Writing Something Every Day*, Xantalos Edition

That guy's voice reminds me a lot of Christopher Lee, Saruman especially.

This would be interesting to see you do at some point. A departure from your more faction-focused quests so far.
That intro is 98% of the reason I got that game to begin with (and was promptly very disappointed that it was just a MOBA).

I'd definitely need to flesh the idea out more - probably get rid of the idea of Rokkur, since there isn't much story that can be had with that, and maybe have the structure of the game's story go from demigod's origins -> demigod's defining deeds -> the gods combine all the worlds they're in and let them fight it out there.

Because the game's backstory, such as it is, mentions numerous worlds of Light and Dark, and themes its various heroes around appropriately villainous or heroic concepts. Mayhaps I could split them up into two worlds, one with the mostly 'light' demigods, or at least those who were intended to be at the start of their stories, and nominally overseen by the gods of Light. Vice versa for Dark. Then when whichever demigod the players followed had grown to enough power, the big event of the Progenitor getting killed happens, the two worlds are fused together, and you start getting told by a particular god that favors you that hey, one of our own just died - perform well enough and you'll become the new god.

It'd definitely be more individually focused, and also a way to step a bit away from premade settings like Warhammer because the lore is so sparse that I can make up effectively whatever I want for any of the demigods.
 
Jan. 8, 2020 - Didn't write anything that day. I could've, I had the time to, I just chose to rewatch this one Australian chiropractor's videos for like 5 hours instead. Don't regret doing it, but it does break the rules of this thread, so it goes down as a shame.
I, member of the public, shame you for this lack of writing. Your attempt to bribe me by having the video be Australian has also been noted and shall count as a mark against you in future.
 
Snippet 10 - Unclean Beast Demigod - Jan. 9, 2020
RIght, so I wrote this post today, but I'm not entirely sure if it counts as a thing since it's not so much a creative endeavour as an analysis of something I've already written. So I did up one more option for that Demigod game idea:

[] The Unclean Beast

Long ago, a grimoire was written by a very powerful and very foolish man. It contains a compendium of all the black and evil magic that man ever learned - hexes and curses, twisting spells that inflict agony and misery and ruin. Spells of binding, enslavement, summoning.

Names and Ways to call you through the Veil.

You are a spirit of pestilence and disease, acid and death, rot and agony. Not one of your divine father's proudest moments, to have joined in union with Mother, the Empress of Contagion, but the deed was done and your essence cast out into the void, to seek sustenance in the consumption of mortal flesh. You have manipulated events in the mortal realm for well over a century, whispering oh so carefully in the right ears, passing the right secrets on until at last some sweet, trusting fool opens the Veil and calls you through.

That time is now.

The Unclean Beast is a horror, a malavolent spirit from beyond the Veil that has cloaked itself in mortal flesh. Its primary goal is to kill, eat, defile, and destroy everything it comes across, not necessarily in that order. It weeps acid from every pore, spreads disease with every movement, and its vessel of flesh has enough raw strength to rip a man in two. The only question is where it was called into the world, where its destructive rampage shall begin...
 
Your attempt to bribe me by having the video be Australian has also been noted and shall count as a mark against you in future.
It'll count for him in future for me. I'm not immune to a little flattery.

The Unclean Beast sounds like it'd lose through just being a bit too edgy for this site's voters. I still remember a quest where a programmed bioweapon monster turned into a good guy helping out the protagonists with nearly no reason other than because roleplaying was beyond them.
 
It'll count for him in future for me. I'm not immune to a little flattery.

The Unclean Beast sounds like it'd lose through just being a bit too edgy for this site's voters. I still remember a quest where a programmed bioweapon monster turned into a good guy helping out the protagonists with nearly no reason other than because roleplaying was beyond them.
Aye, I dunno if I'd actually include it as an option if I were running the game - it's a bit too simpleminded to really make for a compelling protagonist. As it is, I'm just writing out flavor text for each of the game's 10 demigods because they're the ones the game offers, and I figure I may as well do them all since I'm not gonna be running this thing anytime soon.
 
Snippet 11 - Vampire Demigod - Jan. 10, 2020
Another demigod writeup thing today since I accidentally slept for 6 hours after coming back from work.

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[] The King of Dusk

There are some who say it is man's inherent moral nature that drives him to succeed. Others say it is their ingenuity, determination, or even divine favor. They are all wrong - it is hunger that motivates men to better themselves, to grasp for more.

You have always been hungry. From the moment of your birth it was as though an endless pit had been placed within you, a gaping vortex that could never be sated. When your mother offered you her jugular to feed on in the manner of her people, you drained her dry in under a minute, making an orphan of yourself immediately after entering the world. This act garnered much fear from your people, who have quarantined you in a seperate cave and feed you whole cows to sate your appetite.

For you were born to the Night Walkers, who drink of the blood of men and may move only in the dark. You are different from your brethren in ways other than your unending hunger - you can walk in the cursed daylight, turn your flesh to mist, and instinctively command all the creatures of the night. And during the few periods of lucidity you can grasp, you have a voracious intellect, devouring words as eagerly as you drink blood.

If only your hunger would ever abate...

The King of Dusk, named Erebus by his fearful people, is an immensely powerful vampire, whose divine nature allows him to bypass many of the innate weaknesses of his people - he can walk in daylight, trespass on sacred ground, and appears close enough to human that he may pass basic scrutiny. He will develop many other powers as he ages - the ability to control the thoughts of others, to dissolve into mist or bats at a whim, and to command any nocturnal creature with instinctive ease. The price he pays for these gifts is an insatiable hunger for blood, which renders him incapable of thought or speech at its worst, reducing him to a ravenous beast that will drain anything with blood that comes near him.
 
SHAME #3
Jan. 11, 2020 - Didn't write anything! I had ample time, just didn't use it for ... anything really, I can't even remember what I did yesterday bar eating at a far too late timeframe, which usually means that I just aimlessly flitted back and forth between the same three web pages for 6+ hours in an attempt to distract myself from an impending episode of feeling purposeless. Exactly the sort of habit I've been trying to break! I'll write something today.
 
Jan. 12, 2020 - didn't end up writing anything concrete buuuut I did run a D&D session where I improvised no less than 5 NPCs with backstories, so I'd say that kinda counts? What's y'alls' opinion?
 
More than any other update (though to be fair I say that a lot) I look forward to the other one. Help me Xantalos. You're my only hope.

That said I don't think you should be trying to aim for more and more words on average every time, lest you get yourself caught in something nasty.
 
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More than any other update (though to be fair I say that a lot) I look forward to the other one. Help me Xantalos. You're my only hope.

That said I don't think you should be trying to aim for more and more words on average every time, lest you get yourself caught in something nasty.
Oh aye, I'm definitely not looking to try to train myself to maximize wordcount or something, just trying to build a habit of consistently writing so that I don't run into stupid weeks-long dry spells where I do nothing and feel bad about it. I'm starting the outline of the next Respect Your Elders update today, along with fleshing out a silly idea I had.
 
Snippet 12 - Yet Another Demigod/Vampire Sitcom Ramble - Jan. 13, 2020
Made some rudimentary notes on what's gonna happen in Respect Your Elders' turn 9, and did a tiny bit of outlining on an idea I had for a sitcom where it's a bunch of dysfunctional vampires in a blood-themed rehab facility. There'd be the 'straight man' character who got turned by accident but didn't realize it until they were trying to guzzle their elderly landlord's dog's blood, a mooch college student vampire who stole a bunch of blood from their roommates because they were cold (even though vampires don't get cold), the sketchy vampire who's robbed multiple blood banks (gimme the o negative and no one gets hurt!) but got off on an insanity plea, the paranoid old vampire who's absolutely convinced that humans are out to get them and forms wacky conspiracy theories all the time, and whatever other character archetypes I can come up with for an ensemble cast. The general trend of the series would be kinda like those fish-abstaining sharks from Finding Nemo, where they're made by the rehab facilitator (who I may also make a vampire, albiet a really smug, hypocritical one reminiscent of Dilbert's pointy-haired boss) to engage in activities meant to help them cope in a world full of walking bloodbags. Only this place isn't run very competently, so various shenanigans inevitably ensue. Probably should be lighthearted in tone, at its absolute darkest making allegorical comparisons between vampires and substance addicts rather than parasites or disease as usually happens. Just a general idea for the moment, but I'll build on it for the future. Maybe call it... Shady Acres? Dunno.

Oh also here's another of the demigod game options, this time featuring the game's Inuit-inspired snow shaman healer queen lady.

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- The Lifegiver

The world is a harsh place, filled with hunger and pain and misery. The elements beat on its people, and its people turn upon each other in hope of surviving just a little while longer. Death of the body is an everpresent danger, but more hazardous still is the death of the spirit, where the inner light inside a person goes out and they become cruel and twisted.

Death is all around, but life continues to bloom, and it rejoices as you are born. You come into the world during the worst winter your tribe has seen in living memory, and though there is no food to spare, the Elders are persuaded to spare you when they see the vitality shining from your eyes. They can see that you are a child blessed by the spirits, and that to leave you to die in the snow would be to refuse a great gift from their ancestors.

It is well for them that they decided as they did, for you are perhaps Life's greatest champion in all the worlds, and the sea of breath within your soul is enough to defy death itself. You will become a powerful angakkuq in time, but beware, for men's hearts hate and fear that which they cannot possess.

The Lifegiver, named Sedna for the old woman in the sea, is invested with powerful life magic that will enable her to communicate with the natural world, fortify her flesh against harm, and even reverse death itself. She is born into one of the many tribes in the frigid south of the world, who eke out a living on the ice floes of their home. It is a harsh life, but it promises much exploration, frequent trading arrangements with more northern explorers, and the opportunity to bond with the beasts of the tundra.
 
SHAME #4 - Jan. 14/Snippet 13 - Yet More Demigoddery - Jan. 15, 2020
Didn't do anything yesterday. I expect I won't do very well with keeping consistency in the next few months; I've always followed a pattern of 'write a lot for about 1-2 months, don't write shit for 4-6', and habits are hard to change. But Imma keep trying. Fail your way to success and whatnot. Especially since I now have to write a legit book due to telling someone I involuntarily admire that I'm in the process of doing that - for reasons I can no longer recall or comprehend - and being more willing to put myself through excessive stress rather than admit I was lying. Anyway, here's another demigod thing.

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[] The Blind Prince

For ages, your people have been a scourge upon the world. From the mountain kingdom of Armias, the minotaurs have amassed vast armies and struck out at the world again and again, king after king throwing his people's lives away, for gold, for glory, for honor.

A disgusting notion to one such as you, though it has kept you alive. You are Oculus, prince of Armias, and you were born crippled - a blind albino, never expected to survive his first month, it was a bitter disappointment to your kingly father when you refused to die.

His honor would not let him disavow you as his son, but neither would it let him raise you for war as his father had him when you were such an obviously poor fit. Instead you were relegated to live in the kingdom your father ostensibly runs, as he continues to wage war and attempts to sire another heir, though his loins prove barren.

As you grew, you proved to be smart as a whip, and though you had no working eyes, you could soon see plainly that the king was leading Armias to ruin, amassing enemies by the fistful and ransacking his own kingdom in search of coin to wage his endless wars. If this trend continued, your home would soon be broken by foreign empires who had learned to hate the minotaur through centuries of battle, and your people would suffer for an age, all for the sake of a stubborn old man's honor.

This cannot stand. One way or another, you must depose your father, and claim the title of King of the Minotaurs. Only then will you be able to steer your kingdom away from its impending downfall.

The Blind Prince is a freak amongst his people, the warlike minotaurs - physically frail, blind, and incapable of speaking above a whisper due to an accident of birth, he would be shunned if not for being the king's only son. Oculus is extraordinarily intelligent, and gifted with a vast capacity for magic, which he will be able to develop along one of multiple powerful paths. He resides in the mountain kingdom of Armias, a land that is heading for doom, as long war attracts enemies and weakens the kingdom. One way or another, you must assume the mantle of king and restore your land to true glory.

Oculus as he appears in the game specializes in lightning magic, but I figure I could do better as making him more of a dnd wizard-style caster as opposed to the Torchbearer's sorcerer sort of style.
 
Didn't do anything yesterday. I expect I won't do very well with keeping consistency in the next few months; I've always followed a pattern of 'write a lot for about 1-2 months, don't write shit for 4-6', and habits are hard to change. But Imma keep trying. Fail your way to success and whatnot. Especially since I now have to write a legit book due to telling someone I involuntarily admire that I'm in the process of doing that - for reasons I can no longer recall or comprehend - and being more willing to put myself through excessive stress rather than admit I was lying. Anyway, here's another demigod thing.
SHAAAAAME
 
I'm not counting yesterday as a missed day since there were extenuating circumstances with work and family that prevented me from even writing something idly on my phone, but I definitely didn't have any excuse like that for today. I actually started on the next Respect Your Elders update, though, writing ... 56 words. Not much, but I'ze tired. Also did a very, very rudimentary idea document for worldbuilding for the book I mentioned previously.
 
Jan. 18, 2020 - I only wrote about 19 words for Respect Your Elders turn 9 tonight, but I also did some more work on skavenquest's mechanics rework (still vexing me but I'm getting there), figured out the full list of the effects of the Contemplation Sanctums thing, puzzled out how Cubes of Darkness work, and pieced together a little more of a coherent vision for the prospective novel which I guess I'm somehow actually doing, since the whole theme of this thread has been me not letting myself back out of promises I made to myself. I'd count that as a productive day.
 
Jan. 18, 2020 - I only wrote about 19 words for Respect Your Elders turn 9 tonight, but I also did some more work on skavenquest's mechanics rework (still vexing me but I'm getting there), figured out the full list of the effects of the Contemplation Sanctums thing, puzzled out how Cubes of Darkness work, and pieced together a little more of a coherent vision for the prospective novel which I guess I'm somehow actually doing, since the whole theme of this thread has been me not letting myself back out of promises I made to myself. I'd count that as a productive day.
Oof
If you need help with the mechanics, I'd suggest shooting a line to red flag, he's helped more than one QM with their mechanics
 
Oof
If you need help with the mechanics, I'd suggest shooting a line to red flag, he's helped more than one QM with their mechanics
He helped a bit with a few aspects of Elders, but I'm not gonna ask him to create a whole mechanical system for me. It's just the matter of how the whole thing comes together, really... eh, I'll get it eventually.
 
Jan. 19, 2020 - wrote 301 words for Respect Your Elders turn 9. Actually finished one of the sections! This whole 'just write shit' thing actually might be working out, who knows.
 
Jan. 21, 2020 - wrote 572 words (so far, might do more) for Respect Your Elders turn 9. Tackling the low-hanging fruit at the moment, but once I get a bit of a backlog built up I may be able to attempt releasing periodic small updates as I write them like I sort of emulated last time.

Edit: wrote another 572 words - weird as hell coincidence there - bringing tonight's total to 1144 words! Woo! Admittedly I won't really have time to write all that much tomorrow so this is kind of making up for that, but still. Making good progress!
 
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