What would readers prefer?

  • Pure narrative quest: no dice will be used, the author will have free reign to decide what happens.

    Votes: 25 59.5%
  • New dice system: the author will design a new, better dice system to add some randomness and risk.

    Votes: 17 40.5%

  • Total voters
    42
  • Poll closed .
[X] Go more slowly. You don't feel so good. You want to help, but Artemis wants you to be safe, and you know Father and Mother would want the same. Sypha can hold on for a little while longer, surely.

Man, these tense travel montages are always a rough read. In a good way, I mean! It's a nice build-up to the "rescue" segment of this search and rescue mission.

Predictably, I'm a fan of the moderate option here for the vote - maybe one day I'll feel daring enough for options A or C.
 
[X] Push on. You want to get this done with, and the longer Sypha remains in these people's hands, the worse things will get. Besides, then you can get out of here and go back to Artemis before something bad happens to her again.

Every second we spend on this quest is another second schemers are doing who knows what in the background while we're away. I'm also worried about letting our opponents get even further into territory they consider safe and possibly linking up with reinforcements. I will admit the hidden text does put me on edge, but I'm thinking taking a little risk now will pay off more in the long run. Ending up too deep in hostile territory just has too many things that could go wrong.
 
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[X] Push on. You want to get this done with, and the longer Sypha remains in these people's hands, the worse things will get. Besides, then you can get out of here and go back to Artemis before something bad happens to her again.
 
[X] Go more slowly. You don't feel so good. You want to help, but Artemis wants you to be safe, and you know Father and Mother would want the same. Sypha can hold on for a little while longer, surely.
 
[X] Go hire some help. Having more friends sounds like a nice idea, especially if you're thinking that you're going to have to maybe have to fight an adult wyvern in the not-to-distant future. That doesn't sound fun at all, even knowing they're weak to Yellow magic.
 
@SoaringHawk218, thank you for another great chapter!

One small thing I can contribute if you would like the extra realism; in English the proper form of address differed based on title. Dukes were addressed as Your Grace (or His/Her Grace when referring to them) rather than Your Highness. Highness was used for a marquess, a baron, or a prince/princess. A king or queen was Your Majesty, and an emperor or empress was styled Your Imperial Majesty.
 
[X] Go more slowly. You don't feel so good. You want to help, but Artemis wants you to be safe, and you know Father and Mother would want the same. Sypha can hold on for a little while longer, surely.

Aside from Ryza's dragon-self seeming to get increasingly agitated by Ryza's use of half-shifting, I worry what might happen if we're forced to turn to her in combat after continually bothering her. We already know that the emotion at time of transformation governs how she acts and I feel like the last thing we need is for her to be upset at, well, everything in a situation where we may need to be careful about Sypha. Another part of me worries that slowing down isn't really solving the root problem here but I don't know that we have much choice there other than giving up.
 
[X] Go more slowly. You don't feel so good. You want to help, but Artemis wants you to be safe, and you know Father and Mother would want the same. Sypha can hold on for a little while longer, surely.

[X] Go more slowly. You don't feel so good. You want to help, but Artemis wants you to be safe, and you know Father and Mother would want the same. Sypha can hold on for a little while longer, surely.

Aside from Ryza's dragon-self seeming to get increasingly agitated by Ryza's use of half-shifting, I worry what might happen if we're forced to turn to her in combat after continually bothering her. We already know that the emotion at time of transformation governs how she acts and I feel like the last thing we need is for her to be upset at, well, everything in a situation where we may need to be careful about Sypha. Another part of me worries that slowing down isn't really solving the root problem here but I don't know that we have much choice there other than giving up.
I wish we'd brought the scroll and could learn to perform an awakening, but I guess it will have to wait.
 
[X] Go hire some help. Having more friends sounds like a nice idea, especially if you're thinking that you're going to have to maybe have to fight an adult wyvern in the not-to-distant future. That doesn't sound fun at all, even knowing they're weak to Yellow magic.
 
[X] Go hire some help. Having more friends sounds like a nice idea, especially if you're thinking that you're going to have to maybe have to fight an adult wyvern in the not-to-distant future. That doesn't sound fun at all, even knowing they're weak to Yellow magic.
 
Hmm... I suppose we're nowhere near close enough to risk a full shift, huh? Might be lower strain, but wouldn't last long enough to get us there and through a fight
 
[x] Go more slowly. You don't feel so good. You want to help, but Artemis wants you to be safe, and you know Father and Mother would want the same. Sypha can hold on for a little while longer, surely.
 
[x] Go hire some help. Having more friends sounds like a nice idea, especially if you're thinking that you're going to have to maybe have to fight an adult wyvern in the not-to-distant future. That doesn't sound fun at all, even knowing they're weak to Yellow magic.
 
[X] Go more slowly. You don't feel so good. You want to help, but Artemis wants you to be safe, and you know Father and Mother would want the same. Sypha can hold on for a little while longer, surely.
 
@SoaringHawk218, thank you for another great chapter!

One small thing I can contribute if you would like the extra realism; in English the proper form of address differed based on title. Dukes were addressed as Your Grace (or His/Her Grace when referring to them) rather than Your Highness. Highness was used for a marquess, a baron, or a prince/princess. A king or queen was Your Majesty, and an emperor or empress was styled Your Imperial Majesty.

Huh. That's actually what I'd imagined the form of address would be when I started, but I looked it up and I swear it said they used Highness. Letoro is an Archduke rather than a regular Duke, and he does currently have no feudal overlord, so I think I'll keep it as is, but thanks for the suggestion.
 
[X] Go more slowly. You don't feel so good. You want to help, but Artemis wants you to be safe, and you know Father and Mother would want the same. Sypha can hold on for a little while longer, surely.
 
I want to go with mercs just on the principle of using the money that we brought with us in the first place... but it probably isn't the time. Who knows, we may get another opportunity.

[X] Go more slowly. You don't feel so good. You want to help, but Artemis wants you to be safe, and you know Father and Mother would want the same. Sypha can hold on for a little while longer, surely.
 
[x] Go hire some help. Having more friends sounds like a nice idea, especially if you're thinking that you're going to have to maybe have to fight an adult wyvern in the not-to-distant future. That doesn't sound fun at all, even knowing they're weak to Yellow magic.
 
[X] Go more slowly. You don't feel so good. You want to help, but Artemis wants you to be safe, and you know Father and Mother would want the same. Sypha can hold on for a little while longer, surely.
 
[X] Go more slowly. You don't feel so good. You want to help, but Artemis wants you to be safe, and you know Father and Mother would want the same. Sypha can hold on for a little while longer, surely.

@SoaringHawk218, thank you for another great chapter!

One small thing I can contribute if you would like the extra realism; in English the proper form of address differed based on title. Dukes were addressed as Your Grace (or His/Her Grace when referring to them) rather than Your Highness. Highness was used for a marquess, a baron, or a prince/princess. A king or queen was Your Majesty, and an emperor or empress was styled Your Imperial Majesty.

That really depends on period and the polity, with things being less standardized the further you go back and the less centralized you get. The Kings of England, one of the more centralized, bureaucratic, and standardized Medieval European polities were often referred to by His Majesty, His Grace, and His Highness all in the same document written by their own clerks and scribes to promulgate their decrees to the realm. The standardized scale specifically associating dukes with His Grace, kings with Your Majesty, etc. are things that pop up towards the tale end of the Middles Ages and really come to the fore in the elaborate courts of the Early Modern period as polities centralized and all the important people started meeting more and more with each other at the royal court, in parliament, in the law courts of London, rather than staying dispersed on their country estates. This solidified political pecking orders under more powerful monarchs who could reward and punish their underlings with finely gradated ranks in relation to the ruler, and all sorts of court politics and subtle insults playing on the "correct" styles.

You could use sets of styles to differentiate, say, a highly centralized empire imposing standards of court etiquette upon its nobility centered on the capital, the imperial court, the imperial bureaucracy, etc. vs. the nobles of a loose coalition of fragmented realms accepting any styles so long as they're reasonably deferential and not mocking.
 
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[X] Go more slowly. You don't feel so good. You want to help, but Artemis wants you to be safe, and you know Father and Mother would want the same. Sypha can hold on for a little while longer, surely.

Having considered the matter, our conclusion is that we probably weren't winning a straight-up fight anyway, so our best bet is to be as sneaky as possible and use ambush tactics. That's easier without dragging a bunch of mercenaries behind.
 
That really depends on period and the polity, with things being less standardized the further you go back and the less centralized you get. The Kings of England, one of the more centralized, bureaucratic, and standardized Medieval European polities were often referred to by His Majesty, His Grace, and His Highness all in the same document written by their own clerks and scribes to promulgate their decrees to the realm. The standardized scale specifically associating dukes with His Grace, kings with Your Majesty, etc. are things that pop up towards the tale end of the Middles Ages and really come to the fore in the elaborate courts of the Early Modern period as polities centralized and all the important people started meeting more and more with each other at the royal court, in parliament, in the law courts of London, rather than staying dispersed on their country estates. This solidified political pecking orders under more powerful monarchs who could reward and punish their underlings with finely gradated ranks in relation to the ruler, and all sorts of court politics and subtle insults playing on the "correct" styles.

You could use sets of styles to differentiate, say, a highly centralized empire imposing standards of court etiquette upon its nobility centered on the capital, the imperial court, the imperial bureaucracy, etc. vs. the nobles of a loose coalition of fragmented realms accepting any styles so long as they're reasonably deferential and not mocking.
Yes, the scale I gave is strictly late period to modern English. But the titles seem to be English, so it makes as much sense to go with that as anything.

Having considered the matter, our conclusion is that we probably weren't winning a straight-up fight anyway, so our best bet is to be as sneaky as possible and use ambush tactics. That's easier without dragging a bunch of mercenaries behind.
Plus, if it does degenerate into a fight it's better that Ryza isn't exhausted and has full access to Dragon form.



Say, @SoaringHawk218, a question; how did manaketes hunt? Did they full shift? That seems like it would be by far the easiest option, what with the improved senses to hunt and improved ability to kill and carry prey home from greater strength, but if time limits remain as short as 15 minutes that might be kind of limiting. Unless adults could serial shift, or stay shifted as long as they were hungry (if 'hungry' is an emotion suitable for shifting, but it does seem pretty on theme for dragons), or else shift times tended to get longer as manaketes got older and practiced more.
 
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[X] Go more slowly. You don't feel so good. You want to help, but Artemis wants you to be safe, and you know Father and Mother would want the same. Sypha can hold on for a little while longer, surely.
 
Honestly, you don't quite get why young Artemis had wanted to not do what her parents wanted her to. You'd always been quite happy to learn what your father and mother suggested of you.
It's a teenager thing. Erm, an adolescent thing. I guess manakete teenagers are toddlers.

Sometimes, you wonder if he actually knows what he's doing. You shake your head; that's unkind. Artemis trusts him; that should be good enough for you.

'Of course, she's not out here working her tail off on no sleep,' a voice says nastily in the back of your mind.

'Her father wouldn't let her,' you say back to your brain.

'How very convenient for her.'

'She wouldn't lie to me!'

'How do you know that?'
This feels like a bad thing. Maybe it's just Ryza getting tired and grumpy and trying not to act tired or grumpy, but...something about this feels more. We should check for side effects of extended half-shifting when we get home.


Should be a question mark here, not a period.
Using gramatically-incorrect punctuation can be a powerful tool for conveying tone. (That said, SoaringHawk did change it to a question mark...)


Hm. I wonder if the more draconic part of Ryza is perhaps more separate from her than she has been giving it credit for. It certainly seems to be capable of expressing opinions that Ryza doesn't appear to share, at any rate, possibly doing so as it becomes strengthened by Ryza spending more time in half-shape. Speaking as one such "voice in a person's head", if that is the case and Ryza has another autonomous entity sharing her headspace, then I suspect the two sides will need to speak to each other soon and at least attempt to get on the same general page as the other. Life is substantially more difficult if not everyone in the head agrees on what their overall priorities should look like.
My intuition is that Ryza's heart and dragon aren't separate, so much as different parts. In Freudian terms, perhaps the dragon is the id and the heart is the superego. The id and superego aren't separate people in the same mind; they have different priorities and focuses, but still driven by basically the same fundamental desires and inclinations.
(Note that I have not actually studied Freud and am probably butchering his ideas. But my understanding is that they've been considered bunk by the psychology community for longer than I've been alive, so who cares.)

The dragon cares about Artemis and Robin and the rest, just like the heart, and probably cares about rescuing Sypha. But the dragon is more emotional, affected more strongly by short-term passions and discomfort than the heart would be.
At least, that's my read on the situation.


That really depends on period and the polity, with things being less standardized the further you go back and the less centralized you get. -snip-
Yes, but Fire Emblem (and high fantasy settings in general) tend to depict kingdoms similar to more centralized, "high medieval" to early modern kingdoms. Less so for the evil empires, of course.


Hiring people is a solution that solves problems we don't have; we don't need more muscle, we're a damn dragon. (Yes, fine, Ryza! A Manakete!)
I'm not sure we have enough data about the situation to say that for certain. Yes, Ryza's presence lets us punch well above our weight class, but our weight class is a quarter-contubernium. Ryza can rout a few dozen bandits, but what about a couple hundred lead by halfway-competent commanders?

The problem as I see it is less that we don't need help, and more that we probably can't get enough help. Like, the difference between a quarter-contubernium and a full contubernium isn't that meaningful if we're fighting a cohort.


[X] Go more slowly. You don't feel so good. You want to help, but Artemis wants you to be safe, and you know Father and Mother would want the same. Sypha can hold on for a little while longer, surely.
Part of me wants to hire help anyways; just having another set of eyes would be handy, and new friends to add to the party is always a good thing. (Fire Emblem has taught me to expect mercenaries hired by agents of the good-guy kingdom to be noble and stick around long after they have any concrete financial incentive.) But...I'm not sure it's worth the money, and it's definitely not worth both money and time.

And we definitely shouldn't push Ryza. We don't want whatever dragon-stress she's having to get worse when we don't know what the consequences could be. Especially since we're going to go into battle, which will probably involve turning into a full dragon. Others have said it, but I'll repeat it.
 
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