I mean, Zhang was causing traffic jams, road congestions and accidents every single time he stepped into town. That's why the the townsfolk hated his guts.

Why he did that? Because he had no education or knowledge of the culture, or even basic perception. A zero really means a zero, nadda, zilch.

Huh. Well then I am kind of doing that. Essentially, anything you have a 0 in, I just don't write about. I consider the Check failed and move on.

One difference is I'm not going THAT route. Having a 0 in something doesn't mean you're THAT ignorant. It means you know the basics, but nothing advanced nor how to apply it.

...Except for certain Skills.
 
Huh. Well then I am kind of doing that. Essentially, anything you have a 0 in, I just don't write about. I consider the Check failed and move on.

One difference is I'm not going THAT route. Having a 0 in something doesn't mean you're THAT ignorant. It means you know the basics, but nothing advanced nor how to apply it.

...Except for certain Skills.

I prefer this honestly. Zhang was hilarious on how ignorant of everything he was, but he was also raised on an isolated farm in the middle of nowhere. The pc here was raised in modern Japan. Even if he isn't good at certain things like computers, he should still know how to use one. also it is a joke that would quickly get old if every protagonist was a super idiot just learning for the first time that other people have feelings.
 
That was a cool fight.
[Combat Checks]

[Hayato: Street Fighting: 20 + MMA: 10 + Fist: 10 + Physical: 24 = 64]

[Ritsuko: Brawling: 35 + Fist: 10 + Physical: 15 = 60]

[Hayato Wins! Close Victory!]
Nice, victory! It looks like that Ritsuko has better fighting skills than us, but we're more durable.
Your right hand quickly shoots up and grabs...something very soft that causes Ritsuko to let out unexpectedly girly gasp and Yunagi to stand up from his seat in the bleachers with his face red with rage.
BWA-HA-HA-HAA, of course! :lol2:
Under any other circumstance, you'd start apologizing profusely for doing this...while secretly committing the moment to memory as it's the first time you've gotten this far with a girl.

However, this is fight.

What you're currently doing is a calculated maneuver.
No time to be embarrassed, our Goku-brain is on.
Then you both let out a piercing battle cry and charged.

The sound of fists hitting flesh echoed throughout the building. You both stood in the center of the court with your arms across each other, fists in each others faces.

You held your breath as your burning eyes stared directly into hers.

After what felt like an hour, Ritsuko dropped to the ground.
Nice, the classical cross counter.
A hand goes to scratch your cheek while you chuckle nervously. The black haired girl turns her head and suddenly takes a keen interest in the floor, "D-Don't worry about that! It was fight and things like that happen. And.....uh...well...I had fun too. And ya seem like a pretty good guy. So, if ya want to do this again, or just hang out or something....oh here!"
Yup, she's totally hooked.
"Yuna, come on! Let's get home!"
Missing a comma.
With a shrug you look down at what Ritsuko gave you and find a folded blue note with a cute little drawing of a...you think that's supposed to be a lion?
That is cute.
The note falls from your hands as they go to hold your sides, but your brother catches it between two fingers. He looks at the note then raises an eyebrow, "Brother, why did Ritsuko Satoshi give you her phone number?"

"Because, my dear sweet bro," you look up to him with a smile, "your brother is smooth as fuck."

"That would be favorable. Hardening of the skin usually means the formation of tumors which could be cancerous. But that does not explain why she wrote down her number and gave it to you."
...Yeah, we have our work cut out for us regarding our bro.
[Health Changed to Injured!]

[Gained Ritsuko's Number! Relationship Unlocked!]

[Combat Victory = Ritsuko's Relationship Starts at Rank 3!]
High starting relation with Ritsuko sounds good, but that injury is going to be a problem, considering that we were supposed to deal with Kumiho this week.
But, rather than remove it, I decided to keep it.

1. Cause why not?

2. Cause this is anime. That stuff happens all the time.

3. Hayato would fight like that. Street Fighting is using whatever you can to win and get an advantage. WHATEVER you can.
Hell yeah!!!
and if anyone asks, just ask yourself: what would aizen do
Smile while telling everyone how he planned it.
I prefer this honestly. Zhang was hilarious on how ignorant of everything he was, but he was also raised on an isolated farm in the middle of nowhere. The pc here was raised in modern Japan. Even if he isn't good at certain things like computers, he should still know how to use one. also it is a joke that would quickly get old if every protagonist was a super idiot just learning for the first time that other people have feelings.
Agreed.
 
He's a genius when it comes to book-smarts, but he's a Harem protagonist. They're not going to get romantic hints at all. Its gonna take an freaking
miracle
for that to happen.
Imagine if one of the possible future harem member is also a book smart but shit at romantic stuff like him. Good lord, now that would result in some shenanigams.
 
I think you just gave Link an idea, I don't know if that is a good thing or bad thing. But all I know is it's gonna be something different on boy.
Just think when Hayato starts thinking that due to Yamato being completely clueless about romance that he has to give him "The Talk", cause obviously our bro still thinks that babies are brought by storks. :V
 
I think you just gave Link an idea, I don't know if that is a good thing or bad thing. But all I know is it's gonna be something different on boy.

In all honestly, this has a good chance of being actually adorable. Like, can you imagine them actually falling for each other, and applying all of that awkward practicality to make the other happy? Or searching through internet for tips about what to do. Or even asking us!

A lot of potential for diabeetus there.
 
I think bro is just asexual more likely.
We all know that is not the case.
In all honestly, this has a good chance of being actually adorable. Like, can you imagine them actually falling for each other, and applying all of that awkward practicality to make the other happy? Or searching through internet for tips about what to do. Or even asking us!

A lot of potential for diabeetus there.
That does sound cute. 🤗
 
Asexual, maybe. Now aromantic? That one I doubt it's posiblities.

That does sound cute. 🤗

I'm all in for Bro to be a very, matter of fact, romantic guy that uses it's knowledge in a lot of areas (and the lack of said thing in romance) to make a gift, take her to a date or so that makes everyone go "WHY?!/HOW!?" while the date in question is incredibly flattered, and the like.

I just like romance, to be honest. And if it's somewhat awkward, even better.
 
Well, I don't think our bro's love life is going to improve until we learn more about what happened to him in the past that led to him repressing his emotions.
 
I think bro is just asexual more likely.

Nah. Mostly cause there's no way I could write that.

I make it rule to not write about stuff I know nothing about, because I know I'll write it wrong.

And the last thing I want to do is go back to my days of writing about stuff I know nothing about.

It's why I stopped writing MLP HateFics.

I'm all in for Bro to be a very, matter of fact, romantic guy that uses it's knowledge in a lot of areas (and the lack of said thing in romance) to make a gift, take her to a date or so that makes everyone go "WHY?!/HOW!?" while the date in question is incredibly flattered, and the like.

I just like romance, to be honest. And if it's somewhat awkward, even better.

That does sound cute.

Hopefully, I can live up to your expectations.

Cause I'm still not sure how good I am at writing romance.

Well, I don't think our bro's love life is going to improve until we learn more about what happened to him in the past that led to him repressing his emotions.

I'll give you a hint for that: Get his Empathy Feelings up to at least 30 and the path to that will unlock.

Edit: Or just keep doing what you've been doing. He'll open up eventually.
 
Now, I have a question to make. A very important question that may shape this quest to come.
.
.
.
...will there be a Yandere?
 
Now, I have a question to make. A very important question that may shape this quest to come.
.
.
.
...will there be a Yandere?

If there is, it's gonna stay on the "soft" side of it, because I'm gonna genuelly vote to beat the ever loving fuck out of her until she leaves our brother alone, otherwise.

Yandere? more like "Yan- die- re"
 
Now, I have a question to make. A very important question that may shape this quest to come.
.
.
.
...will there be a Yandere?

Possibly.

But if so, you can bet your bottom dollar most of her scenes will be of you constantly annihilating her plans.

Or looming over her shoulder if she dares hurt your brother.

Edit: Because I really like the idea of having a Yandere Character, but rather than them being the Main Focus it's another character who can basically counter everything they try to do.
 
Possibly.

But if so, you can bet your bottom dollar most of her scenes will be of you constantly annihilating her plans.

Or looming over her shoulder if she dares hurt your brother.

Edit: Because I really like the idea of having a Yandere Character, but rather than them being the Main Focus it's another character who can basically counter everything they try to do.
Good. Very, very, good.
 
Week 5
"Urgh, finally," you drop onto your bed as you enter the room. A sigh escapes your lips as you feel the tension leave your body, "I thought that nurse would never let me go."

"She was simply ensuring that there was no danger of your condition worsening," your bro assures you as he enters the dorm.

"Doesn't explain why she had to poke me with so many needles."

"....True," your brother nods as he sits down on his own bed, Yameko moving to sit by his side. He takes his laptop out and begins typing away while speaking, "At the very least, the situation with Satoshi has been resolved. I'm certain the news will reach Hose soon. You fought well today, brother."

"He speaks the truth, my Lord," if Yato had a body, you're pretty sure he'd be standing over you with pride right now, "Your battle was glorious. While it was not perfect, you managed to secure victory and win the heart of a future ally. Those things can only be done in the crucible of battle."

"So says the old hand who knows nothing but war," Yato seems to ignore Yameko's teasing this time, as he doesn't reply like usual. The fox giggles before turning to you with a smile, "But I must agree with Yamato-sama, Hayato. You proved that you are every bit the fighter that your brother believes you to be. It will be useful when we eventually deal with Hiroko."

"Which we will once my brother heals in a week. During which he will engage in no activities that might cause him further harm. Correct?," Yamato explains as he looks at you over the rim of his laptop.

"Yeah, yeah," you wave him off, "I heard what the nurse said. 'No getting into dangerous fights. That includes Martial Arts'. Hmm, think I can still fight in official practice bouts though. So, not a total loss."

Silence takes over the room for a minute.

"Hey, bro?"

"Yes, Hayato?"

"Thanks."

"...Don't mention it."

[Confinement Order Rescinded!]

[Options have been Unlocked!]

[+20 XP to both Hayato and Yamato for Event Completion!]

[Hayato gains +3 to MMA, Street Fighting, Brawling, and Physical Resistance!]

[Yamato gains +3 to Business, Trickery, and Diplomacy!]

[+3 Points to Relationship with Yamato!]




Current AP: 4
Pick Four Skills to Train.
Skills with (+) gain 15 a week.
Skulls with (-) gain 5 a week,
Skills with neither gain 10 a week.

When Training with Someone Else:
Shared Skill Bonuses get a +10 to points gained.
Your Debuff of a Skill will get canceled out if your Training Partner has the Skill as a Bonus.
If both Skills are Normal, you both get a +1 Point Gain Bonus.
If you have a Skill at Normal, but your Partner has that same Skill at a Bonus, you get a +2 Bonus to the points gained.
If you have a Bonus to a Skill, but your Training Partner has a Debuff to that same Skill, then you don't get any extra points, but they do.

[] Train Alone
- []
- []
- []
- []

[] Train with Yamato
- []
- []
- []
- []

[] Train with Yato
- []
- []
- []
- []

[] Train with Yameko
- []
- []
- []
- []

[] Call up Hose and see if he wants to Train/Hang Out
- []
- []
- []
- []

[] Call up Ritsuko and see if she wants to Train/Hang Out
- []
- []
- []
- []

[] Go To The Shop (Does Not Cost AP)
 
I say we train with Hose to get Reed of the illegal moves in our fighting style so we do not get in trouble with the martial arts Club again
 
[X] Plan final prep
[] Train Alone
- [] Interests
- [] Intimidation

[] Train with Yato
- [] Spiritual

[] Call up Hose and see if he wants to Train/Hang Out
- [] social link


Hows this? We still need to prepare for kimiko.
 
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That does sound cute.

Hopefully, I can live up to your expectations.

Cause I'm still not sure how good I am at writing romance.
CHOTTO MATTE!!! You mean we have a chance for "Science Fell in Love, So I Tried to Prove It" side arc? Sign me up.
"Hey, bro?"

"Yes, Hayato?"

"Thanks."

"...Don't mention it."
Awww.
[+20 XP to both Hayato and Yamato for Event Completion!]

[Hayato gains +3 to MMA, Street Fighting, Brawling, and Physical Resistance!]

[Yamato gains +3 to Business, Trickery, and Diplomacy!]

[+3 Points to Relationship with Yamato!]
This is nice.


[X] Plan: Cold Reading Mountain
-[X] Train Yourself
--[X] Interests
-[X] Train with Yato
--[X] UMT
-[X] Train with Yameko
--[X] Persuasion
--[X] Intimidation


I think we should leave hanging out/training with Jose for weekend and spend this week training our skills. We should deal with Kumiho asap, so we should raise our UMT in case of a fight and its cap did just rise. But we should also raise our speech skills, both for future interactions and in case they might help us solve Kumiho situation peacefully. Yameko also has those skills on Normal, so training with her gives us both +1. Also get to know her a little better. We should also train our remaining Empathy skill, to help us determine what drives people. Could also help with solving Kumiho situation.

Edit.
Updated version of my plan ahead.
 
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