SAVEFILE 28
- Location
- Portugal
- Pronouns
- She/They
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It was over. Louise inhaled deeply, closing her eyes, then exhaled, tipping her head back. She shifted on her feet, not feeling what was surely a sprained ankle. Above, a blue and a red bar hovered. Her Willpower was nearly depleted. Her life hadn't gotten nearly that empty. Louise had not let it. Still, more than a half was gone and, as she looked, she thought she saw it replenishing just a tiny little bit. So little it was hard to say if it had been her imagination or not.
Louise did not have time to muse on that, or even to read the four or so other figments that surrounded her before Montmorecy de Montmorency was on her with all the furious worry of a healer whose warnings and instructions had been purposefully ignored. Which, to be fair, they had been. The blonde had been shouting, pleading for them to stop from the moment Sébastien had stomped on Louise's downed form. If she had tried to step in, she'd most likely than not get hit herself, and if she'd tried to use magic, she might have hit Louise.
"You! You reckless idiot of a fool!" She snarled, wand drawn and already tracing the movements for diagnostic and healing spells. Louise reached out and grabbed her wrist, begging her to stop. Montmorency's eyes nearly sparked in fury. "What do you think you're doing?"
She tried to free her wrist, but the shorter girl's grip was too strong. "Just five minutes." She signaled the waiting Sébatien with her head. The man was watching the exchange with a mirthful smile. "Let us just conclude our business first." Also, she would rather the figment of her life recovered more before the water mage found her injuries… or worse, didn't find them.
"You're hurt." Montmorency poked her in the middle of the chest, where Louise had been stomped on.
"Less than what you think." Louise smiled, not giving any sign the touch had bothered her. Which it hadn't. "This is good armor."
A bit at a loss, but unwilling to back down, Montmorency stepped back to position herself right next to Louise's elbow. "Fine, hurry it up."
"You done flirting, Lass?" Teased Sébastien, who chuckled as Montmorency's face colored and she took a step away from Louise.
The pink-haired girl just groaned exasperatedly. "I'm not flirting, Founder…. Anyway!" She cleared her throat and tilted her chin up to meet the inn owner's eyes. "How was that? Do I have 'what it takes'?"
The former mercenary hummed. His fingers beat a staccato rhythm on his wandsword's hilt. "It wasn't bad," he finally said, a grin growing beneath his beard, "for a rookie."
"For a rookie, hm?" Louise huffed, but her shoulders relaxed. A smile danced in the air between the two swordsmen.
Sébastien continued, expounding on what he'd noticed during the fight. "Technically, you are very good. You also have the strength and the physical resilience to back up your skills. Your magic wasn't the strongest for a Line mage, but it was fast and clean. And more importantly than all that, you kept calm and focused regardless of the situation your found yourself in. That was good, Lass. Very good." Louise beamed. "However." Louise's smile dimmed. "Your magic may be fast, but you yourself are slow. Dreadfully slow. I wasn't even trying to be very fast there at the end and you still couldn't keep up. Everything else is useless if you aren't fast enough to apply it."
Louise winced in remembrance at how pressed she had been. "So what I lack is speed?"
"No, more than just speed. You lack… nimbleness. You are stiff and clumsy. To keep your balance you sink down because you are unable of shifting your weight. Frankly, you move more like an earth mage than a wind mage." He paused, fingers tapping as he thought. "Those kind of tactics are terrible. Honestly, if you weren't capable of wielding that sword as you are, I'd tell you to get something lighter, but it looks like brute force is just your way to go." Montmorency nodded to herself, thinking about Louise's explosions. Despite her earlier complaints she was listening attentively. Louise herself couldn't help but picture the pure destruction her mother brought to the field with raw willpower alone. She mused on the power that could be brought to bear once such raw brute strength was controlled and directed. Sébastien continued. "And you also lack something else. Experience."
Louise couldn't help an ironic smile. "I am well aware. Perhaps we could have another spar later?" This bout had not only given her experience for completing the quest, but also a considerably large amount of experience by itself.
"What!?" Yelled Montmorency.
Sébastien laughed deep from his belly. That brat! He hadn't been so entertained by wannabe in years. "As enjoyable as that would be, I do have a business to run, Lass. Maybe next time you come around these parts I might take you up on that offer. It's not everyday that you get somebody's permission to beat the crap out of them." He chuckled at the cute scowl on her face, removing his gloves and sheathing his swordwand. "But now you should probably deal with your girl friend. Come inside when you're finished."
And he reentered the inn, abandoning Louise to Montmorency, who was quickly reaching her boiling point.