RWBY: fixing the world (or ruining it, up to you)

So my current team names are team CRTS or Carrots, Team BYRN or Burn, and finally I dont have any idea for your team.... soo ummm team name suggestions as well please? you dont have to give them right now but would be nice to have them for the update after the next one.
LeoPArd/LPAB? (b is opposite of d, so they're fairly close). I don't know if Leopard's exist in RWBY, though, so maybe that doesn't work out. Uhh, Dove's last name is Bronzewing, right? My only knowledge of RWBY is second-hand, so yeah.
 
LeoPArd/LPAB? (b is opposite of d, so they're fairly close). I don't know if Leopard's exist in RWBY, though, so maybe that doesn't work out. Uhh, Dove's last name is Bronzewing, right? My only knowledge of RWBY is second-hand, so yeah.
ya its bronzewing. and thats better than anything i can think of lol! ;)

plus if you use his first name it becomes actual LPAD. (they use either first initial or last one. so that leaves a combination made of LV, PN, JA, DB.)
 
[X] Plan im bad at names
-[X] Team Carrots attack Alpha Nevermore.
-[X] Team Burn attack Alpha Deathstalker.
-[X] And my team dragon will attack Alpha Benigal.
-[X] i use Dragonfire on Alpha Benigal
-[X] i use Aura Light to hurt all grimm
-[X] i use Draconian Presence on team Carrots up Weiss and Ruby Accuracy

what a Benigal?
 
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[X] Plan im bad at names
-[X] Team Carrots attack Alpha Nevermore.
-[X] Team Burn attack Alpha Deathstalker.
-[X] And my team dragon will attack Alpha Benigal.

what a Benigal?
ok first, solid if basic plan. You sure you dont want to add specific spells to start off with if anything? or a general strategy? if not its ok this is fine, just making sure.

also a benigal is this:

....... sorry a BERINGEL BECAUSE I AM AN IDIOT! is this:

rwby.fandom.com

Beringel

Beringels are Creatures of Grimm first seen in the "Volume 4 Character Short" that resemble large gorillas. Two years before the events of "RWBY", the leader of the Wave Crime Syndicate Lemon manages to control a Beringel and gets it into the city of Kuchinashi using a Magic Necklace and has it...




it was capable of almost beating Ruby 1v1 in the whole post fall of beacon thing when she encountered it in mystral. And that was one that was barely into Alpha stage.
 
[X] plan divide and conquer
-[X] "Pyrrha, Ruby Focus your long ranged attacks on grounding the Nevermore"
-[X] "Yang, Nora, Ren, and Weiss try to draw Bengal attention away from the last of us then take it down
-[X] " The rest of you are with me lets crush this deathstalker"
-[X] get ready to cast Wind Blade
I figured lux is pretty arrogant so he would put less planning into the group his fighting with (after all he could probably take Deathstalker down by himself)
 
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ok first, solid if basic plan. You sure you dont want to add specific spells to start off with if anything? or a general strategy? if not its ok this is fine, just making sure.

also a benigal is this:

....... sorry a BERINGEL BECAUSE I AM AN IDIOT! is this:

rwby.fandom.com

Beringel

Beringels are Creatures of Grimm first seen in the "Volume 4 Character Short" that resemble large gorillas. Two years before the events of "RWBY", the leader of the Wave Crime Syndicate Lemon manages to control a Beringel and gets it into the city of Kuchinashi using a Magic Necklace and has it...




it was capable of almost beating Ruby 1v1 in the whole post fall of beacon thing when she encountered it in mystral. And that was one that was barely into Alpha stage.
now that you mention it ill add Aura Light Draconian Presence Dragonfire
 
yes just barely..... however 1 problem.... what is 'it'? the Benigal or the Deathstalker? Both are Alpha grimm and therefore can be considered boss monsters.

Also you can have a bigger plan for your own personal actions. You just cant have more than 6 sentences of actual speech.

Finally everyone there is a hunter trainee with a decent amount of experience at fighting. They also might not listen to you. So with that in mind you might be better off just assigning roles for people to commit to based on their rough fighting styles or even just assigning teams of 4 to fight each Grimm yourself included.

This is all up to you guys.

EDIT: still a very solid first attempt just needs a bit of refinement. (honestly the biggest problem is not addressing the third enemy.)
I don't even realise there was both of them will adjust plan
 
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Changed it to
[ ] Plan "hit it till it dies"

-[ ] "Blake distract and direct the nevermore towards the ground then Wiess you freeze it .Yang, Nora and Cardin in once this happens hit it with all you've got."

-[] "Everyone else with me." *deploy aura light* we are going to whittle it down" "Pyrrha, Jaune defend from the bengal ! Dove, Ren harass the deathstalker from close range! Rwby' use your rifle on anything that looks vurnable ! *staying withing thirty feet start firing off rounds into Bengal *

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welp with no new voters and only 1 minor plan change VOTE IS CLOSED! ..... I will decide whether to roll for the winner or to choose which plan I like best in a bit.
Adhoc vote count started by san on Oct 23, 2019 at 1:21 PM, finished with 14 posts and 3 votes.

  • [X] Plan "hit it till it dies"
    -[X] "blake distract and direct the nevermore towards the ground then Wiess you freeze it .Yang, Nora and Cardin in once this happens hit it with all you've got. "
    -[X] "Everyone else with me." *deploy aura light* we are going to whittle it down" "Pyrrha, Jaune defend from the bengal ! Dove, Ren harass the deathstalker from close range! Rwby' use your rifle on anything that looks vurnable ! *staying withing thirty feet start firing off rounds into Bengal *
    [X] Plan im bad at names
    -[X] Team Carrots attack Alpha Nevermore.
    -[X] Team Burn attack Alpha Deathstalker.
    -[X] And my team dragon will attack Alpha Benigal.
    -[X] i use Dragonfire on Alpha Benigal
    -[X] i use Aura Light to hurt all grimm
    -[X] i use Draconian Presence on team Carrots up Weiss and Ruby Accuracy
    [X] plan divide and conquer
    -[X] "Pyrrha, Ruby Focus your long ranged attacks on grounding the Nevermore"
    -[X] "Yang, Nora, Ren, and Weiss try to draw Bengal attention away from the last of us then take it down
    -[X] " The rest of you are with me lets crush this deathstalker"
    -[X] get ready to cast Wind Blade
 
ok rolling, its going to be in the same order the plans are in.


[X] Plan im bad at names

WINS!
san threw 1 3-faced dice. Total: 2
2 2
 
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"Oh ya, Weiss Ruby, Dove and I ran into an Alpha nevermore and an Alpha Benigal on the way here. Weiss and I tricked them into fighting each other and put a bit of hurt on them but they should be here soon enough. We chose this location to fight them as its unlikely we will be able to outrun them and we don't want to fight them in the forest itself. With everyone here we should be able to easily defeat them."
"I will take the knight, the protector piece." He states with a smile before he was interrupted by the Alpha Benigal bursting into the clearing even as the Alpha Nevermore flies in from above.
I think you missed some cases of Benigaltis.
 
I think you missed some cases of Benigaltis.
thanks dude but more focused on the next update atm. its not coming as easily as I want it to and I have needed to rewrite parts of it here and there. But ya this boss fight is just a bit tough for me to write and do it properly thats all. Update won't be waiting for almost a month like the previous one though. Just until next weekend at the MOST (thats the deadline I am imposing on myself if I still don't feel like I have done the battle justice with the update by that point.)
 
ok so, going through all of this so far has made me realize I need to simplify and define exactly how I am doing combat in this quest. see the redone informational "How combat, stats, skills and training works" for the current details on that.

I have done more than 2/3 of the update atm but am going to need to redo a fair bit of it with the new rules. but with them it should be FAR easier to do and the update should be out tomorrow in time for halloween! yay :D
 
ok so, going through all of this so far has made me realize I need to simplify and define exactly how I am doing combat in this quest. see the redone informational "How combat, stats, skills and training works" for the current details on that.

I have done more than 2/3 of the update atm but am going to need to redo a fair bit of it with the new rules. but with them it should be FAR easier to do and the update should be out tomorrow in time for halloween! yay :D
That didn't seem to come up as an alert, so I suggest you put that in as an A.N. at the start of that update for those who only look at the updates and not the discussion in-between. Also, at a glance, it seems like Crit resistance is favoured a bit over crit threshold, judging by the stat benefits for them. Well, that or I suck at maths. I guess it's fine since Nat 20's will always crit anyway, though.
 
That didn't seem to come up as an alert, so I suggest you put that in as an A.N. at the start of that update for those who only look at the updates and not the discussion in-between. Also, at a glance, it seems like Crit resistance is favoured a bit over crit threshold, judging by the stat benefits for them. Well, that or I suck at maths. I guess it's fine since Nat 20's will always crit anyway, though.
naa you need more Phys and Agi per point to get crit resistance. 10 and 5 phys and agi respectively. vs just needed 4 points in acc. I am also thinking of reducing that to 3 acc but will decide later. I am trying to get a tendency for crits to only happen on 20's unless you HEAVILY invest in acc, which if you do so you do less damage with normal melee attacks. aka become Ruby lol. ;)
 
k everyone sorry not quite done today like I hoped am about 3/4 of the way done with what I have fully fixed up so it will be out tomorrow barring big surprises.

just been so busy with Halloween, the doctors appointment, going to get the prescriptions I needed to treat my Psoriasis on my foot from shoppers. (got the condition from my grandma and its usually only on my head but occasionally my elbows have it though this is the first time for my feet.)

EDIT: I also touched up the combat a bit further (Twix was right crit was too weak so I made it +1 crit for every 3 acc.) plus you will be getting partial character sheets for each member of your team within 2-3 days of the chapter as well.
 
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