The Clans of Earth (Battletech/Mechwarrior X Mass Effect)

The only reason I can see the Turian councillor getting away with 'Telling' the Primarch to do anything, is if it's immediately followed with 'Because otherwise the Asaria and Salarians are going to do x.', and even then, it'd be very shaky ground. From my understanding, it'd be like the US's President being told what to do by the representative sent to the UN security council.

Also surprised that Humanity is joining the council at all. I imagine they'd prefer to draw borders, or they're too scared that the council will realise the sheer population difference and just roll over them. After all, Humans like Quarians have a very big stick in the form of their fleet being a larger massing of power in any one place than anyone else bothers. But Like the Quarian's their population is in the Millions, while the Council Races number in the Trillions
 
The only reason I can see the Turian councillor getting away with 'Telling' the Primarch to do anything, is if it's immediately followed with 'Because otherwise the Asaria and Salarians are going to do x.', and even then, it'd be very shaky ground. From my understanding, it'd be like the US's President being told what to do by the representative sent to the UN security council.

Also surprised that Humanity is joining the council at all. I imagine they'd prefer to draw borders, or they're too scared that the council will realise the sheer population difference and just roll over them. After all, Humans like Quarians have a very big stick in the form of their fleet being a larger massing of power in any one place than anyone else bothers. But Like the Quarian's their population is in the Millions, while the Council Races number in the Trillions

The Star Leagues population has been doubling every 10 years for several centuries now, they're way past millions :p

As for why, the reason there is simpler. They are still convinced that whatever killed the Protheans is still out there, and working with the council is the best way to get people in places to watch for it. (But also note it's conditional, as I noted in the chapter the Star League has refused to bind their economy etc to that of the council races.

Ironically. The Treaties we know of are not hard for the Star League to agree to, their battleships don't qualify for ME Dreadnought status and the Council Conventions are actually super damned close to the Ares Conventions.
 
The only reason I can see the Turian councillor getting away with 'Telling' the Primarch to do anything, is if it's immediately followed with 'Because otherwise the Asaria and Salarians are going to do x.', and even then, it'd be very shaky ground. From my understanding, it'd be like the US's President being told what to do by the representative sent to the UN security council.
It's more like the EU telling Britain to fix their mess after they've right and fecked something up.

Before Britain Brleft that is.
 
So we're stuck between Anhur, Chevalier and Packrat. The middle fit the role of Mako Replacement, while the other two can carry Elemental ( the Packrat will be with Post Refit), meaning we have a close call on these.

On topic of Heat Management, maybe create whole new tech offense purpose, like the Heat Vent, using Mass Effect to stream the excess heat out in certain direction like a makeshift Flamer, except instead of raising vehicle/mech heat, they drop vehicle heat drastically. And Heat Vent can be pull trigger when heat when over 20, venting 12 heat per turn, deal damage equal to L-BX 10 but have at max, 2 hex range, and can actually vent heat while other weapon system, jumpjet or other heat generating activities occur. It's either occupied one weapon slot or heat sink slot, as a free roll. Heat Vent have minus 1 damage but plus 2 range in zero atmosphere.
 
Chapter 14; Skyllian Fuckup of Epic Proportions
Chapter 14;
Skyllian Fuckup of Epic Proportions

Elysium
3040 (2176)

The Batarian Hegemony had become a growing threat to the Star League and the Clans Martial had been holding their own conferences on what that would mean going forwards, the fact was at this stage it meant very little. In high orbit the SLS Agincourt held its position the Corone class destroyer held nothing on her docking collars, the four dropships it had carried on the surface of Elysium. The Clan Wolverine vessel was on shore leave.

Navigator Pressly frowned at his screens as he yawned, he was not particularly tired, merely bored. Right now however he was also watching some of the sensor displays as the officer who had been in charge of those ones had to go and relieve herself. He stood suddenly and moved over to the sensor operators console itself, grabbing the microphone. "All hands. Battlestations." The intercom buzzed half a second later.

"SitRep." The abbreviated command left no room for argument.

"FTL Arrival Wake. Fleet in the thousand or more." Pressly explained as he waited.

"Speak to the Comms Officer. I want to know if we received anything from the relay." The Captain ordered, "I am on my way. Have that information for me, quiaff?"

"Aff." Pressly marched across the deck to the comms officer. "Have our people at the relay reported this incoming fleet?"

"Neg." The man answer. "We have not received anything in twelve hours." That would not be particularly unusual, the relays were fairly often further apart than a standard HPG could reach. But it was particularly ominous now. Either the standard courier wasn't due yet, or they were ambushed. The sight of the Captain emerging onto the bridge brought Pressly around, the sensor operator having run back to her station before he could get back.

"Captain, we have had no contact with relay in twelve hours." He quickly grabbed a datapad the sensor officer held out quickly for him, he mentally noted that he would have to thank her swift action, "Thousand plus probable combatants, several classed by Citadel standards in Cruiser class, majority are smaller."

The Captain nodded and moved over to the comms station. Picking up the handset and nodding to the officer. "This is Captain Kahoku to Garrison Actual." There was a pause as he waited for the Garrison commander to pick up. The use of physical handsets was a quirk that the Star League had maintained for privacy. "Prepare for combat readiness." Those four words sounded innocuous, if ready. But what they were was anything but.

"Seven minutes to contact." Pressly said plainly.

---

Abtakha Vivek felt the modified bodysuit he was wearing keenly as he climbed up into the modified Elemental Battle Armor. He had been bondsman to the Clans Martial for years before being adopted by Clan Wolvering as a warrior, an abtakha. And now he served under a Star Commander Shepard. The shore leave that he had actually been working to enjoy was ill advised it turned out as the order came down to prepare for battle. He called on the data available on his omnitool, one of the technical innovations the Star League had largely adopted.

There was almost nothing known except that a thousand or more ships were coming hard and fast. That was bad, "Star Commander Shepard?"

"Vivek?" Shepard answered turning to face him. They were already fully mounted in their own battle armour, experimental Salamander powered armour, thanks to their connections with the Council the Clans Martial had invested more heavily in their Battle armor programs than they would have.

He gathered his thoughts. "There has been no word of declarations of war, I believe that this may be a result of the tensions with the Batarians, for this number of ships I would estimate this is probably pirates, slavers."

The Commander turned to study the other members of his Star. "We have an incoming probable assault by the slaving dezgra of the terminus systems. With the volume of ships incoming it is unlikely the planetary garrison and SLS Agincourt will be sufficient to carry the day. Little did the people of Elysium know that we would be here to save the day." He began heading for the door which began to roll open ahead of them. "Warriors of Clan Wolverine, if our honoured abtakha is correct these are honourless dezgra. Spare none who resist you."

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"Come about. All fighters to launch and choose your targets. Gunnery." Captain Kahoku said as he saw the incoming fleet. It was comprised of little more than rubbish, light corvettes, modified transports, raiders, a handful of pirated cruisers. "Fire at will." The hull began to shake as the officers in control of the weapons of the ship did just that, the naval lasers and light PPCs began to blaze their light out into the precipitous midnight filled with the stars of alien ship drives.

Followed by the blaze of light from those so struck when their existence failed to be. And then the range closed even further, the ER large lasers and ER PPCs joining the fray, there was no shaking of the hull that would signify that the naval autocannons had joined the battle. They would come to life when the enemy cruiser scale vessels made their runs, a status that would happen all too soon. Even now smaller ships and raiders were ignoring the Agincourt and burning towards and into the atmosphere.

"Send warning through the mass relay buoys." Kahoku finally ordered, not trusting in random chance to save his bacon here.

---

The skies were on fire, for every ship the Agincourt was spilling into the void of space, eight or nine were breaking through. Shepard looked up into the skies as he moved into the town hall. Surging through into the main hall where nearly a thousand people were gathered the footsteps of his battle armour rang out against the marble flooring. He keyed his own comm system and gave the order to connect to the radio communications for the city.

"I am Star Commander Shepard. Descending upon us are the dezgra of alien species. Slavers. Pirates. People who talk in cinemas. They descend even now as the valiant Agincourt burns them from our skies. As the two binaries of her fighters ply the blackened night to bring low the vile scum who come to receive a higher education on what it is to call upon the wroth of the Star League." Shepard turned his torso so it looked like he was turning to face each of those present, "Not the Clans Martial. The Star League. You are not defenceless children. You have been raised with the spectre of those who slew the Protheans returning one day. You have been shown how to engage in combat to defend yourselves. I have just authorised the opening of the city armoury."

There was the sound as every adult rose to their feet. Shepard looked over them with a grim expression, hidden by his armour. "Go to the Armoury. Don a suit a Nighthawk Armour. Take a Mauser 960-II. And kill them all."
 
Be a real shame if any one of the people on that planet had had comprehensive military training and the equipment stockpile to use it. A real shame, I'm telling you.
 
There was the sound as every adult rose to their feet. Shepard looked over them with a grim expression, hidden by his armour. "Go to the Armoury. Don a suit a Nighthawk Armour. Take a Mauser 960-II. And kill them all."

The only problem I have is that this should have been done the moment they knew a thousand ships were coming in. This is years later they know the citadel by now and it's races, they know the citadel wouldn't do this, and if they did they'd declare war. So of course it's the four eye slavers, the moment they had a ship count a distress call should have been sent out and the armory open.

Other then that it's good, I just think you need the alter the order of events, in combat second matter and it comes across that it took them minutes to open the armory and send out a distress call.
 
The only problem I have is that this should have been done the moment they knew a thousand ships were coming in. This is years later they know the citadel by now and it's races, they know the citadel wouldn't do this, and if they did they'd declare war. So of course it's the four eye slavers, the moment they had a ship count a distress call should have been sent out and the armory open.

Other then that it's good, I just think you need the alter the order of events, in combat second matter and it comes across that it took them minutes to open the armory and send out a distress call.

Nah, that's a product of the timing in the post, Shepard moved over and opened the arsenal as soon as he was notified there was an attack incoming and he had entered his Elemental suit. We're talking 3-4 minutes tops.
 
So I wonder what kind of Boss Music the Batidiots are starting to hear?
 
Chapter 15; Blood of Elysium
Chapter 15;
Blood of Elysium

Elysium
3040 (2176)

The blitz had been an error from the moment they arrived in the system with the human world. The mad Turian bastard who had proposed this idiotic plan would have a lot to say for it if Eluam Ran'perah had anything to do with it. His Frigate was now on the ground, its main drives damaged, and crew of skilled slavers already disbarking and entering the colony of Elysium. But the resistance they were facing was already far above what that fucking idiot Haliat claimed that they would have to face.

Elysium was newish. Elysium was far from the heart of the Star League. Elysium did not rate the Clans Militant patrolling it.

The first and second might have been true. The last was so utterly wrong that... FUCK FUCK FUCK! Eluam dived behind a thick concrete divider. People moved in the distance and bolts of light burned molten holes through the concrete divider he and others were sheltered behind. He looked around... all four eyes locked on a structure that looked more hardened than the rest.

"Go! There!" He pointed and ran for the doorway, firing a grenade from his launcher that blasted the door open, he surged through into.. a nightmare. Row upon row of tanks. Glass tanks full of growing children... fear filled his very soul as he looked on at the Star League's growing babies, babies grow...

He fired his grenade launcher once. Twice. More. He fired it until nothing remained in its magazine. As his people came in behind him, they looked on with horror at the scene. One of them showed a few more braincells than average. "What have you done boss?"

"Get moving. Get moving!" He said charging through a door opposite, searching for something that he wasn't sure they would be able to find, and they found themselves in another chamber full of babies in growth tubes. But something darkened the corridor ahead. A child, couldn't have been more than ten or twelve.

"NYAH NYAH, NYAH NYAH, YOU CAN NOT CATCH ME!" The kid shouted and ran. The kid was freakishly muscled and he was not going to be outdone by some little tank-grown shit.

"After him!" He shouted and surged after the kid with his men in tow, some had switched out their guns for net rifles and stun guns. He ran through the corridor after the fucking leggy little shit, a real sprinter and.... he stumbled to a halt. The corridor was long. Like too long.

"THIS IS FOR THE SIBKO YOU JUST MURDERED FOUR EYES!" The kid shouted back. And Eluam's balls rose clean back into his body and made their way into his throat as half a dozen of the human freaks appeared at the end of the too long corridor... with a pair of crew-served weapons. He didn't even feel the first dozen bullets from the support machinegun ripping through his torso. His head had already turned into vapour from the support laser the other team had fired first.

---

Another ship fell from the skies as five of the enemy walkers moved in and opened fire with pulse lasers and mass salvos of missiles from shoulder racks, or even more exotic weapons. Haliat cursed his ambition for a moment as he debated pulling his ship up another fifty thousand feet. They had gotten past the enemy ship which continued to bring down anything coming too near, and the fighter craft it had launched were now crashing down into the atmosphere to make strafing runs. "How many slaves have we managed to take so far?" He asked his officer in charge of managing the ground battle.

"Uhm."

"Is that a human number I am unfamiliar with?" The Turian pirate asked with deep sarcasm.

The Batarian pirate looked distinctly uncomfortable and Haliat turned to face him, frowning. "Are you telling me that we don't have any confirmed slaves taken?"

The lack of answer for a few moments was in and of itself an answer. And one Haliat really didn't like. "NOTHING. WE HAVE TAKEN NOTHING!?"

"Well.. uhm... I'm not the one who needs to take them boss, I'm just reporting what they are and... well, people are just not reporting back." Came the honest and frank appraisal.

"Get the fuck out of my way." Haliat said as he moved to examine the console closely. "This is Haliat. Report on produce taken." For five minutes he listened to garbled reports of demons of fire and smoke moving through. Lead by a giant in black and red with the elements themselves with him.

---

Vivek leapt, the jump jets of his armour hurtling him towards the Batarians who had formed a fortified position, they had managed to round up a group of prisoners and herd them into cages. They were a sibko of younger children, five or six, and they had fought hard with the weapons they had, but they were still just children. Landing on the high ground he levelled and fired the small laser in his armours right arm burning down one pirate with a missile launcher. A Mars Combat vehicle had rolled into the square and levelled its weapons. "This is Abtahka Vivek to Mars in Kerensky Square. Hold fire. Enemy strongpoint as captive Sibko."

"Holding Abtahka." Came the response as a pair of missiles flared out from the encampment towards the tank. More jets flared and looking up Vivek followed. Shepard wasn't taking chances. He had targeted a place around the cages. The kids heard the jumpjets and crashed to the floor of the cages, trying to shelter themselves. As he crashed into the ground crushing a pirate beneath his armour he saw that Shepard had crashed down even closer and had grabbed one of the slavers with one battle claw before opening up with the flamer attached to that arm, the Pirates panicked, fleeing from within the enclosure as the Star Commander began bathing the defences in fire. As the pirates began to flee from their emplacement, fleeing towards their ships they found themselves cut off as more and more people appeared on the streets, hard to see in the stealth effects of the Nighthawk powered armour.

Hard to see for a moment. Then the laser weapons illuminated them just fine for the four seconds the Pirates lasted long enough to see them.

---

Ships were aborting their run to land on the planet. Too many had been destroyed by the enemy vessel above, and now fighter strikes and mech assaults from below were cutting the chaff from the air, only the few modified military ships were surviving the onslaught, and the volume of laser fire was putting even their survival in doubt. How had he misjudged them so badly? He knew that by now, two ships had lifted with a couple hundred prisoners so far, none from the so called Clans Martial. Scientists, farmers, common peoples, and even they had put up a terrible fight, meaning most of the produce was also injured as well, some of it gravely so.

"Withdraw from Elysium. I want everyone to fall back to secure point Alpha." He was referring to the jump point leading to Torfan, where he had used the planet as a staging point.

The nose of his frigate began to climb and he felt the drives coming to life for maximum acceleration. "Are our people back on board?" He asked. They had only deployed a few shuttles with teams to try and steal technology under the cover of the slavers doing their job.

"Two returned. We lost contact with the other two." Came the automatic response. "Two and three were the ones to make it back, waiting on the Quartermaster to reveal what they managed to steal."

"We'll determine that later, focus on the withdrawal."
 
Now the only question I have is if this will rise to the level of Trial of Annihilation or not
Cut the difference.

Trial of Reaving

#1 Any Batarian guilty of currently being a slave owner when confronted by Clan forces?
Dies. Full Stop. They have been 'Reaved'/'Culled' from any honorable Batarian bloodline(s).

#2 Any Batarian found to have killed slaves rather than free them? Dies Horribly. Full Stop.

#3 Any Batarian slave owner whom frees their slaves immediately, so long as #2 wasn't violated first, gets to have amnesty, if are stuck on a watch list.

#4 Anyone else, lives, unless unlucky enough to take a lethal hit while defending the slavers. This last group at least were only following orders, and - technically - it's not their fault their leaders were scum.

And, to be brutally honest, that's actually a NICER outcome than what actually happened to numerous groups in the canonical Wars of Reaving. As in, Clan Blood Spirit was 100% genocided, no matter the caste, civilian & warrior all, down to the last child. Same for the Steel Vipers except one population group, which was then summarily chemically sterilized without exception, again, no matter the caste, nor age.

So the above isn't ITG.

It's actually, potentially, the Clans SOFTBALLING their response...
 
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