DarkKing98
Certified Village Idiot
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- USA
This is SV. I expect no lewds with the two. So I'm ok with it. I like innocent, cute relationship stuff.
Libra's Lament, a Magical Girl Quest [Complete]
- Thread starter Naron
- Start date
- Original
- Location
- behind you
Besides Naron dislikes such things too. There is a line that shouldnt be crossed.
- Location
- The Garden
And they are related.
Like I know it's a thing in stories mostly in Japan and while I don't know Naron's stance on this, SV won't allow for anything explicit. I'm fine if they're together in the sense of sisters loving each other forever like family even if they don't find anyone special.
EDIT: and there's the answer on Naron's stance. Ninja Dragou.
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DarkKing98
Certified Village Idiot
- Location
- USA
Is this where I say 'you can't spell wincest without incest'? Or is that at some other point in time?
- Location
- behind you
Yeah it is one thing if they arent related and adults, but even then it is a bit more rare for him to write such a thing and NEVER anything explicit or something of that. He is a bit reserved in that regard, but that isnt a bad thing.
PS: The love you discribed is the only logical in this story and the most we will see. If I consider his personality in that point.
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DarkKing98
Certified Village Idiot
- Location
- USA
I, personally, want to see one of the twins have a crush on someone.
Why you ask? Because I want to see how the mental link will effect the other.
Why you ask? Because I want to see how the mental link will effect the other.
*Walks in* 
That's uhh... well, first off, you guys are getting into the "Thou doth protest too much" levels, so you're honestly the ones making it creepy. I suggest you just stop while you're... well, I would say "ahead" but you're not.
Second off, yanderes can be platonic/familial, so you're arguments in shooting it down are kind of flawed anyway.
That's uhh... well, first off, you guys are getting into the "Thou doth protest too much" levels, so you're honestly the ones making it creepy. I suggest you just stop while you're... well, I would say "ahead" but you're not.Second off, yanderes can be platonic/familial, so you're arguments in shooting it down are kind of flawed anyway.
DarkKing98
Certified Village Idiot
- Location
- USA
I have never seen a 'platonic' yandere.*Walks in*
Second off, yanderes can be platonic/familial, so you're arguments in shooting it down are kind of flawed anyway.
- Location
- In a Fantasy
- Location
- In a Fantasy
That's cause people/creators focus too much on the killer stalker girl or the sweet with some moments girl
DarkKing98
Certified Village Idiot
- Location
- USA
Ok then.
What do you think a yandere even is? Honestly curious here.
DarkKing98
Certified Village Idiot
- Location
- USA
*glares at the abyss*
We need a plan.
An actual solid plan.
One that's PERFECTLY INCHARACTER. Any ideas?
We need a plan.
An actual solid plan.
One that's PERFECTLY INCHARACTER. Any ideas?
How best to put it... Selfish love taken to a literally insane level? Sounds about right.
Genocide?
Moon/Eva healed herself. *Shrug* Can't really fix that unless we want to stab ourself. And Naron even decided to be nice and not make it so when one transforms the other does as well.
DarkKing98
Certified Village Idiot
- Location
- USA
...every time you mention genocide, the more I honestly begin thinking you have a genocide fetish.
You know this is actually the only quest... well I won't say it's the only one I have, cause I may have done it before, but it's the only one I am suggesting Genocide in.
Humanity sucks, but not enough to subject to Hell, so let's just kill them all!
DarkKing98
Certified Village Idiot
- Location
- USA
...*sighs*
Humanity does not suck. I may be a pessimist but I'm not someone who'd go evil overlord the moment I have the power too.
Speaking of power, we don't have enough for that in character.
So, no, not a solid fucking plan.
- Location
- behind you
My plan is simple. Hope that our mother wont hate/kill us and that we can archieve a bit more, before Naron throws us out of our nice hometown. And then ... somehow stay alive without make everyone our enemy. Like I said i dont see us gaining anything from genocid or give them to hell. With coorparation and creating an own force (maybe even parts of other humans on our side) to survive and MAYBE creating an own fraction, that can survive.
Dragonloli123
Bonedad
- Location
- Fifth Layer of the Abyss
While I'd honestly prefer no relationship stuff at all but if you guys are set on it then I'm gonna have to inform you that since OP based the protags on Neptunia characters I'm obligated to fight against Het with everything I have.
Also to all of you saying MGs need humanity to reproduce it's like you forgot about MAGIC.
Also to all of you saying MGs need humanity to reproduce it's like you forgot about MAGIC.
- Location
- Earth
First of all... guys 
How and why did you start discussing a pair of ten-year-old twins having an incestuous relationship?
Secondly, no, this will definitely not happen. @Dragou was spot-on.
Thirdly, no pairings at all that contain ten-year-olds. Maybe one of the girls will have a childish crush on someone older than her, but that is not the case right now... and those two are more the types to cling onto older people as if they were older siblings if they like them.
How and why did you start discussing a pair of ten-year-old twins having an incestuous relationship?
Secondly, no, this will definitely not happen. @Dragou was spot-on.
Thirdly, no pairings at all that contain ten-year-olds. Maybe one of the girls will have a childish crush on someone older than her, but that is not the case right now... and those two are more the types to cling onto older people as if they were older siblings if they like them.
You should see where the Ebon quest went in discussion despite nothing of the sort mentioned.
Potty minds going to pot.
- Location
- Earth
I know, I was there.
Edit: By the way, I am still in a good mood.
Here, have an Interlude.
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Interlude - The Second Russian Push
- Location
- Earth
Karina looked down at the map, then back up at the commander of her current operation. Then she wondered why high command wanted them to do all the heavy lifting again. She had really hoped that 2005 would be different than the previous year, even though the first few months had already been taxing again.
"So... just to be clear...", Talia noted next to her, a frown on her face. "We are expected to push through the European defenses along the border and hold a corridor of two hundred square kilometres... supported by eight thousand of your men?"
The greying commander nodded slightly at her, sneering like most people did around Magical Girls. Like her mother did...
"Yes, ma'am. High command is tying up the European defenses in other places, so a concentration of force such as the four of you should be enough to open a path. The platoons sent with you are mostly meant to take hold of any useful infrastructure on the way."
Again with the difficult words... Karina sighed inwardly. She was only fourteen, the girls around her not much older or younger.
Nonetheless, there were four of them. They were a team.
And they were the jewel of Russian military might. With how many troops and Magical Girls were pushing into the motherland from the south and east however, they had to go west for some reason. Other girls more fit for taking out VIPs would take care of the invaders.
Well, Birgit would be there if they had not taken her along.
Speaking of which, the German girl kept staring at the map and had her face all scrunchy; she was probably thinking about all of this.
As for Milena... the youngest of their group and Karina's only actual sister was currently wrapped up in a warm blanket and slept peacefully; she spent a lot of time healing the wounded again, her magic regrowing limbs thought lost and saving lives left and right.
At least they had a few hours before their deployment would begin... the girl needed her rest. And frankly, so did all of them. The constant fighting and killing put a strain on all of them... but Talia most of all, seeing that Karina could not keep her from the brunt of it.
Karina herself was... mostly fine, for some reason. She did not see death as something entirely negative, as everyone and everything would die eventually. But she knew that her Australian comrade often woke up from nightmares.
Hours passed as the troops prepared, their operation set for the following day, the tenth of May. A lone tank division was checked and the four girls this operation would depend on rested, huddled together as if there were no difference between them.
At this point, there really was not. They were sisters in arms, bound by something that ran deeper than blood.
"Advancing, no enemy in sight." Karina kept close to Talia as the blazing red girl continued forwards right above the front of their soldiers. Her own, more bland attire probably was still easily visible for any watcher... but that was good. If the defenders ran over seeing them coming, they would not have to fight.
After all, everyone knew that the Four Seasons only took to the field together.
Nonetheless... "Okay, we are far enough. Go ahead, Spring."
Milena had been right behind them, forming a triangle; Birgit always kept out of sight until she was needed to hit something hard.
Now however, her little sister quickly darted to the front of their small formation in the air, raising her hand with a smile; magic glowed from within her, the deep green of growing life.
"Alright then, here I go! Blossom!"
(Blossom Roll: 2482)
The light crashed from the heavens and scattered into countless forms, becoming matter and forming another spearhead for the human soldiers they led. The Incarnations of Life were her sister's pride, large soldiers in the form of trees that did her bidding, protecting the weaker ones from harm with their strength.
They marched onward; Talia held her scepter at the ready, just in case something tried to ambush them. The Magical Girls' auras washed over the front line of trees and empowered them, while every enemy on the field would be weakened as well. None ever stood against their charge before... although Karina knew there were some that could. Japan's Transcendent Trinity was at least their equal, if not stronger... and then there was the White Reaper, that monster of a girl that killed anything she met in battle with one hit.
To be fair, no one was sure whether the White Reaper was even human. Birgit thought it was actually an Angel trying to interfere with the war for some reason. Those things did exist, so it might be the case.
Her musings were interrupted when she saw the light in front of them.
(Horror of War, cast 4 times.
2,997 + 3,096 + 2,293 + 3,188 = 11,564)
Maybe a hundred metres before the front line... it was almost the same green as her sister's, but so sickly and wrong. From where it coalesced, forms started to rise. Monsters of the kind that told Karina all she needed to know.
No...
Before them, an army of Zombie Nightmares had risen.
"Summoner!"
That was one of the soldiers, and the line became a cacophony of cursing and prayers as they all realised just why there were no defenders along their path.
There were none needed.
But why was she here? She was supposed to be fighting in Palestine, far away from the Russian border!
Why had no one known that Nightmare Child was on the move?!
Karina started to shake... and the girls with her did the same. She quickly took Milena's and Talia's hands to comfort them, then looked further outwards while the enemy summons began to fight their own. "It's okay. There are four of us and she seems to be alone. Concentrate."
Talia looked back for a moment, then her fright fell away and the confident smirk reappeared while heat flared from her scepter. That was good... Milena continued to shake, but managed a smile at least.
Then Talia barked into her headset: "Shut up and find her! I need a position to shoot at."
The soldiers took to cover and started taking potshots at the zombies, but Milena's summons already did the work by themselves; in difference to the enemy, those trees could take much more punishment and could also heal some of their wounds as time passed.
The Seasons quickly scattered to make for less obvious targets and to search around; Birgit was already on her way to search for their opponent... if she just found her in time...
Alas, she did not. More light raced forwards from the center of a nearby hill, quickly expanding and engulfing the battlefield.
(Demon of War: +33,000 Base Damage, +5,483 dice, +2,420 Spell Boost = 40,903 Total Damage
You Can Not Hide From Nightmares (Target: Army): x500
Total Damage: 20,451,500
2,482 Incarnations of Life, 1,350 Human Soldiers, 1,102 Zombie Nightmares: Damage Reduction negated.
Incarnations of Life total Health: 9,928,000 - 20,451,500 = -10,523,500
Human Soldiers total Health: 202,500 - 10,523,500 = -10,321,000
Zombie Nightmares total Health: 1,102,000 -10,321,000 = -9,219,000
~5,000,000 Vampire)
The surge swept away every last of Milena's summons, turning them to dust as it passed alongside some zombies caught in the crossfire. Everything within half a kilometre degraded into nothing, plants falling apart and all life ceasing.
There was no shockwave, not even a strong gust in the air... everything just died where it stood, and the thin streams of green light flowed back to the hill the catastrophy had come from
Karina could feel it, could hear the screams of the soldiers that were swept away below her. She was Autumn's Dream, the bringer of decay that always followed the blossoming of life in summer... but this was...
This was...
"Autumn, get a grip!"
She flinched and shook her head, averting her gaze from the wasteland below; Talia... Summer was aiming at the hill the attack had come from... and Karina could see a figure standing there, sickly green light wrapping around her dark form. The battlefield was not silent as it should be after this... and the zombies advanced on their remaining troops.
"Fallen Ember!"
(Fallen Ember: +15,000 Base Damage, +2,317 dice, +14,694 dice, + 33,404 Spell Boost = 65,415 Total Damage
Fallen Ember: +15,000 Base Damage, +12,295 dice, +7,476 dice, +13,670 Spell Boost = 48,441 Total Damage
Nightmare Child: +3,500 Base Resilience, +905 dice = 4,405 Total Damage Reduction
109,451 Total End Damage
False Existence (50%): 54,726 Final End Damage
Nightmare Child remaining Health: 330,000 - 54,726 = 275,274)
The hill and everything around it exploded into flames before the heat washed over it... but the green and black monster that stood upon it was thrown away by the force of Talia's spell; she impacted somewhere in the countryside behind what was now a flat land of glass.
"Retreat."
That was Birgit, from wherever she was. The brunette remained calm over the screaming and fright somehow, directing the soldiers with a practiced voice. "Fall back to the breach and then return to base. Inform the commander that the operation failed."
They could not fight Nightmare Child, even Karina knew this. Not without risking their own lifes in the process... which they must not do. Both for the motherland and for each other.
And despite everything, Karina did not want to die.
Talia went on to glass the oncoming zombies while their soldiers retreated in unorderly flight... but no one pursued. There were no more attacks... nothing.
Milena darted over to her and hid in Karina's arms, the older sister quickly wrapping her arms around the younger one; the warmth was welcome, at least it helped a little against the numbness over what she just saw.
They met the grim reaper.
From within the cover of trees, another fourteen-year-old watched the retreating soldiers without much emotion.
At least they were more reasonable than other groups she fought. Or maybe it was the girls leading them; the Four Seasons of all people.
It was good that they retreated. Against those four, even Magical Girl Nightmare Child would have been hard pressed.
She did not want to die, either.
If just the screaming would stop...
"So... just to be clear...", Talia noted next to her, a frown on her face. "We are expected to push through the European defenses along the border and hold a corridor of two hundred square kilometres... supported by eight thousand of your men?"
The greying commander nodded slightly at her, sneering like most people did around Magical Girls. Like her mother did...
"Yes, ma'am. High command is tying up the European defenses in other places, so a concentration of force such as the four of you should be enough to open a path. The platoons sent with you are mostly meant to take hold of any useful infrastructure on the way."
Again with the difficult words... Karina sighed inwardly. She was only fourteen, the girls around her not much older or younger.
Nonetheless, there were four of them. They were a team.
And they were the jewel of Russian military might. With how many troops and Magical Girls were pushing into the motherland from the south and east however, they had to go west for some reason. Other girls more fit for taking out VIPs would take care of the invaders.
Well, Birgit would be there if they had not taken her along.
Speaking of which, the German girl kept staring at the map and had her face all scrunchy; she was probably thinking about all of this.
As for Milena... the youngest of their group and Karina's only actual sister was currently wrapped up in a warm blanket and slept peacefully; she spent a lot of time healing the wounded again, her magic regrowing limbs thought lost and saving lives left and right.
At least they had a few hours before their deployment would begin... the girl needed her rest. And frankly, so did all of them. The constant fighting and killing put a strain on all of them... but Talia most of all, seeing that Karina could not keep her from the brunt of it.
Karina herself was... mostly fine, for some reason. She did not see death as something entirely negative, as everyone and everything would die eventually. But she knew that her Australian comrade often woke up from nightmares.
Hours passed as the troops prepared, their operation set for the following day, the tenth of May. A lone tank division was checked and the four girls this operation would depend on rested, huddled together as if there were no difference between them.
At this point, there really was not. They were sisters in arms, bound by something that ran deeper than blood.
. . .
Line Break Recognised
. . .
Line Break Recognised
. . .
"Advancing, no enemy in sight." Karina kept close to Talia as the blazing red girl continued forwards right above the front of their soldiers. Her own, more bland attire probably was still easily visible for any watcher... but that was good. If the defenders ran over seeing them coming, they would not have to fight.
After all, everyone knew that the Four Seasons only took to the field together.
Nonetheless... "Okay, we are far enough. Go ahead, Spring."
Milena had been right behind them, forming a triangle; Birgit always kept out of sight until she was needed to hit something hard.
Now however, her little sister quickly darted to the front of their small formation in the air, raising her hand with a smile; magic glowed from within her, the deep green of growing life.
"Alright then, here I go! Blossom!"
(Blossom Roll: 2482)
The light crashed from the heavens and scattered into countless forms, becoming matter and forming another spearhead for the human soldiers they led. The Incarnations of Life were her sister's pride, large soldiers in the form of trees that did her bidding, protecting the weaker ones from harm with their strength.
They marched onward; Talia held her scepter at the ready, just in case something tried to ambush them. The Magical Girls' auras washed over the front line of trees and empowered them, while every enemy on the field would be weakened as well. None ever stood against their charge before... although Karina knew there were some that could. Japan's Transcendent Trinity was at least their equal, if not stronger... and then there was the White Reaper, that monster of a girl that killed anything she met in battle with one hit.
To be fair, no one was sure whether the White Reaper was even human. Birgit thought it was actually an Angel trying to interfere with the war for some reason. Those things did exist, so it might be the case.
Her musings were interrupted when she saw the light in front of them.
(Horror of War, cast 4 times.
2,997 + 3,096 + 2,293 + 3,188 = 11,564)
Maybe a hundred metres before the front line... it was almost the same green as her sister's, but so sickly and wrong. From where it coalesced, forms started to rise. Monsters of the kind that told Karina all she needed to know.
No...
Before them, an army of Zombie Nightmares had risen.
"Summoner!"
That was one of the soldiers, and the line became a cacophony of cursing and prayers as they all realised just why there were no defenders along their path.
There were none needed.
But why was she here? She was supposed to be fighting in Palestine, far away from the Russian border!
Why had no one known that Nightmare Child was on the move?!
Karina started to shake... and the girls with her did the same. She quickly took Milena's and Talia's hands to comfort them, then looked further outwards while the enemy summons began to fight their own. "It's okay. There are four of us and she seems to be alone. Concentrate."
Talia looked back for a moment, then her fright fell away and the confident smirk reappeared while heat flared from her scepter. That was good... Milena continued to shake, but managed a smile at least.
Then Talia barked into her headset: "Shut up and find her! I need a position to shoot at."
The soldiers took to cover and started taking potshots at the zombies, but Milena's summons already did the work by themselves; in difference to the enemy, those trees could take much more punishment and could also heal some of their wounds as time passed.
The Seasons quickly scattered to make for less obvious targets and to search around; Birgit was already on her way to search for their opponent... if she just found her in time...
Alas, she did not. More light raced forwards from the center of a nearby hill, quickly expanding and engulfing the battlefield.
(Demon of War: +33,000 Base Damage, +5,483 dice, +2,420 Spell Boost = 40,903 Total Damage
You Can Not Hide From Nightmares (Target: Army): x500
Total Damage: 20,451,500
2,482 Incarnations of Life, 1,350 Human Soldiers, 1,102 Zombie Nightmares: Damage Reduction negated.
Incarnations of Life total Health: 9,928,000 - 20,451,500 = -10,523,500
Human Soldiers total Health: 202,500 - 10,523,500 = -10,321,000
Zombie Nightmares total Health: 1,102,000 -10,321,000 = -9,219,000
~5,000,000 Vampire)
The surge swept away every last of Milena's summons, turning them to dust as it passed alongside some zombies caught in the crossfire. Everything within half a kilometre degraded into nothing, plants falling apart and all life ceasing.
There was no shockwave, not even a strong gust in the air... everything just died where it stood, and the thin streams of green light flowed back to the hill the catastrophy had come from
Karina could feel it, could hear the screams of the soldiers that were swept away below her. She was Autumn's Dream, the bringer of decay that always followed the blossoming of life in summer... but this was...
This was...
"Autumn, get a grip!"
She flinched and shook her head, averting her gaze from the wasteland below; Talia... Summer was aiming at the hill the attack had come from... and Karina could see a figure standing there, sickly green light wrapping around her dark form. The battlefield was not silent as it should be after this... and the zombies advanced on their remaining troops.
"Fallen Ember!"
(Fallen Ember: +15,000 Base Damage, +2,317 dice, +14,694 dice, + 33,404 Spell Boost = 65,415 Total Damage
Fallen Ember: +15,000 Base Damage, +12,295 dice, +7,476 dice, +13,670 Spell Boost = 48,441 Total Damage
Nightmare Child: +3,500 Base Resilience, +905 dice = 4,405 Total Damage Reduction
109,451 Total End Damage
False Existence (50%): 54,726 Final End Damage
Nightmare Child remaining Health: 330,000 - 54,726 = 275,274)
The hill and everything around it exploded into flames before the heat washed over it... but the green and black monster that stood upon it was thrown away by the force of Talia's spell; she impacted somewhere in the countryside behind what was now a flat land of glass.
"Retreat."
That was Birgit, from wherever she was. The brunette remained calm over the screaming and fright somehow, directing the soldiers with a practiced voice. "Fall back to the breach and then return to base. Inform the commander that the operation failed."
They could not fight Nightmare Child, even Karina knew this. Not without risking their own lifes in the process... which they must not do. Both for the motherland and for each other.
And despite everything, Karina did not want to die.
Talia went on to glass the oncoming zombies while their soldiers retreated in unorderly flight... but no one pursued. There were no more attacks... nothing.
Milena darted over to her and hid in Karina's arms, the older sister quickly wrapping her arms around the younger one; the warmth was welcome, at least it helped a little against the numbness over what she just saw.
They met the grim reaper.
. . .
Line Break Recognised
. . .
Line Break Recognised
. . .
From within the cover of trees, another fourteen-year-old watched the retreating soldiers without much emotion.
At least they were more reasonable than other groups she fought. Or maybe it was the girls leading them; the Four Seasons of all people.
It was good that they retreated. Against those four, even Magical Girl Nightmare Child would have been hard pressed.
She did not want to die, either.
If just the screaming would stop...
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DarkKing98
Certified Village Idiot
- Location
- USA
...I was about to comment on something before realizing...
...is this the past or present?
...is this the past or present?
