critical to comprehending its thematic design, it's heart is that of a question of where the man ends and the legend begins. The ideal of duty and honor, a source of motive and method alike for becoming mighty, wise, and glorious – brought low by the imperfect mortal spirit beneath, not scoured by the means of its empowerment but rather elevated beside it. A crude and ungainly thing, not fit to dwell within the same body as so noble a soul, his flaws became the punishment of his empire. What they could not allow him to be, they shouldered in his place unwillingly.

The King protects his people, by length of sword, by weight of throne, by right of crown, by promise eternal. He had the sword, the crown, and the throne – but the promise was lacking. That invisible life-force which distinguishes a human from a zombie, a seed from a sapling, and a white void from a blank canvas... wasn't there. The man was a legend, but somehow despite both his efforts and that of his people, he wasn't the right one.

He wasn't the King. He was just a Tyrant.

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[ ] Spill - There's no way this is a coincidence. The only question is, is this the work of the Accursed, or of the Apocryphal Curse? Whatever the case, you need answers. Tell Letrizia a reasonable amount about your own circumstances, the power you command and the Curses you bear. [+Letrizia]

Totally reasonable, she's basically giving away all of her personal interests and also probably some serious (if common knowledge) military secrets to someone she's known for mere days. Maybe she's underestimating us because we're from the Voyaging sticks, but really with how much Hunger's dusted her on the social mat, it's predictably unreasonable to be afraid of her knowing.

At the same time... what kind of youth doesn't know the best way to play an adult is to let them think they're in complete control? Even now, with her in such high regard by us, have we not been baited by her own charisma and passive talent for self-presentation? I'd say telling her our Curses isn't the most dangerous thing here, but rather that social +. Every point put into her is an investment, and the sunk cost fallacy can be terribly subtle and seductive...

[ ] Keep Your Own Counsel - See if you can get more information out of her without disclosing anything about your particular circumstances. It's good to trust; better to trust after you hold all the cards. You've barely known her half a week. You can always tell her more when she proves herself a reliable ally. [+0.5 Arete]

On the other hand, bribes are for squares. While the poker-analogy is appreciated – they had a poker-analogue on his second world? – the fact is that we're strangers in a strange land and improving our support structure is key. The paranoia of a decade of war is born from the reality that trust is necessary for cooperation. Not the appearance of trust, but the actual thing that extends beyond circumstantial ends. Much like Vanreir's Thrust, to over-penetrate is critical to ensure the result in practice. Bonds of convenience buckle and snap under pressure.

Though you intend to rest, fishing is serious business. How much should you exert yourself in catching the fish?

Now we get to the important part. Worlds burning, gods slain, legends unraveled, and the wiles of beautiful women? Nah son, fuck out of here with that weak shit. We goin' fishing.

Hands raised, how many readers have gone fishing before? It wasn't until I was a teenager I was finally able to go, catching tiny Breem from a pond in a family friend's back yard. I knew nothing of reels or tackle or the principles of bait, but I clearly remember my mother's disappointment that the catfish that was supposed to live in there wasn't willing to come out and play.

It was the furthest thing from relaxing, I can tell you that much!

[ ] None - You'll conserve your energy. You are already wounded, no need to become winded as well.

Boo! Booooo! What is this, practicality and a value for peace and quiet? Why would we want any of that when we could go all-in on the Old Man and the Sea reference? The need for rest is plebeian and vulgar, all the better to over-exert oneself ̶w̶r̶i̶t̶i̶n̶g̶ ̶r̶e̶a̶c̶t̶i̶o̶n̶s̶ fishing for glory and honor!

[ ] Substantially - Show 'em how it's done. [+Letrizia, +Improved Nutrition, Tired Condition]

Yes please. Looking back I find it amazing how easy it is to get on Letrizia's good side – it's right between her esophagus and her small intestine! There's a theory I saw mentioned at one point that the Ring of Power has been improving not only Hunger's subjective enjoyment of those things he puts investment into, but also the value of those investments itself. The young Duchess may have had fish dishes of higher quality before in her life – but this is a gift, an expenditure of effort by a near-stranger in a dangerous time. That means more to her than it might possibly should – for the Ring has a mind of its own, and always has.

Whether this is true in whole or even in part is of course unknown, and quite possibly soon-to-be irrelevant besides. But it's worth asking while one looks, if the power wasn't really in the doing all along.

[ ] Of Fishermen, A King - The sharp bright sword of will that cuts to the heart of these waters and brings their mightiest bounty to heel! [+???, +Legendary Fish, +Gisena, -1 Arete or Exhausted condition]

Creature from the Black Lagoon, part 0: a Symbol Turned Action. Guest-Starring a giant monster fish, a girl who loves making wizards cry themselves to sleep, and a deep disrespect for the consequences of physical exhaustion. Score by no one at all, because it's literally just a big-ass fish!

I don't remember why we thought this was a good idea, but we did it anyway. Inside the belly of this demon-freakshow straight from the decklist of Mako Tsunami, we found a bottle. The message within cast us forward onto a quest which would define this quest to the present day, a quest so terrible in its intensity it brought the Apocryphal Curse to mocking recusal. Now we near its conclusion, far grander and more terrible than we could have imagined. The Ring upon our finger is no different, nor the Blade or our Sky. Like the proverbial pale moonlight or the dream-realm of Might's Repose, what laid beneath has surfaced and been laid bare.

I wonder how many other such bottles existed. Is this how the False Moon operates, recognizing the warp and flexion of Rank in motion and planting a half-real signature to draw in contenders? The Moon's power is so caked in falsehood and power over such that it becomes difficult to disentangle the truth from its semi-circular siblings. I still cannot be sure that it does not let on only what it wishes others to see; for Hunger, a damsel to be saved; for the Temple denizens, a power source to unite and support their greed; for others perhaps, a means to an end? What if this is all a trap, and the Ring is the greatest deceiver of them all?

I guess we'll find out soon enough.

edit: So, I've got this problem. If the vote consolidates and Renaissance Woman happens to be the one that falls off, I might not be available to change my vote in time. Can I just.. say I'm jumping to Flare if RW drops out? I'd rather not split my vote in half preemptively, but I will if I have to.
 
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620 worthwhile words.

"Interesting, interesting...!"

Again, the laughter grated against his innards. What came after, was pain...?! A cut, followed by another. Followed by a thousand. A groove left behind on his chest; scarred. Branded as an Apostle of the Being. When the ache began to subside, the mark of power affirmed, Nine felt himself drenched in sweat. His clothing clung to his limbs like children with their blankets in the dark.

Power washed over him. Almost literal in a sense. All the ache vanished and, conveniently, so did the sweat. Probably more of that esoteric activities his new Benefactor refused to explain. He wondered, though, if pain always had to accompany anything and everything his Benefactor did. Resurrection, he could understand. Manufacturing a lance from his soul, he could understand.

Leaving a mark?

...ah.

"You know Apostle, maybe if you weren't so slow on the uptake you'd have impressed Izmerel already." A weight on his shoulder, one that he could not see. "Sometimes, you think too much. Sometimes, you don't think at all." Nine saw the image of his Benefactor spilling tea at the notion. "Well, you don't have to believe me. Not part of our transaction, after all!" The burden disappeared, as did the superimposed imagery.

Nine could feel the weight shift around again. Much like a feline trying to languish on its bedding. Despite the ribbing of his Benefactor, the young mercenary found it difficult to feel put off. He actually came back from the dead. An honest to goodness resurrection! The least he could do was not voice out his annoyance. That, and think on his next course of action.

"Bippity, Boppity, Boop! I can see, now always, you!"

A swirl of magic, or at least what looked like it, and the oppressive presence of his Benefactor began to dissipate. "Remember, my Apostle! You are free to do anything you so wish, so long as it interests me. Failure to abide by it and, well, we'll burn your corpse when we get there!" Lighter and lighter; further and further.


"Onwards, to an entertaining tomorrow!"



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[9] Progression, [9] Symbiote, and [9] Brand won! As of this update, Nine has been elevated from a complete scrub (oof) to a minor scrub with progression (less oof)! Now if only we knew what would make it interesting for the Benefactor.

With his new lease in life, a new leash from his Benefactor to boot, Nine has decided to do one of the following:

[ ] Straight to HQ: "I need to head back, right away."
- Will, understandably, have Nine make for HQ first and foremost.
- Is this the smartest path? Will it interest your Benefactor?
- You get to kill a bunch of things on the way home.
-- Major Chance of Uneventful Return. Minor Chance of Combat Start.
- Keeps Your Promise (?, ?, ?)
- Provides 0.3 Apostle Credits

[ ] Plausible Deniability: "...A detour might be the more prudent choice."
- A bit of errantry. Will have Nine take the long route back to HQ. Maybe stay in a nearby settlement if possible.
- An actual side quest?
- Maybe treat it as a vacation! Unwind from all the stuffy routines of being a Mercenary.
- Keeps Your...Promise? (?)

[ ] Mission: Complete: "If I'm coming back, it won't be with a black mark."
- Will have Nine subjugate the Nest as much as he reasonably can.
- You're a Man on a Mission. Are you really gonna walk away now of all times? You're as healthy as healthy can be!
- Major Chace of Combat Start; Minor Chance of Uneventful Completion
- ...Keeps Your Promise?? (?)
- Provides 0.7 Apostle Credits

Your Lance also does need a name, as suggested by the Benefactor.

[ ] Longinus
[ ] Primary
[ ] Lance...?
[ ] Why would you need to name it...?

A brief character overview:
Apostle: Nine White
Progression Rate: 200%
Symbiote: Unnamed Lance
Astral Rank: 2.8
Apostle Credits: 0.00
Brand: Apostle

has our arete factor reset itself already
 
If we somehow buy Flare and have another 7 arete for a snap buy 1 stance which is better for socialing Avecarn, the Rank gap mitigation of Hero-Defeating or the social stats of Guile Defeating Stance? I'd guess G-DS since Flare will fill a chunk of the gap and provide combat power if talks break down since Blood Rank is combat relevant, i.e. what H-DS would have brought.
 
If we somehow buy Flare and have another 7 arete for a snap buy 1 stance which is better for socialing Avecarn, the Rank gap mitigation of Hero-Defeating or the social stats of Guile Defeating Stance? I'd guess G-DS since Flare will fill a chunk of the gap and provide combat power if talks break down since Blood Rank is combat relevant, i.e. what H-DS would have brought.
Don't know how much that would be viable but, hypothetically, Hero Defeating Stance would make a far more valuable pick related to Praxis (A King Stands Alone) considerably less useful, so I'd rather pick Guile Defeating Stance if it came down to it.
 
Don't know how much that would be viable but, hypothetically, Hero Defeating Stance would make a far more valuable pick related to Praxis (A King Stands Alone) considerably less useful, so I'd rather pick Guile Defeating Stance if it came down to it.
I wonder what the other Praxis skills look like? Are they all going to be update titles from Most High?
 
I don't know what that iiiiiiiis :V

...I actually do now, since the question made me look for other quests written by Rihaku, guess I've got just a tiny bit of reading to do! :tongue:
Whoops, turns out it was the title of a vote option. Here's the link to the thread: [Exalted, ?] Most High

I fully expect a few Praxis options like "Heavy Lies the Crown" and "With Lies Bequeathed" just because they sound sufficiently awesome.
 
I don't share people's concerns about Renaissance Woman - even for Ennobling, I expect there's an equivalent Grace or something she could hack together - but I remember that time when I really, desperately wanted us not to get Uttermost.
And I respect that.
[X] The Ring of Power: Crimson Flare

Anyway, this new Imaginary Element might not be something suited to Hunger - the colors are wrong, and his Trinity definitely looks kingly but I'm not sure that theme is well-manifested yet. Not sure it fits Letrizia, either. Maybe it's an opponent.

[ ] Sovereigngun (25 Arete): The ideal of "rule by firepower all-sufficing". The might which makes all things right. Justice, flowing from the barrel of a gun.
An element that embodies the concepts of 'sovereignty' and 'adequate capacity for violence'. Even the most basic blasts of Sovereigngun are extremely difficult to defend against, and will compound tremendously if provided an appropriate vessel for infusion. Especially compatible with other systems for asserting the primacy of force.

*With this element, the Heavy Counter could match the Supreme Counter
*In any contest of direct force, will always provide at least a little bit of agency
*Less raw power than Victoryash
*But doesn't destroy your loot

(EDIT: Given how long it took me to find those specific colors, I propose that this could also be counted as an art piece.)
 
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[x] Renaissance Woman

Gaining power is easy for us. Managing companionship is not. Not to mention the curse mitigation, which the curse bearer considers a big enough deal to hand out massive power to do for himself.
 
{9} Straight to HQ

That this gives us Apostle Credits is somewhat worrisome, I can't imagine him rewarding us for choosing a relatively safe path and he seems like enough of a bastard to force the issue. That said, we can't not vote for this, not after everything we've done.

{9} [Nameless]

The part of Nine that kills. Nothing less and nothing more. Giving it a name would be like giving your arm a name.
 
[ ] Forebear's Blade: All-Defeating Stance - 28 Arete

Woe to he who would presume to resist the Forebear, for neither spell nor song nor storm of swords would find purchase against his impervious guard. Bowed kings, bowed wizards, bowed warriors of legend and worlds themselves, for there was no chance of triumph without knowing the form of victory, and to stand against the Forebear was to know only defeat. Consumes and replaces its pre-requisite stances.

+++++All Stats
5x Power of Ruin against all targets.
Powers deriving from the Forebear's Blade are perfectly defended from nullification of any kind, even that stemming from a lack of fundamental metaphysics.

All-Defeating: All external effects natural or supernatural which would harm, impede or negatively alter the wielder must contest the amplified Power of Ruin or be destroyed before reaching the wielder. Effectively the character automatically applies an incredibly powerful conceptual-level counterattack against all hostile effects.

In practice, this mitigates all Curses as per Magic-Defeating Stance and renders the character nigh-immune to most forms of harm, as all attacks are intercepted by an imperishable well of ablative Ruin. Only the mightiest of effects can even hope to pierce through, and often with severely reduced outcomes. Even the effects of enemy Pressure are largely nullified unless that Pressure is substantially mightier than the wielder's Pressure and Power of Ruin combined.

Holy Shit: To stand against the wielder is to know only defeat. The wielder's enemies know when they are beaten. Double the wielder's Charisma and Manipulation against characters individually weaker than him. Innate awareness of the character's strength penalizes any attempts to form organizations or conspiracies opposed to him.

*In light of this capacity, Hunger will pursue a military-based strategy against the Temple, discarding his earlier plans. Events such as this occur sparingly if at all, but changing circumstances are inescapable, and needs must.
*Hunger can defeat Avecarn with only moderate difficulty and has decent odds of soloing the entire Temple himself.
*A highly synergistic build: You've taken lots of +Might (and +Willpower, and the Stance grants both), which is multiplied by Edeldross, which scales the power of Ruin, which is quintupled by the stance, which reflexively opposes all hostile effects. Hunger becomes a nigh-invincible juggernaut for his power level, and his offensive might is tremendous due to that Ruin itself. He can safely focus on developing esoteric capabilities with Cut Through.
*There are situations where one might prefer to have Guile-Defeating Stance instead of All-Defeating Stance, and taking the latter does consume the former.
Absolutely incredible. Straight up win us the Temple. It make us immune to almost anything which is incredibly good for Not Dying. Highly Synergistic. Even outside of combat it still provide utility, making us considerably smarter, wiser, more charismatic and more lucky and making it almost impossible for people individually weaker than us from meaningfully opposing us in the social sphere. Remember, it specify individually weaker than us, so that still cover armament pilots and those that control them. My favorite option here.
[ ] The Ring of Power: Crimson Flare - 25 Arete. (0 picks, but requires Chief Dominion)

Call'd the ring in direst hour;
Azure's brethren faces turned.
Yet came the Lord its cause to flower;
then saw its keepers, to ruin burned.

Forgotten not, the debt of Time
when all its kind had turned their backs;
Not Hunger ring, its steed to ride,
brought Temple low, rapine and sack.

And debt unpaid shall not abide.


The crimson jewel blazes with a hallowed, piercing light, its glory to outshine sun and stars, all made abject by its presence. This is attainment of a height that disdains mere power, the Jewel of Blood unveiled in truth.

Elevates the wielder's Rank by a variable amount [Currently: to 5]
+2 Rank for purposes of wielding the Chief Dominion.

If the Azure Ring is saved:
Further increases the scope, power, and control of the Chief Dominion, beyond even the limits of the Ruling Ring.*
Obsoletes and refunds: Augment Dominion: Blood, Sublime Transfusion, Ennobling
The Azure Ring will submit to the Crimson in the next contest of primacy.

*Example effects: Individuals can be Ennobled in hours, small populations in days, large populations in months. Levels above Ennoblement can be researched and acquired, potentially without Arete expenditure. Verschlengorge can be healed to Rank 6 in hours, to Rank 7 in days, to Rank 7.5 in weeks. Enemies of Rank 4 or lower can be rendered comatose with a gesture; those of merely equivalent Rank (5) would suffer crippling disadvantage.
*Hunger will try diplomacy first before moving onto combat
*He can offer them much, though it would still be a difficult task to sunder Avecarn from his civilization: stability is worth more than promises written on wind, and Hunger does not really have much interest in taking care of the Inner Temple society.
*Good odds in combat, very good odds of survival.
*Build towards the Trinity Special Advancement.
This straight up doesn't do what we need right now. It still leaves us with a higher chance of death than just spending 14 Arete on stances would have and even if we don't die we might still lose against Avecarn and have to run away. Even if we do manage to kill Avecarn, what then? We still have to deal with the Inner Temple at that point. I do get that some people are really committed to the Trinity, that some people don't like Renaissance Woman (though I believe that the fear surrounding Renaissance are greatly exaggerated), the arguments about what will happen with the ring civilization aren't bad and the utility options this provide if we manage to rescue the Ring are very valuable but, as a proud member of the Not Dying party, I must oppose this option with all my strength.
[ ] Renaissance Woman - 28 Arete

Not merely a genius of one generation, nor of one era; hers is a greatness of mind and spirit that arises perhaps only once in the lifetime of a species. All-conquering talent that bestrides all fields and masters them beyond compare: only this genuine polymath can be said to embody the complete essence - the true quintessence - of humanity in the Maiden's image. Only so exalted a paragon can glimpse the mortal facings of Heaven's Lathe and depart with mind unshattered.

A singularity of findross births a Sorceress. A meta-singularity of findross, births a Maiden.

*Gisena immediately acquires the Maiden-level Graces: True Perfecting Blade, True Nullity, and True Quintessence.
*Gisena, through observation of the mortal-perceptible components of Hunger's Progression, replicates the effects of the Lesser Remittance, Retinue, for up to one cardinality of infinite escalation.
*True Perfecting Blade: Massively improves Gisena's STR, AGI, CON, WITS and APP. Her physical parameters are modestly superior to Hunger's own. Her Wits and Appearance are tremendously superior to Hunger's own. Parameters will continue to increase over time.
*True Nullity: Gisena applies the effects of Grand Nullification upon all of Hunger's Curses; her nullity strikes with absolute force. This may improve over time.
*True Quintessence: Gisena is treated as if possessing the Total Eclipse Advancement.
*Her outrageously superhuman Appearance, Charisma and Wits can be classified as a high-grade memetic hazard, making infiltration of the Inner Temple quite trivial.
*Does not build towards a Special Artifact Advancement but also does not commit you to a path.
It doesn't straight up win us the Temple but it still get us into the Inner Temple and the bonuses it provides are still incredible. Giving Gisena the benefits of Retinue, making her physical parameters greater than Hunger's own (!) while improving her Wits and Appearance to astronomical height, making her a high-grade memetic hazard in the process, mitigating all our curses (except Tyrant) by two stages, greatly improving her nullity in general and then providing all the potential and utility offered by Total Eclipse on top of all of that? This is absolutely incredible. Sure it provides no personal power and doesn't just straight up win us the Temple like ADS does, so I still prefer ADS to it but this is certainly not a bad option.

I was really depressed yesterday, seeing people fighting so hard to have the privilege of picking an option with a higher chance of killing us and was really happy to see Rihaku offer us alternatives. But looking at the vote count...

It really looks like people have divided themselves in a pro-Trinity, anything except ADS group and an anti-Gisena, anything except Renaissance Woman group, with the option which do the least for us right now and with a non-negligible chance of immediately killing us and ending the quest somehow ending up as the compromise option... And for once, the shitty compromise option is actually ahead without Rihaku even needing to enable approval voting!

So now I'm depressed again... I guess I'll approval vote for both ADS and Renaissance for the moment and I'll switch to whichever seems like it has a higher chance of defeating Flare later.

[X] Forebear's Blade: All-Defeating Stance
[X] Renaissance Woman
 
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{9} Straight to HQ
[9] Promised

Keep the promise! Now we can do so twice!

Anyway, I'm supporting all-defeating stance until the end because it has the least chance of us dying horribly. And that's what I care about the most.

I don't care about triple advancement of either type, and Rihaku already went at length why we shouldn't worry about mental contamination.

So, I just want the win in the platter. I'm not against the other options, I'm quite fond of Gisena EFB, but I just don't want to die.
 
I'd like this to be better and longer, but I kind of feeling the burnout.
A Wind Full of Knives


Or a Bladewind, I suppose. Or a handful of knivess.

"Fine," Hunger said, after a moment's thought. "If you've thought through the logistical implications, you can come with us, though we won't provide any guarantee of safety. This path is dangerous and will only grow more so."
I almost wish Hunger refused here, to be honest; Hunger acting overprotective would've been an interesting characterization to explore. Between Gisena and Letrizia, and himself actually, none of them are all that old and some are basically still children; there is a little bit of a double standard that could have been a rich ground for some banter and character exploration.

Nonetheless, there are some in-character reasons to allow this too; Aeira civ is basically doomed. If not to the Rotbeast, which seems to be in most optimistic scenario, years away from crushing sovereignity, then loss of their magic source. They need a savior, but Hunger for various reasons cannot be that savior.

But an empowered Surgecrafter can; and we have many potential pathways to empower her, you could lose counts. Most immediately relevant, Ennoblement, Wreath or Gisena exploring the ability to give others Sorcerous Power through Quintessence. So a vote to bring her along is a vote to indirectly have Elixir Sovereignty save themself, which is, very good.

He would trust Letrizia's judgement on this matter, at least for now. The young duchess was in many ways naive. It was sometimes hard to remember that she was a veteran warrior entrusted with her nation's greatest superweapon. He believed she had the wherewithal to consider matters objectively when truly serious decisions, like this, came about.
Also, this is quite important. Treating Letrizia like an adult, even though she can and probably will make a lot of mistakes in future appeals to me. She is kind of child soldier, and although, perhaps, she have yet to See Some Shit, she already sacrificed most of her life in fierce battles on the interstellar scale. Infantilizing her just doesn't quite feel right, as much as Hunger/Gisena tease her all the time.


"Thank you so much!" Aeira bowed again, even more deeply than before. "Yes, I have set up an account for an escrow company into which you can deposit funds now and remotely. The money will be released to my family on a time-delayed basis, assuming you intend to pay upfront with cash, and returned to you if my service is not satisfactory. One of my classmates has an Element that allows for limited-throughout communication across the Voyaging Realm. It's not totally reliable, but we should be able to get signal at least one day in ten. That will also enable me to slowly navigate back to the Sovereignty if we must part ways. I can bunk with Letrizia and will bring my own supplies in terms of food and toiletries."
Interesting. In the short term, Soveignity money are the only way for her family to continue existing, but I expect her to consider permanent empowerment an acceptable payment in the medium term. An Ennobled Surgecrafter would stand head and shoulders above their more mundane comrades for example; with her Surgecrafting element somewhat relying on her physical abilities, there are immersive synergies to be had.



"You're prepared, that's good. We'll finally have someone responsible on the team." Hunger smiled lightly.
"That means she'll have to rein us in, hun!" Gisena grabbed his arm playfully. "How shocking! Now what will we do for fun?"
"Training," he deadpanned. "Speaking of which, Aeira, would you care for a spar? If I win, you'll give us a 10% discount, and if I lose, we'll double your pay."
Aeira made a startled noise and raised her hands. "I-I am sorry, but I do not think I can accept those terms. Even though you are being unconscionably generous, my family needs this money and I cannot accept anything less than the asking price."
Welp, she is cute. Anyway, she'll have to get used to constant bantering and teasing, between members of this party. Thankfully we passed the point where Gisena and Hunger's constant verbal sparring could be taken as anything but friendly teasing.


"Hm." Hunger frowned slightly. "I hate to pry, but may I ask what your family is using the money for? If there are any points of leverage against you, we need to be informed in advance. We're trusting you to watch our backs against foes that are very capable and resourceful, often with varied supernatural capabilities."
Letrizia bit her lip. "Shoot. I hadn't considered that..."


Well, Voyaging realm is actually incredibly big, so I kind of doubt that this is really that much of a concern. But it is a concern nonetheless.

Aeira smiled gently at her. "It is fine. Yes, my family is greatly in debt to government of the Elixir Sovereignty... we used to be on the founding council, but my grandmother and grandfather made several critical errors in business, wiping out our fortune and exposing us to our rivals. The back taxes alone have been crippling... All my life, my mother and father worked tirelessly to extricate us from debt, but their political enemies ensured they would never hold high station. However, I do not believe that such petty affairs in so remote a society as ours would hold much interest for your enemies."
And she is probably correct!.. But thinking about it some more, there is always An Unfortunate Apocryphal Curse Proc. Most unlikely circumstances could arise in order to fuck with us; only defenses are improbable strength and relentless mitigation. Two options currently offer that, and 10% mitigation of RW is considerably superior.

"I see." There were a few ways such a vulnerability could come to bite them down the line, but it seemed unlikely for now. Something to keep an eye on, but it wasn't disqualifying. The main issue would be... "Your friend, who allows you to communicate across the Voyaging Realm, how does her Element operate? Do you trust this person?"
Oh, nice. I complained about lack of interesting elements being demonstrated, and here we have one. Here we are seeing the beginning of something interesting; a sci-fi society starting to properly exploit magic in order to prop up its industrial and scientific deficiencies.


"Yes, absolutely." She nodded. "Her Element manifests only partially in the physical realm. The other half is bound not by space, but by emotional association. Only if we trust each other mutually and implicitly would the function work correctly."
"And she is diligent enough to keep you regularly updated on matters here?"
Aeira nodded again.
There is probably a story behind this; we might eventually learn it. I kind of doubt that, though; ultimately, the word count is too limited and narrative space is too competitive to seriously explore Aeira backstory or overly invest into her. I do expect that eventually ennobling her is a reasonable prediction, as empowering her some other way, but I doubt she'll ever have an opportunity to compete for arete investment with Gisena, for example.

Also, we get to know that Surgecrafting elements can get not merely sort of exotic, but really exotic; like, what sort of

"In that case, welcome aboard." He reached out a hand for her to shake. Hesitantly, Aeira extended her own, pausing in the midst to remove her fingerless gloves. Her grip was firm but rigid, palms sweaty. Anxious beneath the mask.
"I know it may not seem like much to you," Aeira said, smiling timidly. "But this is truly a small fortune for my family. It will make our interest payments much more bearable. So, from the bottom of my heart, thank you again!"
"Don't thank me. Just carry your weight," Hunger admonished gruffly, but returned her smile with one of his own.

A cinnamon roll, this. A whole party of them, even. Two tsunderes, Gisena, and now, Aeira. Looking at them, you wouldn't even guess that they are on a civilization-annihilating quest and are probably one of the strongest groups of adventurers in the Realm.

The odd one out is Versch of course, but we learned that he is rather sweet as long as you don't count as enemy. Or food.

"You did it! I'm so proud of you!" Letrizia leapt over and grabbed Aeira in a hug.


"Mhm!" Aeira nodded happily.

I wonder how she managed to get along with Letrizia this quickly. Did Letrz approach her first? She probably did. She is focused enough for mercenary career, but this sort of outreach seems to be uncharacteristic for her. Letrz probably leveraged her impressive-for-her-age (and mundane human) social ability to dig for promising Surgecrafters, found her, and then reached out.

They set out on their journey to the Temple once more. This time Verschlengorge was blanketed in a cloak of silken shadow which, if one were not looking specifically for him, diminished the salience of his presence in one's mind. It was an odd effect, the colossal machine seeming almost to fade into the background... not invisible nor inaudible, but unimportant, like a cliff or hillside, the clangor of his movements like construction noises far away.

Notice me not field. Nice. It also provides a critical damage effect, but... If Aeira baseline abilities are unimpressive, multiplicative damage enhancement does not matter overly much.

This was the power of Aeira's Element, Shadowcord, which could be garrote or spear or binding weave; an assassin's Element which, aside from its attention-negating properties, also enhanced the agility of its wielder and nulled all sound by touch. Killer and victim would conclude their business in absolute silence, unnoticed even in busy crowds.

I wonder from which aspect of Aeira this element was born. The obvious shrinking violet appearance aside, Surgecrafting aspects can come from unexpected directions and manifest in unusual forms; Hunger alone could have manifested an element from his pragmatism, panoply, or relationships with other people. It might be the obvious of corse, but it needs not to be.

Gisena welcomed their newest party member warmly, though Aeira seemed powerfully intimidated by the superhuman Sorceress, unable to raise her voice above a whisper when addressing Gisena directly. Most of the time, Aeira stayed with Letrizia in her cockpit, the two teenagers chatting happily about Imperial society and the differences in its Elixir offshoot.

She probably would've gotten used to it eventually... If Gisena wasn't about to evolve into High Sorceress, and possibly a Maiden-grade findross singularity. As is, she'll probably never manage to even look at her (or look away if she manages by accident) without Gisena taking some measures.

"That poor darling," Gisena smiled sadly, sitting alongside Hunger on Verschlengorge's shoulder. With the aid of Aeira's shadow, the number of Astral incursions targeting Verschlengorge had indeed decreased, though oddly not to zero. Thus there was no pressing need for comprehensive surveillance from its shoulder-side staff.


"She looks up to you," Hunger said, "She just can't express it very well."


Gisena has a tendency to meddle in affairs of other people; but she also has a tendency to meddle with positive intentions and acceptable results. In the world before, she was... probably the only friend of the Clarion Sorceress, an incredibly unsocial woman who kind of sandblasted everyone with her incredibly high standards in everything, an that was before Seram went and told her to not hold back and just openly critique everyone's faults.

It is no surprise she'll spare some attention to the shy young woman who joined this group, even beyond elementary "we are comrades gotta know each other" level. But...


"I know," Gisena replied airily, "But if it's that bad now, just think how tongue-tied she'll be after I finish my meditations! And your own force of presence has been steadily increasing as well. Soon it'll be difficult for either of us to speak plainly with ordinary people."
Yeah, this is becoming an issue.


"Needs must," Hunger said. "The Apocryphal Curse will not stop escalating, so neither can we." This small sliver of inhumanity was a trifling price in the face of vengeance, though it did unsettle him slightly. But what was to be done about it? He frowned. Perhaps there was something to be done.
Well, Accursed Himself manages to somehow converse with people without instantly blasting their brains out even though he is infinity of infinities of...etc above literally everyone, so there is no need to get depressed about it. A progression-type could figure something out; so probably could a Maiden with a Potential Type EFB and quarter-progression.


"Though," he continued, "as the Nullity Sorceress, one would think you would be most equipped of anyone to bring us back down to earth."
"And surrender this beautiful visage?" Gisena gasped. "I would never do that to you. Worry not, my captain, I could hardly bear to deprive you for even a moment! The teeming masses shall just have to withstand it."
Was she referring to the reduction of her presence, or his own? Down either path lay a trap, and if called out directly she would feign obliviousness, thus framing his observation as paranoia. Hunger shook his head amusedly.
Hunger is really getting too good at spotting these social traps these days. Though this dynamic will probably change tomorrow, even if RW does not win; Gisena is modestly above Hunger as is, further boosts will widen the gap once again. Can't say I am entirely pleased or displeased about that.

"You're too clever for your own good, Gisena. What if you applied that genius to actually finishing those meditations of yours?"
She idly kicked a slender leg, leaning against his shoulder. "I can't, Aeira took the spot in the cockpit I was using to meditate! Don't worry, I'll be finished up and completely evolved by tomorrow morning, ready to help you take down the Temple. So enjoy my delightful presence while you can!"
"Good. You can keep watch while I take a nap."

You'd think that he decided to slack off, but even during his sleep, Hunger is training. Pity that the process is slooooww, though. Basically worthless considering how fast we progress, even. We need something like a month to get first +might, IIRC? If we could sacrifice it like we sacrificed form of rage, I'd do it in a heartbeat.

Already they could see the Temple at far remove: the towering spires of its moon-clutching claw, the ivory swell of its dome against the wavering blue horizon. As before, they would have to navigate around to reach the front gate, a trip of several hours more. Hunger leaned back, settling in for the final leg of their journey.


And now we return into the hell of our own making. I wonder, if we manage to kill Avecarn, would the temple really finally take us seriously, or it'll keep sending out a steady stream of mildly stronger enemies to power us up as before.

, he promised mentally, addressing the imprisoned Ring, willing his own to act as conduit. He did not know if the Rings could actually speak to one another, did not know if it was merely a futile gesture, but sought to offer whatever hope he could: the strength, perhaps, to resist for one day more, to deny its exploiters whatever power it could, here in this final hour. One way or another, your suffering ends soon.



It would be a goddamn pity to have to sunder or forcibly subjugate the ring after this, I'll be honest. Hopefully we'll get enough time to grind up Crimson Flare again.

...Mhm, that is probably overly optimistic. Well, as votes are currently looking, we are getting Flare instead of RW, so that is not a problem one should be overly concerned about.

[ ] Forebear's Blade: All-Defeating Stance

Turn your attack stat into your social and defense stat, magnify it, and make it apply passively and constantly. A terrifying immediate power type EFB. I do not have too many concerns about mental contamination between Hunger's willpower and Rihaku's own assurances, but I do have some concerns about outscaling the Voyaging Realm without having Pillars being there to boost our lagging Progression; Human Sphere is a land of Armaments and monsters capable of challenging them. The one way to get by there would be through social abilities and having substantial utility to offer, and this option offers none of that.


[ ] The Ring of Power:
Crimson Flare - 25 Arete. (0 picks, but requires Chief Dominion)
The old favorite. Utility. Importantly, it builds up to this;

*Build towards the Trinity Special Advancement.


Which promises to be rather impressive. It is All-Defeating Stance made of three EFBs(75 arete) instead of four FBs(28); it is bound to be incredibly impressive. So would be Three EFB sword and/or Ring I am told, but there is a lot of resistance to that, and it would make for a very tilted, uneven sort of build lacking in crucial aspects without. The threat of simply stopping getting picks and our profession slumping is pretty real, according to Rihaku.

[ ] Renaissance Woman

Friendship with Flare ended, Renaissance Woman is my new friend. An option of incredible immediate value that continues to spiral into even more value; a base progression boost (imagine Gisena with Wreath; full progression speed!) a host of EFB combat effects, immediately solves the messy social encounter we found ourself in, and offers both immediate and long-term mitigation of our everything - including, in future, Tyrant. If this was a zero pick-buy-whenever choice I might have stuck with Flare, but with without us tilting the odds, Gisena's sorcerous progression episodes are likely to be rather rare, and with our own progression being stuck on constant overdrive, I am afraid that if we do not pick this up now it'll end up being inferior to simply continously boosting Hunger.


For Progression-type Cursebearers, outleveling their companions is an unfortunate reality - Nameless had to continuously deal with that for majority of the game, and he was not even a Cursebearer!


*Her outrageously superhuman Appearance, Charisma and Wits can be classified as a high-grade memetic hazard, making infiltration of the Inner Temple quite trivial.


Also, potential to bamboozle the Temple Civ into unlocking Soul Evocations of our party members sounds pretty likely, here. Gisena walks over Avercarn with his Rank 6.5, and with Progression, she'll continue getting better at pace relevant to our timetable; scamming moon civ into giving us tools to dismantle it properly is the sort of stuff we benefitted from immensively in EFB before, and I would enjoy messing with people like that once again.
 
Chatter on the Discord server has made me nostalgic and also curious. What do you guys consider to be your favorite Rihaku quests? Could be for the story or the discussion. Personally, I rank the quests as below:
  1. Bleach Quest
  2. Unnamed Quest featuring Young Seram
  3. The Gardens of Enoch: Terrascape Academy (surprisingly enough, I know)
  4. Most High / The Sword That Ends the World
  5. Even Further Beyond
  6. A Simple Transaction/Zero
  7. The Odyssey
  8. They Called Me Mad
  9. Make a Contract with Me!
  10. Jounin Quest
  11. The War of Kings
  12. A Planeswalker Visits Gensokyo (this is a new one I've added recently!)
  13. Magus Quest
Also, I don't dislike any of the lower-ranked ones, just trying to rank them in order of preference. Any of the other quests I didn't list (Howl at the Moon, Dawn of Wizardry), I haven't got around to reading or can't really assess due to lack of material (Into the Light, lol). I might expand on my thoughts in a more detailed analysis later to help generate some Arete.

Pretty interested in knowing what you guys think of Rihaku's other quests!

Edit: Also not ranking AST I yet cause Hunger's journey is still ongoing!
 
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Chatter on the Discord server has made me nostalgic and also curious. What do you guys consider to be your favorite Rihaku quests? Could be for the story or the discussion. Personally, I rank the quests as below:
  1. Bleach Quest
  2. Unnamed Quest featuring Young Seram
  3. The Gardens of Enoch: Terrascape Academy (surprisingly enough, I know)
  4. Most High / The Sword That Ends the World
  5. Even Further Beyond
  6. A Simple Transaction/Zero
  7. The Odyssey
  8. They Called Me Mad
  9. Make a Contract with Me!
  10. Jounin Quest
  11. The War of Kings
  12. A Planeswalker Visits Gensokyo (this is a new one!)
  13. Magus Quest
Also, I don't dislike any of the lower-ranked ones, just trying to rank them in order of preference. Any of the other quests I didn't list (Howl at the Moon, Dawn of Wizardry), I haven't got around to reading or can't really assess due to lack of material (Into the Light, lol). I might expand on my thoughts in a more detailed analysis later to help generate some Arete.

Pretty interested in knowing what you guys think of Rihaku's other quests!
1: Even Further Beyond
2: A simple transaction 1
3: A simple transaction 0
4: Terrascape/Bleach quest
5:they called me mad
6: Joining quest

The ones I have read so far, really should get around to most high...
 
The only ones I've actually read, even counting the ones that I didn't read until quest end:

1. The Adventures of Nameless Yong
2. I Got Isekai'd Into A World With a Competent Tyrant So I Had To Employ Magical Terrorism: The Sequel
3. Bear Asses: The Gathering.
 
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