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Damn, that was a great speech but I'm sorry to say but I can only give you +1 like.
Is that supposed to have two 'r's?
It's "a crescendo" to describe a period during which it escalates. Here you probably want "its apex" or "its peak" or something similar.the relentless bullying campaign at school had reached its crescendo
Inappropriate capitalization.
Why do you give us so many good options to choose from? Why you do this to us, Sun Tzu? You fiend!
Remember to puts Xs in your brackets.[ ] Raised a memorial from beneath the waves at Kyushu and Newfoundland.
[ ] Gathered information about the worst problems facing Earth Bet, including the S-class villains.
[ ] Performed one more miracle for the city by clearing the boat graveyard, allowing the port to reopen.
Thinking these three, more info on threats, deal with Levi's island sinkings + clean up the place where we beat it.,
You can try, sure... but those who don't come to you on their own are unlikely to be very forthright.@sun tzu
Can we modify this to:
[X] Took the time to get to know the heroes and villains of Brockton Bay, and then the Protectorate as a whole.
Especially since at the core of the (wonderfully written) speech was redemption, many, or at least some villains will be ready to change sides. Avatar gathering his own team could be a good idea as well, since he cannot be everywhere at once. So getting to know people here, and potential recruits at that, is a good idea, in my opinion.
Remember, you can pick as many as three.[X] Gathered information about the worst problems facing Earth Bet, including the S-class villains.
Whoops, thanks.Is that supposed to have two 'r's?
It's "a crescendo" to describe a period during which it escalates. Here you probably want "its apex" or "its peak" or something similar.
I actually teared up a little at the beginning part. Great work, Sun Tzu.
Hey, these are all things the Avatar could be inclined to do.Why do you give us so many good options to choose from? Why you do this to us, Sun Tzu? You fiend!
The one in the linked video?Who was the person giving the speech i know its from world war but nothing else
I really like how you integrated the stunt. "You are not alone...I can think of few greater honors than standing by the side of someone trying to be better."Even at the world's darkest, you are not truly alone; there are millions who would gladly reach out to you, help you ignite the spark within. I, for one, can think of few greater honors than standing by the side of someone trying to be better, even as the weight of the world seems determined to drag them down and extinguish their spark.