Kingdom of God: A Quest of Holy Revolution

Turn 1, 822 Yoshrei: Seven-Fold Offensive
Turn 1, 822 Yoshrei: Seven-Fold Offensive
[X] Abolish the Threefold Tithe, a massive wealth transfer from the Mouflons to the other chambers.

Masters of Ourselves

In this life, so declared the great Pugilist sage Opernani Myriam, there are five evils: 1) ignorance, 2) impiety, 3) injustice, 4) disunion and 5) despair. Each represents an ill of the faith that has been corroded from the inside out by the force of darkness, identified with the immoral rich and the illegitimate mighty. Darkness, defined as the elevation of soul over soul, and chamber over chamber, is contrasted with light, the collective brightness of emancipated humanity. The world to come will be a rabinate, a rule of masters (rabins), where mastery of time and mastery of space will be lent to the collective control of the whole mass. Ties of obligation and demand will remain, but made through the order of the whole. The Rabinate is a dream shared by all of the latter schisms of Pugilism, Iconoclasm, and Confession, and they differ instead in the shape and form of mastery.

Masters debate and do not coerce. Masters vote and do not obligate through archaic bonds of fiefdom. Masters complain and masters laugh and masters disagree and masters still carry bonds of universal comity. Here, in this ridiculous place, this filthy crowded tenement, all of you were masters, for all of you sought nothing less but the success of the most extraordinary and powerful force of the collective dialogue. And when you broke down the middle, it was by the will of mastery that you were able to create unity from disunion. The sect meeting which dragged for hours soon turned into a phenomenon in and of itself, as the members of the flagellent section in the midst of this crowded tenement watched gobsmacked as votes were counted, then again, then again, coming over and over to a tie on multiple issues of the most key importance.

At last, a compromise was brokered by the Guru Wendam, and instead of coming to blows, the sect erupted into song, attracting the attention of the tenement as one disciple inexplicably belted out, in perfect pentameter, the old Vasp Song of Release, purported to be from before the flood, and Chedyanki Shevah, the disciple suddenly rocketed to prominence by the popularity of her proposal, composed and sang an early rendition of My Sister, My Sister, what would become the official hymn of the Gunpowder Eucharist. Later on, inspired by the heat of the meeting and his own realization that childrearing may be challenging, disciple Zeb composes an internal pamphlet which delights many of the women of the sect and causes Rector Qanam to remark in deadpan that there will be no squalling babes to menace man in the world to come (amen).

In the midst of a mad fervor that has some disciples quaking, performing elaborate angelforms or spontaneously breaking out into sacral wrestling matches, Qanam stirs the sect to action. He says to you: We will not do one thing, and we will not do four things, but we shall do every thing. Seven Things, in honor of the holy number 7, after the seven disciples of Amalgast, a Seven-Fold Offensive. To triumph in the tournament, to smuggle and rob back from the robbers, to put ourselves to holy work, to have our consecrated nuns anointed with black powder thunder out into the streets, to reach out to pilgrims below the mount to catch the Jurors in their cult-meetings and their ironshrines, and to secure funding from the pious high who would open their pockets to the world to come.

So it is said, and so it is done, as you, half-deranged, half-delirious, and all holy, vow not to rest until the rest of the world knows the mastery that you have shown today, over self and over sect.

The Fire that We Stoke

Old Strong Belman is called Mastodon, for none in the sect are larger and none are more feared for their mastery of angelforms. He is the sect's proctor of the punch, a man with experience in the underworld of criminal Pugilism in Yomri born again as a disciple of this faithful mission, and one of the most loyal of all the sect's disciples. He came to the sect, naked and bare, his monstrous tattoos of the angel of death the sigil of his former life in the mumarim, illegal and circumscribed criminal temples organized on the basis of shared sin, and now he is raised up to be one of God's foremost warriors.

Ultrapugilism, though its name might suggest otherwise, is a corrupted and degenerated form of the faith given over to a preference for the martial and physical over to the philosophical. Equality extends only within the school or dojo, and it is rife with hobbyists and leisurely gymnasts interested in its health benefits over any belief in the higher power of the moves they enact. But the fire lit by Pasan Ghadi still burns here, no matter how faint and smothered, and it need only be stoked for the flames to burn again. In the courtyard of Karogen Academy, ancient monastery founded by that glorious Rav, Old Strong Belman faces his opponents. One by one, they fall: Young and old, fast and slow, strong and agile. Feared among his opponents for his silence and his tattoos and his scars, Belman is a sensation, the Silent Seraph who will just as soon smite his foes as bring them back up after they have fallen.

Finally, he rises to the top of his tournament list, and qualifies. The tournament guru raises his arm and asks him what he wishes to say, and Belman responds: I wish only to say that I dedicate my wins to God, the HaKhofshim, and human freedom. And the onlookers go wild, for the silent, strong, Belman.

Belman is moving up, and so is the sect, for his prize money nets a significant sum to help cover a portion of the funds towards the temple, and his naming of the sect brings confused but excited young enthusiasts and admirers to its very door, some of whom thought it was merely a fan cult and flee in an immediate panic out of fear in getting in trouble with their parents.

Having done his part, Belman rests, and eats half a heffer's weight in meat at his victory dinner hosted by the Academy and passes out.

Results: Success (DC50, 1d100=49+5+5 [Player Bonus, Sect Bonus from Tie Fervor], +Popularity and +Wealth

The Most Holy Thief

To steal from the needy is a sin, but to take that which was never theirs is sanctified. That this justification may be used by brigands and highwaymen as much as schismatics does not dilute its necessity for the time ahead: A smuggler for a cause is a soul of god, but a smuggler for naught but themselves is a slave to greed. In order to prevent the sect from walking down the road of so many radical temples corrupted to become mumarim, petty criminals and perpetrators of evil, the strongest discipline must be applied to smuggling, and it must be for the cause.

The customs wall that separates Nachivan from the exarchates, physical or not, remains deeply porous to those who know its paths, and it is with tremendous success that Wendam is able to drop himself into the local smuggling networks, mostly conducted by the Marginalia, that clade of merchants, small shopkeepers, and other middling urbanites who have been either by accident or choice between completely excluded from entrance of their professions into the Low Priesthood. Unsanctified, unloved, and taxed into increasing destitution by the overlapping jurisdictions of Jurors, High Priesthood, Patriarch and even Low Priesthood, they form an example of a group that have turned enraged by the pointless insults every day inflicted to their dignity. In Yomri, these marginalia schemed to block Baba Tanda from influencing the prayers for the Sanhedron, but in Nachivan they have been pushed to the brink and now push back.

Guru Wendam and his smuggler's posse find this wedge, and tear it open, using meetings at the Sasan Bazaar as surreptitious opportunities to plan heists and midnight rowboat rides carrying salt and smuggled incense to the temples of the city. Mangari Incense, taken in secret from the furthest reaches of Vaspukaran, is often necessary for many sacral rites to have legal effect and also the target of the tithe regime as a valuable commodity more than worth taxing. But with more lust for lucre than the reach to enforce it, Guru Wendam not only exploits the loophole but establishes a stable route, and builds connections with the enterprising Amalist Yeladada merchant clan residing in the west of the Navel, the heart of the city's smuggling racket. This, he warns, is an unstable alliance, but one that for now is worth exploiting.

In the meantime, other members of the sect settle into working life, which proves both mundane and exhausting. Efforts to reach out fail mostly from a lack of familiarity from their colleagues; strange laborers appearing suddenly in your precarious and short-term positions and preaching to you about five evils is more suspicious than inspiring, but the flow of money is an assistance to the sect regardless, and the sect is able to afford supporting its children and elderly rather than pushing them to work as well thanks to the funds.

Results: Success (DC50, 1d100=86+5 [Bonus from Tie Fervour], +Wealth, +Connection/Alliance with the Yeladada Merchant Clan on smuggling. Flat failure on workplace outreach this early on. +wealth from wage-dues.

Woman's War

Less successful are the hopes of the Gunpowder Eucharist to win converts and sway the hearts of the women of Nachivan to their cause. For many, this militant, armed sect of dangerous ladies is simply a step too far: Although some of the laboring neighborhoods in Wickra are sympathetic, such sympathy comes with it immediate attention and attacks from their affronted husbands and local authorities. Much more than the general radical acts of the sect, the arming and militant defense of the rites of women as more than managers, more than mothers, disturbs and discomfits many within the ranks of the toilers, and especially the low priesthood, which prides itself upon the respectability and scholarly acumen of its women.

Woman rectors, surely, and woman Pontiff-Prelates and Abbesses - ideas whose time has come. But woman warriors? Woman marksmen? The idea provokes widespread mockery in the mainstream prayer bulletins, and satiric woodcuts are even put out by God's Own, a popular daily bulletin, of women throwing out their children and replacing them with machine guns, to their husband's consternation. The sect and convent's sudden appearance, and lack of established presence, even provokes conspiracies of saboteurs or spies pushing a decline of morality: one shouting hooligan, the teenaged son of a local High Priest, disparages them as 'witches in waiting', a serious insult to a believers that nearly provokes an attack by one of the sisters before others hold her back.

More ominous is that the convent also comes to the attention of the Exarch of Wickra, an absentee high priest by the name of Hulyara Bemin. Exarch Bemin, almost as an afterthought, issues an edict from his estate a few leagues outside the city near of the end of Yoshrei banning the carrying of arms by women inside the boundaries of his exarchate, effectively forcing the convent underground or out of the city if it wishes to conduct its sacraments. The extreme overreaction, however, also provokes more sympathy, and a flood of letters, as well as, usefully, donations. It is not enough to salve the pain of such a bland rejection, and Galavani Chana especially is dispirited, but it is a lesson learned for the sect of the challenges still faced to ensure that there is none within the world to come who will not be masters.

Results: Failure (DC50, 1d100=30+5 [Bonus from Tie Fervour], Convent of the Gunpowder Eucharist now known in outer Nachivan, for good and for ill, and has the attention of the authorities as well as sympathetic parties, but has not pulled disciples.

Beggar's Burden

Much more disastrous are the sect's attempts to reach out to a financier. Wendam first seeks to meet with Pontiff-Prelate Amalgani Samangan, High Priest head scholar of the Hastata Yeshiva and adventurer-archaeologist, one of the most famed figures and probably the most popular historian in the country. Months prior, his seminal work, A True History of the Society and Conditions of the Kingdom of God, was censored and blocked from publication by the Order of Silence, in one of its last spiteful acts before the impending order to end censorship took effect, and all copies including the originating manuscript destroyed. It was a decision they may soon come to regret, for Samangan was spurred by that cruelty to enter himself into the running as Elder for the Sanhedron, a spot he has easily secured, representing the south of Nachivan for the High Priesthood's Chamber and a thorn in the side of all his many enemies.

Samangan is known as a radical, a supporter of the period of Vasparak Illumination when significant reforms were made to social ills by Patriarch Amalgast the 38th Maravan, and an end to censorship. He is also a generous and open-handed donor to any willing to commit to transforming all that ails the country. He is also, however, as Wendam discovers, absolutely and completely in contempt of jurors as a chamber. During the War with the Mare, his daughter was assigned as a Hessenine nurse to the city of Ayikra, then under siege, and was murdered under suspicious circumstances which he believes was a conspiracy by the Jury of the city and the Metropolitan Prelate to prevent her from uncovering war profiteering and diversion of funds for the war effort. Before that, his own history with the Jurors was totally and resoundingly negative, dating back to his abduction by heathens in Kutan due to the High Jury of Dvarim revoking their garrisons from the railroads where he was stationed.

So when Wendam meets with Samangan, the high priest, for all his vestments and his power, is charming and open to this petitioner, but when Wendam outs himself as a juror deserter, and that the sect draws much of its support from many deserters, Samangan is apoplectic. The idea, he fumes, the very idea, of drawing from Jurors, as a radical proposition, is insanity. They are, as a chamber, foul beasts, scuttling creatures, the kind of animal that can be only be put down. One should only draw as they should quarter, when it comes to that foul order.

Wendam, for his part, does his best to try and salvage the situation even if he is chilled by the cold wrath of the priest, but although Samangan calms himself and apologizes, he admits he cannot in good faith support a movement which seeks to do anything but completely abolish that despicable order. Knowing the battle lost, and knowing better than to argue with one of the most powerful men in the city, Wendam departs, disappointed.

Ragata Sasai Habila is less unpleasant, but not much more helpful. The hard-nosed pirate-priestess of an Eykali merchant clan, Habila is discerning and focused in her radicalism, but despite being amused by HaKhofshim's story, remains unimpressed with what she sees as a threadbare and traditonalist doctrine. Serving as a captain during the War with the Mare, Habila sunk a Mare ironclad by ramming it with her own converted steamer, but none of her sons were so lucky, and she returned home having lost all four of her children to find the cutthroat and increasingly mercenary galleyhouse assembly had chosen her as one of the scapegoats of the sinking of their Holy Fleet, and sent her into an exile from which she has not returned. In exile, at least, she has constructed a shipping empire, exploiting the niches in between the privileges of Jurors and High Priests to transport goods up and down the Hadit at fine prices, and in a corporate structure whereby her own sailors share a portion of the profit. It is also from this revenue that she grants funding to a network of sects, having been always marked both at home and abroad as a radical and traitor to her lineage.

If you are to conquer heaven, Habila tells Wendam as she chews and spits some yamroot, you will need more than a hatred of five evils and a gun. There are many and many more in the Kingdom who agree with your hatred of the corrupt foundation, but have opposed of how to construct your world to come. What is the world to come? How would you define darkness? Light? By what form will mastery take, when mastery comes? A sect becomes a schism when the fundamental truth of its ideas align with the fundamental truth of a despairing society. This society despairs, but the academician also despairs of your ideas. Improve them, she says, and we may talk again.

Gracious in accepting her advice, Wendam leaves faintly baffled at having the particular of your doctrine critiqued by a pirate.

Results: Failure, (DC50, 1d100=3+5+5+5 for Samangan, 1d100=30+5+5+5 for Habila). Samangan is deeply unconvinced of Juror outreach, while Habila tells you to improve the quality of your ideas before she will be willing to extend alms.

The Monk's Relent

Pugilism has always been a sect of the mouflons. It drew its original power from the demands for a folk rite to protect the landholdings of the peasantry, and for protection from unjust law and prosecution. It seeks to level and make equal all of humanity into a single and popular communion, but in doing so it also necessarily attacks other lesser forms of privilege such as the lower priesthood's advantages. Rector Qanam thus faces heavy difficulties in reaching out to the artisans of the Lower Priesthood, and even some of the peasantry of the Lower Hadit who have come to see the parades and ceremonies of the holiday season. Many of them, wedded their own privileges, are loathe to surrender them, and the calls to outright abolish the triple tithe lead to some consternation among the artisans who wish to redistribute its apportionment, not abandon it entirely. In general, there is a hope that the Sanhedron will simply solve their troubles, and surely will rescue them without a recourse to such soul-disturbing notions as you offer. Without a printing press, either, Qanam is not able to hand out pamphlets as he'd like to.

Qanam's singular calls to a war against five evils, and his attacks on darkness and preaching of the light, of universal human freedom, also feel drab against some of the other sects among the processions and the promenades. As Hahahiyyim and Ohr, massive and well-organized Mystic Amalist and True Confessor Sects, have entire platforms and famed speakers, whereas Qanam is a single man standing atop a milk-bucket. His honesty, his piety, and his seriousness reaches some, but the majority are drawn more towards the Hahahiyyim who perform tricks of magic and have brought out an enormous barbecue, plying the crowd even as they hand out pamphlets decrying the practice of penitence and outlining ways to organize against it in several languages, and Ohr, whose powerful Cantor Ghadan Nasir, an enormously bearded and cantakerous man unmoved by his exile in the bitter cold of Tunturus, shakes listeners with lectures on the war upon the demiurgic and indulgent chambers, the history of struggle between material and spiritual, and the fundamental and key sanctity of all labour in the eyes of God, quoting effortlessly verses from his memory.

The Iconoclasts do not even bother with such theatrics: Instead, an enormous wood and plaster figure of the bull of heaven is carried through the city and then set on fire by the Hadit, while disciples of the Makabim sect silently dip supplicants into the water where the idol washes into and declares this the beginning of their time of freedom.

Qanam returns each day, but again and again he is outshone. He is too poor, and too outmatched by those who had resources he cannot possess. The normally level and unflappable man is almost pushed to tears. He admits to Galavani Chana, who comes to bring him some water and to take his place for the afternoon, that he has done the best, he swears to God, but it is not enough. He is a mouflon who taught himself to read in barns by candelight and narrowly passed the exams to enter the Low Priesthood. He does not, and is not always sure how he can compete with these great souls who were born into the scripture.

At this point, someone steps forward from amid the press of souls moving to and fro. A striking young woman, with a huge conical hat and a fine outfit, wearing a sharply tailored rancher's trousers and black jacket rather than the typical long girl's skirt, speaks up. She introduces herself Maryam Vashti, a petitioner from Ischak Circle, turned away four times from the Mount, denied an audience by anyone of note within the city, carrying a sacred-stamped copy of the deed of land nearly three hundred years old that protects the rites and territories of the minyan communion of Pugranasi. She admits, bashfully, that she has been listening to Qanam for days now, sneaking away from her betrothed Boros so she can listen more. She finds it all quite inspiring, but admits to being apprehensive. Can it really be so? Her own way of life, her whole world, is under a total and complete demolition. The Ischak Synod is planning to simply revoke folk rite and begin to clear the plateau where she lives, and no one will hear her own objections, the objections of those that reside there, in that ancient place. Can it be that another path is possible? That this is not the end?

And Qanam straightens up from his despair, and pronounces to her as if he was not on the edge of giving into the fifth evil moments ago, that is absolutely possible, by the acts of the worthy and the just, who raise their fists and push back against the crushing weight of evil. Not one, but a hundred, can surely lift the yoke of oppression.

And Maryam Vashti, after some thought, lights up and says that she will have to do her best to live up to that standard, then and gives Qanam a penny dirham for the sect. He holds it, lost in thought, and Chana says to him, it will start not with a hundred, but with one.

And so it will.

Results: Failure, (DC50, 1d100=8+5). Qanam fails to sway a hundred, but sways one.

The Standard of Our Cause

What does it mean to be a Juror without a Jury? A soldier without a war? A standard-bearer for a standard that has been reduced to nothing? Hallowed are the traditions of the Jurors, and hollow are their lives. The promise of another way, the promise of an escape that does not deprive them of their hopes and dreams and does not force them down but raises them up is electrifying, and Akov brings the zeal of the convert to the task. Organized in standard-cult meetings and in the manufactories of the city, jurors from across the country work and toil under circumstances that are so far removed from the original promise of their order as a deliberative holy order that the mind collapses in trying to reconcile the contradictions.

It is this which Akov exploits. Where once Jurors were the first line of defense against the threat of the peasantry that Pasan Ghadi mobilized, many of their number are now peasants. Where Jurors were first to defend against the urban ambitions of the Iconoclasts, many of them are now urbanites. Where Jurors were first to stop the expansion of the Low Priesthood into skilled labor, many of their number are now laborers, and yet their diction, their language, their scripture, remains outdated. Their language, of honor and brotherhood and martyrdom, is trapped within the reminiscing of a vanished age of glory and heroism that cannot exist, and if it would be reconstituted, would not deliver what they wanted.

Akov cannot offer them a restoration, but instead, a novelty. A way out of the plumbing despair to which they sink. And he strikes as if by lightning, and he strikes them twice: at their work and in their meetings. His flagellents, developing their own identity, strengthening their bonds to one another, have become the foot soldiers of the word of extinguishment. They find work in the factories and then broach the subject, or else come to the standard-cult meetings by invitation and whisper about another, greater standard to which they owe loyalty.

In the place of doctrine, they offer a place inside the soul of men who have been rendered soulless by their position. Their appeal draws hundreds, and where elsewhere the sect has failed in this it suceeds beyond its wildest hopes. The Flagellent Section doubles, then almost grows by half again, and Akov, to manage the flow and flood of Jurors, renames it in a ceremony inspired by his own excitement: No longer just the flagellents, no longer just Jurors, no longer men of standards without meaning. Now they are all servants of a new and terrible banner, the whip of self-sacrifice and relieved guilt, a banner that vows to fight evil and secure liberation:

The Scourge of God.

Results: Double-Success (DC50, d100=82+5, 70+5). ++Popularity, +Wealth, +Fervour, Flagellent Section renamed Scourge of God and grows much larger.

The Temple of the Free


The City of God is a house divided within itself. Within its bounds are held representatives of all the chambers, who control and grasp aspects of its governance. From Tzinhas Barrack, the Sword-Altar Standard has maintained an alliance with the Great Synod situated in the House of Creation to enforce the Scriptural Covenant, their twisted conception of freedom and liberty, the domination of the country by an overweening high priesthood on the one hand and a brutal and arrogant jury on the other. In the outer exarchates, this alliance is in full-force, with exarchs relying on employed thugs and criminlas armed with mallets and knives and the bayonet of the Sword-Altar when all else fails. They hold domain over the vast sweep of Mouflon neighborhoods, volatile and unruly and hardly governed but to crush.The sole exception to this is the domain of Tata Targon, a domineering mini-Patriarch who demands devotion and offers a well-structured system of benefits and alms to those who obey, while smashing those who do not. Ruling from Targon Monastery, the upper-east exarchates are his domain, and he exerts considerable influence over the whole of the east bank.

But cracks have formed in their control. The See of Nachivan, the formal holy city, owing loyalty solely to the Patriarch, remains hostile and sullen at their domination, missing its old glory as the center of all power in the country. The inner portions of the city, wealthiest and staffed with some of the greatest and most cosmopolitan dignataries of all of Vaspukaran, remain as firmly committed to the idea of the Infallible Patriarchate as they were seventy-five years ago. The Alangan Yards, granted long ago as an island fortress to the Order Karaban, the greatest order of the Navy in Vaspukaran, have become a flashpoint. This non-juror order, ancient and outside of the normal rules of recruitments, counts among its ranks orderlies of every chamber, and a massive contingent from the Autocephalates, where the covenant of God is far looser, to put it lightly.

Sailors, mostly from the Autocephalate of Usral, without pensions and having witnessed the collapse of their order's honor and reputation in the War with the Mare, now lay paid but unworking, rotting in their fine ships, or working in the island's many and capcious factories, where they witness what their labour is truly worth. Strikes here are common and vicious, and influenced by the increasingly desperate situation in the Autocephalate itself. The Stormcrown Barkaran Rab, a hereditary prince often called 'The Last Melik' after the abolished feudal nobility of old Vaspukaran, is the head of a declining court where his trueborn and bastard children prepare for a succession war whilst he funds his extravagance by selling monopolies to Jurors and High Priests.

And there is an infection at the city's heart. Sects, militant and pacifist, radical and moderate, have infiltrated the City of God itself. In Little Eykshir, the multicultural neighborhoods of longshoremen and dockworkers are the heart of historical Amalism in the city, with the Temple of Mirrors one of its most holy sites. In the west of the Navel, Pugilism has long been ingrained in the markets and the side-streets, centered around the hub of Karogen Academy. Across the river, Old Nach's workshops and artisan temples are epitomized by the edifice of Glastabar Abbey, a celebration of labour and the dream of the artisan conception of freedom as a society of self-producing souls. Here is the heart of old Iconoclasm, which still creates incidents of explosive anti-iconic violence and impromptu baptism on the banks of the Hadit. And finally, in Wisdom's Heart, the students of the yeshivas have turned confessor, professing their sins to one another in secret meetings that seek to expose the vulnerability of the individual to the whole truth and to purify the taint of the material.

Into this, you enter. With enough funds now to purchase a property within the inner city in order to house a temple, there remains a dramatic strategic question of where exactly you shall place it. Each neighborhood has its advantages and disadvantages. It is agreed by most that for now the Exarchates are simply not safe: Only Little Eykshir, whose exarch is not hostile to Amalism and is anyways terrified of disturbing the peace given the funds of some of the supporters of the schism, would be a shelter. It might be wise, some point out, to be as close to the Sanhedron as possible, but others are concerned that is also dangerously close to Tzinhas Barrack, a short walk for any juror force to take.

Then across the river in Wisdom's Heart or Old Nach might be better placed, but are somewhat further away from the Sanhedron, and are any case is dominated by other schisms. Wisdom's Heart's situating in the hub of the universities, and Old Nach's exceedingly winding streets, do make both even safer locations, however. The most obvious would be in the west of the Navel, near Sasan Bazaar, the heart of old Pugilism, while it is suggested by Akov that Little Eykshir is the most industrial of the districts, and not very far from Kentelken, the densest industrial park in Nachivan, housing the Pesselpan Ironshrine and many other of the city's largest mills and factories, not to mention the Alangan Yards, and so might be a choice to take.

Finally, a few souls who have come to like Wickra suggest Gabanna, at the intersection of the much more mouflon exarchates, the artisan neighborhoods, and wealthier households. Most importantly, though, it is relatively untouched by the irruption of sects and it may be easier to establish yourselves independently there, while having clear street access to the Sanhedron by the main avenues.

The choice is left to the sect. Other parts of the city have been deemed too dangerous or too expensive to live in, and so these districts have been singled out. Choose one at which to found your temple.

Please note that this vote has serious implications, and is not just for flavour.


[] As near to the Sanhedron as may be possible (S).
[] In the Pugilist Neighborhoods of the Western Navel (P).
[] In Old Nach, among the Iconoclasts and Artisans (O).
[] In Wisdom's Heart, among Confessors and scholars (W).
[] In Little Eyskhir, nearer to the industrial district and among the Amalists (L).
[] In Gabanna on the east bank, at the intersection of chambers (G).

The Sect of HaKhofshim [The Free]
The Three Prescriptions of the Righteous Movement

Discipline {Focus}: Absolute. The movement is a deeply tight-knit group of exiles and deserters who trust one another implicitly.
Fervour: Extreme. The movement's respectful contentiousness supports its founding ideals.
Popularity: Tiny. The movement has started to spread in Nachivan, but remains a minor curiosity.

The Three Stolen Tools of the Foolish Master

Wealth: Small. You have the funds to establish a temple and support some sect members.
Influence: Tiny. You have some underworld connections, but nothing of much note.
Doctrine: Unimpressive. There were few printing presses and fewer grand symposiums on radical theory in obscurity.
HaKhofshim Relics, Institutions, Traditions
These are the physical or symbolic anchors of the sect and represent its shared heritage, history, and bonds.

Six-Shin Aluf [Relic]. The sacred angel-flag that flies in defiance of evil. Steels the hearts of all who see it.
The Spirit of Hasadaya [Tradition]. The founding myth of the HaKhofshim, a heroic prison break immortalized in sect memory.
Crimson Headbands [Tradition]. Blood-red headbands reflect the blood of martyrs and the cleansing of the strain of evil.

The Guns of Hasadaya [Institution]. You are armed and dangerous and have a hidden cache of bolt-action rifles.
HaKhofshim Doctrine
Doctrines represent the actual collection of thoughts, beliefs, and customs of the sect. Doctrines are separated into tiers by order of power. Investment of doctrine points increase effects.

Pasan Ghadi's Legacy (Origin): You are a sect of the Pugilist schism, believing in the dualism of the soul into parts light and darkness, the war against five evils, martial arts training, and the necessity of personal and collective alignment to hasten the apocalypse and the world to come. Increased affinity with other pugilist sects.

Myriam's Teachings (Origin): You are a sect of the militant pugilist splinter of the Pugilists, interpreting the world to come as a call to action. You believe that the world to come will be achieved only by a dramatic transformation of real conditions and the levelling of social relations. Increased affinity with militant Pugilist sects and other radicals.

Doctrine of Extinguishment (Tier I): A simple but powerful attack on the Juror practice of immolation and Juror self-sacrifice as a tradition. Increases appeal to Juror recruitment but also attracts negative attention from their commanders.

Abolition of the Threefold Tithe (Tier I): An elementary attack on the threefold tithe for its fundamental unfairness and robbery from the lower to the upper chambers, and advocacy for its total abolition.
HaKhofshim Sages
Sages are leaders and notables of the sect who provide bonuses to actions to which they are assigned.

Guru Wendam [+Popularity]. Former Juror and sect sage with strong experience in subterfuge. Available.
Rector Qanam [+Fervour]. Low Priest orator and holy counsel with prior military experience. Available.
Flagellent Akov [+Fervour]. Juror defector from Nesra, leader of the Scourge of God. Available.
Baba Tanda [+Discipline]. Well-armed low priestess grandmother and organizer. Unavailable, establishing a sect chapter in Yomri.
HaKhofshim Mass
The mass represent unique sections of the movement not incorporated into the sect proper, who have particular ambitions they hope to fulfill.

Scourge of God [Heterodox Underground Juror Standard-Cult]

Ambition: Spread the word of the Lord to the Jurors of Nachivan. Be inculcated into the sect's doctrines.

Convent of the Gunpowder Eucharist [Militant Religious Feminism]

Ambition: Advance radical gains in the womanly rites. Expand the ranks of the convent.
HaKhofshim Chapters
Chapters represent individual sub-sects established across the Kingdom of God. Chapters self-govern but send a share of member dues to the central sect.
Yomri Chapter [Being Established by Baba Tanda]
HaKhofshim Allies & Connections
Yeladada Merchant Clan [Connection]: A smuggling family of Amalist merchants with which Wendam is working on circumventing the city's customs walls with.
 
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[X] In Little Eyskhir, nearer to the industrial district and among the Amalists (L).

Little Eykshir seems like the best bet to me. Situate ourselves right in the middle of the destitute/despairing sailors, the densest industrial yards in the city, and the old pugilist neighborhoods. And if I'm reading it right, this is also where the smuggling family we're allied with is primarily operating in.
 
[X] In Gabanna on the east bank, at the intersection of chambers (G).

It's near enough the center of the city while still being across a bridge from the Sword-Altars, and a lack of defined presence there means more opportunity to increase our influence.
 
So just found and read this and am intrigued by it! Can't wait to see more also am intrigued by the roleplay aspect we're encouraged to take as well. With all that said I'll guess I'll vote and give a shot at that roleplay aspect.

[X] In the Pugilist Neighborhoods of the Western Navel (P).

"Brothers and Sister's of HaKhofshim I may be new to this wonderous Sect but I beseech you to heed my Words! When it comes to finding a home for our soon to be Temple is it not righteous to found it amongst fellow Pugilist's? Would we not find those most willing to listen to our words among them? Even though they've been mislead by what it means to truly be a Pugilist if we settle among them it'll be all the easier to guide them back to the truth! And in the process gain new members to our sect a happy bonus no? So I say we go forth and found our Temple there what say you my Brothers and Sisters?"
 
[x] In Old Nach, among the Iconoclasts and Artisans (O).

Sporting a black eye that she definitely didn't get from a fistfight with someone who suggested women should stay in the kitchen or secretary's offices or what have yous while handing out pamphlets, Sister Shevah argues that with Brother Akov's tremendous success in showing our new Juror brothers the Truth - didn't she say that he would succeed tremendously? AND HE DID! SHE'S SO PROUD OF HIM!!!! (she's literally bouncing around like a little bird with excitement) - and the Gunpowder Eucharist (ignore the black eye) it might be wise to put distance between the sect and Tzinhas Barracks.

You know.

For reasons.

Bayonet-shaped reasons.

Also, she believes in the teachings of Opernani Myriam and ecumenical dialogue when it comes to dealing with the other sectarian movements as well as the fact that half of Nachivan's outer Exarchates are part of the Old Nach triangle. Just sayin'.

However, Sister Shevah would be equally fine with moving to Gabannah, so long as the HaKhofshim put a bridge between themselves and the Tzhinas barracks, though she worries about conflict with a man as domineering as Tata Targon, who would most assuredly, and most heavy-handedly, resist all preaching into his territory.
 
[X] In the Pugilist Neighborhoods of the Western Navel (P).

Our affinity is strongest with other Pugilist sects, especially radical ones, and so the seat of our power should be within the heart of Pugilism. A base shouldn't be built in the center of hostile territory, where it can be assailed from all sides, but rather planted like a seed in safe, fertile ground. This won't foreclose on our ability to do things in other areas, especially since the Western Navel is extremely centrally located. We are still adjacent to the Sanhedron, to the industrial sector, and to the docks. Given our successes with the jurors and the underworld, these latter two locations are both important; being located adjacent to them while not directly within the center of another sect's power gives us plenty of opportunity.
 
[X] In the Pugilist Neighborhoods of the Western Navel (P).

Friends, for the next few months the eyes of all creation will be on the Muvad Mikdash. The city will hang on every word of the Sanhedron's declarations. Our distance from those proceedings will be an essential part of our strategy moving forward.

We lack powerful allies, at least for the moment, and I fear we will have no one to protect us if we encamp a stone's throw from the Sanhedron. Building power there will be hard; those streets are loyal to another authority. And yet, placing ourselves outside the walls or across a river will make it much easier for the authorities to block us out of events in the Navel.

The side-streets of the Western Navel call to me, friends. Here is a receptive and rowdy population within striking distance of the halls of power. Here are (relatively) protective markets and neighborhoods. Here are our friends in Pugilism, who will no doubt welcome us with open arms! Why should we compete with other sects for their weary sailors and unhappy craftsmen? Why not take the fight to tyranny more directly?
 
Hmm. Some disappointing failures, but at least there's a sense it wasn't for naught. I like the way we can "fail forward".

At least we won our tournament, which is all I really wanted.

I advocate for the Navel, we need to start with those who are closest to us ideologically.

[X] In the Pugilist Neighborhoods of the Western Navel (P).

Also pretty clear we need a proper manifesto that articulates an actual ideology, doctrine is our weakest area.

And to draw in the crowds we need a hook, a gimmick! If the other sects have magicians, I say we get our own magicians and have them engage in magical duels to discredit them!
 
Honestly I've been worried about using dice and I'm still figuring them out (for example DC checks are useful but I also need to calibrate modifiers for them and I've been using a flat DC50 which isn't always best) but I'm happier and happier with how I do them.

I feel as though since the setting isn't historical you need dice and other such mechanics to give a clearer guide to chances of success or failure or else you'll be taking shots in the dark of your lack of knowledge of a setting you're still getting used to. What's most important is as you say 'falling forward' - I think some of the bad dice rolls were interesting here in that they say certain things about the sect and the surrounding social climate.
 
Honestly I've been worried about using dice and I'm still figuring them out (for example DC checks are useful but I also need to calibrate modifiers for them and I've been using a flat DC50 which isn't always best) but I'm happier and happier with how I do them.

I feel as though since the setting isn't historical you need dice and other such mechanics to give a clearer guide to chances of success or failure or else you'll be taking shots in the dark of your lack of knowledge of a setting you're still getting used to. What's most important is as you say 'falling forward' - I think some of the bad dice rolls were interesting here in that they say certain things about the sect and the surrounding social climate.

I just got out of a D&D game and as I explained to the players - the dice don't represent your attempt but rather the world itself. Failing a lockpick skill means the lock can't be picked - otherwise you could just roll again and again until you beat the DC. Of course, just because the door is locked doesn't mean you can't slip in a window or steal the keys off a guard (both of which they did)...
 
[X] In Little Eyskhir, nearer to the industrial district and among the Amalists (L).

Where men women and children are broken under the millstone, that is the best place to begin for that is the place in the holy city most in need of liberation.
 
The Whip as a Tool of Self-Liberation (etranger01)
The Whip as a Tool of Self-Liberation
by Abgar Ben Hadam, a Free Disciple and Penitent

Since time immemorial, the whip has been known as the right hand of injustice. It has enforced the whims of cruel masters and officers alike, broken the spirits of those who dream of freedom, and silenced even the barest whisper of opposition with its piercing crack. Even the smallest child knows that coiled, the whip is a threat; uncoiled, a promise.

But why must this be so? Is not a whip merely a tool like any other? It is hardly more complex than a lever or a pulley. A simple length of leather, treated and cured just so. What evil can a tool truly contain? No, the evil a tool does is nothing more than an extension of the person who wields it. The whip cannot be evil just as the hand holding it is not evil; it is the soul of the wielder in which the darkness resides.

The great Pasan Ghadi himself said, "Do not hate the lash, but seize it for yourself and turn it on the wicked." This is often considered to be a metaphor, an exhortation to take up every tool in pursuit of righteousness. It has been used to justify the utilization of everything from gold to rifles. But let us consider that we may also derive literal meaning from this weighty truth: that the actual physical lash itself can be used for just purpose and correct deeds. It can be a symbol not just of justice and just behavior, but of justice snatched from the jaws of injustice, turned about and made good again through correct intentions and purpose.

If so, then what should it be used for? If we are to turn the lash on the wicked, as the great Pasan Ghadi commands us, then we must correctly identify the wicked against whom that lash must be wielded. The most obvious answer is that if the whip was used by the master, then it must be used on the master. If it was used by the corrupt officer, then it must be used on the corrupt officer. This is a simple and easy to understand truth, and it is not wrong, but it is also not complete, for many of us have also stood at the right hand of injustice.

If you are a person who has sinned against another, who has served the cause of darkness — whether knowingly or unknowingly — if you have in ignorance or foreknowledge caused the oppression or subjugation of another, then you yourself are wicked. Yours may not have been the hand that carried the whip, that lashed out against the weak and the just, but it may have carried a rifle or a hammer or prayer-book or legal writ used for that same purpose. A whip cannot be held to account for what its owner uses it for, but you are not a tool. You are a person, a free individual with a soul, and though the world may try to treat you as an object, you know that you are not.

So, then, having seized the lash, we turn it on the wicked. Not just the wicked one who wielded it, but against the wicked one who wields it now. The one who, though possessed by justice and animated by righteousness, correct in thought and deed, still carries with them the burden of great sin. The whip is the correct tool to use on one's self, for it is not a tool of murder, but rather a tool of punishment and suffering. It is a tool that teaches lessons through pain, and the lesson you must learn is that you were never a tool, never a device, never a thing. You were a person who acted unjustly, and you even now carry the weight of that injustice like a laborer carries his burden.

By turning the lash upon yourself, you scour away the sin which you once carried. You cleanse yourself of the false pride and incorrect thoughts which compelled you to take up that burden on behalf of unjust masters. Like a rushing river, the purifying blood you set free snaps the fetters you placed upon yourself. You attain humility, perspective, and peace. And you do so privately, without the sin of overweening pride, lest you replace the hubris of the sword with the hubris of the scourge.

And when you are done, when you have set aside sin and guilt and shame, you will rise again, unshackled by sin, unburdened by guilt, untroubled by shame. You will be, in that moment, truly free. Only then can you begin to consider how best to turn your scourge against the unjust master, for you now do so as a true warrior of God.
 
@etranger01 Threadmarked. Would you like to use this to boost a Juror recruitment roll or to contribute to a Doctrine roll (as there will be one next turn?)
 
Some pretty oof failures, but nothing surprising for a movement that's still trying to build itself in a metropolis and the success we did have were pretty important. Allies, money, more fervor and more success in getting jurors, all of it is building up towards a more advanced doctrine and manifesto.

[X] In the Pugilist Neighborhoods of the Western Navel (P).

Its why I'll also vote for Western Navel. Its a bit dangerous certainly, and I'm sure that when the Sword-Altar starts it purges it wont miss the seats of influences of the Schismatics.

But what's more important for us now is that by interacting with other Pugilists, we'll be able to compare our beliefs and doctrines with theirs. Sharpen our beliefs against each other, grind our embryonic manifesto in ideological fights with those closest to us and therefore create the reimagining of Pugilism we want with fertile soil.

It also helps that the Navel is right in the middle of Schismatic territory, bordered by the other beliefs. That will also help us in building our ideals, and reach out to them without coming into conflict for going into their turf.

If we do that, even if the Sword-Altar burns this temple, our beliefs and cause will survive just fine.
 
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And to draw in the crowds we need a hook, a gimmick! If the other sects have magicians, I say we get our own magicians and have them engage in magical duels to discredit them!
Given the tourney, the Jurors and Belam's success, I think we have our gimmick.

We need to Wuxia this shit up. Set up exhibition matches and dojos for people who just want to learn self-defense. The influence and reach these would bring speak for themselves.
 
The Whip as a Tool of Self-Liberation
by Abgar Ben Hadam, a Free Disciple and Penitent

Since time immemorial, the whip has been known as the right hand of injustice. It has enforced the whims of cruel masters and officers alike, broken the spirits of those who dream of freedom, and silenced even the barest whisper of opposition with its piercing crack. Even the smallest child knows that coiled, the whip is a threat; uncoiled, a promise.

But why must this be so? Is not a whip merely a tool like any other? It is hardly more complex than a lever or a pulley. A simple length of leather, treated and cured just so. What evil can a tool truly contain? No, the evil a tool does is nothing more than an extension of the person who wields it. The whip cannot be evil just as the hand holding it is not evil; it is the soul of the wielder in which the darkness resides.

The great Pasan Ghadi himself said, "Do not hate the lash, but seize it for yourself and turn it on the wicked." This is often considered to be a metaphor, an exhortation to take up every tool in pursuit of righteousness. It has been used to justify the utilization of everything from gold to rifles. But let us consider that we may also derive literal meaning from this weighty truth: that the actual physical lash itself can be used for just purpose and correct deeds. It can be a symbol not just of justice and just behavior, but of justice snatched from the jaws of injustice, turned about and made good again through correct intentions and purpose.

If so, then what should it be used for? If we are to turn the lash on the wicked, as the great Pasan Ghadi commands us, then we must correctly identify the wicked against whom that lash must be wielded. The most obvious answer is that if the whip was used by the master, then it must be used on the master. If it was used by the corrupt officer, then it must be used on the corrupt officer. This is a simple and easy to understand truth, and it is not wrong, but it is also not complete, for many of us have also stood at the right hand of injustice.

If you are a person who has sinned against another, who has served the cause of darkness — whether knowingly or unknowingly — if you have in ignorance or foreknowledge caused the oppression or subjugation of another, then you yourself are wicked. Yours may not have been the hand that carried the whip, that lashed out against the weak and the just, but it may have carried a rifle or a hammer or prayer-book or legal writ used for that same purpose. A whip cannot be held to account for what its owner uses it for, but you are not a tool. You are a person, a free individual with a soul, and though the world may try to treat you as an object, you know that you are not.

So, then, having seized the lash, we turn it on the wicked. Not just the wicked one who wielded it, but against the wicked one who wields it now. The one who, though possessed by justice and animated by righteousness, correct in thought and deed, still carries with them the burden of great sin. The whip is the correct tool to use on one's self, for it is not a tool of murder, but rather a tool of punishment and suffering. It is a tool that teaches lessons through pain, and the lesson you must learn is that you were never a tool, never a device, never a thing. You were a person who acted unjustly, and you even now carry the weight of that injustice like a laborer carries his burden.

By turning the lash upon yourself, you scour away the sin which you once carried. You cleanse yourself of the false pride and incorrect thoughts which compelled you to take up that burden on behalf of unjust masters. Like a rushing river, the purifying blood you set free snaps the fetters you placed upon yourself. You attain humility, perspective, and peace. And you do so privately, without the sin of overweening pride, lest you replace the hubris of the sword with the hubris of the scourge.

And when you are done, when you have set aside sin and guilt and shame, you will rise again, unshackled by sin, unburdened by guilt, untroubled by shame. You will be, in that moment, truly free. Only then can you begin to consider how best to turn your scourge against the unjust master, for you now do so as a true warrior of God.
Yooooo that was fantastic, I loved every bit of this eeeeeee
 
Actually something else we could do @Cetashwayo.

Given the fact that our core members spent years in exile in the ass end of nowhere, but managed to care for each other's health enough that they had children who were born and grew up in exile, and our mass rank of Jurors who are veterans of the Mare War, and the fact that we are ultimately a Martial Sect, would you say that we have some members that have medical skills?

Not necessarily doctors, but enough practical and folk knowledge that for the majority of the improvised urbanites and the Underworld, their services in hidden clinics would be highly sought out.
 
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