Right attack the kid with several loyal pokemon nearby, I'm sure that will turn out well, god it's like none of you have survival instincts.

Seriously guys jumping right to murder? It's like none of you want an interesting story.
 
So you're going to go the route of him not actually being likable at all or worthy of loyalty, but for some reason you end up submitting to him and being "loyal" (aka his bitch) out of admiration/stupidity? Seriously, just skip to rhe point where you ditch him. "Boot on Face" doesn't make an entertaining story.
did you actually read it? she's staying because just going back into the wilderness now will likely just have the ursarang find and kill her.
 
So you're going to go the route of him not actually being likable at all or worthy of loyalty, but for some reason you end up submitting to him and being "loyal" (aka his bitch) out of admiration/stupidity? Seriously, just skip to rhe point where you ditch him. "Boot on Face" doesn't make an entertaining story.
You seem to be complaining about your own assumptions about the direction and conclusion of an entire character arc, more or less the moment it started. Maybe give a chance to see what actually happens, first?
 
You could literally just have walked away. Just gone for a bath and not come back. Wanting a trainer and settling for Paul are two different things.
 
You could literally just have walked away. Just gone for a bath and not come back. Wanting a trainer and settling for Paul are two different things.
as i already noted, ursaring. she doesn't seem to be far enough for her to stop being an issue, so she has to stay with him for the short term atleast.
 
You could literally just have walked away. Just gone for a bath and not come back. Wanting a trainer and settling for Paul are two different things.
well, what exactly are the chances that I just happened to show up in this world at both the correct time and the correct place to end up running into not only its main character, but also one of the more prominent rival characters, without something having actively engineered that scenario to take place?

Staring down at my blurry reflection in the water, I shake my head. Exceedingly close to zero, I'd imagine. The fact that I encountered both Ash and Paul on the one day that they both happened to be passing through the area seems to just smack of deliberate intention to me. In which case, something more than likely wants me here — presumably the same something responsible for my unexplained transmigration to this world in the first place, in fact. But even in a universe like this one, what entities exist that both could and would do something like this, and, more importantly, for what purpose?
There is also this. Given that this is a setting with a more tangible sort of destiny, it isn't an unreasonable conclusion. Obviously, this is for plot reasons, but it is interesting to see a character that's actually somewhat conscious of it.
 
I give the guy a day at this rate.
That is "push until they break", and sadly for him this is not a case where "break" means "break down in tears".

Now, I can mostly get going along for that whole day, at least out of fear of the wilderness, but I do not in any way expect the SI to actually put up with this long term.
 
Paul's a bitch. Everyone seems to agree. Hes basically the number one ass hole of pokemon just cause his brother quit being a trainer. At least Silver for example had a decent reason.

That said, while I'm not exactly excited to read about Paul and hope it's not a long term thing there is potential in this. Mawile has a chance to get stronger. She'll likely run into Ash and other important characters and gym leaders. And Paul can show.... idk whatever sort of character he has beyond dbag.

Basically it's been 1 chapter and yeah I hope it lasts less time than more also with him but at least trust the author a little. This doesnt feel like a long term thing at the moment anyway. It's a fanfic not a book so unfortunately we just have to wait and see.
 
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Honestly "Literally shits and giggles" is a valid answer for why Flairile is a Mawile in the pokemon world and just so happens to meet important people.

Like, "Hoopa and/or Mew decided to fuck around and summon then transform some shmuck, then Celebi and/or Dialga get an even bigger headache because they have to make sure God doesn't die or something because of the butterfly effect." might as well be the correct answer here.
 
as i already noted, ursaring. she doesn't seem to be far enough for her to stop being an issue, so she has to stay with him for the short term atleast.
Don't forget that Paul is (supposedly) a skilled trainer who seems to have caught lots of Pokémon over the course of his career; good odds SIwile wouldn't get far before he and his team track her down again. And I get the feeling that bad behaviour, such as trying to run away, *might* be punished.

Make no mistake, I dislike the guy somewhat, but given the situation playing ball for now looks like the better option.
 
Take the hand holding the pokeball off at the wrist then go for the jugular. Paul is one of those characters that can get eaten for all most of us care. That and you're a fairy sadism, cruelty, and death are to be expected.
 
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There is also this. Given that this is a setting with a more tangible sort of destiny, it isn't an unreasonable conclusion. Obviously, this is for plot reasons, but it is interesting to see a character that's actually somewhat conscious of it.
I feel like she should push back against destiny at least once before concluding that it's inescapable.
Take the hand holding the pokeball off at the wrist the go for the jugular. Paul is one of those characters that can get eaten for all most of us care. That and you're a fairy sadism, cruelty, and death are to be expected.
Note that he did resist her Astonish, and possibly also Intimidate, without issue. I suspect Paul, and humans in general, are not as completely helpless against Pokemon as they might seem. As young as she is, she might well loose that fight without some kind of advantage.
 
Paul is fine, he's basically Eraserhead.

Like a sports team captain who cuts underperforming or unprofessional players. He has no tolerance for bullshit and wants to build a team that has the same ideology.
 
Paul is fine, he's basically Eraserhead.

Like a sports team captain who cuts underperforming or unprofessional players. He has no tolerance for bullshit and wants to build a team that has the same ideology.
i think you're downplaying his dickishness abit much, in particular, the way he trains and treats said players.
 
Yeah, Paul is being straight up physically abusive here, even if he delegates it to his other Pokemon. It's even more fucked up when you realise that the guy shocking Flarina right now has probably been subjected to the same treatment himself and is just perpetuating a cycle of abuse and violence now that he has the chance to be on top.
 
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I have no problem with your reasoning for staying so far, I just really hope you're going to leave him soon (with or without violent action against him), rather than "realising that staying is actually good for you" or something like that.
 
Note that he did resist her Astonish, and possibly also Intimidate, without issue. I suspect Paul, and humans in general, are not as completely helpless against Pokemon as they might seem. As young as she is, she might well loose that fight without some kind of advantage.
Wouldn't humans be Normal type? We just need a Fighting move, like… uh… what can mawile learn… he'd probably dodge Focus Blast… Brick Break! Yeah, find a Brick Break TM. That'll learn 'im.
 
I like how people are talking about 'abuse' when they're literally training for morally acceptable magic dogfighting. Paul is harsh and strict, but having SIwile train for battles by actually experiencing battles is hardly abuse.

Similarly, assuming SIwile is physically capable of killing Paul is a bit premature. Humans in the animeverse can survive a lot, and Paul has about as much experience with Pokémon as Ash and the Rockets.
 
Had the tiniest notion that SIwile may kill one of Paul's pokemon (likely accidental) at which point he releases the SI as it's no use keeping a strong Pokemon if it kills off all of your other strong Pokemon.
 
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