(OOC) Egon System Investigation post-mortem.
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Alright, so let's talk about the Egon System Investigation, which has been a matter of concern for the questers. We're going to be looking at this from several aspects (this is also going to stray a little beyond Egon itself into how we dealt with the aftermath):
Military: kinda overkill, but in terms of military result, it was utter domination. TF Soyeon had enough firepower to hit the pirate base, and the numbers to set cordon and prevent any pirates from fleeing. Leaving Daniel behind to do his intel magic got Yui the investigation leads for Malusial and SA-Caledfwlch, Konnie was able to stomp the pirates hard, and the marine detachments from the all the ships involved + VSS's troops, plus a couple of Rabid Foxes with Major Ueda's IRG team rolled up the resistance inside the pirate base fairly quickly, before the pirates could really dig in.
On the other hand, it led to ramifications in the political aspect. (I did say the smaller your force, the more discreet it was...) Like, as I've said before: this is the equivalent of the US 7th Fleet sending a carrier battle group to go do fact-finding in San Francisco. I really did not expect y'all to choose this. This was not optimal for getting a perfect run.
Political: Well, we know what happened: Yui brought a goddamn invasion fleet to Egon, 4th Fleet leadership thought Yui was invading and launching a coup and Kanda in all his paranoia got tilted, Konnie and Himeno nearly came to blows... That said, here some good decisions were made; choosing to Disclose to Kanda and Johnny has served to relieve his suspicions, and he is no longer paranoid that Yui sus. He's also weak to Yui making moccachino for him, just the way he likes it. Not gonna lie, this was an area where you could have chosen poorly and gotten penalised for it, but it went about as well as could be. Choosing to Probe Kanda Gently was the right choice, building up from the softening of his attitude after going Disclosure; if y'all had decided to aggressively probe him you'd have gotten his tail up and annoyed him and he'd have been less forthcoming that what we got. Instead of a heart to heart conversation (one where Yui held Shiki's hand and squuezed it at least four times, the utter deviant), you'd have gotten a lot of stonewalling and deflection. (As opposed to a mostly sincere conversation, albeit influenced by Kanda's salt and biases.)
So let's talk about some other possibilities:
Had you all chosen [ ] Small Task Force or [ ] Medium Task Force , we'd skip the issues with 4th Fleet and Kanda's complaint would never happen, because he wouldn't have gotten tilted by a cruiser squadron (4 CL) or a cruiser group (4 CA + 8 CL). I should note that I had Konnie allude to her preferred choice in the narrative:
I don't think anybody picked up on that at the time, though. Maybe I need to be more explicit in the narration when I'm evaluating whether a choice was good or bad.
Small TF would have meant that Yui would have left 2 CLs in Egon to investigate and taken 2 CLs to escort her back to Jinko-sei; this means that the joint IN-VSS force is hitting the pirate base with 2 IN CLs, 2 VSS DDs, and 3 VSS armed merchantmen, which is yikes. The senior CL skipper would try to YOLO and eventually succeed, but VSS and IN take damage, at least half the pirate ships escape and by the time the pirate base is secured, they've managed to destroy evidence, so the only investigation lead you'd get is Malusial. Still, who knows: We might well meet the the Duke of Malusial's daughters, Lady Siti Nuratago binti Zekhar-Curchille and Lady Siti Nurtakao binti Zekhar-Curchille, some time in the future...
Medium TF means 4 CA, 8 CL, 1 BC (Konnie's flagship Kongo). Returning to Jinko-sei (2CA 2CL)and leaving Konnie's stay-behind force means that she'd have 1BC 2CA 4CL assault force and 2CL guard force. Note spreadsheet below to compare force levels:
The Med TF's pirate base subjugation force is indeed smaller (this isn't counting VSS' 2 DDs and 3 armed merchantmen as partner force tho). It's not overwhelming firepower, but it's still enough to deal with the pirates and seize the base (and you don't tilt Kanda), and you'll still get the Malusial and SA-Caledfwlch leads. There's a chance one of the pirate ships slips away, but it's slim and anyhow VSS is alright to mop up any stragglers.
I should think it goes without saying that you made the right decision to leave Daniel and Konnie behind in Egon to investigate. If you left either of them alone, or done a complete pullout, you'd be coming back straight away to the capital with an incomplete picture of the situation. (I'll let you all imagine how badly that could have played out.) It's also a good thing nobody voted to confiscate VSS's weapons; best case, Lee Bashkan would have gouged Konnie and Daniel more for VSS' assistance (as it was, ITL he charged them a reasonable price with a reasonable profit). But eh, that's not really a big deal.
"Whiskey what if we had taken the Medium Task Force overall?"
Ah, roads not taken. So, you'd have sidestepped the problem of Kanda getting tilted and demandingsatisfaction explanations. Reports would have been made to 4th Fleet, Konnie would have been asked to keep her task force in Egon till Himeno got there, and then when Daniel got back to the capital and reported the results to Yui, you'd have gotten the option of joint investigations with 4th Fleet's intel people, looking into Malusial or SA-Caledfwlch. (You may assume that right now, 4th Fleet are not sitting on their asses and are in fact doing their own investigations.)
Tl;dr: Military overkill triggered political consequences, but just about managed to salvage the situation, helped by how Egon was, as I always saw it, the tutorial arc of this quest. It was something of a wakeup call, to give the readers a taste of consequences, intended and otherwise, to their actions. In the absolute worst case if y'all had managed to really screw things up with Kanda, Johnny would have stepped in to mediate and talk him down, but Candy wouldn't be talking to Yui for a while, and if you'd chosen to reach out to Navy friends for assistance with your intel team, Kanda would have told you to go piss up a rope.
And to think this all started with the reasoning of "we need to be careful, better be fully prepared..." Danger, risk and opportunity comes in many forms.
I should also note, by the way, that we are no longer playing with a safety net. Y'all fuck up means you gotta deal with the consequences of your actions.
Military: kinda overkill, but in terms of military result, it was utter domination. TF Soyeon had enough firepower to hit the pirate base, and the numbers to set cordon and prevent any pirates from fleeing. Leaving Daniel behind to do his intel magic got Yui the investigation leads for Malusial and SA-Caledfwlch, Konnie was able to stomp the pirates hard, and the marine detachments from the all the ships involved + VSS's troops, plus a couple of Rabid Foxes with Major Ueda's IRG team rolled up the resistance inside the pirate base fairly quickly, before the pirates could really dig in.
On the other hand, it led to ramifications in the political aspect. (I did say the smaller your force, the more discreet it was...) Like, as I've said before: this is the equivalent of the US 7th Fleet sending a carrier battle group to go do fact-finding in San Francisco. I really did not expect y'all to choose this. This was not optimal for getting a perfect run.
Political: Well, we know what happened: Yui brought a goddamn invasion fleet to Egon, 4th Fleet leadership thought Yui was invading and launching a coup and Kanda in all his paranoia got tilted, Konnie and Himeno nearly came to blows... That said, here some good decisions were made; choosing to Disclose to Kanda and Johnny has served to relieve his suspicions, and he is no longer paranoid that Yui sus. He's also weak to Yui making moccachino for him, just the way he likes it. Not gonna lie, this was an area where you could have chosen poorly and gotten penalised for it, but it went about as well as could be. Choosing to Probe Kanda Gently was the right choice, building up from the softening of his attitude after going Disclosure; if y'all had decided to aggressively probe him you'd have gotten his tail up and annoyed him and he'd have been less forthcoming that what we got. Instead of a heart to heart conversation (one where Yui held Shiki's hand and squuezed it at least four times, the utter deviant), you'd have gotten a lot of stonewalling and deflection. (As opposed to a mostly sincere conversation, albeit influenced by Kanda's salt and biases.)
So let's talk about some other possibilities:
Had you all chosen [ ] Small Task Force or [ ] Medium Task Force , we'd skip the issues with 4th Fleet and Kanda's complaint would never happen, because he wouldn't have gotten tilted by a cruiser squadron (4 CL) or a cruiser group (4 CA + 8 CL). I should note that I had Konnie allude to her preferred choice in the narrative:
"Cruiser task group," says Konnie unhesitatingly. "One heavy cruiser squadron, two light cruiser squadrons, a dozen ships max. Small enough for me to escape notice, but with enough juice to take on pirates and win. Even if they have actual warships, I'd put any one of our cruisers against two of theirs at least, and it's not as if we have dozens of pirate vessels just hanging around looking to pick a fight.
I don't think anybody picked up on that at the time, though. Maybe I need to be more explicit in the narration when I'm evaluating whether a choice was good or bad.
Small TF would have meant that Yui would have left 2 CLs in Egon to investigate and taken 2 CLs to escort her back to Jinko-sei; this means that the joint IN-VSS force is hitting the pirate base with 2 IN CLs, 2 VSS DDs, and 3 VSS armed merchantmen, which is yikes. The senior CL skipper would try to YOLO and eventually succeed, but VSS and IN take damage, at least half the pirate ships escape and by the time the pirate base is secured, they've managed to destroy evidence, so the only investigation lead you'd get is Malusial. Still, who knows: We might well meet the the Duke of Malusial's daughters, Lady Siti Nuratago binti Zekhar-Curchille and Lady Siti Nurtakao binti Zekhar-Curchille, some time in the future...
Medium TF means 4 CA, 8 CL, 1 BC (Konnie's flagship Kongo). Returning to Jinko-sei (2CA 2CL)and leaving Konnie's stay-behind force means that she'd have 1BC 2CA 4CL assault force and 2CL guard force. Note spreadsheet below to compare force levels:
The Med TF's pirate base subjugation force is indeed smaller (this isn't counting VSS' 2 DDs and 3 armed merchantmen as partner force tho). It's not overwhelming firepower, but it's still enough to deal with the pirates and seize the base (and you don't tilt Kanda), and you'll still get the Malusial and SA-Caledfwlch leads. There's a chance one of the pirate ships slips away, but it's slim and anyhow VSS is alright to mop up any stragglers.
I should think it goes without saying that you made the right decision to leave Daniel and Konnie behind in Egon to investigate. If you left either of them alone, or done a complete pullout, you'd be coming back straight away to the capital with an incomplete picture of the situation. (I'll let you all imagine how badly that could have played out.) It's also a good thing nobody voted to confiscate VSS's weapons; best case, Lee Bashkan would have gouged Konnie and Daniel more for VSS' assistance (as it was, ITL he charged them a reasonable price with a reasonable profit). But eh, that's not really a big deal.
"Whiskey what if we had taken the Medium Task Force overall?"
Ah, roads not taken. So, you'd have sidestepped the problem of Kanda getting tilted and demanding
Tl;dr: Military overkill triggered political consequences, but just about managed to salvage the situation, helped by how Egon was, as I always saw it, the tutorial arc of this quest. It was something of a wakeup call, to give the readers a taste of consequences, intended and otherwise, to their actions. In the absolute worst case if y'all had managed to really screw things up with Kanda, Johnny would have stepped in to mediate and talk him down, but Candy wouldn't be talking to Yui for a while, and if you'd chosen to reach out to Navy friends for assistance with your intel team, Kanda would have told you to go piss up a rope.
And to think this all started with the reasoning of "we need to be careful, better be fully prepared..." Danger, risk and opportunity comes in many forms.
I should also note, by the way, that we are no longer playing with a safety net. Y'all fuck up means you gotta deal with the consequences of your actions.