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Tohsaka as an Uchiha Quest (Naruto/FSN)

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SouvikKundu said:
can we able to get his eyes? if we inform our mother about naruto will she take a role in his life? I just surprised she never look to safeguard Kushina's son.
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The Third misdirected her, most likely.

Shisui's eyes... [REDACTED] (SPOILER)
Adhoc vote count started by AoMythology on Aug 15, 2018 at 6:25 PM, finished with 62 posts and 15 votes.
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It seems like a bad idea to just assume that Shisui would do the exact same thing he did in canon, when his situation has changed rather significantly. In canon, he had nobody, to our knowledge, other than the village and his clan. Here, he also has his sister to take care of, and we all know how obsessed Uchiha are about their siblings. He should realize now that simply killing himself, and thus effectively giving up on stopping the coup, would at best horribly traumatise his sister, and at worst, condemn her to living through said coup, the in-village civil war it would result in, as well as the resulting tension and enmity, regardless of who actually wins. Well, either that, or the village would act first, since Shisui and Itachi have informed it about the coup, in which case Shisui's sister would likely be murdered during the preemptive strike.

So, yeah, Shisui has some very good reasons to cling to his life this time, or at least to be much more careful, since he stands to lose much more if he screws up. He can't just traumatise Itachi and ask him to take care of everything.
 
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Reminder that Shisui didn't really have a choice. When Itachi found him, he was already at deaths door. Missing an eye, having ROOT after him, and poisoned by bugs. His suicide was honestly the only way for him to escape Danzo.

As for his eye? I believe we might get it sooner than you think.
 
DarkKing98 said:
Reminder that Shisui didn't really have a choice. When Itachi found him, he was already at deaths door. Missing an eye, having ROOT after him, and poisoned by bugs. His suicide was honestly the only way for him to escape Danzo.

As for his eye? I believe we might get it sooner than you think.
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Only if Itachi performs highly traumatic, involuntary surgery on us.

...We are going to be REALLY messed up in a year or so, aren't we.
 
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A Brother's Legacy (Canon Omake)
  • Sidestory
    • @AoMythology Omake Crosspost time!

    Here you are again, ruffling your hair. You are Uchiha Shisui. And the whole Clan rebellion is starting to tear you apart. So you begin writing.

    A year ago you were here writing what to train your sister Rin in to prepare her for life as a Shinobi. Now? Now you feel like your back is against the wall and you have to choose between your loyalty to the clan and to Leaf. You'd rather die than choose. So in case it comes down to it, you are writing down two things. An apology to Rin, and small tips on how to be a Shinobi. Along with tips on how to use the Shunshin like you do.

    Now, you spent a lot of time figuring it out. And you don't want anyone to accidentally find this and take it with that secret, especially if they are the enemy to the village. So instead, you'll be writing hints to figure out the secret easier.

    Also, thank god for mother, you are using your less well known sealing skills to secure it even more. To be specific you are creating a blood identifier lock seal. All that's needed is a drop of your blood or the drop of a family members blood to unlock it. A very complicated, but secure, seal. Some may call it paranoia. You call it being prepared.

    Anyways it's not just notes of how to be a good Shinobi. It's also notes on how to live well. How to move past grief and hardships. How to work past feeling in a rut and against an unbreakable wall. And how to work with others.

    God, you remember some of the absolute bastards you had to work with and how you wanted to Genjutsu some so badly. But teamwork is an important skill and so is self restraint. Something Rin has to work on.

    Thinking of things to work on, you should write down some tips on proper Sharigan mastery. Using it is easy but like all bloodlines mastering the thing is very difficult to pull off. Besides, these notes will be a good review for yourself as well! Even dead you will prove yourself helpful to your sister!

    You give a sad chuckle at that. Of course if she finds this, you hope it's with you still alive. It's the far more preferable outcome than the alternative.

    You think of your family. Your friends. Along with the village and the clan. You think of everything important to you. And send out a mental prayer that your plan will work.

    There are no certainties in life. You found this out well and early in life. So you know things might never turn out like you expect them to. For all you know, the clan may chicken out of rebelling tomorrow!

    ...heh. As if it was only that simple. You let out a depressed sigh. You don't like such somber, dark moods. You wish you had someone here to lighten things up a bit. But you intentionally chose this time to be able to focus.

    If you have time between acting as a spy and plotting how to prevent a rebellion, maybe you can take Rin out around Leaf and show her some cool places to see. So she can see the beauty of the village and the good hiding spots if the worse comes to worst.

    Before you realize it you realize that you finished writing your notes. And after a short while you finish the seal as well.

    After seeing everything done and hiding the small box in a hard to find location, you sigh. Maybe you should spend some time with Rin to cheer up a bit? Maybe help a bit with her Taijutsu.

    There we go.
     
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    • Does Rin's mother aware of Mito Uzumaki and Uzumaki Mask Temple? Kushina was successor of Mito so it is so surprising that Rin's mother not aware of her. Maybe she knew her but unaware that Naruto is her child, i mean she is not a sensor, and Naruto does not look like a typical Uzumaki.
     
    Patch said:
    No. Not even slightly.
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    A crow flew into his mouth.
    SouvikKundu said:
    Does Rin's mother aware of Mito Uzumaki and Uzumaki Mask Temple? Kushina was successor of Mito so it is so surprising that Rin's mother not aware of her. Maybe she knew her but unaware that Naruto is her child, i mean she is not a sensor, and Naruto does not look like a typical Uzumaki.
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    What do you mean? She is a sensor. She might not have Mind's Eye of the Kagura but she's still a genuine sensor.
     
    SouvikKundu said:
    Does Rin's mother aware of Mito Uzumaki and Uzumaki Mask Temple? Kushina was successor of Mito so it is so surprising that Rin's mother not aware of her. Maybe she knew her but unaware that Naruto is her child, i mean she is not a sensor, and Naruto does not look like a typical Uzumaki.
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    She hasn't ever met Naruto, and the Sandaime fed her some story about Kushina's child being dead.

    As for the Uzumaki Mask Temple, it hasn't been maintained since before Kushina's death.
     
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    AoMythology said:
    She hasn't ever met Naruto, and the Sandaime fed her some story about Kushina's child being dead.
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    It's unfortunate but it makes sense. Minato made too many enemies. The fact he doesn't look like an Uzumaki is a blessing for him in disguise. Would make people think he's just some random orphan that got the name. It's a good way to protect. Even if it is horrible.
     
    DarkKing98 said:
    Hey guys. Any idea for an Omake?
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    Good ideas? Not really. Although Rin is an elemental chakra user, she should have a ninjitsu for each element she can mold. Maybe show her practicing a low level version of each type? I feel like that was missing from the last update. Something as simple as calling a little of each element to her fingertips, and practicing summoning an element in each hand, to show that she didn't ignore the ability to mold lightning and fire for 9 months when she's a genius at it.

    Alternately, for something more character driven, Naruto and Rin painting the Hokage monument together, Naruto with graffiti and Rin going for realism. Or Naruto doing pranks and Rin scolding him for it.
     
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    What about (re-)inventing the Earth and Water Clone on her own (or with a bit of help from Mama), considering she was having difficulty with the normal Clone jutsu?
     
    Pranking With Naruto (Semi-canon?)
  • Sidestory
    • What Rin was doing was stupid, petty and spiteful.

    She wasn't sure how Naruto talked her into it.

    "And, done!" Naruto shouted.

    "Cool, pass the yellow paint, I need it for Minato's hair," Rin replied.

    Naruto didn't respond. "Naruto?" Rin asked.

    Rin jumped to the top of the monument and looked around. Naruto wasn't anywhere to be found.

    But there was a ninja that looked completely unimpressed with Rin chewing on a senbon needle. Busted.

    "Been busy, kid?" the man said, nonplussed.

    Rin did the most ninja thing she could think of. "Ultimate super-attack-no-jutsu, she shouted, making a dozen complex hand signs as the other ninja took a ready stance. Jokes on him! She had already replaced herself with a log and jumped off the monument on the second handsign!

    Oh wow, there were a lot of annoyed looking ninja at the bottom of the cliff.

    Think, think... "Smoke!" Rin shouted with a tremendous exhale of breath, blinding everyone below. Then as she touched the ground, she used a quick transformation to look like the senbon guy at the top of the cliff.

    As the mist cleared and the ninja glanced around, shouting "Where did she go" and other such things, Tohsaka shouted out, "check the nearby shops, she has to still be near!"

    Various low-level ninja ran too and fro and she looked upon her work.

    While she had captured the 4th Hokage's appearance almost perfectly as he would have appeared if he was a woman, Naruto went with much more crude grafitti, smacking spirals over the other 3 faces and other such nonsense doodles.

    Damn that Naruto abandoning her. She would need to get revenge on him later. Habanero in his ramen ought to do it.

    She felt a hand on her shoulder, turned to look behind her, and saw senbon chewing guy again, still looking completely unimpressed. The guy she was currently disguised as.

    Busted.

    Naruto was so in for it later, the traitor.

    ******

    Someone else can do the clone omake if they want. This was more fun.
     
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    • AoMythology said:
    The hard cap in Speed will be resolved through the Sasuke social link. :p

    Oh, the Fourth Hokage was like Shisui, but even faster (mainly because he died at 24, not 18), so no 'best in history'; the Second Hokage ties with Shisui for the same reasons.
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    This goes to show how incredibly dumb Danzo was for egging on the in retrospect entirely justified Uchiha rebellion in the first place. The man deprived the village of two S class shinobi that would be near or at "flee on sight" level for nothing but minor political gains. He left the village in a state of incredible weakness for foolish reasons.
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    It's unfortunate but it makes sense. Minato made too many enemies. The fact he doesn't look like an Uzumaki is a blessing for him in disguise. Would make people think he's just some random orphan that got the name. It's a good way to protect. Even if it is horrible.
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    How Naruto was raised was incredibly stupid. The Third's carelessness allowed an immensely talented ninja's talent go untapped until he happened to awaken as a shounen protagonist. There are plenty of other ways Naruto could have been raised, but the third somehow thought it was a great idea to have Naruto raised as an orphan while telling the village that he was the Kyuubi's jinchuriki. That was a recipe for utter disaster that still left him a high value target to other villages.

    Incidentally if we get that social link up the massacre is going to be rough on Naruto. Kid finally meets some actual relatives of his and then boom, they're brutally slaughtered. Rin is presumably going to be spared, but she's going to be traumatized by it just like Sasuke.
     
    Zefferen said:
    This goes to show how incredibly dumb Danzo was for egging on the in retrospect entirely justified Uchiha rebellion in the first place.
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    The fuck are you going on about? What part of their offended over inflated ego driven rebellion was justified? And how did Danzo egg on the rebellion? I know the 'blame Danzo for everything' meme is funny but this serious use of it is baffling.
    Zefferen said:
    How Naruto was raised was incredibly stupid. The Third's carelessness allowed an immensely talented ninja's talent go untapped until he happened to awaken as a shounen protagonist. There are plenty of other ways Naruto could have been raised, but the third somehow thought it was a great idea to have Naruto raised as an orphan while telling the village that he was the Kyuubi's jinchuriki. That was a recipe for utter disaster that still left him a high value target to other villages.
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    Ok, first of all? What 'safe' way was there exactly? The Elemental Nations are based off of Japan at least partially. Do ya know what Naruto would have done to their reputation?

    Also, only complete dumbasses kidnap jinchuriki. No village would ever do that because they'd know the other four would instantly declare war on them for taking them.
    VoidZero said:
    Who want massive produced self destruct drone? :V If we can get some fire into water clone, then steam explosion is at Rin's finger tip.
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    Let me explain to you this clearly.

    WE. CANNOT. REPLICATE. BIJUU OR BLOODLINE. RELEASES!

    Why do people keep insisting we can?
     
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