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I've really appreciated summaries of stories, so I'm putting one here.

So, this story features Taylor as protagonist, within an alternative universe of Worm. She also has an alternative power. Instead of insect control, she is a tinker focused on simplistic disposable minions.
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1.1 Transfer
Arc 1 Settling In
1.1 Transfer
Heroic, a term used to describe going above and beyond normal levels of doing the right thing. The last bit had changed after some argument with dad. He wants me to be safe, and wouldn't accept a definition that implied self-sacrifice. I eventually had trouble blaming him. He still wasn't doing well without mom. Neither was I, but it turns out that it's easier to see what's wrong with other people, rather than with yourself.

I was going to be a superhero, albeit that was kind of a far off dream at the moment. Every time I complained though, I had to watch another video about how messed up child-soldiers were and how ineffective they were over the long term at actually fixing problems.

I caught dad glancing over at me while I was fidgeting with the recorder. It was mine, but I shouldn't draw attention to it, so I purposely put it in my backpack and sat on my hands.

I was excited and nervous, which made being calm hard. Arcadia was the best high school in the city. I could have gone here. I lived between it and Winslow, and my grades had been good enough.

The office looked normal enough though, just cleaner, less shoddy than Winslow. The secretary had also been a lot more polite. He invited us to have a seat, saying that the principal would be a few more minutes as he was finishing some scheduling adjustments for the next year.

Winslow's administration was a bunch of jerks. Sure the gangs were a bigger problem there than here, but still, it rankled me.

I should have gone here. I had earned a slot, but Emma hadn't, and I had wanted to stay with her. So, I had committed to Winslow.

Spending a year regretting that decision had changed my life in a lot of ways. Incipient heroing plans aside, things had been hard. I huffed a bit. Plus or minus a few weeks, it was a year since dad had sent me away to nature camp while he tried to pull himself back together. I had hated camp. Being surrounded by people and still being alone had sucked. Getting back to Brockton Bay had been worse though.

Emma was somebody else now. Somebody who hated me. Dad had tried to talk to Mr Barnes, but dad said he hadn't wanted to understand.

It was easier, thinking of Emma as who Emma was now, and Past Emma as if she was a separate person. I had come across a list on being an evil overlord while looking into cape villains. A required prerequisite for 'perfectly trusted' was 'posthumous'. While Emma was hilariously no where near the running, Past Emma, who was dead to me, qualified. It was sad but easier to think of her as dead to me.

Still, that was what brought me here, waiting, away from my lab, to try and get a transfer away from Emma and Sophia.

The pair of them were horrible people. The kind of people that would invent a puppy blender or something, and then falsely advertise it as a weight loss tool. Since the start of highschool, the bitches had been progressively making my life worse at school. Sticking it out as my original plan had been a terrible idea.

Powers spark during periods of stress. The internet said they were called Trigger Events.

Dad had been withdrawn and sullen, but he hadn't been able to miss me in the kitchen baking a thermolytic converter polymer in the oven.

He had called in sick for us both the next day, and he had refused to leave me alone until he had found out about Emma. And about him, for not being there for me.

Since Dad kept expecting me to flip out and try to sneak out to be a hero, he's been much more pressing on my personal life. I was grateful and resentful at the same time. He gave up some of his work on the dockworkers union. He still runs the docks, well, he's head of the dockworkers' union, which is almost the same thing, but he started making people volunteer on the weekends to keep ahead of union business.

He had refined my plans to get away from the bitches. Which had brought us to this point.

In addition to my recorder, my bag had copies and notes that I'd made of the bullying they'd done to me, the hateful emails, and a record of the times I'd reported it to Winslow faculty. Second to the recorder, that last bit was the most important, and brought a small smirk to my face.

'Paperwork,' dad had said, 'is how you make the other guy say thank you for bending them over their desk.' We had just been talking at the time. I think Dad had had a beer or two. Either way, he had blanched and immediately tried to rephrase that after he said it, but it was too late. I had been able to ask him to clarify what that meant, and provide numerous other questions to make him uncomfortable.

Winslow staff had refused to do anything for their responsibilities, so here I was, heroically sticking up for myself, by sitting in Arcadia's principal's office. I was smart, at least enough to have gotten into Arcadia, but I had gone to Winslow. That had been a mistake. Everything had gone to the dogs after that. Dad had been slipping away, Emma turned into a monster, recruited another monster, Sophia, and decided to turn the school against me. The whole while, Winslow ignored what was going on.

On the other hand, bureaucracy might let me escape through the cracks. After dad had gotten over the shock of things, he had started making plans. He had called Arcadia, and talked them into 30 min of their time with their principal, Mr Edgeworth. Dad and I were going to make the case that I deserved a transfer for my sophomore year. Mostly I had my excellent grades from middle school, a backpack of evidence that Winslow wasn't helping me, and dad's foresight to do this immediately after the end of the school year, before other people asked for slots for their kids. I suppressed a brief surge of resentment for these imaginary applicants. After some negative comments on people in general, dad kept trying to make me make friends for socializing and 'friendship'.

The secretary got our attention, interrupting my nervous thoughts, to let us into Mr Edgeworth's office.

As we had discussed, Dad started talking as we were sitting down. "Good morning Principal Edgeworth, I have two topics I'd like to discuss with you. They are both potentially delicate, and are interrelated. My daughter, Taylor, is struggling with the Winslow staff, due to personal issues, and I want to show you; to convince you that she both deserves a place at Arcadia, and that Winslow is incapable of treating her appropriately."

My dad then explained that there was a ongoing bullying campaign against me, and that the staff was unwilling to address the issue. Principal Edgeworth wasn't all that receptive. Dad had explained to me previously that this was our first hurdle, that we had to convince Edgeworth that our problem was worth him sticking his neck into a problem that really ought to be addressed between the district superintendent and principal Blackwell.

Dad explained, with accompanying letters and stuff, how I could have gone to Arcadia, and the ongoing awful emails I was getting, several every week, as well as an overview of the types of issues I generally had from Emma, Sophia, and the others.

Eventually, Principal Edgeworth did as dad predicted. He interrupted my dad, politely holding his hand to indicate he wanted dad to stop talking. "Mr Hebert, and Miss Hebert, I fully agree that you are presenting issues which ought to be addressed. However, this information needs to be presented in other forums. Please understand that Principal Blackwell is my peer, and not only do I have no oversight over Winslow, but intentionally attempting to undercut her administration would be inappropriate."

Then, it was my turn. The moment for me to do something ethically, well, edgy. Not that I would say that word, ever, in front of Principal Edgeworth. "I can prove to you that I cannot successfully get help from the superintendent?"

That got his attention, and while he appeared unsettled, he didn't throw us out, which is what we needed. I got out tape recorder, with my illegal recording. I explained a bit of what I had.
"Principal Blackwell has modified my school records, to ensure that I can't make trouble for Winslow. I need your help, not to make an issue of this, but I just want to get out of there."
Here it was, and he nodded slowly, so I pushed play.

"Emma and Sophia tripped and shoved me repeatedly today, said insulting things, and one of my school books was stolen from my locker." My voice came out of the recorder.

Blackwell's voice responded. "Ms Hebert, do you have any witnesses to any of these allegations that would support these claims?" I thought she sounded dismissive and insulting, but maybe I was biased.

"None that I believe would be truthful, although Mr Thomas from biology saw those two following me after class, even though their next class is in the other direction."

"I'll investigate these claims then Ms Hebert, but for now please return to your lunch."

There's the sound of me leaving, and the door closing. Then an intercom button, and Blackwell asks her secretary to come into her office. It's no longer surprising to me, I've listened to it many times. Blackwell orders her to mark down that I made false accusations against other students, and that I had lost a text book, in my school records. Additionally, she tells her to email Mark, the first name of my biology teacher, a reminder to avoid loitering in the halls to ensure that students do not have opportunity to vandalize the classrooms.

My dad starts talking, before Principal Edgeworth can. "I'm not looking to fight the school district, or unfairly advantage my daughter, but I'm sure that you can understand that I don't feel she is capable of succeeding as a student in her current environment. I don't need to see justice done, but I want to give her an actual chance to succeed in her education."

This is why I let the head of a union talk for me. Well, that and also because dad told me to let him talk. He stops and waits, because now we've put Principal Edgeworth on the spot. He has to know that however I made that recording, it's illegal. My dad and I wait, to avoid looking like we're trying to demand an answer, or worse, blackmail Principal Edgeworth.

He sighs, and collects himself. If dad hasn't told me to wait beforehand, I'd have already started talking.

"I think that, in light of the issues you've described, and the previous opportunity you had earned to attend Arcadia, I'd like to invite Taylor to interview here within the next month. If Ms Hebert's scholastic abilities appear to remain at a similar level to what her middle school grades demonstrate, then we may be able to provide an opening for her the fall."

I'm honestly a bit surprised it worked, and I can't think of anything to say. Thankfully, dad responds for us. "Thank you for hearing us out. Taylor will make the most of her opportunities."

"I would like to add one more thing before the two of you go. While I'm unaware of evidence suggesting inappropriate behavior on Taylor's part." He makes a knowing look at me and then dad. "I sympathize with the reasons that you desire a transfer, and hope that things can improve for your daughter. To be clear though, this is fresh start for Taylor, and a different school. Every student at Arcadia must understand that the school rules are upheld, fairly, by all staff, and I am willing to make that claim especially in light of your reasons to desire a transfer. Any attempt to illegally record the staff or students will be met with a harsh punishment or even immediate expulsion, as in accordance with our rules. For now though, good day, and please make arrangements with my secretary for a interview for acceptance. Each student is required to attend one when joining under unusual conditions, and I expect Taylor to do so as well." He finishes with a more than minimum smile, although not exactly joyful.

On my side of things, I'm very happy to follow my dad while he makes the arrangements for a week from now to do the official interview, and then we head home.
 
This is fresh and interesting, and Danny appears to be competent. Too short to tell what we are in for beyond Taylor interacting with the Wards and Dallons, but I like what I see so far.
 
Pretty interesting so far. I wonder how a Taylor in Arcadia will change things. I predict a wards Taylor, though things might go differently.
 
This is fresh and interesting, and Danny appears to be competent. Too short to tell what we are in for beyond Taylor interacting with the Wards and Dallons, but I like what I see so far.
I have some more chapters, but I felt like the whole point of having a buffer was to not dump them all into the thread at once. I figure I'll post one a day for a bit, and then fall off to maybe a week between posts.

I am flattered that you like it so far.

Pretty interesting so far. I wonder how a Taylor in Arcadia will change things. I predict a wards Taylor, though things might go differently.
I don't want to spoil things, so I'll just say that as far as the rails of canon go:
 
1.2 Tinkering and Other Specialties
1.2 Tinkering and Other Specialties
Even before we get home, my dad congratulates me, and reminds me that I need to study and brush up on my school work over the next week. I know it's because he cares, but really, I was literally there for the conversation, less than 30 min ago. I know he's worried, but I can understand why people think adults suffer from age induced decay of their mental faculties.

We get home, and I remind my dad that he already agreed that I could complete the stabilization step on my current work, and then I'll be able to take a break from tinkering in order to study as much as I need. Dad starts dinner and I head downstairs to basement, to my secret lair of heroics, and the washer and dryer, cause a load finished and dad manages to shrink anything he's allowed to put in the dryer.

After transferring the laundry to the dryer, I start on my tinkering. Currently, I was on my 23rd unit, which was just about to come out of the chemical bath that made it.

I thought I was a jello Tinker. It was the first thing I made, a jello based battery pack, that absorbed heat above a certain temperature and stored it as chemical energy. Eventually, I determined that I was a metastable polymer systems Tinker.

Researching everything had been a slog though. After reading stuff on the internet at the library, and then freaking out about about getting discovered over the internet, dad and I took an overnight trip to sightsee in Boston and also look up loads more stuff on the internet. Every Tinker has a specialty, such as Squealer, from the Merchants, who specializes in being a gross person and making vehicles. I wasn't as great, I could make giant amoebae, sort of. My dad called then bugs, and they sort of looked like it. They actually were more like ants, made from something that definitely wasn't at all like jello pudding, and was instead a super advanced smart polymer. I could program it to do stuff, such as avoid leaving the sewer lines, travel along chemical trails as laid out by algorithm to avoid meeting anybody, and absorb chemicals before returning home. They returned home reeking. Dad was responsible for putting them in the chemical bath to extract the precious minerals, because this was his plan to keep me safe, and even if it was a good plan, it still smelled.

Boron was the element I most frequently bottlenecked at during production, which all had to be done by hand or hand tools. That was the other downside to bring a Tinker. There are two kinds of Tinkers. Biotinkers can build stuff that's alive, and able to grow exponentially, and they get Kill Orders if they make self-reproducing creatures, so they don't do that. Then there are regular Tinkers, who spend their careers building ever larger equipment support facilities to keep ever more delicate pieces of tinkertech stable and reliable. Yeah, aside from the whole kill-orders and plagues, I was jealous of Biotinkers.

I opened the chemical bath, and pulled out number 23, and put him in his shell. This model has 6 stubby arms, and looked nothing like a turtle, regardless of what my dad said. I released it into the one way outward valve to go gather minerals and elements. There were 6 gatherer units waiting in the collection hopper. I set the chem bath to extract, but left the lid unlocked, and returned upstairs.

Dad and I ate dinner and he asked if I had more turtles ready to transfer to the chem tank. I ignored that, but did note aloud that 6 gatherer units has returned.

After dinner, I went into the living room, and started reviewing,like I was supposed to, for Arcadia. We had researched a lot after I triggered. Capes in Brockton Bay did not do well. Dad wanted very much for me to not do any heroing until I could join the Protectorate, and likely as not go to a good college in a safer city. We still argued, and it sucked, but I thought that it also kind of helped. I had agreed to not do heroics, and dad had backed off from forcing me to join the Wards or something else equally controlling. It helped that my power seemed more geared to a distributed role.

We had decided on a long term plan. I was really grateful he had actually listened to me, and it helped with the frustrations of not just going out there and making a difference. That was kind of a misleading thought anyway, the PRT and New Wave were barely holding on against the three gangs in town. Dad had convinced me that putting myself out there wasn't the best way to make a difference. There needed to be a change, and not just one more body fighting in the streets. I had two goals, and my dad agreed because they would both keep me reasonably safe. The first was drugs, which were an important tool for all the gangs, to one extent or another. The second was the boat graveyard. Dad had explained this in his parental way of 'use as an object-lesson-of-the-obvious-for-a-kid' about how the short term idea of forcing change by sinking a whole pile of boats and blocking the bay was a dumb idea, because nobody is willing to spend the time or money to clean up the mess. Real life examples from our hometown aside, that's where my gatherers came in. I'd increase my numbers over a couple years, while improving my understanding of my power, and improving my tinkertech. When I had a whole pile of them, and the sewers and water lines fully mapped, I'd contact the Protectorate to let them know, and then switch them from gathering minerals in the sewers to gathering drugs. Once I broke the drug trade in the bay, by converting all the drugs into more useful chemicals for my tinkering, I would reveal my cape ID to the public by ordering my minions to gather everything they could from the boat graveyard, and drop off everything in a dump outside of town. Those last two things would happen right before I left for college. I'd take all the improved designs, that I'd developed in the intervening years, but hadn't exposed, to create my cape identity as a proud hero of the Protectorate. My plans also had a small doodle of me ordering my minions to go forth, with me cackling the background, which was my dad's attempt at humor. The picture had me in a witch's hat, and with some of my creatures looking like flying monkeys.

More seriously though, capes die, and that was the real clincher in this plan. For whatever reason, the Wards all went on patrol, and my dad didn't want me doing that. Aegis was a Ward who could fly and had redundant biology. Dad said the reason his costume was red colored wasn't because it looked good. It was the same reason why there were very few pictures of him after fights. I wanted to make a difference and had been convinced that one more body in street brawls wouldn't help against say Lung, who got into a fight, solo, with Leviathan and survived.

Dad joined me, from putting the gatherers in the chem tank. He made a fire and and looked like he was going to make himself talk, which he did after settling into his chair. "Taylor, I think today went about as well as we could reasonably hope, and I'm proud of you for keeping your head."

"Yeah, thanks dad, I just wanted out of there, well, I mean, I'd like the bullies punished, but they don't matter as much as taking care of myself, rather than getting back at them." Go go gadget repeat-back-moral-lessons-my parents-taught-me-to-show-understanding. I think picked up on my sarcasm though, as he rolled his eyes.

"Has the fireplace being working out, with the jello bricks I mean?"

"The thermal conversion blocks are functioning well, I'll be replacing them with uncharged blocks in a few days."

The thermal conversion blocks, which aside from the first did not include any jello, were a part of how I stayed under the radar. Tinkers outed themselves two ways inherent to their powers. By gathering materials and using exorbitant amounts of power. I was slowly, and reasonably ramping up our home electricity usage, but I did two other things to help with the last bit. The first was this fireplace. Honestly, it was a sort of ugly part of the living room, but I had replaced internal brick walls of the fireplace with my thermal conversion blocks and they charged up chemical energy from the heat. Burning stuff isn't great, but it helps, and isn't obvious. The fireplace was designed for safety, and we had it running pretty much continuously. The second was my current project. I was designing a metastable polymer matrix that I would use to secretly replace the insulation in the house with an alternative material that was extremely insulating. I would use part of the power saved to run my gear. The chem bath was the most hungry, but the refiner also needed a lot of power, especially for heavier metals.

After a bit more questions on my tinkering, I moved to the kitchen table and studied Arcadia's curriculum to plan out what I needed to review over the next week, while dad pretended to read dockworker stuff, and mostly dozed on the couch. Life wasn't great, not without mom, but dad and I had each other and were doing OK.
 
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Well that's a very versatile use of jello. If she can keep it discrete she should make solar power slabs for roofing. Maybe piezoelectric blocks under the roads to get power from the movement of cars.
 
Heh, yeah, no way that plan is going to proceed uninterrupted.

Well, getting Taylor out of Winslow will not magically make her socially competent. Still, she does have the whole summer to get into mischief, and get it out of her system. However, on the cape side of things, she's presently the next best thing to immaterial and invisible.

Other plans will be soon interrupted though.

And there is Bakuda.

The bit with Bakuda is already written. That's the first time for me the characters really clicked for 'oh, screw the plot, this is what's going to happen instead'.

Don't get too eager though. In case it wasn't clear, this is close to a year before canon. Bakuda hasn't even triggered yet. Other stuff happens first.

Maybe piezoelectric blocks under the roads to get power from the movement of cars.
I can't believe I never thought of that.

Sigh

Well, everyone, here's the current tally in the 'Author vs Random Reader: Test of Intelligence' competition.

@globalwarmth
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@Tascion = (Taylor+Danny)



Anyway, as an aside, if any of you spot grammatical errors, please point them out for me.
 
1.3 Summer Projects
1.3 Summer Projects
Being overheated was worse than being too cold. I still had 45 or so minutes until dad would pick me up, and I had finished Arcadia's placement tests 30 or so minutes ago. The tests had been ok, hard but I thought I had worked out enough of the answers.

Rather than being left alone though, Principal Edgeworth had asked to speak with me, and so I was again in the waiting area outside his office.

Before I could calm down, his secretary motioned me to head inside, giving me a smile that I decided was meant to be reassuring.

He started talking even as I was sitting down. "Good morning, Taylor. You did well on the general knowledge portion of the exam. It was graded by machine while you were finishing the writing assessment. Since the math portion is by computer, well, that's graded automatically too. Of course, while I hope that your writing portion will be of the same quality, I can't comment one way or the other on how your complete assessment will be evaluated."

I think he was trying to be reassuring, so I tried to look politely pleased back while responding with a 'thanks'.

He then got more serious though, and folded his hands on his desk.

"I want to stress to you, Taylor, that just as we are giving you a chance, you need to give us one as well. Assuming things work out, I intend to place you in one of the smaller homerooms. My reasoning is twofold. First, to help you acclimate to Arcadia this coming year, and because I particularly trust Mrs Green to help with any difficulties. Please ensure you communicate with her, as she has not been informed of your reasons for transferring. I expect she is aptly capable of helping you get settled. The privacy rules of this school are held in very close scrutiny, and so, even though your experiences at Winslow have already been unpleasant, please do not assume you need to pursue extreme lengths to be treated fairly."

I figured he was referencing the rumor that the Wards were sent here as well. Appearing to be trying to unmask a Ward was probably a felony or something, and recording people likely counted if you pissed people off. I just wanted to get through high school at this point, so I tried to be diplomatic. "I think I understand Principal Edgeworth. I really appreciate you giving me that first chance explain why I wanted to come here to Arcadia. I will be a good student, and properly respectful of others and their privacy."

The conversation wasn't tense, but thankfully Principal Edgeworth didn't drag it out either, and let me go back to waiting out in the lobby for my dad.

Dad showed up and dropped me back at my home over his lunch break, and got back to tinkering. I wanted power armor. I could make units, I still refused to call them jello bugs, that could form interconnections. I was going to use this model for the house insulation, but in the long term, I could maybe make armor units that would form up around me, and then bond together, forming a sealed suit of armor. The reactive fibers would amplify my strength, and an outer layer of kinetically responsive gel would protect me. Well, it would protect me if I fell off a building or got hit by a car. I was still working on piercing weapons, such as bullets. I'd get there eventually, I had years and even while I was getting ready, I was still helping. My sewer maps were slowly developing and my gatherer units even worked to dislodge blockages.

Once I got enough units going, I'd possibly be one of the most valuable capes to the city. Criminals cost a lot of money, even when a cape puts them in jail. Unlike the city paying a hero to be able to then pay even more to house a criminal, I was saving them money in maintenance. Sewers may not be glamorous, but they are super expensive when they have to be replaced in the middle of a city. Also, most of them can't fit people in them, and have diameters measured in inches. Just fine for my units, but a hard fit for city maintenance.

I needed a cape name too, but there was no rush. I certainly wasn't going with Blob Woman or Minion Armor Girl.

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As the summer started to close, I had 35 units, though I had given up and was calling them turtles like my dad did. My turtle units had started forming an actual map of the city and I wanted better internet, which brought me to my current dinner topic with my dad. "I'd really like you to hear my reasoning as to why you should let me break into the city library and hack their internet." It was the ideal opening I felt, clearly stating my goals, but including that I felt I had convincing reasons for it that should be heard.

My dad clearly gave it some thought; well, not really. "No. If you need more information on cape activities, we can take another overnight trip Boston. Besides, you could take the chance to look at BU's campus."

I refused to accept the consolation prize. "I need an anonymous connection that works over the long term. I want to run a cable through the sewers, from the library to home, so for anybody tracking my activities, it looks like the library is where I'm using the computer."

Dad sighed as my excellent reasoning won him over. "OK, so aside from breaking, entering, and whatever stealing the internet is called, I can see why you'd want this. However, I've read about Thinkers and what they can do. I don't want any physical connection between the library and our house. It wouldn't surprise me if there was a parahuman who could touch one end of a cable and just know where the other end is located. A cape like that could do it without you even knowing, and then attack you, or worse, snatch you up, while you're on your way to school. Thoughts like that keep me up at night, so, you're going to have to convince me that you can be safe doing this OK?"

Honestly, the kidnapping thing kept me awake sometimes too, not that I'd admit it. Getting dad to agree to listen to multiple iterations was good enough though. "Alright, I'll come up with a plan, and once I have something I think will work, I'll run it by you."

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Maybe 9 days later, I had something I thought was workable. I'd make a new model of unit, ants, instead of turtles. The chemical trails the turtles already used for mapping didn't prevent them from bumping into each other. I'd make new models, possibly replacing the old ones as they wore out, and end up with ant gatherers that could communicate with each other out in the field. It would help with mapping, and they could encode messages that would get passed around. until one bumped into an ethernet cable I'd figure out how to run down from the library, into the sewers. It would log onto the internet, send and receive any messages, and then return to mapping. As it bumped into other any gatherers, they'd update each other. Eventually, new messages would arrive at home, and outgoing stuff would get to the library. No random parahuman my dad made up from paranoia could secretly trace me. I could still be tracked, but anybody doing so would have follow a route of miles to get back to my house. A discontinuous route that changed every time, as the individually random travels of my units weren't very smart and had to guess a lot to get back to me.
Additionally, if dad would let me branch out some more in designs, I'll do even better. I was creating improved designs from my tinkering. I could build some specialized units. Switch over to throwaway models for the cheap ones. The majority would simply pass information, map, and explore. Multisubunit polymer strings would encode information and be swapped between units. A few advanced models would appear identical to the normal ones, except for higher metal concentrations, and would be the only ones that would return home. I could put enzyme sacks in all of them. Any tampering, and they dissolve into, well something like jello. They weren't jello ants though. They wouldn't be edible, due to metal content.

Dad was concerned, but found my reasoning solid. I had to teach myself how to build an interface between Ethernet and my metastable polymer tinkering, but still it was a plan. My specialty was complex and awesome, and I could make it happen, although, the crime fighting was a bit more in the long term planning then I'd like.

A week later, and all I could say was that the ethernet protocol was written by demented rabbits that hated me, but I had an interface between my polymer systems and http over Ethernet.

It was time to put my plan into action.
 
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I wonder if someone triggering with original Taylor's power could use her ants. And if she'd suddenly have the internet in her head :D

Anyway this sounds like a pretty ingenious idea. To use an ant-trail as a relay for the internet. Though you'd need a strong enough broadcaster at the canal end of the library so it's not too obvious what's going on.
 
You realize that while IP technically can work over exotic medium like these ants, it would be so torturously slow that any sane HTTP server will timeout and drop your connection before TCP handshake can complete.

Something like a real life onion routing overlay network (like Tor or I2P) would be much more sensible for anonymisation purposes. If Danny wants to insist that any mundane tech is useless against Thinkers, just have the ants be wireless retransmitters, and distribute them over entire city so that the communication endpoints are obscured.
 
If Danny wants to insist that any mundane tech is useless against Thinkers
I've got an interlude on Danny, intended to give some perspective, but since it's not much of a spoiler, I'm fine just telling you.

Danny doesn't know how dangerous things really are, but knows that he doesn't know.

What his reasoning is based on and towards is that the more paranoid he can make Taylor, the more he believes he can keep her from wanting to be an active hero. If Taylor believes there are Thinkers lurking everywhere, on every street corner in reality and the internet, waiting to kidnap new Tinkers, then Danny expects he can keep her safer longer.

Also, if the Wards had a single cape that didn't patrol, Danny would've nearly punted Taylor into the building to get her there faster.


Finally, thank you @eternal-potato for pointing out a continuity error over how I handled the internet shenanigans in a section I hadn't even posted yet.

Please report to the defenestration floor of the building for your reward.
;-)
 
that seems awfully slow. Couldn't she just tap into a couple buildings ( library, cell tower, city hall) with a turtle tuned to an unique radio frequency each. Then you turn most of your sewer critters into radio relays. Broadcast in frequency A to connect to the library hookup switch to c for the basement of a cafe, etc.

It's basically a proxy network with no idea where is the exit node. Much faster than literal snail mail.
 
Unless the library is literally on the next block over from her house, the "sewer ethernet line" idea just won't work. Ethernet has a max range of about 300 feet or so before you have to put in a signal booster (aka a powered switch or hub) so you can go another 300 feet. Source: Category 6 cable - Wikipedia

Instead, she'd do much better trying to piggyback off neighborhood wifi networks, changing which one she's using frequently.
 
Unless the library is literally on the next block over from her house, the "sewer ethernet line" idea just won't work. Ethernet has a max range of about 300 feet or so before you have to put in a signal booster (aka a powered switch or hub) so you can go another 300 feet. Source: Category 6 cable - Wikipedia

Instead, she'd do much better trying to piggyback off neighborhood wifi networks, changing which one she's using frequently.
They're already using other system but bear in mind it would have been bullshit jellatin tinker cable. For all we know it could've been a superconductor.
 
They're already using other system but bear in mind it would have been bullshit jellatin tinker cable. For all we know it could've been a superconductor.
If it's a superconductor that works at room temperature, she's already rich and doesn't know it. Patent it, sell manufacturing rights to Dragon, sit back, and watch the money roll in. The value of a room temperature superconductor that can be mass produced is almost impossible to place, other than "extremely high".
 
If it's a superconductor that works at room temperature, she's already rich and doesn't know it. Patent it, sell manufacturing rights to Dragon, sit back, and watch the money roll in. The value of a room temperature superconductor that can be mass produced is almost impossible to place, other than "extremely high".
Well, it's still tinker tech. Unfortunately it's not mass production capable until dragon or Masamune get their hands on it.
 
Guys, your missing the point.

It isn't that her connection is slow, she doesn't have a connection. She's literally mailing in where she wants to go and what she wants to see and then waiting minutes to hours to get a mail back. It's not so much a connection as one guy with a print screen button who then faxes the results to her on a random schedule.
 
Guys, your missing the point.

It isn't that her connection is slow, she doesn't have a connection. She's literally mailing in where she wants to go and what she wants to see and then waiting minutes to hours to get a mail back. It's not so much a connection as one guy with a print screen button who then faxes the results to her on a random schedule.
I quite like your analogy. You've double posted though, so maybe delete one?

As to specifics on how this connection ends up working, I think I should refrain from commenting on detail.

I will say that all of you are right in that it's a fairly complex thing to manage.
 
1.4 Interlude 1: Danny
1.4 Interlude 1: Danny
Dad told me once that it's hard sometimes, accepting when your children outgrow you. That had been our first real conversation after I left behind the fishing work he did for a job on the docks. It had been the right choice, but I had acted against his advice, on my better judgement. He'd been angry for a few days, and that's what he had told me afterwards.

I was deeply grateful I'd pulled enough myself back together to not yet have to tell Taylor the same thing. I could put it off for a while longer yet.

I leaned back into my chair and had another sip of coffee. Lunch could stretch out a few more minutes. The office was quiet today anyway.

Taylor folded into herself after Annette died. I had too, booze too, to my shame. If not for chance that led to me catching her in one of her Tinker fugues while she was baking some Styrofoam stuff in the oven, I don't know if I would have stopped avoiding life.

It had been rough, between dealing with that and whatever had happened to Emma. Rougher for Taylor though. Trying to help, being the adult, that had helped me. I had talked to Alan, and well, I didn't recognize him anymore. I guess people grow apart, even as friends. He couldn't handle Emma being anything other than 'fine' now.

I hadn't approached him the right way. Not that I could have seen it coming. He couldn't accept what was the reality of his life. He couldn't admit to failing to protect his family, his 'way of life'. Something had twisted Emma, somehow. I got the impression she had been threatened over that summer, but even that was a challenge. Alan would barely say more than that Emma was 'fine, now'.

I wasn't fine, and neither was Taylor. Pretending or drifting through my own troubles was just going to screw her up as bad as whatever Alan was doing to Emma.

I made myself talk to her, and then actually addressed my own problems. I went and got drunk with Lacey, until she started talking to me about how I was screwing up, and I was out of it enough to listen. Kurt was a blockhead about stuff, but they were a good couple. Working with them that fall to throw some BBQs for the Union, was something to help me reconnect, and it was good for the Union anyway.

Emma was probably the second worst thing for Taylor now, after the doldrums I had let myself slip into. As Emma started taking her life's problems out on Taylor, well, Taylor had to grow up some in a particularly harsh way, much as I hated that. People can be terrible, and I started telling her more about how the dockworkers survived and earned our limited successes. We weren't a gang, and I made clear to her the same way I made clear to the men themselves as to how we weren't going to cross the lines of decency. It helped, some, letting her see how to survive and achieve, even when people try to drag you down. The gangs tried on the docks, and the bullies tried in school. In both cases, don't start anything, but don't be a doormat. Take the little victories and make the goal to solve the problem legally, which is as permanent as you can ensure in this world.

Eventually though, well, Taylor needed some lessons from Annette, because the school refused to take responsibility. Annette had lied to Taylor when my baby girl had been little, and I had backed that story. People do stupid things for their kids, especially out of love. Annette had run with Lustrum for a while, but gotten out before that feminist movement had turned violent. At least that's what she told Taylor. Since I had picked her up in my truck the day she had gotten herself out of the group, and that had been near a burning office complex, it wasn't really an accurate accounting of things. Well Annette had wanted Taylor to be braver and smarter than she herself had actually been, and so that first accounting had been the story she wished had been true. Maybe the right way of doing things, like stories of Santa, to teach the lessons that matter, maybe not.

Taylor was old enough to understand regret, and, I think, to understand why Annette and I had lied. Still, the point was, there are things that are worth more than the law, but that they'll drag you even past decency if it's all you can cling too.

I let her take one of her Tinker things to school, to start recording audio. Eventually Blackwell, that bastard, had let slip much she just didn't care about Taylor's problems, or about actually running a school.

Taylor's first plan, to go public, might have worked, but still, youth and vigor is beaten by old age and cunning. Going public was at least the third option. Most people don't go into education for the the pay. Even if Winslow was the dregs, most teachers were decent people and usually principals were former teachers. I talked Principal Edgeworth into a meeting and worked things out.

He had been pretty disturbed about the illegal recording, and that would have been much worse if Taylor hadn't disguised her Tinker device in a casing of a tape recorder. I had counted on him believing that he was less of an accessory if he didn't ask how Taylor had a recording of Blackwell after Taylor had left her office.

To be fair, Edgeworth had done the right thing, which was help the people that he could. He got Taylor a slot into Arcadia, after confirming she could handle it, and didn't blame her for showing how the system had failed her.

Setting the coffee mug on my desk, after absentmindedly draining it, I started cleaning up the little tupperware that had my leftovers and had been my lunch.

Actually, given that Edgeworth had let Taylor into Arcadia, I figure it meant the Wards didn't actually go to Arcadia. It made sense, send the kids with secret identities to any school but the one advertised as 'the school for kids with secret identities'. Still, Edgeworth had taken a risk, not making a fuss about the recording, and had done decent by one of the kids that was now a student in his school.

Taylor's powers was the quiet gorrilla in the room for me. Researching that had nearly pushed me back into drinking in a bad way, or confiding in Kurt, or Lacey. Six months, that's the average time that a kid like her makes it on their own. The Protectorate plays up, hard, how well they take care of the Wards. I did some research though, and the Youth Guard, nanny organization that they were, didn't let every bit of good publicity slide without forcing some reality into the news.

Especially in the Bay, the Wards were basically fully active capes, not just getting 'training' until they joined the Protectorate. If there was a single Ward that has ever actually declined to go out on patrol, I was unaware of it. Maybe it was their powers. To be fair, there was some stuff suggesting that powers had to be used, but I doubted it, especially for Tinkers. Taylor would spend all her time in the basement tinkering if she could. I'm sure Kid Win, or at least his parents, would rather he built himself a full suit of power armor, and a flight device that wasn't an accident waiting to happen, unlike his surfboard thing. This city had a cape called Fog, some kind of living toxic and corrosive gas, and the majority the Wards didn't even wear full face masks. After finding one article on Gallant being involved in a fight that involved Fog, well, the Wards weren't looking great for being 'training', as opposed to being child soldiers that the more hysterical posters on the Youth Guard forums frequently feared they might be.

Thankfully Taylor was fairly burned on government authority from Winslow. I think getting official help only after breaking the law was the sinker on that.

Although, I paused while balling up a napkin for the trash, it might have been that I hadn't expressed any guilt over it? I am, or at least should be, one of the primary authority figures in her life. Maybe I should talk to her about that?

Well, at least I had time. I was deeply grateful to any and all powers that be that Taylor had to build what she wanted to use. She had to be patient. After showing her enough stories of others kids that didn't make it, as awful as it made me feel to seek such information out, she has become cautious in her plans.

I had eventually come to a sort of peace about her goals. Heroes don't live long, but I wanted her to live smart, for as long she could. In most cases, that's about as much as any parent can ask anyway. My goal was for her to be the first parahuman to die of old age, ideally surrounded by family. Maybe with taking down some criminals in the meantime, but that was a lot less important.

Of course, hassling some idiots doing a purse snatch is a good thing. Instead, partly out of her new paranoia, Taylor wants to break into a government building and compromise their infrastructure. Do I let Taylor's first mission be to break into the library where she has her own library card? Better information would help us both, but the more she was exposed, the more that 6 month number for independents stuck out to me. Ignoring the legality of it, as it was an almost victimless crime, she wanted to talk on the internet without doing so from our home. However, 'ignoring the legality of it' was already crossing a line, and the wrong one to not worry about.

Additionally, I wasn't quite out of touch enough yet to not have heard about getting your identity stolen online, and I just knew there had to be capes watching for the naive and neophyte. At least Taylor didn't require huge amounts of metal, her turtle things were mostly carbon, apparently. Instead of trying to dodge whatever fuckers were watching scrapyards, a few boxes of school supplies and she had enough graphite to get started, and they could then soak up stuff, well, small molecules she said, from sewage. Gross, but discreet in a way that hauling an engine block out of junker could never be.

Information, Taylor just wanted more information. I wanted to keep her safe, but not quite secluded enough that she did the stupid teenager thing of trying to prove herself. The library job; it was reasonable enough in the end I suppose. Taylor didn't get how bad the latency was going to be yet, but I figured I could compromise now and let her maybe make some internet friends or something. I expected 9 out of 10 of them to be creepy older men, but, I was likely being unreasonable.

I would approve of a good plan, as long as I couldn't imagine a parahuman, with a rank of 5 or less, that could track her.

God, and Annette, I hope I am being smart about this.
 
Well, he's actually pretty smart about. He's giving Taylor's shard problems to solve, a conflict of sorts to overcome so she should be good in that regard. Unlike Panacea.
 
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