[x] Alectai
I know, that's why it's amazing! The sheer confusion from the people who still buy the propaganda about the "feral monster" going for their supplies and not killing them will be GLORIOUS!Yeah, Tactically this doesn't do much
Strategically, it breaks their fucking spine. Especially with the confusion of the ground attack happening at the same time.
"other's"spreading out just enough to give each other space to maneuver while still covering each others wings.
"Imperials's"who had dropped slightly lower to further draw the Imperial's attention away from you.
"look"You tense up as you see one of the wyverns looks in your direction and starts to flap harder to mirror your rise,
There should be a comma after "thunder".
"creature's"
"systems"?the wyvern and rider both convulse as Yellow magic ravages their system.
You switched to past tense here.and as the surviving wyvern knight realized that he was in a far worse position than he'd thought, they swing around in front of him to block his escape.
I feel like there's a word missing here.
"rider"?
That colon and that semi-colon should both be something else.You wince; even at this distance you can smell the blood and hear the screams: guys with sharp metal weapons apparently do really well against guys with long
"react"
There should be a comma after the parenthesis.While they're clearly coming this way (likely having seen the wyverns deaths and your lightning) they seem to be far enough away
You switched to past tense again.Before long, the Imperials seemed to decide that they'd had enough, turning to try and ride out of the trap.
"take their shots as well"?
"of"?it's clear that the arrival of the rapidly-approaching reserve groups that those Imperials won't be doing any better than the others soon enough.
"every one""I think just about everyone of our friends has won their battle
That colon should be something else.
I'm pretty sure that apostrophe shouldn't be there.
That semi-colon should be a comma.
You switched to past tense again.their leader looking tense as his horse paced back and forwards beneath him.
There should be a comma after "lies".
"advance"The battle between the advanced force and the scouts had ended a couple of hours ago
"Though"?"Thought that was probably because she was so happy she was getting to yell at people and not be called out on it!"
Yeah, and his name is Salvador.What are your targets? (Choose as many as you want, putting them in order from most important to least important. The longer a target is left alone, the harder it will be to engage. Also, there might be reasons why you can't hit all of them…)
While not explicitly mentioned, I imagine killing the riders is still part of the plan if we go dragon.She figures that she could scare [the Wyverns], but it'd be a lot harder to properly do it. Her basic plan is to take out their riders and then zap them a few times to piss them off without anyone around to calm them down from a rampage.
The idea of the other plan is to destroy their supplies.Second, this is a war! You do not win a war by sparing the enemy! Every Imperial soldier who is neither killed nor captured here is one that the anti-Empire coalition has to fight later, and potentially in a less advantagious position. The best way to win the war, from my perspective at least, is to eliminate enough of the Empire's troops (whether by killing them or capturing them) that they fundamentally don't have the manpower left to sustain the invasion. Deliberately not causing them casualties, especially among their limited and hard-to-replace troops like the Mages, runs completely counter to that strategy.
I think that to date, the Empire's logistical network hasn't taken a scratch, much less a serious hit, and so is perfectly functional. Considering they were the ones to initiate the war and no doubt made preparations beforehand, they'll likely still have ample supply stockpiles plus the transport equipment to move it standing by comfortable in bases and towns behind their own borders. An army in the field needing a sudden resupply is probably closer to "A clerk signs a form and three dozen wagons roll out the city gates later that day" sort of situation than an actual crisis. Especially since, as was pointed out elsewhere, they have other forces in the area that can share their supplies until that convoy gets there.Okay, serious question, how do you think they're going to will losing their entire current stockpile away?
I think that to date, the Empire's logistical network hasn't taken a scratch, much less a serious hit, and so is perfectly functional. Considering they were the ones to initiate the war and no doubt made preparations beforehand, they'll likely still have ample supply stockpiles plus the transport equipment to move it standing by comfortable in bases and towns behind their own borders. An army in the field needing a sudden resupply is probably closer to "A clerk signs a form and three dozen wagons roll out the city gates later that day" sort of situation than an actual crisis. Especially since, as was pointed out elsewhere, they have other forces in the area that can share their supplies until that convoy gets there.
It might halt an advance for a week or so while new supplies get there, but unless they did the world's most comically incompetent job of preparing for war, they'll have been perfectly well aware that this sort of thing happens and be prepared for it.
And that shit is still behind their borders, when they're firmly in hostile territory.
I think that to date, the Empire's logistical network hasn't taken a scratch, much less a serious hit, and so is perfectly functional.