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You prevent yourself from rolling your eyes with some effort. "You all really want me to be a Whitewing, don't you?" you ask.

She grins. "Hey, you live in the mountains like us, you love flying, and your mere existence makes the Empire annoyed and uncomfortable," she says. "As far as I'm concerned, you're most of the way there already." This time, you're unable to keep your eyes under control, causing the woman to laugh. "Yeah, yeah, I know you're Lady Cartese's girl through and through, but we can dream, right?" She shakes her head. "But seriously, since we are going to be working together for as long as we're up here, you should probably learn a few of our hand and flag signals to make it easier for us to communicate."

That catches your interest. You've always loved learning new things...
Oh no. They're learning Ryza's weaknesses.

[X] Go with Angela and her flight to challenge the wyverns. That's something the four of you alone can deal with. Axton and Lancel will be okay, surely, they're both tough, they know what they're doing…
-[X] Fight in your heart-form.
 
[X] Go with Angela and her flight to challenge the wyverns. That's something the four of you alone can deal with. Axton and Lancel will be okay, surely, they're both tough, they know what they're doing…
-[X] Fight in your heart-form.
 
[X] Go with Angela and her flight to challenge the wyverns. That's something the four of you alone can deal with. Axton and Lancel will be okay, surely, they're both tough, they know what they're doing…
-[X] Fight in your heart-form.
 
[X] Go with Angela and her flight to challenge the wyverns. That's something the four of you alone can deal with. Axton and Lancel will be okay, surely, they're both tough, they know what they're doing…
-[X] Fight in your heart-form.

Looks like something went wrong with the pictures, I'll take a look at them. EDIT: Okay, I think I figured out the problem, and I'm going through and fixing the ones I suspect of being problematic. Please let me know if you see any more.
Looking at the problematic images in question, the issue as a whole is they're being hosted on Discord. A while back Discord unfortunately implemented a change that makes it so links to files on Discord shared outside of it expire after a set amount of time.
 
[X] Go with Angela and her flight to challenge the wyverns. That's something the four of you alone can deal with. Axton and Lancel will be okay, surely, they're both tough, they know what they're doing…
-[X] Fight in your heart-form.
 
@SoaringHawk218 , I have a few questions to ask I think Ryza would know, mostly just worldbuilding stuff I want to know because I like the setting you're making.

1. Which classes are most common in each faction's armies? I assume the Fighter/Soldier/Mercenary trio is somewhat omnipresent, but there seems to be an implication that each kingdom has a class or two they have a lot of, like Agrithe and Yeomen.

2. Seals seem to be very rare. How many are there, or does nobody know for sure? How many do the Southern Kingdoms have, and how many are they willing to use?

3. Does Ryza know of any time before her slumber where the manakete had to fight a war?

4. Are people in universe aware classes are, well, a thing? Or is it just different combat roles that happen to stumble into them by happy accident?

5. Who was the strongest manakete Ryza ever heard of? Besides her parents, that is.
 
Welcome back!

[X] Go with Angela and her flight to challenge the wyverns. That's something the four of you alone can deal with. Axton and Lancel will be okay, surely, they're both tough, they know what they're doing…
-[X] Fight in your heart-form.
 
Some Interesting Questions and their Answers
@SoaringHawk218 , I have a few questions to ask I think Ryza would know, mostly just worldbuilding stuff I want to know because I like the setting you're making.
I'm glad you like it :)

1. Which classes are most common in each faction's armies? I assume the Fighter/Soldier/Mercenary trio is somewhat omnipresent, but there seems to be an implication that each kingdom has a class or two they have a lot of, like Agrithe and Yeomen.
Of the groups she knows, Agrithe focuses primarily on yeomen, though they also have a contingent of fighters that don't often get to do a lot since the horse archers do most of the work. Parves is mostly cavaliers and armor-knights, Rignali has light foot troops like myrmidons and archers, and Hornglade (who's providing most of the Northern defensive troops at the Starhelm front) has a fair few troubadours to back up their own light cavalry contingent.

As for the Empire, other than their wyverns, they have a strong soldier core, more-so than even the norm, backed up by cavaliers. She's pretty sure she's seen for a decent percentage of the yeomen they even have already. From what Ryza's heard, they also typically enjoy magical superiority, but mages are thin on the ground right now for them. Legerius has a similar troop spread to the Empire, and the Whitewings are of course nearly 100% pegasus knights.

Ryza hasn't seen much of the Divine Realm's army, but it probably weighs heavily towards White magic casters backed up by durable infantry, probably mostly soldiers and armor-knights.

2. Seals seem to be very rare. How many are there, or does nobody know for sure? How many do the Southern Kingdoms have, and how many are they willing to use?

Yep, they're pretty rare. Ryza hasn't seen any Sealed combatants in this fight, though from what she's heard there are a few Paladins among the Imperials, which probably means there are also a few infantry with Seals as well. You know that Selena, Artemis's first retainer, was a Paladin too, but her Knight Seal was lost when she was killed. Among the Southern Kingdoms, there are probably ten to twenty Seals of various types, but none of them came north with Artemis's force. They're probably being used to punch through the Southlands dutchy's defenses.

Mostly, Sealed combatants aren't risked in low-level raiding and skirmishing, which is what has mostly happened until now. They get brought out for the big battles or when overwhelming force in a small package is needed. Nobody knows exactly how many there are, but they're very hard to make, and as such are a strategic resource.

3. Does Ryza know of any time before her slumber where the manakete had to fight a war?
As far as she's heard, never. There are stories of a few inter-tribal conflicts where blood was shed, but the Arbiter was usually able to jump in before anyone was killed. The worst she'd ever read about was a long-running dispute that ended when a group of young hotheads from both sides got into a big brawl. About five manakete died in total, but they devastated the local area.

Of course, she knows that something really bad was happening that her parents hadn't been telling her about, and she doubts her parents went down without taking at least one of their attackers with them.

4. Are people in universe aware classes are, well, a thing? Or is it just different combat roles that happen to stumble into them by happy accident?

They wouldn't refer to them as such, but a lot of groups develop similar ideas. For example, the Empire wouldn't call their horse archers yeomen, they'd call them something else, but they recognize that they fulfill a similar role in battle. Agrithe and the other Kingdoms have just doubled down more on that sort of training since they have less heavy armor production than the Empire, so they focus more on mobility.

5. Who was the strongest manakete Ryza ever heard of? Besides her parents, that is.
That's a bit of a tricky question. In general, the older a manakete got, the stronger they were, though at some point they'd get too old to do much of anything. That, however, tended to happen very suddenly, so as a rule of thumb if a manakete was older than you, they were probably stronger as well, if only by a bit.

However, in general the strongest manakete at any time was the Arbiter. Now, the Arbiter wasn't chosen because they were the strongest, but when they received the True Stone and gained the Mother's blessing, they took on traits of all the tribes, which meant they had functionally no weaknesses. They were almost as physically strong as a Red, almost as fast as a Green, almost as stealthy as a Black, almost as magical as a Yellow, and almost as resilient as a White, all at the same time. Going back to your question about manakete wars, one of the reasons they didn't get worse was because the Arbiter would step in to moderate and defuse the situation, but if anyone tried to use force to overrule their judgements they were perfectly capable of smacking that person down. Everyone else tended to listen after that.

Of the manakete Ryza would have heard of, she'd heard there was an old Red Lord that'd gone hermit east of her home that her mother said was the biggest, strongest old manakete she'd ever met in person, and her father had always spoken highly of the elder that lived at Goromasa-Zez-Akvech, what the humans know as Sundered Peak.

Hope that all makes sense.
 
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You know that Selena, Artemis's first retainer, was a Paladin too, but her Knight Seal was lost when she was killed.
Lost as in poof gone forever, or lost as in stolen?

Edit: and before I forget

[X] Go with Angela and her flight to challenge the wyverns. That's something the four of you alone can deal with. Axton and Lancel will be okay, surely, they're both tough, they know what they're doing…
-[X] Fight in your heart-form.
 
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Hold up a sec, a Sealed person just got ganked by some "Random Bandits?"

And nobody saw anything weird about that? Did they bring like, hundreds of dudes to do the gank with?

I'm surprised the super spy hasn't made a point of tracking down where that Seal went before it goes up for grabs again, that's a major strategic asset that just evaporated.
 
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Of the groups she knows, Agrithe focuses primarily on yeomen, though they also have a contingent of fighters that don't often get to do a lot since the horse archers do most of the work. Parves is mostly cavaliers and armor-knights, Rignali has light foot troops like myrmidons and archers, and Hornglade (who's providing most of the Northern defensive troops at the Starhelm front) has a fair few troubadours to back up their own light cavalry contingent.

As for the Empire, other than their wyverns, they have a strong soldier core, more-so than even the norm, backed up by cavaliers. She's pretty sure she's seen for a decent percentage of the yeomen they even have already. From what Ryza's heard, they also typically enjoy magical superiority, but mages are thin on the ground right now for them. Legerius has a similar troop spread to the Empire, and the Whitewings are of course nearly 100% pegasus knights.

Ryza hasn't seen much of the Divine Realm's army, but it probably weighs heavily towards White magic casters backed up by durable infantry, probably mostly soldiers and armor-knights.
Ah, so we do have Armor Knights! I don't think we've actually seen any yet, probably because they can't keep up with Arty. As I suspected, the Southern Kingdoms seem to have mutually decided to all have a different specialty in combat. Makes sense, the whole point is that they all work together anyways.
Yep, they're pretty rare. Ryza hasn't seen any Sealed combatants in this fight, though from what she's heard there are a few Paladins among the Imperials, which probably means there are also a few infantry with Seals as well. You know that Selena, Artemis's first retainer, was a Paladin too, but her Knight Seal was lost when she was killed. Among the Southern Kingdoms, there are probably ten to twenty Seals of various types, but none of them came north with Artemis's force. They're probably being used to punch through the Southlands dutchy's defenses.
Yikes, only twenty? Jeez... From what we've seen, the Empire has almost total dominance in terms of promoted units. That's... a little concerning. Honestly us getting that Knight Seal looks to be a far bigger deal than I thought - I don't care if it's Kelton or Pheobe who hits Level 10 first, the one who does gets the thing ASAP. A shame that we didn't recover Selena's Seal - are they always lost if the user dies? Or do we just have shit luck?
As far as she's heard, never. There are stories of a few inter-tribal conflicts where blood was shed, but the Arbiter was usually able to jump in before anyone was killed. The worst she'd ever read about was a long-running dispute that ended when a group of young hotheads from both sides got into a big brawl. About five manakete died in total, but they devastated the local area.
Man... So the Fell War was just, utterly unprecedented. Even more evidence for something being very, very suspect here.
They wouldn't refer to them as such, but a lot of groups develop similar ideas. For example, the Empire wouldn't call their horse archers yeomen, they'd call them something else, but they recognize that they fulfill a similar role in battle. Agrithe and the other Kingdoms have just doubled down more on that sort of training since they have less heavy armor production than the Empire, so they focus more on mobility.
Yeah, about what I expected. Promoted classes seem to have their titles much more defined, which makes sense given how they work. We know wyvern riding mages are called Pheonix Lords... what are Pegasus Knight promotes? I assume one of them has Green magic, given Pegasi are powered by it?
However, in general the strongest manakete at any time was the Arbiter. Now, the Arbiter wasn't chosen because they were the strongest, but when they received the True Stone and gained the Mother's blessing, they took on traits of all the tribes, which meant they had functionally no weaknesses. They were almost as physically strong as a Red, almost as fast as a Green, almost as stealthy as a Black, almost as magical as a Yellow, and almost as resilient as a White, all at the same time. Going back to your question about manakete wars, one of the reasons they didn't get worse was because the Arbiter would step in to moderate and defuse the situation, but if anyone tried to use force to overrule their judgements they were perfectly capable of smacking that person down. Everyone else tended to listen after that.
... Holy shit. Okay, so the Arbiter is just the incarnation of ass kicking then. That certainly explains why violence was so uncommon for such an emotionally driven people - "This Guy can and will take you all on at once, and he'll win too" is certainly a reason not to fight. But that only raises further questions - surely a dragon with the strength of all the tribes would be mentioned in the Emperor's legend, and Ryza would definitely recognise them, which implies the Arbiter didn't participate in the Fell War. But if the Arbiter wasn't fighting, where were they?
 
Hold up a sec, a Sealed person just got ganked by some "Random Bandits?"

And nobody saw anything weird about that? Did they bring like, hundreds of dudes to do the gank with?

I'm surprised the super spy hasn't made a point of tracking down where that Seal went before it goes up for grabs again, that's a major strategic asset that just evaporated.
To be fair, she'd just woken up, didn't have any armor, was in the middle of a well-planned ambush, and it still took a lot of effort to bring her down which allowed the primary target of the ambush to escape since the majority of the attackers were focused on her. Sealed warriors are good, but they're not indestructible.

Plus, you know, I hadn't fully settled on what promotions mean yet, so...

Also, good point on Kopoi going to look for that, let me just check something quickly... (rolls some dice) Yep, he found it. Took some effort, but he was in the area chasing the Talons, and they had it, so he was able to sneak it out. It's still unusable for a few months/a year or so, but it's back in Agrithian hands.
 
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If the being personally blessed by the Mother as the ultimate peacekeeper and judge among the entire Manakete race is the Fell Dragon, we have far greater issues than we currently have reason to believe.
Unless I am badly misremembering, Shyrlonay was a candidate to become the Arbiter back before Ryza's extended nap, and from the sound of things the position was appointed by the mortal heads of the tribes (or something along those lines), not the Mother. Presumably, while the power comes from the Mother (or an artifact blessed by her), what the Arbiter does with it is their decision.
 
If the being personally blessed by the Mother as the ultimate peacekeeper and judge among the entire Manakete race is the Fell Dragon, we have far greater issues than we currently have reason to believe.

Well they're dead. The and likely answer for why is the one thing that hasn't yet been covered yet in the story but is utterly synonymous with Manaketes and Dragons in Fire Emblem. Degradation.

My guest guess is that something BAD was happening, as was said. The Arbiter had to intervene, but it was so bad that the Arbiter had to be constantly using their Dragon-form. And ultimately they went to far over the edge and went insane and then the Fell War actually kicked off.
 
Also, good point on Kopoi going to look for that, let me just check something quickly... (rolls some dice) Yep, he found it. Took some effort, but he was in the area chasing the Talons, and they had it, so he was able to sneak it out.
Very nice. Man that ambush just went wrong in every possible way for the Empire. Gained nothing and are now at risk of losing literally everything.
 
Also, good point on Kopoi going to look for that, let me just check something quickly... (rolls some dice) Yep, he found it. Took some effort, but he was in the area chasing the Talons, and they had it, so he was able to sneak it out.
Oh, that's very good news! That brings Agrithe up to two Knight Seals counting ours, and apparently Kopoi's Fell Seal (which is an extremely ominous name for the record) is one of only twenty in the world so that's a major asset there. I assume Robin would need an Orion Seal to promote from Yeoman - he's max level, so we should try and find one for him soon. Promoting the best member of Agrithe's finest force and biggest selling point seems like an obvious decision.
Unless I am badly misremembering, Shyrlonay was a candidate to become the Arbiter back before Ryza's extended nap, and from the sound of things the position was appointed by the mortal heads of the tribes (or something along those lines), not the Mother. Presumably, while the power comes from the Mother (or an artifact blessed by her), what the Arbiter does with it is their decision.
If that's the case I'm not sure what we're meant to do if the signs pointing towards the Fell Dragon's return are true. We're going to have four Actual Children against Basically A Demigod. That is. Deeply unfair.
 
About the Arbiter
Unless I am badly misremembering, Shyrlonay was a candidate to become the Arbiter back before Ryza's extended nap, and from the sound of things the position was appointed by the mortal heads of the tribes (or something along those lines), not the Mother. Presumably, while the power comes from the Mother (or an artifact blessed by her), what the Arbiter does with it is their decision.

Yes, the position of Arbiter is an elected one. From what Ryza knows, after an Arbiter dies, the True Stone is given to the Guardian, who is an old, absolutely trustworthy manakete who has forsworn all connections to their tribe, as well as the right of ever becoming Arbiter, but is trusted to safeguard the Stone until a new Arbiter is elected.

From there, the various heads of the tribes converge on Ascension Peak and hash out who's going to be the next Arbiter. In theory, any manakete could be elected, but in practice it's usually a Lord/Lady (a leader of a tribe, or someone who has done something extremely impressive). Ryza would remember the Arbiter who was around when she was alive: Vokunfron, who was described by her aunt's letter as someone who's "young, but steady, rational, and willing to listen to everyone before making a judgement."

Nobody quite knows what happens after an Arbiter is elected: they're given the True Stone and there's some sort of ritual that the Arbiter seems to instinctively know, but they never speak of it. They then emerge from the ritual as the Arbiter, but Ryza's reading was a little vague on what all that entails.
 
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My inclination is to keep the fliers together and go for the wyverns and entrust Axton and Lancel to the heart of the cards dice. The Whitewings have far more experience in battle and so I feel we should defer to their tactical decisions unless something seems really wrong - if they think the support groups should be able to back them up I trust them. (Of course, does Melissa sneak out with them?)
 
From there, the various heads of the tribes converge on Ascension Peak and hash out who's going to be the next Arbiter. In theory, any manakete could be elected, but in practice it's usually a Lord/Lady (a leader of a tribe, or someone who has done something extremely impressive). Ryza would remember the Arbiter who was around when she was alive: Vokunfron, who was described by her aunt's letter as someone who's "young, but steady, rational, and willing to listen to everyone before making a judgement."
Well that doesn't exactly sound very Fell Dragon, but that still leaves me confused about where he was when things went to -

Oh.

OH NO.

Um. Is there any record... of someone trying to steal the True Stone?
 
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