RWBY: fixing the world (or ruining it, up to you)

First we have minimal use for hand to hand combat due to our aura magic and weapon
Secondly our stats and weapon are not built for brute force combat which hand to hand combat is
sorry need to negate this, This is not a fighting style in any way nor is the whip sword mastery. They are just proficiency in that style. Also the whip sword is more mid range and when an enemy gets in close you will need to have some ability to fight back. Finally Hand to hand combat is not pure brute force especially if you get a fighting style similar to judo or the like, letting you beat the enemy with your higher Agi stat.

First we have a high ac this we will get a lot more benefits from the spells.
Second dust casting will be useful as our semblance is not a directly offence one.
this however is completely true though does not necessarily make it better than the other choice.

EDIT: The ??? rewards have nothing to do with your semblance no matter where you go sorry.

They do however represent a VERY powerful boon going forward.

Boons can include: IC knowledge of certain things going on behind the scenes, Extremely potent items or weapons, or other such things.
 
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, This is not a fighting style in any way nor is the whip sword mastery. They are just proficiency in that style. Also the whip sword is more mid range and when an enemy gets in close you will need to have some ability to fight back
I don't think I explained myself well here so allow me to elaborate for my first point I am referring to that a our weapon a whip sword is a weapon that acts as both a sword and a whip covering most of our melee needs and aura magic gives us offensive power in cases where we lack our weapon


As for the point about hand to hand training the hardest to learn are non-brute force syles (excluding takedown styles which I don't think fits the character well)
Even assuming that we have the time to learn it what are the chances that we find a master of a non-brute force hand to hand style on patch given that they are the rarest style of martial arts.

Edit: man does my autocorrect hate the word whip sword
 
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I don't think I explained myself well here so allow me to elaborate for my first point I am referring to that a our weapon a whip/*word is a weapon that acts as both a sword and a whip covering most of our melee needs and aura magic gives us offensive power in cases where we lack our weapon
I am more talking about the extremely short range. where Yang, Mercury, Emerald and their like thrive. They get in that close and you lack a way to fight back and you will be in trouble lol.

As for the point about hand to hand training the hardest to learn are non-brute force syles (excluding takedown styles which I don't think fits the character well)
Even assuming that we have the time to learn it what are the chances that we find a master of a non-brute force hand to hand style on patch given that they are the rarest style of martial arts.
ironically? guaranteed lol. One of the teachers at signal knows it. Besides you don't need to be a master of it since its not your main defense or mode of attack. So just the Adapt level will be enough for you for a long while. On top of this if you wish to master it further I can guarantee one of the teachers at beacon will know some non-brute styles too.
 
No one is voting then? No one is changing their vote?


Fair enough then VOTE CLOSED! you are now moving off to meet Ruby!

time to roll for your background. COTTAGE WINS!
san threw 1 2-faced dice. Reason: 1 is Patch 2 is the cottage Total: 2
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ok just so we are clear on what you all gave up on?

I will be adding paths not taken to the update.
 
Hmm thou
I am more talking about the extremely short range. where Yang, Mercury, Emerald and their like thrive. They get in that close and you lack a way to fight back and you will be in trouble lol.


ironically? guaranteed lol. One of the teachers at signal knows it. Besides you don't need to be a master of it since its not your main defense or mode of attack. So just the Adapt level will be enough for you for a long while. On top of this if you wish to master it further I can guarantee one of the teachers at beacon will know some non-brute styles too.
Ahh in extreme close range I've got a master plan I like to call "retreat and blast the enemy with overwhelming fire power", then if you can't retreat blast it with overwhelming firepower while grappled consequences be dammed.

Though on the part about hand to hand fighting the fact we will find someone to teach us such a style raises the value of the plan quite a bit (not enough to change my vote but enough that it's much closer) however how often will we use hand to hand combat compared to aura casting
Not too mention how much more aura spells can be used for.
 
Intro part 2: Completing the backstory and meeting Ruby!
[] at a small hut in an isolated valley (Gained knowledge of Salem, the 4 maidens and the shadow war going on between Ozpin and Salem! Gained hatred of Salem and her minions + relations with Ozpin, Amber and + relations with Qrow. dustcasting: beginner gained, Aura magic mastery goes up to halfway to Adept! several new spells learned (will add them to character sheet, all spells go up to level 3!)

'I survived on my own in the wilds after that killing any grimm that came after me for a few years, before ending up at a small hut in an isolated valley. I must admit I never expected to meet anyone like Amber there. Who would have thought real magic existed in this world of ours. Truly fate favored me when I met her even if things were very tense at first with her thinking was a servant of Salem. Before she finally believe I was telling the truth about being a survivor of mountain Glenn anyway.' Lux smiled at the memory of it all. 'Then after a year of living with her when she said magic actually existed I laughed at her like a fool until she proved it in front of me... the look on my face kept her smiling for weeks. I must admit I am beyond glad that I begged her to teach me any form of magic that I could learn from her. While she could not teach me hers, she taught me how Dustcasting and improved my knowledge of Aura magic and taught me several spells! the tiny blow to my pride was worth it in the face of the knowledge I gained.'

'Then Salem's disgusting minions found her while she was busy on one of her rides to a village. I will never forgive them for taking away one of the few people I had grown so close to. One of the few truly worthy people in this world.' Lux frowned at the memory teeth gritting in hatred of Salem. 'Thankfully Qrow was able to save her when I was unable to help her. Then he brought me to Ozpin who finished explaining the whole situation to me and offered me my position here at beacon. Here I will train to get my revenge for the loss of my friend and to ensure I can protect what is mine in the future and never face that humiliation of being outmatched again!'


Paths not taken:
[]On Patch being taken in by a small family and befriending some of the residents in the area before being taught a bit by the father of his new friends who was a teacher at the local combat school. (New (far better) weapon made by you and Ruby gained!, + relations with Yang, Qrow, TaiYang and Ruby, +3 to all stats!, Hand to Hand mastery: adept gained! Fighting style: Hapkido gained!)

[] In Vale proper surviving whatever the streets could throw at him. (Knowledge of Cinder gained! Large amount of Dust and Lien gained!, +relations with Roman, Neo and the White fang!, Thievery:beginner, moving silently:beginner and hiding:beginner gained!)
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[] Ruby ( gain Trait: I must satiate my curiosity, + relations with Ruby!)
[] Juane ( gain Trait: the strong protect the weak, + relations with Juane!)
[] Weiss ( gain Trait: power is everything, + relations with Weiss!)
[] Blake ( gain Trait: I must chase after what I desire, + relations with Blake!)
[] Explore ( gain Trait: No one is worthy of my presence, gain knowledge of beacons campus, gain skill ???)

'hmmm so many choices, what to do indeed...' Frowning in thought lux then made his decision. 'The redhead is the best choice I think, I know I won't be able to sleep tonight until I pinpoint where I recognize her from.'

Walking up the the redhead Lux takes a moment as the remaining crowd rushes by delaying him, causing him some annoyance. By the time they passed though The redhead had fallen backwards onto the Schnee's luggage cart and she was busy berating her while shaking a dust vial in her face.

".. Dust! Fire, Water, Lightning, Energy!"

Moving up rather swiftly compared to his normal sedate pace Lux grabs the vial out of the heiresses hand and begins to give her some words of his own.

"Hey! how dare you!" The little Schnee said before Lux cut her off as he used his Dustcasting to move the cloud away from the redhead. Turning to her he gave the Schnee a taste of his Semblance causing her to back off a bit in fear.

"You're right, this is dust. Which is why shaking small clouds of it into peoples faces is EXTREMELY dangerous. Little red here was about to sneeze which would have caused the little cloud your shaking had created to explode possibly setting off all the other vials in the case you are holding killing the both of you." Lux stated giving her a glare. "Now why don't you go back to what you were doing and I can handle dealing with little red ok?"

Nodding hastily the schnee backed off and began pulling her cart along again as Lux turned back to little red.

"You alright there red?" Lux asked offering red a hand.

"Yes, thank you and please don't call me red. It brings back some bad memories." She said grabbing the hand and getting up.

"Ah well then, what should I call you? The name is Lux, Lux Vanta by the way." "Ruby, Ruby Rose, By the way is that a whip sword on your back?" Ruby asked as she leaned towards it eyes shining. "It is! and it even has dust capability! When did you build it? are you looking into improving it in any way?" Leaning in further forcing you to poke her forehead to knock her out of it as you raised an eyebrow in mild amusement.

"No I did not build it, I got it off the corpse of one of the hunters defending Mountain Glen when the upper city fell years ago. Without it I never would have made it away from there alive." "oh I am so sor..!" "Its ok, It happened years ago I am well over it. I am curious however, I know your face from somewhere but I can't fully place where.... were you ever on the Holo-net recently?"

"I well... maybe? I did stop Roman Torchwick from committing a crime a few days ago." Ruby stated shuffling on her feet a bit.

"Ah that would explain why i recognized you. I would assume that would be why you were offered a place in Beacon? Impressive for someone your age. Hmm, it's getting close to the time for the assembly would you like to come with me there and tell me a bit about how you stopped the criminal?" Lux asked with a satisfied smile.

"Yes! I mean... uh, please thank you, I don't actually know where to go." Ruby said rubbing a hand behind her head.

"Do you mind if I come too?" The Blonde who was throwing up earlier asked. "Sure!" Ruby said before looking to Lux. "I mean if your fine with it." Lux nodded before walking and listening as she told the story about how she beat Torchwick.

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"..... And then I shot a few times at the Bullhead with Crescent Rose before the lady sent out a bunch of fire attacks underneath us and forced us to back off before getting away!" Ruby shouts excitedly. "Then she took me to and interview office at the police station and lectured me before Ozpin came and invited me to Beacon!"

"Wow thats amazing! You were able to fight side by side one of the teachers?" the now named Juane stated.

"Indeed it is impressive, though the weapon you built sounds even more impressive. Do you mind showing us crescent Rose?" Lux asked.

"Sure!" Ruby shouted taking out her baby. "Whoah! thats a big scythe!" Juane shouted. "Its also a customizable high-impact velocity Sniper rifle." "A wha?" "Its also a gun." "Oh. Thats cool!" "So what've you two got?" "Oh... well I have this sword, and the scabbard unfolds into a shield and back into a scabbard to carry it easier."

"Indeed, basic but very well made from the looks of it. The basics are such for good reason after all." Lux stated. "As for myself, I have my whip sword, I don't know the name the previous owner gave it and it felt wrong to name it with how I got it so it is nameless for now."

Lux Took out his sword showing off that form before unfolding it into its whip form and swinging it around skillfully for a moment.

"It is also capable of channeling the dust that is put into the slot at the hilt here." He stated point out the slot before activating the dust and showing the glow for a moment with another few quick swings. "As you can imagine it greatly empowers my attacks when I do that."

"Cool!" Both Ruby and Juane shouted as they reached a building with big wooden doors in front of it.

"Oh, it looks like we have arrived. Well it was fun talking to you." Lux stated with a slight smile.

"Indeed it was and thank you for your help. See you later Ruby, Lux." Juane said before walking off.

"Oh, you don't have to leave would you like to meet my sister?" Ruby asked with puppy eyes. "She is a first year like me! Though your own age of course."

[] Go with Ruby to meet her sister. You are a bit curious on what her sister would be like consider Ruby herself after all.
[] No your curiosity is satiated and dealing with more of Ruby's hyperactivity would wear on your patience too much.
[] On second thought, go with Juane. He seemed a bit dejected with how much more awesome your weapons were than his. Cheer him up!

AN:
And that ties in Intro part 2! Next is part 3 which will cover at least the Assembly and the night in the gym. If it goes further it will only go up to the morning of initiation. Initiation itself will be a 2 partner, 1 will be meeting your partner and getting to the relics and the other will be escaping the forest. After that the last part of the intro will be team assignments and moving into the dorm room as well as your first interactions with your team outside of combat.

Nothing you are voting on here is of the same significance as the previous vote, so just have fun.

Also are the rewards that were being offered significant enough in your eyes? pretty big huh?
 
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[X] Go with Ruby to meet her sister. You are a bit curious on what her sister would be like consider Ruby herself after all.
ops sorry Questing for fun my fault did not fee that
 
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[X]On Patch being taken in by a small family and befriending some of the residents in the area before being taught a bit by the father of his new friends who was a teacher at the local combat school. (New (far better) weapon made by you and Ruby gained!, + relations with Yang, Qrow, TaiYang and Ruby, +3 to all stats!, Hand to Hand mastery: adept gained! Fighting style: Hapkido gained!)
[X] Go with Ruby to meet her sister. You are a bit curious on what her sister would be like consider Ruby herself after all.
ummm sorry but the first part of this vote is already done XD
 
[X] On second thought, go with Juane. He seemed a bit dejected with how much more awesome your weapons were than his. Cheer him up!
 
[X] Go with Ruby to meet her sister. You are a bit curious on what her sister would be like consider Ruby herself after all.

puppy eyes you can't say no to the puppy eyes
 
[X] Go with Ruby to meet her sister. You are a bit curious on what her sister would be like consider Ruby herself after all.
 
Now it my turn to make an argument for why i think you should vote for Jaune that being that he is down and can use a friend or acquaintance since he didn't meet Ruby and it can possibly stop the conflict between Jaune and Cardin from happening, we don't need Nora threatening to break our knees i think it more useful for Jaune to meet the MC then Yang who we can meet another time through Ruby.
 
Now it my turn to make an argument for why I think you should vote for Jaune that being that he is down and can use a friend or acquaintance since he didn't meet Ruby and it can possibly stop the conflict between Jaune and Cardin from happening, we don't need Nora threatening to break our knees I think it more useful for Jaune to meet the MC then Yang who we can meet another time through Ruby.

I happen to agree also Juanes semblance (amplification of auras properties) massive amounts synergy with our aura magic
[X] On second thought, go with Juane. He seemed a bit dejected with how much more awesome your weapons were than his. Cheer him up!
 
Also what new spells did we get.

Can we pleeeease get a spell that plays royal fanfare so we can use to make dramatic entrances.
Royal fanfare:
 
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[X] Go with Ruby to meet her sister. You are a bit curious on what her sister would be like consider Ruby herself after all.
 
I happen to agree also Juanes semblance (amplification of auras properties) massive amounts synergy with our aura magic
[X] On second thought, go with Juane. He seemed a bit dejected with how much more awesome your weapons were than his. Cheer him up!
you are forgetting something massive guys.... I retconned his semblance remember? in any case this wont stop Cardins bs in and of itself. No the vote is more for getting closer to the teams. atm you will have a somewhat friendly relationship with Rwby and a nuetral+ one with jnpr.

Also what new spells did we get.

Can we pleeeease get a spell that plays royal fanfare so we can use to make dramatic entrances.
Royal fanfare:

i will get those added today on the character sheet.
 
you are forgetting something massive guys.... I retconned his semblance remember? in any case this wont stop Cardins bs in and of itself. No the vote is more for getting closer to the teams. atm you will have a somewhat friendly relationship with Rwby and a nuetral+ one with jnpr.
Even still Jaunes still a tanky boi with a lot of aura
 
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