The Centipede's Dilemma [Exalted Kung Fu Quest]

[X] The Ninety-Nine More, a vicious grappling move capable of crippling an enemy's limb forever, allowing the user to specifically deny the use of however many of the victim's techniques they feel like taking from them.

I liked the argument that this is something Golden Road has a deep personal understanding of, so she knows the full ramifications of inflicting it upon someone else
 
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[X] The Soul-Scarring Embrace, a spiritual venom which creates a traumatic vision and sears it into its victim's psyche, forever associating thoughts of violence and the martial arts with overwhelming dread and horror in their mind.
 
[X] The Ninety-Nine More, a vicious grappling move capable of crippling an enemy's limb forever, allowing the user to specifically deny the use of however many of the victim's techniques they feel like taking from them.

Would you guys believe it that the reason I'm picking this is because the name sounds badass?
 
A secret and forbidden branch of the Centipede School practiced by a sect of Kegare-worshippers embedded deep within Prasadi society and the South-East as a whole, the Art-Defiling Venom Style was designed to bring punishment to the deserving, and specifically to those who misuse martial arts in the pursuit of evil goals. It is considered highly heretical because it aims not to kill, but to rob its opponents of their ability to ever practice the martial arts again - the channeled essence of the Centipede God enabling curses which corrupt even the powers of Exalted healing.

Yeah, it's no wonder Road would ever want to bring this up. It's basically the equivalent of a regular artist's art style being to tear apart the works of other artists. (And then breaking said artists hands for good measure.)

[X] The Ninety-Nine More, a vicious grappling move capable of crippling an enemy's limb forever, allowing the user to specifically deny the use of however many of the victim's techniques they feel like taking from them.
 
"Wait," Nashai raised her eyes, a terrible, defiant spark seizing her. "Wait. You… you have Martial Arts, right? Centipede style, no?"

"Ah, yeah? To the capstone," Road said smugly.

"So… instead of going of Brawl, you went Martial Arts, and then fucking Centipede Sylte? Of all the styles that you could have picked?"

"I mean it's flavourful?" Road's voice dropped; she felt suddenly uneasy, as if the ground on her was shaky, or maybe her mote pool empty. "It's a cool style?"

"And you have the gall to tell me I'm unoptimized? Bitch, you could have gone Solar Brawl! You know what," she pointed her finger accusingly. "Fuck you. I may be underpowered, but you… you're just suboptimal."

Ironically, Centipede style is AN optimal choice, just not on its own. Pick up a few early charms from Falcon, Swaying Grass, and Mantis, and the supplements all roll with Centipede dice pools. You can knock someone down, inflict onslaught off a block, then buff your attacks and cause horrific butchery. And that's before you add in the totally compatible shenanigans snake can pull off...
 
since I think I can see where this is going, I am going to try to guess which Shonen revenge powerup corresponds to which finisher technique.
[ ] The Ninety-Nine More,
Clearly this forces Nashai to adapt to her newfound loss of [insert limb here], driving her to newfound heights of training montage to match us, because she now knows for a fact that a cripple can take out more than half a dozen superpowered martial artists and then come back for seconds.

[ ] The Agony-Of-One-Hundred-Hells,
This forces Nashai to be able to fight through any amount of pain, and serves as a constant reminder during her training montage of why she wants revenge on Golden Road.

[ ] The Soul-Scarring Embrace,
She wouldn't be able stop thinking about her defeat viaMartial Arts, but simultaneously is overwhelmed by dread and horror at the thought of violence. This would lead her to develop a terrifying talent for Crane style, leading her to come for revenge both so that she can stop being horrified by her defeat at our hands and to enlighten us about how violence is terrifying like we will have enlightened her.
 
I wasn't going to vote. All of the options are cruelty, and each move seems designed for the sake of cruelty and vengeance rather than any kind of justice or reformation.
There's a reason the Art-Defiling Venom Style is considered forbidden and heretical, yes :V

That said, I am not about to reveal that Road was actually a violent psycho all along. She has acquired a skillset whose implications are fairly awful, and she looks for wisdom in how to use it. After all, she can always choose not to use the Hand of Ruination.

Yeah, it's no wonder Road would ever want to bring this up. It's basically the equivalent of a regular artist's art style being to tear apart the works of other artists. (And then breaking said artists hands for good measure.)
This is a fairly apt metaphor in conveying why the martial arts world considers the Venom style as something horrible beyond the scope of normal violence; it somewhat breaks down in that the school has an ethos and doesn't go around breaking people for shits and giggles. It would be more akin to a regular artist whose style is to tear down and utterly destroy in the public's eyes the art of, say, propagandists for an evil regime, or to break the hands of a painter whose chief pigment is drawn from the blood of peasants.

Bit delayed on the next update what with the world ending and me getting into video games to distract myself but don't worry it's coming :V
 
[X] The Agony-Of-One-Hundred-Hells, a magical poison which permanently taints the nervous system of its victim, leaving them with a seemingly intact body which undergoes excruciating pain whenever they exert significant effort.
 
[X] The Soul-Scarring Embrace, a spiritual venom which creates a traumatic vision and sears it into its victim's psyche, forever associating thoughts of violence and the martial arts with overwhelming dread and horror in their mind.
 
[X] The Soul-Scarring Embrace, a spiritual venom which creates a traumatic vision and sears it into its victim's psyche, forever associating thoughts of violence and the martial arts with overwhelming dread and horror in their mind.
 
[X] The Soul-Scarring Embrace, a spiritual venom which creates a traumatic vision and sears it into its victim's psyche, forever associating thoughts of violence and the martial arts with overwhelming dread and horror in their mind.
 
[X] The Ninety-Nine More, a vicious grappling move capable of crippling an enemy's limb forever, allowing the user to specifically deny the use of however many of the victim's techniques they feel like taking from them.
 
since I think I can see where this is going, I am going to try to guess which Shonen revenge powerup corresponds to which finisher technique.
[ ] The Ninety-Nine More,
Clearly this forces Nashai to adapt to her newfound loss of [insert limb here], driving her to newfound heights of training montage to match us, because she now knows for a fact that a cripple can take out more than half a dozen superpowered martial artists and then come back for seconds.

[ ] The Agony-Of-One-Hundred-Hells,
This forces Nashai to be able to fight through any amount of pain, and serves as a constant reminder during her training montage of why she wants revenge on Golden Road.

[ ] The Soul-Scarring Embrace,
She wouldn't be able stop thinking about her defeat viaMartial Arts, but simultaneously is overwhelmed by dread and horror at the thought of violence. This would lead her to develop a terrifying talent for Crane style, leading her to come for revenge both so that she can stop being horrified by her defeat at our hands and to enlighten us about how violence is terrifying like we will have enlightened her.

Well, you've convinced me.

[X] The Ninety-Nine More, a vicious grappling move capable of crippling an enemy's limb forever, allowing the user to specifically deny the use of however many of the victim's techniques they feel like taking from them.
 
[X] The Soul-Scarring Embrace, a spiritual venom which creates a traumatic vision and sears it into its victim's psyche, forever associating thoughts of violence and the martial arts with overwhelming dread and horror in their mind.

Mercy has never been more cruel.
 
"You don't have time for him," he says. "Nashai could be claiming the Hounds even as we speak. Leave him to me."

Understanding dawns on you. "This was your goal to begin with, wasn't it?" you ask. "It's why you came with me."

"Shay and I have something to settle."

"Don't be stupid, Marrow," Shay says, his smile curdling into a grimace of anger. "You picked the wrong side, but you're an outsider. I can forgive you. But I am a student of the Adder, and you have never set foot in a dojo."

You give Marrow a worried glance, but he simply shakes his head without taking his eyes off Shay. "I asked you to trust me, and you said you would. This is the part where you show you meant it."

You turn from him and to the young man standing in your way, biting your lips in thought.

"I am not letting her go past me," he says, "even if I have to fight you two-to-one-"

You take a sharp breath and brace on your feet, and you jump.

You soar twenty feet up, far above Shay, far past him, landing on the ground with a painful throb in your knees.

"I won't let you-" a voice calls out behind you, and there is a rush of motion, two colliding footfalls and the dull song of blows, claws against wood and flesh against scale.
"You people," he says, thrusting a talon in your direction, "are crazy."

"What," you frown with some outrage, "so if a baker starts selling moldy bread, we should still let him call himself a baker? That is what makes no sense."

"Of course he's a baker!" Marrow says with exasperation. "He's learned the craft, he just chooses not to apply himself! He's a bad baker, but he is still a baker!"

"And who's going to stop him from selling bad bread? What if it's not moldy, if he's- putting sawdust in the flour, so most people don't even realize that he's defrauding them- that's why you need a guild!"

"A 'guild' can't make you stop being what you are! That doesn't make sense! A soldier who deserts is still a soldier, he's just also a deserter, or a traitor, or he's gone rogue, but- ah, forget it." He turns back to his tent, stomping the ground in frustration - but he does soon come back with a heavy cast iron pot and a dense brick of black tea.

:thonk:

Marrow my man, you've been holding out on us.

(I have no idea if I'm right or not but straight up I could see it, softboi tries to become a knight or a soldier to prove he's hard enough, actually realizes that war and dueling and kill-or-be-killed are terrifying and awful and he hates them, leaves it for a life of selling wares and monetized socializing but the dude still Is What He Is. Idk what sicklebird lifespans are like but the guy doesn't read as being older than, like, his mid-to-late twenties, not significantly older or more experienced than Shay fr'ex. So unless he's got that anime career path going on it was probably a comparatively brief and likely spectacularly shitty stint in the military/knighthood/if there's even a difference.)

Not... Exactly. Exalts can heal having their legs broken in a dozen places, but they can't heal injuries where the limb is entirely missing without alternative solutions like Charms or Sorcery or Artifacts. And as Road noted she didn't really have a purpose or drive after losing them and so she didn't seek out or find these alternatives except for a story about an artifact.

These are basically a set of Crippling effects which create injuries Exalts cannot heal easily, in game terms.

It's really interesting 'cause like- between the ethos of Road's school and the Implications re: her bloody handed master there's some strong suggestion that this was done by someone with a pretty cruelly ironic sense of justice (much like what Kegare's school embodies), someone who was very possibly a practitioner of the same school, and someone who knew her. Because this kind of targeted brutality- it's the kind of thing you have to hate someone to do I think, deeply and personally. You have to understand that this is probably a core tenet of their identity and something deeply important to them and then you have to determinedly kick it out from beneath them while also not just being clinical and professional enough to put a knife through her throat or a crossbow bolt through her head. It's the kind of thing you do to someone when you want to make them hurt.

So I guess that's kind of the open ended question isn't it? 'Cause Golden Road's got enough moral ambiguity wrapped around her and enough shadowy corners to her history and personality that it's entirely valid to ask "so what happened to make someone want to do that to her", or, maybe more accurately:

"What did Golden Road do to someone that this was their revenge and why?"
 
Idk what sicklebird lifespans are like but the guy doesn't read as being older than, like, his mid-to-late twenties, not significantly older or more experienced than Shay fr'ex.
He strikes me as older than that, personally. He's got a degree of ability to be unfazed about weird shit and roll with it that feels like he's been around for a bit and seen and met plenty of weird stuff and weird folks already.
 
Fantastic reading!

Edit: I really like this quest, but it's also got its own forward momentum that makes it feel less like a quest and more like a fic. I'm curious as to why all Exalted quests seem to follow this particular questing style, but I can't say it isn't pleasing to read all in one sitting.
 
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Just! Mm mm mmmmmm! *chef kiss* This the good stuff! Also, Marrow is my newest precious child and I would die for him. 💘 Golden Road is pretty okay too, I guess. :V

[x] The Soul-Scarring Embrace, a spiritual venom which creates a traumatic vision and sears it into its victim's psyche, forever associating thoughts of violence and the martial arts with overwhelming dread and horror in their mind.

My gut feeling points at this. Now You Fucked Up! You just had to make martial arts cop with a mandate from GOD bust out the big punishment, and you're gonna be a better person now whether you like it or not.
 
VIII. Kung Fu, Part 1
VIII. Kung Fu, Part 1


I am splitting this update in two for the sake of clarity, seeing as there are two separate battles before the next vote. Part 2 in a few days hopefully.


Staff and claws clash against one another time and again.

Bone-like talons strike wood with a sound like rattling a cage, deflecting a dozen blows until the slender haft finds an opening between the mighty scaled limbs and thrusts at an exposed chest, sending the foe reeling. Long sickle-blades slam into the ground, keeping the beastman from being knocked further back; the staff aims for his head and he parries it with his forearm - then the seven linked sections that make up the weapon unlock and it whips around his arm, striking him in the head and dazing him for a second. The snake-like chain whips around, striking the knee, and comes back for another stroke - but one terrible feet erupts from the ground in a spray of dirt and the snake recoils.

Shay darts back, pirouetting on one hand, the other snapping the seven-section staff back together with a flick of his wrist. He lands on his feet, breathing calmly, uninjured. Six feet away, Marrow stands with an awkward guard, claws held out and back hunched; there is no trace of bruise or blood on his scales, but the way his left eye twitches speaks to the ringing of his skull.

Shay smiles darkly, shifting his handle on his staff - and his smile turns to a frown as he looks down. A dozen deep cuts score the wood. He looks up again.

"So, all this time, you were hiding your training from me - hiding that you were a practitioner as well. What is this, Tiger Style?"

Marrow shrugs, shaking his leg to shed the numbness in his knee. "I don't know. We don't call it anything."

"Who's 'we'?" Shay asks, narrowing his eyes, and the sickleman chuckles.

"My people," he says, "the sicklefolk of Heart-upon-Stone. Don't go getting the wrong idea, it's not like I belong to some secret sect of martial arts, or like I tried deliberately to hide my skills. I never set foot in a dojo except as a visitor, Shay. And I never thought about what I did the way you do about your school."

Shay tilts his head, one hand tapping the wood of his staff in an unconscious thinking gesture. Then understanding dawns on his face.

"You're no student," he says, "you're a soldier."

"Barely," Marrow says, shrugging again. "For two, maybe three years, I followed the Way of War. I was trained in the way all sicklefolk warriors are trained; every instructor is different, but everyone teaches his variant of the Way. I was not even aware there were other ways to fight before I first came to the Grave; certainly I never could fathom your hundreds of schools and styles."

"It's always like this," Shay says, tensing up a little, a darkness in his eyes. "Our schools cultivate self-perfection for a hundred years, passing down teachings from master to student, dedicating our lives to honing the art. Then our lessons are simplified, watered down, and spread to the rank and file, who only think of a move as a fist to the face, and not as a way of life."

"Not everybody has their life to spend learning how to make a kick a little more perfect, Shay," Marrow says, not unkindly. "I didn't."

"Clearly not. You're strong and fast, but clumsy. You have the basics down and little else."

"I was not meant for the Way of War," the sickleman responds.

"So what," Shay hisses, eyes shining, an edge of contempt in his voice. "You had the opportunity to dedicate yourself to the art, and you decided to be a merchant instead?"

"I dedicated my life to connecting these lonely places," Marrow answers, an edge creeping into his voice, "to walking these dirt roads between backwoods village where people always risk starving from a bad harvest. To bringing meat to Embercairn and rice to Holiness and arrowheads to Heart-upon-Stone. What have you done with your gifts, Shay?"

"I shed my scales unto perfection," Shay says, translucent eyelids covering his eyes for a second, steel-grey light pulsing, for a heartbeat, across the outlines of his veins.

He crosses the distance between them in one step, and the staff does the rest, lashing out with such speed it seems to ignite with sparks. Marrow lifts one hand, slamming his palm into the haft and ducking his head to the side, and still the tip of the staff strikes his cheek with a ripping sound.

Red drops fall in the dirt. First blood. It only seems to incite Shay further; with a sharp cry he pulls the staff back and brings it back in a swing to Marrow's ankle; the sickleman is fast enough to lift his foot of the ground, but before he can strike back Shay flicks his wrist and unlocks the staff's segment. In the next instant the weapon blurs into a flurry of whip-like blows, rapid curves to baffling for Marrow's orthodox parry to thwart; the weighted segment at the end of the staff strikes again and again against his scales, drawing a gasp from his throat. Marrow steps back once, twice, raising his arms around his head and leaving his chest exposed. With a shout of triumph, Shay slams the staff back into a solid length and thrusts for the heart. The sickleman responds with a high kick, slamming the weapon up into the air - leaving himself off-balance and unguarded; Shay smirks and tugs on the staff to bring it back for the last blow…

The staff does not come. Shay blinks, and looks up.

Marrow's outstretched leg holds the staff in the closed talons of his foot, tighter a grip than any human foot. Shay realizes, too late, that he did not even realize sicklefolk toes were prehensile. With a grunt, the raptor slams his foot down, planting the head of the staff in the ground, and rotates his ankle while keeping his grip - seven linked segments of wood are torn apart, flying apart, two of them bouncing off Marrow's scale, one hitting Shay in the forehead and slicing the skin. The sickleman slumps forward, bringing a sweeping right hook at his once-lover, claws held out.

"Do you think I am less dangerous unarmed?!" Shay shouts, anger running through his veins like icewater. Closer and closer to his totem. He leans down and the claws sweep above his head, barely grazing his curly hair; one step takes him into his much larger opponent's guard, and he holds out the index and middle finger of his right hand out while closing the others. Channeling power feels like frostbite in his hand, but he sees the chest of his opponent, knows the heart and ribcage and patterns of muscles and the pathways of nerves underlying it all. One stroke. Shay's fingers hit the nerve cluster that connects the arm to the pectoral muscles, a perfect hit, the Essence ebbing away into his foe's body.

Marrow gasps, taking one step back, his right arm jittering. Shay grins, stepping up to him for a follow-up - and is too stunned to see Marrow's right hand tense up and strike at his open face to dodge. A last-second instinct allows him to catch his breath and tense his whole body, hardening his skin to iron-like strength. The claw hits him like what it is, a punch from a man twice his body weight, and he rolls away into the dirt - but at least the blow drew no more than a trickle of blood.

Shay stumbles back up hastily, gasping, eyes wide, staring at Marrow. The sickleman looks back, a dimness in his eyes, his breath halting, his chest heaving. But his guard is still strong, when his right arm should be limp and useless.

"...how?" Shay asks baffled.

"Do you really have to ask?" Marrow says, rolling his shoulders with a fanged grimace.

"...your scales," Shay mutters after a moment. "I hit the right spot but couldn't hit the nerve through that layer."

Marrow nods - and then, his back relaxing a little, looks up at the night sky. The sun is entirely gone now, and the stars peek through faint, ribbon-like clouds. He lets out a sigh.

"I like you, Shay," he says longingly. "But I don't just like you. I like your people - graveborn and riverborn alike, and those beyond these lands. You are all so… soft, and light, and yet so resilient to time and hardship. There is such strength in your fragility, and such fragility in your strength. It fascinates me."

"Ah," Shay says, looking bemused. "And here I thought you liked me for my strength."

"I do," Marrow answers. "But not in the way you think. Your people, you are like… spirits everywhere, dancing, dizzying. You wear a thousand different garments when only a skirt, a vest, and perhaps a coat will fit my body." He brushes his feather-crests as he says this, blues and red all muddied by the darkness of night, a wide leather skirt ending above the knees his only garments. "You stumble in the dark yet move silent at night. You can go days without eating but you'll complain after a single missed meal. The best among you can run from sunrise to sunset - do you know what I would give for that kind of endurance?"

"The best among us," Shay answers, "are those who spend their lives in the pursuit of one skill. I am no ordinary man - and neither is your Golden Road. Your idea of the non-sicklefolk is… twisted."

"You don't understand what I am getting at," Marrow sighs, looking down again. "I told you, didn't I, that among my people blue feathers are considered a sign of softness of character, of a nurturing but weak temperament? I wanted to prove them wrong, so I tried to follow the Way of War, and I couldn't. I couldn't stand the blood and the pain. So I left, and became a merchant. I chose to spend more time in your world than mine. I failed the path of the warrior and yet..." He opens his arms wide, talons shining in the starlight. "Here I am."

He takes one step, something burning now in his eyes and voice, claws sweeping at the air with each sentence.

"I like your people, Shay, but I don't like your world. You eat roots and grain every day and meat once a week or a month, and I starve among you. I eat eggs every day and I am so, so tired of eggs, but without some meat I will starve. You write with quills and charcoal sticks that snap in my hands. You work day-long in the sun and I look in vain for the shade and public baths of my homeland. Every day is like a little pebble rolling down my back, and each pebble I can ignore, but a year among you is an endless roll of stone on my skin, scraping away my scales, itching where I cannot scratch. And when I seek a companion for a night, my smile looks like a snarl to you and you back off in fright. "

"Not me," Shay whispers. "Never me."

"And for this," Marrow responds, "I have grown so fond of you. Perhaps, where you not bound to this village and I to the road, I could love you. But look at yourself. Look at the path your mistress led you down. Snatching food from the hands of starving babes in the name of loyalty and honor - what kind of life is that?"

"If you are telling me that I should stand down, you know that it won't work."

"I do," Marrow says, shaking his head. "But it's not what I am trying to do. What I am trying to say is that… This is it. This moment. It is what my people were made for. The gift and curse laid upon us. Every day among your people a struggle - but this? The outburst, the exertion of speed and strength, the sudden thrill, for a few instants? You spent your entire life studying the martial arts, and I spent two years trying and failing to become a warrior…"

And Marrow straightens his back, raising his talons open wide, one hand guarding his face and another held forward, rooting his feet in the ground.

"But I was born with this body, and I will beat you."

"Then I suppose there is nothing more to say," Shay answers, clutching his hands into finger-claws.

Marrow nods, his eyes sharp and intent on his opponent.

Shay breathes out, a pulse of steel glowing beneath his skin.

"Ox-Slaying Bite, he speaks, the veins of his right forearm bulging, dim light crowning his fingers.

His lunge is as sharp and sudden as a snapping jaw, less a brawler's strike than a fencer's; one step and his body extends out into reach of Marrow, the glowing hand punching for the torso. Marrow meets him with a claw-strike to the side of his hand, deflecting the deadly attack before it reaches him, then jabs his left hand at Shay's face. The young man swats it aside with his free hand and hunches forward, glowing hand coiling up at his side - then lunges again.

The two extended knuckles hit Marrow's scale like a knife slicing through gauze, and blood sprays out. Mighty slabs of muscle fare no better, parting like water, and Shay strikes bone - a rib cracks.

Marrow's talons clasp shut on Shay's forearm, blocking him a fraction of a second before he reaches the heart. For a breathless second, the two men stand there, frozen in motion. Blood pours down one's chest; sweat trickles down the other's brow.

Then Shay lets out a cry of anger and frustration and his arm slips out of Marrow's unearthly grasp as if it wasn't there, the steel-grey light shining anew. and lunges again.

But now Marrow has seen the move, its incredible speed and its rigid pattern. He slumps forward, bringing up his hands in front of his face, then snaps out - hitting the deadly hand with his forearm to push it outwards from his body. The extended knuckles slice through the scales, scatter a handful of bright blue-red feathers, and rip against the bone, going wide. Shay's chest is unprotected. The sickleman flows into a deadly kick.

Talons the size of a man's fingers. One claw, on the middle toe, twice as long and shaped like a sickle - the reason for his people's name. An edge to gut a man of a grip to shatter his bones. In a suspended heartbeat, Shay's eyes widen as he sees it coming.

At the last second, Marrow grits his teeth and snaps his toe-claws shut. Instead of a blade it is a hammerhead that hits Shay in the chest, knocking the breath out of him, tearing a hundred small vessels, bruising the bone. The Adder goes flying backwards and hits the ground with his back, rolling once, limp.

Marrow lets his foot fall to the ground and gasps, his breath steam curls coming out from his fangs, his eyes closing and opening repeatedly. His chest heaves with heavy breathing. He touches his breast, where the blood still trickles, but he can't even feel the pain - all he feels is the pounding in his skull and the furnace in his lungs, his entire body burning.

Quietly, almost self-consciously, he mutters thanks to the stars under which he was born. He knows they do not listen, and do not care, for they are cold and distant gods; but the gods of his people, the living gods of fur and bark, are much too far to hear him. And, perhaps, he has spent too much time with Golden Road.

Then Marrow puts his skirt back on and walks out of the paddy, sitting heavily down on the ground next to Shay.

The young man's breath hisses, a little erratic, a sign of wakefulness. His fingers claw at the dirt once, as if to try and push himself up, then he gives up.

One eye - strangely now colored grey as steel - stares up at Marrow, unreadable. The sickleman smiles a little, then looks up at the stars.

"I think we should talk about our relationship," he says.
 
One eye - strangely now colored grey as steel - stares up at Marrow, unreadable. The sickleman smiles a little, then looks up at the stars.
This is just begging for Shay to come back for a rematch when his Snake Essence has reshaped him more, so that he can say "I've abandoned my humanity, Marrow." I appreciate that our friend gets his own Shonen Rival.

I wonder if the Sicklefolk are a group of Dragon Kings, they have different Paths IIRC.
 
God I wish I were this consistently good at blow-by-blow action scenes.

What I really like about this, though, is that, like... Shay basically is a bad person who does bad things, who refuses every opportunity to be a better person so far. But Marrow is so likeable that his affection kind of like, by proxy, is a redeeming quality for Shay. That's a very hard needle to thread, but it adds weight here -- I read this, and it's cool, but I'm not here rooting for the jerk to get punched in the face, because the fact that these two are fighting at all is just sad.
 
Hrrm...
Okay so it sounds like this Steel Adder group seriously has weird Lunar mojo going on with them. And that Essence is not nearly as simple as the binary 'you have it or you don't' we're used to thinking of in Exalted.
 
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