The Centipede's Dilemma [Exalted Kung Fu Quest]

I'm not sure what you mean?
I am jumping to conclusions basically. I assumed that if she worked directly for a powerful divine being they would have fixed her legs for her.

But that assumes much. Like That there is nothing magical preventing her legs from being fixed. Or even worse for Creation something bureaucratic.

Or like that one of them isn't responsible for her current state. Or that she wasn't directed to the hounds by them.
 
I like her as is atm plus I don't see a lot of Eclipse solar quests, sheet or not I like how this is written so far and I wait for more.
 
Clearly, what you're doing wrong here is that you're trying to write Golden Road as a person instead of a character sheet. That's a big mistake. How is your protagonist supposed to become a proper stealth archer if she's too busy having human weaknesses?

You are thinking too small. @Omicron will understand what I am about to say: only an adherent of the Tao of Not Being There is a proper Solar Quest character.
 
I think in a lot of ways the discussion is missing the point. This story is the story of how Golden Road is fixing her legs. The method she has chosen is by getting artifact boots that will act as prosthetics (if I understand the implications so far).
 
[X] Sorrow. Why does it never stop hurting - that moment when your time among mortals come at an end, and your Exalted status changes forever how they see you?
[X] Hope. For now the people see that Heaven has not forsaken them, but sent its Chosen among them to right the wrongs that were done.
 
I wouldn't even say this story is about fixing her legs. This story seems to me to be about how she walks her path as a minor divinity of some sort (I don't know Exalt). The first step on that path is learning to walk again, but before even that, she needs to learn to stand again. The Hounds and this town is the beginning of her path.
 
The notion you can find (Solar?) sorcerer in a wide, wide world of Creation easily is... questionable, honestly.

Not to say you can't, but it'll be a plot on its own. Maybe even a whole scenario.
 
The notion you can find (Solar?) sorcerer in a wide, wide world of Creation easily is... questionable, honestly.

Not to say you can't, but it'll be a plot on its own. Maybe even a whole scenario.
Finding a terrestrial circle sorcerer is pretty easy, though getting a favor would probably still be a quest.

Celestial circle is either very difficult or quite easy, depending on how accessible sidereals are to you. If you can't get sidereal assistance, you have to try finding a lunar or solaroid, which is pretty difficult. Or you could bargain with Mara, or another powerful demon. Either way, getting their help will be at least as difficult as with the emerald circle.

I would be shocked if there were more than a couple Solar circle sorcerers, and not at all surprised if there were none, in all of Creation. Becoming one might actually be easier than finding one, and that is not easy.
 
Finding a terrestrial circle sorcerer is pretty easy, though getting a favor would probably still be a quest.

Celestial circle is either very difficult or quite easy, depending on how accessible sidereals are to you. If you can't get sidereal assistance, you have to try finding a lunar or solaroid, which is pretty difficult. Or you could bargain with Mara, or another powerful demon. Either way, getting their help will be at least as difficult as with the emerald circle.

I would be shocked if there were more than a couple Solar circle sorcerers, and not at all surprised if there were none, in all of Creation. Becoming one might actually be easier than finding one, and that is not easy.
3E describes there being only "a handful" of Celestial Circle sorcerers on Creation -- it likes to make magic a bit less ubiquitous in the Age of Sorrows in general than the last edition. You can argue that Sidereals are exempt from that, not being based on Creation, but the spirit of it feels like "only a minority of Celestial Exalts ever achieve this", with Celestial Exalts being a group that numbers under 1000 at the best of times.
 
3E describes there being only "a handful" of Celestial Circle sorcerers on Creation -- it likes to make magic a bit less ubiquitous in the Age of Sorrows in general than the last edition. You can argue that Sidereals are exempt from that, not being based on Creation, but the spirit of it feels like "only a minority of Celestial Exalts ever achieve this", with Celestial Exalts being a group that numbers under 1000 at the best of times.
It's not that there's all that many celestial circle sidereals. It's that there are some.

And sidereals form an actual community of sorts. Pretty much any sidereal can at least get you in contact with one.
 
It's not that there's all that many celestial circle sidereals. It's that there are some.

And sidereals form an actual community of sorts. Pretty much any sidereal can at least get you in contact with one.
Thing is while that sidereal knows someone who can help you. That specific sidereal may just say no flat out. And it's pretty damn hard to get a sidereal friend like that.
 
Thing is while that sidereal knows someone who can help you. That specific sidereal may just say no flat out. And it's pretty damn hard to get a sidereal friend like that.
Yes.
depending on how accessible sidereals are to you
Either way, getting their help will be at least as difficult as with the emerald circle.
That was specifically finding them. Getting their help is a separate thing.
 
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the real problem is that sidereals are the kind of assholes who go "I could fix your legs... or I could use this as a teachable moment to send you on a path of self-discovery and a deepened understanding of the martial arts!"

what i am saying is that a sidereal helping road could be literally indistinguishable from the plot of this quest
 
It's not that there's all that many celestial circle sidereals. It's that there are some.

And sidereals form an actual community of sorts. Pretty much any sidereal can at least get you in contact with one.
Get you in contact with one who:

- Is a Celestial Circle sorcerer

- Is not part of the biggest chunk of Sidereals, who outright endorse killing Solars before they break anything too important as a matter of policy

- Is available or owes them enough of a favour to carve time out of their own agendas and projects to help out

- Is willing to do this for you got for a price you want to pay

This is all pretty academic, of course, since modifying a body to replace limbs is probably still Terrestrial Circle. It doesn't fuck around with the rules of reality that much.
 
Get you in contact with one who:

- Is a Celestial Circle sorcerer

- Is not part of the biggest chunk of Sidereals, who outright endorse killing Solars before they break anything too important as a matter of policy

- Is available or owes them enough of a favour to carve time out of their own agendas and projects to help out

- Is willing to do this for you got for a price you want to pay

This is all pretty academic, of course, since modifying a body to replace limbs is probably still Terrestrial Circle. It doesn't fuck around with the rules of reality that much.
I'd argue there's meaningful overlap between the last two, but yes. I also wasn't assuming this was for a Solar - it was a general-purpose thing. An Exigent or Lunar or something could have less trouble with the second. The "very easy" end of the spectrum was mostly meant for other sidereals, or people who've already formed a close association with some. And while they aren't common even among sidereals, I'd still be surprised if there weren't a couple in the gold faction alone.

And yes, I'm pretty sure it's academic.
 
Get you in contact with one who:

- Is a Celestial Circle sorcerer

- Is not part of the biggest chunk of Sidereals, who outright endorse killing Solars before they break anything too important as a matter of policy

- Is available or owes them enough of a favour to carve time out of their own agendas and projects to help out

- Is willing to do this for you got for a price you want to pay

This is all pretty academic, of course, since modifying a body to replace limbs is probably still Terrestrial Circle. It doesn't fuck around with the rules of reality that much.
"So your saying a long self fulfilling journey that takes multiple years for each of these options, sounds correct to me!" - Sidereal
 
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I think if you have formed close association with Sidereal, you already solved half the battle :V

The thing is, I'm pretty sure it'll be completely IC for that Sidereal to, indeed, send us on our journey to discover new legs (and friendship!)
 
I would note that for an exalt, having lost your legs below the knees is crippling but not THAT crippling. Because as had just been demonstrated, the main hurt lies in quality of life, not so much practical issues.
Road had indeed been looking to fix it...which we're right here, looking at a prosthetic artifact which is likely to both fix it and add additional powers.
 
[X] Shame. You who have been chosen by the gods only to fail them, how dare you now stand wearing their mantle?

[X] Peace. For now the people see that the world was out of balance and had to be restored; justice comes after the crime; fate abides as fate must.
 
[X] Shame. You who have been chosen by the gods only to fail them, how dare you now stand wearing their mantle?
[X] Hope. For now the people see that Heaven has not forsaken them, but sent its Chosen among them to right the wrongs that were done.
 
Man it took me a bit 'cause, idk, apparently the world is breaking down in general and life likes giving it raw but these two updates genuinely go down easy. I really do love your prose @Omicron, it's wonderfully flavorful and deeply engrossing while also being- frank? Frank might be the word. "Draws you in" is often the turn of phrase that's used and not incorrectly, but here it does feel very much like the reader is just...sitting on the edge of that well y'know? Watching as the village turns around the sorta central spoke of it all, this little fight on the frontiers of "civilized" Creation with honestly pretty low stakes, involving all of, like, maybe a hundred people or so. And yet it feels engaging and important for all of that.

Not world shaking nah, but meaningful.

You dream.

In your dreams you have legs of flesh and blood.

In your dreams you always walk.

You walk down the streets of Prasad behind a child of the Dragon; the people scatter flowers in his path and you tread upon them.

You walk the path that snakes along the cliff, each step risking a deadly fall, the monastery in the distance.

You walk the paved road to a great city whose marble spires have long been stained with soot, a beautiful jewel rotten from within by crime and corruption.

You walk the blood-slick stairs amidst the bodies of the fallen guards as the prince atop them looks down with fury in his eyes and draws his sword.

You walk the wind-swept hill, towards the figure of your master, their back turned to you, hair blowing, hands dripping red, ever out of your reach…



The goddess named Hounds-the-Rain-and-Brings-the-Harvest opens her cavernous maw and howls. The sound alone makes your mind go blank, stars filling your eyes; you clasp your hands on your ears and the blast of her breath knocks you down, sliding through the water; you land on your back and for a second you are drowning. Then the water parts, the rice bends away from you, and as you rub dirt and liquid from your eyes you see the field fold, the tide turn into a whirlwind in the air, at the heart of which is the blazing hound.

"Nashai gives me honor!" she speaks, her voice tearing through the tinitus; you cry out in pain. She stomps the naked earth with one paw and it cracks ten feet out. "She gives me prayers and burns offerings in my name! Once, the rice of my field was given to the mountainfolk, to be offered to their repugnant goat-god! Now it feeds those who worship me!"

You struggle to stand, and realize that your legs are gone. You are but yourself again. All you can do is push yourself up, knees underneath you, supporting yourself on one hand. You breathe harshly, quickly, heart beating too fast.

You cannot spurn the gods. But what kind of faithful would you be, if you did not speak truth when they are blind?
The morning is spent in preparations, which you are not allowed to take part in - this time, thankfully, because you are an outsider rather than because of your legs. You sit on the well as you usually do, watching the people of Embercairn go about. They drag tables out of their homes and set them in a square missing one side in the central plaza, with the well at its center and a heap of wood and kindling. Benches are set before the tables on the outer side, so that none have the fire at their back; and smaller fire are lit in each home as the people prepare food enough to feed everyone. They all fast this morning, preparing for the feast at noon; it is meant to go through the whole day, until sunset when the bonfire will be lit, and the dances will begin.

It is a simple celebration, one you have seen many a time before. But to see people united in such a task, working with each other, laughing and chatting and shouting, brings warmth to your heart. You missed this from your days as a magistrate. You feel almost like you could belong.

The children are downright gleeful, of course. They are not to take part in the feast proper; they will be fed before it starts, and then allowed to roam free for the entire day, without chores or supervision, until the bonfire when they will be called for their second meal. An entire day of freedom often leads to wild games and adventures in the mountains, you are told, and smile each time one of them delays their antics to come greet you, wish you good health, and ask if you will be telling stories today.

"Perhaps tonight, little one," you say, rubbing a boy's head and sending him off to play with his friends.

Only one dares to ask about the mark on your brow. You think for a moment before saying…

"It marks a stillborn wish." You smile sadly as the child stares uncomprehending, then shrugs and leaves.

All the way to noon, the people give their thanks and their offerings. Straw dolls and wooden cut-outs in the shape of dogs, jars of rice-wine, honey-cakes, prayer strips, and all other sorts of things: they are carefully arrayed on the bonfire, so that they may burn together and send the village's prayers to its goddess. Each villager whispers a prayer as they put down their offerings before stepping away.

I actually...it's understated but I Really Genuinely Like This Bit, these bits even. A lot of the times in Creation (and I can't remember if I typed this out here, in discord, or in DM's with someone else and tbh I might have done all three, who knows, 2020 time distortion is smearing my memories together) the relationship with the divine is presented ssssuuuuuuuuuuuuuuper cynically, with some low-to-high-key shades of early 'oughts enlightened atheism. All gods are just running some flavor of protection racket. They're Dilbert-esque bureaucrats at best (and I mean post-Scott Adams going full weird gigabrain Libertarian on Twitter Dilbert), at worst kinda just nakedly antagonistic or psychotically myopic, and faith in them, even sincere faith, is treated with a degree of contempt y'know? People who are well intentioned or personally genuine but are being incidentally deceived or are just flat out incorrect.

Golden Road's own dedication and devotion, the way she reflexively treats Hounds-the-Rain as having dignity and gravity if not necessarily rightousness threads the needle really well imo. Deftly finding that space between treating the gods as not-infallible and not-worthy-of-worship. She isn't just a person of importance, the duties she discharges and what she represents fundamentally are important; they're divine even if it's a lower-case d. And the importance that the ritual holds, not just for the goddess but for her devotees really underscores that.

And in general I just like the way it puts the "supernatural" (for want of a better word) right behind the skin of the world. Close enough that you can reach out and touch it if you know how or if you catch it's eye. It's always been one of my favorite parts of Exalted and it's sorta thrilling to see it done justice here.

There is a beast with a thousand legs that crawls under the earth. Where Creation bleeds, it drinks. Where the rot of the world-that-is-under-the-world seeps through to the surface, it roams. He is Ta-Sepa, the guardian of the dead: to him a thousand grieving families pray that he may protect the graves of their loved ones and soothe their hungry ghost.

Unnamed Lookshyan Daybreak Abyssal: "Sounds like a pussy."
Golden Road: "Well, you see Hungry Ghosts are Bad Actually-"
ULDA: "Sounds like F A K E N E W S."

...he's bad at this, you realize.

His commitment is absolute. His strength is concerning. His loyalty is unshakeable. But - he has no arguments other than to harp on about loyalty and honor. Abanya himself said he hoped for the Adder to take his terms to their master, and Shay refused out of hand while suggesting that agreeing would be betraying her - even though she has not been consulted at all in the first place.

Doubt seeps into the students' minds.

This is a great like-

It's a great kind of back and forth honestly, and it really showcases Golden Road's social strength which is, with other characters who are styled as having a lot of charisma and social awareness, not-uncommonly abstracted out to "character peeks at author's notes to deliver Cutting Insights" or lines that are tailored to be That Cool Quotable Thing (and are all-too-often kinda just awkward and self-important). A lot of Golden Road's skills were so low key that most of the readers (including me, honestly) didn't consciously realize how effective they were. And here in particular it's...it's not her Effortlessly Outmanuevering Shay. It's her getting a clear upper hand and then Shay, feeling ganged up on and panicked and angry and backed into a corner, does something that makes perfect reflexive sense but is also kind of stupid.

He just goes "fuck it", flips to his arrogant and aggressive default, and gives the whole situation that one last push it needs to go over the edge, while also delivering Golden Road a clear moral victory (that she follows up on with a pretty damning martial victory but, tbh, he couldn't have reasonably expected that one). The village and a large number of students are very clearly on the magistrate's side and while Nashai could have -and has- defused such situations before with some degree of efficacy, in the moment Shay didn't even realize what unforced error he was making.

You turn to the village. To Marrow, who watches you with wide eyes, everything he thought he knew about you suddenly thrown into disarray - or, rather, recontextualizing entirely. What does he think now? Will he fear you for what you are? Will he hate you for your lies? Will he fall on his knees in worship, preventing you from ever again treating him as a peer and a friend?

"You've been holding out on me, girl," he says.

The simplicity of the statement feels so incongruous, so contrary to your expectations, that all you can do is burst out laughing; the fit lasts several long seconds, your chest heaving with the release of tension and your halting breath, and when you are done laughing you must wipe a tear from your eyes.

god what a wholly unproblematic fave

[X] Sorrow. Why does it never stop hurting - that moment when your time among mortals come at an end, and your Exalted status changes forever how they see you?
[X] Hope. For now the people see that Heaven has not forsaken them, but sent its Chosen among them to right the wrongs that were done.

(oh yeah also Sleater-Kinney is a fuckin' bop i'm listening to it on a loop rn. it's some Good Shit.)
 
So I was unsure of what combination to vote for but I like the ......... duality of this choice.

[X] Sorrow. Why does it never stop hurting - that moment when your time among mortals come at an end, and your Exalted status changes forever how they see you?
[X] Hope. For now the people see that Heaven has not forsaken them, but sent its Chosen among them to right the wrongs that were done.
 
VII. Clashing Gold
VII. Clashing Gold


You feel it now. The spark lighting up in their eyes. The line it draws between you and them. They want to hope, but they are afraid. They do not know what you are - a savior? Or another petty tyrant like Nashai, come to rule their lives?

You open your mouth to try and say something, and the mountain behind you howls.

You turn on your heels, wide-eyed, and all the village stares as a gout of golden flame comes rolling down the road to the shrine, blows into a gust, and as it reaches the village it stumbles into the shape of a great hound, its gold fur weathered and stained with red.

You duck to the side, as do Marrow and several villagers, as the goddess of Embercairn comes smashing into the plates and benches left in the wake of Shay's kick. She slides in the dirt, landing curled up at the foot of the heap of kindling and offerings, and a pained whimper escapes her fangs.

The people of the village look on in horror, struck speechless. Then Abanya lets out a strangled cry, stumbling over himself in a rush, and falls to his knees at the hound's side.

"Goddess," he whispers, laying his hands on her flank, "goddess, no, it cannot be…"

You walk amongst the spilled grain and vegetables, the beer-stained dirt, until you stand over the goddess; her breath curls into steam from her narrow muzzle, and she seems so much smaller than she was in your dreams last night. There is a bloody rend in her side, but more than this, grey-tinged veins spread, spider-like, through her skin.

Venom.

A ruby eye opens halfway, staring at you.

"Your test," comes the hoarse voice of the goddess. "She… did not pass."

Her eye closes, her breath slowing, and the sight of it twists your gut. You knew this could happen, and yet to see it… Is this your fault?

Dozens of people flock to their divine patron, kneeling to the ground, head bowed, wailing, weeping. Distraught and horrified…

You do not know when your walking stick found its way back into your hand, but there it is, firm under your fingers, and you find that it is more than a crutch.

You stomp the ground with it, once, twice, three times, and each time it echoes more loudly, until the villagers are drawn from their sorrow to look at you again.

The night has come and stars stud the sky, but they do not see it. What they see is that the sun has come among them: that it stands here, on the small plaza of their small forgotten village, bringing its light and its warmth.

The moment when you are recognized for what you are and can no longer stand among the people as one of them is always painful. But it is also necessary. When this mantle was given unto you, it brought with it an extension of the responsibilities that were yours as a magistrate of Prasad.

It made them reach all the way to the four corners of Creation, and cover all of its people. You must exist as more than a woman, a martial artist, or a magistrate. You are the symbol of justice.

"Light the pyre," you say solemnly, "and burn your offerings in the name of she who hounds the rain and brings the harvest. Dedicate your prayers unto her. She is a goddess, beyond mortal death; these wounds shall heal, but it is by your faith that her strength shall be returned."

"You… know these things?" young Shuri says, frowning.

"She is right," Abanya says, standing up. "Gods do not die from such blows. But to think - to imagine that Nashai could do such a thing - not even that she would commit such transgression, but have the strength to strike down our guardian-"

"Fear not!"

You slam your stick on the ground and your anima ebbs, tendrils of light flicking around you, shedding a bright glow over the plaza.

"Do you see now why I have been sent among you? Though I came to this village looking for the Golden Hounds, my steps were surely guided by the will of Heaven! I am a chosen of the Sun, and he has bestowed upon me not only his strength, but eyes with which to see the inequity and corruption of this world - and the strength to smite it! How many chances has Nashai had to make things right? To cease acting as a petty tyrant? And yet, to the last, she has allowed hubris to guide her! Now she has committed sacrilege. Yes, indeed, she is the Steel-Fanged Adder - a viper in your midst, biting the hand that has fed her. Her own honor has been discarded on the altar of pride and power - and this is why I am here, with you, tonight. Justice will be served."

There it is. That spark you saw at first, which had guttered out at the sight of their wounded goddess, has been rekindled into a candle - and that candle can be made into a bonfire. They look up to you and see the coming dawn, four years of darkness chased by the light.

You are not the dawn. You are the eclipse. You can only exist within that darkness, within the shadow of evil. Your existence is defined in opposition to it - set right what has gone wrong. Protect the helpless. Punish the wicked. And move on - to the next shadow. To the next crime.

Wandering judge of this Age of Sorrows. Worshipper of Ruvia.

This is why your punishment was the greatest that could be. The loss of your legs was not the loss of your martial arts. It was the loss of your purpose. Your journey come at an end. A thousand wrongs across the world, going unavenged. A thousand crimes, festering in secret like gangrenous wounds under the skein of the world.

"Please," Abanya says, bowing his head deeply. "We place our faith in you, Chosen of the gods. We beg you-"

"Do not beg," you say. "This is my duty."

And they all stand. They all look at you.

And you turn away, towards the shrine and your enemies, and the bitter bringing of judgement...

...to find Marrow standing in your way.

"Nice speech," he says, "but I'm not letting you go up there alone."

You glower at him. "Marrow, you are a merchant."

"I've lived a rich life and learned many trades," he says with this weird fang-grin of his.

"This is my responsibility."

"You asked me to trust you," he says, the grin fading, his pupils narrowing to slits. "I did. Now I ask you to return the favor."

"I-" you start, and then you sigh and rub your temple, where the stem of the black rose pokes into your skin.

Perhaps you do not have to do this on your own. Even a wandering judge does not travel alone.

"Fine," you say with a resigned smile. "Consider yourself trusted, Marrow of the mysterious past."

"Like you have any leg to stand on when it comes to-"

And then he pauses, considers his figure of speech, and his quip turns into an awkward cough.

You can't help but laugh and pat his shoulder. "Let's go," you say, and kick off, dirt rising in clouds in the wake of your hard wooden feet beating the earth, Marrow's lengthy stride easily keeping up with yours.

After four days staring at that cairn, that tower of rough stone always looming in the distance, knowing your goal was there so close you could almost touch it, you are finally on your way. The flame of Essence fills your leg with strength and confidence, making your steps as sure as if you were whole, your own anima a warm mantle on your shoulders and a beacon for Marrow to follow. You race across a path of beaten earth between stuccoed houses and past them, up the steadily rising incline of the mountain, first across ochre stones and shrubbery and then between the flat platforms of rice paddies, greenery rising out of the water on all sides of you, the livelihood of the dozens of children who drank your stories like water.

You cannot fail them. You cannot allow whatever vengeance Nashai would unleash on the village for their perceived betrayal. They all depend on you.

"Road!" shouts your companion, but you have seen what he saw and slid to a halt, peg-legs driving two furrows in the ground.

Shay Grass-born stands before you, his posture relaxed but his eyes cold and focused, a segmented staff slung over his shoulders.

"So he wasn't delirious," he says, a thin smile drawing on his lips. "You really are Exalted."

If you've heard from your friend," you say coolly, "you know that you are no match for me. Stand aside."

"No…" The young man says thoughtfully. "No, I don't think I will. I have always dreamed of testing my skill against one of the Chosen."

"Such a test only ends one way," you answer, taking a step forward.

And finding Marrow's hand holding you back.

His eyes peer at Shay, inscrutable, his inhuman face showing no expression.

"You don't have time for him," he says. "Nashai could be claiming the Hounds even as we speak. Leave him to me."

Understanding dawns on you. "This was your goal to begin with, wasn't it?" you ask. "It's why you came with me."

"Shay and I have something to settle."

"Don't be stupid, Marrow," Shay says, his smile curdling into a grimace of anger. "You picked the wrong side, but you're an outsider. I can forgive you. But I am a student of the Adder, and you have never set foot in a dojo."

You give Marrow a worried glance, but he simply shakes his head without taking his eyes off Shay. "I asked you to trust me, and you said you would. This is the part where you show you meant it."

You turn from him and to the young man standing in your way, biting your lips in thought.

"I am not letting her go past me," he says, "even if I have to fight you two-to-one-"

You take a sharp breath and brace on your feet, and you jump.

You soar twenty feet up, far above Shay, far past him, landing on the ground with a painful throb in your knees.

"I won't let you-" a voice calls out behind you, and there is a rush of motion, two colliding footfalls and the dull song of blows, claws against wood and flesh against scale.

You don't turn to look. Marrow asked you to trust him, and trust you will. You keep running, your eyes set straight ahead, your chest pumping like bellows.

The light around you is answered by a light ahead. The embers of the cairn - the shrine feels taller from up close, bigger, its architecture of rough stone so different from the mudbrick village below, no doubt much older; glassless windows glow in dull reds and burnished golds, the door to the shrine like the maw of a furnace, otherwise a simple featureless tower.

A handful of students of the Adder stand before the shrine, and once again you come to a halt. You open your mouth to shout the same warning you gave Shay - but before you can say anything they all stand aside from the door and fall to their knees, like an honor guard at a prince's passing.

You feel it. Waves of power radiating from the inside of the shrine. Raw Essence unleashed in that fiery glow. The taste of metal on your tongue, the hiss of the viper at the edge of your hearing. You know what is coming.

Mistress Nashai of the Adder comes out of the shrine with a gleeful smile. Long braids adorned with snake-heads of steel, slit pupils in golden eyes, dark skin adorned with the faint, barely visible pattern of snake scales, fangs on display. She rolls her shoulders, muscles flexing visibly in her dark sleeveless outfit. A coiled snake emblazoned on her chest. In each of her hand, one of her school's false relics, a hooked sword of purple hepatizon.

She comes out of the shrine in golden boots - no, not golden. Orichalcum. The metal of the highest of the Incarnae. The iron of the Godspear. Sunlight trapped in gold. Sleek and shining, forged to resemble the abstract outline of a hunting hound on the pounce, dark leather where the metal must leave room to flex. A true work of art worthy of the highest of the Chosen.

Worthy of the divine gift at their heart - Ruvia's ever-swift sandal, which are now the soles of these boots.

The Golden Hounds.

"You arrive too late," Nashai says, walking between her adoring students.

"You have never truly understood my true intentions," you muse, watching her approach with her swords held low.

"What," she scoffs, "this charade of being a magistrate? Come on! Do not insult me! You are Prasadi - among your people, the Chosen of the Sun are Anathema! The dragon-princes would kill you on sight, and yet you still claim yourself a law-giver?"

"You may have claimed the Hounds," you say softly, inclining your head and pulling your power inwards, "but your crimes stand unatoned for. I have come bringing judgement."

"And you think the strength of the Exalted," she says dramatically, opening her arms as if to invite you to strike her down, "will stand up to my gifts? A life of dedication and self-perfection! The blessings of my master, may he die on the road and reincarnate into a cockroach! These sacred swords! And above all, these Golden Hounds, divine boots! I have defeated a goddess without a single scratch, Magistrate Road, but you think yourself better?!"

"Yes," you answer.

She blinks, surprised. Then she starts chuckling.

"So I see arrogance is not my vice alone."

"You asked me why I could still consider myself a magistrate even when my very existence would now be seen as a sin by my people," you murmur, just loud enough for her to ear. She narrows her eyes, lowering her arms into a relaxed stance. "The truth is that is because my existence has always been a sin."

Nashai looks at you quizzically, and you can see the gears of her mind start running as she works out the implication; she looks at the black rose in your hair, likely remembers the white lily days ago - would the touch of the Wyld be seen as a curse? No, that is not enough, and she can't even be sure it is the Wyld kiss and not a hint of dragon's blood. Perhaps you were born of a forbidden union? Or else…

Her eyes widen.

"Your school," she says. "The school whose name you refused to speak even at the risk of offending your house. Who did you study with?"

You give her a mirthless smile and extend one arm, palm to the starry skies, and your golden anima coils around your hand in endless many-legged segments, its light inverting into a bleak, gold-crowned darkness.

"I am a student of-


[X]"The Art-Defiling Venom Style."

A secret and forbidden branch of the Centipede School practiced by a sect of Kegare-worshippers embedded deep within Prasadi society and the South-East as a whole, the Art-Defiling Venom Style was designed to bring punishment to the deserving, and specifically to those who misuse martial arts in the pursuit of evil goals. It is considered highly heretical because it aims not to kill, but to rob its opponents of their ability to ever practice the martial arts again - the channeled essence of the Centipede God enabling curses which corrupt even the powers of Exalted healing.

Of the Four Hands of Ruination known to the school, Golden Road has mastered one.



[ ] The Ninety-Nine More, a vicious grappling move capable of crippling an enemy's limb forever, allowing the user to specifically deny the use of however many of the victim's techniques they feel like taking from them.

[ ] The Agony-Of-One-Hundred-Hells, a magical poison which permanently taints the nervous system of its victim, leaving them with a seemingly intact body which undergoes excruciating pain whenever they exert significant effort.

[ ] The Soul-Scarring Embrace, a spiritual venom which creates a traumatic vision and sears it into its victim's psyche, forever associating thoughts of violence and the martial arts with overwhelming dread and horror in their mind.
 
[x] The Ninety-Nine More, a vicious grappling move capable of crippling an enemy's limb forever, allowing the user to specifically deny the use of however many of the victim's techniques they feel like taking from them.

Dramatic reversal, ho!

Also, for your consideration, I submit an "omake". Please, forgive me.

Attribute + Ability

"And you think the strength of the Exalted," she says dramatically, opening her arms as if to invite you to strike her down, "will stand up to my gifts? A life of dedication and self-perfection! The blessings of my master, may he die on the road and reincarnate into a cockroach! These sacred swords! And above all, these Golden Hounds, divine boots! I have defeated a goddess without a single scratch, Magistrate Road, but you think yourself better?!"

"And you think the strength of the Exalted," she says dramatically, opening her arms as if to invite you to strike her down, "will stand up to my gifts? A life of dedication and self-perfection! The blessings of my master, may he die on the road and reincarnate into a cockroach! These sacred swords! And above all, these Golden Hounds, divine boots! I have defeated a goddess without a single scratch, Magistrate Road, but you think yourself better?!"

"Yes," you answer. "Dice pools."

Nashai blinked, dropping off the martial stance for a moment.

"Pardon?"

A smile of an ultimately confident person emerged on Road's face.

"Dice pools. I win by default, really. Do you know how good the Solar excellency is?"

"You have no legs!" Nashai's face went pale. She was already starting to see the shape of this truth. "No legs at all!"

"-5. But +2 equipment bonus, so -3. And then I have a scene-long up that cancels further two, so I'm at a -1," she shrugged. "And you know what's best? Penalty cancels don't count against dice limits!"

"That's bullshit," Nashai murmured, looking down. "So we're at like, roughly the same pool, even before excellency?"

"Didn't you master warn you that Solars were busted?" Road's smile widened, if it was even possible. How few people realized that the light of Lawgivers could break any criminal's spirit. "Like completely busted, grounds up?"

"But it's unfair!" Nashai shouted, tossing her sword to the ground. "How is that supposed to be engaging?"

"To be honest? You are right, it's completely boring. But it was the only option available when I started my career," Road nodded. It was a magistrate's work to teach people about the truth of the world, and the hierarchy of powers. "Look, it's really more of your mistake being a mortal martial arts practitioner. You wanted power, you should have gone sorcery, then stacked workings…"

"Wait," Nashai raised her eyes, a terrible, defiant spark seizing her. "Wait. You… you have Martial Arts, right? Centipede style, no?"

"Ah, yeah? To the capstone," Road said smugly.

"So… instead of going of Brawl, you went Martial Arts, and then fucking Centipede Sylte? Of all the styles that you could have picked?"

"I mean it's flavourful?" Road's voice dropped; she felt suddenly uneasy, as if the ground on her was shaky, or maybe her mote pool empty. "It's a cool style?"

"And you have the gall to tell me I'm unoptimized? Bitch, you could have gone Solar Brawl! You know what," she pointed her finger accusingly. "Fuck you. I may be underpowered, but you… you're just suboptimal."

And thus was the tale of Golden Road ended.
 
I am really curious what the fourth hand is. Also, four different ways to ruin MAs for someone is really excessive, the creator of this style must have really, really loathed people that abuse their Martial Arts.
 
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